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    Eman5805

    [1641]Jan 1, 2007
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    katrah88 wrote:
    Speaking of im going to reserve this post for when i finally finish writing the next part of the story since I'm currently suffering from WBFS - Writer's Brain Fart Syndrome
    Well Katrah....since you won't be here and your character, Yari the Ribbonbender, hasn't been doing so much....I guess it is ok if you don't have a finale....just start posting again when Season3 begins.....lets just say that you already wrote your finale...

    Can you put me down for some of that too? I kinda wrote myself into a hole with Indra. I don't have a clue where I could possibly go with it. I almost wish I could bring Rexsten back...

    Edited on 01/01/2007 6:45pm
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1642]Jan 1, 2007
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    Eman5805 wrote:

    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    katrah88 wrote:
    Speaking of im going to reserve this post for when i finally finish writing the next part of the story since I'm currently suffering from WBFS - Writer's Brain Fart Syndrome
    Well Katrah....since you won't be here and your character, Yari the Ribbonbender, hasn't been doing so much....I guess it is ok if you don't have a finale....just start posting again when Season3 begins.....lets just say that you already wrote your finale...

    Can you put me down for some of that too? I kinda wrote myself into a hole with Indra. I don't have a clue where I could possibly go with it. I almost wish I could bring Rexsten back...


    Aight....as of now, you have written your finale...you can no longer post until Season3 begins....that just leaves 5 remaining people, Scorch, Rin, Ami, Fang, and Talho...oand about the Rexsten part, you can blame that on me..ahahahah I made Orinth kill him...MY BAD!
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    katrah88

    [1643]Jan 1, 2007
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    katrah88 wrote:
    Speaking of im going to reserve this post for when i finally finish writing the next part of the story since I'm currently suffering from WBFS - Writer's Brain Fart Syndrome

    Well Katrah....since you won't be here and your character, Yari the Ribbonbender, hasn't been doing so much....I guess it is ok if you don't have a finale....just start posting again when Season3 begins.....lets just say that you already wrote your finale...


    Ahhh... a break! I love you forever lol. Then I can just open the next season with that whole conclusion over the wall later on (unless i'm finally cured of my WBFS finish with the whole wall thing and call it a finale lol. im not gonna get my hopes up though). Yay, for me!
    Edited on 01/02/2007 2:31am
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    avatarforte

    [1644]Jan 1, 2007
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    Fang-Airbender

    I was mad. My sword held its place on Sakai's throat, just barely resting in front of it. He stepped back, stumbling and falling over. I walked over to her and helped her up.

    "You okay Ami?" She nodded and I sighed with relief. I turned back to Sakai. "I just learned something very disturbing".

    "Get away from my wife, you low-life airbender" he spat with venom in his tone. Ami's uncle, Huo, was shocked, obviously seeing this side of him for the first time. I saw people gathering, wondering what the comotion was.

    "So, looks like theres an audience for your mask to be removed." He looked around, seeing the group of people just now. "So, what will you do". He smiled.

    "What am I gonna do? Im going to kill you and the child she carries with my own two hands. Then she will be mine forever." I stopped and looked at Ami.

    "Your....pregnant?" She nodded. I couldnt believe it. I... was a father. The shock instandly went away, as I realized what Sakai intended to do. I noticed just in time to see him draw a blade and try to make me two people. I dodged it, but he knocked my sword from my hand.

    "What now airbender? Are you going to fight me with your bare hands?" He started laughing, thinking he had won. I sighed again and stood up.

    "Nah, my hands will be enough to beat you down. Even a novice could defeat your pathetic fighting style". He sizzed with rage and charged me, bringing his sword above his head and bringing it down towards my head. I created a wind barrier and grabbed the blade. He struggled to push it down while I just smiled. I blew an air blast into this chest, sending him flying back. I threw his sword away and dashed after him. He managed to stop himself, grabbed a spear from warrior and threw it at me. He threw it faster than I thought ,so it skimmed my cheek, leaving a red mark across my cheek. It didnt stop me though. I got up to his face and punched and kicked the crap outta him. As he was stumbling back ,I put both my arms backwards, palms open. Then, I slammed my palms into this chest, feeling a bone or two crack. Then, to finish it, as he was falling back, I brought my leg down like a gullotine on his chest, smashing him against the ground. He twitched, then passed out. Ami leapt onto my back and started healing the cut on my cheek. I smiled and hugged her. A cough from beside us got out attention. It was the village cheif and Huo.

    "Well, normally, I would have you killed for what you just did. However, I see now what a vile man he was. The marriage is off. Ami is free to do as she wishes", the chief said. "And as for Sakai, you are banished from the village for these vile intents". Sakai's limp body spat. The chief looked back to us.?? Ami looked to her uncle for apporval and he smiled. She laughed and hugged him. The village was in an uproar, cheers all around. Sakai's followers came and took him away. I smiled, then was overwhelmed as the crowd rushed to see the amazing airbender. I sighed, then managed to escape. There was going to be one heck of a party tonight.
    Edited on 01/04/2007 1:19pm
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    Kathleen2006

    [1645]Jan 1, 2007
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    Ami (waterbender)

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    I smiled as I watched my people swarm Fang, they had accepted him, but I there was something I wanted to do.

    "Rin, hey Rin, can I talk to you for a second?" I called

    "Sure, what is it?" she said

    "There is something I want you to dispose of, my uncle said I would get a new one from Fang so I wanted to get rid of this!" I held up the bethrothal necklace that Sakai had placed on me earlier.

    "What do you want me to do?"

    "Follow me" I smiled as we went out of the town area.

    "Would you mind??doing the honor of burning this piece of crap so we can be on with our lives?" I asked

    "It would be my pleasure" Rin smirked and took the necklace from my hand and quickly set it a blaze.

    Once it was only ashes I threw the ashes into the friged water and bid it one last good ridance before returning to the party and the father of my unborn child.

    "Thanks for burning that for me, Rin, I owe you one" I smiled as we headed back

    "You don't owe me a thing, that's what a friend would do for a friend" Rin smiled back "and believe me, I'm as happy to be rid of that thing as you are"

    I laughed as we got there I ran to Fang and she went to Scorch, it appeared our little gang was happy for the moment, but as we very well know those moments never truly last long enough.

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    AEtherBlue

    [1646]Jan 2, 2007
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    Orha (Earth Bender) (FINALLY)
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    Had just beaten Azul and is now walking to the cave entrance.
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    I walked out of the tunnel, full of pride, "luckily I can't feel pain in thi-" I suddenly fall to my knees, I start to get weak looking down at my arms, the veins start turning blue, "God, I cant move, what the hell is this?" I say aloud. I look over to the left, I can see there, right on Zeth???s wrist, there is a bracelet, it's glowing and emitting, plasma like beams of light. They start propelling everywhere. Everything around me starts changing, colours start shifting, words coming out of no-where. Everything is shaking an blurred, surrounded by words and random symbols. I can hear nothing around me, nor can I move, I feel helpless, I start to go un- conscious when a voice booms out to me.

    "That's my body. I want it back." I hear from out of no-where.

    "What are you talking about? This is my body! You can't have it... I will fight to the death!" I yelled out in spite.

    "So be it." The voice boomed again, this time everything cleared and there was a figure standing there. She was staring off into the distance. I walked closer, I noticed that I was in a long hallway, there was nothing else and there where no visible ends. I walked right up to the figure standing there, she looked like a little 12 year old, but as I got closer, I noticed something, this girl was missing her eyes, I got closer, I took a look at her shirt, it was stained with blood, I moved the shirt aside to find a whole in her chest, and she was bleeding from it. I smiled. I looked down at her arm and notice she was bleeding there two, it was like it had been recently torn from her body, same with her eyes and heart. She was still breathing. "This is the body that you now occupy. This is what you have done to her. This is what you have done to me." I looked toward the voice behind me. I saw nothing. I heard a rustle from the body, I looked around and noticed a metal object coming my way. It stabbed through my chest, searing pain ached through my body, I coughed out blood as the sword went deeper into my chest. The dead girl smiled at me and twisted the blade, a grin came upon her face now. I gripped the wound and I stepped back. Gushing blood from both the wound and my mouth, I stuttered on my feet a little. I smiled back at her.

    ???You don???t have anything on me child.??? I yelled to her, I grabbed her by the head and her expression suddenly changed, I threw her to the side and watched her hit the floor.

    I watched blood spill from my stomach, and I looked down to see the edge of another blade sticking out, I turned to see the little girl there, I looked back at where I through her and she was gone, I looked back and there was a large grin on her face. She pulled the sword out, her hand had formed into a large blade, it had weird patterns on it and other strange symbols. The same ones I saw before. She spun around me, laughing, I tried to catch her but she was too fast, I heard a slice, and I felt a pain in my arm, I looked over and it was on the floor.

    ???That???s mine.??? The voice boomed again, I saw the girl stop, her arm was back on. I was gripping the stub in pain wile she swung the sword at my face, I looked down the cold steel of the blade, the end pointing at me with lust. ???That is too.??? It lunged forward, stabbing me in the eye, I gripped it as it stayed in the socket, I saw blood gushing down the blade pulled the blade out, broke it off, and kicked the girl to the side, I wrapped a cloth around my hand and took hold of the blade, I was ready. The girl just looked at me, looked down at her hand, then she looked back up and one of her eyes where back.

    ???I guess that will be a fair handicap then.??? I said to the girl standing there in awe, she rushed forward and shoved her face into mine. I stabbed the sword into her gut and she looked down, she smiled. She moved away and pulled the sword out. She started to come back when suddenly the sword started shining red. She looked down, the red started to crawl up her arm, she tried to get it off. ???What???s the matter? Have a little problem there???? I asked. She kept thrashing around the red symbols covered her whole body now. She stopped and stood there. ???C???mon I haven???t got all day here. I got to get rid of you.??? There was a blink and she was in front of me.

    ???You don???t know even yourself and yet you want to face me???? She said. She gripped me by the neck. ???Why don???t I just kill you off? I want you alive. I need you intact??? but??? your useless to me in there, little girl. Why don???t you come out and play???? She started to glow, and everything got bright.

    ???You???re awake. I guess that it worked then.??? An old man said, as I opened my eyes I saw a man sitting beside me. I tried to move my arms, I noticed I was shackled down. ???Yes, this is a precaution. I don???t need you going around killing people on a whim. I need you for my own purposes.??? He smiled at me. ???Not only is it that you are the all powerful earth spirit, but you also have something that I need more than anything in the world my child. You have the heart of innocence. That is why you are not dead yet.???

    I started to trash around, he walked away and picked something up, he walked back over and dropped a mirror by my face.

    ???This is the new container you have, your freed from your old prison.??? He told me. I looked in the mirror, my eyes glowing red. I looked back up at him. ???I need that girl in tact, so please accept this one instead. I???ve preformed a binding spell to meld you with this body. This is your body now. You can thank your friend Talho for that one. While she thought I was trying to get rid of you I was actually setting up a summoning spell. This is a body of your own now.??? He told me.

    ???A body of my own???? I thought to myself. I looked up at him.

    "One condition" he said. I looked up at him.

    ???What do you want me to do???? I asked him. He smiled.

    "Sorry to say but, first, we need to have the birthing ceremony." He put his hand to my head, "This will sting a little." His hand quickly covered in red markings, he presed down hard, I felt a small sensation in my head, then, WHAM! A massive surge of pain jolts through my entire body. I start to forget everything, I start to feel, everything. I feel a surge of power jolt through me. Light is surrounding his hand.

    Everything stops. I look around. I see an old man crouching above me.

    "Hello daughter, your name is Orha." He said to me.

    "Father?" I asked him.

    "This is right my child." He sat there and smiled to me, I smiled back.
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    Talho (Earth Bender) (NOT FINALLY.)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Had a crazy dream.
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    I wake up, I'm lying in a cave. I look around and see a man laying there on the floor.

    "Thats the same guy I met in that bar." I said to myself. Frightened, I flopped a little and then got up, looking again, he wasent moving at all. I looked down and saw a hole in his chest. "I wish I could have been the one to kill you." I said. I gripped my arm, I started to cry, I looked down at the braclet on my arm. My eyes widened, "Noo! Get this thing off me!" I yelled out. I fell to the floor, sitting and I tired despreatly to free it from my arm, it wouldent budge... Now almost crying I started bashing it against rocks, this thing, this which had given me soo much pain, it wont leave me alone. "Why do you always follow me? You always have to bring back things I dont want. Leave me alone!" I twisted my body and I wacked my head on a rock, I fell to the ground, I tried to get back up, I was succsesfull, I wobbled over to the cave entrance. I looked outside, it was bright. I looked around the grounds... it seemed like there was a battle here before, "I always seem to miss these," I said to myself. I stopped caring about the bad omen on my arm. I started walking down the pass when I bumped into a familliar face.

    "Talho! Your OK!" Shido yelled out to me.
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    avatarforte

    [1647]Jan 2, 2007
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    Fang-Airbender

    The night was still hanging over the city. All day, the city had celebrated the announcement of mine and Ami's marriage. I wasnt used to the attention I was getting. The night brough calm to the city, and I sighed in relief. Ami was sleeping, so I left her and went out into the city. It was quiet, and no one was moving around. I felt the wind and it felt good. Suddenly I noticed what looked to be a hooded man, watching me from the shadows. I turned towards him and called out. He ran. Sighing, I ran after him. He moved quickly, as I had trouble keeping up with him. He lead me to a darker part of the city, where no eyes could see me. Finally, he stopped and faced me.

    "Who are you?" I asked huffing. He merely responded by launching a fireball at me. I dodged it and yelled at him. "What are you doing?" He fired more fireballs at me. I dodged them, noting that they were hotter and faster than the ones Scorch threw. He cupped his hands at his side (like the Kamehameha) and fired a fire wave from them. I pulled as much air in front of me and fired back. The wind easily matched the fire, as I used it to suck away the fire;s abilit to grow. The remaining air blasted the man backwards into the wall. He slumped. I relaxed, then without warning, he leapt back up and fired another one, which I was unable to block. I flew back and quickly used air the put out the fire on my clothes. I struggled to get back up "Again, who are you?"

    "I am Obsidian. I come not to fight but to test you and extend you and offer. You are just as strong as I predicted. Its been a while since someone was able to block my Fire Cannon." I was still on my guard, but the fire cannon or whatever that was had done some serious damage. "As for my offer, I simply ask you to join me." This shocked me.

    "Join you to do what?" I asked him.

    "What it is matters not to you. What does is the power I can give you, the power to protect those you love without fail". I listened, being slowly drawn by his words. I shook my head. A smooth talker, thats what he was. Exodus called to me in my head.

    "Dont listen Fang, hes trying to trick you. Fight his words". I snapped back to reality.

    "And what do you get out of me helping you?" He still had his hood on, so it was impossible to see his expression.

    "I need you, and your spirit there, to help fufill my plan." Both me and Exodus were shocked. He could see her. I backed away, preparing to attack again.

    "Sorry, but I stopped joining "take over the worlds" plots a while ago. Sorry, but your outta lack pal." He sighed.

    "I was hoping youd come willing. But now, I will have to use force. And I have already won." I raised an eyebrow, confused at what he could mean, when I felt it. Something inside my head.

    "ARGGG!" I fell to my knees, my head throbbing. Exodus's words were faint now, replaced by someone elses, someone darker.

    'Your mine now. You and the power of your spirit." I tried to fight back but I was weakened by the fight. I could sense whatever it was trying to suck out Exodus's power. She was weakening as her power was being drained away. Using my last bit of strenght, I called out to her.

    "Run Exodus....warn...the others." She was hesistant to leave me. "I said GO!" I yelled. She left my body, some of her power still intact. The voice sighed.

    "Damn. Oh well, I got more than enough. Now, I think its time you went night night little airbender". The last of my strenght faded, and I felt the presence taking over. With my final breath, I whispered one word.

    "Ami....". The world went dark.

    -Somewhere nearby-

    Exodus struggled to move. The presence had drained alot of her strength. She knew she had to warn the others, but right now, she needed to rest. She settled in the snow above the city, and blacked out.
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    Vampdude69

    [1648]Jan 2, 2007
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Jax has begun his duel with Dark Jax

    This is before Fang's previous post. Part 1 of 3 Part Season Finale

    PART 1: THE DUEL

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    Jax looked at Dark Jax. Dark Jax drew his broadswords. They both pointed one sword at each other, and they walked around in a circle with the points of one sword touching the other. The stared at each other, waiting for one to make his move.

    Jax connected spirits with Dark Jax, and saw his plan. He was going to take over Fang, and kill Scorch, Ami, and Rin.
    He can't do that. I won't let him. Jax thought.

    Jax pulled the sword back, and swung it at Dark Jax's. They collided, and Dark Jax looked at him, and smiled.

    "And so it begins," he said. Dark Jax punched Jax in the face, and Jax fell back. Jax regained his stance, and pointed his sword at Dark Jax again.
    Dark Jax touched the point of his sword, with Jax's sword.
    Then Jax smiled. He jumped as high as he could, and landed on the ground. He flew into the ground, and sprung the earth back up, sending Dark Jax flying. He stabbed his swords into the ground, and launched a rock at Dark Jax. Dark Jax looked at the rock, and dissapeared.

    "Where is he?" Jax said. Suddenly, he fell to the ground as a huge rock hit him in the back.

    "What the?" Jax said. "You're a spirit, you can't earthbend!"
    "Technically Jax, I'm you, just your anger. Thats what makes me more powerful!"

    Jax launched a rock at him, and it went right through his body.
    "I can't be hurt. I can only be killed if you die," he said.

    "Would you die if you were in someone's body?" Jax said.

    "If you died, when I was in another body, the other person would live. We would both die," he said. "Enough talk."
    Dark Jax swung his swords and Jax blocked them.

    "Boring to fight in one spot, isn't it?" Dark Jax said. Dark Jax stepped back and started to walk down a flight of stairs burried in the dirt. He continued to bash at Jax while he walked.

    They reached the bottom of the stairs and Dark Jax stepped on a switch that lit the tunnel. It was a long, black tunnel. It led to who knows where. Jax swung his swords and some earth got caught in them and they fell down. Jax picked up his swords, and dodged an attack by Dark Jax. They reached a circular room, and Dark Jax dropped his swords. Suddenly, chains flew out of the ground made of earth. Jax cut through a few of them, and he suddenly got caught around the legs, then he dropped his swords as chains binded his arms.

    Jax grunted as he tried to get free, and he couldn't bend the chains.
    "Why are you trying to kill me?" Jax asked. "If I die, you'll die!"

    "You don't understand Jax," he said. "When a spirit is inside you, when you touch someone you care about most, they become your new, "host", if you will. If I kill you, they die."
    "Who is the host?" Jax asked.

    "Remember at the temple?" Dark Jax said. "When you felt Rin?"
    "No!" Jax yelled.
    "I told you, their deaths will be on your head."
    He walked towards Jax with a sword pointed at him.

    Jax lifted his head, and sent the earth under Dark Jax flying. Dark Jax slammed against a wall, and the earth chains fell.
    "Let me get this straight, If you kill me, Rin dies?" Jax asked.

    "Yes," Dark Jax said.

    "But if I die from anything else, you die?" Jax asked again.
    "Yes."
    "Then there is no way I'm losing to you," Jax said.
    He charged at Dark Jax and cut his arm, but the swords went right through.
    Dark Jax laughed, and walked into another tunnel. Jax caustiosly followed him.

    Jax entered a long staircase room. The staircase was going up.

    Dark Jax was at the top. Jax ran up the stairs, but he was blasted in the leg by....fire.
    He looked up, and Dark Jax was swirling fire in his hand.
    "You're a firebender?" Jax asked.
    "No, you're a firebender Jax," Dark Jax replied. "Deny it, you have always been."
    'No!" Jax yelled. "I can't be! I hate the Fire Nation!"
    "But you don't hate Rin, and Scorch," Dark Jax replied. "And now they will suffer because of you. Goodbye Jax."
    He dissapeared, and left Jax on the staircase.

    Edited on 01/04/2007 1:39pm
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    vegnegun

    [1649]Jan 2, 2007
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    The Gang had been reunited

    After the celebration of Fang and Ami's marrage had began to cool down, Scorch and Rin went back to her uncle's place. Scorch and Rin were forced to share a room, but with seperate beds, and fell asleep. Midnight came and Scorch was woken up by Pyro.

    "Exodus is venurable," said Pyro, "she is away from her host and in the open. I must get her!" Scorch sighed and squeezed his hand, hearing Pyro roar in pain. Scorch knew if Exodus was out in the open, not even with Ami, something was up. He slowly got up and??got his cloak on, before looking at Rin, knowing she was a hard sleeper, and gently walked out of the room. He queitly snuck towards Fang and Ami's room and opened the door, seeing Ami alone. Scorch slowly left the home and went outside.

    "Alright," said Scorch, "where is she?" Pyro was silent and Scorch began to clench his hand, "Pyro, where is she?"

    "She's close by," snorted Pyro.

    "That's better," said Scorch. He put the hood up on his cloak and walked through the city, allowing Pyro to lead him through the city. "Argh, can't you make this any easier?" asked Scorch. His vision suddenly changed to red and he saw dozens, no hundreds,??of red shapes, each one looking like a person. Scorch noticed a bright white one, shaped like a wolf,??off in the distance, and the??glow was fadding.

    "Exodus," said Pyro, "she won't last long without a host." Scorch sighed and knew that he couldn't get to her fast enough. He sighed and??ran behind an alley way, flying into the air towards the glow, not noticing the massive amounts of heat steadily rising into the sky from Obsidian. He flew passed the buildings and saw Exodus in the distance surrounded by snow. He blinked??hard and his vision went back to normal and he slowly moved down towards Exodus. He heard Pyro growl in his head and squeezed his hand, hearing Pyro back down. Scorch slowly moved towards Exodus and she lifted her head up and looked at him.

    "Its okay Exodus," said Scorch, "I'm here to help you."

    "Scorch," said Exodus in his head, "I'll be fine, go and help Fang. He's in danger."

    Scorch nodded, "where is he?"

    "Further into the city," said Exodus, "He was fighting a cloaked man when he suddenly got weak. I'll go to Rin and Ami to tell them."

    "Tell them to stay safe," said Scorch, "I can take care of this." He blinked hard and his vision shifted again. Exodus left him and head back to Ami's home. "Pyro, find Fang." Pyro hesitated. "Pyro, do we need a reminder who is in charge here?" A white spot appeared in Scorch's vision and it had a black spot slowly engulfing it. "Don't worry Fang," said Scorch, "I'm coming." He encased his body in fire and blasted off into the air, heading towards the white spot, slowly turning black. He was right over it and landed on a roof before allowing the flames to go out. He saw Fang standing face to face with a cloaked man.

    "So," said the man, "what do you think of my offer?" Scorch recognized the voice as his eyes widened, the voice belonged to the person that claimed to be his brother at one time:?? Obsidian. Without hesitation, Scorch jumped down between the two.

    "Obsidian," said Scorch, "its been a while now... two years right?"

    "Hello brother," said Obsidian, "I wasn't expecting you to be here."

    "I am not your brother," said Scorch.??A grin crawled across Obsidian's face. "Fang, are you alright?"??asked Scorch. He got no answer and asked again, only to be hit by a large wave of air. He fell on the ground,??unable to get up. He turned around and saw Fang's eyes had changed and Scorch knew that it was not Fang. He suddenly felt a wave of heat coming towards him and encased his body in blue flames, quickly turning around and hurling the fire blast back at Obsidian, forcing him to fall back. Scorch felt the wind get knocked out of him from behind and fainted flat on the ground.

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    megagod

    [1650]Jan 2, 2007
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    just saying this is Shido

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1651]Jan 2, 2007
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    megagod wrote:
    just saying this is Shido


    Hahahaha okay....So, I take it Shido is a main character once again? (by the way, nice first post!)
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    Kathleen2006

    [1652]Jan 2, 2007
    • member since: 07/06/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 76

    Ami (Waterbender)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I woke to the feeling that Exodus was near me again.

    "Exodus, where is Fang?" I asked

    "He is in danger... Scorch wants you to stay here and stay safe" Exodus said

    "I'm not staying here with Fang in danger" I exclaimed

    "Ami think about what you hold inside your body, your child... think of your child before you go out there chasing after him."

    "I understand,?? but that doesn't mean I'm not worried" I sighed

    "You aren't the only one" Exodus replied I could feel how week she was

    "You won't last long on your own will you?" I asked

    "Not the way I am now" Exodus replied, I knew she didn't want to burden me, but I knew that if I didn't do something I would never hear her voice again, have her soothing me when it seemed like even Fang didn't understand.

    "Then come??stay with??me... until this stuff with Fang is cleared stay with me, please" it was out of the blue but I wasn't thinking of myself or even my child, I was thinking of my friend

    "Ami I don't think I should...."

    "Exodus... you won't last too much longer, you said it yourself, I'm a strong woman I can handle this" I inturrupted not sure if I wanted to scream or cry.

    I felt her become a part of me and it felt strange at first, but then it became comforting, like I had a bit of Fang with me. I stood and left my room to see Rin standing outside of my room.

    "Rin, have you heard about Fang?" I asked

    "Yes" She replied "where is Exodus?"

    "She's with me" I replied simply "she's weak she needs to rest"

    "Okay, as long as she's safe... I just hope the guys will be"

    "Me too, me too"

    Edited on 01/02/2007 7:25pm
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    RustyMantis216

    [1654]Jan 2, 2007
    • member since: 11/22/06
    • level: 1
    • rank: Weatherman
    • posts: 22
    I don't know if it's too late to join in so if it is, feel free to let me know, lol.

    Name: Lu Yung
    Status: Water, Ice and Plantbender
    Style(s): 8 Drunken Immortals and Tai Chi
    Special move: Grass/Vine Wave
    Height: 5'9"
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 140
    Eyes: Sapphire Blue
    Hair: Jet Black
    Weapon: A short, tassled straight-sword
    Personality: Being named after one of the 8 drunken immortals Lu, the God with internal strength, his main goal in life is to further his knowledge of his bending arts and make a name for himself.?? His creativity and imagination are his strongest points and travels alone, most of the time, in search enlightenment in any way, shape or form.
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    megagod

    [1655]Jan 3, 2007
    • member since: 08/10/06
    • level: 5
    • rank: Caveman Lawyer
    • posts: 89
    probaly next season he will its up to you and other people(I Know!)
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    crazyman321

    [1656]Jan 5, 2007
    • member since: 10/21/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 4,264
    just bringing this back up so you wont have to look for it
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    tony878787

    [1657]Jan 5, 2007
    • member since: 10/03/06
    • level: 5
    • rank: Caveman Lawyer
    • posts: 2

    Name: lur amon (the shadow flame)

    Status: Fire bender and air bender

    Special move: coloum of fire

    special skills: increased aggility, trained in a wide varity of fighting styles and weapons, has knoledge of healing herbs, a master of stealth, a great tracker

    Height: 5''11

    age: 19

    Gender: Male

    Weight: 12 stone


    Eyes: highlighted blonde hair


    background: his father was a fire nation general, when he refused to burn down a mountain village the fire lord bannished him from the fire natation but not before??wounding??him and leaving him to die??in the ashes of the village he refused to burn down but before he died a young airbender women found him, she took him back to a small airbending village that had been hidden in the mountain during the war. as the women nursed the general back to health the 2 fell in love and in time they married and had a child, as soon as the child was born the priestess of the village said that this child was special and that he would one day give hope to the helpless. years went by and the child seemed to have te abbility to control not only fire like his father??but also air like his mother when asked they asked the priestess how this was possible she said that when the war had started and so many airbenders had been wiped out there was an unbalance in the univeres and was the univers trying to mend it's self. knowing the dangers that were ahead they decided to train their son so that he would have the best possible chance of surviving.

    at the age of 12 the childs training went well and he had a talent at being able to learn anything extreamly quickly and him and his parents lived in peace untill word?? came to the village that the fire nation were heading striaght for??their village. knowing that their son??was not ready yet they sent him away with several people evacuating the village as they stayed in hope that they could by enought time for the others to get away. saddly as the boy was leaveing the outskirts of the mountain range in which the village was hidden he heard his mother scream using his fire bending skills he blasted himself into the air then using his airbending skills he used his long robe to glide back to help his parents but by the time he got back to the village the fire nation had left and his parents were left in the center of the village dead surrounded by dead fire nation soilders they had put up a good fight, as he sat there beside his parents crying he made a promise to not only give hope to the helpless but to avenge their deaths.

    he spent the next 7 years travel the world learning everything he could from anyone willing to teach him.

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    panthean

    [1658]Jan 5, 2007
    • member since: 08/14/06
    • level: 9
    • rank: Door Number 2
    • posts: 2,672
    tony878787 wrote:

    Name: lur amon (the shadow flame)

    Status: Fire bender and air bender

    Special move: coloum of fire

    special skills: increased aggility, trained in a wide varity of fighting styles and weapons, has knoledge of healing herbs, a master of stealth, a great tracker

    Height: 5''11

    age: 19

    Gender: Male

    Weight: 12 stone


    Eyes: highlighted blonde hair


    background: his father was a fire nation general, when he refused to burn down a mountain village the fire lord bannished him from the fire natation but not before??wounding??him and leaving him to die??in the ashes of the village he refused to burn down but before he died a young airbender women found him, she took him back to a small airbending village that had been hidden in the mountain during the war. as the women nursed the general back to health the 2 fell in love and in time they married and had a child, as soon as the child was born the priestess of the village said that this child was special and that he would one day give hope to the helpless. years went by and the child seemed to have te abbility to control not only fire like his father??but also air like his mother when asked they asked the priestess how this was possible she said that when the war had started and so many airbenders had been wiped out there was an unbalance in the univeres and was the univers trying to mend it's self. knowing the dangers that were ahead they decided to train their son so that he would have the best possible chance of surviving.

    at the age of 12 the childs training went well and he had a talent at being able to learn anything extreamly quickly and him and his parents lived in peace untill word?? came to the village that the fire nation were heading striaght for??their village. knowing that their son??was not ready yet they sent him away with several people evacuating the village as they stayed in hope that they could by enought time for the others to get away. saddly as the boy was leaveing the outskirts of the mountain range in which the village was hidden he heard his mother scream using his fire bending skills he blasted himself into the air then using his airbending skills he used his long robe to glide back to help his parents but by the time he got back to the village the fire nation had left and his parents were left in the center of the village dead surrounded by dead fire nation soilders they had put up a good fight, as he sat there beside his parents crying he made a promise to not only give hope to the helpless but to avenge their deaths.

    he spent the next 7 years travel the world learning everything he could from anyone willing to teach him.



    enough background info...
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    Master_0f_The_4

    [1659]Jan 5, 2007
    • member since: 01/04/07
    • level: 2
    • rank: Sweat Hog
    • posts: 165

    Hopefully I can get in on this RPG.. He's what my guys got to offer. Tryed to make history intertwine with me being late in the storys.

    Name: Gellidus.

    Status: Monk with little Earth Bending.

    Special move: Dual Stone Fists.

    Height: 5???9.

    Age: 19.

    Weight: 175

    Eyes: Brown.

    Hair: Shaved.

    Personality: Straightforward and Strong. Just think of Sokka With??Monk and earth??Bending Abilities.

    Weapons: Dual Magically Enchanted Stone Fists that are dubbed the name Sange (Left) Yasha (Right).

    Cloths: Long flowing black cape with a green insignia of two stone fists crossed. Light black leather armor that mainly protects the shoulders and the magical ability to help Gellidus blend into the shadows. For the legs just normal Black/Green flowing heavy clothe with little to no armor.

    Gender: Male.

    Background/History: Rose as a monk in the earth kingdom. Trained in the art of mostly hand to hand fighting with the ability to dodge and critical strike. Learning and being taught around a lot of other monks at the same time, Gellidus has always seamed to have the edge. Known as one of the best melee fighters by the monks he was taught by, even eventually reaching a master status. Gellidus has only mastered one bending technique and that???s to summon his Dual Stone Fists, Sange and Yasha. Now leaving the monks and the earth kingdom behind (left on a good note with honor) he???s trying to find his place in the world and has been traveling around in search of a squad that will accept him as a fighter and as a mentor.

    EDIT: Attributes: Mostly dexterity/agility with strength being second.. basically like any other monk.

    Edited on 01/05/2007 12:02pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1660]Jan 5, 2007
    • member since: 11/07/06
    • level: 4
    • rank: Thighmaster
    • posts: 517
    tony878787 wrote:

    Name: lur amon (the shadow flame)

    Status: Fire bender and air bender

    Special move: coloum of fire

    special skills: increased aggility, trained in a wide varity of fighting styles and weapons, has knoledge of healing herbs, a master of stealth, a great tracker

    Height: 5''11

    age: 19

    Gender: Male

    Weight: 12 stone


    Eyes: highlighted blonde hair


    background: his father was a fire nation general, when he refused to burn down a mountain village the fire lord bannished him from the fire natation but not before wounding him and leaving him to die in the ashes of the village he refused to burn down but before he died a young airbender women found him, she took him back to a small airbending village that had been hidden in the mountain during the war. as the women nursed the general back to health the 2 fell in love and in time they married and had a child, as soon as the child was born the priestess of the village said that this child was special and that he would one day give hope to the helpless. years went by and the child seemed to have te abbility to control not only fire like his father but also air like his mother when asked they asked the priestess how this was possible she said that when the war had started and so many airbenders had been wiped out there was an unbalance in the univeres and was the univers trying to mend it's self. knowing the dangers that were ahead they decided to train their son so that he would have the best possible chance of surviving.

    at the age of 12 the childs training went well and he had a talent at being able to learn anything extreamly quickly and him and his parents lived in peace untill word came to the village that the fire nation were heading striaght for their village. knowing that their son was not ready yet they sent him away with several people evacuating the village as they stayed in hope that they could by enought time for the others to get away. saddly as the boy was leaveing the outskirts of the mountain range in which the village was hidden he heard his mother scream using his fire bending skills he blasted himself into the air then using his airbending skills he used his long robe to glide back to help his parents but by the time he got back to the village the fire nation had left and his parents were left in the center of the village dead surrounded by dead fire nation soilders they had put up a good fight, as he sat there beside his parents crying he made a promise to not only give hope to the helpless but to avenge their deaths.

    he spent the next 7 years travel the world learning everything he could from anyone willing to teach him.


    oooommmmgggg....read the rules!!
    rule #1 shud be to read the rules or sumthing like that
    u can only be 1 type of bender..no airbending..firebending crap...just 1

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