I was good until 14 hrs, 4 mins ago lol
Anywho i hope that you do write but please resist making such goofy names.
Edited on 07/24/2009 11:59am
Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
I was good until 14 hrs, 4 mins ago lol
Anywho i hope that you do write but please resist making such goofy names.
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Mrs. Yoji - earthbender
Gakuto - waterbender
~~Mrs. Yoji has just failed at rescuing Siam from her kidnapper~~
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Mrs. Yoji felt as if time had stood still. In her attempt to strike the intruder before he escaped with Siam, the woman watched in agony as her attack struck the girl with a sickening thud. Fearing the worst she fell to her knees and covered her mouth as she gasped for breath. With wet eyes, Mrs. Yoji realized that her only consolation was that the kidnapper had not just left the body and therefore Siam might still be alive.
It's not too late, Mrs. Yoji thought as she demanded her body to move. The woman then began to run as fast as she could go. Mrs. Yoji then did a forward flip into a crouching position and sunk her fist into the ground creating a pillar that shot her skyward. She gritted her teeth as the jolt riled her stomach. Mrs. Yoji soared over small mountain tops and hills as she neared her quarry.
"I will not let you take her," Mrs. Yoji seethed.
But the sense of success turned to ash in her mouth as the boy sensed her and doubled his efforts of escape. As the boy fled from view she felt a rushing sense of helplessness and despair.
If not for the constant wind Mrs. Yoji would have splattered against the side the mountain as she fell. At the last moment she shook her tear stained face and faced the mountain she was about to be engraved on. At the last second Mrs. Yoji crossed her hands in front of her and splayed out her fingers twisting them in a circle. The mountains peek turned to dust as she past it up. The next mountain received even more graciously and received a large, circular tunnel through its face for its trouble. The last mountain she flew through brought her to a slow halt in a hole below its base. The woman breathed heavily as sweat dripped from her face. She looked up to see the mountain peaks and stars peeping from the hole.
"I must get her back," she said gasping for air. Mrs. Yoji struggled against her aching muscles but crumpled from exhaustion. As she tried to get up again, her legs felt like rubbery and she spit up blood mixed with condensed saliva. She grinded her teeth in the effort but to no avail. Collapsing to her feet Mrs. Yoji stirred up the dust that lay at the holes floor. She sneezed and bumped her head on the back of the tunnel.
"This is intolerable," Mrs. Yoji proclaimed.
The woman suddenly felt loose bits of rubble raining down upon her and she looked up to see something round blocking the tunnels exit.
"Hello down there," somebody called from the surface. "Can anyone hear me?"
Mrs. Yoji's eyes light up as she heard the voice. "Aack, yes, I'm down here... do you have any water?"
"Yes I have a water skin. One moment... here it comes."
Mrs. Yoji expected a water skin to fall down the hole but she saw it slowly descend towards her. As it came to a halt on her lap she noticed that there was no rope attached.
Ah, a water-bender, Mrs. Yoji thought as she chugged the fresh, clean water.
"If you don't finish all the water...," the voice continued. "Then please pour the rest of it below your feet. I will freeze the water and use it to hoist you out of there."
A few moments later, Mrs. Yoji viewed the entire mountain range and a protruding hand offering to help her out the remanding feet. A tall person wearing a hood was standing at the edge of the hole with a torch highlighting his silhouette. She breathed deeply and stepped into the torch light.
"Mrs. Yoji? Is that you?"
Mrs. Yoji looked confused from the person mysteriously knowing her name. "Yes, but who are you?"
The person picked up the torch behind him held it at arms length as he took off his hood.
"It's me, Gakuto-Oki..."
Gakuto-Oki was a very slim and very tall man. He was dressed in a blue fur coat and leggings. He had bright blue eyes and wore tiny rimmed glasses that stuck to his nose. The most highlighted feature about his face was his thick eyebrows that almost seemed to be alive.
"...But what are you doing here Mrs. Yoji?"
"I was heading for the northern temple with... oh never mind me what on earth are you doing here. I thought you were at the Northern Water-tribe to continue your education since your sensei left to assist me?"
The mention of his old teacher brought a smile to Gakuto-Oki's face. "Grandma Chiyo! How is she doing anyway? But let me answer you first. My studies are actually taken during winter break and I thought to take this time to visit some friends at Ba-Sing-Se. I actually just departed from the Northern Air-temple when I saw what I believed to be a comet flying through the atmosphere. As I studied the burning comet I witnessed it suddenly accelerate. I thought to chase it but I felt the earth shake as what looked to be a piece of the comet break off and crash through the sides of the mountain. When I arrived at the comet pieces final destination I heard a small sneeze and realized that someone, you, where in the hole. It must have been pure coincidence that I even came to your rescue. Was it you who created all these holes?!"
"Yes, I was trying to slow my descent. It's not as easy as it looks," said Mrs. Yoji with a weak smile. "Do you have any more water?"
Gakuto-Oki laughed at her question in good jest. "A water-bender without water? The multitudes of ways one can wring his surrounding are..."
The boy didn't get any further for Mrs. Yoji had picked him up by his collar and held him in the air.
"Do-you-have any water?"
Gakuto-Oki made a mental note and then silently produced a bubble of water that Mrs. Yoji drank heartily. After evading the throttling he was about to receive, the boy brought up his question.
"I don't mean to pry but why were you falling from so high."
Mrs. Yoji went on to tell him of their plight and Siam's kidnapping. Gakuto-Oki listened silently as his forehead produced wrinkles of concern. After she finished her tail, he took out a small cloth and cleaned his glasses.
"It all seems so sudden and yet it sounds like this plan had been years in the making. Never the less, urgency does seem critical and have many good friends residing at the temple. Come with me, I happen to know a short cut through the hills. On the way you need to tell me more about this Siam... She sounds like a very interesting person."
The boy immediately received a smack to the back of his head.
"Just focus on getting us their quickly," Mrs. Yoji spoke with urgency. "We could arrive a moment too late only to find the temple destroyed and its inhabitants forever missing."
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| Double09nhalf wrote: |
I was good until 14 hrs, 4 mins ago lol Anywho i hope that you do write but please resist making such goofy names. |
| ThatLostGuy wrote: |
| *crickets attack Dafoose* ... firebending crickets! |
| Dafoose wrote: | ||
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I found out that the problem was just my AC adapter and nothing else (heavy sigh of relief)
The TRIGUN manga is a lot better. BORDERS rullz. Although i will admit the voice actor who does Vashe's voice does a perfect job at it. But Chappell is so much more Badass is the manga
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Mrs. Yojii - earthbender
Gakuto-Oki - waterbender
~~ They have just arrived at the norhtern airtemple ~~
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As Mrs. Yoji and Gakuto-Oki made their way around the next bend they could see ascending mountain on which the northern-temple lay. The cool night wind twisted around the mountains and blew past the two figures as they approached the foundation. The entire top-half of the mountain was covered in opaque clouds that made temple impossible to view.
Gakuto-Oki turned toward Mrs. Yoji with a smirk on his face. "So, do you want to take the elevator or the stairs?"
To his reply, Mrs. Yoji stamped her foot into the ground causing a pillar to lift them upward. As they punched through the clouds, Gakuto-Oki raised his hands and clapped them together. The mist they were surging through suddenly disappeared. The crescent moon suddenly became visible as well as a cliff side that they were about to collide with. Gakuto-Oki became a little worried when they didn't stop but Mrs. Yoji lifted both her hands and punched them into the pillar. As she lifted them the man found that they were covered in stone. As she struck her fist against the cliff it turned to sand and dirt. A moment later they found themselves at the Northern temple.
Without a moment's breath they ran for the arched door-way but not before almost being clobbered by an incoming airbender on his glider. The small boy wobbly tried to compensate for the unknown guest but ascended too quickly and stalled. The glider did a nose dive passengers and all. Before either Gakuto-Oki or Mrs. Yoji could say a word a small woman ran out of the house and rushed up to the wreckage.
"Ying," shouted the woman. "Are you are right?"
A small figure leaped from torn fabric and splintered wood. His white hair shone brightly in the moon light as he brushed the dirt from his ruined tunic. He ran up the woman and grabbed her hand then pointed at Mrs. Yoji and Gakuto-Oki. "Mother! I found the bad people. The people the girl said would blow up the temple."
The boy proceeded to produce a loud exploding sound and clapped his hands together. The mother shushed the boy and slapped his hands.
"Looking for bad people? That is your excuse for flying your glider at the dead of night. You just received a new one for your birthday and now you have gone and destroyed it. Ying, I am very, very disappointed in you. Now go back to your room immediately and wait up there for my return!"
The boy began sniffling and he bended a bended a sphere and rode it back to their house.
The woman turned toward the two figure still standing at the entrance.
"I apologize for my son's behavior. He still needs to learn patience and prudence," she laughed. "It also seems that I need to continue my training in patience as well... for mine is running thin with Ying." The woman laughed once more but then composed herself.
"So Gakuto-Oki, I thought that you had already left for Ba-Sing-Se. Back to soon? And who is your friend?"
The guy looked around and then realized who the woman was talking about. "Oh, you mean Mrs. Yoji," replied Gakuto-Oki as he hid his embarrassment by fixing his glasses. "She is an associate and friend of my old teacher from Ba-Sing-Se. Mrs. Yoji, this is my friend Amami and the boy from earlier was her son Ying. She's one of the gliding instructors at this temple. I pretty much ran into her and am assisting Mrs. Yoji in her current plight."
"Yes-yes and we're in a tremendous rush," began Mrs. Yoji. "But before we go trouble monks I need you to tell me of the girl your son eagerly talked about... it's very important."
"Oh the girl from earlier... She was a fire bender who arrived shortly after you left this afternoon Gakuto-Oki. Her hair was as red as fire. I thought it stood out too much but my neighbor's teenage son thought differently. You know how youn..."
"Please Mrs. Amami," pleaded Mrs. Yoji. "What did the girl say?"
"She came to warn us of impending doom of hellfire proportions. Oh course all the monks are off meditating and her announcement fell on only children's ears. I myself am inclined to believe her but such an attack from one of our own is completely absurd. She left soon afterward when she could find anybody to believe her... Do you want something to eat Ma'am? You do look very famished."
Mrs. Yoji was very famished from having chased Siam's kidnapper but she could not afford to rest just yet. "No, not yet. I think we should find the girl who was here earlier and ask her what she knows. She may have very... ugh."
Gakuto-Oki caught her just as she fainted from exhaustion. Amami smiled gently and put to her mouth as she motioned for him to follow. The man followed her through several corridors and entered a room that contained several beds and a table in the middle. As Gakuto-Oki encircled the wooden table the bed the woman had motioned to he noticed the boy, Ying, who up until that time had been squatting on his bed with his face to the wall and his arms folded. Amami proceeded to wet a towel and place it on Mrs. Yoji's forehead but not before giving her son a stern look.
"Here, have some soup," whispered Amami handing him a bowl. The woman then went back to tending Mrs. Yoji and fed her some soup as well. Gakuto-Oki rubbed his temples out of weariness as well as helplessness. He shook his head out of frustration and went on to eat his soup. To his surprise he found it quite excellent and filling.
After finished the small meal he left without saying a word but motioned to the rooms occupants that he was heading out for a moment. After a short walk he reemerged back in the temples main court yard. The moon still shone brightly in the winter sky.
"Tomorrow will be a full moon," he commented to no one in particular. Facing the other corridors he randomly selected one and proceeded to search it for anybody else who might know about the girl who was here previously. He wandered aimlessly for hours but found nobody. As he returned to the main courtyard he saw a girl walking toward the exit. Her blonde hair whipped in the wind. As he called out she turned around and looked at him with a stern face and dull eyes. Gakuto-Oki thought the better of it and shut his mouth. He turned around and pretended to walk away.
The girl dismissed the person and continued walking out of the arched entrance and around its wall to the left. As she made her way around several boulders that surrounded the cliff side she took good care to make sure that she wasn't being followed. A figure stood up behind her and after viewing horizon, joined her near the cliff's edge.
"Were you followed," asked the figure.
"I was not my Master Shenq. I have retrieved the second crystal like you asked of me."
"Good-good. Everything is falling into place as it should. And with the effort that we had to painstakingly perform, I'd be damned if it didn't. If only my son Mizuhiro wasn't such a simpleton."
"He is a very cute simpleton my master," the girl commented.
The figure cocked his head sideways and slapped the girl hard. "How many times have I told you to stop that? This kind of counter productivity I will not allow. Its pointlessness is useless to me and I won't permit it. Do you understand?"
"Yes, my master, I apologize," the girl replied nonchalantly.
"Good well our guest should be arriving any moment. While I stay to greet them would you please take care of our unwanted visitor... silently? When you've captured him keep him aside and out of view until I tell you otherwise."
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| Miista wrote: |
| Name: Miista Status: Earth-bender Special move: Dirt suffocation Height: 6.1 Age: 16 Gender: Male Weight: 72.3 Kg Eyes: Green Hair: Straight white hair, with a think long streak of black on the right side of the head Personality: Doesn't like to talk. Like's hurting people and hates bringing people joy. Like's to practice is skills. |
A very dark character indeed. You definitely need a background on your character to explain why he like to suffocate people with ummm dirt. Bad history with tons of baggage huh. have fun being violent.
| Double09nhalf wrote: | ||
A very dark character indeed. You definitely need a background on your character to explain why he like to suffocate people with ummm dirt. Bad history with tons of baggage huh. have fun being violent. |
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Pedophile??!!? I only meant that your character didn't like to share the sandbox as a kid. To do so would be on pain of death I might add.
But in all seriousness you do need a background in order for Dafoose(
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Pedophile??!!? I only meant that your character didn't like to share the sandbox as a kid. To do so would be on pain of death I might add. But in all seriousness you do need a background in order for Dafoose( |
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I hope you were seriously joking about splitting continents and becoming Prime Minister. And unless i'm mistaken... i think you goofed up on the gender agreement with your pronouns(highlighted in red).... if you change Prime Minister to Emperor of Ba-Sing-Se and Different Dimension to Spirit world then I can start taking you seriously. And just because i thought of it Bi actually means to have intimate relationships with both genders nonexclusively
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I hope you were seriously joking about splitting continents and becoming Prime Minister. And unless i'm mistaken... i think you goofed up on the gender agreement with your pronouns(highlighted in red).... if you change Prime Minister to Emperor of Ba-Sing-Se and Different Dimension to Spirit world then I can start taking you seriously. And just because i thought of it Bi actually means to have intimate relationships with both genders nonexclusively |
I'm totally going to forget that last post... forget what again? Anywho big post this one is; yes. And no these still aren't the flying bison you're looking for.
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Siam/Kohana - airbender
Brother - firebender
Mrs. Yoji - earthbender
Gakuto-Oki - waterbender
~~Kohana has just landed on the Northern Temple while Mrs. Yoji and co search the temple for her~~
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For the northern air temple's last time, the morning sun had just peeked over the mountains when Kohana came into view of it. She kept thinking to herself how important her mission is. With her assistance people could live in a world filled with ease and joy. Her sacrifices would allow the entire world to live in peaceful harmony without want or pain. She felt a pang of guilt for the acts she was about to commit.
As the boy flew towards the temple he twisted his head and saw Kohana's worried look. "One more body...," the brother said, "amongst foundations makes little difference. Everlasting prosperity is not an achievement easily gained. Always remember that when you falter."
Kohana's face grew stern and determined as they landed on the cliff's ledge a few hundred yards from the temple. She climbed off the boy's shoulders and onto the soft snow that covered the mountains surface.
"We must find Master Shenq now," replied the boy as he struggled to regain his breath. Realizing that he had overstrained himself, Kohana rushed over and caught him as he fell.
"It seems," said a voice from behind a rock, "he is willing to sacrifice himself for the mission... good very good. And how are you doing Siam... or should I say Kohana?"
Kohana turned toward the haughty voice only to find a small boy who spoke like a man- like a man- like mi...
"Mizuhiro," Kohana blurted out in surprise.
"Hmm-hmm, ha-ha-hah. It seems that my ever so worthless son has actually been useful for once in his miserable life. And your assumption is false but you are correct to think so. For even though my body is that of my son's; I am currently in possession of it."
Memory upon memory began flooding back into Kohana's head. For the better part of her journey to prevent the death of her people she traveled with this boy. She had laughed and cared for him. She had become close friends with him and trusted him.
"It was all a lie," said Siam realizing the truth. "Has my entire life been a lie?" She would have pondered more but the boy laughed again.
"Pretty much so. Your parents weren't really your parents but only fosters, your memories not yours but only implanted, and your friends... well they are actually... your rivals!"
As the boy snapped his fingers a girl suddenly appeared out of nowhere. She wore a white dress with brown hair and brown eyes. Around her neck were two glowing crystals hanging from the same necklace.
"River," Siam exclaimed. "B-but I thought that you where..."
"Headed for the northern air temple," finished River with a sneer. "Well I'm here aren't I? Master Shenq," said River turning to Mizuhiro, "Is she really needed. I am perfectly capable of completing the mission with this little drip's help."
Mizuhiro put up a up a hand telling her to desist and continued talking. "I possess my son's body much the same that you did when your sub-personality killed your parents in the White Dragon or annihilated the populace of the Western air temple. You think you are in control of the events surrounding you? You are but a tool and I am the mastermind."
Kohana shivered and tears welled up as she remembered. She remembered her parent's deaths. She remembered seeing the eastern air temple completely vacant along with all her friends.
"All in all, your parent's death wasn't actually planed. It actually was your alternate personality that decided to murder them... but I have to agree, the resulting pain it caused you was perfect for your mission."
The boy began laughing so hard that his face turned red. "And you know what the most ironic part about this is? The letter you received that spoke of genocide towards air-benders was written by you as per my instructions."
The snowy ground around Siam seemed to sway as she fell to her knees in despair. Her hands encircled her head as she tried to blot out the noise and pain. A hand suddenly clasped onto her shoulder causing her to look up. She saw Mizuhiro standing right in front of her with a warm smile on his face. The anger, insanity, and pain had completely left his features. It was as if the last five minutes had been a nightmare and she had just woken up. Mizuhiro's mouth opened and closed breathing air out as if saying something. She strained her ears as he repeated it over and over. She then realized that his smile was getting bigger and monstrous looking. She finally heard what he was saying.
"And..." Shenq said and he panted heavily, "when you are finished... I want you to kill even more!"
Siam world crumpled into the darkness and she lost herself in it.
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Gakuto-Oki hobbled on the frozen cast he had crudely constructed for his bleeding leg. The sheer power he had been accosted by made his head swim and his leg ache even more. He realized a second later that he did not just flee of his own free will but that the girl allowed his escape.
And what's more, he thought, she didn't even look as if she was trying at all. I must reach Mrs. Yoji and relay these events. This could be just the person she was talking about.
With a hand against the brick arches he strained his muscles to obey his command to limp forward. The reddish tiles she strode across seemed numerous as his head felt dizzy and his mouth dry. He tried to relieve his thirst by bending some water out of the atmosphere but found that he could not concentrate at all. Ignoring his frustration, Gakuto-Oki pressed on through the corridor. He walked a few more steps and then stopped suddenly.
"I've completely lost my sense of direction," he exclaimed in distress. Gakuto-Oki sighed heavily and leaned against the door nearest him. To his astonishment the door gave way and he stumbled through the doorway and into the astonished arms of Mrs. Amami.
"Mr. Oki," the woman said blushing, "I believe you have fallen for me. I thought I heard someone outside and opened the door to catch you eavesdropping. All you had to do was knock silly."
"But what happened to you," exclaimed Mrs. Yoji who had rushed to help move the man to a bed. "I was just about to run after you myself and you come back here half dead."
Gakuto-Oki tried to chuckle but he ended up heaving instead. He motioned for water to which Amami brought him a glass a moment later. They both noted his condition but waited patiently for him to finish drinking.
"I errnn," he said clearing his throat. "I followed a suspicious looking girl outside the temple walls and was rewarded with a severely lacerated leg."
"I noticed that you bended a cast around your left leg" commented Mrs. Yoji. "Do you know how deep the gash is?"
"I was able to dodge most of her assault but her attack tore through half my leg and completely severed the Fibula. If not for the ice splint I probably would have cause further damage to the surrounding muscles not to mention bleed profusely. But the cast should preserve the torn tissue until I can properly mend it."
Mrs. Yoji nodded and nodded clearly flustered and impatient with the wounded man.
"Yes, yes, wonders of water-bending etc. But what of the girl you spoke of. What did she look like? Did she have black hair?"
"I... She had brown hair I believe. I didn't really have much time to think about it when she attacked me so abruptly."
Mrs. Yoji looked confused but she knew what action to take. "We have to leave, now! Mrs. Amami please wake your boy and come with us. We'll warn anyone we see along the way but we have to go now!"
Prudence being the better part of wisdom, Mrs. Amami awoke her son and then grabbed her sash with provisions and her staff. She then took her son's hand and head out the door behind Mrs. Yoji who was lending Gakuto-Oki her shoulder. They made their to the open court yard when Mrs. Amami stopped walking. Gakuto-Oki noticed first and turned his head to see an expression of dread and fear plastered over the mother's face. A breeze tumbled through the air surrounding them.
"This a-air," she stuttered, "it reeks of deadly intent. Rot and decay hand about it and all things living despair in anticipation of its coming."
Mrs. Yoji turned sharply and stared in wonder at the woman's perception. She was about to reply when Mrs. Amami stopped her.
"Can you cause the ground to swallow us up. It may be our only chance to get out of here alive."
"Yes I can but I can't do it very quickly because I over exerted myself yesterday. You'll have to buy me some time."
After taking off her staff and sack and handing them to her son Ying, she bended a sphere of air around the party. She bent and twisted her hands keeping the bubble intact while Mrs. Yoji placed Gakuto-Oki on the tile floor. Mrs. Yoji breathed deeply and raised her hands in the air. She then swung them outward causing a small hole to form in the ground in front of her. Then with a series of swift strokes she punched the hole wider and wider. Mrs. Yoji began panting and sweating as she completed it.
She turned to Mrs. Amami to find that the woman was straining against the ferocious wind as it increased. Mrs. Yoji placed the boy in the hole first and then proceeded with Gakuto-Oki. After confirming with Mrs. Amami, Mrs. Yoji jumped into the hole next. Ying shouted at his mother to hurry up but the woman just stood there and maintained the sphere.
"If I release the sphere then we all will die. I am sorry Ying. Mommy can't come with you this time. Be a good boy to these people and I am sorry. Mrs. Yoji, please take care of my son. He is stubborn but good natured. Gakuto, maybe in another life hmmm. Goodbye my son... I'm sorry."
The woman smiled softly but everybody could see the tears running from her eyes. As Mrs. Yoji struggled to seal the whole a tear drop shot through and stung Ying face.
As Mrs. Yoji painstakingly burrowed her way to the outer edge of the cliff surrounding the temple the rest of the group remained silent.
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