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Hey! I just created my Avatar the Last Air Bender OC, check it out. she's the New avatar. the two benders that came befor her were, Aang and Hakau.
Name: Yan Hi
Age: 14
Height: 5"2
Weight: 105 lbs
Hair: Deep Brown
Eyes: ice blue
Original Bending Element: Earth
Current Bending Elements: Earth, Water, Fire, Air,
And....thnx to Dafoose for carrying ma characters You seem to be keeping it going now that our once almighty, courageous leader, TLG has bailed for his lil' Supernatural RPG. Anyway, would like to start RPing again, wud be great if we could get it more active.
(epic sigh) i can finally get on again. Thanks for your help dafoose. Anywho yea it seems like everybody decided to log on at the same time and make a single post stating that they still exist. i mean no offense but somebody please post somehting for the love of Pete or Steve...
I don't know if I will get into the RPG, but here it goes...
Name: Jenun Werku
Bending: Water
height: 5'3"
weight: 175.6 lbs
Personality: He is very nice. If he found a lost puppy, he would find it a nice home.
Background: He was born 2 weeks premature. His parents are very nice to him. That's how he grew up nice. One day, he had to get some warm water for his family. He was really tired that day, so he didn't want to go to a spring to get some. So, he thought that if he concentrated really hard, he could do some Waterbending. And he did. So soon after that, he trained his moves every night. In 2 years, he mastered Waterbending. Then he decided he'd travel to Ba Sing Se. That's where he met the new Earth king. Today he lives in an igloo off the coast of the South Pole, traning Waterbending to anyone who comes by. He usually succeeds.
Omnidude33 wrote: |
I don't know if I will get into the RPG, but here it goes... Name: Jenun Werku Bending: Water height: 5'3" weight: 124.5 lbs that's it |
so far so good but you need to give him a personality and a background. But personally i think your character should weigh 124.3 it looks better...
Double09nhalf wrote: | ||
so far so good but you need to give him a personality and a background. But personally i think your character should weigh 124.3 it looks better... |
If a person weighs 124 and is 5'3'' tall,
then they have the physique of a child... But I've learned its the story that matters.
Yeah, I think you should give us some background information so you can get crackin on your characters story.
(: WElcome to the club. Lol.
I was in wrestling so I know what size/weight ratios should be for a martial artist and athletes with superior abilities.
Dafoose wrote: | ||||
If a person weighs 124 and is 5'3'' tall, then they have the physique of a child... But I've learned its the story that matters. Yeah, I think you should give us some background information so you can get crackin on your characters story. (: WElcome to the club. Lol.
I was in wrestling so I know what size/weight ratios should be for a martial artist and athletes with superior abilities. |
Actually, i'm 6'2" at 150 so it is possible. anywho weren't you going to post something.
*stabs the other eye*
*laughs menacingly*
Double09nhalf wrote: | ||||||
Actually, i'm 6'2" at 150 so it is possible. anywho weren't you going to post something. *stabs the other eye* *laughs menacingly* |
Maybe I'm off on something..
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Yeah I'm posting tonight. :3
Last minute post lol.
Ok, redoblante. I sat in my directors chair for 2 hours last night trying to finish your arc in my story.
However, I found a lot of gaping plot holes you seem to insert into your story. Something I called Stephen Meyer-itis. Rereading your stories and trying to fill in the blanks you left me reminded me a lot of the Twilight saga. So to make my point, I'm going to do an abridged series for your arc in my story:
Aeros: I"m the good guy, but I often act like a emo/loner who hides his feelings for the woman I'm traveling with Mar. My brother Aires is a sadist who for some reason believes it's better to be evil than it is to be good. Go figure.
Mar: I'm the heroine. I'm somewhat sexy and attractive to Aeros, and I hide my feelings for him.
Kela: Hi, I'm Kela, I'm a three dimensional character who is handsome, peaceloving, and resourceful. I'm also a bastard, but that's because my father left when I was 7. At least my mother isn't dead.
Kela stumbles upon Aeros and Mar.
Aeros: KILL that guy!
Kela: DON'T KILL ME.
Aeros: I thought you were a spy. Darn it, I wanted to use my assassin powers.
Kela: Nope, i'm not a spy. You'll have to be a spy some other time and fail hard at it.
Mar: Kela is cute.
Kela: What?
Mar: Nothing.
Aeros: Mar, I am going to look for my twisted megalomanaic brother who uses his bending for evil and convince him to stop in a peaceful way.
Mar: Ok, but I'm going to miss sleeping with you and kissing you in awkward moments.
Aeros: what?
Mar: Nothing.
Aeros: OK mar, I'm going to let you travel with this somewhat trustworthy stranger to the north pole, even tho he happened to stumble upon us while we were making out.
Mar: Ok
Kela: 'Yessssss' Female.
Mar: What?
Kela: Nothing. 'It's no use man. She's not committed.'
So Kela and Mar travel to the north pole and Mar becomes a 3 dimensional character and learns the ways of the almighty plot, climax, and setting structure of her environment. She makes new friends, Saze and Evelet, where Evelet seems to like Mar, but is too shy to say it. Too bad.
3 months later...
Aeros: I'll sneak into Aires camp main tent and disguise myself as a soldier. He totally won't recognize me.
Aires: Aha, so we meet again for the first time for the last time Aeros, my brother.
Aeros: Damn you, using our likeliness in genetics to spot me in a crowd of five people.
Aires: you should've attacked me when my pants were down.
Aeros: If I did that, you probably would've enjoyed it.
Aires: That's true. Oh well, any last words? And where is your girlfriend?
Aeros: Aires, stop being evil.
Aires: NO.
Aeros: Damn.
Aires: Now I kill you myself. Guards, stab him.
*stab stab*
Aires: Now I watch you bleed. Hahahaha.
Aeros: Don't...*coughs blood*...Hurt Mar...*cough*
Aires: Who's Mar?
Aeros: That girl.
Aires: Oh right, that lovey dovey message I intercepted using a hawk intercepter. (note: This is the only part of the story that makes sense about now.) She's at the north Pole right? I'm going to kill her.
Aeros: Nooooooo! Damn you.
*dies; fade to black*
Aires: Ok men, I'm going to gather a small group of you, we are going to infiltrate the North Pole Police and kill Aeros' girlfriend. Kapeesh?
Bodyguards: yeah boss.
Aires: And somebody fetch me a croissant while I become a 3 dimensional character.
So Aires and his men travel to the north pole to kill Mar and wreak havoc while Dafoose cleverly tries to think of a reason Aires would really travel to the north pole while saving his own story and fill in the plot holes redoblante left at the same time.
Aires: hahaha I'm here. Damn it it's cold. I shouldn't have worn this evil thong.
Shao: I'm aires body guard Kela, I'm going to kick your ass.
Kela and Shao Fight.
*THROAT ICICLE RAPE*
Kela Wins.
Kela: I'm going to develop Aires character by letting him decide whether he should kill you or not for losing to me while at the same time add to my character to show I I learn mercy.
Shao: Hockkkaay.
Ninja waterbending!
Pow!
CRACK!
BOOM!
Alamno and Barracuda to the rescue! Almano and Kela go through secret passage way to witness Aires character development.
Aires: I hate you. You are imperfect, and I am a perfectionist socialist, which is why I am evil. See? It's a contradiction. Perfect for a character like me.
Shao: F***
Aires drops a sword in shao's back, a proper backstabbing. Then he dumps him over the cliff. Kela and Alamno follow Aires to learn more about his character and backstory. Meanwhile, Saze, evelet and mar are someplace logical, unknown to kela, they will appear at the right time and kick Aires ass. Aires has four men left. He is not going to escape alive. Meanwhile meanwhile, Aeros springs back to life in a magical plot development. Turns out the herbalist was sleeping with Aeros while he was bleeding profusely.
Herbalist: Hi sonny.
Aeros: *Screams*
Proper karma.
Kela: So Aires, we meet for the first time for the last time.
Aires: Dejavu?
Kela: Yeah it feels like it.
Aires: Fight?
Kela: Hells yeah!
Kela and Aires have an epic fight scene in the dojo. (asian action movie much?)
Kela, being kick ass and awesome, wins the fight.
Aires: Augh you have defeated me.
Kela: No, you defeated yourself.
Aires: Gasp.
Kela: Now die, you bland insanely unusually motivated character. You should never have come to the north pole to kill a 16 year old girl modeled after the Writers crush in highschool.
Aires: Augh. Damn, you are right. Please forgive me.
Kela: I will forgive you in battle, since that is the entire point of these two chapters. A well constructed plot device to demonstrate how I become a character of Mercy in battles. Because before, I never fought before, so I screwd up and let you kill shao. Plus, if I don't kill you now, the waterbenders are going to draw and corner you for treason.
*Kela impales Aires Heart with ice from his waterskin and Aires dies*
The end.
Dont' worry guys, I'm like, one eighth the way done with my next chapter.
But see what I have to deal with?
Size and weight huh... Great minds think alike??? Anywho, i think you've got too much on your plate or under your belt. shave the excess fat or whatever.
anywho
Merry Christmas or whatever your preference is....
Double09nhalf wrote: |
Size and weight huh... Great minds think alike??? Anywho, i think you've got too much on your plate or under your belt. shave the excess fat or whatever. anywho Merry Christmas or whatever your preference is.... |
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Hey Dafoose... what's with the new icon???? Pretty different from your regular ones. Is that you?? You got a mop for a hairdo!!! Lolol
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