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jjsthekid wrote: |
Well, i wasn't copying your shows Terminoob and you could have been nicer. That review was just harsh and mean. You know what, i'm leaving now. I don't see a point to stay anymore. Oh well, you people are mean now, and i just tried to have a nice time on this site, but NO. One Last review before i leave. 12 Things we love about Japaniation Review: A A Pretty good episode DC-Dude. Sadly, this will be the final episode i read of your show along with many others. But still, a great episode. |
Thank you Tvfan.
NOTICE : From now on, i will be honest on my reviews. I might have overrated some reviews, but i was cutting some slack for people. So don't expect me to give just plan A's to anyone. I will be honest from now on.
Adventures In The Underground City Review: D+
Ok honestly, your show is just confusing. Also, i don't know what it is even about now because you have too many grammer errors and it is hard for me to read it. Also, the plot is kind of boring. Also, i don't see any details on the main characters except for Spongebob, but that is pretty much it. First it is about an Underground City, but now i don't even know what it is about due to grammer errors. Oh, and i know you can improve it though.
Adventures Of No Name Review: D+
Ok i admit as well, maybe i overrated as well. Your show seemed interesting at first because there hasn't been a No Name spin-off before, but it is boring. Sorry, but you need more detail and the plot is confusing. I know you said you suck at plots ( I saw what you said), but i know you can improve.
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jjsthekid wrote: |
Thank you Tvfan. NOTICE : From now on, i will be honest on my reviews. I might have overrated some reviews, but i was cutting some slack for people. So don't expect me to give just plan A's to anyone. I will be honest from now on. Adventures In The Underground City Review: D+ Ok honestly, your show is just confusing. Also, i don't know what it is even about now because you have too many grammer errors and it is hard for me to read it. Also, the plot is kind of boring. Also, i don't see any details on the main characters except for Spongebob, but that is pretty much it. First it is about an Underground City, but now i don't even know what it is about due to grammer errors. Oh, and i know you can improve it though. Adventures Of No Name Review: D+ Ok i admit as well, maybe i overrated as well. Your show seemed interesting at first because there hasn't been a No Name spin-off before, but is boring. Sorry, but you need more detail and the plot is confusing. I know you said you suck at plots ( I saw what you said), but i know you can improve. |
Thank GOD! I was wondering when people would start being more honest!
The Minorly Average Zone: B+
I'm not a fan of those mystery horrors, but this was not too bad! I love seeing episodes that have some sort of creativity within them, similar to this episode. It would be pretty cool if the entire episode was in black and white!
Not So Friendly Feuds Review: A+
Exactly what The_Cartoon said. This was a great episode and i enjoyed it. I think this taught us all a lesson and i can't wait for the next episode.
^Thank you for the wonderful feedback.
Antonio's conflict with Blaster and Dan will continue throughout the season- so stay tuned!
You Go Girl Review: A+
Wow, this was pretty good Clapmaster. It was pretty funny that Pierce dressed up like a girl. Seriously though, that was pretty funny and this was a great episode.
General Hospital ( So Far) Review: C
Ok, your show is just confusing. Sorry, but it is the truth. You have some grammer problems and please don't demand for reviews either. Saying something like," Reviews would rock" or something like that would be fine. But don't demand for them all the time.
Anyways, your show does have some promise though. And welcome to The Spongebob Spin-offs.
General Hospital - D+
NOTE: This was before you allegedly changed everything which I haven't checked yet...
Welcome back to the spin-off community BrennanNN. You are the only one who posts like that so you ain't fooling nobody . You still need to work on your structure because you are putting periods in the wrong spots and plus your plots were all over the place as you need to work on ending your plots in general, like leaving a cliffhanger that can lead to the next episode.
Hero's Day - A+
I am seriously impressed jjsthekid. That episode was your best episode since the early days of Season 1. Its great to know the characters and villans and their backstories to give them more personality. You listened to terminoob's review and did exactly what he said and it worked out extremely well.
And now a review from the king of klubs himself since DC-Dude asked for it
Underwater Survival: C-/D+
Now, this is as a whole, which is good, because truth be told, the 2nd Season has been extremely below average, but I'll get to that in a minute. Now, for your 1st Season, this show was really solid, I won't deny it; you had more freedom for challenges and plots, whereas now, unless you planned out every challenge and plot ahead of time, it's kinda hard to come up with good ones that won't be recycling most of the 1st Season. But, since you're good at plots, I figured this season would be no problem for you, and I couldn't wait to see what you had in store for all the other characters from the other shows. Sadly, my expectations were set too high, and what you did and are doing with the new characters, are less than satisfactory, in my opinion. It seems as though you don't read shows, because if you did, you would know Yvonne isn't the "popular cheerleader" and cared about her looks in 1 episode. As for Alvin, if you can point out the exact spot I said he wore glasses; please do, because I don't remember saying it AT ALL. And you even asked where he was from, which was stated MANY times in SpongeCraft, and you even asked where Angela was from, when you could just read the title of the show. But, this is ranting, and I like to save that for the end, what I'm getting at, is that you need to brush up on your shows and portray the characters correctly. Now, while this is somewhat off-topic, it seems like TDI/TDA/Survivor based Spin-Offs are popular now, first it was Survivor: Bikini Bottom, then Total Cartoon Island, then Spin-Off Action, then your show, now a new show (whose name escapes me at the moment….) Also, I've had a little… annoyance, with your past shows, ever since The Spinny's were founded and started. It seems as though you LOVE to break the fourth wall and make every character aware they're from Spin-Offs, which is, in my opinion, annoying. You have at least one title with "Spinny" in your shows (did you do that with AiC? I can't remember.) While I can't tell you to stop, it just seems weird having characters become aware of the fact they're Spin-Off characters. But yea, to sum it up: Original personalities, pay attention, and tone down the fourth wall breaking Off-Topic from my review: Please…. PLEASE stop overhyping the crap out of The Adventures in Coralwood Movie and Season 3 renewal, we get it, you're bringing it back and you think it's going to be epic, see, what you're doing here, is setting everyone's expectations REALLY high by saying how awesome it will be, then when it comes, people will think it's not as good as you think.
Thank you so much Clapmaster. And if Kingofklubs is reading this, i will accept your next review of my show and not get mad. Also without your help telling me how to make my show better, i would not have made Hero's Day an awesome episode. So thank you Kingofklubs because you helped me improve.
Club Friend/ Goes Together Review: C/C+
I was a little disappointed with Club Friend because it was a little confusing sometimes. However, Goes Together was a little bit better because of The mentioning of Mr.Krabs trying to keep all The Jellyfish, but overall, you are starting to improve.
clapmaster wrote: |
General Hospital - D+ I am seriously impressed jjsthekid. That episode was your best episode since the early days of Season 1. Its great to know the characters and villans and their backstories to give them more personality. You listened to terminoob's review and did exactly what he said and it worked out extremely well. And now a review from the king of klubs himself since DC-Dude asked for it Underwater Survival: C-/D+ Now, this is as a whole, which is good, because truth be told, the 2nd Season has been extremely below average, but I'll get to that in a minute. Now, for your 1st Season, this show was really solid, I won't deny it; you had more freedom for challenges and plots, whereas now, unless you planned out every challenge and plot ahead of time, it's kinda hard to come up with good ones that won't be recycling most of the 1st Season. But, since you're good at plots, I figured this season would be no problem for you, and I couldn't wait to see what you had in store for all the other characters from the other shows. Sadly, my expectations were set too high, and what you did and are doing with the new characters, are less than satisfactory, in my opinion. It seems as though you don't read shows, because if you did, you would know Yvonne isn't the "popular cheerleader" and cared about her looks in 1 episode. As for Alvin, if you can point out the exact spot I said he wore glasses; please do, because I don't remember saying it AT ALL. And you even asked where he was from, which was stated MANY times in SpongeCraft, and you even asked where Angela was from, when you could just read the title of the show. But, this is ranting, and I like to save that for the end, what I'm getting at, is that you need to brush up on your shows and portray the characters correctly. Now, while this is somewhat off-topic, it seems like TDI/TDA/Survivor based Spin-Offs are popular now, first it was Survivor: Bikini Bottom, then Total Cartoon Island, then Spin-Off Action, then your show, now a new show (whose name escapes me at the moment….) Also, I've had a little… annoyance, with your past shows, ever since The Spinny's were founded and started. It seems as though you LOVE to break the fourth wall and make every character aware they're from Spin-Offs, which is, in my opinion, annoying. You have at least one title with "Spinny" in your shows (did you do that with AiC? I can't remember.) While I can't tell you to stop, it just seems weird having characters become aware of the fact they're Spin-Off characters. But yea, to sum it up: Original personalities, pay attention, and tone down the fourth wall breaking Off-Topic from my review: Please…. PLEASE stop overhyping the crap out of The Adventures in Coralwood Movie and Season 3 renewal, we get it, you're bringing it back and you think it's going to be epic, see, what you're doing here, is setting everyone's expectations REALLY high by saying how awesome it will be, then when it comes, people will think it's not as good as you think. |
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clapmaster wrote: |
General Hospital - D+ I am seriously impressed jjsthekid. That episode was your best episode since the early days of Season 1. Its great to know the characters and villans and their backstories to give them more personality. You listened to terminoob's review and did exactly what he said and it worked out extremely well. And now a review from the king of klubs himself since DC-Dude asked for it Underwater Survival: C-/D+ Now, this is as a whole, which is good, because truth be told, the 2nd Season has been extremely below average, but I'll get to that in a minute. Now, for your 1st Season, this show was really solid, I won't deny it; you had more freedom for challenges and plots, whereas now, unless you planned out every challenge and plot ahead of time, it's kinda hard to come up with good ones that won't be recycling most of the 1st Season. But, since you're good at plots, I figured this season would be no problem for you, and I couldn't wait to see what you had in store for all the other characters from the other shows. Sadly, my expectations were set too high, and what you did and are doing with the new characters, are less than satisfactory, in my opinion. It seems as though you don't read shows, because if you did, you would know Yvonne isn't the "popular cheerleader" and cared about her looks in 1 episode. As for Alvin, if you can point out the exact spot I said he wore glasses; please do, because I don't remember saying it AT ALL. And you even asked where he was from, which was stated MANY times in SpongeCraft, and you even asked where Angela was from, when you could just read the title of the show. But, this is ranting, and I like to save that for the end, what I'm getting at, is that you need to brush up on your shows and portray the characters correctly. Now, while this is somewhat off-topic, it seems like TDI/TDA/Survivor based Spin-Offs are popular now, first it was Survivor: Bikini Bottom, then Total Cartoon Island, then Spin-Off Action, then your show, now a new show (whose name escapes me at the moment….) Also, I've had a little… annoyance, with your past shows, ever since The Spinny's were founded and started. It seems as though you LOVE to break the fourth wall and make every character aware they're from Spin-Offs, which is, in my opinion, annoying. You have at least one title with "Spinny" in your shows (did you do that with AiC? I can't remember.) While I can't tell you to stop, it just seems weird having characters become aware of the fact they're Spin-Off characters. But yea, to sum it up: Original personalities, pay attention, and tone down the fourth wall breaking Off-Topic from my review: Please…. PLEASE stop overhyping the crap out of The Adventures in Coralwood Movie and Season 3 renewal, we get it, you're bringing it back and you think it's going to be epic, see, what you're doing here, is setting everyone's expectations REALLY high by saying how awesome it will be, then when it comes, people will think it's not as good as you think. |
Thank you for being honest. That's all I can say.