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    vegnegun

    [361]Nov 23, 2006
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    Rampage (Gigantic Axe)

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    Rampage had just began to fight Mayhem as his partners, Spike and Bulldozer watched.

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    Mayhem slowly walked toward Rampage with his Razor in hand. Rampage lunged toward Mayhem, swinging his axe, but Mayhem leaped up and landed on the blade, and jumped over Rampage's back, slashing at Rampage. Rampage stumbled forward.

    "Man, you picked the wrong day to PISS ME OFF!!" exclaimed Rampage as he quickly whirled around and threw his axe at Mayhem. Mayhem ducked and took his eyes off of Rampage, feeling the wind and some fresh blood off the axe onto his face. When Mayhem looked up, Rampage was right in front of him, swinging his Razor at him. Rampage put him arm up and took the blow directly in his left arm, but quickly pulled his arm back, forcing the Razor from Mayhem's hand. Rampage pulled his fist back and punched Mayhem in the chest, forcing him to fall back. Rampage pulled the Razor from his arm and walked slowly toward Mayhem, with the Razor in his hand. Mayhem was briefly knocked out and saw Rampage walking toward him. Rampage raised the sword, which seemed small in his hand, over his head and said:

    "For the glory of the roalty!" he exclaimed. Mayhem noticed Rampage's axe next to him and pulled it from the ground and brought it in front of him, barely blocking the sword. Rampage felt an arrow strike him in the back that was followed by a second. Rampage then felt two arms grab him that began to pull back.

    "Oh, a treacherous sneak attack," laughed Rampage, "I like that! But it shall aid you not, no!" Rampage put his arm behind his back a grabbed??the largest of the group??(Bulldozer) by his cloths, and pulled him off, tossing him on the ground like an old shoe. "Now, where was I?" asked Rampage to himself, "Oh, that's right." Rampage felt three arrows hit simultaniously in his back. Rampage ignored the pain and saw that his enemy, Mayhem, was gone. Rampage slowly turned around and saw Mayhem standing their with his axe. He was about to swing it when Rampage grabbed it by the handle, shaking Mayhem loose from it. Rampage was about read to strike when Mayhem yelled:

    "Bulldozer, Spike," he exclaimed, "as I instructed, NOW!" Rampage felt a barage of arrows hit his back and was unable to move (most of them had struck his shoulder blades). Rampage moaned and fell to the ground and fainted. He woke up several moments later and had his own axe blade at his throat.

    "Look," said Spike, "it looks like he's waking up."

    "Ugh," moaned Rampage, "You CHEATED!"

    "Yeah, so," said Spike, "we're hitmen, and we don't always play fair. Now, take us to your leader!"

    "No, you broke the rules," said Rampage, "our contract is broken." He began to laugh and felt the axe's weight increase on his neck.

    "I don't think your in the position to tell us about contracts," said Bulldozer, the one who was holding the axe.

    "Now," said Mayhem, "I think we can do something for eachother here.??It's actually quiet simple, tell him boss."??

    "You agree to take us to Obsidian," said Spike, "and we'll give you back your precious axe."

    Rampage moaned, "one thing you should know about battle," said Rampage, "and that's always to have an ace in the hole. Troops, attack!" Nothing happened, "fire troops?" He looked to his left and say Mayhem pulling the troops that have all been tied together.

    "Oh, sorry, were these worthless troops friends of yours?" asked Spike.

    "Okay, it looks like your forcing me to comply with your ridiculous demands," said Rampage, "Fine, I will take you to Lord Obsidian. I must warn you though, he's more powerful than I and, if at all possible, more ruthless."

    "Whatever," said Spike, "so, do we have a deal?"

    Rampage coughed, "yeah, we have a deal." Bulldozer released Rampage and threw his axe on the ground. Rampage slowly got up and looked on the ground; a giant puddle of blood had developed there. "We'll take my ship," said Rampage. They boarded the ship and went out to Obsidian's fleet. They boarded Obsidian's ship and Rampage lead them to Obsidian. Rampage kneeled immediatley.

    "My lord," said Rampage, "I have upreahended these intruders on the village grounds."

    "Really?" asked Obsidian as he looked at Rampage's back and saw the blood flowing from it. "I somehow doubt that." He kicked Rampage back. "So, who are you three?"

    "I'm Spike, and this is Mayhem and Bulldozer," said Spike, "and we want to become the fire nation's hitmen."

    "Well, I do like your resume`," said Obsidian, "tell me Rampage, did you defeat Scorch?"

    "No, my lord," said Rampage, "but he??had aid from another..."

    "Excuses!?" exclaimed Obsidian, "I will not tolerate failure! Not from anyone, not for any reason!"??He kicked Rampage in the face again. "Get out of my sight, and don't return until you have the dog Scorch into custody. I wish to speak with him before his brutal execution."

    "Yes, my lord," said Rampage as he walked out of the room.

    "Now," said Obsidian, "I think that you three will be useful. We have recieved reports that some, puny resistance force has been sighted near our village. I need you to take care of them."

    ***Thatlostguy, take it from here!***

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    Eman5805

    [363]Nov 23, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    AHHHH Eman1805 delete the alternate version. People will read it and not understand what is going on. Please delete it!
    Aggggh...I just read your reply...damnit aight...just that I spent a good lil bit thinkin' how the fight would go down and didn't want to just let it fade away...but aight...guess I'll just put that with my other bits of my writin' to file away
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    ThatLostGuy

    [364]Nov 23, 2006
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    OOOOO BABY! That was an amzing post...I didn't even see the banishment of Rampage coming, you fooled me! So, Rampage must find Scorch before he can return to Obsidian. Cool...and now Spike, Bulldozer, and Mayhem are the "Hitmen of the Fire Nation". YAY cool sweet post!
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [365]Nov 23, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    OOOOO BABY! That was an amzing post...I didn't even see the banishment of Rampage coming, you fooled me! So, Rampage must find Scorch before he can return to Obsidian. Cool...and now Spike, Bulldozer, and Mayhem are the "Hitmen of the Fire Nation". YAY cool sweet post!

    sooo..continue the story=p
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    vegnegun

    [366]Nov 23, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    OOOOO BABY! That was an amzing post...I didn't even see the banishment of Rampage coming, you fooled me! So, Rampage must find Scorch before he can return to Obsidian. Cool...and now Spike, Bulldozer, and Mayhem are the "Hitmen of the Fire Nation". YAY cool sweet post!

    Yeah, if you have ever played FFXII and have gotten to the Boss Belias, that was the music I listened to while I wrote this. The power of music!

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    ThatLostGuy

    [369]Nov 23, 2006
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    Spike (archer)

    ??Obsidian had just made Bulldozer, Mayhem and I the "Hitmen of the Fire Nation." Our first mission was to defeat the same kid I tried to destroy a little while back. He is also the same kid that I just chased into a cave. I have to kill him and his friends (Willy Woo, Rexsten, Red Death, and Hevet).

    I felt kinda bad for the bastard Rampage. He was banished from seeing his lorn Obsidian until he returned with Scorch, some guy he is supposed to capture. I laughed though because Rampage finally got what he deserved.

    I looked at Mayhem and Bulldozer as we walked off the Warship and headed back to the cave in the forest. I said, "Team! We have a duty as the Hitmen of the Fire Nation. We proved ourselves worthy and we finally have a job! Now all we have to do is kill some worthless teenagers and one old man and we will become famous! We will get all the ladies and all the money." Bulldozer added in, "A dog? Will we get a dog?" I laughed and said, "Yes we will get that dog you have always wanted big guy. We will become famous and statues will me made of us! And soon, I will become Lord of the Fire Nation!"....

    Edited on 11/23/2006 8:16pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [370]Nov 23, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    TheGreatAvatar...its your turn. I felt bad that I mde you delete your pst earlier. GO ahead and post...I will be back in 1n hour or so...


    k..thx=)
    but it wont be too good...i dont have a fight scene in mind now=p

    Red death(master of fire and earth bending)
    --------------------------------------------

    I was running towards a cave with willy, hevet and rexsten ahead of me

    When i got in to the cave, i heard talking
    willy woo, and a voice i havent heard before
    i then saw willy woo talking to a fire nation general...general scorch...
    the man i attempted to heal in omashu
    i also saw a girl behind the general

    willy woo was talking to the general as if theyve met before
    all of a sudden rexsten launched a rock from the earth,
    but at the same time, an arrow sped right past me
    and struck willy woo in the shoulder
    I heard Rexsten drop the boulder and scream "WILLY!!"

    I turned around to see who shot the arrow, but i couldnt see anyone from my view
    i then decided to exit the cave to make sure no enemies were coming towards us
    as i moved out of the cave, i saw 4 figures
    3 on 1 side, and 1 big figure on the other

    all of a sudden the big figure, and 1 of the other men started fighting
    i slowly moved closer, but as i got close enough to see who the men were,
    the men had already captured the big man
    I looked at the face of the captured man, and i immidiately recognized him
    ...Rampage, the ne who saved me as a little boy

    i was about to ambush the men,
    but all of a sudden, fire nation soldiers came out of nowhere..ambushing the 3 men
    eventually, the fire nation soldiers got captured

    while whitnessing the fighting of the 3 men,
    i figured it wasnt safe yet to fight them without revealing the secret that im a firebender

    i decided to go back to the cave and tell everyone what just happened
    after the story, 2 of the guys said they knew a guy named rampage
    they told me how they knew him, and i was suprised to hear, that rampage had done such terrible things to both of them

    i replied
    "You must be thinking of the wrong guy"
    "Rampage is a nice..a friendly soldier"

    then willy woo and general scorch looked at me as if i was crazy

    i then said
    "im going to rescue rampage and see if what you said true or not"

    but when i got back to the scene of the fight, rampage was walking away with the 3 men as if no fight had happened
    i was confused
    they boarded his ship and left

    as i turned back to go to the cave, i saw willy woo, ornith, hevet, general scorch and the lady walking towards me
    willy said"i know we both have different views on rampage",
    "but we can figure out the true rampage after we rescue ornith"
    "we need ornith, or our team is no longer complete"

    i looked up and said
    "ok"

    i hesitated and then said
    "the fire nation soldiers who took ornith were most likely under rampage's control"
    "rampage would not take his captors back to the fire nation right after he captures them"
    "the rampage i know would invade tons of towns, capture tons of people, then return to the fire nation"

    "so..your point?" asked rexsten

    i replied
    "we have to stay on the lookout for towns that he would invade next"
    "if we find a town he starts to invade, all we have to do, is find his ship...which would obviously be at the harbor"
    "his captors are kept in metal cages under the command center"
    "its actually quite easy to get to the jail cell"
    "- but there will be many guards at the jail cell"
    "we will need to take out the guards quitely and swiftly"

    "Hey"
    interrupted general scorch
    "i hope you know we only came here so i can settle a score with willy woo and the big guy here"

    i looked at him, then all of a sudden, i looked behind him
    i muttered"i think rampage has struck again"

    everyone turned around and saw smoke starting to rise from a nereby village not too far from us

    i jumped over everyone and started running towards the smoke
    willy woo, hevet, the girl and rexsten followed
    general scorch also followed at the thought of revenge against rampage
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    vegnegun

    [371]Nov 23, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    TheGreatAvatar...its your turn. I felt bad that I mde you delete your pst earlier. GO ahead and post...I will be back in 1n hour or so...


    k..thx=)
    but it wont be too good...i dont have a fight scene in mind now=p

    Red death(master of fire and earth bending)
    --------------------------------------------

    I was running towards a cave with willy, hevet and rexsten ahead of me

    When i got in to the cave, i heard talking
    willy woo, and a voice i havent heard before
    i then saw willy woo talking to a fire nation general...general scorch...
    the man i attempted to heal in omashu
    i also saw a girl behind the general

    willy woo was talking to the general as if theyve met before
    all of a sudden rexsten launched a rock from the earth,
    but at the same time, an arrow sped right past me
    and struck willy woo in the shoulder
    I heard Rexsten drop the boulder and scream "WILLY!!"

    I turned around to see who shot the arrow, but i couldnt see anyone from my view
    i then decided to exit the cave to make sure no enemies were coming towards us
    as i moved out of the cave, i saw 4 figures
    3 on 1 side, and 1 big figure on the other

    all of a sudden the big figure, and 1 of the other men started fighting
    i slowly moved closer, but as i got close enough to see who the men were,
    the men had already captured the big man
    I looked at the face of the captured man, and i immidiately recognized him
    ...Rampage, the ne who saved me as a little boy

    i was about to ambush the men,
    but all of a sudden, fire nation soldiers came out of nowhere..ambushing the 3 men
    eventually, the fire nation soldiers got captured

    while whitnessing the fighting of the 3 men,
    i figured it wasnt safe yet to fight them without revealing the secret that im a firebender

    i decided to go back to the cave and tell everyone what just happened
    after the story, 2 of the guys said they knew a guy named rampage
    they told me how they knew him, and i was suprised to hear, that rampage had done such terrible things to both of them

    i replied
    "You must be thinking of the wrong guy"
    "Rampage is a nice..a friendly soldier"

    then willy woo and general scorch looked at me as if i was crazy

    i then said
    "im going to rescue rampage and see if what you said true or not"

    but when i got back to the scene of the fight, rampage was walking away with the 3 men as if no fight had happened
    i was confused
    they boarded his ship and left

    as i turned back to go to the cave, i saw willy woo, ornith, hevet, general scorch and the lady walking towards me
    willy said"i know we both have different views on rampage",
    "but we can figure out the true rampage after we rescue ornith"
    "we need ornith, or our team is no longer complete"

    i looked up and said
    "ok"

    i hesitated and then said
    "the fire nation soldiers who took ornith were most likely under rampage's control"
    "rampage would not take his captors back to the fire nation right after he captures them"
    "the rampage i know would invade tons of towns, capture tons of people, then return to the fire nation"

    "so..your point?" asked rexsten

    i replied
    "we have to stay on the lookout for towns that he would invade next"
    "if we find a town he starts to invade, all we have to do, is find his ship...which would obviously be at the harbor"
    "his captors are kept in metal cages under the command center"
    "its actually quite easy to get to the jail cell"
    "- but there will be many guards at the jail cell"
    "we will need to take out the guards quitely and swiftly"

    "Hey"
    interrupted general scorch
    "i hope you know we only came here so i can settle a score with willy woo and the big guy here"

    i looked at him, then all of a sudden, i looked behind him
    i muttered"i think rampage has struck again"

    everyone turned around and saw smoke starting to rise from a nereby village not too far from us

    i jumped over everyone and started running towards the smoke
    willy woo, hevet, the girl and rexsten followed
    general scorch also followed at the thought of revenge against rampage

    Hey, uh, that doesn't work. I have already stated in a story, a few hours ago, that Scorch and Rin had left the cave for Ba-Sin-Sa...

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [372]Nov 23, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    TheGreatAvatar...its your turn. I felt bad that I mde you delete your pst earlier. GO ahead and post...I will be back in 1n hour or so...


    k..thx=)
    but it wont be too good...i dont have a fight scene in mind now=p

    Red death(master of fire and earth bending)
    --------------------------------------------

    I was running towards a cave with willy, hevet and rexsten ahead of me

    When i got in to the cave, i heard talking
    willy woo, and a voice i havent heard before
    i then saw willy woo talking to a fire nation general...general scorch...
    the man i attempted to heal in omashu
    i also saw a girl behind the general

    willy woo was talking to the general as if theyve met before
    all of a sudden rexsten launched a rock from the earth,
    but at the same time, an arrow sped right past me
    and struck willy woo in the shoulder
    I heard Rexsten drop the boulder and scream "WILLY!!"

    I turned around to see who shot the arrow, but i couldnt see anyone from my view
    i then decided to exit the cave to make sure no enemies were coming towards us
    as i moved out of the cave, i saw 4 figures
    3 on 1 side, and 1 big figure on the other

    all of a sudden the big figure, and 1 of the other men started fighting
    i slowly moved closer, but as i got close enough to see who the men were,
    the men had already captured the big man
    I looked at the face of the captured man, and i immidiately recognized him
    ...Rampage, the ne who saved me as a little boy

    i was about to ambush the men,
    but all of a sudden, fire nation soldiers came out of nowhere..ambushing the 3 men
    eventually, the fire nation soldiers got captured

    while whitnessing the fighting of the 3 men,
    i figured it wasnt safe yet to fight them without revealing the secret that im a firebender

    i decided to go back to the cave and tell everyone what just happened
    after the story, 2 of the guys said they knew a guy named rampage
    they told me how they knew him, and i was suprised to hear, that rampage had done such terrible things to both of them

    i replied
    "You must be thinking of the wrong guy"
    "Rampage is a nice..a friendly soldier"

    then willy woo and general scorch looked at me as if i was crazy

    i then said
    "im going to rescue rampage and see if what you said true or not"

    but when i got back to the scene of the fight, rampage was walking away with the 3 men as if no fight had happened
    i was confused
    they boarded his ship and left

    as i turned back to go to the cave, i saw willy woo, ornith, hevet, general scorch and the lady walking towards me
    willy said"i know we both have different views on rampage",
    "but we can figure out the true rampage after we rescue ornith"
    "we need ornith, or our team is no longer complete"

    i looked up and said
    "ok"

    i hesitated and then said
    "the fire nation soldiers who took ornith were most likely under rampage's control"
    "rampage would not take his captors back to the fire nation right after he captures them"
    "the rampage i know would invade tons of towns, capture tons of people, then return to the fire nation"

    "so..your point?" asked rexsten

    i replied
    "we have to stay on the lookout for towns that he would invade next"
    "if we find a town he starts to invade, all we have to do, is find his ship...which would obviously be at the harbor"
    "his captors are kept in metal cages under the command center"
    "its actually quite easy to get to the jail cell"
    "- but there will be many guards at the jail cell"
    "we will need to take out the guards quitely and swiftly"

    "Hey"
    interrupted general scorch
    "i hope you know we only came here so i can settle a score with willy woo and the big guy here"

    i looked at him, then all of a sudden, i looked behind him
    i muttered"i think rampage has struck again"

    everyone turned around and saw smoke starting to rise from a nereby village not too far from us

    i jumped over everyone and started running towards the smoke
    willy woo, hevet, the girl and rexsten followed
    general scorch also followed at the thought of revenge against rampage

    Hey, uh, that doesn't work. I have already stated in a story, a few hours ago, that Scorch and Rin had left the cave for Ba-Sin-Sa...


    thatlostguy stated in a story b4 that we all met u in a cave....
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    vegnegun

    [373]Nov 23, 2006
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    Okay, thatlostguy, TheGreatAvatar, READ THIS:

    vegnegun wrote:

    General Scorch (Fire Bender)

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    Scorch had just answered some questions from Rin.

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    The sun had just reached it's peak and Rin noticed a drastic improvement. "Whoa," said Rin, "What happened?"

    "The sun is high in the sky," said Scorch, "you should know that the sun is the source of our power."

    "Oh, right," said Rin, "my brother told me that once."

    "Rin, I've been thinking about you're offer to go to Ba-Sin-Sa," said Scorch, "and I think we should do it."

    "Really?" asked Rin.

    "Yeah," said Scorch, "I was heading there before I came here." Scorch had completely forgotten about what the sage Kujo had told him. "But, before we leave," sighed Scorch, "I'm going to try and teach you the most advanced move I have ever created: the power of flight."

    "You're going to teach me how to fly?" asked Rin, "I thought you said that I didn't even know the basics of Fire Bending."

    "You don't need to," said Scorch, "we should hurry though. I'm not sure how much longer we'll have here until we'll have to run away again."

    "Okay," said Rin, "so, how do I fly?"

    "Whoa, take it easy," said Scorch, "first, forget about your hands. As far as you are concerned, you have no hands." Rin closed her eyes, "You must visualize you inner chi and focus it to your feet and away from you hands. now breath in, and out, breath in, and out." Rin took deep breaths and Scorch so a small amount of fire come from her feet. "Yes, now, one last time, Breath!" Rin inhauled, then exhauled. She rose into the air and fire was coming from her feet and Rin stopped exhauling, still in the air. "Rin, open your eyes," said Scorch. Rin slowly opened her eyes and saw she was flying.

    "I did it?"??she asked, "I did it! Yay." Scorch??slowly floated into the air next to her.

    "See, even though you can't throw fire," said Scorch, "you can still fly. Now, why don't you say we get to Ba-Sin-Sa?"

    "Sure," said Rin, "you'll be here to catch me if I fall, right?"

    "Of course," said Scorch, "I would never think of leaving a student." They headed for Ba-Sin-Sa.??

    You see that? Unfortunately I didn't catch this mistake in thatlostguy's story and TheGreatAvatar made the same mistake and had not realized about the fact that Rin and Scorch left the cave in the first place.

    I don't know why, but sorry for the confusion. Unfortunately, this means that you two will have to edit your stories a little.

    Edited on 11/23/2006 8:44pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [374]Nov 23, 2006
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    .well..i cant edit my story until thatlostguy edits his story which means either u change ure story a bit(i mean..just deleting the going to ba sing se thing)
    or we wait for thatlostguy to change his, then i change my whole story around...-.-
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    vegnegun

    [375]Nov 23, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    .well..i cant edit my story until thatlostguy edits his story which means either u change ure story a bit(i mean..just deleting the going to ba sing se thing)
    or we wait for thatlostguy to change his, then i change my whole story around...-.-

    Okay, fine... I will delete the going to ba-sin-sa part.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [376]Nov 23, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    .well..i cant edit my story until thatlostguy edits his story which means either u change ure story a bit(i mean..just deleting the going to ba sing se thing)
    or we wait for thatlostguy to change his, then i change my whole story around...-.-

    Okay, fine... I will delete the going to ba-sin-sa part.



    hey man..srry bout u having to change ure story a little
    but, we all know ure gonna go to ba sing se sooner or later
    ..right?=p
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    vegnegun

    [377]Nov 23, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    .well..i cant edit my story until thatlostguy edits his story which means either u change ure story a bit(i mean..just deleting the going to ba sing se thing)
    or we wait for thatlostguy to change his, then i change my whole story around...-.-

    Okay, fine... I will delete the going to ba-sin-sa part.

    CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Two of the people who are involved with my character edited their stories and I don't want to set them off at all. And it took them forever to make the slight changes and I doubt I'll be able to get them to change it again wtihout them getting annoyed.

    Sorry, I guess my hands are tied now......... CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Edited on 11/23/2006 8:52pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [378]Nov 23, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    .well..i cant edit my story until thatlostguy edits his story which means either u change ure story a bit(i mean..just deleting the going to ba sing se thing)
    or we wait for thatlostguy to change his, then i change my whole story around...-.-

    Okay, fine... I will delete the going to ba-sin-sa part.

    CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Two of the people who are involved with my character edited their stories and I don't want to set them off at all. And it took them forever to make the slight changes and I doubt I'll be able to get them to change it again wtihout them getting annoyed.

    Sorry, I guess my hands are tied now......... CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    who are..the 2?
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    vegnegun

    [379]Nov 23, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    .well..i cant edit my story until thatlostguy edits his story which means either u change ure story a bit(i mean..just deleting the going to ba sing se thing)
    or we wait for thatlostguy to change his, then i change my whole story around...-.-

    Okay, fine... I will delete the going to ba-sin-sa part.

    CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Two of the people who are involved with my character edited their stories and I don't want to set them off at all. And it took them forever to make the slight changes and I doubt I'll be able to get them to change it again wtihout them getting annoyed.

    Sorry, I guess my hands are tied now......... CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    who are..the 2?

    Well, if you've been paying attention to the story around the time Scorch met Rin, you would notice that me and her have done an equal amount of work (excluding Rampage) and the second person, well..... I'm not at liberty to say.

    And, I've been trying to get a hold on the others all day, with little succuess, but since its turky day,??I doubt that's going to happen at this point in the day.

    Edited on 11/23/2006 8:59pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [380]Nov 23, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:
    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    .well..i cant edit my story until thatlostguy edits his story which means either u change ure story a bit(i mean..just deleting the going to ba sing se thing)
    or we wait for thatlostguy to change his, then i change my whole story around...-.-

    Okay, fine... I will delete the going to ba-sin-sa part.

    CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Two of the people who are involved with my character edited their stories and I don't want to set them off at all. And it took them forever to make the slight changes and I doubt I'll be able to get them to change it again wtihout them getting annoyed.

    Sorry, I guess my hands are tied now......... CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    who are..the 2?

    Well, if you've been paying attention to the story around the time Scorch met Rin, you would notice that me and her have done an equal amount of work (excluding Rampage) and the second person, well..... I'm not at liberty to say.


    ...whatever
    im gunna wait fo thatlostguy to see what he wants to do
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