Actually i meant the story part not grammer part but i did fix the mistake you pointed out.

POsting soon (big surprise there folks)

Hi guys. Been sick lately and it really sucks. Anywho writing been slow and dull for me. I hate it when that happens. I've decided to delete my previous post on this page and add it to my new and extended one. enjoy...

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Siam - Airbender (She has a staff for a weapon but that's a little redundant)

Mrs. Yoji - earthbender

Brother(different one) - firebender

~~Siam and Mrs. Yoji are resting for a bit before they make for the northern airtemple~~

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He stole through the tall grass with the sound of the wind masking his quick movements. When he heard a slight noise, the boy crouched to the ground while staring through the brush that tickled his face. Upon hearing complete silence again he continued his decent toward the small hut.

As he crept through the hut's opening he heard shallow breathing coming from the two figures that lay sleeping on the floor. Slowly he crossed the threshold toward Siam. As he bent over her the boy gently stroked Siam's the hair out of her mouth.

"Big brother," Siam whispered in her sleep.

The boy smiled as he picked Siam up from where she slept. Siam shift in his arms and hugged his neck as they left the room.

"Big brother," Siam whispered again.

Siam was suddenly shaken awake when the boy carrying her jumped sideways to avoid getting smashed by a boulder. Rising up from where she had been hiding, Mrs. Yoji sent a shockwave of walls that roses in front of the person carrying Siam.

"What do you want with her," Mrs. Yoji cried out as she attacked. "If you continue to escape then you will leave me no choice."

The boy said nothing but paused for a second and looked at Siam who still looked confused and groggy. She knew that she should be scared or angry but for some reason Siam felt comforted in these surprisingly familiar arms.

The boy was about to say something when for walls shot up around them and cut off any escape. The boy looked again from Siam to the wall then got into a stance. As he gritted his teeth Siam noticed something small shining inside his tunic. A second later the boy released a torrent of fire that twisted into a tornado around the two of them.

Siam gazed in awe as the walls around them melted instantaneously in a heaping piled of molten lava.

"Hold on tight sister," the boy spoke as he jumped through the fiery storm. As they flew through the spiraling fire Siam realized that she felt none of the heat. From that moment the last thing she remembered was a cylindrical rock smacking her head hard.

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She awoke in what felt like seconds later on a rocky surface next to a campfire. The girl felt pressure on her fore head and reached up to find a bandage wrapped around her head. She tried to get up only to be knocked over by the blinding pain that shot through her head. As she fell backward strong arms reached out and caught her gently. She slowly turned her head to see the boy that had caught her.

"You should be more careful... your head is still swelling from that devil-woman's attack. Please lie down sister."

The girl looked at the boy in a dazed state. "Sister? I don't know you. I-I don't remember you at all." The girl then stared at her hands then back at the boy. "I don't remember anything. What am I? Who am I..." The girl tried to back away as the boy drew closer. She didn't know who he was and only wanted desperately to get away.

"I don't know you. Please, just leave me alone,"

When the boy didn't comply to her request she started to crawl even faster all the while looking for a weapon. Looking at her side she found a peculiar staff that was somehow strapped to her back. She grabbed the staff as swung it around at her assailant. To her astonishment, a blade of wind struck the boy instead of the staff. The girl immediately dropped the staff and crawled up into a ball.

Recovering from the blow, the boy's face betrayed a hint of alarm towards the girl's state but whatever traces of doubt he had suddenly vanished with the return of his kind smile. Again he approached her with more determination then before. He then extended his arms and hugged her with all his might. The girl sighed in content for reasons that she didn't understand.

"It will be alright," he whispered. "I'm here now... your big brother is here." The boy then bent his head down and whispered in her ear. "Built on intent; resolved with hate."

His voice sounded monotone in her but at the same time melodious and addicting. The line twisted through the girl's head and drove out memories she never knew existed.

"Destroyed with anger; weak becoming great," the girl replied in harmony with him. "Reborn with might; cast in the dark. Edge of the spear; fire born from a spark. Burning with desire all to do them ill. We thirst for power, the need to KILL."

The girl made a small cry then slumped her head against the boy. The boy then laid her back down on the crude bed that he had set up and waited.

After a few minutes had passed by the boy noticed a breeze. The small wind increased and started to flow around the girl. The wind around her increased so much that it lifted her off the ground. The boy stood outside the funnel patiently and immediately caught her in his arms as the wind dissipated.

"Brother," the girl cried out as she lie back down on the bed.

"My sister, I am sorry for taking so long. I was forced to bide my time before meeting you."

"All is forgiven my dear brother," replied the sister. "But I... feel weak. Even though she has forgotten who she is... The turmoil in her life is almost gone. I feel as though I am fading."

The brother face paled upon hearing this and bent on one knee to hold her hand as it shook.

"What can I do," asked the brother.

"The only thing to do; you have to tell her about me... about her real past. Then she will find out who her allegiance really belong to."

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Hello??? Helllloooo?

*crickets chirping*

did this place die over night?

*More crickets chirping*