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    Master_0f_The_4

    [1661]Jan 5, 2007
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    Yeah no 'Avatar' characters please.
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    Kathleen2006

    [1662]Jan 5, 2007
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    I looked up in surprise to see Fang come in the door.

    "Fang, I thought something had happened to you" I sighed as we returned to our bedroom. I laid down beside Fang and soon noticed something was wrong with him as he tried to make his move on me... I fought thinking this could put my unborn baby in danger.

    "Fang what are you doing?"

    "What I can't do it with my wife..."

    "Not without her consent!" Then I felt more force behind his movements and??I could feel the fear welling insde me, if?? he did it this way??I was sertan he would hurt my child.

    I head footsteps run in and screamed for??whoever it was to help me

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    (someone take it from here)??

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    Rin-tori

    [1663]Jan 5, 2007
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Rin had left Ami alone with Exodus to rest.

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    ??

    Rin knew Fang had left with Scorch for some reason, but it would only worry him more if she went after him. She decided to retreat to her room. She flopped down on her bed. After a while, she realized she couldn???t sleep. She knew something was wrong. She thought she heard some light footsteps down the hallway, like Fang???s. She darted from her room down the next few hallways to find Fang back???with Ami cowering in the corner by the door, and something was wrong with Fang. It was a familiar presence, sinister and manic.

    ???Rin! Something???s wrong with Fang!??? Ami called. She was obviously in fear for her life, but she knew self protection, and her child???s welfare were Ami???s primary concerns.

    ???Ami, run. Just get out of here. I can take him. I won???t hurt him?????? Rin whispered. Ami took her advice and fled the room.

    ???Come back here, or I???ll?????? Fang was cut off by a slap from Rin.

    ???Well, I won???t hurt him too badly.??? Rin concluded.

    ???Heh, so you figured it out. It must be some sort of fate that we keep meeting like this, Rin.???

    ???I knew it. You???re that thing that was in Jax. You???re not Fang at all!??? Rin blocked a punch from him as she launched her fist in his face, only to be blocked as well.

    ???Well, well, I was defeated before, but now I have an Airbender. I bet he is much better than that limp Earthbender and that incompetent Firebender???why don???t I try his body out a little????

    He threw a blast of air at Rin, and for formed a shield of fire around herself as she was blasted out the window. She landed on the street mostly unharmed, and Fang jumped down at her, launching more air blasts at her, which she deflected with her fire shield. She was still being forced back inch by inch into a wall, when suddenly she was pinned into a corner and couldn???t avoid him.

    Fang, no???that awful thing possessing him, smirked maniacally, his eyes wide, his intent, to kill.

    Suddenly, he was struck in the head by a whip made of water. It was Ami.

    ???Fang, snap out of it!!??? She screamed.

    The demon looked back up at her, his expression of rage. ???Why you?????? He hissed. He started for Ami, but Rin was too quick and threw a wall of fire around Fang, as if he was in a bubble. He tried to Airbend his way out of it, but it was no use.

    ???Sorry, but fire burns up air, in case you forgot.???

    ???Rin, stop! He???ll die if you???re not careful!???

    ???Ami, I know what I???m doing.???

    He collapsed inside the bubble of fire. He started suffocating, now on his hands and knees. Finally, he lost conciousness. Rin dispelled the bubble, and breathed in deeply. She had wasted most of her chi, and sat down on the ground, breathing heavily.

    ???Rin, what did you do?!??? Ami turned Fang over on his back.

    ???I???m sorry, it was the only way. He was going to kill you and me???if I hadn???t?????? Rin sighed. ???I???m sorry I took such drastic measures, but I was trying to protect you. Please understand?????? Her voice trailed off.

    Rin hoisted herself to her feet, and helped Ami drag Fang back to the inn. He would be out for a while.

    It was going to be a long night.

    Edited on 01/05/2007 8:49pm
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    vegnegun

    [1664]Jan 5, 2007
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)??(FINALE)


    Scorch was about to get??eradicated by Obsidian and Fang

    Scorch quickly jumped up and forced flames to go everywhere, pushing Obsidian and Fang away.??He quickly charged towards Obsidian and encased his body in blue fire, before sending a large ball of fire at him. Obsidian shot his own ball of fire and the two exploded. Smoke filled the area and Scorch felt wind brush against his back and quickly whirled around, sending out flame duplicates of himself into the smoke. He saw Fang's figure rise above the smoke and flew towards it, feeling his arm change and it morphed into Pyro's arm. He reached out and broke through the smoke, seeing Fang swinging his sword towards Scorch, and Scorch grabbed it with his mechanical arm and crushed it. He got above Fang and kicked him down to the icy ground.

    "Fang," said Scorch, "don't make me do this." Fang smirked then fled into the smoke A ball of fire came out from the smoke and it was too late to dodge it and Scorch took it head on, falling to the ground. He landed smoothly on the ground.

    "Pathetic Scorch," said Obsidian, "there is no way you are my blood, now I'm sure of it." Scorch sneered as??Obsidian and Fang charged for him.??He heard Pyro in his head.

    "That is not the Fang you knew Scorch," said Pyro, "he's betrayed you for his brother. DESTROY THEM!" Scorch clenched his hand and heard Pyro roar.

    "Oh please," said Scorch, "you may be a worthy opponet Obsidian, but Fang is merely dead weight. He couldn't keep his head on??if I wasn't there to help him out." He quickly took to the sky, knowing Fang was the only one??that could reach him in the air. Fang charged at Scorch, holding his broken sword and swinging at Scorch. Scorch simpled backed away and created a sphere of blue fire around him before charging for Fang. Fang began to fall, when he quickly??snapped back up and hurled several air blasts at Scorch, before making two gigantic air claws and attempting to slash Scorch, but Scorch dodged both with ease. "I told you," said Scorch, "don't make me do this." He suddenly felt??Obsidian's fire blast against his back and ended up falling to the ground fast. Scorch fell on the ice,??landing on Pyro's mechanical, inorganic??arm, leaving a huge??crack in the ice. He was still injured from the blast and Obsidian and Fang slowly walked towards Scorch.

    "You should know better now than to underestimate me," said Obsidian.

    "I can't wait to destroy you," chuckled Fang, when Scorch noticed his??voice was off.

    "Don't make me do this," said Scorch.

    "Do what?" asked Fang again, "put up a worthless fight? I don't think we'll have a problem."

    "Scorch," barked Pyro, "use my power and eradicate this evil from this world!" Scorch sighed then looked up and stood up.

    "Oh, still a little fight in you?" asked Obsidian.

    "Don't forget Fang," said Scorch, "I still control Pyro.

    "An empty threat I'm sure," said Fang.

    "Not... this... time...," said Scorch. His eyes began to glow and a??red, crystal egg encased his body. Obsidian and Fang rushed towards the egg, when it shattered open,??creating a large recoil and forcing the two away. In place of the egg was Pyro, his eyes closed. When they opened, they were blood red. Pyro quickly charged for Fang??and Obsidian, breathing fire at them. They split up and Pyro grabbed Obsidian and brought him to his face.

    "No, where do you think you're going?" roared Pyro, "Without you, I would never have become a general. I would never have gotten so much power. And without you, I would never have met the love of my life. Allow me to... THANK YOU!" He hurled Obsidian against the wall and looked around the area for Fang, which had disappeared. He looked back towards Obsidian, who had also fled into the darkness. Pyro growled and reverted back to Scorch. Scorch put??his hood over his head, when his feet became stuck in the ice. The ice slowly crept up his body and looked around.??From the surrounding buildings came six water tribe members.

    "Scorch, you are under arrest," began??one of the waterbenders, "for causing destruction to public property, causing a possible threat to the people, but I guess??that this last crime will wrap all of that up. Scorch, you are under arrest for being a firebender." And with that, the ice came up to his head, leaving only holes for him to??breath, and nothing else.

    Edited on 01/07/2007 10:29am
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1665]Jan 5, 2007
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    HEY PEOPLE!!!!!! Stop writing new character profiles, they take up space and Season2 is almost over! So, if you wish to write a character profile then dont write it until Season3 begins, which is in 35 posts or so. Also, everyone stop fighting!

    The only people that haven't written their Season2 finales are Scorch, Fang, Rin, Ami, Jax, and Talho. So, hurry up and post them so Season3 can begin!
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    Master_0f_The_4

    [1666]Jan 5, 2007
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    ThatLostGuy, just count me in for season 3.
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    vegnegun

    [1667]Jan 5, 2007
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    Okay TEAM, we need to talk, and soon.??So, if I were you guys, I would get the finales finished soon.

    NOW, GET OVER THE HATE YOU ALL SEEM TO HAVE FROM ME, AMI I AIN'T SURE WHAT I DID TO YOU, BUT EVERYONE ELSE I AM SORRY! I CANNOT EXPRESS THAT ENOUGH. NOW, IF YOU WISH NOT TO TALK TO ME AND GET THIS THING OVER WITH AND MAKE-UP, PLEASE!

    Now, please guys, just forgive me and lets all start talking again, it is unhealthy to live with grudges, literarly.

    Edited on 01/05/2007 10:04pm
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    Master_0f_The_4

    [1668]Jan 5, 2007
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    I Agree vegnegun, were all avatar friends even if you dont like a certain someone stick it out and just be nice for the future of the Avatar fourms.
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    C1991

    [1669]Jan 6, 2007
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    Can we start season 3 in a new thread? my computer is kinda stupid with long threads.
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1670]Jan 6, 2007
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    C1991 wrote:
    Can we start season 3 in a new thread? my computer is kinda stupid with long threads.

    ....dude..are u even in the rpg?...
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    vegnegun

    [1671]Jan 6, 2007
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    C1991 wrote:
    Can we start season 3 in a new thread? my computer is kinda stupid with long threads.

    ....dude..are u even in the rpg?...

    Yeah, he is. Here's his finale:

    Bai Mao: Firebender from EK


    Sorry, i have a GREAT STORY because of this ling wait............... okay no i don't.??by the way,??Nukka??is pronounced (noo-kah)


    who wants to meet with my character?


    okay story:

    running back to the campsite??of my two water tribe acquaintances

    I run back. I will run no more.

    I see?? the campsite, the three earthbenders are causing havoc.

    One has Kanul by the throat with an earth collar. one has Nukka almost underground the other is stealing their supplies

    I firebend at the man who is stealing. He has a huge gash in his arm after that and faints.

    Me: LEAVE THEM ALONE!

    I run at the other one, who has Nukka underground. He lets her go and throws a rock at me. I dodge, and kick him in the face, and uppercut, knocking him out

    I run over to the other and ram him. He still has Kanul by the throat and tightens the collar.

    earthbender: come quietly or else.

    I submit. He releases the collar as he comes; I look at Nukka's face. I see fear... something I always see, but then, something more... could it be understanding? I never had someone look at me that way in a while.

    Earthbender: come on, prisoner.

    ??I look back

    Me: Goodbye.

    As we walk away, I see a flash of light... the earthbenmder falls. I turn around and see Nukka in a firebending stance.

    I look into her eyes and see what I have longed for... understanding...

    I don't know what??comes over??me, but I run over and embrace her... the warmth of a hug, a joy I hadn't felt in a long time


    I guess that's my season finale....


    Oh, and now I guess that those that need to post their finales only have 29 posts left.

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    avatarforte

    [1672]Jan 6, 2007
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    Fang-Airbender

    Where was I? The last thing I remembered was fighting with a mysterious firebender, then everything had gone dark. I sat up and looked around. I was in what appeared to be like old ruins. Id never seen this place before. Was it a hidden place near the North Pole? No, that couldnt be right.

    "Oh ho, looks like I was a little sloppy. I missed a bit of your personality, it seems." I turned to see Jax, no, Dark Jax sitting on top off a nearby ruined temple.

    "What are you doing here? And what do you mean "missed a bit of my personality?" He smiled.

    "Didnt you know? This is inside your mind and I have control of your body. As for missing part of your personality, I thought I had erased your presence from this body, effectively making it mine. But I was wrong."

    "Dont screw with me. I wouldnt let you have my body even if I was dead." I knew I didnt have my sword, but I could airbend in here, so he shouldnt be much trouble. "So, looks like Ill have to remove you to get my body back. You cant be so strong if you have to control my body as well." He smiled and disappeared. I looked around, trying to figure out where he had gone but he was no where to be found.

    "Looking for me?" I heard him say. I turned to the source of his voice, only to recieve a hard knee to the gut. I flew back and smashed through a ruin wall. I struggled to my feet. How could he be this much stronger? "Confused, are we?" I looked to him coming towards me. "Its true that Ive weakened due to the fact that I have to control your body as well. However, I sapped a lot of your precious spirits power as well as gained more strength from abosrbing life force from others Ive controlled. Its given me the ability to do this." He fired a lightning bolt at me, which I barely evaded. " I managed to keep thats foolish Zeth's ablitiy to bend lightning. So, what are you going to do, little one?"

    "Isnt it obvious? Im going to beat you outta my body and then destroy you." I fired air blasts at him, which he evaded by disappearing again. I closed my eyes and felt the wind moving around me. I waited, rotating the air around me. I detected a slight movement to my left. "There!" I said, sending an elbow in that direction. I blocked his knee, and the force from the two of them colliding shattered the rocks around us.

    "Not bad, little one." He leapt back, sending rocks and lightning bolts at me. I evaded the bolts while shattering the rocks with air blasts. I then fired an airblast at a nearby ruin, shattering it, then used the wind to throw the rubble at him. He blasted the rubble with bolts of lightning, but the dust covered his sight. I blew the dust away, hiding several air blasts in the wave. Some of them connected, sending D Jax into a wall as well. He came back up, huffing. "Guess youre not as bad as I thought you were. However, Im going to turn up the heat. Ill use a little more of your spirits power and also, have some fun with your friends."

    "You son of a...." I hissed. He smirked and laughed. I could feel the increase in his power, the power which I had known for so long. I brought everything I could up, bending as much air as possible. I focused it around my body, like armor, and formed air claws on both my hands.

    "Bring it on!" he yelled. "This shall be your final hour!" he screamed as he charged me. I followed suit, charging him. We collied, sending waves of energy throughout the area. This would be one serious battle.
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    AnimeLegends12

    [1673]Jan 7, 2007
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    Name: Raiku
    Status: Earth-Bender
    Special move: Breath Of A Dragon
    Height: 5'8
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 150
    Eyes: Dark Blue
    Hair: Dark Brown
    Weapons: 2 Sai,Katana Sword and Steal Bow Staff.

    Personality: He likes to hangout,get girls,fight,earthbend and make new friends.Also knows fighting forbidden>

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    C1991

    [1674]Jan 7, 2007
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    AnimeLegends12 wrote:

    Name: Raiku
    Status: Earth-Bender
    Special move: Breath Of A Dragon
    Height: 5'8
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 150
    Eyes: Dark Blue
    Hair: Dark Brown
    Weapons: 2 Sai,Katana Sword and Steal Bow Staff.

    Personality: He likes to hangout,get girls,fight,earthbend and make new friends.Also knows fighting forbidden>

    That's nice, just wait till season 2 ends....... then you can post when season 3 begins.

    (you're lucky i just released my anger on some n00b who just realized that Azula was the firebender in the beginning..... unless he just saw the first episode with azula, in which case i should go and apologize.... ah who cares?)

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    C1991

    [1675]Jan 7, 2007
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    crazyman321 wrote:
    just bringing this back up so you wont have to look for it

    for the record, that's called a "bump"

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    AEtherBlue

    [1676]Jan 8, 2007
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    I just typed out my whole finnally to get it erased... fck imma do it tommorrow

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    vegnegun

    [1677]Jan 8, 2007
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    Come on peeps! Let's get those finales finished! I want to start Season 3, the suspense is killing me!
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1678]Jan 9, 2007
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    vegnegun wrote:
    Come on peeps! Let's get those finales finished! I want to start Season 3, the suspense is killing me!
    KILLING YOU?!?!?!?! I have been waiting more than a month, you have been waiting three days!!!
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    vegnegun

    [1679]Jan 9, 2007
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:
    Come on peeps! Let's get those finales finished! I want to start Season 3, the suspense is killing me!
    KILLING YOU?!?!?!?! I have been waiting more than a month, you have been waiting three days!!!

    Yeah, I'm very impatient, but who cares!?

    Oh, and I guess there's only 21 posts left for the finales.......... HURRY UP AND POST!??

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    Rin-tori

    [1680]Jan 11, 2007
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    Rin (Firebender)??

    Fang was possessed by Dark Jax, but he was resting with Ami watching him.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Ami was tired. She had been watching over Fang for a few hours with Rin on guard, taking turns sleeping in shifts. With Dark Jax right in front of them, they had to be on guard.

    It was Rin???s turn to sleep, and about now, she wasn???t about to sleep in like she usually does. She was ready to wake any moment, and she almost knew instinctively, because within a few minutes, Rin had accidentally burnt a small hole into the comforter. Ami doused it quickly, and Rin turned over.

    Ami had to use the bathroom. She didn???t want to wake Rin just because she wanted a break for a minute, so she tiptoed off to the next room silently, and examined herself in the mirror, and washed her face. She had dark circles under her eyes and didn???t look at all well.

    However, Rin slept on, unaware of Ami???s absence.

    Now is my chance.

    Fang woke up, and sat up suddenly. He looked over at Rin, but it wasn???t really Fang at all. It was Dark Jax.

    What a fool. Sleeping, it will only be her demise.

    He started for the door, but tripped on a table, knocking over a vase and breaking it.

    ???Sh!t?????? He said audibly.

    Rin stirred and rolled over, falling onto the floor.

    ???Owww?????? Rin stood up.

    ???Oh, Fang, thank?????? Fang ran away in haste.

    ???Hey, wait!??? Rin took off after him.

    It was well into the night, or perhaps into the early morning. The moon was huge, and cast an eerie light on the streets as she ran. Ice and snow crunched under her feet as she ran, and she continued her pursuit.

    Fang ran down to a plaza on the empty streets. A moonlit fountain poured down an icy wall behind him, creating an ominous silhouette. He stopped and turned to face her.

    ???So, you still pursue me???? Fang said.

    ???What? What do you??????

    Then, it hit her. It???s not Fang.

    ??

    ???Oh no??????

    ???Yes, Rin. And no one???s here to save you.??? He said. He threw a bolt of lightning at her, but Rin dodged it, letting it hit a statue behind her.

    ???If it???s a fight you want, it???s a fight you???ll get!???

    She threw streams of fire at him to box him in, but he sent out a wave of lightning to diffuse the flames. Rin jumped back and sent heat through the icy floor to melt the ground he was standing on. Fang slipped, and Rin stood over him threateningly. He looked at her in fear, but rolled over and used a blast of air to send her flying into the icy wall. Rin fell, but stood up again, in pain.??

    ???Get out of him! He has a wife, and a child, and a??life to live!???

    ???Yet you still persist???you should be eliminated, not me.???

    Rin started for him again, but he shot her with a blast of lightning in her shoulder, sending her back into the frigid waterfall. She stood again, and this time, she wasn???t backing down. Rin forced her chi through her veins, and heat coursed through her body. Steam rose from her as the water evaporated. ??She threw her hands to her sides, but this time, she threw two streams of fire at him like whips. (Avatar Finale, anyone?)

    He tried to block them, but it was too late. He was struck on the shoulder and the leg, and forced back to the icy wall behind him. He was cornered.

    ???I won???t let you get away this time.???

    He looked downward, and began to laugh.

    ???You???re not the one who should be laughing!??? Rin said, enraged.

    ???Shouldn???t I???? He replied, cocky as ever.

    Rin was exhausted, most of her chi had been wasted. It was hard to stay awake. She felt the adrenaline in her slowly subsiding, leaving a feeling of lethargy as her knees buckled.

    Fang threw a final bolt of lightning at her, just below her chest, where her chi was. No longer able to stay standing, Rin collapsed. The world went black.

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