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    panthean

    [1581]Dec 28, 2006
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    !!!new enemy approaching!!!

    Real Name: ?unknown?

    NickName: Coldfire

    Species: Spiritoid

    Status: Fire-bender, Water-bender, hired assasain

    Special move: Freezing fire attack

    Height: 6'1" Age: ??? Gender: ????? Weight: ???? Eyes: Pitch Black Hair: Silver, with two black streaks

    Personality: this mysterious humanoid was hired by the firelord himself to seek out and capture 5 people: ???, ???, ???, ???, and Indra. and kill ???

    Weapon of choice: an oversized 2-handed sword

    other notes: his right arm is large and demonic looking, he always has a cloak, and ussually has aglove that appears to be burning.

    Edited on 12/28/2006 6:40pm
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    panthean

    [1582]Dec 28, 2006
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    Coldfire (assasain)

    Later in the day??Indra is walking through the city when she hears a sound, that sounds alot like growling. She follows it down a few older streets to the outskirts, she gets attacked by a mysterious person, she tries to defend herself but somehow this creature seems to be dodgeing every attack while at the same time attacking Indra. the creature disappears into the shadows.??Indra looks around to try and find someway to get away from it, she yells for help and prepares to fight again, the creature slowly creeps up from behind her, she turns around and before she knows it she's frozen solid. Before the creature could finish its mision it gets attacked and almost knocked out, still barely concsious it desideds to run, it gets away.

    more notes on Coldfire

    its cloak allows??it to teleport through shodows, it ussually has a few nets and some poisen with it

    unrelated!

    I??fixed a few things, thx 4 letting me join in.

    Edited on 12/28/2006 6:15pm
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    Kathleen2006

    [1583]Dec 28, 2006
    • member since: 07/06/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    I was stunned when I heard that my uncle had selected a fiance for me already

    "Why did you do this to me?" I demanded as we headed for home

    "Because Ami, it is what is best for you"

    "What's best for me or what's best for you Uncle Huo?" I demanded

    He didn't reply, just as I figured he wouldn't.

    I suddenly felt nausious... was I getting seasick, I never got seasick. I looked at Fang for support I he needed to know what I feard was going on in me... but I said nothing to get his attention, I was scared... I was so scared of what might happen next.

    We arrived and My uncle smiled to a man standing at the edge of the channel.

    "Sakai... this is my niece, Ami"

    He was charming enough to look at, but I felt like I could barf on the spot.

    "Excuse me please,??I don't feel too good,??I think it's just the tension of coming home after all this time" I lied

    "It's okay... you've been gone quite a while, Ami, I don't doubt that you would be nervous about coming here"??Sakai said

    I thought maybe I could learn to like him, but I couldn't help being drawn to look back at Fang... I had already given Fang so much of myself... how could I ever forget what we had done.

    "Excuse me... I'm going to be sick" I said and took off my sister at my heals.

    "What's with her?" I heard??Sakai ask

    "I think it was something she ate" Fang??said covering for me I heard in the distance as my sister got me to a safe place to ??finally lose my lunch.

    They wanted me to see a healer but I said insisted that it was tension and would go away with time, but I knew better by this time i had realized I was carrying Fang's baby. I didn't need a healer to tell me that.

    "Michiru I feel dizy" I said

    "I'm not surprised, kiddo" she replied "you just emptied your stomach"

    "I know..." I groaned "I feel like crap"

    "I would be surprised if you didn't" Michiru smiled "I'll leave you to rest"

    "Okay, sis, thank you"

    "No problem" she smiled and left to let me sleep

    "Damn it" I whispered "why did I have to get pregnant that night" I sighted my luck had gone out the door and I knew it I was carrying another man's child.

    Sakai came in with something in his hand, a bethrothal necklace. I thought I would throw up again.

    'Great' I thought??'Uncle Huo was serious about this, I am going to marry this guy!'

    "Here you go Ami" he placed it around my neck and I alowed him no mater how much I wanted to shove the neclace down his throat "I hope you feel better soon" he started out "my bride"

    That did it... he left and I threw up again.

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    Lord-darkboy

    [1586]Dec 28, 2006
    • member since: 10/11/06
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    (SEASON FINALE)

    Darkboy "D" (fire, earth,water,air)


    obilisk was fighting devastator


    'this isn't good' i said to myself ' obilisk has no chance against devastator' i started to charge up somelighting and did some difficult movements with my hand when i was done sme sort of wires where in my hands connecting fingertop to fingertop 'DEVASTATOR YOU FORGET SOMEONE' i yelled at him before firing the wires

    the attack was a succes devastator was surrounded with my wires and knocked back against a wall 'what do you think of it own creation, nice isn't it' i said smiling

    'what i think of it, HAHAHAHAHAHA pathetic' devastator said and he broke free my eyes widend

    'damn i've been weakend too hard'i said to myself

    'HAHAHAHAHAHA i??thought that the great and mighty darkboy was stronger' devastator said laughing

    'W-who?' obilisk said 'D about who is he talking?'

    sweat was dripping on my face that was a secret that should have been revealed with my death 'about me' i answered ' i tell it too you later'

    'well well well how suprising i thought he would have forgotten your name so good is his memory not you sure made him angry last time' my spirit said

    i was thinking but much time i didn't have before devastator was chraging at me, he beated me in strenght but i was faster 'hmmm the war god seems something irritated' i thought

    'COWARD DON'T EVADE ME FIGHT ME' he demanded i must get enough time to let obilisk recover and i threw all kind off elements at him but they didn't had much effect and i had to few time too charge up lighting

    'maybe' i said devastator charged again at me but instead that i jumpd to the sides i jumped on him

    'GET OFF TINE LITTLE WORM' he demanded again and stared to roll over his back i jumped of it right in time

    'damn he became smarter i really didn't knew that something would actually fit into that little head of his' i though with a smile on my face

    'hrmph whats so funny?' devastator asked

    'nothing, its just i'm wondering how you could remember my name with those small brains'i said

    'WHY YOU LITTLE' he yelled at me and he began to charge again

    i smiled 'perfect he's becoming mad' i said

    'D or Darkboy i don't know how to call you thanks for saving some time' obilisk yelled at me, wich distracted me and noticed to late that devastator was still attacking i could still jump and thanks of that it missed my heart but he hitted me in my stomach

    'obilisk idiot never distract someone in battle' i yelled at obilisk

    'yea obilisk good job' devastator said laughing' well this one had enough your next obilisk' and then i passed out i woke up in the spirit world 'now that my body is oing to heal itself i'm going to be stuck in here for a while'

    i walked through the spirit world till i saw scorch coming out koh's lair 'the host of pyro, but if he is here that means pyro is free' i said to myself and i followed him on a distant he walked into pyro's part of the spirit world and went into his lair 'what is he going to do i thought' i thought 'PYRO BLUE FORM OH NO I HAVE TO WARN HIM'

    but i was to late he was sucjed into it 'congratulations with controlling pyro a bit longer but he will consume you once' i said after that?? felt myself fading from the spirit world my body was healed enough so i wouldn't die or have too much damage but when i was back a magnificent battle took place and devastator and obilisk we're both facing each other both off them where tired...

    (TLG i geuss you have to finish it)

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1587]Dec 28, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
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    THIS WILL BE UPDATED UNTIL ALL CHARACTERS HAVE THEIR SEASON2 FINALE POSTED! Once you post your season finale you CANNOT post again until all of the other RPG contributors have posted their season finale...

    The only people that posted their season finale post so far are Bai Mao, Shido, Liao, D, Lee, Sparky, Rampage, and WillyWoo....

    The characters that don't have their season finale posts are Scorch, Spike, Rin, Ami, Fang, Talho(Orha), Jax, Coldfire,??Ariel, Syrak, Indra (Stranger), and Yari the RibbonBender..... So, hurry up and post!

    Also, Coldfire, you are obviously new. Send me a message, we have to talk. You need a season2 finale post, since season2 is ending shortly!

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1588]Dec 28, 2006
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    Spike (Archer) SEASON FINALE!

    I stood next to Mayhem as I watched my good friend Bulldozer possessed by the War God Devastator, in his "Rhino Form". I stood in awe as Devastator had a fierce battle with the spirit Obelisk, that took over Liao's body (at the time).

    Devastator roared, "Obelisk, you are in my way and you must perish. The Hami Crystal is mine for the taking!" Devastator charged at Obeslisk with his horn aimed at Obelisk's face. Obelisk dodged Devastator's horn and said, "You cannot have the Hami Crystal! I must protect it from scum like you!"

    I looked at Mayhem and smiled. I said, "Let Devastator fight all he wants. I'm sure Bulldozer will be safe. If you think about it, he is doing a good job because all of Liao's troops, D, and Obelisk are completely distracted. So, let me continue reading the parchment while you hold the Hami Crystal.

    I took out the parchment from my pocket and read, "A spirit must be close to you in order to capture it. The only type of spirits that can be captured are organic ones. Hold the Hami Crystal and say "Quijera" in order to capture the spirit close to you. Also, beware the protector of the Hami Crystal, the Lactopuss. The Lactopuss, which is a spirit, was given a curse a long time ago to protect the Hami Crystal, and it will stop at nothing to protect it. The names of all of the spirits known at this time are..." The ground rumbled and I dropped the parchment on the floor.

    I picked it up and I said to Mayhem, "Should I run up to Devastator and Obelisk and say "Quijera"?" Mayhem shook his head in disgust. Mayhem said, "Bulldozer is in Devastor. Who knows if we will simply suck the spirit out of his body, or maybe lose our good friend Bulldozer forver. And it is also too risky to try and get Obelsik for he is too close to Devastator. We do not want to hurt Bulldozer!" I agreed with Mayhem. The ground shook once more as Obelisk and Devastator continued their long fight.

    Then all of a sudden a part of the cave blasted open and a creature was barely visible through all the dust. "ROAR!" I neverously looked at Mayhem, who was still holding the Hami Crystal. I snatched the Hami Crystal from Mayhem's hands, and then I tucked the parchment into my pocket. I felt the Hami Crystal's power run through my veins. And I liked it!

    "ROAR!" The smoke cleared revealing the massive spirit named Lactopuss (Land Octopuss with 8 arms that snatches its enemies). The Lactopuss stared at me, and then at the Hami Crystal, which it was forced to protect. I said, "Oh God dammit! Shoot the beast!" Mayhem shot numerous arows at the Lactopuss as I ran for cover behind a rock, still with the Hami Crystal in my hands. I yelled to Liao's troops, "Kill the Lactopuss!" Liao's troops stared at me and then back at Devastator fighting Obelisk. They decided not to help me!

    "Give me that!", a person said from behind me. It was Darkboy (D)!!!??D attempted to grab the Hami Crystal and I yelled, "Don't make me do it! I will suck out your spirit!" D gasped, "How, how did you know I had a spirit?" I replied, "Cause you just told me!" D backed away and went back to Liao's troop.

    I turned by attention to Mayhem. The Lactopuss attempted to grab Mayhem but Mayhem rolled out of its way. The Lactopuss then swung another tentacle at Mayhem and it was a direct hit. Mayhem was sent flying right into the cave wall. Mayhem collapsed on to the floor, hurt. Lactopuss roared again and then turned it's attention to me.

    Out of nowhere Devastator ran at the Lactopuss yelling, "Stand back! The Hami Crystal is mine!" Obelisk then jumped at Devastator and landed on his back. Devastator stopped moving and Obelisk was sent flying into the cave wall. Devastator charged at Obelisk yelling, "Now you will die!" Devastator sent his horn into Obelisk's leg. Obelisk yelped in pain and Liao soon regained control of his body. Liao layed on the floor very hurt and tired, not moving much.

    Then all of a sudden something clutched on to my leg. I looked at my leg and noticed that the Lactopuss's tentacle was holding on to my leg. The Lactopuss then burrowed into the ground, taking me with it.

    As I was being dragged into the ground along with the Lactopuss I threw the Hami Crystal to Mayhem. Mayhem caught the Hami Crystal. I yelled, "Take good care of it! Now run!" I was dragged into the ground and down the many tunnels that the Lactopuss made. My head slammed into a rock as the Lactopuss still pulled me deeper and deeper into the ground. I blacked out!

    Edited on 12/28/2006 9:47pm
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    Rin-tori

    [1589]Dec 28, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)??

    Just arrived at the North Pole with Fang and Ami.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Rin sat in a large chair at the large house Ami???s uncle owned. It was warm and comfy, but everything had a cool air to it, like all of the Water Tribe. It was different, not like the Fire Nation, not like the Earth Kingdom either. But it was safe, something she hadn???t felt in such a long time.

    I wonder if I can talk to Exodus???

    Rin stared blankly into the fireplace, and sunk back in the warmth of the chair.

    I guess I can???t. She???s too busy with Ami now. I can???t believe that she???with Fang???

    Rin shook her head in disgust.

    Ami popped in, and shut the door behind her. She brought in an unwelcome icy chill when she opened the door, and Rin felt a little colder.

    ???I got you some warmer clothes. I hope you like them.??? Ami sat down next to her and opened the bag she brought in, and took out a black coat, a red sweater, a new undershirt, and some black pants.

    Rin glanced at them, nodded, and continued to stare off into the fireplace.

    Ami, why the hell did you tell them I???m a firebender?! Now everyone will hate me. But it???s not like you care, you???re just happy because you???re with Fang. You have someone there for you, but I don???t. And I never will. I should have never thought of you as friends, now that Scorch is gone, you just have all the fun you want with Fang. No one in your way, just me off in my quiet little corner.

    ???I???ve been feeling really sick lately?????? Ami said. She was trying to stay off the subject that Rin seemed to only dwell on.

    Rin glanced over at her icily and breathed a little deeper. She got up and sat directly in front of the fire, took a deep breath, and reached her hand out, trying to coax the dying fire back into flame.

    ???Rin, you shouldn???t??????

    A small jet of flame rose up and burnt her hand. She was used to it though, and it hardly hurt. She focused her chi again, and tried again. The embers rose a little, and Rin stopped her attempts.

    Fang entered the room, and he was obviously distraught.

    ???What???s wrong, Fang???? Ami said.

    ???Well, I tried to talk to him out of having you in an arranged marriage?????? He sighed. ??????and it didn???t go over well.???

    ???Don???t worry, I???m sure it???s going to work out.??? Fang gave her a reassuring hug.

    Rin took one glance at them and looked away in disgust.

    They don???t even care that I???ll never have what they have again. I???ve lost it all, but they have everything to gain. It???s disgusting.

    Rin simply upped and left the room hastily. She grabbed her bag of clothes as she left, and slammed the door of her quarters without hesitation, and threw herself onto her bed.

    And you think you???re sick, Ami.

    Edited on 12/28/2006 10:29pm
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    vegnegun

    [1590]Dec 28, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Rin had just entered a large home with the others

    Scorch had successfully entered the city and had followed the gang to a large home. He perched himself on the icy roof and saw Rin walk into a room through a hole cut in the side of the wall. She threw herself on her bed and Scorch could just feel that she was hurt.

    "Bah, Kazu couldn't have been right," Scorch assured himself. He saw Rin get up and open a sack and dumped a pile of clothes on the bed. Scorch knew what was coming next, and turned away for a few moments. When he turned back, she was gone and he quickly turned his attention to the front door and saw Rin walk out in a new outfit.?? She looked beautiful nonetheless, with her black coat and pants, along with a red sweater. She walked down the road and Scorch jumped from rooftop to rooftop, following her.

    "Nice coat sweetie," said a man's voice. Both Scorch and Rin turned around and saw a masked man with five others, each wearing a similar mask. "Hand over the goods sweet heart. And give us your necklace too, I bet I could make a good profit off of that." Rin clentched her hand around the necklace and shook her head. The men each drew out daggers and slowly moved towards Rin. Rin stepped back, and Scorch could tell she wasn't going to fight. He saw that she was behind an alleyway and the gang was just about to walk towards it. Scorch quickly jumped off of the building and shot a large, blue flame between the gang and Rin. The gang looked around and shook their heads before continuing towards Rin. Scorch took a large blue flame in his hands and slammed one on the ground and fired the other into the air. Flames erupted from the ground and broke between the gang and Rin, forcing them to run away.

    "That should teach them," thought Scorch. Rin slowly walked towards the alley and turned, unable to see Scorch's face due to his cloak. "No, its too soon," thought Scorch. He quickly ran away and heard footsteps behind him. He quickly took a small amount of fire under his feet, using them like roller blades to glide along the ground. He looked back and saw that Rin was still chasing him. He quickly turned at a back alley that he saw ultimately led to a dead end. He quickly changed the small flames into larger ones, boosting him into the air and over the dead end. He quickly jumped on a building and got behind Rin. He saw her touch the wall of ice and she fell to her knees.

    "I'm sorry," muttered Scorch. He continued to watch over her and she went back to the mansion. He went back to her window and saw her gently lie down on her bed. (take it from here Rin)

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    panthean

    [1592]Dec 29, 2006
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    Coldfire (assasain) Finale
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    Coldfire stopped running, it began to regain its breath after running away from the battle. it wandered off into the mountains south of BSS.

    "over 300 years in a dungeon, released only to complete a fool's arrends, to be treated like a slave to a master. Firelord, thats what thier calling them now anyways, we'll see who has the last laughs. Soon, your time will come, soon, i will destroy you and your pathetic empire along with you. I already have the Firehand Gauntlet, the Cloak of Shadows, and the Ring of Life. All I need now is to find the Thousand Souls Stone, and then i can reincarnate destruction incarnate, no-one has ever seen the true power that this world posseses. Your time has come."
    ______________________________

    ok i know its a little cheesy, but im going on vacation 4 a week, so i had to wrap it up as fast as i could, because i have to start packing and stuff.
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    Rin-tori

    [1593]Dec 29, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Just ran to her room.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Rin looked at the clothes on her bed.

    I might as well change???

    She retreated into the bathroom of her room and emerged in her pants and the red sweater. Her black coat was on her bed.

    I kind of like these clothes.

    She examined herself in them in the mirror, but instead of her outfit, she was more drawn to her face. She looked tired, and her eyes were red from crying. Her hair was short now, and it would take time to grow back. She looked away from the mirror and pulled on her black coat.

    I need some fresh air.

    She proceeded out the front door, and onto the icy streets. People avoided her when they saw her strange appearance, light skin, fair hair, and dark eyes. She looked like an alien.

    What few people were out, that is. It was already dark, not surprising. Rin didn???t care.

    If I???m gone, would Ami or Fang care?

    She stopped by a canal and looked at her reflection in the icy water.

    Probably not.

    She looked away and turned into an alleyway to see a bunch of street urchins hanging around. She quickly halted, but they approached her and surrounded her.

    ???Nice coat, sweetie.??? Said the leader.

    They were all wearing similar masks, grotesque masks painted to look like animals.

    Oh no...

    "Hand over the goods, sweetheart. And give us your necklace too, I bet I could make a good profit off of that." He said.

    She grabbed her necklace and shook her head.

    They pulled out knives and pinned her into the alleyway. It was a dead end.

    Suddenly, a wall of blue fire appeared between Rin and the thugs.

    What the hell?!

    The thugs ran away, screaming. Fire was not something they could stand up to.

    Rin looked around hurriedly, trying to find whoever saved her. Her eye caught a man in a red and silver coat, covering his face, he had jumped into the alley to save her. He started to run.

    No, wait!

    She chased after him, but he was too fast for her.

    He???s just as tall???same build???and he used firebending???no way???it can???t be???

    But she chased him still. He turned into a dead end, and Rin followed. No one was there.

    She grabbed the wall, and started to cry.

    No???don???t leave me???please???

    She let go of the wall and knelt down to the layer of freshly fallen snow. The powdery white was cold and soft. She traced the first character of his name in the snow, then the second. After she finished, she looked down at it and started to cry. Her tears stung her??chilled face against the cold winter wind.

    She laid down??next to the name in the snow,??as if it were his grave.

    I wish you could see me now...because I??don't care how??pathetic??I look. I'll never forget you, I'll never stop thinking about you...even now, I love you...??

    The snow fell on her unkemptt blonde hair, her black cloak, and by the time she got up, she was covered in a thin layer of frost. She didn't care.

    She returned to the mansion even worse than before. Not only did Ami and Fang not care, they were asleep. And now???she had been left behind again.

    She tread quietly through the mansion and went to her quarters. She took off her jacket, laid down on her stomach on her bed, and tears ran down her face.

    If only???

    She held her necklace, and fell asleep.

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    vegnegun

    [1594]Dec 29, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Scorch had just followed Rin home and was resting on a nearby roof top

    Scorch had seen that Rin had fallen asleep and felt sleep gently take him too.

    ---------

    He and Rin were training on the beach, and Scorch had the necklace in his hand. He looked up at Rin who was trying to master a new technique, and held the necklace in his hand. He slowly walked up to Rin and placed his hand on her shoulder. She stopped moving and turned around and looked at him.

    "Scorch, what did I do wrong?" she asked.

    Scorch shook his head, "nothing." He opened his hand and opened hers, firmly placing the necklace in her palm before closing it again.

    "What's this?" she asked. She opened her hand and saw the necklace. Her eyes shimmered as she looked back up at Scorch. She placed it over her neck and hugged him.

    "Rin, can I ask you something?" asked Scorch hesitantly. Rin nodded and looked into Scorch's eyes, waiting for the question. "Rin, will you.... Rin, would you... marry me?" The glimmer faded from Rin's eyes as she removed the necklace and placed it in Scorch's hand, closing it such.

    "I'm sorry Scorch," said Rin, "I don't like you... not like that at least." Scorch felt the ground disappear beneath his feet.

    --------

    He woke up, finding he had fallen off the roof of the building. In retrospect, it probably wasn't the best idea to fall asleep on a ice-made roof. He slowly got up and saw the he hadn't fall off the roof, but he had melted it completely. The house was unoccupied at the time, so Scorch quickly left the home. Outside he saw Fang and Ami outside of a creek, they were kissing at the moment,??and slowly turned away, hoping that Fang wouldn't catch his scent. The sun was already rising over the ice covered horizon. The streets slowly filled and Scorch quickly took to the rooftops, trying not to attract any attention. He then began to think about his dream.

    "Kazu was right," thought Scorch, "Rin doesn't want to be with someone like me. A monster, why would she want to anyway? I don't blame her. But, at least I can still watch over her. I don't see why I even bother, she has Fang and Ami, I am of no longer use to her. Then again, when was I? Kazu was right, I was never anything more to her than a teacher. And I never will be anything more to her. But, she is the world to me, and I will follow her and protect her until the day I die." Scorch leaped back to the mansion and noticed the roof he had melt through had been fixed, probably not a problem for a waterbender after all. He saw Rin was in her room, but with another man:?? Jax.

    "I see how it is," muttered Scorch, "you liked Jax, eh? Kazu was right, you never even loved me. I guess me asking you for your hand in marrige would have been a mistake from the beginning. Well, I hope he can fulfil your needs better than I could."??

    Edited on 12/29/2006 11:12am
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    Vampdude69

    [1595]Dec 29, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Jax made it through the tundra and has snuck inside the North Pole

    Jax jumped out of the freezing water. He saw a flash of fire and he thought it would be a fire so he could warm up. When he got there, everyone was gone. No one was there.

    "I have to find them," Jax said. He was freezing. He couldn't feel his arms.

    He saw a huge mansion, and he didn't care what would happen to him. He snuck into a window and he saw a girl laying in her bed. There were tear drops on her pillow. Jax tried to stand, but he couldn't. He yelled help.
    The girl awoke, and she looked down at him. It was Rin!
    Jax blacked out as he looked into her eyes.

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    Kathleen2006

    [1596]Dec 29, 2006
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    My fiance came in that evening and I sighed, I wanted to do anything if it would keep me from having to marry him.

    "What are you doing here?" I demanded

    "Just coming to be with the woman that will have my children..."

    "What... what do you think I am... you know you ruined my life I had a happy life with a guy that I really loved and then you dropped in and ruined it"

    "Shut up you little??slut here because your uncle thought??would be good for you" he said slapping me across the face to accent his point.

    I was stunned, after the little song and dance he put on when I got so sick I thought he would be okay.

    "Sakai, why did you do that?" I demanded

    "To show you who is boss, I am, and now there is nothing you can do about it" he said angrily and walked out the door

    'What has Uncle Huo got me into...' I wondered in tears

    Then Fang walked in and I knew there was no hiding my condition from him.

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    (Forte take it from here)

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    avatarforte

    [1597]Dec 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
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    Fang-Airbender

    Ami looked hurt.. The fiance had just left, so I had no idea what had happened in there. I looked to Ami, who looked away, ashamed. "Are you alright Ami?. Is something wrong?" She avoided looking me in the eye. "You know, you can tell me anything right." She still avoided my gaze.

    "Its....its nothing. Dont worry about it. Im going to rest a little." I sighed and left her to sleep. Something just didnt feel right. He could smell the fiances smell on her, meaning he touched her. But how he touched her was the question.

    "Exodus". She appeared faster than I expected.

    "Yes?" she said.

    "I want you to attact to Ami for a bit. Watch how she and her fiance react with each other. Then tell me about it later. Something not right".

    "Sure you arent just jealous.?" she asked, mockingly. I blushed then said to her.

    "No, Im not jealous. If hes a nice guy like he acts like in public, Ill win her back fairly. But, if hes false......", I slammed my fist into my hand. "Ill teach him a few manners". She laughed, or what I could guess was a laugh.

    "Dont worry Fang, Im just teasing. He seems to perfect to me too. I will do as you ask". I thanked her and felt her slip from my body. It felt weird, like a part of myself was leaving. But I shrugeed it off and went for a stroll around the North Pole. Without even knowing it, I had wandered back to out rooms and heard movement in Rin's. I took a look inside and saw Jax lying on the ground, barely breathing..

    "Jax, oh my god. What happened to you". I looked to Rin for answers. She looked coldly at me, then looked away. I sighed, got Jax and started to leave. As I did ,Rin threw something at me. I turned back and looked at her. She was angry and crying at the same time. "You know, Ive been trying to hold this in, but your trying my patience." I walked up to her, grabbed her by her shoulders and shoved her against the wall.

    "What gives you the right to act this way. Scorch was friends with all of us, a loyal one at that. He died protecting the one person he cared for the most. And dont go thinking your suffering the most. I had to watch him die, and realize I could do nothing about it. I know your hurt Rin, but would Scorch want you to mope about this. Remember him, but move on and find joy in life again." I released her and started to leave. I stopped before I left. "Ill give you time to think about this. If you still life is still unworth living without him.....then Ill end that life myself." I noticed Jax sturring on the the floor.

    "Hey, whats happened guys?", he said weakly. I shook my head.

    "Dont worry about it man. First, we need to make sure you dont die on us.". I lifted him onto my shoulders and ran off for the town's infirmary.
    Edited on 12/29/2006 2:40pm
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1598]Dec 29, 2006
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    Mayhem (Archer and Swordsmen)
    -
    Spike was just pulled underground by the Lactopuss, along with the parchment. I stood there in awe, with the Hami Crystal in my hands. I turned to Devastator and he growled at me. I said, "Woah easy there fellow. I am Mayhem, your friend!" Devastator growled and then I remembered Spike's last words to me: "Now Run!". I ran past all of Liao's soldiers including D and a an exhausted Laio. I then jumped through a small hole in the cave wall. I was now standing outside on the cold snowy mountain, alone.
    -
    Then the cave wall behind me smashed to the floor and Devastator roared at me. Devastator said, "Mayhem, give me the Hami Crystal and I won't hurt you!" I yelled back, "Over my dead body!" Devastator roared, "Dead body...fine with me!"
    -
    Devastator jumped at me and opened his mouth wide, revealing his sharp teeth. He tried to bite my head off but I swung my sword at his mouth. The sword was jabbed right into the roof of Devastator's mouth and the spirit yelped in pain. I yelled, "Plesae Bulldozer! Fight it, regain control of your mind!" Devastator started to yell and for a second I heard Bulldozer's voice. Devastator let out another loud yell, which caused a terrible thing to happen. AVALANCHE!
    -
    The snow poured down the mountain at a high speed. Liao's troops, along with a tired Liao, and D, came out of the cave. The "avalanche snow" knocked into them, and covered their bodies. The snow then knocked into Devastator, and covered his body. I gripped on to the Hami Crystal and sprinted down the mountain. The "avalanche snow" caught up to me and soon covered my body.
    -
    I finally stopped tumbling down the mountain, along with the snow. I spit some of the snow out of my mouth, and I held the Hami Crystal up into the air. I said, "I still gotcha!"
    -
    I then noticed I was at Ba-Sing-Se. I walked inside the city through a small hole in the wall. I then wandered the city, to see if I could find any friends such as Spike, Azula, Bulldozer, etc.. And then I saw a familiar face. I walked up to the man, who was sitting in an alleyway.
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    I said, "Well, what are you doing here?" The man replied, "Budd off, you and your two pals, Spike and Bulldozer, banished me from the Fire Nation! Why should I give a dam about you!"
    -
    I replied, "Well Rampage, I have something you might deem very very valuable!" I showed Rampage the Hami Crystal.
    -
    Rampage said, "Savage! Get over here!" Savage walked over and then looked at Rampage. Rampage continued, "Look what Mayhem has! He has the Hami Crystal!" Savage nodded his head and made an evil laugh.
    -
    Rampage looked at me and put out his hand. I shook his hand. Rampage said, "I have a very evil plan in my mind right now. And you just made that plan possible, thanks to the Hami Crystal."
    -
    Rampage and Savage told me their evil plan. All three of us let out a very evil laugh, which echoed throughout Ba-Sing-Se.

    (Note, this is a one time post for Mayhem. And it won't happen again!!!)

    Edited on 12/29/2006 2:44pm
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    Kathleen2006

    [1599]Dec 29, 2006
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    I walked out of the house and went to the healer's I had to get rid of this nausia... maybe they could do something about it.

    "Hello, Ami... what is wrong, dear?" an older woman asked

    "I've been nausious all day and I was hoping you could do something about it"

    "Let me check you out and see what is causing it" the woman said

    I got nervous, but I knew it had to be done. I lay down and let her check my stomach and I heard her sigh.

    "You spent the night with another man didn't you?" she asked

    "What do you mean?" I asked

    "Your pregnant" she replied symply "I can give you something for the nausia, but there isn't much else I can do"

    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

    Exodus shouldn't have been surprised to hear that Ami was pregnant, but she was. She knew Fang needed to hear that, but decided it was Ami's place to tell him about their child.

    'Ami I only hope you have the strenght to tell everyone about your coming child' Exodus thought

    Ami set up another check up with the healer and started to go back home. She had taken some medicine and felt better, but she decided she would go back and go straight to bed... she didn't know what to do, she had decided to sleep on this news and tell everone when she knew how.

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    Kathleen2006

    [1600]Dec 29, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Jax appeared at her window, injured and freezing.

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    Jax?! What is he doing here?

    She stopped to look at him for a moment, then he fainted.

    She rushed outside and dragged him into the main room; he was covered in ice and snow.

    What was he trying to do?

    She dragged him closer to the fire to warm up.

    Damnit???and I can???t use my firebending, either???

    ???Rin? What???s wrong???? Fang just walked in, hearing the door open.

    He took one look at Jax and was speechless.

    ???Jax?! What happened???? He looked at Rin, who shook her head and looked away.

    I don???t know. He just showed up at my bedroom window calling for help???

    Fang felt his forehead. ???He doesn???t have a fever, he should be fine.???

    ???I needed to talk to you.??? He said, insistently.

    Rin looked into the fire again.

    What, a pep talk? Thanks, but you???ve caused more damage than you can repair.

    "You know, Ive been trying to hold this in, but you???re trying my patience." He grabbed her by the shoulders and pinned her to the wall.

    Rin was still silent, unable to speak.??

    "What gives you the right to act this way?! Scorch was friends with all of us, a loyal one at that. He died protecting the one person he cared for more than anything in the world; And don???t go thinking you???re suffering the most. I had to watch him die, and realize I could do nothing about it. I know you???re hurt, Rin, but Scorch wouldn???t want you to mope about this. Remember him, but move on and find joy in life again."

    He released her and started for the door.

    Some pep talk, Fang. You think I should move on? How can I?! I???ve lost everything! My family, my home, my old life, and now Scorch is gone too! You have no idea how I feel! I feel like life isn???t worth it anymore!!

    "Ill give you time to think about this. If you still life is still not worth living without him...then I???ll end that life myself."

    Rin froze. She was about to burst into furious tears, and now Fang threatened to kill her.

    He doesn???t even care???he just thinks I should die because I???m such a pain in the ass???maybe it???s because I???m just dead weight???I am, aren???t I? That???s why???

    Rin ran to the door and stormed outside, tears streaming down her face. She ran as far as she possibly could. Farther, farther, until the city was behind her.

    She stood on a ridge overlooking the North Pole, an icy tundra in front of her.

    If Fang???s going to kill me, I should stay here. I???m sure Scorch would be happy if he could see everything he taught me???because I remember. Fang doesn???t want to remember all the sacrifices you made for me, and for everyone, but I do. I always will. Because he???s the only one I???ll ever love.

    She took a deep breath and started to make a fireball. The warmth of the flame felt comforting in her hand, and she started to firebend more and more. She was still struggling, but it felt calming to remember the stances and motions Scorch taught her what felt like so long ago.

    This is the only way I???ll ever feel close to him again. Firebending and???

    She clawed at her necklace.

    As the sun began to set, the wind kicked up, blowing ice and snow across the icy tundra. Rin scrambled into a nearby cave, where the previous owners had left a small cache of firewood. She lit the fire and pulled her jacket closer, the storm would probably last the night. As the sun set, she fell asleep.

    ~ ~ ~

    Rin was on the beach again, but this time she wasn???t alone. In front of her stood the man in the red and silver cloak, his hood covering his face. He glanced back at her, and looked back out at the ocean.

    Rin ran to him, and stood in front of him. She lowered his hood, and he looked away. It was Scorch.

    Rin stood in front of him, her eyes wide.

    ???I knew it???why didn???t you say anything? I missed you so much!??? She hugged him.

    ???Because???it was too soon. I???m sorry.??? He hugged her back

    ???I???m just glad you???re safe.??? She was crying. But suddenly she started falling back, and the water took her. She could see the sun above the surface, but it slowly faded away.

    She awoke with a jolt. The same men who tried to mug her the other day, the grotesque men in masks, they were just outside the cave.

    ???Well if it isn???t the blondie. Why don???t you come here and we???ll have some fun, you little freak???? The leader threatened. He held out his knife, and it glinted in the firelight.

    Oh no???

    She got into her firebending stance, but it was no good. They descended upon her and grabbed her wrists, and the leader held his knife to her neck.

    There was nowhere to run.

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    (posted for her 'cause she can't log onto her internet)

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