We're moving Forums to the Community pages. Click here for more information and updates.

Avatar: The Last Airbender Forums

Nickelodeon (ended 2008)

Avatar RPG*: Create your own Bender

  • Avatar of Vampdude69

    Vampdude69

    [1681]Jan 13, 2007
    • member since: 09/25/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 1,173

    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master

    PART 2 OF 3 PART SEASON FINALE


    ??Jax has just been defeated by Dark Jax, and has to find Fang to save him

    ??Jax stood up and was still scared from learning he can firebend. He tried to forget about it so he ran up the stairs and back outside. Dark Jax was long gone. He connected spirits and saw he was with??Rin. Fang was possesed, but Rin was defeated.??He ran fullspeed in that direction. Soon, he reached his destination. He sank into the ground and came up next to Dark Fang.

    Jax drew his broadswords and pointed them at Fang.

    "Don't start the party without me," he said.

    Edited on 01/14/2007 9:42am
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of Vampdude69

    Vampdude69

    [1683]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 09/25/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 1,173

    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Jax is facing off against Dark Fang

    Part 3 of the Three Part Season Finale

    Jax pointed his broadswords at Fang and looked at his eyes. There was so much hatred and anger in them. It was his. It belonged to Jax. It was his anger.

    "So Dark Jax," Jax said aloud. "Why don't you come out of that body and fight me? Don't hide behind Fang like a coward."
    Fang sneered at him and took out his sword. Jax smiled and took two steps to the left as did Fang. Fang followed his every move.

    Jax smiled and charged at Fang, and Fang swung his sword and nailed Jax with a blast of wind, sending him flying. Jax mad a wall of earth that caught him and propelled him towards Fang. Fang ducked under Jax and Jax shot rocks back at Fang, who destroyed them with airbending.

    Jax grunted. This was going to be a tough fight.

    He crossed his broadswords over each other and walked towards Fang, who shot a huge tornado of air at him. Jax bended earth around his feet, and he stood his ground. Fang kept blasting him with air and Jax bended his feet to the ground. Suddenly, Fang stopped, then Jax hit him in the arm with a rock and he dropped his sword. Jax unbended his feet and ran at him and jumped and was about to crush him with his swords, when Fang moved and hit Jax across the face with a wind blast. Jax rolled on the ground, and stood up. Fang continued to pummel him with air blasts.

    Should I? Jax thought to himself. He looked down at Rin's body. No.

    He crouched into his stance, and launched a huge boulder at Fang who dodged it. Jax stepped back, and he looked at Fang again.

    It's my only hope.

    Jax bended four rocks at Fang who blocked them all. Fang grabbed his sword and sent Jax flying with a wind blast. Jax just lay there on the ground.

    "Ha," Dark Fang said. "It's over."

    He turned, and suddenly he was hit in the back by.......a fire blast.

    He turned around and Jax was standing there with a dark grin on his face. He spun and fire flew out of his swords and nailed Fang. He flew back, and he stood up. He looked stunned. Jax bended a rock and set it on fire, and launched it at Fang, and it pierced him against a wall. Fang looked at him.

    "So you finally worked up the courage to firebend," he said. 'You just defied yourself."
    "I don't care," Jax said. "All I want to do is finish you." He shot a wave of fire at Fang's face, but Fang deflected it with air, and shot it back at Jax. He had no time to block it, and he was sent flying back. Blood dripped from his??face. He could feel someone approaching, so he bended himself into the ground, and just picked a random place. He shot up in a field.

    Fire causes pain. It always will. Fire killed my family, as I just have.

    That is my finale

    Edited on 01/14/2007 4:58pm
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of Rin-tori

    Rin-tori

    [1684]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 08/26/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 377

    Rin (Firebender)??

    Was knocked out by Fang while he was possessed by Dark Jax.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Rin was on the sand, her feet in the water, her old self. She was alone this time, but she wasn???t surprised.

    She started drawing pictures in the sand with her finger, enjoying the beach atmosphere, when she looked up and saw someone falling out of the sky. It was strange, but then she noticed something: The person falling was herself, Rin,??but it was the way she was now.

    As she stared, she wondered how she could have let herself look like that???but it was strange to see herself???falling like that.

    Suddenly she felt the ground under her break, no, she just fell through???and she was the one falling. She was under the dark water, and she couldn???t breathe. As her fall slowed, she hit bottom, and she opened her eyes. She still couldn???t breathe, but somehow she didn???t need to breathe. She couldn???t see a thing.

    ???Where the hell am I?!??? She yelled into the empty void.

    She heard the distant beating of wings in the distance. She tried to firebend so she could see, but it was no use.

    The floor suddenly started to glow red, and??Rin was surrounded by a ring of fire. She couldn???t escape, but at least she could see.

    ???Who???s there?! Show yourself!??? Rin demanded. Then a familiar figure materialized, one Rin had stopped in the past many times. It was Pyro.

    ???I???ve found you, at last.??? He said.

    ???What? Why are you here? Did something happen to Scorch????

    ???I needed to find you, but I didn???t expect you in this state. At least it???s easier to make contact with you while you???re unconscious.???

    ???Yeah, yeah, I got my clock cleaned???what do you care? Why are you here? Just tell me!??? She demanded again.

    ???Scorch is in prison. He was arrested for firebending after that man who wanted to marry your friend was banished. The way he is now, he won???t survive a few days. Even he has his limits.???

    ???So you want me to break him out of jail? But then I???ll be arrested too!???

    ???Listen, human, if he dies, I die too. You had better think of something, for both our sakes.???

    With that, he disappeared, and Rin waited as the world sunk back into darkness.

    Edited on 01/14/2007 4:16pm
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of avatar990

    avatar990

    [1685]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 01/14/07
    • level: 1
    • rank: Weatherman
    • posts: 25
    Name:Ace Bender:All Trade:Freedom Fighter Age:400,000,000,000,000 height:at this age smaller than Yoda Other info:Recently forgot to take his medications Comments:Thats one old freedom fightering Medgit
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of TheGreatAvatar

    TheGreatAvatar

    [1686]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 11/07/06
    • level: 4
    • rank: Thighmaster
    • posts: 517
    avatar990 wrote:
    Name:Ace Bender:All Trade:Freedom Fighter Age:400,000,000,000,000 height:at this age smaller than Yoda Other info:Recently forgot to take his medications Comments:Thats one old freedom fightering Medgit


    wow..dude...im not even gonna bother
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of avatar990

    avatar990

    [1687]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 01/14/07
    • level: 1
    • rank: Weatherman
    • posts: 25
    Name: Jack Age:12 Professtion: Avatar Hair Color:Black Bender:All Other Weapons: Stsff,Sword,ect Animal Guide: Flying Dragon Best Move: Breathing Fire Masters: The Dragon of the west,Toph,Katara,and Some Airbender from the east who survived the invation
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of Kathleen2006

    Kathleen2006

    [1688]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 07/06/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 76

    Ami (Waterbender)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I ran up just as Jax hit the ground, I knew it was up to me.

    "Exodus... are you still with me?" I asked

    "I never left" Exodus replied

    "Good, 'cause I may need your help"

    "May... he just beat Jax and Rin..."

    "Okay, then we're going to have to do this together... but let me try on my own first"

    I walked in as Jax took out running... I noted that I might have to heal him later if my sister didn't.

    "Hey, why do you want him?" I demanded

    "Why should I answer to you?" Dark Jax asked me

    "Because I will be the one to beat you"

    We went at it at those words

    "Big words for a little girl, but do you have the moves to back it?"

    "Yes" I replied

    It didn't look good as I was dodging not only air, and Earth, but fire as well... I looked up at the full moon and smirked that would be my advantage.

    "Hey... have did you ever happen to glance at what phase the moon was in... I'm surprised you can firebend under a full moon" I smirked

    "I don't care about a full moon... I'm not going to lose to a girl"

    "Heh... your pretty tough" I fired a few ice pelits at him to through him off his balace, but it wasn't working

    "Great... this guy is like nothing I've fought before..."

    I was soon against a wall, literally

    "Exodus... I can't do this alone... please lend me what strenght you have"

    "Of course, Ami"

    I felt renewed, but more than that... it was like nothing I had ever felt.

    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of avatar990

    avatar990

    [1689]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 01/14/07
    • level: 1
    • rank: Weatherman
    • posts: 25
    Name:spoogen mcfloogen Age:12 Sex:girl Facial Hair:little bit Bender:Fire Statments:Some people mistake her for a guy Comments:high
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of avatarforte

    avatarforte

    [1690]Jan 14, 2007
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 401
    Fang-Airbender(At Long Last, MY FINALE!!!!!)

    -Fighting Dark Jax in his mind-

    Buildings exploded as myself and Dark Jax collided. Oblivious to the battle outside, Id been fighting as hard as I possibly could against him. My fist was blocked by his knee, his elbow by mine. I jumped back, firing air blast after air blast at him. He responded with lightning blasts and earthbending rocks. I dashed in behind my attacks, and landed a kick to his skull. He recovered quickly and smashed his fist into my gut. His blow sent me flying into one of the few remaining buildings in the area. As I struggled to get up, a barrage of lighting and stone bombaded my position. I managed to deflect the lightning, but the majority of the rocks smashed against me. Dark Jax laughed as my battered body struggled to rise.

    "You see, even in your own mind, you cannot defeat me. And your friends arent faring to well either." A large image appeared, apparently what I could see with my eyes. Rin was down, Jax was down and only Ami was left. Dark Jax laughed again. "For your information, Im using the power I stole from your precious spirit to crush your friends. And I must say, the transformation it did to my body is impressive. So, would you prefer to watch her fall as well or shall I do you the favour of dispatching you first?" He turned towards me just to catch my fist, covered in the air, smashing into his face. He flew back, landing a good 50 feet away.

    "Stop your bragging, this isnt a talking contest. And as for my friends, you'd better look closely. They arent that weak". He spun towards to image too see that Rin had escaped, Jax had inflicted damage, with firebending and Ami was releasing Exodus's spirit power.

    "Impossible. This cant be happening". I launched more air blasts at him, running towards him as I did. I then sent a wind copy of me at him, then jumped and fired a massive air blast as well. He countered the air copy with a rock wall but didnt see the air ball that sent him flying. He pulled out his broad swords as I sent him flying and blasted himself back towards me. "How you gonna block these without your sword?" he yelled, swinging down on me. I smirked and blocked them with my forearms. His expression was all I needed to know he hadnt expected that. I blew him off and slashed at his chest. He managed to evade it, mostly. A bloody wound appeared on his upper right shoulder.

    "Did you think I wouldnt be able to block those?" I raised my arms, and showed him my arms, surronded my rotating winds. "Ive prepared for anything. You can't beat me." I got in position to attack again.

    "Heh, hahaha..hahahahahahahahahaaha!!!" he laughed, his entire body shaking, his eyes open wide with insanity. "Idiot, you cant kill me. Im linked directly to Jax. The only way for me to die is if he does. Im invincible." He laughed again. I smiled again. "DONT GET COCKY ON ME BOY!!!!!!!" he said as he lunged at me.

    "So, I cant kill you huh. Well, what about hurting you?" I blew him back and he got up again. I was tiring. I knew and he knew that the next attack would be the last. I gathered as much air in my palm, rotating it as fast as I could. I saw him charging lighting in his hand as well.

    "You think Id give up all this power? You will never expel me from this body....NOT EVER". He burst forward and I followed his lead. I rotated the air to the point that it was cutting my own hand. I thrust it out, as did he with the lighting ball. They smashed and the resulting shockwave tore everything apart. Niether of us were gaining an advantage. He smirked and poured more power into his lightning ball. "I congragulate you boy, on putting up such a good fight but now, its over." I looked to image of Ami and my body fighting. She....was winning. I smiled and my relaxtion came back. He raised an eyebrow and looked to the image. His eyes widened with shock and that was all the distraction I needed. Power flowed into my attack.

    "Get out of my BODY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled, the air orb matching my fury. He looked back to see the air blow through his lightning ball. A massive explosion resulted. I flew back, skidding along the ground. I sat up, looked at Dark Jax and smiled. "I win. shorty". Dark Jax had been blown to bits, all except his torso and head. And even those were torn apart.

    "Damn you, Ill be back. And then, youll all regret it". His voice faded with his essence. I felt the connection, as my mind and body reunited. I blacked out.

    ------
    I awoke to find Ami and Jax standing over me. I sat up, then winced as my body screamed agony at me. I felt my face and found a scar, procedding from my upper right temple, down over my eye and stopping just beneath it.

    "Who gave me the scar special?" Ami, tears in her eyes, hugged me and I returned it. Jax gave me a thumbs up, as he leant against a wall.

    "Dark Jax?" he asked. I shook my head.

    "I couldnt kill him, but hes severely injured. He wont be back for a while. I felt a warm and familar presence return to me. "Welcome back Exodus. I owe you one." The wolf simply returned the thanks with a nod. Everything was back to the way it was. "Now then, Id like to find Scorch and Rin but right now, I need to.....". I was out before I could even finish my statment.

    (Sorry, but tests and other things delayed it but its complete at last. And for the new people, STOP POSTIN!!!!!!!)
    Edited on 01/19/2007 12:10pm
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of AEtherBlue

    AEtherBlue

    [1691]Jan 15, 2007
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 5
    • rank: Caveman Lawyer
    • posts: 294
    ?? Talho - EarthBender TEH FINLLE!!
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Just ran into a fimiliar face.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "Orha! Your Alive!" Shido yelled out, looking at the small boy, I walked forward.

    "Shido, Shido it's good to see you, I needed-" I fell to my knees. Shido grabbed me and held me up. "I guess I need to take it slow for a little wile." I gripped my leg in pain. I tried to stand up, but failed.

    "Dont move, your going to hurt yourself more." shido said, worried. I smiled.

    "Don't worry,"I patted my hand on his head."I'm not so fragile." I get up and start to limp over to a rock. I make it a few steps and collapse. shido rushes to me.

    "See? Your hurt. You need to hea-" Shido stopped.


    (MORE TO COME)
    Edited on 01/15/2007 1:33am
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of Lord-darkboy

    Lord-darkboy

    [1692]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 10/11/06
    • level: 10
    • rank: Holy Level 10!
    • posts: 1,237
    i'm starting to get impatient so pls finish you finales so we can all start again
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of Howlin_W0lf

    Howlin_W0lf

    [1693]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 01/12/07
    • level: 1
    • rank: Weatherman
    • posts: 2
    yeah i've actually been waiting about a week now just for season three to start so i can join
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of ThatLostGuy

    ThatLostGuy

    [1694]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 08/23/06
    • level: 11
    • rank: Red Shirted Lt.
    • posts: 2,484
    lol everyone knows that I hate it when people fill up posts with random stuff. But, I agree with Darkboy and our newest member, Howlin_Wolf. Rin, Fang, and Ami...there are 5 posts left until the Season3 begins...so I suggest all 3 of you write one long finale so space won't be wasted. Also, Talho you still have to finish your finale. Just edit Post#1691 and finish your finale there, saving more space. SO FINISH YOUR FINALES!!!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING AT LEAST 2 MONTHS, LITERALLY!!!
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of vampking06

    vampking06

    [1695]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 01/18/07
    • level: 7
    • rank: Talk Show Host
    • posts: 1,112

    Im in for season 3 so ill get started on my character. i havent read the whole 85 pgs, so could some firebenders fill me in on whats goin on.

    Name: Shang Xiou (aka Brimstone)

    Height: 6'1

    weight: 185 lbs

    Sex: Male

    Hair: red

    eyes: blue

    age: 18

    type of bender: fire

    personality: rebellious and sometimes unstable. however am an honerst man, despite my criminal record

    specialties: smoke screen, flame thrower, brimstone punch, and learning fire tornado. also skilled with a scmitar and tridents. also skilled at taekwondo and stealth moves.

    history: born in the capital city of the fire nation, i grew up mostly on the streets. after losing my father at the age of 6, my mother pretty much spent her time working to keep us going. i learned how to steal on the streets, even learning how to steal from the monarchs.??however, i was captured when i was 16 and pressed into service for??6??years. at first i aided prince zuko and general iroh in their search for the avatar, but after their failure, i was sent to new ozai where ive??been for 2 years. i have heard of the firebender rebel,??general scorch,??and have escaped to go search for him to find a way out of this prison.

    Edited on 01/18/2007 7:49pm
    Edited 3 total times.
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of Rin-tori

    Rin-tori

    [1696]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 08/26/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 377

    Rin (Firebender)

    Finale!!

    Rin just got her ass kicked, and got a message from Pyro while she was unconscious. Note, this comes after Ami???s fight.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    ??

    When Rin came to, she was aching all over. She honestly expected it, after having faced Zeth and Jax before. But Dark Jax was especially fearsome this time around.

    ???Oh yeah???speaking of Dark Jax, where the hell did he run off to now???? Rin groaned as she struggled to her feet. She could bear with the pain for the time being.

    ???I guess he???s gone.??? She muttered to herself. ??????but Pyro seemed???well, worried, if that???s the right word???I think I should try to help Scorch somehow. If he???s in jail, I wonder what he did???maybe someone thought he was a spy for the Fire Nation, that???s fairly plausible since he is a Firebender?????? Rin reasoned.

    She heard voices around the corner, and darted behind a partially wrecked statue to hide.

    ???Man, did Sakai catch a culprit.??? One of them said. It was a young man, in Military dress. He was obviously part of the Water Tribe militia. Another militant was beside him in similar uniform.

    ???Yeah, he must have been trying to bring down the North Pole from the inside, like what happened at Ba Sing Se. Good thing we caught him. Now he???s going to die for sure.???

    ???I just wonder how a firebender could have got in so easily! We didn???t even notice someone so suspicious, with his hair you could spot him a mile away.???

    They both laughed, and continued their discussion as they nonchalantly passed the mostly destroyed plaza. Rin was surprised they didn???t seem to care.

    ???Sh*t???now Scorch is in jail for firebending? Just his luck, too?????? Rin muttered.

    As she pulled up her hood, just noticing how freezing she was after laying on the ice for hours, she thought of a daring plan: break Scorch out of jail. It just hit her.

    ??????but if I???m caught, I???ll be in jail too?????? Rin shook her head violently. ???No, no way! If I can do it, I???ll be able to save him!???

    Rin dashed out of the plaza and noticed one of the guys she had seen earlier, by himself. He was obviously incompetent, he had no weapon on him, at least from Rin???s view, and he didn???t seem that strong. In fact, he looked scrawny.

    Rin eyed him, and continued on her seemingly insane plan.

    She walked up to him nonchalantly and fell flat on her face.

    ???Ow! Oh, crap?????? She said, faking pain.

    ???Are you okay???? He bent down to help her up.

    Rin looked up at him, and brought his head down onto her knee. He collapsed, unconscious.

    Rin proceeded to take his parka, and a small knife he had in a holster on his leg. It was big enough to wear over her jacket. She dragged his unconscious body to the plaza, and hid him behind a statue that had seen better days. He was going to be cold without his parka, but with his heavy clothing, he would survive.

    She tied her hair into a black scarf she found in the pocket of the parka, so her blonde hair would be out of sight. She pulled up her hood, and proceeded to follow the other militant she had seen earlier, who proceeded to the guardhouse of the military headquarters. The guard let her pass without so much as a glance. Security was loose.

    ???And they wonder why a Firebender got so far?????? Rin thought.

    Inside was a path of icy corridors, finally leading to a room with doors on both sides and a sign in the middle, with lots of comfortable furniture. Sort of a rec room, Rin thought.

    She proceeded through the door marked ???HOLDING CELLS??? in bold black letters. As she proceeded down the hallway to the door at the other end, another man burst through the door and pushed past her to get to the door, but Rin???s hood fell off and as he looked back to apologize, he noticed that she was a girl. Not a soldier.

    ???Hey, what are you doing here? Why are you impersonating a soldier?!??? He demanded.

    Rin stood up, and charged at him, punching him as hard as she could in the stomach. He collapsed in pain, and she proceeded to take his short sword on his belt, and his parka.

    ???Sorry, but I???m on a mission here.??? She thought.??She decided to melt a hole in the wall, and threw him into it. She melted the ice above it, and water came pouring down only to freeze over the hole.

    ???I think I???m starting to like the cold here?????? Rin thought.

    Not wasting any time, she proceeded down the hallway and through the door, pulling up her hood. It was simple enough to get into the building, but getting Scorch out would be a problem.

    ???I???ll use the parka to sneak him out as a soldier???hopefully this will work out well?????? Rin thought.

    The prison wasn???t what she had imagined when she walked in. Icy cells were isolated, and each had their own corridor, spaced far apart. The cold was almost unbearable, but Rin knew how to stay warm. Scorch in his current state was another matter.

    She was going to save him no matter what.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    ??

    Okay people, that???s all for Rin???s finale. :3

    Oh, and by the way n00bs, STOP F**KING POSTING!!!

    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of vampking06

    vampking06

    [1697]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 01/18/07
    • level: 7
    • rank: Talk Show Host
    • posts: 1,112
    ^^ i may be a n00b, but i want to be a part of this avatar game.
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of panthean

    panthean

    [1698]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 08/14/06
    • level: 9
    • rank: Door Number 2
    • posts: 2,672
    vampking06 wrote:
    ^^ i may be a n00b, but i want to be a part of this avatar game.


    im a noob here too (is it awsome that i went up a level a day weds. and thurs.)
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of vampking06

    vampking06

    [1699]Jan 18, 2007
    • member since: 01/18/07
    • level: 7
    • rank: Talk Show Host
    • posts: 1,112
    ^^i guess. i dont post that much so ill be here for a while
    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.
  • Avatar of Kathleen2006

    Kathleen2006

    [1700]Jan 19, 2007
    • member since: 07/06/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 76

    Ami (Waterbender)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    As soon as Fang woke back up I began to heal his wounds, I looked up surprised to see my sister helping me.

    "Michiru"

    "I know what happened... and I know you two really love each other, so does uncle Huo, that's why he approved of your marrage" Michiru smiled "well my little sister is going to be a mother soon"

    "Yes, and I'm so happy"

    "We both are" Fang said

    We finished the healing and went home

    "Fang, we need to come up with names" I said "How about Kya for a girl"

    "Or Kai for a boy"

    "Sounds great" I smiled

    Our wedding went well and everyone enjoyed the beautiful event.

    "I can't believe we're actually married" I said as we laid down that night.

    "Me either, Ami, me either"

    "Neither can our little one"

    "What do you mean?" Fang asked

    "The baby kicked... give me your hand"

    I placed Fangs hand on my stomach and the baby kicked in reply to the slight pressure

    "Wow..."

    I smiled "That's our baby, Fang, our little healthy baby"

    You must be registered and logged in to post a message.