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    Dafoose

    [9381]Aug 23, 2009
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    Miista wrote:
    Miista: You can approve me anyday

    Random: Miista, don't be so rude! Show some respect.

    Miista: Sorry Dafoose. Please punish me with your gentle-fist and hit my blowhole. ~_^

    Random: Ugh, your so gay Miista.

    Miista: You know you love me, *skips along the rainbow*

    Laugh.Out.Loud! Wait, wtf, my character is supposed to be dark and scary!!!!!! Oh well, it's not my fault he drank 'V'.


    XD nice. I lol'd.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9382]Aug 23, 2009
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    I was wondering how you'ld respond to Mista's post lol

    ///////////

    Siam/Kohana - airbender

    Mizuhiro/Shenq - firebender

    River - airbender

    ~~Siam has just awoken to her alternate unconscious personality~~

    /////////////

    The snow surrounding Siam flew around her in a tempest and soared to the heavens. Then a shockwave of air exploded from the storms epicenter and brushed the landscape clean of snow. As the snow cleared away and the wind slightly abated the girl standing in the center could be seen clearly. She slowly lifted her head, letting her black hair uncover her blank eyes. A broad smile crept up from her lips and she ran towards Mizuhiro.

    "Master," Siam cried out in joy. She rushed over to the boy and hugged him tightly. "I missed you sooo much, master... oh and hello *cough-swamp-cough* River."

    "Nice you see you again too, Kohana," River retorted sarcastically. "Master, are you really sure you need this bimbo."

    Mizuhiro's face turned red for a moment but he calmed down and spoke to the two.

    "Both of you enough of this. If you don't then I shall have to replace you. Now carry out the mission Kohana."

    Kohana nodded her head and walked a couple yards away from them. She bowed her head and clasped her hands together. The air around her began to spin faster and faster as the orb on Kohana's necklace glowed brighter. Tiny chunks of rock began ascending into the current of air causing the wind to turn black as it continued to spin around the girl. The funnel suddenly split in half and converged on both of Kohana's shoulder blades. The billowing clouds of dust began to flutter then flap in wide arches.

    Even River stood in awe of the majestic scene she was witnessing. "Are those black wings?"

    "Yes, that they are," replied Mizuhiro. "She taught herself that when she was still young. It's one of the reasons why she was chosen for this mission. Our little angel of death..."

    Kohana flapped her black wings and ascended above the temple's highest point. Hovering over the temple she scooped her hands down to her feet. As the raw energy built up in her hands she began spinning in a circle causing a vacuum in the atmosphere below her. As she raised her hands the vacuum increased in size and completely engulfed the northern air-temple.

    "Master Shenq," said River, "If they are dying, then how come we cannot hear their cries of agony."

    "That is because sound can't travel through a vacuum and so the temple's inhabitants die in complete and utter silence. A very beautiful death for such a uninteresting nation... wouldn't you agrees?"

    The boy then proceeded to bellow laughter as Kohana completed the deed. She then proceeded to swoop around the temple's new burial ground and then landed a couple feet in front of Mizuhiro. "My dream shall finally be realized and the fire lord shall recognize the Tori Clan once more. We shall be vic..."

    Out of the sky a sound like nails on a piece of looking glass echoed throughout the mountains. Mizuhiro and River both looked up to see Kohana crystal flicker. They watched Kohana's frightened face as she struggled to throw the crystal orb away.

    "What happened? Are you hurt? Speak," Mizuhiro commanded.

    "My crystal," replied Kohana holding up the end of her necklace.

    At just a glance the crystal seemed fine but upon further inspection one could see a tiny fracture along its middle. As Mizuhiro held up the crystal it turned to dust in his hands.

    "Hmm... It seems the crystal ran out of power and cracked upon depletion" Mizuhiro spoke as if he was talking to himself. "If she had been using the crystals power when it cracked then..."

    The boy continued to mutter to himself even as he stood up and walked off. After walking a couple steps he stopped and raised his hand.

    "Come River, it is time we left," he said beckoning her.

    Kohana stared dumbfounded at the crystal-less necklace. She shook her head and looked up. "B-but what about me master?"

    "I knew I'd forgotten something," said Mizuhiro smacking his head.

    Edited on 08/23/2009 9:32pm
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    Dafoose

    [9383]Aug 24, 2009
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    I really like that setting 09. If it was a painting, it would be pretty awesome, moving too.
    Edited on 08/24/2009 4:08pm
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    Double09nhalf

    [9384]Aug 24, 2009
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    Dafoose wrote:
    I really like that setting 09. If it was a painting, it would be pretty awesome, moving too.
    Since it was the first time actually writing the temple's destruction i wanted to make it good. At first though i was having serious trouble and that's why i asked you for help. In the end though i found what i wanted. I just hope the next temple can be as good. By the way, Each time a temple is destroyed... a puppy dies?!?! naw just kidding. The end of each book is the part where the temple's inhabitants are wiped out. So that means that I just finished my second book. By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my posts while not having to jump back pages, they can check out my blog because i am in the process of reposting them there.

    ps Dafoose i hope i gave you some inspiration to continue writing again. I love posting my stuff but that that i'm the only one doing so.

    Edited on 08/24/2009 7:10pm
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    Dafoose

    [9385]Aug 25, 2009
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    Hmm....I don't know what is happening this weekend, but if I find myself sitting on the couch with nothing to do I'll probably drag myself to the computer.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9387]Aug 25, 2009
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    This is the beginning of the third chapter yeeaa baby.

    /////////////

    Siam - airbender

    Mrs. Yoji - firebender

    Mizuhiro/Shenq - firebender

    Gakuto-Oki - waterbender

    River - airbender

    Commander Tseng + Lieutenant - firebender

    Ying - airbender

    ~~Mrs. Yoji and co have just survived the fall of the second airtemple~~

    //////////////

    Mrs. Yoji continued to bore her way through the rocky wall at a slow distance. But even at slow and steady she still took frequent breaks. With a low grumble in her voice she tapped the floor of the tunnel to test her surroundings and regain her bearings.

    "It seems our hard work has paid off," she said. "The edge of the cliff is a hundred yards ahead of us and the pressure against the surface has- erm has abstained. I am sorry for your loss, Ying. I'm..."

    The awkward silence continued as words failed the woman. Still leaning against the side of the tunnel, Gakuto-Oki broke the silence with a slight cough as he shifted his weight forward.

    "Mrs. Yoji, of all the woman I have met, I have to say that you are the most boring. But I think it is time we surfaced given the circumstances."

    "Hmmph, I certainly agree but you'll pay for that joke dear."

    With the remainder of her strength Mrs. Yoji struck her fingers into the ceiling at an angle. She then stomped the ground and kick at the area she had struck. From the surface a cylindrically shaped chunk of rock shot out flying over the cliff's edge. As the tunnel's occupants surfaced they shielded their eyes from the blinding sunlight. Gakuto-Oki was the first to look back upon the temple to find it barren. He turned to console Ying but found only a hardened blood-stained face.

    Still heaving from the strain, Mrs. Yoji motioned to Ying. "I... want you too... check for...sur-"

    "It is brainless to even suggest that anybody could ever survive while caught in that."

    Everybody turned to see a haughty boy with a young woman standing next to him. The woman obviously looked unhappy.

    "Their gone forever," continued the boy. "They have been completely purged from their existence. You would even be lucky to find any remains. Okay, maybe somebody's remains."

    The boy stepped away from where he was standing to reveal Siam's body lying next to an unconscious teenage boy. Mrs. Yoji gasped and started coughing hard.

    "Contrary to belief, she isn't dead. No- no... I have thought of a better idea for her. She shall live with the knowledge she has gained and the friends she has lost. Speaking of which, here they come now. River if you please..."

    The girl twirled her staff open and flew away but not before grabbing the still smiling boy and the sleep teenager. As they escaped a volley of flaming arrows chased after them only to miss.

    Suddenly a torrent of fire-nation soldiers scrambled over the cliffs edge and surrounded Mrs. Yoji, Ying, and Gakuto-Oki. Some produced balls of flame while others posed ready to strike with their spears. The ranks then parted allowing a female soldier threw the rows of soldiers surrounding the group. She took note of the captives then walked up to Gakuto-Oki who was lying on the ground.

    "Where is the girl Siam? The one who murdered the inhabitants of the Western and Northern temple."

    "Lieutenant Ma'am," said a soldier running up. "We found the girl lying unconscious on the ground, over there. We looked for the crystal but found only the necklace. Whether it was destroyed, taken or lost is unknown."

    "Very well sergeant, bring her here and put her with the rest of the captives. What about the traitor," she continued turning again to Gakuto-Oki. "Were did the traitor fly off to?"

    "If you mean that boy and the Schizophrenic girl. Actually I do not know their current destination."

    The female soldier knelt on one knee and looked him right in the eyes. "If I melted that caste of yours then would you be able to tell me."

    Gakuto-Oki shook his head disgust. "If you melt the caste on my leg then it will start bleeding profusely and I will be very peeved and in pain. In any case I have no useful information regarding that boy except that his deeds are wicked and disregard human life... just as you are ma'am."

    "Hah ha ha. I like this man. It is a shame that he is a suspect. But enough of this sour treatment Lieutenant."

    A man wearing red armor with black designs stepped through the lines. On his side was a hand and a half sword and a small dagger and on his shoulders he wore the rank of commander.

    "Commander Tseng," said the female soldier. "The only people ever to survive disasters like this are the ones who committed it. He must has some intelligence that we could use."

    "He may but I believe that he is telling the truth. Through experience you'll find true judgment of a man's words." The commander then turned to one of the soldiers "You, take your squad and follow the traitors movements. Find out what direction he is headed in and send a messenger hawk if he changes course."

    The soldier snapped to attention and saluted his superior then signaled his men to move out.

    The commander then turned his attention back toward the main situation at hand. "Lieutenant, I am putting the little boy in your charge. Take him back to the outpost and see that his wound is taken care of. After that food, bath, etc.

    The Lieutenant glumly carried out the task she was given and lead off the small boy with several soldier trailing behind her.

    "And you sir," Said the commander pointing to Gakuto-Oki. "From your little speech a second ago I take it that you are a doctor. We shall see to it that you are given what you need to fix yourself up but I am afraid that you and um..."

    "Mrs. Yoji will do just fine," said Mrs. Yoji in a peeved voice.

    "My obliges for the trouble we're causing you but it cannot be helped. Doctor you and Mrs. Yoji will be put in our holding cell until we can question you in a more... professional manner. And as for the mysterious girl... I want the medical stretcher brought and she carried to the infirmary. I shall accompany her and not let her out of my sight. It was bad enough she escaped the first time. Lastly men I want you to escort our guest back and assist them if they need it. And when I mean guest, I mean that if I hear of any misconduct it will either be your uniform or your life. Dismissed."

    The soldiers carried out their orders and proceeded back down the mountain. Gakuto-Oki was offered a stretcher to which he refused assuring that his condition was stable. The remaining inhabitants of the mountain left leaving the mountain deadly silent. The halls of the temple that were once filled with the sound of joyful children and the humming of monks reaching nirvana were now filled with the hollow wind whistling through the mountains.

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    Dafoose

    [9388]Aug 31, 2009
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    Didn't sit on the couch this weekend.
    Went to see inglorious basterds. Lol'd my butt off.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [9389]Sep 15, 2009
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    Just letting everyone know that I'm still alive. Yesterdau was actually my birthday and I've been having an amazing time up in college! I've always wanted to make my return to this RPG, hopefully one day it happens??

    On another note... do any of you guys have AIM?

    If so, please post you screen names below my post, because I'm like always online and I'd love to talk to some of you guys.

    Thanks! ... Got class now. TTYL, ya'll.
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [9390]Sep 17, 2009
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    Hai Gaiz! remember how I was supposed to post something eons ago? Hah! I've got about a sixth of it done. I'll post what I have for you now, if you'll still accept it. Then... Hell, I don't know.

    Bai Mao (firebender, pudao)

    Finale Part 3

    ——————————————————————————

    Bai Mao and his army charged through the holes that were previously made through the walls. He was far ahead of the rest, rushing straight to the fortress doors. A longbow arrow landed mere inches in front of him, and he stopped. The inner six of the eight concentric octagonal walls were lined with archers, half of them aiming at him.

    "Aw, s--t," Bai Mao cursed.

    With nothing better to do, he ran forward. He couldn't afford to lose troops. He heard the waspish hissing of the arrows, and saw the large shadow cast by the group of them. He looked at the angle of the sun, performed some quick calculations, and realized that the archers had shot on the assumption that he would keep running. He stopped, and as he turned, he caught sight of another set of arrows rushing toward where he was standing. Now he was stuck. If he kept running, he would be hit by the first volley. If he stood still, he would be hit by the second. And he didn't even bring a shield. He drew his pudao in a hopeless attempt to block some of the arrows, when he suddenly felt himself dragged underground.

    It was difficult for his eyes to adjust to the darkness. He felt that he was in a tunnel of some sort. He was being pulled along it. He felt more than heard a series of loud crashes coming from the surface. He was leaving them behind, and his companion still rushed through the darkness. After a few minutes, he saw a light at the end of the tunnel. This made him wonder if he was already dead and just imagining this in his last moments. But someone was definitely dragging him. The light threw the outline of his rescuer into greater relief. He finally exited the tunnel to find the last remnant of the underground fighters. They were on the opposite side of the fortress. A great cheering came from the side he had just come from, followed by the entire fortress shaking as if there were an earthquake.

    "I have to see this," Bai Mao said to himself. He raced around to the front, forgetting even to thank his mystery rescuer. They all looked the same anyway.

    Out in the parade ground, the Po-Kun fighters were launching small boulders directly from the ground into the fortress. Bai Mao knew that there were actually four soldiers more at each corner, making the building rattle as if it were actually under heavy fire. Soldiers were pouring out of the fortress to meet them, and were easily held back, despite outnumbering the earthbending army some three-to-one.

    And sure enough, as Bai Mao predicted, the ground shook, and magma shot from the volcano in a wide, powerful eruption, headed straight up. It looked as if it would be a repeat of last time when suddenly, eight huge streams of water flew above the parade ground and came together into one stream and met the lava in midair, cooling it instantly. This water was supplied through underground tunnels that had been dug to the sea the previous night. The giant stone of lava rock hung in midair for a few nano-seconds, and began plummeting to the ground, only to be met by a single earthbender jettisoned toward it. One strike splintered it into thousands of shards of solid rock, which were then sent thudding into the bodies of Vuln's forces. And while the soldiers on the outside were caught between a literal rock and a hard place, Bai Mao took the opportunity and stand in front of the door as the enemy most graciously filed out two at a time to be decapitated. What a wonderful world indeed.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [9391]Sep 19, 2009
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    Dafoose

    [9392]Sep 19, 2009
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    yay cool, it's not dead.

    I'd give you my messenger account, but then we wouldn't have a reason to post here now would we? XD
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    TheGeneral6198

    [9393]Sep 20, 2009
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    1:

    Name: Quo-Derika

    Age: 28

    Status: Earth Bender

    Height: 6'1"

    Weight: 148

    Appearance: He always wears his Di-Lee uniform, has brown eyes, brown hair, and very pale skin.

    Description: A Di-Lee (I don't know if I'm spelling that correctly) Agent. He has caused many of the numerous brain-washes at Ba-Sing-Say. He is a highly-ranked and respected officer, but because of his troublesome childhood, he has been known to crawl into a ball and weep. If anyone laughs and or yells at him, he will kill them.

     

    2:

    Name: Telistous

    Age: 32

    Status: Water Bender

    Height: 5'12"

    Weight: 125

    Appearance: Water Tribe army uniform worn, he has green eyes, silver hair, and a slight mustache.

    Description: He has quickly risen through the ranks of the Northern Water Tribe Army, and states that he is loyal to the General. However, this is a lie. Telistous's goal is to wait for a decisive battle between the nations, and once the armies are worn down enough, he will strike, and hope to become the ruler of all four nations.

     

    3:

    Name: Unknown

    Age: 94-126

    Status: Studies are not sure

    Height: 6'3"

    Weight: Unknown

    Appearance: Long robe worn, hazel eyes, white hair, and Albus Dumbledore beard.

    Description: Scientists are not sure who, or what he is, but since the war started, this mysterious figure has been sighted every night after a battle just walking by random villages. After the night after he is sighted, people in the places in question always fight for strange reasons. Some believe that the "ghost" possesses an unheard of bending: "mind bending." To control another persons thoughts, sometimes causing them to kill each other.

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    Double09nhalf

    [9394]Sep 25, 2009
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    TheGeneral6198 wrote:

    1:

    Name: Quo-Derika

    Age: 28

    Status: Earth Bender

    Height: 6'1"

    Weight: 148

    Appearance: He always wears his Di-Lee uniform, has brown eyes, brown hair, and very pale skin.

    Description: A Di-Lee (I don't know if I'm spelling that correctly) Agent. He has caused many of the numerous brain-washes at Ba-Sing-Say. He is a highly-ranked and respected officer, but because of his troublesome childhood, he has been known to crawl into a ball and weep. If anyone laughs and or yells at him, he will kill them.

     

    2:

    Name: Telistous

    Age: 32

    Status: Water Bender

    Height: 5'12"

    Weight: 125

    Appearance: Water Tribe army uniform worn, he has green eyes, silver hair, and a slight mustache.

    Description: He has quickly risen through the ranks of the Northern Water Tribe Army, and states that he is loyal to the General. However, this is a lie. Telistous's goal is to wait for a decisive battle between the nations, and once the armies are worn down enough, he will strike, and hope to become the ruler of all four nations.

     

    3:

    Name: Unknown

    Age: 94-126

    Status: Studies are not sure

    Height: 6'3"

    Weight: Unknown

    Appearance: Long robe worn, hazel eyes, white hair, and Albus Dumbledore beard.

    Description: Scientists are not sure who, or what he is, but since the war started, this mysterious figure has been sighted every night after a battle just walking by random villages. After the night after he is sighted, people in the places in question always fight for strange reasons. Some believe that the "ghost" possesses an unheard of bending: "mind bending." To control another persons thoughts, sometimes causing them to kill each other.

    Normally i say make a background for your characters but hindsight being 20/20 i think the background kills the story. And as long as your 3rd character,ghost, doesn't actually mind bend then your all good in my book but you have to wait for Dafoose to give you the go-ahead
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    Double09nhalf

    [9395]Sep 29, 2009
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    I hope you guys enjoy reading these as much i a actually enjoy writing them because that would be awesome. That was cheesy

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    Siam - airbender

    Gakuto-Oki - waterbender

    ~~The northern airtemple has just recently had its inhabitants anailated and Siam is still unconscious ~~

    //////////////

    A two day had pasted since the annihilation of the northern temple's inhabitants and Gakuto-Oki still found himself incarcerated in the firenation outpost located south of the mountainous region surrounding the temple.

    More of a massive campsite, he thought as he was led past multitudes of tents.

    Even though he hadn't been able to treat his leg wound, the treatment he and Mrs. Yoji received especially improved when their captors verified that he was indeed a medical doctor, as the commander deduced, and she was a herbologist. He soon found out that they actually were despite in the medical department because they had lost their last man just before the fall of the eastern airtemple. The sun had just been swallowed up by the horizon as they approached the mash tent.

    "Our medical area is right through here sir," said the old soldier as he held open a large tent-flap to reveal the facilities that had been designated for his trade.

    When he entered he immediately noted the two nurses that were going about their tasks. One was apparently taking stock of their supplies and tools while the other was changing the sheets off of the rows of cots lined to the right of the entrance. As they noticed there new guest one of the nurses quickly finished what she were doing and approached both men while the other continued her duties.

    "Ladies this is gentleman is going to assist you with your medical duties. He is a medical doctor the commander has deemed trustworthy. Please show Mr. um..."

    "Mr. Gakuto will do just fine," Gakuto-Oki replied. "But first I am in dire need of fixing my leg. Will you please have someone fetch my bag?"

    The old soldier bowed his head and exited the tent to complete his errand leaving Gakuto-Oki with the nurses. He quickly found a chair and relieved his leg my sitting down. When he looked up he found the nurse that had been following him failing to hide from his gaze from behind her clipboard. He found the awkward that followed to be very unpleasant.

    "Um, I didn't get either of your names," Gakuto-Oki spoke up.

    "That's because neither of us gave it," shouted the other nurse two beds over.

    The nurse standing next to Gakuto-Oki gave her medical counterpart a sour look.

    "I'm sorry for her behavior," said the nurse and she hugged the clipboard to her bosom. She then proceeded to bend over to his ear. "She's really nice once you get to know her."

    "I heard that," said the other nurse.

    "Well anywho, my name is Aida and the nurse tucking in beds name is Yori. She likes sushi. But uh..." The girl started turning red and hid behind her clipboard again. "Please let us know if you need any assistance."

    Gakuto-Oki was about to reply but the girl had already turned and ran out of the tent. He continued to stare in confusion for a few more seconds when Yori sidestepped into his vision.

    "She means medically wise idiot."

    Gakuto-Oki snapped out of his gaze looked up at a glaring nurse carrying clean sheets.

    "Yes, I realize what she meant and no I did think what you thought I thought. And even if you thought that I had thought such thoughts it is still rude to infer and assume that I was thinking those thought you thought I was thinking. Even so, my thoughts are private and mine for the thinking and yours for the politely asking."

    By this time Yori had put her hands around her ears and was speaking gibberish. "If I politely ask you what your thoughts are will you stop that?"

    "I might," replied Gakuto-Oki.

    Yuri turned and sat on the bed next to where he was sitting. She clasped her hands together and stared at him with bedroom eyes.

    "Mr. Gakuto, do pray tell what are thou-ist thoughts?"

    Gakuto-Oki stared at her with burning eyes that made her almost flinch. He then shrugged his shoulders and leaned back in the chair with his hands folded behind his head. "I believe Ms. Yuri that, while you are trying to be a good a protective friend, you are rude and very impolite. And I will add the wonder of why you have not been kicked out of this army if you treat everybody who comes in here with that kind of insubordination."

    Yuri face went from a red of embarrassment to the red of total fury.

    How dare he read me so completely, she thought, he act as if he was superior to me.

    But before she could even backhand him the old soldier had returned with Gakuto-Oki's bag. "Here it is Mr. Gakuto. I apologize for taking so long... am I interruption something?"

    Gakuto-Oki turned to Yuri then looked at the old soldier. "No, no, actually you are just in time. Ms. Yuri here was just explaining certain medical procedures she thought I was curious about. And I must say that when she talks about procedure that she gets very passionate about it."

    Gakuto-Oki received an unnoticed punch to the ribs vagueness as the soldier passed the bag to him.

    "Thank you for retrieving it for me but um... I have one more favor to ask of you. Would you help me up and assist me in walking to the back where I can mend my leg. I've been thawing it for the procedure and it's very tender right now."

    The old soldier immediately helped Gakuto-Oki up and they started to walk.

    "Think none of it son," replied the old soldier. "Although it's a shame for you to have received such a crippling wound at such a young age. War is hell and all that nonsense sayings."

    "Yes it is. But thank you again. I didn't want to soil any of the clean sheets Ms. Yuri had so passionately thrown over the beds.

    At that moment, Yuri tried to jab Gakuto-Oki again in the ribs but he caught her with his free hand.

    "Ah Ms. Yuri, we were just talking about you," said Gakuto-Oki as he to grasp her hand. "Did you too decide to assist me and fellow man in our endeavors?"

    The old soldier looked over Gakuto-Oki's shoulder with equal inquisitiveness.

    Caught in the act, Yuri unwilling obliged and assisted the old soldier with carrying Gakuto-Oki to the operating room. The laid him down on one of the surgery tables and propped one side up so that he wouldn't have to strain his back to stay upright.

    "Now comes the hard part," exclaimed Gakuto-Oki rummaging through his bag. "I'm going to need a good amount of gauze and cotton balls for the blood."

    Pulling a small glowing vial out of his bag he set it aside the other supplies he had requested. He then cut a small length of gauze and rolled it into a ball. He then placed it in his mouth.

    He was about to begin the procedure when Yuri interrupted him.

    "Why do you need the gauze in your mouth?"

    Gakuto-Oki spit out the gauze and turned to her. "Because even though muscle and skin can stretch, bones are not as flexible and so I will have to grow back the half a millimeter I lost... not to mention stitch the bones back together. It is very painful to connect bones at a rapid pace. But please no more interruptions."

    Yuri looked at him with a murderous stare. With a heavy sigh, Gakuto-Oki twisted off the top of the vial and poured half of the shiny liquid water onto his deep cut. Placing both hands atop the wound he began healing the lacerated bone. The cut was very fine and proved to be no challenge but stitching the torn leg muscles proved to be very tedious. All during this time Yuri was patiently wiping away excess blood and drying his forehead. The whole process took an hour and a half to finish. At he finished healing the torn skin he looked at the former wound only to see a hairline scar that was hardly visible.

    "I have good news Ms. Yuri," exclaimed Gakuto-Oki as he spit out the wet gauze. "My leg should be able to play the piano again."

    Yori tried to suppress a smirk with a bored look while the soldier snickered. As Aida walked into the room everyone turned toward her. She looked like she was thinking hard because her lips were pursed her and she looked cross-eyed.

    "Um Mr. Gakuto," Aida said as she inhaled. "Repeat after me, Commander Tseng said that when you're done touring our medical facilities that he wants you to visit the prisoner Siam who still hasn't woken up. She is currently residing in the commander's chamber... as per orders."

    Gakuto-Oki looked very confused in the conveyed message he had just received. "Um, thank you very much for telling me but why..."

    "You did very good Aida," interrupted Yuri. "But please finish the inventory list. I promised the Lieutenant that we'd have it finished before tomorrow."

    The nurse smiled and walked out followed by the old soldier who was muttering something about 'airheads'. Gakuto-Oki turned to Yuri with a question on his lips to which she answered.

    "Aida is very good with math and keeping track of anything but she's terrible with names and relaying messages so whenever she's given a message by one of the officers they make her repeat it back to them in order to make sure she's got it memorized... hence the repeat after me."

    "ah," he replied swiveling his legs off the table. "Now if you could find me a crutch for walking we can see the patient."

    "Patient, what?"

    "Patient, please."

    For the first time since he had walked into this tent, Gakuto-Oki saw Yuri smile as she retrieved the crutch. "Here you go Mr. Gakuto."

    "Please, call me Oki."

    //////////

    Edited on 09/30/2009 8:57am
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    Dafoose

    [9396]Oct 14, 2009
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    09, you give the go ahead if I don't respond.

    There is a facebook app *i hate facebook* linking my TV.com. I don't like that because my user identity is comprimised.
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    Dafoose

    [9397]Oct 14, 2009
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    TheGeneral6198 wrote:

    1:

    Name: Quo-Derika

    Age: 28

    Status: Earth Bender

    Height: 6'1"

    Weight: 148

    Appearance: He always wears his Di-Lee uniform, has brown eyes, brown hair, and very pale skin.

    Description: A Di-Lee (I don't know if I'm spelling that correctly) Agent. He has caused many of the numerous brain-washes at Ba-Sing-Say. He is a highly-ranked and respected officer, but because of his troublesome childhood, he has been known to crawl into a ball and weep. If anyone laughs and or yells at him, he will kill them.

     

    2:

    Name: Telistous

    Age: 32

    Status: Water Bender

    Height: 5'12"

    Weight: 125

    Appearance: Water Tribe army uniform worn, he has green eyes, silver hair, and a slight mustache.

    Description: He has quickly risen through the ranks of the Northern Water Tribe Army, and states that he is loyal to the General. However, this is a lie. Telistous's goal is to wait for a decisive battle between the nations, and once the armies are worn down enough, he will strike, and hope to become the ruler of all four nations.

     

    3:

    Name: Unknown

    Age: 94-126

    Status: Studies are not sure

    Height: 6'3"

    Weight: Unknown

    Appearance: Long robe worn, hazel eyes, white hair, and Albus Dumbledore beard.

    Description: Scientists are not sure who, or what he is, but since the war started, this mysterious figure has been sighted every night after a battle just walking by random villages. After the night after he is sighted, people in the places in question always fight for strange reasons. Some believe that the "ghost" possesses an unheard of bending: "mind bending." To control another persons thoughts, sometimes causing them to kill each other.



    Character one: Ok. Spell it as "Dai Li"
    Character two: ok.
    Character three: No mindbending.
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    Double09nhalf

    [9398]Oct 15, 2009
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    Hey dafoose long time no... read. Has everybody gone to a new site?? Anywho i decided to post my story in the blog section of my page.

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    Dafoose

    [9399]Oct 19, 2009
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    Hey dafoose long time no... read. Has everybody gone to a new site?? Anywho i decided to post my story in the blog section of my page.


    No, I'm still here.

    I just; now I'm dealing with more expenses and events, I can hardly remember everything i'm supposed to do on a daily basis.

    I blame my painting class, the chemicals in there are enough to make anybody brain dead. =.+
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    Lord-darkboy

    [9400]Oct 23, 2009
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    wow tv.com has changed since my last time

    well, guess who's here, the only quadrum-bender ever to be accepted

    I am planning to make a return as TLG didn't kill of my character (for which I'm grateful) but instead sended my toward a prison (prison are overrated ... and an illusion ... just like pants ^^)

    of course I keep myself to the deal TLG has forced me to make all in the beginning of the RPG (one of the positive things he did :p) and don't overpower my character

    well see you later all ...

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