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Indra (Waterbender)
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Indra is??the only female??member of the covert Luna Sedai organization. But, she's been betrayed by her own allies(called Strangers), and is now up against six Strangers poised to use a deadly attack against her....
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The Crescent Moon formation was definitely not what Indra would want to be on the receiving end of. She knew how the formation worked. Yet, that doesn't mean it'll be any easier to counter.??But, Indra quickly realized??she had an edge:?? It takes 7 Strangers to??complete the Cresent Moon formation, so she had a chance...
The??two??in the front-middle struck first, moving in unison they combined the water from their pouches into one??high pressure??stream of water??that??was aimed straight for Indra.
That version? Damn! Indra thought bitterly as she immediatly crouched down and waved her arms apart then forward, bringing them up as she did so-
Indra's own water sprang into action. Coming out of her pouch in two seperate waves and freezing into ice, she quickly fashioned an??ice plow that diverted the brunt of the attack to her sides. But, this just saved her from the initial attack. However, now Indra couldn't see in front of her, nor did she see the second attack that was launched as soon as the ice plow was formed. A second wave, this time one of pure ice smashed into her ice plow and the force??created as her??own??shield shattering in her??knocked Indra onto her back. An piece of splintered ice caught her cheek and??the??left side of her abdomen, drawing??a spurt of blood.
The third attack was??launched by the two??Strangers on the outside. Indra rolled left??narrowly avoiding a??large spinning??ice disk intended to split her up the middle. The disk didn't shatter when it hit the ground, it hit with a sharp thisp??and sunk in! The disk had cut into the ground!??It??kicked up and out of the ground and arched high into the air. Indra saw out of the corner of her eyes, all 6 Strangers moving together, controlling the disk as one.
These are no beginners. For that many Waterbenders to control one single body of water with that much precision takes years of training. These were elites, no doubt about it, Indra thought half amazed at their skill and half furious. I have to get out of the open. I can't dodge forever. Indra saw something to her right about 20 feet away, sweat starting to bead around her brow.
Only one shot, I have to take it.
Indra, now on her stomach,??wasn't even able to get off the ground before the disk circled around and was coming horizontally??to take off the top of her head. She waited till the last second then tucked in her legs and kicked out, springing forward off her hands. She front flipped forward just in time, the blade hit the ground again this time, chipped out a large chunk of rock and was airborn again. Indra, on her feet, was sprinting towards the front of an??run down,??abandoned tea shop. She heard the??whirr??of the disk as it circled around again.
I might not make it in time...
She dove through the boarded up windows again missing the disk as is slashed, now vertical, the air where her legs once where. Was on her feet and running through the back of the shop, crushing a tea cup under her foot. Behind her she heard a shrinsh as the disk shot through the wall, cutting through the legs of several tables. If she was a few steps slower she would have been cut down at the shins...
Indra came to the back of the shop and was now in a back alley of the??abandoned strip??with a large wall in front of her. She??quickly??whipped off her robe??and??ran left, back to where the 6 Strangers were directing the??disk. And almost on cue the disk burst through the back of the tea shop and??struck the wall and went straight through. She was coming to the first of two alley ways-
Now!!
Indra waterbent ice into the robe and swung her arm out, sending the robe into??the first alleyway-
..Indra broke into a full on sprint-
..the robe??just exited the alley-
...Indra??swung her arm forward palm out and facing up forming a sheet of ice??on the ground that went around the corner and Indra was sliding at top speed-
...the robe was shredded by the ice disk-
...Indra slid through the alleyway, she was coming out right next to the 6 Strangers-
...the robe hit the ground-
...Indra??jumped and??flew out of the alley right at her attackers-
...all 6 Strangers saw her at the same time and tried to counter-
...they were fast and were reacting to Indra already!
...she was jumping right into the oncoming ice disk! No way to dodge it-
...a green and canary blue flash??streaked infront of Indra in midair-
...the??ice??disk was knocked aside-
...Indra made 6 lightning quick motions and 6 shards of needle thin ice flew-
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Indra landed on the ground and slid to a stop, some ice??was still on her shoes, and was crouched down as all 6 Strangers fell dead. Indra hit them with a??thin puncture wound in each's chest that went all the way through, piecing each through??the heart. Indra tried to stand up, but exhaustion overflowed her. Her knees went rubbery and she went down to??one knee,??breathing heavy.??
I would be dead if not for those green and blue streaks. What was that? Indra thought, as she caught her breathe.
"White hair? That's different. And you're welcome by the way. That was pretty amazing, I must admit," a female voice said from behind her.
Indra stood and??whipped around, ready to attack whoever it was behind her but??suddenly Indra's body remembered she had a small gash in her side and she went back down to her knee.??She??clutched at??her side, and felt??warm, wetness all??down her side and her leg. And Indra suddenly felt lightheaded...
I was bleeding out??the whole time! She realized. Her vision was blurring and her body felt weak. She couldn't even stay on her knees. She collapsed to the ground...
The last thing??Indra??saw before she lost consciousness??was the what looked like a...walking rainbow...
Edited on 12/18/2006 10:13pm
