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    crazyman321

    [1521]Dec 20, 2006
    • member since: 10/21/06
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    [sorry i havent been here but i was on another rpg]

    lee(earthbender)

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    "i have a crazy idea".xen said to me"what is it"?I responded"
    i think we should take back ba sing se"."your right tha idea is the craziest plan i've ever heard,we cant take on azula,red death,and whatever elite soldiers might be in there,i think we should just stay here".

    "ok we will but im bored lets go do something more exciting than to just sit around and do nothing".we both jump on rockys back and rocky starts to dig into random caves in the mountain.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1522]Dec 21, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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    I looked into the crowd and saw Orinth grab on to Sindra, my girlfriend, and slit her throat. My tears and anger poured from my body as I jumped from the Agni Kai Arena and into he crowd at Orinth. Orinth did a huge kcik at my stomach and I went flying back into the Agni Kai Arena
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    I stood up immediately and whipped out my longsword. I looked around the Agni Kai Arena. I saw Wicker lying on the floor holding on to his stomach, which was recently stabbed. I also saw Shujaka, still lying on the ground, passed out. I then saw Berracore who was just standing up. Berracore shot a fireball at me and I jumped to the ground, dodging it. The fireball whizzed by my head at it hit Orinth in the thigh, who was just enetering the Arena. Orinth fell out of the Arean and back into the large crowd of people that were spectating the Agni Kai.
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    I then saw that there were only four rock pillars that held up the whole underground "room" that the fight was taking place in. I Earth Bended one of the pillars and the roof fell down over that section, causing death to those that were beneath it. Whizzz! Another fireball whizzed by my head and Berracore yelled, "Willy! I offered to rejoin your team but you did not exept me back!" I replied, "You cheated on me with my girlfriend. And now you will pay the ultimate consequence, death!"
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    Berracore cupped his hands and a huge burst of orange fire was created in the cups of his hands. Berracore then un-cupped his hands and the whole arena filled with fire. The fire was everywhere, and there were few places that you could stand without being burned.
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    I Earth Bended another pillar and more rocks crumbled to the ground. There was barely any light in the Arena now besides Berracore's fire, which was in random places. Berracore yelled, "Willy, there are two pillars holding this whole roof up! What are you going to do, break them?!?!? If you break the last two pillars you will kill us all." I smiled as I launched a large boulder at one of the last two remaining pillars. The pillar fell to the ground as smoke and rubble formed. The last remaining pillar stood over the Arena.
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    Berracore yelled, "Willy, have you gone mad?" I replied, "NO! I'm just angry!" I Earth Bended the floor and a small "Rock Cylander" came out of the ground and it hit me in my butt which caused me to be boosted (flew) across the arena, straight at Berracore. As I flew through the air I girpped on to my longsword and I let out a loud battle cry.
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    Berracre whipped out his shortsword and yelled, "AHHHHH! Willy, this is the end of your journey!" I threw my longsword while I was in the air and it hit Berracore in his foot. The longsword went through Berracore's shoe and it pierced his skin. The blood soon came out of his foot. Berracore cluthed his foot to give it pressure, and then fell to the ground in pain.
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    I turned around and I saw the rubble moving outside of the Arena. I large peice of rubble was moved and Orinth stood up, with his katana still in his hand. Orinth climbed into the Arena and said, "Hahaha you thought you killed me by Earth Bending a pillar? I suppose I proved you wrong!" Orinth swung his katana at me and I blocked it with my longsword. I said, "Wrong? I knew I didn't kill you! I want ot kill you with my own sword, not rocks of a pillar!" Orinth swung at me again and I blocked it. Orinth said, "Kill me! Hahaha don't make me laugh too hard! The only thing that is dying around here is your Rexsten and your little girlfriend, Sindra."
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    My eyes glared and I swung at Orinth with my longsword three times. Orinth blocked them all with his quickness of his katana. I yelled, "You short bit*h. I'm gonna kick your butt and make your blood come pouring out of your body!" Orinth yelled, "SHORT! I'll show you!" Orinth swung at me with his katana and I qucikly Earth Bended his feet. Orinth was unable to move. I shot a boulder at Orinth and Orinth's katana came flying out from his hands. Orinth was now defenseless, unable to fight, caught in the ground with rocks surrounding his feet.
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    I raised my longsword and said, "Any last words Orinth?" My feet were pulled from the ground and I fell flat on my face. it was Shujaka. Shujaka picked me up off of the ground and he threw me into the last remaining pillar. The last??pillar fell as well as the roof over the Arena. The roof came down....

    Edited on 12/21/2006 6:31pm
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    crazyman321

    [1523]Dec 21, 2006
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    MY SEASON FINALE

    Lee(earthbender)

    digging through caves

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    "exactly what are we looking for xen,weve been diiging for an hour"i asked"how am i supposed to know lets just keep looking for whatever we're looking for"as we continued to dig with my new pet badgermole we entered a large cave with a glowing light and saw??three men and a glowing crystal[the hami??crystal,mayhem,spike,and bulldozer].

    "what is that and who are they"xen asked."idont know but it looks like we found our adventure we were looking for".Me Xen and Rocky stared into the eyes of the three men.the leader(spike)looked at me and said"What who are you?"he replied"im Lee this is Xen and this is my pet badgermole Rocky.The leader(spike)replied"oh,and i care?Now leave at once you are intefering in my plans,or you can suffer the consequences.

    Edited on 12/21/2006 7:13pm
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1524]Dec 21, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
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    Once you post your season finale you CANNOT post until all of the other RPG contributors have posted their season finale...
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    The only people that posted their season finale post so far is Bai Mao and Lee....
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    The characters that don't have their season finale posts are WillyWoo, Scorch, Spike, Rampage, Rin, Ami, Fang, Talho(Orha), Jax, Liao (RedDeath), D (Darkboy), Ariel, Shido, Sparky, Syrak, Indra (Stranger), and Yari the RibbonBender.....

    Edited on 12/21/2006 7:20pm
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    Rin-tori

    [1525]Dec 21, 2006
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    I would just like to announce that a chain of events is making me want to leave this RPG and kill off Rin. Part of it is schoolwork, and how I find myself having to chose between doing well in school or doing well in the RPG. I am also highly upset and very frustrated and angered by the behavior and disrespect I am receiving from my peers. I feel that my wishes are being taken for granted, and I am debating wether to quit or not. If you feel the need to voice your opinions on the subject, please feel free to do so. If you were wondering, yes, this is part of the reason why I have not been posting recently.
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    Vampdude69

    [1526]Dec 21, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:
    I would just like to announce that a chain of events is making me want to leave this RPG and kill off Rin. Part of it is schoolwork, and how I find myself having to chose between doing well in school or doing well in the RPG. I am also highly upset and very frustrated and angered by the behavior and disrespect I am receiving from my peers. I feel that my wishes are being taken for granted, and I am debating wether to quit or not. If you feel the need to voice your opinions on the subject, please feel free to do so. If you were wondering, yes, this is part of the reason why I have not been posting recently.

    YOU CAN'T QUIT RIN! YOU'RE ONE OF THE BEST CHARACTERS!

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    vegnegun

    [1528]Dec 21, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:
    I would just like to announce that a chain of events is making me want to leave this RPG and kill off Rin. Part of it is schoolwork, and how I find myself having to chose between doing well in school or doing well in the RPG. I am also highly upset and very frustrated and angered by the behavior and disrespect I am receiving from my peers. I feel that my wishes are being taken for granted, and I am debating wether to quit or not. If you feel the need to voice your opinions on the subject, please feel free to do so. If you were wondering, yes, this is part of the reason why I have not been posting recently.

    Rin don't. Please. talk to me on AIM and give me a chance. I know this is all my fault. Please, let me redeem myself.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1529]Dec 22, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
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    Liao(master fire/lightning bender)
    (red death)
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    I finished meditating

    "ok"obelisk said
    "most of today, you will be learning how to teleport"
    "and after you finish,i will teach you to use your lightning whips"
    "and at night, when you sleep, i will test you out"
    "got it?"

    "yep"i said

    "good"replied obelisk
    "now"
    "teleportation will only work if you are quick and agile"
    "you must be swift and a quick thinker to make good use of teleportation"
    "also, teleportation will only let you teleport to close places"
    "you cant teleport from the nothern water tribe to the earth kingdom"
    "but you can teleport all around a cave and stuff like that"
    "ok?"


    "uh huh"i replied

    "to teleport, you must run around again, as you did when you fell asleep last night"
    "and you may use your lightning bending to make you go faster if you want"
    "infact, going faster would be better"
    "it would boost your distance of teleportation and confuse your enemy even more"

    "huh"
    "do i have to run?"i replied

    "yes you lazy bum!!"obelisk replied

    "ok, ok"i said

    i got up
    and started running
    i boosted myself up with lightning bending
    i ran around for a few minutes and didnt stop

    "keep running"said obelisk
    "now...jump and run as fast as you can"

    "you mean..jump, and run in the air?"i screamed as i was still running

    "yes"replied obelisk

    i jumped as quick as i could and attempted to run faster
    but i couldnt do it
    i fell down

    "try again"Obelisk said

    I heard the words "try again" 22 more times that day
    but by the after noon i got it
    and i did it 20 more times

    "this is cool!!"i said

    "time to learn to take control of your lightning whips"said obelisk
    "you must learn to control your lightning"
    "lastnight, you had trouble running quicker, because you emitted to much lightning while you were running"
    "but you were able to take control, and emit the right amount of lightning from your body"
    "lightning whips are almos the same"
    "with a lightning whip, not only does it hurt when you hit the enemy with it"
    "and not only does it hurt when you electrocute the enemy with it"
    "but you also need to know how to grab an enemy with it, without hurting him too much"
    "like water benders do with their water whips"
    "its useful when you dont wanna kill an enemy, but you want them captured"
    "you can also learn how to control the power in your lightning to trip your enemies and other things"

    "kool"i said

    it was dawn

    "i have a feeling youll learn this quick, because of las tnight when you practiced running faster"said obelisk
    "so you remember what to do"

    Obelisk took contorl of my body and directed me towards a stone

    "if you use too much power in the electricity, this sone will get scorched or crack or maybe even break under the pressure"
    "we dont want that in this training"
    "i want you to capture this rock, and let the whip go 10 seconds later, so i can see if its scorched or not"
    "breathe in and out"
    "and concentrate"

    i took deep breaths and concentrated as hard as i could
    i slowly emitted a lightning whip from my 2 fingers and caotured the rock
    i let go 10 seconds later and it was scorched

    "not good enough"obelisk said

    i practiced for the rest of the day
    in 2 more hours,
    i got it perfect
    i got it perfect about 14 times, then i went back to camp
    i recieved dinner from D

    "thanks"i said

    "hows training?"replied D

    "good"
    "im learning alot of new things now"i said

    "you master teleporting?"asked D

    "well..i wouldnt say i MASTERED it"
    "but i learned how to do it pretty well"i replied

    "good job"replied D

    we smiled and i went back to my tent

    "sleepy time" said obelisk

    and i went to sleep
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    Novoxy

    [1530]Dec 22, 2006
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender, Dagger Assassin, and Swordsmen)
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    -----Dreams-----

    'Alright let's do this,' I say waiting for this to get over with so we can continue with our journey. 'Lets go...' I say forming my lightning whips that I was taught to use many years ago. I lunge at him as he turns into a human. I slash my whips hitting him everytime. 'Your training has helped a lot.' I said striking at him then teleporting behind him and striking again him yelping in pain. 'Now not even you can take me!' I say and Evray teleports behind me and strikes me in my back.

    'Think again.' He strikes me again. I start blocking his whip attacks with my whips. 'Now you got it,' he said to me smiling, something I have never seen him do.

    'Well, now your going down!' I say swinging like crazy my flare with lightning and I am soon covered with lightning. 'Now I will take you down with ease!' I say lunging at him blasting blast of lightning like never before making smoke come up from the floor he can see nothing till I jump out and swing my whip at him. I change the whip into a sword. I start swinging at him he dodges. I my eyes flare even more. I blast a large amount of lightning out my hands. 'Yahhhh!!!' I blast dozens more of those high powered hits.

    'Yes, yes! Unleash the Power of the Lightning Sage!' He said smiling he knew that this would soon happen but I didn't.

    'Ahhhh!' I yell lunging at him destroying him... Nearly wipping him out completely. Then I woke up.

    'No...' I said sitting up fast.
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    AEtherBlue

    [1531]Dec 22, 2006
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    Talho-Earthbender

    It was time for some payback. When the others had offered to let her come with them for the battle, she had jumped right on the matter. She looked down at the stub that was her arm. She clenched her fist, anger swelling through her. She continued down the passage she had chosen, second from the left. She hoped it would lead her to the one who took her arm. She soon entered a cavern filled with large rocks everywhere. Standing on the tallest rock was a girl.

    "So, I get the cripple huh. Oh well." Talho gritted her teeth. "My name is Azul. And I, am your executioner". She leapt forward, charging straight for Talho. Talho smashed one of the nearby rocks apart and earthbended them towards her. She smashed each rock as it came then tried to dropkick Talho. She dodged it and struck back with a right hook. Azul whipped her other arm around and blocked it. She then sent a kick into Talho's gut. Talho gasped, then swung again with her fist, this time connecting with her face. The both studdered backwards. "Your not bad. Your stronger than anyone I've ever fought. But, it makes no difference". This time Talho made the first move, sending a shockwave through the earth then launching rocks at her. Azul smashed each rock as they came, jumping to avoid the wave. "Hah, your going to have to do better than that". She turned to grin at her, just to meet the back of her fist. She was knocked off balance and Talho didnt waste the chance. She brought her knee into Azul's gut, followed by a elbow to the back of her neck and finally, an uppercut. Azul's prone form landed several feet away. Talho slammed the ground with both her feet and bended an earth prison around Azul. She then slammed the prison down. She sighed and started walking away. An explosion behind her made her turn.

    "What the", she managed to get out before a huge rock slammed her down. She flew back, landing hard on he back. She looked up to see Azul, standing there, her muscles budging. "You think you can match me. Hah. Prepare to die where you stand". The buffed out Azul charged forward, and before Talho could even react, nailed her with a vicious barrage of punches. Talho feel to her knees, then whinced as Azul picked her up by her hair. Azul smiled, then threw her into a wall. Talho tried earthbending a boulder at her, only to have Azul pick up a stone pillar and slam it back at her. Talho cushioned the blow, but still, the force was more than enough to smash a few of her ribs. She blacked out.

    -
    "So, I go away and this happens to my body? Pathetic" came a dark voice.

    "Who....whos there?" Talho yelled into the darkness. The voice's chuckle made her spine shake.

    "The bracelet is gone, so now I can be free. Sorry little Talho, but I'' be taking the body bacl." Talho was confused by what she meant until suddenly, her mind started fading. She mouthed out a single word, then passed into the darkness.
    -

    A grin made its way across Talho's face. Expect it was no longer Talho in the body. "Im back". Without warning, she began to laugh, its dark echo filling the cavern. Azul looked at her, then started chuckling as well.

    "What's so funny little girl. What was it, Talho? What makes you laugh in this situation." Talho finally looked to Azul, as if noticing her for the first time.

    "Im sorry. Talho isnt here anymore." She looked down at the floor, watching the earth shudder under her. "I am Orha". She leaped forward, propeled by the earth underneath her. Azul swung her pillar at her, only to have Orha smash it into pieces without even a second glance. She landed in front of Azul and Azul launched a kick at her. Orha sidestepped it with ease, then brought her elbow down on the knee. The crack it made was sickening. Azul screamed out in pain. Orha smiled and continued her barrage. Soon enough, Azul feel to the ground, most of her body broken and brusied. She looked at Orha, who stood over her broken body.

    "Damn you, you little witch. Zeth will have your other arm for this". I look of surprise crossed her face, followed by a look of joy.

    "Oh, is that so? Looks like I owe him one then. As for you", she picked up Azul with one arm, then threw her into the air. She earthbended the area around her and shoot about a dozen pillars of rock through her body. She twitched, then died. Orha smiled, then looked to a nearby passage. Making her way into it, she smiled a wicked grin. Soon, she would have a little more fun.
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    Eman5805

    [1532]Dec 22, 2006
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    This sucks alot...the season finales are coming in and suddenly I have a master case of writer's block...
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    Kathleen2006

    [1533]Dec 22, 2006
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    Ami (waterbender)

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    The fight with the icebender had been brutal and I knew we needed all of our strenght to defeat Zeth.

    Then I thought, my uncle had been talking about finding me a husband since I turned 16 and a new fear hit me, what if he had found me a husband.

    "Fang, I hate to admit this, but I'm afriad"

    "Don't worry... I'm sure we can handle Zeth" Fang said

    "Fang, Zeth is not what I'm worried about... I'm afriad my uncle might have set up an arranged marriage for when I get back to the North Pole" I said

    "Don't worry about that now,??Ami, well deal with that when we have to" he smiled "now we have to worry about Zeth, but don't worry too much, I know we can win"

    "Your right, we'll kick his ass!" I punched into the air confidently

    Fang laughed but his laughter faded, we had to be serious... it wasn't going to be that easy to defeat Zeth, we both knew that, but we were ready, weren't we?

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    confucioussayhi

    [1534]Dec 22, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 15
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    How would I happen to get into this? Eman's read my fanfic and I would like to use my OC. Is that ok? How would I play?
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    Eman5805

    [1535]Dec 22, 2006
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    How would I happen to get into this? Eman's read my fanfic and I would like to use my OC. Is that ok? How would I play?

    You may have to wait a lil bit. Season 2 finales are going up now...you'll probably have to wait until season 3 starts, which could be Lord knows when...but really I don't know for sure

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    confucioussayhi

    [1536]Dec 22, 2006
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    Eman5805 wrote:

    confucioussayhi wrote:
    How would I happen to get into this? Eman's read my fanfic and I would like to use my OC. Is that ok? How would I play?

    You may have to wait a lil bit. Season 2 finales are going up now...you'll probably have to wait until season 3 starts, which could be Lord knows when...but really I don't know for sure

    Hmm... Dak would be a great addition though right?
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    vegnegun

    [1537]Dec 22, 2006
    • member since: 12/18/05
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Scorch and Rin had just gone into the only remaining tunnel

    Scorch and Rin began walking down the tunnel and entered a very large, very hot, chamber. And standing in the center of the chamber was Zeth, but he didn't look like he did the last time. His eyes were black, like dolls eyes, and heartless.

    "So," said Zeth in a demonic tone, "you have finally shown up!" His arm started to twitch with lightning.

    "Zeth!" exclaimed Scorch, "where is Katara?"

    "I don't know," said Zeth as a smile worked its way across his face. Scorch didn't like this, he and Rin could both feel a dark presence within Zeth. Zeth slowly started to walk towards them and laughed hysterically. "I thought you said you'd kill me the next time you saw me Scorch?" Scorch's eyes widened as he took a ball of fire in his hand. "Oh good, so you remember me."

    "Rin, run," said Scorch, "this is my fight now, not yours."

    "But Scorch," she began.

    "Go!" he exclaimed. Rin quickly ran out of the cave and left Scorch and Zeth alone. "Now, let's end this!"

    "My sentiments exactly," said Zeth. He quickly fired a bolt of lightning at Scorch, Scorch quickly dodged it and hurled a large ball of fire at Zeth, hitting him head on, but not having an affect. Scorch quickly fire under his feet and ran??towards Zeth, grabbing him in the face and slamming him onto the hot earth. Zeth stood up and was laughing again. "Oh please Scorch, is that the??best you can do?" Scorch whirled around and encased his body in fire and noticed Zeth was gone. He looked around??frantically and saw a bolt of lightning rush by his face, nicking his hair. Scorch whirled around and sent a solid stream of fire in the direction of the lightning bolt and hit only solid rock.

    "Scorch help!" exclaimed Rin's voice from behind him. Zeth was standing??there and had Rin in a head lock, one finger sparking with??lightning aimed for her head.

    "Come on out Pyro," said Zeth, "come out to play." Scorch slowly moved towards Zeth, but the sparks only grew bigger.

    "Let her go!"??Scorch exclaimed. Zeth laughed again and Scorch noticed Rin had noticed he had lost??attention of her. She quickly took a ball of fire and slammed it into Zeth's face, forcing him to let go and back away. Rin quickly took two fire daggers in her hands and slashed at Zeth, burning him repeadily. Scorch quickly zoomed in and tackled Zeth, holding him on the ground. Zeth laughed again and his entire body began sparking. He let out a massive wave of lightning on Scorch, sending him flying across the cave and slammng him against the wall. Scorch fell onto the ground, knocked out, and Zeth began to move in for the kill.

    "Good bye Scorch!" he exclaimed as he fired a??bolt of lightning towards him.

    "Not if I have anything to say about it," said Pyro in Scorch's head, "you think you've??won???Not as long as I exist in this body!" Scorch quickly jumped up and dodged the fire, his eyes glowing fire red. He laughed with a demonic tone as he encased himself in blue flames, rushing towards Zeth. Zeth quickly dodged the attack and fired another bolt of lightning at Scorch. Scorch stuck his hand out and grabbed the lightning, hurling it back at Zeth.

    "You fool," said??Scorch, "you think you could defeat me, Pyro? Not by a long shot!" He slowly began to walk towards Zeth and took fire in his palm. Zeth's eyes??opened, still black, and he quickly shot another bolt of lightning at Scorch. Scorch took the??hit directly and fell back. Zeth slowly started to walk towards Scorch and was about to send a stream of lightning through his head, when a blast of fire pushed his away. He whirled around and gave a cold stare to his attacker, Rin. (RIN THERE, IS THAT BETTER!?)

    Edited on 12/26/2006 3:48pm
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    confucioussayhi

    [1538]Dec 22, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 15
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    How do I at least make a profile for my OC?
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    ISpeakTheTruth

    [1539]Dec 22, 2006
    • member since: 04/24/05
    • level: 33
    • rank: Borg Queen
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    Syrak (Training Ariel)

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    After finishing the rice syrak took a look at the sun that was nearly set. "Well I think we've done enough for one day you've improved since you first came to me...'Course with your mediocre??skills that's not really a hard thing to do."

    "What you mean we're stoping?" Ignoring his insult as she'd become a custome to them. "Why can't we keep going?"

    "Because I'm over four-hundred years old! And I want to sleep when you're my age...when you're a fourth of my age you'll understand!....When we wake up we'll finish your training on the island of Kyoshi. It's nice a quiet there and it has ideal locations to continue trianing besides I have some people there I'd like to meet so get some rest and we'll go in the morning."

    "Fine....So where are we going to sleep?" Ariel asked.

    "Here." Syrak said as he pointed to his tent. Seeing her strange look as she looked at the tent only big enough for one person. "Don't worry I'll simply sleep out here."

    "You don't have anything to sleep on." Ariel noted.

    "I don't need anything" As he spoke his body began to float in the air then the mists around him formed into three rings that rotated around his body as he began to float horazontaly. "Night."

    "What ever." Ariel said still less than thrilled that they had stopped trianing as she laid down.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1540]Dec 22, 2006
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    SEASON2 FINALE POST

    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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    The rocks of the roof fell to the floor. A large rock smashed me in the head and I blacked out. I woke up and it was pitch dark. I was beneth a bunch of rocks and in pain. I felt my face and there was a gash with dried blood, where the large rock had hit me earlier. I pushed three rocks off from my chest and I saw light. I moved another large rock and I was no longer stuck. I was now standing on a lot of rubble in the middle of the destroyed Agni Kai Arena. I looked around for other survivors, but saw no one.
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    I heard the crumbling of rocks behind me. I quickly turned around and I was being stared down by a familiar face. I said, "Heh, you're alive. Hevet, I don't know what to say." Hevet replied, "Willy you betrayed me. You joined the Fire Nation and left me alone, to die. I was attacked by Fire Nation soldiers and then they eventually set me free for some odd reason. This was all becuase of you! You betrayed me, and now you will pay the price of death!"
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    I stepped back a little light-headed and said, "Woah calm down Hevet. Join me!" Hevet yelled back, "HAH! I will never join you since you are on the Fire Nation. You dirty scum-". I interrupted him and said, "I WAS on the Fire Nation. I need to redeem myself, somehow. I was banished from the Fire Nation and senteced to 5 years in prison. I then escaped and I ended up here, with no allies to turn to. So Hevet, help me! Join me once again and together we will both become Fire Nation soldiers!" -
    Hevet right jabbed me in the face and I fell to the ground. Hevet hovered over me and yelled, "I told you! I will not join the Fire Nation!" Hevet jumped on top of me and began to hit me over and over again, until I started to bleed. I yelled, "STOP!" Hevet got off of me and said, "Well! What's it gonna be Willy! Do I have to kill an old friend?" I replied, "Do your worst. I cannot fight you! You are too dear to my heart." Hevet slid out a small dagger from his pocket and he gripped it in his hand.
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    Hevet raised the dagger and said, "I'm sorry Willy. If there was only some other way. But, there isn't! You are bad and I am good." I grinned and yelled, "Do it! Kill me! Do your worst Hevet!" Hevet swung the dagger at my face....
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    CLING! A katana blocked Hevet's dagger from penetrating my skull. I turned around to see who was holding the katana. It was Orinth!
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    Orinth said, "Hey hey! How come I wasn't inivited to the reunion of our old team. How are you Hevet?" Hevet was about to speak when Orinth punched him flat in the face. Hevet fell to the ground and his nose was broken. Orinth yelled, "Hevet! You don't get to kill Willy, I do!" -
    "No, I do!", said some one else. Wicker walked up to us and he lit his hands in fire. Orinth raised his katana and I put an Earth Wall around my body. Wicker shot three fireballs at Orinth but Orinth deflected them with his katana. I opened by Earth Wall and I began to run away. "Come back here Willy!", I heard.
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    I kept running and then I turned into a little alley-way. I looked down on the wet floor and I saw another familiar face. It was Shujaka! Shujaka stood up and whipped out his two daggers. Shujaka said, "Haha I thought you died. Well, let the fight continue!" I turned around and jolted out of the alley-way only to run into Orinth. Orinth yelled, "Haha good job Shujaka!"
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    Orinth continued, "Your friend Wicker, is now blacked out. So, don't expect-". A fireball whizzed into (at) Orinth's head and Orinth fell to the floor. Shujaka was shocked and he didn't know where the fireball came from. Shujaka charged at me and WHIZZZZ! Another fireball came from out of nowhere and hit Shujaka this time. Shujaka fell to the floor.
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    I looked around and then from down the road walked Berracore. He shot a fireball at me and yelled, By the way! Sindra is a fantastic kisser!" I doged the fireball and ran at him. I yelled, "Shut up!" Berracore formed a "Fire Whip" and he wung it at me. I shot a bouler at Berracore and it hit his arm, cuasing the "Fire Whip" to fall to the floor. Berracore bent down to pick it up. Berracore then turned around only to taste the stell of my longsword.
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    I pulled the longsword out from his skull and said, "That was the last kiss you will ever get!" Berracore fell to the ground as the blood escaped his head. He then mumbled one last thing before dying. He said, "That's the last kiss you will get from her also. Cause Orinth killed her. Ha Ha Ha-." Then he died.
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    I stood over his body and I cried for Sindra, my dead girlfriend who was killed by Orinth. I gripped by longsword and said, "It's time for Orinth to die!" I then heard someone say, "No, it's time for YOU to die!" I turned around and a small dagger came at my face. I attempted to dodge it but I was too late. The dagger skimmed my cheek and my blood poured down from my face. I fell to the floor looking at the face of my killer, Hevet!

    Edited on 12/22/2006 7:37pm
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