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    AEtherBlue

    [1501]Dec 18, 2006
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    Talho - Earthbender.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Just woke up.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    "Hello?" I asked getting up, my head throbbed. I looked down at where shido was supposed to be but he was missing, I staggered over to the fire, I heated my body. I looked down at myself.. I tried to imagine the things that Rexsten had said to me before he died, but they just faded back into my memories. I stared long and hard at the ground. I felt pitifull and weak. I looked over to my left. I notice once again my missing arm. "I hate that man." I said to myself. "I'm going to kill him no matter what it takes." I rammed my fist into the ground thend ecided to calm down. I walked away from the fire and got some stones. "First I'll have to train." I told myself. I walked over to a waterfall about 40 feet from camp, "This will do I guess." I couldent think properly at all let alone concentrate, but this has to be done.

    I walked over to the side and let go of the two stones. I made them fly around me, they spun faster and faster untill I lost sight of them. I concentrated real hard.. and then I punched my fist farwards, I hit one of them and the rock exploded and hurreldPeices at the wall. A loud crack came as the peices had been embedded in, another strike forwards and the seccond diddent break, it went flying into the water fall and split the water.??

    I stomped the ground, A boulder came up, I grabbed it, flipped up backwards and threw it at the rock wall, this time breaking a chunk off of it. I grabbed two smaller stones and made a chain from them, I wrapped it around my arm and started training a little more, I finished off that bit adn then went out for a run. I stopped a little bit before I got back and noticed a cliff. I thought to myself, "I guess it can't hurt." I started climbing the base of the cliff and got pritty high up.

    I was about half way up now and reached for a stone. My foot slipped, I started to fall, I tried to grab for a stray rock or vien but to no avail, I started to fall. I thought to myself, "this is my last day on earth." I kept falling and then an image flashed in my head. That man, the one I saw in the bar. I still need to pay him back. I must kill him!"Wait! Why would I be thinking this sort of thing.. this isent like me..." I snapped out of my daze and grabbed for the side of the cliff, this time earthbending my hand into it, I stopped suddenly and heard a pop. Exasperating pain shot throung my arm and my hand slipped. I fell a whole 12 feet. I came to the ground with a hard thud. I tried to grip my arm in pain but noticed it was missing again. "**CK!!!!!" I yelled. I quickly slid over to a rock. I prepared myself by biting onto a peice of clothing I had. I leaned back, then I lunger forward and hit my arm aginst the rock, I heard a satisfying pop and then felt the pain. I creid out, But after a few minutes it would be better. I sat there and I thought to myself, "Why has my life come to this. I can't even tell myself where I am. I am just a loser."

    The pain soon went away and I was ready to move again, I got up and looked at myself, I needed a bath. I got out of my cloths and went into the water, they where warm, "Must be close to a spring." I thought. I finished up my bath and got dryed and put on my cloths.. I heard someone call out. I walked over to the camp again readilly prepaired. I saw fang scorch and another guy standing there.

    "Hey your awake" Fang said. "Wanna come to a festival with us?" I just stared at him, he smiled and looked at the other two guys. "If you dont want to, then we can just come back later." he said.

    "No, no I'm commin." I told him.

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    Kathleen2006

    [1502]Dec 18, 2006
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    I walked out of the room and into the wide expance of the temple and smiled as I walked through the halls... I let my mind wander and wondered about all the paintings I saw.

    "I see you have cheered up" Kai said

    "Yes, Guru Kai... I know now that it isn't good to dwell on my past and forget to live my life... mama and papa wouldn't want that for me" I smiled "they would want me to be happy"

    "Yes, they would, I was able to speak with them not to long after they spoke to you and they wanted you to know that whatever your uncle has planed for you is not what they want for you... they want to see you happy, with Fang"

    "They told me they wanted me to be happy" I responded with a wistful smile. "I just wish they could be here to see me through this" tears welled in my eyes

    "Don't worry they are always with you" Kai said wisely, "in your heart"

    "I know... but sometimes that isn't enough... and mom's necklace and bracelet just aren't enough" I sighed

    "I understand" Kai said softly "you want to have them physically with you... I am sorry that they were ripped from you at a young age, and so are they"

    "I know" tears fell from my eyes

    "Let go of the pain, Ami... there is nothing we can do to change the past, but you and Fang, together, can craft a brighter future for yourselves" Kai smiled "I'll leave you for now in the care of a friend"

    Kai walked away as Rin walked up

    "Hey Ami, are you okay?" she asked

    "Yeah, I'll be okay" I smiled and wiped my tears

    "Never be afraid to talk to one of us, we're your friends, Ami... don't forget that" Rin put her arm around my shoulders

    "I'll try not to" I sighed "my birthday is in four days... it's also the annaversary of my parent's death... ten years to the day... a day that will be burned into my memory for the rest of my life."

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    (Rin, take it from here girl)

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    katrah88

    [1503]Dec 18, 2006
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    Yari the "ribbonbender" (Airbender)


    : Dropped in on a white haired girl with 6 robed men about to attack her which she kills. Meanwhile, one of Cheif Haelin's agents is still on her(Yari) track. :



    "White hair? That's different. And you're welcome by the way. That was pretty amazing, I must admit," Yari said to the white haired girl. Her presence took the girl by surprise. At that moment, the girl whipped around and prepared for attack but her attempt quickly failed as she fell to her knee.

    "You just killed everything you had to worry about and I already have an enemy for today I'm not trying to be yours," she informed the girl as she walked up to her cautiously, "Here, you need help," she continued as she motioned to help her up but she was denied.


    "No!" the girl commanded as she jerked away to avoid Yari touching wounds blind to her only evoking more pain to herself. She fell back down to her knee, "Tell me who you are."


    "Ok, you need a name? It's Yari..." she replied quickly realizing she still had an agent after her, "But, just let me at least help you onto your feet," she pleaded as she offered her hand. The girl reluctantly grabbed her hand and let her lift her up. Yari's time had expired. The agent had caught up and began to attack at first sight of her.


    The agent instantly took notice of all of the bodies on the ground, "I'm sure Fire Nation officials would love the sight of this," he referred to the men. He wasted no time. Small blades pierced the alley walls.


    Yari boosted herself into the air, she feared the white haired girl would become a bystander. The agent followed, climbing the walls with long metal handheld hooks they held between knuckles, agents often kept with them. She felt her body slam onto a rooftop. The agent tackled her. She brought her knees to her chest to propel him off of her resulting in him flying off her. After regaining his composure, he ran pursuing her with the metal hooks. Blasts of wind hit the agents legs and torso to slow him down while an air current assisted Yari to push herself slightly behind the agent. To her surprise, he turned quickly, facing her while the metal hook advanced towards her. The agent's hand jerked him back towards the alley. His whole hand... FROZEN! Though, a bit phased, Yari took advantage of the moment. A huge ribbon caught his neck and twisted it in one swift motion leaving him unconscious. The agent's idle body plummeted on top of one of the corpses. Yari glided back into the alley finding the white-haired girl with a weak smirk on her face.


    Slightly exhausted she expressed her gratitude, "I believe I owe you a much deserved thank you."

    "Returning the favor..." the girl managed to mumble before she fell weak and dropped to the floor.

    Her wounds became visible, she was bleeding profusely. Yari took the huge ribbon and carefully wrapped it around her wound. That would have to do until she could find the proper supplies. It was obvious she could not be left in such a condition. The girl would have to come along for the trip until she awoke.

    ~ Finally, they had reached some type of shelter after long hours of trying to glide and sprint with one person too many. It was a small den that had not been tended too for quite some time. Whatever built it was long gone.

    Yari placed the girl down on the makeshift bed of cloth and leaves. After garthering some water she put her weary body to rest. At least she was closer to leaving BSS she thought before falling asleep. She would be out in no time...

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    Eman5805

    [1504]Dec 19, 2006
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    Nice. Only one continuity problem...Indra had??already??blacked out after the fight from blood loss, so she wouldn't be talking to Yari, but I no need to redo let's just say that Indra doesn't remember much since she's so woozy and weak from that blood loss.

    Edited on 12/19/2006 7:27am
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    Novoxy

    [1505]Dec 19, 2006
    • member since: 12/10/06
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender, Dagger Assassin, and Swordsmen)
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    -----Dreams-----

    'Okay,' Evray says, 'We can train in peace and I can become human so we can sparr together.' He says becoming the human he once was.

    'Whoa, okay lets go!' I say lunging at him he jumps and puts his foot on my head. I snap my fingers making him shock his foot. "Haha," I laugh. He runs at me and punchs me in the face then somehow teleports behind me. "What the hell?" I say and he laughs I jump and blast a few bolts of lightning at him.

    "Make yourself lighnting!" Evray says and I cover my body with lighnting. "Now jump run and jump as fast as you can." I run and jump I boost forward a little bit almost feeling like I teleported.

    "Whoa." I say trying it again this time getting right in his face and then blasting at him sending him back 20 feet at the least. "Yes," I say teleporting to him and throwing down the combos when all of a sudden he teleports away and shoots bolts of lighnting at me then makes him self into a ball and shoots the ball at me. "Holy..." I say getting wipped out. "Ahh..." I get back up and try the same. First, I cover myself with lighnting, then, I make me into a ball and then I roll towards him. I try to push the ball off but I fail instead Evray makes a wall of electricity making my ball absorb into his then getting hit by the lightning shocking him, "AHH!!" I scream. I lay there for the rest of the dream in real life pain 'this dream, affected me in the real world.' I thought to myself.
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    Lord-darkboy

    [1506]Dec 19, 2006
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    Darkboy "D" (fire, earth, wind, water)


    everyone was training with his spirit so i decided to bring up some old memories


    ***FLASHBACK*** (1100 years ago)

    the moment was there pyro was broken free from my will, thought i controlled him the longest then anyone could, and i knew i needed help for this spirit i called open the help of obilisk to help me with this battle?? we fought on the island of dyran it was abandon everyone fled from this place when i arrived and our battle began the battle took three days before one of us was losing, obilisk who was a fearsome fighter was knocked out by pyro's tail and i stood alone against him we both played mind games on each other but it didn't work pyro was forcing me in the defense as he attacked brutely with his flames, tail and wings and i got a hit on my head wich knocked me unconsious what happend next i do not now but when i camed back up i saw both spirits??(pyro and obilisk) down on the ground both defeated but pyro started to move again and quickly ran for my bag and took out a crystal ( a hami crystal) but i only learned how to contain 1 spirit at the time and i spoke the curse over pyro who was trapped into the crystal but the crystal wouldn't last forever pyro was way to strong so i boiled the crystal and added water to it so it would stay liquid and i putted it into??a bottle, i gave the bottle to a wise guru and he kept it safe

    *** END OF FLASHBACK***

    'yes i remembe that but how did pyro get free then' that voice in my head asked to me

    'i don't really know maybe one of his??great grand children set him free' i said

    'possible' he started again 'but we can contain him again can't we i mean you have an reverse crystal in that bag of yours'

    'yes i can do it but the spell is weak and it won't work unless the host of??the spirit??accept it to drain??it out, when the host is onconsious or when??the spirit??broke free of his/her body ' i said

    i continued my tour and went back to the camp to make some tea and soup for the men since our cook died of sparky attack.

    Edited on 12/20/2006 4:50am
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    katrah88

    [1507]Dec 19, 2006
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    Eman5805 wrote:

    Nice. Only one continuity problem...Indra had??already??blacked out after the fight from blood loss, so she wouldn't be talking to Yari, but I no need to redo let's just say that Indra doesn't remember much since she's so woozy and weak from that blood loss.



    Oops... I need to pay attention more. *notes to self: pay attention, remember to check stories for consistancy, and once again pay attention* Ok now we'll continue your way.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1508]Dec 19, 2006
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    Just so you all know...the Season 2 finale will take place from around post number 1600-1700...so try and finish by then...
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    djdfire

    [1509]Dec 19, 2006
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    Ariel ( training with Syrak)

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------??

    " Next you'll have to learn about the advantages of waterbending.", Syrak explained. Ariel, stiil a little mad about her exercise earlier, looked at him and yelled at him loudly "Alright. I guess."

    "Ok then. First tell me what you know about waterbending." Syrak ordered.

    "Waterbending is known for it's more of a defensive nature than offensive. The opposite of firebending, waterbending is more calmer, and more destructive when used correctly. Waterbenders are also able to use all three forms of water, adding to their defense.", Ariel stated angrily.

    "That's all you know? No wonder you have trouble with some of your bending. Even a??three year old nonbendr knows that.??", Syrak replied.

    "Excuse me?", she said even more angrily.

    "You heard me correctly. Now do you know why waterbenders are able to harness the water in people's body?" Syrak asked.

    "That's a stupid question. They can harness the water in people's body because it's WATER!",she yelled

    "Then why can't you control the water without getting mad or sense the water in my body without seeing. Since it's just WATER!", Syrak yelled.Ariel looked down at the ground, a guilty look on her face. She remembered her last two excersises, being only to complete one but she had to loose her anger to do so.

    "I can", she said softly.

    "What did you say little Ariel?", he asked.

    "I CAN!", she yelled. Ariel then calmed herself down and closed her eyes. She lifted up her hands into a stance and turned away from Syrak. Syrak saw her strange behavoir, and started to walk toward her. All of a sudden his legs stopped moving. He felt his arms also failing him. Syrak looked towrds Ariel and saw her arms moving.

    'Brilliant!' he thought as she continued to bend the water in his body softly. She then let go of her hold aand dropped her stance. Syrak then jumped towards her, wanting to see what she would do next. Before he could land, a thick cloud of mist came and somehow wrapped around him. Stunned, he gazed at her in amazement.

    'I've never this type of improvement in my entire years of trainning.??Ariel has amazing talent. All she needed was a confidence boost." he smiled as he was lowered by Ariel. She dropped her master and turned around to face him. She opened her eyes and smiled, wondering if she had proven enough to him yet that she could bend every element of water.??

    " So? Satisfied?", she asked sweetly.

    "Hardly", he replied camly. He then flew 20 feet into the air, Ariel??jumping after him. Syrak saw this coming and as soon as he hit the ground, he quickly got back up and bend her arms behind her back sho she couldn't??bend.

    "Ariel. How could you forget to not quicly follow up on your attacks. Ozai will have your head if repeat this same mistake." he warned while still keeping his hold.??Ariel smirked, and then bended a huge whip of water with her legs and??hit Syrak with it, making him break his hold on Ariel so he could block the rest of the whip that was coming. Ariel then bended the water in his??stomach and chest??to lift him up into the air.

    "So who doesn't follow up on their attacks?", Ariel asked very sweetly.

    "Very impressive. Glad you can use your legs to bend. But don't ever get too cocky or that'll be your downfall", he stated. And with that, he flicked his wrist which caused her legs to loose their balance, and she fell, dropping her hold on Syrak.

    "Now", he said while stretching his arm towards her, "Time to eat some more rice. I feel quite famished." he stated while handing her w bowl of rice.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1510]Dec 19, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    Shujaka and I were escaping the prison in Ba-Sing-Se when we saw my girlfriend, Sindra, cheating on me by kissing my good friend Berracore...
    -
    I looked into their cell and saw my two good friends kissing each other. I had been cheated on. I looked down at my keys and quickly found thier cell number on one of the keys. I opened their cell door just as fireballs came right at Shujaka, Sindra, Berracore, and I. The four of us ducked and the fireballs whizzed over our heads.
    -
    The four of us rounded the corner and we ran down one more hallway, which led to a set of stairs. We ran up the set of stairs and that led to a single door. I knocked the door down and the light of the sun hit our faces. We were free! We quickly ran into the numerous alleys and roads of Ba-Sing-Se to escape the Fire Nation cell guards.
    -
    After a while of running I looked at Sindra and Berracore. I yelled to them, "Why? What the hell! Berracore, she is my girlfriend!" Berracore replied, "Your girlfriend? I didn't know that!" I replied, "Shut up!" I punched Berracore in the face and I made his nose bleed. I hit him once more in the face and he fell to the ground. -
    Sindra yelled, "NO! Don't hurt him anymore Willy! After almost losing you to the Fire Nation I thought that I would be stuck in that cell with Berracore for the rest of my life, and never see you again! So, I got to know him. And since I was deprived of your love, we kissed." I yelled, "SHUT UP! You liar! You cheated on me and that is the bottom line!"
    -
    Shujaka put his arm out in front of me and said, "Willy. Calm down. Sindra is a defenseless woman. Do not harm her!" I hit Shujaka in the face and said, "Mind your own dam business you white eyed freak!" Shujaka punched me back in the face twice as I fell to the ground.
    -
    I stood up and said, "You wanna fight me! Bring it!" Shujaka ran at me and jumped at me. I was knocked to the floor with Shujaka on top of me, throwing punch after punch into my face.
    -
    Berracore now stood up and he kicked Shujaka, which made Shujaka fall off of me. Berracore said, "Get off of him! Willy is my-" POW! I punched Berracore in the face and he fell to the ground again. -
    Sindra yelled, "Everybody stop fighting! Willy, I love you. I just overreacted becuase I thought I would never see you again. Please, forgive me!" I looked inot her calm blue eyes and said, "I forgive you." She ran to me and gave me a nice long kiss.
    -
    Berracore now stood up as Shujaka was staring me down. Shujaka said, "Agni Kai." Berracore looked at Shujaka and I and said, "Agni Kai, I agree." I replied, "Waht? Shujaka vs. Berracore vs. me?" Shujaka and Berracore both said, "Yes."
    -
    I looked at Berracore and Shujaka and I said, "Fine. Agni Kai it is..."
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1511]Dec 19, 2006
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    Lieutenant General Liao(master fire/lightning bender)
    (Red death)
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    ???so you gunna teach my some mad
    hot tricks????I said joking with obelisk in my head

    ???sometimes I wonder??????replied obelisk
    ???did the sun purposely put me in a such a retarted human host on purpose
    just to tease me????












    ?????that wasn???t very nice???I replied

    ???down to business???said obelisk
    ???the first lightning bending trick I ever learned with evray together???
    ???was the trick of ambushing???but this trick can also be used for
    escaping???
    ???it consists of two phases???
    ???one You must create a lightning wall to surround your opponent???
    ???and that wall must be strong enough to hold off attacks for about 15-30
    seconds???
    ???the second phase is teleportation-???



    ?????teleportation????I interrupted









    ???yes???replied obelisk
    ???teleportation???
    ???this is used after the wall is created???
    ???once the wall is created, the enemy will try to take out the wall
    surrounding him with everything hes got???
    ???and while your wall is holding off, you will have a few seconds to
    think where you can teleport to and ambush him from???
    ???but my brother liked to learn it the other way???
    ???he preffered to learn teleportation before creating the lightning wall???
    ???in fact,
    If he were teaching sparky this trick right now,
    I wouldn???t be surprised if he taught sparky teleportation first???



    I laughed



    ???now???concentrate???




    ??in my head, obelisk showed me a
    specific form of stances to create a wall from lightning
    I imitated
    But it took me a while to catch
    on






    ???good???I heard obelisk say when I mastered the first phase of the
    trick

    Edited on 12/19/2006 3:58pm
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    vegnegun

    [1512]Dec 19, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Firebender)


    Scorch and the gang had just returned to the temple after a, erm, incident at the festival

    Scorch had been getting ready for the big fight, and so were the others. Aang and his friends were already to go, and Ami and Rin were talking at the time. Scorch took out the necklace and was debating whether or not he should give it to her. Scorch put it back into his jacket and pulled his hand out that was covered in orange lightning. He shook his hand and head, before standing up and walking over to Rin and Ami.

    "Come on you two," said Scorch, "we need to get going."

    "Okay," said Rin. Ami was silent, but Scorch didn't care. He just knew that he had a mission to complete, and in all of his years of missions, he's never failed one, and he wasn't going to fail this one. He found Fang and told him to get his butt skyward, and scout out the area. Scorch finally went to Aang and his gang, and Jax??and Talho??were with them too.

    "Are you guys ready yet?" asked Scorch, "you're girl ain't gonna be waiting forever, savvy." Aang blushed a little, and Sokka had a confused look on his face.

    "What does he mean by 'your girl'?" asked Sokka.

    "Just a figure of speech mate," said Scorch, "you gotta losen up a bit, ya know?" He walked away and met up with Rin. "Rin, what's wrong with Ami?"

    "Nothing," she replied.??Scorch could tell she was lying, but didn't wish to pursue it. Scorch and Rin returned to where Aang and his friends were at, and Ami was waiting with them.

    "Okay, listen up," said Scorch, "Fang has gone on ahead to scout the area. Rin and Ami, you'll go with Aang on Appa. I'll go on ahead and try to meet up with Fang, and you guys and gals just follow me, okay? When you get there, Aang, you, Toph, and Sokka get Katara and get out! You go that?" They all nodded and Scorch flew into the air, and headed towards the mountains, full speed. He saw Fang up ahead and slowed down, not wanting to pass him.

    "Hey Scorch," said Fang, "where are the others?"??

    "They're following us," said Scorch, "we'll make sure that they aren't planning an ambush." Fang nodded and Scorch looked ahead. The passed over Ba-Sing-Sa, and came across the mountains where Zeth resided. The landed behind a boulder and looked into the cave, not seeing any movement. Scorch looked up at the sun and saw that dusk was coming, and fast. They then heard Appa's grunt in the sky and he landed, Aang, Rin, Ami, Jax,??Toph, Sokka, and Talho??in the saddle. They all got off the saddle and the group of??nine moved towards the cavern, unknowing of the danger that waited for them.

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    Vampdude69

    [1513]Dec 19, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    The team has reached the mountains, and Jax has picked a tunnel to go down

    Jax walked down the far left tunnel. He left the others behind. He couldn't see very well, but he kept walking.

    He had been walking for a while and he reached a round, circular room. The entrance behind him shut. There was someone with him in there. He looked around. No one was there...
    A small sand pebble landed on his forehead. He brushed it off and looked up, and a huge wave of sand nailed him in the face. He stood up and brushed the sand off. He looked around again, and standing on the other side of the room, was Nero.

    "Long time no see, ey Jax?" Nero said.
    "Cut the talk," Jax said. He drew his broadswords.
    "Still playing with that metal I see," he said. "Well, it doesn't take much to knock you down."
    "You're outmatched Nero," Jax said.
    "We'll see about that," Nero replied.

    Jax charged at him and Nero side swiped him with a sand whip. Jax flew towards the wall, but he made an earth wall. He bounced off it and went straight at Nero. Nero tried to uppercut him with the sand whip, but Jax cut it with his swords and drop-kicked Nero. Nero fell down and his sand dropped on the ground. Jax bended a rock pyramid around Nero and stood his ground. He waited.

    The pyramid exploded and Nero stood there. He made the sand into two broadswords made of sand.
    "Sand can't match up to my swords," Jax said.
    "Lets see," Nero said. He swung his sand swords at Jax, and Jax blocked them. The sand stayed in place.
    "What the?" Jax said.
    "I am constantly bending the sand together, the swords can't be destroyed."
    Jax swung both his sword and Nero blocked them. Jax did a back flip and stabbed his swords into the ground. He launched rocks at Nero and Nero just sunk into the ground.
    "Where did he go?" Jax said aloud.

    Nero popped up behind him and kicked Jax over. Jax landed on the ground and dropped his swords.
    "Ha, pathetic," Nero said.

    "This is just starting," Jax said. He made his glider and rose into the air.
    "You like that?" Jax said. He launched rocks at Nero who blocked them all. Nero stood there, and just waited for more. Jax turned around, and launched full speed at Nero, and tackled him. They both rolled on the ground, and Nero held a sword to Jax's throat when the dust settled.
    "You're mine now, Jax," Nero said. "And your friends, are dead too. They won't survive Zeth, espeically since he has newfound power, a spirit. A dark, evil spirit."
    "Thats my spirit!" Jax said. He pushed Nero with his feet, and Nero flew back, and sliced Jax in the stomach. Jax screamed as he bled, and he stood up, and bended a rock at Nero, which hit him directly in the chest. He flew back and nailed the wall. Jax buried him in rubble. Nero exploded out from it, and he looked angry. There was darkness in his eyes. He bended sand around Jax's body, and squeezed it. Jax was suffocating.
    "I said, you're mine," Nero said.

    "And.....I....Say," Jax forced out. He used the last of his strength to bend a rock under Nero, sending him flying. He grabbed his swords, and when Nero landed, he stabbed him through the chest.

    "You're done," Jax finished. Nero slumped to the ground, dead.

    He saw another openeing. He walked through it, and continued down the long tunnel...

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1514]Dec 19, 2006
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    Spike (Archer)

    Bulldozer, Mayhem, and I continued up the mountain in search of the Hami Crystal, which returns all spirits. Finally, the three of us reached a small pathway that is very slippery. The pathway is covered in snow and it lies on the side of a steep cliff. The three of us slowly walked along the pathway.

    Crash! A part of the pathway fell down the cliff, and it created a gap (crevice). Now, the three of us had to try and jump over the gap in the pathway. Mayhem said, "I'm first." Mayhem ran at full speed and jumped the gap. He made it. I looked at Bulldozer and said, "I'm up." I made a huge leap and I barely made it over the gap. Bulldozer now ran at full speed but he was too heavy. He gripped on to the side of the ledge and Mayhem and I pulled him up. We continued the walk along the pathway.

    Finally we reached the end of the pathway. I said, "Look! It's the cave! It's the cave!" We walked to the cave and a bright white light shined in our faces. I said, "there it is boys, the Hami Crystal!" It was just sitting there, for the taking...

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    avatarforte

    [1515]Dec 19, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
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    Fang-Airbender(third person)

    The tunnel was pitch black. Fang and Ami had broken off from the main group, going along the centermost tunnel. Fang had smelt the target they wanted and they were now almost there. The scent was getting stronger by the minute. They passed through a large ark into an enormous cavern. In the center stood Lith.

    "Im surprised you even came. But you came with only 2, and that will be your fatal mistake." She immediately sent a barrage of ice shards are way.

    "Ami, you know what to do". She nodded, then bended water into the path of the ice. The shards were knocked aside and Fang took the chance. He passed through the wall of water and, dragging his sword behind him,?? fired serveral wind blasts. She put up a shield of ice, blocking them as if they were a child's play thing.?? Fang vaulted over her head, then sent more her way. She blocked them as well.

    "And here I thought you'd have improved since last time. It saddens me to see I'm mistaken". Fang smiled and yelled.

    "Now Ami!" Lith's eyes widened, and looked behind her, just to be waterwhipped into a wall.. Fang charged ahead, sword at the ready. She got back up, formed a sword of ice and blocked him. Ami rushed in, creating her own ice sword and slashed at her. She blocked it without another ice sword, but realized she was in trouble. She cursed, and propelled herself backwards with a column of ice.

    "Fine, try this on for size!" she screamed, forming a giant chunk of ice. She then sent it straight for us. Fang smiled again and put his fist behind him. He slowly began rotating the air around it, increasing the speed every second. When the ice was just about to hit them, he put that rotation around his sword and lunged at the ice. The rotation easily gave the sword enough pressure to shatter the ice, which was scattered about the room. Lith was still looking shocked as Ami jumped up behind her and nailed her in the back with a powerful water whip. She was sent skidding along the floor. "Damn you, how dare you harm my beautiful face". She gritted her teeth.

    "Its over, you've lost. Give up now and I may spare your life", Fang said.?? She bit her lip, blood flowing down.

    "NEVER!!!!. YOU THINK YOU SCUM HAVE WON", she yelled. "Well, its not over and I already know the outcome". She put both her hands on the ground, then started freezing the entire room. Fang grabbed Ami and threw they narrowly avoided being frozen. "Welcome to my playground". She focused on the ground and ice spikes started coming out everywhere. Fang pushed Ami out of the way then dashed forward, evading the spikes with his speed. He got as close as possible then fired an impression of him made out of air at her. She blocked it with her ice shield, then fired more shards at him. He tried to dodge, then realized he was frozen in place. Several of the shards hit him ut nowhere vital. Then, the ice started procedding up his body. He was being frozen solid.

    "No, not like this", he thought. He tried to stop the ice but to no avail. His hands soon froze and his arms were following suit. Lith was laughing.

    "I hope you enjoy being an eternal statue. Dont't worry, I'll make your girlfriend into one as well, after my brother has had his fun with her". She laughed even harder.?? Fang tried to move but now, everything but his head was frozen. It started closing around him, his heart already slowing.

    "I cant let her get hurt. I promised I would protect her and stay with her forever. I cant......". Deep within his body, he felt Exodus's power. He couldnt use it, it wasnt worth the risk.

    "Dont worry, I will make sure you target only her. I can only do this once though. Will you trust me?" he heard Exodus say. He was running out of options. Very well, he would bet everything on Exodus. He nodded, then tapped the power. The ice closed around him. Lith laugh was soon cut short however, as the ice started to crack.

    "Rarhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh". The ice shattered, replaced by a vicious tornado. The winds broke, revealing a transformed Fang. "I am in control now", the transformed Fang said. His hair was now white and spiked, his teeth and nails sharpened. His shirt had been torn apart in the wind, revealing his scared body. Lith spit.

    "So what, you're still gonna die". She fired her ice shards once again. He easily evaded them, then howled. The wind sent her flying, then he charged forward. She sent her ice spikes at him, which he smashed apart with his air claw. He got up close and connected with a powerful kick that sent her over his head and crashing into the wall. "Fine then, try blocking this". She sent another ice column, this one at Ami. Fang jumped in its path and stopped it, but she was now flinging ice shards as well. The shards tore at his skin and a howl echoed the cavern. She then made a huge ice spear, it posied to kill Fang for good. "I win, hahahahahahahah".

    "You wish", came Ami's voice. The water whip hit her in the back of the head, and she stumbled. She looked behind her, to see Ami sending another one at her. She put up her ice shield but was too late. The whip broke through her shield and as she stumbled back, Ami hit her with a huge tidal wave, made from the melted ice. Lith slowly stood up, slightly stunned.

    "This......cant....kill...me", she struggled to get out. She heard the howl but too late. She turned and felt the claws enter her. Fang stood there, his fist embedded in her chest.

    "Goodbye", he said, letting off an airblast inside her. It tore her apart, shooting her vitals out her back. Ami came up and froze her body solid, which Fang smashed with a single strike. Fang let out a deep breath, changing back to himself. Aside from various cuts, he was fine. And aside from a gash on her arm, so was Ami. He gave her a thumbs up, then fell to his knees. "Well, that was a chilling experience. Mind giving me another shirt, im freezing". Ami laughed, handed him the extra shirt he had brought then nodded towards the exit.

    "Come on. I dont think this is finished yet". Fang nodded and got his sword. They both headed into the next tunnel, towards what sounded to be a fierce battle.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1516]Dec 19, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    Shujaka said, "Okay. Then it will be Agni Kai. Willy vs. Berracore vs. me. And I know just the place to do it. But first, we will get our weapons." All three of us went to a local store and bought the weapons we wanted for the fight. Then, Shujaka led us to a secret staircase in Ba-Sing-Se which led to an underground fighting arena. Soon enough, our Agni Kai was set up and we entered the arena.
    -
    The announcer shouted to the huge audience, "This match is an Agni Kai which means that the match doesn't end until there is one man standing and the other men dead! In this corner, Willy Woo. In this corner, Berracore. And in this corner, Shujaka! Let the fight begin!"
    -
    The arena was built of rock, so I didn't have trouble Earth bending. I created an Earth Wall around myself as Berracore sent numerous fireballs at me. I launched my Earth Wall at Berracore but he jumped over it. Shujaka ran at me with a new set of daggers (that don't suck chi). He attempted to stab me but I created "Rock Fists" and blocked the daggers from hurting me.
    -
    Then a fireball whizzed near us and Shujaka turned around and stared at Berracore. Berracore started to kick fire at us with his feet. Shujaka avoided some of the flames until a little of it knicked his ankle, and he fell to the ground.
    -
    Berracore whipped his short sword out and charged at Shujaka. I then launched a boulder at Berracore, and he didn't see it coming. The boulder knocked Berracore in the face, and he fell to the gorund, right next to Shujaka.
    -
    I looked at my girlfriend, Sindra, who was on the outside of the arena. She looked at me and yelled, "Do it! Kill them Willy! Win the fight!" I turned around and Shujaka decked me in the face. Blood escaped my nose but I remained on my feet. Shujaka then hit me in the face again, and this time I fell to the ground. -
    I looked up, and everything was blurry. Shujaka stood over me and raised his daggers. Then I heard someone say, "Stop! Don't kill him! Leave him to me, I want to kill him!" I looked up even though I was still out of it due to being hit in the face by Shujaka. I saw a short man standing in the arena and I noticed who it was. I said, "Oh dear God." It was Orinth!
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    Novoxy

    [1517]Dec 19, 2006
    • member since: 12/10/06
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender, Dagger Assassin, and Swordsmen)
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    -----Mountains of Ba~Sin~Se-----

    I walked out of my tent to see breakfast being served. "Excuse me I'm starving." I say and cut infront of one of the soilders to get the meal. He pushes me. "Do you know who I am?" I say staring him down.

    "I don't care, you can't just cut infront of all of us cause your starving!" The soilder yelled, I smiled.

    "Okay then. I'll just kill you seemings you don't even pay attention to whos in charge here..." I say.

    "Wait..." He squints his eyes. "Oh, sorry sir! I didn't relize it was you. Did you just wake up?" He said.

    "Yeah, good save... I was really gonna kill you." He looked at me scared. I laughed then he laughed. I punched him in the face. "Don't try it again. No breakfast. Now leave or I will kill you." I get my food and thank the chef. I eat then I go back to the cave. I see Rampage and Savage training. "Ehm! What exactly are you doing here... This seems to be a private space for me. Wait... you can stay just let me try something I thought of this last night. Come at me both of you." They shrug then run at me I go into stance clinching my fist and throwing my arms covering my body with electricity. I pull back my hands then push them and move them from in front of me to the back of me lightning following my hands as I bring them back. "Whoa, it worked." They both start attacking the wall but can't penitrate til it falls then they stop. "Haha! It worked!" I yelled jumping around.

    'What the? You thought of that? That was the next thing I was gonna teach you!' Evray said to me in suprise. 'Your better than I thought but I shall teach you how to hold it longer than 5 seconds.'

    "Can you guys leave now? I need to practice this technique some more." I say to Rampage and Savage they both nod and leave throw the small hole, Rampage barely making it through. I go into stance then do the technique at least for 4 hours. I soon have it almost down to 30 seconds that I can hold it for.

    'Okay, since your doing pretty good with that lets move on,' Evray says and I nod. 'Okay so now lets see you need to learn how to learn how to constrict people like Water Benders do just with electricity.' I nod he takes over my body and does the technique he spreads my hands and brings them together then brings them into my chest then pushes out and controls the lightning like a whip then circles it and pulls them in tight making them fading away. 'Okay do that a few times then we will test it on the stilagmites. I do the technique many many times for about 5 hours. I'm sweating and trying as hard as I can to stand up.

    'This...' I say to Evray breathing deep, 'Is hard but I think I can break off a stilagmite then go back to sleep.' I do the technique again and I try as hard as I can to pull of the stilagmite. "Uggghhh!!" I yell still pulling on the stilagmite it starts to crack. "Ahhh Raahhh!" I yell it is now cracked half way. "Yahh!!" I breathe out and then pick up the stilagmite and crush it. "Yes! I did it! I did it!" I yell.

    'Good job,' Evray says, 'Now get some rest.' He says.

    'Thanks.' I say to Evray and walk back into my tent grabbing some food before I go to sleep.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1518]Dec 20, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    I was in an Agni Kai of me vs. Shujaka vs. Berracore. All of sudden Orinth appeared in the arena. I rose back to my feet and Shujaka still had his daggers out. Orinth yelled, "Let me kill him!" Then Orinth looked at Shujaka. Orinth said, "It's you! You have white eys, like me! Are you Shujaka?" Shujaka replied, "Yes I am. I take you are Orinth, and you want to know about our tribe."
    -
    I whipped out my longsword and I put it over Shujaka's throat. I held Shujaka close to my body (like a hostage) and said to Orinth, "If you come any closer then I will kill him. And if I kill Shujaka, then you will never know about your past! Now, drop your katana!" Orinth threw his katana on the floor. I looked up at Orinth and said, "Okay good. Now I want you to-" I was blasted in my hip by a fireball. I dropped Shujaka from my grip and he turned around and swung his daggers at my face.
    -
    I blocked the dagger strikes with my longsword. Then another fireball hit me hip. I struggled to stay on my feet. I then saw where the fireballs were coming from. Berracore was near the edge of the arena shooting fireballs at me. Shujaka then swung his daggers at me once again. This time I wasn't prepeared. One of Shujaka's daggers sliced my shoulder and I fell to the floor. -
    Orinth walked next to Shujaka and said, "Hey there buddy. Now, may I kill him?" Shujaka replied, "Go for it partner." Orinth raised his katana and then all of a sudden the lights in the underground arena shut off. It was pitch dark and I couldn't see a thing. I rolled to my left as I heard Orinth's katana hit the Rock floor that I was lying on. Orinth said, "Willy! Where are you? I know your near here." Slash, slash, slash. Even though Orinth couldn't see he began to slash the floor with his katana, hoping I would be lying there.-
    Then I saw a huge flame coming from the crowd, and I knew it wasn't Berracore becuase Berracore was still somewhere in the arena. The large flame came closer and closer to the arena, and it finally entered the arena.
    -
    I then noticed that the flame was being made by a Fire Bender. The light flickered twice and then they remained on. There standing in the middle of the arena was Wicker, with a huge flame coming from his palm. Wicker looked at me and said, "Hahahahaha you somehow managed to escape prison!"
    -
    Wicker looked at Shujaka and said, "Hey, and there is the white eyed freak!" Orinth stood next to Shujaka and said, "White eyed? I am white eyed also, so you better apoligize, or face death!" Wicker laughed and said, "Hey, look over there!" Wicker pointed at Berracore. Wicker continued, "Man. There are a lot of people in this arena that I want to kill: Willy, Berracore, Shujaka, and Orinth. And now, you will all die!"
    -
    Wicker shot a fireball at me and it hit me in my chest. I fell to the ground but I continued to watch the fight progress. Wicker did a round-house kick and it hit Shujaka it the face. Orinth swung his katana at Wicker but Wicker ducked. Wicker then grabbed Orinth wrist's and he lit his hands on fire. Orinth yelled, "AHHHHH thats so hot!" Orinth fell to the floor at Berracore launched a fireball at Wicker. Wicker caught the fireball and laucnched it back at Berracore's leg. The fireball hit Berracore in the leg, and he fell to the floor.
    -
    Shujaka lunged at Wicker with his daggers. Slice! The daggers went into Wicker's stomach. Wicker fell to the floor.
    -
    I stood up barely and I launched a large boulder at Shujaka. It hit him in the chest and Shujaka fell to the ground. Then I heard Sindra (my girlfriend) scream from the crowd. I turned to look at her and Orinth was holding his katana up to her throat. Orinth said, "Hahaha Willy! You are a dam cockroach that doesn't know when he is beat. I have killed your friend Rexsten. And now, I will kill your girlfriend!"
    -
    Orinth sliced hit katana through Sindra's pale throat. Sindra's blood poured out from her body and she dropped to the floor. Then Sindra just layed there, moitonless and dead. I began to cry and I yelled, "Orinth! You fuc*ing bas*ard I'm gonna kill you! Prepare to die!"
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1519]Dec 20, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
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    liuetenant captian Liao(master fire/lightning bender)
    (Red death)
    -----------------------------------------------------
    a few hours later,
    i mastered the wall creating phase

    "youre better than ithought"i heard obelisk sleep

    "yeah...i get that alot"i said joking around
    "its late..i need to sleep"

    "agreed"replied obelisk
    "u have alot to do tomorrow"

    "like what?"i asked

    "im gunna push you to learn teleportation"
    "and complete control of your lightning whips"
    "also by?? creating a lightning force the shape of you to blow your enemy away"
    "also, i will show you how it feels to turn into my form..once again..just so you can get used to it"

    i reached camp where soldiers welcomed me back
    i entered my tent

    "oh..and tonight,
    youre gunna learn how to run with lightning emitting from you"
    "to make you alot faster"

    i hesitated
    "what?"
    "i need to sleep you know"i said

    "i know"replied obelisk
    "but i will teach you in your dreams tonight"

    "ehh"
    "sounds good to me:i said as i lay own
    i fell asleep

    ------------------dream---------------------

    "time to learn how to run quicker"i heard obelisk say

    "ive been wondering..why dont you teach me how to teleport first?"i replied

    "it will take too long to master in just 1 night"replied obelisk
    "i prefer teaching each thing at a time"
    "now...run around"

    i ran

    "now concentrate...and try to emitt lightning from your back"said obelisk

    i kept trying,
    but every time i tried,
    i encased my whole body in lightning

    "why wont it work?!"i yelled

    "you need to concentrate harder"
    "dont overuse your power"Obelisk said
    "concentrate"

    i tried several more hours, but i couldnt get it

    i stopped running and caught my breath
    i breathed in and out
    then i ran again
    i concentrated as hard as i could
    i looked foward,
    then as i tried to emit lightning from my back,
    i saw myself speed up,
    and i saw everything passed by so fast
    i looked back,
    and saw i was emitting lightning

    "Woo hoo"i exclaimed

    Obelisk smiled
    "good job"
    "time to wake up now,
    and learn teleportation"

    -------------------------end dream-----------------------
    i got up and recieved breakfast from D

    "thanks"i said

    "no problem"replied D
    "hows training going?"he asked

    "pretty good"i replied
    "i learned to create a lightning wall that can last against attacks for about 20-30 seconds"
    "and i learned to run faster by emitting lightning from myself"
    "first thing today,
    im gunna be learning teleportation"

    "ahhh"said D
    "teleportation"
    "a fine work of lightning bending"
    "good luck"D said

    "thanks" i replied

    i got up and returned to my training spot

    "meditate first"
    "it will help you"
    said obelisk
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    C1991

    [1520]Dec 20, 2006
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    Bai Mao: Firebender from EK


    Sorry, i have a GREAT STORY because of this ling wait............... okay no i don't.??by the way,??Nukka??is pronounced (noo-kah)


    who wants to meet with my character?


    okay story:

    running back to the campsite??of my two water tribe acquaintances

    I run back. I will run no more.

    I see?? the campsite, the three earthbenders are causing havoc.

    One has Kanul by the throat with an earth collar. one has Nukka almost underground the other is stealing their supplies

    I firebend at the man who is stealing. He has a huge gash in his arm after that and faints.

    Me: LEAVE THEM ALONE!

    I run at the other one, who has Nukka underground. He lets her go and throws a rock at me. I dodge, and kick him in the face, and uppercut, knocking him out

    I run over to the other and ram him. He still has Kanul by the throat and tightens the collar.

    earthbender: come quietly or else.

    I submit. He releases the collar as he comes; I look at Nukka's face. I see fear... something I always see, but then, something more... could it be understanding? I never had someone look at me that way in a while.

    Earthbender: come on, prisoner.

    ??I look back

    Me: Goodbye.

    As we walk away, I see a flash of light... the earthbenmder falls. I turn around and see Nukka in a firebending stance.

    I look into her eyes and see what I have longed for... understanding...

    I don't know what??comes over??me, but I run over and embrace her... the warmth of a hug, a joy I hadn't felt in a long time


    I guess that's my season finale....

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