Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
Darkboy, D (fire, water, earth,air) before the 7-8 month gap
me, red death(liao) and some soldiers fell down together with the avalanche
when i woke up with a fierce pain in my right shoulder i stood up to see what caused to pain, it was a sharp piece of rock that penetrated my shoulder while removing the rock and healing my shoulder i went to search for any survivors some of them where death and other just unconsious while the ones that didn't came with the avalanche where coming to us then i founded liao
"ey liao wake up"i said while shaking his shoulder
"uh where am i and what happend?" he asked me while he waked up
"well as far i can tell we are back at the feet of the mauntain together with an avalanche and before you ask no we didn't get the hami crystal back "i answered
"DAMN THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING" he yelled "ey? what happend to your eyes?" liao asked
"what are you talking about?" i said while my face was confused
"your eyes there more like cateyes now almost the same as obilisk only there gold"he said
"oh that well i have those eyes all the time allready i think you didn't payed enough attention to them"i said
"i should have swore that they where different" liao muttered
'hmmm cateyes i can hear better and smell this can only mean one thing my spirit has found a?? way back, about time ever since i was stabbed with those daggers i could sense my spirit anymore for 7 years and then i could sense him weakly and now hes back not that i intend to use him ' i thought
'a come on gimmi a break i want some fresh flesh'he said
'no furball i don't like it when you are in control so you stay right here'i said to my spirit
'HAHAHAHA do you really think you can keep me in here forever meatbag, one single drop of blood from another meatbag and i am free again to control this body as i want' he said
'true but i do not intent to let another one bleed on my wounds'i said and with that he stayed quiet
"D,D,D " red death said " everything allright you spaced out for a moment"
"hmm, yea yea everything allright i was wondering something"i replied
"about what?" he asked
"well how spikes gang gained the knowledge about the hami crystal it couldn't be devastator because his brain is to small" i said red death was lauging with it "however" i said while my face turned sirious" only a limited people know about the hami crystal and they swore never to tell it to anyone so someone broke the promise but who"
"i don't know much about those people but damn D with those eyes i think you can scare the sh!t out of the sungod' he said while laughing i also laughed with it
'damn i like this meatbag'
(my end for my gap maybe TGA will fill it further up btw for the stupid ones with meatbag he mean human)
Ryo Takamine
age 16
weight 138
height 5,5
hair brown
eyes ice blue
weapon hallowed broadsword
ability waterbender
Master trained under??master pakku??but quit cause his training wasn't good enough so he went to persue his own style
clearwater04 wrote: |
Ryo Takamine age 16 weight 138 height 5,5 hair brown eyes ice blue weapon hallowed broadsword ability waterbender Master trained under??master pakku??but quit cause his training wasn't good enough so he went to persue his own style |
Rampage (Gigantic Axe)
Has just found a crystal similar to the Hami Crystal
Rampage was hidding in the back allies of the lower plate of Ba-Sing-Se. He didn't know how to test his new weapon, for no simple bender would do. Savage quickly ran down the ally way.
"Sire!" exclaimed Savage, short of breath, "I think I finally found the perfect test subject for you."
"Who?" asked Rampage.
"Azula has returned to the throne sire," said Savage. "This could be your chance to make your..."
"No, she is not worthy of this," said Rampage, "however... she could still be of some use to me. Savage, I need you to report back to Azula and tell her about our plan."
"Yes my lord," said Savage. He quickly ran back into the palace and into the throne room, where sitting at the throne was Azula (note: Savage and Rampage do not know that she has lost her bending). "Lord Azula," said Savage, "it is urgent that I speak with you."
"What is it?" asked Azula.
"I have heard some talk around the city of an uprising," lied Savage. "The citizens are planning to betray you! The reason they haven't attacked yet is due to the fact they lack the resources needed to do so."
"This is very interesting news Savage," said Azula, "but, how would we stop them?"
"My lord, I believe if we hold some kind of gathering... a tournement perhaps," began Savage, "we could lure out anyone wishing to strike you."
"How would we be sure that they would take the bait?" asked Azula.
"We could offer a very high prize of gold coins," said Savage.
"Hmmm," sighed Azula, "no, we can't afford that chance. I will send my troops on a raid in the lower plate." Savage was shocked and couldn't think of an arguement to this.
"Yes my lord," said Savage before he left the room. He got back down to the lower plate and met up with Rampage again, explaining to him what had happened.
"No, she isn't taking the bait," said Rampage, "if Azula makes this raid happen, my plans will fall apart!"
"We need a way to get her to support this tournement," said Savage, "but how?"
"What about that Mayhem character?" asked Rampage, "I believe he mentioned something about having close connections to Azula at one time... perhaps if you and him confront her, then we can get this tournement going and lure out any benders."
"But where would we find him?" asked Savage, "he disappeared some time ago."
"It shouldn't be hard to find him," said Rampage. "If we could draw him out of hidding then maybe..."
"Is someone looking for me?" asked a mysterious voice. Rampage and Savage turned around and were face to face with Mayhem, who was carrying the Hami Crystal.
"Mayhem," said Rampage, "did you say at one time you served under Azula?"
"Yeah, and I still do technically," said Mayhem, "but for the past few months I've been searching for my friends, but have had no luck."
"Well, I think there is a way we can help each other out," said Rampage. "I have this idea to get Azula to host a tournement to draw some people out of hidding, but Savage cannot convince her. If you two do it, then maybe she'll say yes."
"I don't see how that helps me," said Mayhem.
"Don't you get it?" asked Rampage, "perhaps your two friends would attend this tournement, that is... if we can even do it." Mayhem thought it over briefly before nodding.
"Okay, you got yourself a deal," said Mayhem.
"Excellent," said Rampage. Savage and Mayhem returned to the palace and spoke briefly with Azula, who had already put Dai Lee Agents on full alert, making it easier to convince Azula to host a tournemet. Savage and Mayhem explained to her how this plan would work.
"I don't think gold would be enough," said Azula, "we would need something much more... intreging."
"How about Mayhem's crystal?" asked Savage. Mayhem didn't expect Savage to offer the crystal up as a prize, but figured that perhaps hearing about the crystal would peak Spike's and Bulldozer's curiosity.
"Yeah, this is a rare enough item," said Mayhem, "with this and the gold, we are sure to draw those scum out of hiding." Azula thought it over for several moments before sighing and nodding.
"Very well, you may make this tournement," said Azula, "if you do find anyone willing to betray me, I want them alive."
"Thank you my lord," said Savage. "I would wish to send invitations throughout Ba-Sing-Se and to the North Pole as well. Make things seem less suspicous."
"Good idea Savage," said Azula, "now, get out of my sight." She was getting annoyed by the two and they agreed, leaving the palace.
"Savage, why the North Pole?" asked Mayhem.
"I don't know why," said Savage, "Rampage thinks that it would be a good idea." They went back to the lower plate and met with Rampage again. They explained the terms of the tournement and Rampage agreed.
"Now, if those intelligence reports are correct," said Rampage, "my subject should be in the North Pole. Let's just hope he decides to come here." He began to laugh again, hoping that his pawns would fall in place, allowing Rampage to take over Ba-Sing-Se. The laugh echoed through the city, that beastly laugh of pure insanity.
Brimstone, firebender
there were flames all around me. the heat intense. i was kneeling face down, bowig toward the man in the flames.
"you have discraced your self and your family, Xiou, son of Xiang" the bone chilling voice from the fire said. "while others your age have gone off and fought and died for our mighty nation, yet you have spent your days uprooting the very society you live in. your punnishment will fit your crimes."
"what are my crimes, Firelord Ozai?" i asked
"theft of the royal family, treason, and anti-patriotism. and i have thought long about your punnishment and have come to a conclusion. your punnishement: .... to serve the Firenation by aiding my son, Prince Zuko on his quest for the Avatar for 6 years"
"what? the Avatar has been missing for 100 years. with all due respect my lord, throw me in prison, force me into work at the shipping yards. id rather die than do something useless"
"YOU SHOULD THANK THE GODS THAT YOUR FATHER WAS A HERO TO THE FIRENATION, BECAUSE IF IT WASNT FOR HIS SACRIFICE, YOU WOULD BE PUT TO DEATH. BUT MAYBE I SHOULD FORSAKE YOUR FAMILIES STANDING AND BURN YOU RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!"
"NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
darkness. i was in the barn at Ki Ading Gu. i looked outside, just before dawn. ordinarily, i would tell myself it was only a dream, but its not. this really happened only 2 years ago.
"have a nice sleep, sunshine" a voice said behind me.
i spun around to find the sherriff and 2 others standing behind me.
"what are you doin here?"
"oh, just fixing a little injustice" he reached down and picked up my sword "this is a nice blade"
"put it down"
he held it closer for examination and saw the fire emblem on it.
"who the hell are you?"
"i said, put it down"
"or what, fire spy. get him!"
the two others came after me, but i was quicker. i pulled my??sai out of my back sheath, stabbed the first guy in the gut and neck, front kicked the next guy to the wall and finnished him with two stabbs in the neck. the sherriff tried to run, but i then i threw??one at him and stuck him to the wall
"ARRRGHHHH!"
"dont ever think about messing with me, again" i held the other knife to his throat and i took my scimitar and one of the sia back and??walked away.
"hey what about me?"
"what about you?" and i walked out and got on my ostrige horse and rode out towards the sunrise.
Name: Illiana
Age: 16
height: 4'9"
weight: 90 pounds
Bending: Air
Hair: short and??Brown
Eyes: Green
Personality: Illiana is a bit of a sweetheart most of the time. She hates fights and will find almost any way to resolve a dispute w/o fighting. Her disliking of fighting doesn't necessarily mean that she can't she is a skilled airbender and martial artist who knows how to fight if she must. Her strength comes from being able to catch her opponent???s weakness quickly and use that to her advantage due to her small size
History: Illiana, her mother, sister and brother are from an unknown of clan of airbenders and are, unfortunately the only ones left, her father had been of the Earth Kingdom giving her a different appearance and??look at things around her. When people first see her they think she's an Earthbender but she's really an airbender, it is all due to her father's being an earthbender and her looking like her father.
Jax: Earthbender, Firebender, and Broadswords Master
*BEFORE THE 8 MONTH GAP
Jax walked into the scorched village, and pieces of the old temple were still laying on the ground from the battle. Jax saw a staircase in the ground leading down. He walked down it, and ended up in a small room. It had four candles on the ground, and three slots in the wall. Dark Jax was sitting there.
"Welcome Jax," he said.
"What do you want?" Jax asked.
"I have a task for you," he said. "We need to find three emeralds of great value. The Destiny Emeralds," Dark Jax said.
"Why should I help you?" Jax asked.
"Either help me now with free will, or I'll keep you in here, with darkness feeding your mind, until you join me."
"What are The Destiny Emeralds?" Jax asked.
"They are three emeralds that fit into this wall behind us. When they are placed in there, they unlock a special room with an orb behind it called The Orb of Destiny. The power of that, is unknown," Dark Jax explained.
"I'm not helping you gain power," Jax said.
"Well then, you'll be here for a while," Dark Jax said.
Black chains flew out of the ground and bound Jax's arms and legs to the wall. He screamed and Dark Jax stood up.
"Darkness will be filling your mind, this temple, is evil. I'll know when your ready. The Jax you are, will be gone," Dark Jax said. He laughed, and dissapeared.
Jax screamed, but there was no one. No one to save him.
vampking06 wrote: |
i didnt know their real names, but ill commit that to memory next time thx |
??Illiana (Airbender)
After the 8 month gap
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In my travels I have seen many places many things but none would be as wonderus as what I would be involved with that day.
I walked downt the??frozen sidewalk of the north poll and a woman caught my attention she looked to be in pain.
"Ma'am, are you okay?" I asked
It was obvious to anyone who cared to glance at her she was pregnant.
"No... I think I'm in labor" she replied "and it's too early"
"Don't worry, ma'am, it's going to be okay, let's get you home" I said trying??not to sound scared
"Right in here" she said
"Whats your name?"
"Ami... yours?"
"Illiana"
"Thanks Illiana... you've been a big help"
"Don't worry about it, you can thank me when you're holding your child... apparently we won't have long to wait"
"You're right, my water just broke"
'we have to hurry' I thought, but didn't say anything to Ami, I was present for plenty of births over the years I knew that she had to be scared and didn't need to be scared anymore than she already was.
Indra (Waterbender)
8 months had passed since leaving Ba Sing Se.??Indra left behind all the Luna Sedai issued quipement at the bottom of a river??and went with only a waterskin, her small money purse, her robe,??and a relic??from her childhood: a??silver flute.
She wandered from Earth Kingdom town to Earth Kingdom town as a traveling street??musician,??not staying more than a week. She earned a decent amount of money, but it was never about the money. It was about peace of mind. She still had trouble coping with being betrayed by her own brethren, and??moreso having to slay??them.??At the time, it felt necessary, but after??replaying??what happend Indra realized the mistakes she made. She??let things get out of hand, but should have finished the mission. The??order would know, and this made her situation even worse.??It??tore away at her, but she knew??her life as a Stranger??was over. And she didn't know what was left for her to do.??Indra??wished she could return to the North Pole, back home, but knew that could be a mistake. The only thing that kept her from going out of her mind with worry was her music.
Five years ago, the??all??Strangers in training were sent on a??seach and recovery??mission in the Earth Kingdom.??She were to retrieve??am item that had spiritual significance, as part of learning about life in general, and if the item was accepted??for the reason she provided. She was allowed to keep it. She was in a town and??looking for something significant and "revealed a truth of the world", when she heard an amazing??sound. More than just a sound,??a soft??melody.??
She followed the sound to a small tent in a back alley, where an old lady in red??sat in lotus style in front of a fire,??playing a something Indra had never seen before.??The old ladies' eyes were closed and she was deeply focused in her melody.??It was a moving??song, that??went from??smooth with connected flowing notes, to stern with low steady unwavering tones, to a??fierce bolero, and then to fluttering trill filled??finish with.??Indra was so transifixed on the song, she lost track of time, the song could have lasted only a few minutes but felt like much longer...??
"Welcome child," the old woman said suddenly. Indra was snapped out of her trance with a jump and realized she too was now sitting in a lotus position. "I've been expecting??a young visitor. I believe you've come seeking something haven't you?" The woman looked at Indra with eyes that were bright yellow, and contained much wisdom.
Indra paused. She didn't know what to make of this woman, but??felt no harm??could??come??from her. Especially since she played such beautiful song.??"Yes."
"Tell me, child, what did you think of that song?"
"It was beautiful, I've never heard anything like it before. It was...moving."
The lady nodded slowly. "Thank you, but what things did you notice about the song itself?"
"Well, it was one song, but felt more like four songs."
"Exactly. Four seperate parts, but one whole. Can you think of anything else that has four different parts, but make up one thing?"
Indra got it instantly. "The??Avatar!"
The lady nodded again. "The Avatar is comprised of the four elements. He is the spirit of the Earth. That song is a tribute to the four parts that make the Avatar who he is. This is true not only in him, but in all of us. And the whole world. Take this flute, and forever be reminded of this. It was nice to meet you...Indra."??
Before, Indra could even react to the fact that she knew her name,??a gust of wind suddenly??swirled from the woman's direction,??and the flames lapped up at Indra. She close her eyes and sheilded herself from the flames. Then like closing a door, the wind ceased and Indra found herself sitting in the alley way. Alone. No tent. No fire. No woman in red. Nothing but but Indra sitting in a lotus position, with the silver flute the old woman in red was playing??laid out infront of her.
She never could really make out what happend that day. She??it felt like a dream,??and told herself that's what it was, but couldn't??figure out??where the flute came from, or when she feel asleep.??But, nontheless??Indra brought the flute back to the mission proctor and recited what the woman told her about the four elements and the Avatar. She was the only person to pass the mission and got to keep the flute. The first time Indra put the flute to her lips, she played the song the old woman in red played, her fingers moving and lips producing the notes without thinking or trying to remember the song. From that day on, if ever Indra was troubled, she'd take out the flute. And play the song.
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Ami???s wedding post. (Before the 8 month gap.)
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Rin tore through her wet hair with a brush. It was a mess, and she couldn???t piece her braids back together.
???Rin, can you help me? I can???t get this on all the way.??? Ami was still putting on her wedding dress, and Rin was having enough trouble as Maid of Honor.
Rin helped Ami into her wedding dress, a beautiful white gown with lots of layers. She had a long blue coat to keep her warm, and a veil. Her hair was exquisitely done; apparently her sister did it for her.
???Damnit, I can???t braid my hair!??? Rin cried in frustration as she unevenly braided her hair again. Maybe she was just frantic now, she could do it before.
???Do you want me to do it???? Ami asked. ???You should keep your hair down, it looks prettier.??? Ami said.
???Yeah, it???s a pain in the a*s.??? Rin said, fluffing out her hair to dry it.
???I can fix it for you, if you want.???
???Thanks.??? Rin said, with a nervous laugh. ???If you???re the one getting married, why am I freaking out???? She said, half-jokingly.
???I???m just glad I got such a pretty wedding dress. Say, do Fire Nation brides wear white???? She laughed as she took the shorter hair and braided into the longer sections to make her hair look longer, and soon she was finished.
???I???ve been to one when I was little???in the Fire Nation, brides wear red. It???s a lucky color.??? Rin sighed. ???Man, sometimes I just wish I could head back home like you??????
???Don???t worry, I???m sure you will someday.??? Ami concluded.
???Ehehe???yeah, I guess??????
Rin stuck her headband into her fixed hair and pulled on her gloves to match the blue gown. She had a blue cloak to match it, and it seemed kind of gaudy, but it meant a lot to Ami. She stepped into her heeled shoes, and she started down to the back waiting room for the wedding ceremony. Fang couldn???t see Ami until she was absolutely ready. As they proceeded down the stairs, Rin was obviously having trouble walking in the heels.
~ ~ ~
As the ceremony finally started, Rin was jumpy. She didn???t know if it was just the cold temperature making her shake, no, she was perfectly fine. Maybe it was because she kept glancing back at Scorch straight across from her, and trying to stand still for so long in such uncomfortable shoes, or just wearing a dress that she???s not used to. Maybe she was just nervous for Ami, if anything went wrong, she wouldn???t be too happy about it.
Maybe it was all of those things, but it was something else, too.
~ ~ ~
At the reception following the ceremony, Rin was enjoying herself. The music was pleasant and people kept staring at her like a pretty alien, but not like a total freak. That, at least, was something to be happy about.
Then Ami tapped her on the shoulder.
???Hm????
???Oh, Rin, I was just about to throw the bouquet, why don???t you try to catch it???? She said happily.
???Throw it? Why would you do that???? Rin asked.
???Because it???s tradition. The Bride throws the bouquet, and all the single women at the wedding try to catch it, and if you catch it then you???re the next to get married. Come on, you???re still single, join the fun!??? She dragged Rin onto the floor where the other girls were gathering, and Ami threw the bouquet over her shoulder. A dozen hands reached for it, but it came to rest in Rin???s hands, and she got a firm grab on it. She caught the bouquet.
~ ~ ~
The party had ended, the excitement over, but Rin wasn???t the least bit tired. She knew what she wanted to do.
They were all sleeping in different rooms at the mansion, so she knocked on Scorch???s door. She was shaking now. How would she ask him so casually? (I know what you???re thinking, you perverts. Bloody stop it.)
She knocked on his door, and he opened it after a moment.
???Rin? What is it????
??????I just wanted to talk to you for a second?????? She said. ???It???s kind of important.???
Scorch???s room was small, so they stayed in the foyer.
???Remember what I said earlier to save you? Pyro came to me while I was unconscious and told me to save you, so I did???but I really meant it when I said that??????
???Yeah, I know. If I had been there any longer, I wouldn???t have lasted until the execution.??? Scorch said, somewhat horrified.
??????well???I just???I mean, I???uhh?????? She couldn???t put her words together well, maybe it was because she was just really jittery today? No???it was what she was about to do.
???What???s wrong???? Scorch asked. Rin was usually good at talking under pressure, like she had just done to save him. This wasn???t like her at all.
???So???you???re okay with it? When I said you were my husband? Like???we can get married???? She stopped herself. ???W-wait, if you don???t want to yet that???s fine, I mean it???s probably not good for us to stay here longer because we???re firebenders and we don???t exactly??????
???I???d love to.??? He cut her off. ???Actually I was about to ask you, but since you brought it up first, then sure.??? He laughed. ???I swore that if I ever got out of that prison that the first thing I???d do after taking a shower would be proposing. I seriously thought I was going to die.??? He laughed a little again.
???Y-yeah???I guess?????? Rin was smiling, but she was starting to cry. ???Oh shoot?????? She wiped a tear. ???I guess I???m being kind of emotional, it???s stupid of me, really?????? She rubbed her eyes again.
???What's wrong? Are you okay???? Scorch said.
???It's n-nothing?????? Rin was in tears, forcing a smile. ???It???s just me being stupid???sorry?????? She wiped another tear.
He gave her a warm hug, and she buried her head in his chest.
"You're not...don't be silly."
??
"I know...b-but...I thought that after all that stuff we've been through, I was getting the message that I should propose..." She sobbed a little. "...and I knew I should. I'm really glad I did." She smiled through her tears.
The truth was, she had never been more in love.
im sure that the format of this story is crap but i did my best. =]
name: Shen Wu
age 18[one year before the show started]
nation earth
bending: earth bending??at king??Bumi's level of power??and fire bending is just above Zuko's level at the season finale??and can make a crude form of lightning[ both cant be POWERFUL due to mixed genes]
past:?? Father??was??a desendant of King Bumi [great great grandson] mother??was a master fire bender [she was near azula's level ]. both of his parents taught him everything they knew till the age of 16 when the fire nation[on order from fire lord Azulon himself to look for the tratior, his mother because she was a desserter of the fire nation military]the??FN??found their farm near Omashu because his mother was a powerful fire bender and they found his father to be a powerful earth bender and killed them through sheer numbers [4 to one, all firebenders and yu yan archers] though they put up an honorable fight??both killing all of them but dying of wounds[Shen was off hunting Platypus Bear]??he comes back carrying a small Platypus Bear on his shoulderand discovers the battle field and his parents dead, he earthbends a coffin for the two of them and buries it deep underground so it wont be disturbed knowing that the FN will investigate??the battalion??when they dont report back, he butchers the bear he??got and packed it into a pack and flees into the wildernesswith??nothing but the clothes on his back, the bear meat,and his precious twin axes, where he learned how to survive on hunting and foraging. Shen was deeply enraged?? with grief at what happpend to his parents and swore revenge on the fire nation going to screw up their operations when ever he can and he has no problem taking the lives of FN soldiers,[he is Ruthless when he fights firebenders and soldiers alike] but he is the nicest guy you will ever meet in your life and cares deeply about innocent life [even fire nation civillians unless they attack first]he is considered a protecter of the innocent. after hearing of the??Aang return he hopes to help him in his fight against the fire nation because he knows following Aang will lead him to the fire lord to get revenge on the son of the man that orders his parents death.
i dont have??a real imagination so i based his looks off of a charactor from the xbox game Jade empire and i dont know how to post a pic.
description:??black hair in a long ponytail at the bottom back of head, yellow eyes, he is mainly an earth bender so he is very muscular.
height????7ft weight300lbs this is a picture of what he looks like, http://jade.bioware.com/characters/tiger_shen.html?? [his apperance is exactly like the pic except he is bare foot and??the shoulder thing is decorated with feathers and three claws on the end of it??]
his real wepons: he dosent have that big sword like in the picture.this is a video to see them in action
http://jade.bioware.com/fighting_styles/flash_viewer.html?fs=da
he is a great tracker due to his living in the wilds surviving on hunting mainly but he is a good hand to hand when ever he cant bend the earth and not good range for fire bending [ it is mainly a ranged style] it is similar to ty lee despite his massive size he is very quick with his hands another video but of his fighting style in hand to hand????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
http://jade.bioware.com/fighting_styles/flash_viewer.html?fs=tc
weakness: he cant bend sand at all?? and he can make lightning but it would drain him [ last resort]
Earthbender567 wrote: |
im sure that the format of this story is crap but i did my best. =] name: Shen Wu age 18[one year before the show started] nation earth bending: earth bending??at king??Bumi's level of power??and fire bending is just above Zuko's level at the season finale??and can make a crude form of lightning[ both cant be POWERFUL due to mixed genes] past:?? Father??was??a desendant of King Bumi [great great grandson] mother??was a master fire bender [she was near azula's level ]. both of his parents taught him everything they knew till the age of 16 when the fire nation[on order from fire lord Azulon himself to look for the tratior, his mother because she was a desserter of the fire nation military]the??FN??found their farm near Omashu because his mother was a powerful fire bender and they found his father to be a powerful earth bender and killed them through sheer numbers [4 to one, all firebenders and yu yan archers] though they put up an honorable fight??both killing all of them but dying of wounds[Shen was off hunting Platypus Bear]??he comes back carrying a small Platypus Bear on his shoulderand discovers the battle field and his parents dead, he earthbends a coffin for the two of them and buries it deep underground so it wont be disturbed knowing that the FN will investigate??the battalion??when they dont report back, he butchers the bear he??got and packed it into a pack and flees into the wildernesswith??nothing but the clothes on his back, the bear meat,and his precious twin axes, where he learned how to survive on hunting and foraging. Shen was deeply enraged?? with grief at what happpend to his parents and swore revenge on the fire nation going to screw up their operations when ever he can and he has no problem taking the lives of FN soldiers,[he is Ruthless when he fights firebenders and soldiers alike] but he is the nicest guy you will ever meet in your life and cares deeply about innocent life [even fire nation civillians unless they attack first]he is considered a protecter of the innocent. after hearing of the??Aang return he hopes to help him in his fight against the fire nation because he knows following Aang will lead him to the fire lord to get revenge on the son of the man that orders his parents death. i dont have??a real imagination so i based his looks off of a charactor from the xbox game Jade empire and i dont know how to post a pic. description:??black hair in a long ponytail at the bottom back of head, yellow eyes, he is mainly an earth bender so he is very muscular. height????7ft weight300lbs this is a picture of what he looks like, http://jade.bioware.com/characters/tiger_shen.html?? [his apperance is exactly like the pic except he is bare foot and??the shoulder thing is decorated with feathers and three claws on the end of it??] his real wepons: he dosent have that big sword like in the picture.this is a video to see them in action http://jade.bioware.com/fighting_styles/flash_viewer.html?fs=da he is a great tracker due to his living in the wilds surviving on hunting mainly but he is a good hand to hand when ever he cant bend the earth and not good range for fire bending [ it is mainly a ranged style] it is similar to ty lee despite his massive size he is very quick with his hands another video but of his fighting style in hand to hand???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? http://jade.bioware.com/fighting_styles/flash_viewer.html?fs=tc weakness: he cant bend sand at all?? and he can make lightning but it would drain him [ last resort] |
Earthbender567 wrote: |
im sure that the format of this story is crap but i did my best. =] name: Shen Wu age 18[one year before the show started] nation earth bending: earth bending??at king??Bumi's level of power??and fire bending is just above Zuko's level at the season finale??and can make a crude form of lightning[ both cant be POWERFUL due to mixed genes] past:?? Father??was??a desendant of King Bumi [great great grandson] mother??was a master fire bender [she was near azula's level ]. both of his parents taught him everything they knew till the age of 16 when the fire nation[on order from fire lord Azulon himself to look for the tratior, his mother because she was a desserter of the fire nation military]the??FN??found their farm near Omashu because his mother was a powerful fire bender and they found his father to be a powerful earth bender and killed them through sheer numbers [4 to one, all firebenders and yu yan archers] though they put up an honorable fight??both killing all of them but dying of wounds[Shen was off hunting Platypus Bear]??he comes back carrying a small Platypus Bear on his shoulderand discovers the battle field and his parents dead, he earthbends a coffin for the two of them and buries it deep underground so it wont be disturbed knowing that the FN will investigate??the battalion??when they dont report back, he butchers the bear he??got and packed it into a pack and flees into the wildernesswith??nothing but the clothes on his back, the bear meat,and his precious twin axes, where he learned how to survive on hunting and foraging. Shen was deeply enraged?? with grief at what happpend to his parents and swore revenge on the fire nation going to screw up their operations when ever he can and he has no problem taking the lives of FN soldiers,[he is Ruthless when he fights firebenders and soldiers alike] but he is the nicest guy you will ever meet in your life and cares deeply about innocent life [even fire nation civillians unless they attack first]he is considered a protecter of the innocent. after hearing of the??Aang return he hopes to help him in his fight against the fire nation because he knows following Aang will lead him to the fire lord to get revenge on the son of the man that orders his parents death. i dont have??a real imagination so i based his looks off of a charactor from the xbox game Jade empire and i dont know how to post a pic. description:??black hair in a long ponytail at the bottom back of head, yellow eyes, he is mainly an earth bender so he is very muscular. height????7ft weight300lbs this is a picture of what he looks like, http://jade.bioware.com/characters/tiger_shen.html?? [his apperance is exactly like the pic except he is bare foot and??the shoulder thing is decorated with feathers and three claws on the end of it??] his real wepons: he dosent have that big sword like in the picture.this is a video to see them in action http://jade.bioware.com/fighting_styles/flash_viewer.html?fs=da he is a great tracker due to his living in the wilds surviving on hunting mainly but he is a good hand to hand when ever he cant bend the earth and not good range for fire bending [ it is mainly a ranged style] it is similar to ty lee despite his massive size he is very quick with his hands another video but of his fighting style in hand to hand???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? http://jade.bioware.com/fighting_styles/flash_viewer.html?fs=tc weakness: he cant bend sand at all?? and he can make lightning but it would drain him [ last resort] |
Okay, first off: you cannot bend multiple elements (with the exception of fire and lightning), so you need to change that. And also, read the rules on http://www.freewebs.com/avatarRPG/.??