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    Vampdude69

    [1441]Dec 16, 2006
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    Xen: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Has returned to his old village home

    Xen walked into the village. It was burned to the ground. There was an old temple, but it had been destroyed by an explosion.

    "This, is my home," he said. He looked on the ground, and he saw a picture. Probably of his family.

    Above the father, "Lukas"
    Above the mother, "Kirse"
    Above the boy, who looked like a brother, "Jax"

    Suddenly, it felt like an explosion was going on inside him. His memory was returning to him. He slumped on the ground.

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    vegnegun

    [1442]Dec 16, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:

    Before I post, I would just like to apologize for my lack of activity in the past few days. I mainly attribute my inability to post due to the following reasons:

    - Homework. School is a killer. Sometimes I stay up until midnight and still don't finish. It's usually a choice between??the RPG and finishing my homework, and you can obviously assume which one I need to do.????The teachers tend to load on the homework right before winter break.

    - Holiday Program. Every year, my school hosts a concert sung by the students of each grade. We sing traditonal and modern holiday songs, and each practice and the performance is mandatory. This takes a lot of time out of my schedule as I find it very superflous that we even have such a program. Read: I HATE IT AND I DON'T GET HOME UNTIL LATE.

    - High School pressure. In my city, if you want to get into a good high school, you have to test into one. For me and the majority of the other students in my grade, it takes a lot of time and effort to build up your skills for these tests and keep up with schoolwork at the same time. I seem to be falling victim to my poor time management skills when I study for these tests.

    - My Health. As a result of school germs going around faster than rumors and my poor constitution, I've lost my voice and caught a terrible cough which in turn caused my sinuses to feel like they were imploding for the past three days. As you can probably guess, this made it very hard to concentrate in school and on what to do in the RPG. My brain still feels kind of fuzzy. x_O;;

    So basically, I'm sorry I haven't been posting. Expect a post from Rin in a few minutes. I plan to delete this once everyone has seen it.

    AND she's been playing Kingdom Hearts 2 in her free time.

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    Rin-tori

    [1443]Dec 16, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Rin just remembered that tomorrow is the anniversary of her brother???s death, also her sixteenth birthday.

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    ???I know???I???ve gotten over my parents, but it was Kazu who helped me through it. And he???s gone too?????? Her voice trailed off.

    ???It???s hard, I know. But all of us, Ami, and Fang too, we???ve all had bad stuff happen to us. Sometimes we can???t control our fate, but you can always have people there to support you. That???s what I needed, and that???s what we all have now.??? Scorch said. He always had some sort of comforting words. ???Sorry, I shouldn???t be acting so childish???I???m going to be sixteen.??? She wiped her eyes.

    ???It???s okay to be childish sometimes. I used to think I had to act strong and mature???but sometimes it???s okay to be a kid, too.???

    ???Yeah. I guess you???re right.???
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    Rin-tori

    [1444]Dec 16, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:
    Rin-tori wrote:

    Before I post, I would just like to apologize for my lack of activity in the past few days. I mainly attribute my inability to post due to the following reasons:

    - Homework. School is a killer. Sometimes I stay up until midnight and still don't finish. It's usually a choice between??the RPG and finishing my homework, and you can obviously assume which one I need to do.????The teachers tend to load on the homework right before winter break.

    - Holiday Program. Every year, my school hosts a concert sung by the students of each grade. We sing traditonal and modern holiday songs, and each practice and the performance is mandatory. This takes a lot of time out of my schedule as I find it very superflous that we even have such a program. Read: I HATE IT AND I DON'T GET HOME UNTIL LATE.

    - High School pressure. In my city, if you want to get into a good high school, you have to test into one. For me and the majority of the other students in my grade, it takes a lot of time and effort to build up your skills for these tests and keep up with schoolwork at the same time. I seem to be falling victim to my poor time management skills when I study for these tests.

    - My Health. As a result of school germs going around faster than rumors and my poor constitution, I've lost my voice and caught a terrible cough which in turn caused my sinuses to feel like they were imploding for the past three days. As you can probably guess, this made it very hard to concentrate in school and on what to do in the RPG. My brain still feels kind of fuzzy. x_O;;

    So basically, I'm sorry I haven't been posting. Expect a post from Rin in a few minutes. I plan to delete this once everyone has seen it.

    AND she's been playing Kingdom Hearts 2 in her free time.


    This I admit. But only to ease the pain of writer's block and feeling like sh!t.
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    Vampdude69

    [1445]Dec 16, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Jax has woken up after he passed out

    Jax woke up. He could move. He stood up, and walked around, and grabbed his broadswords.

    He walked back to the temple, and he saw Fang.

    "Hey old buddy," he said to Fang.
    "Ummm,. hello?" Fang said.

    "Didn't you hear me over there?" Jax said. "I was screaming for help!"
    He looked and he saw Ami. She was upset about something.

    "Ami, whats wrong?" he asked her.
    "I can't tell you," she said.

    "Oh, well, there is something pretty important going on with me in 2 days," he said. He stood up and walked over to stare out at the temple.

    "In 2 days..." his voice changed. "Is the day the Fire Nation took away my family," he said. He dropped his swords, and started to cry. Suddenly, he saw a vision in his head.

    It was a boy laying on the ground, in his old village?
    It looked like...his brother. But it couldn't be.
    Talk to him, a voice said.

    "Are you my brother?" Jax said to the body.

    He waited. He must have been hallucinating.

    Then, he heard one faint word......

    Yes

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    djdfire

    [1446]Dec 16, 2006
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    Ariel (master waterbender). looking for a waterbending master to train her.

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    Ariel was still drifting on the ocean, looking a master to train her. Sighing, she looked out into the horizon thinking until she remembered the name of one particular waterbender.

    "Hmm. Maybe he's still alive. Uh who am I kidding. I've searched everywhere and I still haven't found him yet. Wouldn't be suprised if a man was bending right in front of my face", she complained as she looked out.

    Then all of a sudden she saw a man bending right in front of her. Excited, Ariel raced towards him, thinking of the irony of her words. Thenas she got close she realized that it was a mere illusion. Frustrated, she created a huge wave around her. It raced across the ocean until it just suddenly stopped. Then a amn rose form the water and made the wave disappear in one simple swipe of his finger.

    Ariel??stared at him, her mouth wide open.

    "Umm excuse me? Are you?? the waterbender named Syrak.", Ariel asked curiously. The man looked at her and cme towards her. He then extended her ice slab to where he was and stepped on it, walking towards her slowly.

    "Yes I am. And you must be the daughter of Erica Zufalon", he asnswered. Ariel dropped her her mouth again in shock.

    "Name's Ariel.??How... How did you know?", she uttered.

    " You look just like her. I remember when I first met her. She wanted to train so she could become a better bender and try to even rival the newest Fire Lord. She was about your age about as talanted as you if not just a little stronger. I guess you would like for me to train you?", Syrak stated.

    " Yes." Ariel mumbled.

    "Hmm. I will of course then??be your trainer, but first I would like to how well you bend", Syrak stated as he got into a fighting stance. Ariel got into her own and quicly started to run towards Syrak. She then created a huge wave and tried to attack him with it but he easily deflected it.

    Attack after attack and still Ariel couldn't get a hit in. Frustrated, she started touse the slab of ice to keep her balance. She froze?? ic arond her legs untilit started to rise, covering her up to her neck. Syrak looked at her sternly and then made the ice melt of her.

    "You have a lot to learn Ariel, but I believe that you will be able to do it. But you have to be very focus, persistent, and very resilient, or you will never learn to fully??master this element",Syrak explained.

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    Novoxy

    [1448]Dec 17, 2006
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender, Dagger Assassin, and Swordsmen)
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    -----Near Ba~Sin~Se Mountains-----

    We continue on to the Mountain. I look over my shoulder to see a little group of about 50 people marching fast towards us. "Company," I said smurking a little Rampage laughs.

    "Probably just D and Liao." Rampage says. "Usually is..."

    "Yeah, probably. You know that Liao lost his Earth Bending?" I said. "I guess he owed it to the sun."

    "Oh, yeah I guess so..." Rampage said. "Getting really close."

    "Yeah." I say we can see the path up the mountain. "Spread your feet! We are gonna loose these goons." We start to run and get up to the path. "Okay lets go!"
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    EKAN_92

    [1449]Dec 17, 2006
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    Name : Gare
    Gender:Male
    Nationality: Fire Nation
    Firebendingspecialty: Fire Swords and Fire Whips
    Aperence: 6 foot 2, with black shoulderlength hair, golden eyes and pale skin.
    Black Firebendingarmor without the ugly helmet and a long black cloak with a hood
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1450]Dec 17, 2006
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    red death(master fire/lightning bender)
    (Liao)
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    D and my soldiers and i were catching up to rampage and sparky fast
    but then,
    all of a sudden rampage and sparky and their men started running
    they were trying to lose us

    "run faster!!"i heard D yell to my men
    "Run faster!!"

    but i had an idea
    i sparked up some lightning in my hands and shot it over rampage and sparky
    it hit close to the bottom of the ba sing se mountains
    causing a tiny avalanche

    "itll take a fewminutes to get over that
    which will give us some time"i said to D

    "what about us?"D replied
    "how are we suppose to get over that?"

    "some of the icy snow would be melted by the time we get there,
    but itll be pure icy snow when rampage and sparky get there"
    "also...we both can fire bend right?"i asked
    "we can melt it as we get closer"

    D smiled
    "ok"D said
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    Novoxy

    [1451]Dec 17, 2006
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender, Dagger Assassin, Swordsman)
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    -----Bottom of Ba~Sin~Se Mountain-----

    D or Liao must have shot a lightning bolt at the mountain to make a avalanche fall. "Hey, they must think I can't Fire Bend, haha, I still know a little Fire Bending," I say heating up my hands, "Fire Benders I could use some help!" I say as the front line Fire Benders and I blast our way through the ice. We stand there for a few minutes. "This is taking to long..." I say bringing electricity to my hands "I'll just blow it up!" I say shooting a large amount of electricity at the pile of ice blowing it to pieces. "Okay watch your step!" I say walking over the ice.

    "Haha, what morons." Rampage said laughing, Savage does the same. "They know little about us."

    "Yeah," I said nodding. We continue up the mountain.
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    vegnegun

    [1452]Dec 17, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Scorch just gave Rin some wise words
    ??

    He and Rin stood there silently for what seemed like an eternity when it??the clouds outside parted, but the sun was already setting.??He knew that they wouldn't be able to train today, but maybe they could do it tomorrow. Rin was still wheeping and Scorch looked down at her, not sure of what to say.

    "Rin, I think we should hold off firebending for today," he said. She looked up and him and had a confused look.

    "No, I want to train," she said. "I'll be fine."

    "I should've said tonight," said Scorch, "this day just flew passed us, didn't it?"

    Rin nodded, "yeah,??I guess we should get some sleep." Scorch yawned then nodded.

    "We should," said Scorch as he walked over to the spot he's been sleeping at for the past three nights. Rin followed him and lyed down next to him, resting??her head on his chest. He cheeks had become red from all her crying, but she fell asleep fast on top of Scorch again.

    "Ugh, how pathetic," said Pyro in Scorch's head, "yuck."?? Scorch shook his head and nodded off the sleep thinking, "one more day."

    Edited on 12/17/2006 10:20am
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1453]Dec 17, 2006
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    WooHoo i am finally caught up! That was a LOT of reading! Well expect another pimpin' WillyWoo post...and possibly the return of Spike's crew (they have been gone for a while)...
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1454]Dec 17, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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    I am currently in a metal cell, captured in the capital (temple) of Ba-Sing-Se. I was just reunited with my girlfriend, Sindra. Sindra and I had been dating for a long time, back in the days that I lived in Ho-Fi-Keep.
    -
    A Fire Nation prison guard walked over to my cell and he saw me kissing Sindra. The guard looked at us and said, "Hahaha D and Liao (RedDeath) were right. You two are lovebirds..."
    -
    I replied, "Lovebirds? Get lost man. Can't you see I'm busy!" The Fire Nation prison guard opened the cell and said, "If you try to hurt me I will kill you." I stood up and the guard stared me down. I raised my fist. The guard lit flames from his hands and said, "Willy. Don't do it! You wouldn't want your girlfriend to die, would you? Or maybe I will just tell her your past experiences!"
    -
    I yelled, "No!" The guard hit me in the face my lip cut open a little. Sindra screamed. The guard grabbed Sindra and he brought her out of my cell. Sindra was then taken away by other guards, most likely to a new cell. The guard kicked me in the chest and then he ripped the blue amulet off from my neck. I yelled, "That amulet was given to me by my fahter, before he died! Please, give it back!" The guard laughed and said, "No. I like it on me." The guard put the amulet around his neck.
    -
    The guard continued, "Okay boys. Bring in Willy's new cell-mate." A man was thrown into my room. The man had white eyes, he was very exausted, and he had on his prison uniform.
    -
    I looked at the man and said, "Shujaka! Is that you!" Shujaka looked up at me, "Willy Woo! Hey, I haven't seen you in forever!" I replied, "Yeah. Hey, I got news for you. I met a guy from your tribe. He has white eyes, his name is Orinth. We were searching for you, but obviously we couldn't find you."
    -
    Shujaka replied, "Yeah. Well, where is Orinth now?" I replied, "Long story. But to make it short, he betrayed me. So, I am no longer his friend. What happened to you?"
    -
    Shujaka said, "Rampage and Sparky...They attacked me and stole my daggers. I-I-I was hunting down a man named D, as well as the Earth King. And, well...I failed miserably. Sparky stole my daggers."
    -
    I responded, "Well, we will escape from this cell some day. When...if, we do escape...I will not leave Ba-Sing-Se without Sindra and Berracore. They are my friends. They are close to me." Shujaka replied, "Yes. Well I was sentenced to death. But, Azula thought that I was hiding a secret from her so now I am sentenced to life in prison..."
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    Kathleen2006

    [1455]Dec 17, 2006
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    Fang tells me not to blame myself, but how can I not, it happened on my birthday, of all times for them to have died.

    Night fell and I went to bed but it felt weird not having Fang there to hold me and it took forever for me to fall asleep.

    >>>>>>

    I looked around and suddnly saw my mother standing in front of me.

    "Mama?" I said

    "Yes, sweetie, I needed to tell you something" she said "its about time you told him the truth about when we passed." she said

    "but mama, that's so hard for me"

    "I know, but he will make it easier... I know he will take care of you that's why I wanted you to be with him... he loves you" mama paused "I haven't seen you this happy in years and your bending has never been this strong" mama smiled

    "I know you can do this Ami, it may be hard, but it will bring you that much closer to him and maybe one day you two can have a family of your own and really make us proud" papa said

    "Papa..." my voice trailed as tears welled in my eyes "I'll tell him" I said

    "We love you, Ami" Mama said

    "I love you too" they hugged me as I cried

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I woke up with tears in my eyes. I had to tell Fang, tonight or I would never tell him. I walked to his room and went inside to see him asleep.

    I felt that I couldn't wake him up so I just took advatage of the extra space on his bed and laid down with him and went back to sleep I'd tell him when I woke up

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    ISpeakTheTruth

    [1456]Dec 17, 2006
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    Syrak (Master Waterbender) Training Ariel

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    "But of course before we start with the training we need to see how well you are at defending yourself. It's one thing to be able to attack but an entirely different thing to stop the attacks." Said Syrak right before bending water out of the air about the length of his body and placed it like a window infront of himself, then he began to send fist sized balls of water towards Ariel that froze the moment they left the larger water body.

    Ariel was able to block most of them save for the last that struck her in the chest sending her on her back. Be for she could recover Sryak bent more water from the air into a large water whip and lashed it around Ariels legs dragging her back towards Syrak. "In the time it took me to drag you back to me you should have been able to break the whip and regain your stance!" Syrak said less than happy then extended his right??arm towards Ariel and she began to float into the air well about Syrak himself. "So here you are floating around what do you do now?"

    "This!" Ariel shouted as she sent as much water as she could bend towards Syrak's face in the process Syrak lost his hold and Ariel dropped back to the ground she went to capitalize but Syrak had recoved by the time she was able to do anything. Extending his left arm Ariel went flying backwards at least tweenty feet onto the beach. Syrak used his right hand to motion the waves near Ariel to flow into??and soak??the sand around her then making a motion with his hand formed a gian hand made of sand and used to to grab Ariel's entire body??he finally made one last motion and froze the water within the hand making it solid.

    "Well I underestimated you, you were actually able to strike me. It normally takes my students months before they could even hope to do that." So do you really want to be stronger? To be better than you are now?

    "Yes" Ariel chocked out still being sqweezed by the large hand.

    "Very well!" Shouted Syrak making one large gesture that broke the hand off of Ariel. "First things first in order to become a powerful bender you must know the most important thing that you must always have."

    "What's that?" Asked Ariel.

    "That my dear...Is a good helping of rice." Syrak said with a smile as he handed her a plate of rice. "We will begin training soon but for now enjoy the rice..."

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    Novoxy

    [1457]Dec 17, 2006
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender, Dagger Assassin, and Swordsmen)
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    -----Ba~Sin~Se Mountains-----

    We start to walk up the Mountain and it becomes night fast. "Wow it got dark fast." Savage said looking up at the pitch black sky.

    "Yeah it did." Rampage said looking at me, "We gonna set up camp?"

    "Ummm," I said looking behind us to see D and Red Death setting up camp themselves. "Yeah, set up camp. We wake at 4 to continue, so they don't catch up." Savage and Rampage nod.

    "Okay men, set up camp!" Rampage yells Savage rummiging through his stuff to get out the stuff needed for him to sleep.

    "I'm gonna train wanna come guys?" I say to Rampage and Savage, Rampage says shakes his head no.

    "Sure." Savage replies we start to walk over to a open space. I get in fighting stance and Savage charges at me. "Ahhh!!" He yells swinging his swords at me I'm jumping back to avoid the attacks I start to reach the edge so I jump over him. I pull out my katana and slide my hand across it igniting it with lightning.

    "Com'n" I say getting in stance Savage charges again I swing the sword and it shoots electricity out of it. Savage unexpectingly jumping over it and slashing in front of me. "Good job, you would have got me but hey you missed." I say side jumping over him putting my katana to his neck. "I win. Wish to go again? This time I'll go easy and use the daggers."

    Savage shakes his no and says, "No, don't go easy on me." I pull out 2 of my daggers one in each hand I do a front flip bicycle kick shooting lightning out of my feet and clashing my daggers together igniting them too with lightning. Savage dodges all my attacks. "Let me get serious," he says and charges at me. "Prepare to lose!" He yells at me and jumps swinging at me I jump out of his way. He lunges at me again and I move again he does this for a few minutes and then I decide to attack this time he lunges and I jump up over him grab his head and bring him up above me then I send him flying into some rock. I charge up to him he hops up and charges at me and jumps sticking me slightly in the back saying, "I win." He puts his swords away.

    "Haha nice, Savage." I say smiling, "let's go back to camp and get some rest."

    "Okay," he says following me back over to camp. We get there and go to our seperate tents. I put my sword and daggers away go to sleep.

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    I see the Dragon again in my dream. "Hello?" I say.

    "Welcome back," Evray says. "How are you doing?" He says laughing.

    "Well, actually fine until now." I lunge at him taking out my katana "Yahhh!" I jump up and he blasts lightning from up out of the ground and hits me. "Ahh!" I scream falling down to the ground.

    "Hahahaha! Did you seriously think you could kill me?" He says, I get up and try again this time he shots from his mouth I dogde it and jump on his head.

    "I give one last chance to let me control you when I become you or I will slay you." I say seriously.

    "You won't do it, you need me! If you kill me there is no way you will beat Scorch." He says, I respond.

    "I doubt I can beat Scorch with you, so it won't make a difference if I kill you or not." I say lying knowing I will at least be able to do some effect damage to Scorch with Evray.

    "If you wish to control me you can." He says.

    "No, I want you to serve me as my servent. You will take over my body still letting me control you when I please." I say to Evray.

    "There is no way I will do that!" He says and I start to press the sword through his skull. "Okay! Just do not do away with me! I will serve you my life as to that is only what I owe you for sparing me."

    "Thank you." I say.
    Edited on 12/17/2006 2:20pm
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    vegnegun

    [1458]Dec 17, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Scorch had just fallen asleep, Rin's head on his chest

    Scorch is in a white plain and see's to people in the distance, he remembered them from his previous dream. They were his parents. "Mom, dad?" asked Scorch like the last time.

    "Yes, my son," said his father, "I can't believe how strong you've gotten." A smile appeared on his face.

    "You've gotten so big," said his mother, "I remember the last time I saw you, I was able to hold you in my arms." A tear ran down Scorch's cheek, just being able to hear there voices. Just being able to hear how proud of him they were.

    "Don't listen to them," roared Pyro, "they lie!" His figure appeared behind Scorch and began to whisper into his ear, "they are glad they died. They are happy they didn't have to deal with you. You are a disappointment to them Scorch. They'd rather have Obsidian than you." Rage began to boil deep within Scorch, and he took a fire in his hand, which was blue, and whirled around, blasting Pyro into small red particles. "You can't get rid of me that easily," said Pyro. The particles faded and Scorch turned around and looked at his parents, who were still standing there.

    "I'm proud of you Scorch," said his father, "you have gained control of Pyro." Their figures disappeared.

    "Mom, dad!" exclaimed Scorch. He ran in their direction, but felt someone grab his hand and stop him. He was yanked around and was face to face with a man he had never seen before, but was very familiar with.

    "Stay away from my sister!" exclaimed the man. He kicked Scorch down to the floor. Scorch immediatley recognized this man as Rin's older brother Kazu. "You fire nation scum!" He took a ball of fire in his hand.

    "No," barked Scorch, "I love Rin."

    "Well that's too bad," said Kazu, "because she doesn't love you!" He hurled the fire ball at Scorch and a bright light blinded him.

    Scorch woke up and saw that Rin was still on him. "It was just a dream," he whispered to himself. "It was only a dream." He closed his eyes and lyed back again, and waited for morning.

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    avatarforte

    [1459]Dec 17, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 401
    Fang-Airbender

    -Currrently sleeping-

    I felt something warm next to me, so I woke up and saw Ami lying next to me. I didnt even flinch, since I knew she would do this. I smiled, brushed some of her hair away from her face and kissed her forehead. I then got up, put my shirt on and took my sword and went outside. It was still early, so there was no one else around. It was the fifth day and tomorrow, we would be heading off to the biggest battle of our lives. If someone had asked me 2 weeks ago if I would die for this fight, I probably woulda told them yes. But now, I knew I couldnt die. I couldnt leave Ami, no matter what. I shook my head. "Can't lose focus now", I thought. "I need to make sure I'm 100% for this battle." I cleared my mind and jumped to a seculded place. There, I unleashed everything I had. I unleashed full power, the air cutting deep cuts in the rocks, blowing everything out of my path. I tested every new move I learned, ever trick I had come up with. When I was finished, everything was either damaged or destroyed. I fell to one knee, my breath coming in huffs and puffs.

    "Don't you think that was a little overboard?" I heard Exodus ask.

    "No, I'm making sure I can win without having to use your power if I can. No offense, but I cant risk going berserk again." Exodus waited silently as I asked her something. "You promise to avoid giving me your power at any cost" She nodded. I smiled. "Ah, good. Yeesh, I need to lighten up. Ive been to serious lately." I stretched out and went back to the temple. Upon my arrival, I saw Ami sitting off by herself near the cliff edge. I glided over to her and sat down beside her. "You alright?"

    "Fang, I.....I have something I want to tell you." I looked at her, surprised by how much pain was in her voice.

    "Go ahead, I'm listening". She looked down at her feet, as if feeling gulity for something then looked back at me.

    "My birthday is in 4 days". She took a hard swallow, as if struggling to find the words she wished to speak. "Its also the day my parents died." My heart froze. I was lost for words. For once, I didnt know what to say.

    (Ami, take this from here, Im experering writers block)
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    Kathleen2006

    [1460]Dec 17, 2006
    • member since: 07/06/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 76

    Ami (waterbender)

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    I couldn't think, all I wanted was to feel Fang's arms around me. I began to sob uncontrolably and got my wish as he wisked me up in his arms and we went to a secluded spot. He held me in his lap and let me cry, I'm sure he couldn't think of a word to say... what was there to say after what I dropped on him

    "Hush Ami, its going to be okay... you have to let go of the past..." he whispered as I felt him run his fingers through my hair as I had decided to take it down.

    "Fang, why did they have to die on my birthday?" I demanded in tears "Why?"

    "I guess we'll??never know, Ami... the only thing we can know is that they loved you... and they died loving you" Fang sighed as he felt me calm

    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

    Fang looked down to see Ami asleep in his arms.

    'Poor girl, she has been through a rough time, but now I guess it's time for her to finally be really taken care of' Fang thought as he carried her back to the temple and placed her in his bed

    "Rest, Ami, I'll be here when you wake up" he whispered

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