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    TheGreatAvatar

    [402]Nov 24, 2006
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    aww fine
    i thot he was just a huge, fat archer=p

    ok ill change it=p
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    AEtherBlue

    [403]Nov 24, 2006
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    Damn, Avatar forte isent bak till 4:00, and he was going to meet up with me in Ba-Sing-Se... (Probably)
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [404]Nov 24, 2006
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    AEtherBlue wrote:
    Damn, Avatar forte isent bak till 4:00, and he was going to meet up with me in Ba-Sing-Se... (Probably)

    whos avatar forte?
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    AEtherBlue

    [405]Nov 24, 2006
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    avatarforte wrote:
    Rinkoto Fang-Airbender
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    A large explosion in the distance woke me from my peaceful sleep. "God damn it, that dream was just getting good". Getting to my feet, I took out my spyglass and aimed it in the general direction of the sound. I saw what looked to be smoke, most likely from a fire due to the amount of smoke which was rising.

    "Hmmm, now I wonder what's going on over there. Eh, might as well check it out, maybe someone there knows where to find the people that I'm looking for".
    (makes his way to the village)

    Upon arriving, I noticed a group of fire nation troops. Lucky that I was prepared for that, cause when they looked to see who was coming, I was already hidden behind a broken building. From where I was, I could hear them talking.

    "Can't believe that monster Rampage is in charge. Did you see what happened after he lost to the traditor. He killed 2 people just to release his anger. I'm happy he went off to look for him, I don't like being anywhere near that guy".

    "Rampage huh, seems that name is quite popular around here", I thought to myself. Looking down, I saw what looked to be scorch marks, most likely from fire bending. Moving closer to the spot, I took a whiff. Whoever had been here hadn't left long ago, so the scent was fresh in the wind. "Seems they went this way, but the scent changes, heading toward Ba-Sing-Se.Well, lets go see if I can't find this fire nation traditor. Sounds like just the kind of person I need to see". And with that, I was off.

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    Edited on 11/24/2006 10:13am
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    Rin-tori

    [406]Nov 24, 2006
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    I agree with ThatLostGuy. We can have Scorch and Rin meet Willy's group but leave immediately because of Rampage. Maybe I could post for Rin and Scorch...?
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    ThatLostGuy

    [407]Nov 24, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    My arm was still killing me but we needed Orinth back. Our team had just temporarily defeated Spike, Mayhem, and Bulldozer (Hitmen of Fire Nation). But, they will be back for they want me and my friends dead.
    -
    Hevet, Red Death (who can now shoot lightning), Rexsten, and I began to walk towards another burning villiage. It actually wasn't that far away. We arrived at the villiage and Fire Nation soldiers were already invading the town. I said, "Quick, hide. Get behind the-" BOOM the building we were next to lit up in flames and something exploded. Hevet and I fell to the ground and we were helped up by Rexsten and Red Death. All of a sudden we were spotted and a Fire Nation soldier yelled, "There are four survivors over here." More Fire Nation soldiers ran towards us as the four of us (the team) circled around the burning building as fire balls were launched at us.
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    I said, "Red Death, Hevet, Rexsten. You are the strong one of the team. Rescue Orinth. I will meet up with you in the future. If you don't hear from me then go to Ba-Sing-Se. I WILL meet you there! Now, go! RUN!" My three team mates stared at me as I ran out from behind the burning building. I had my hands raised in the air but a fire ball was still launched at me. It nailed me in the chest and I fell down to the ground. I turned my head back and I saw Red Death, Hevet, and Rexsten running away from the burning house towards a wooded area of the forest. -
    I was lying on the ground and a Fire Nation soldier with a red mohawk walked up to me and said, "Hello! Remember me!" He shot a fire ball at my head which gashed my head open with blood.
    -
    I blacked out and woke up in a cage. It was dark and hard to see. I saw a figure in a cage and I said, "Orinth? Is that you?"
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [408]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:
    I agree with ThatLostGuy. We can have Scorch and Rin meet Willy's group but leave immediately because of Rampage. Maybe I could post for Rin and Scorch...?


    we already posted that u and scorch flew away

    and go ahead..post for scorch too...since ure in the same...group
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    ThatLostGuy

    [409]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:
    I agree with ThatLostGuy. We can have Scorch and Rin meet Willy's group but leave immediately because of Rampage. Maybe I could post for Rin and Scorch...?
    Well I alreadymade two posts today and in one of them Scorch and Rin fly away from the cave area. That is the last we heard of Rin and Scorch (oof flying to Ba-Sing-Se)...

    -I have to go. I will be back tonight....(good like TheGreatAvatar...the team is slowly being narrowed down. Now its just RedDeath, Hevet, and Rexsten.. you lost your leader..good luck on saving two people!!!

    Edited on 11/24/2006 10:25am
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    Rin-tori

    [410]Nov 24, 2006
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    Okay. I'll let vegnegun know. ^^;
    Edited on 11/24/2006 10:27am
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    vegnegun

    [411]Nov 24, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    and woah..guys
    seriously...chillo out with the whole rampage thing
    first ven uses it
    then willy woo(which is the 2nd person)
    then me(honestly i was thinking about using rampage in a flashback in school that same day...but willywoo used rampage b4 i got to post=(...anyways..i used to live in the fire nation...the fn isnt too big if ud notice..so i knew him)

    but cmon
    darkboy somehow knows him then leo
    hey ven...are u sure rampage isnt magical?
    run really fast or anything?-.-

    I think some of the other characters have been burning the magic grass....

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    vegnegun

    [412]Nov 24, 2006
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    Hey, Rin, techincally its your turn to post, so go ahead. Just don't forget what we have, well, you know....^^
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [413]Nov 24, 2006
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    Red death(master of fire and earth)
    -----------------------------------

    i ran off toward the 12 ships docked at the harbor with hevet,rexsten and red death
    we split up
    i took the one all the way on the right
    while hevet and rexsten took the one all the way on the left

    we checked each ship, getting closer to the middle

    as we reached our 3rd ships, we saw a bunch of fire nation soldiers lead by a man with a red mohawk bringing willy in as a prisoner

    we decided to check the middle ship next
    the middle ship was the ship that willy was brought into
    he looked bloody

    we entered the ship

    rampage mustve had a huge ship upgrade, cuz this ship was way bigger than i remembered
    we easily made our way to where i remembered the jail cell was,
    but when we got there, there was no jail cell
    it was a fire bending training room

    i said in a low voice
    "we have to split up and search for willy and ornith"
    "this ship is different then i remember"
    "be careful"

    and we all went our own three ways
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    Rin-tori

    [414]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin (novice firebender)

    Just ran into Willy's group in the cave, Rampage and the three hitmen were approaching. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "Not good..." Scorch said. "Rampage is after us."

    "Hey!" Yelled Willy. "I still have business with you."

    "We should leave right now, if Rampage has allies with him, we're finished." Rin whispered to Scorch.

    "Sorry little Earthbender, but our fight is going to have to wait. We have some personal matters to attend to. Just so you know, next time we see you, if it's a fight you want then it's a fight you'll get. Good luck with our old friends." Scorch took Rin by the hand and took off for Ba Sing Se.

    ??Rin almost fell once or twice but managed to stay in flight for a while. They passed over the coast of the island and went east to the mainland of the Earth Kingdom.

    "I'm done. I'm completely drained, and it's almost sunset." Rin complained.

    "All right, we'll stop here to make camp for the night. We have a long way to go to Ba Sing Se, but we've covered a lot of ground so far. How about tomorrow I teach you some other stuff?" Scorch responded.

    "Sure, sure...but now I really need some sleep."

    The next morning, Scorch and Rin looked over a map of the Earth Kingdom.

    "So we just came from that island..." Scorch pointed at the map. "...and flew all the way to here." He pointed to their approximate location.

    "And Ba Sing Se is all the way over here..." Rin pointed farther east and north to the city with two huge walls, the safe haven of the Earth Kingdom, the impenetrable city.

    "That's about a weeks worth of flying for me, but with you it might take longer..." Scorch noted.

    "Sorry, I'm just a bunch of dead weight, aren't I?"

    "No! That's not what I meant. I just meant that it's more important that we work together in a group and that stopping more often would be the best for both of us."

    "Oh, okay. Say, do you think Rampage would be so bold as to follow us all the way there?"

    "If I know him, then yeah, he would." Scorch looked up through the trees. The sun was still low in the sky. "It's time to start your training for the day."

    "All right, now I can finally learn how to fight." Rin pretended to laugh evilly.

    Scorch couldn't resist laughing. "Come on, let's get focused."

    Edited on 11/24/2006 10:57am
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    ThatLostGuy

    [415]Nov 24, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender) **Last post until tonight**
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    The man with the red mohawk walked into the room that I was locked in. I said, "My head. Is it okay?" He replied, "Yes, your head is patched up. And we were never introduced. My name is Wicker." I said, "I'm Willy Woo. And you, let me out of this cage. And what did you do to Orinth." The man replied, "Orinth who?" I said, "My friend, he is right over there." -
    Wicker replied, "Orinth, oh that is his name. I don't know. I personally burned him pretty bad. Hahahaha. He hasn't spoke this whole time." I replied, "No. He still hasn't spoke." Wicker then said, "Well Willy, there is NO way that you will survive this boat ride! We are taking you somewhere. And when we finally arive you will be KILLED!" I replied, "You son of a bi**h! Let me out of this cage! Let Orinth and I go!"
    -
    Wicker laughed and said, "I'll lets you go when we reach our destination. Then, you will both be KILLED!"
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    Leodegarioiii

    [416]Nov 24, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy, are you gonna add me to the site soon
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    vegnegun

    [417]Nov 24, 2006
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    General Scorch (Fire Bender)

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    Scorch and Rin began to train.

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    "Okay, get into your stance," said Scorch.??Rin tried it once and was dead on. "Perfect," said Scorch, "I did notice something about your wooden sandals and I think that they weren't even. It looks much better and more natural."

    "Thanks," said Rin, "okay, what do you want??me to do first?" Scorch thought for a moment and decided.

    "Let's start with fireballs," said Scorch, "the most basic of fire bending, but also one of the best fighting technics that you could??know. First take in a deep breath, and exhaul. Now, when you do that again, quickly jab your fist out, I don't care which one." Rin inhauled and exhauled, quickly jabbing her fist out in front of her.

    "Whoa,??I??can't believe I got it on the first try," said Rin.

    "Yeah, that was good," said Scorch, "try to do five in a row, starting with you right hand and ending with your left. And don't be afraid to make a little noise when you do it; trust me it helps."

    "Alright," said Rin. She took in a deep??breath and began to make several quick??jabs, creating fire balls, each smaller than the last. "Why s that so hard?" she asked.

    "Your tired," said Scorch, "and??probably a little hungry."

    "Yeah, just a little," said Rin.

    "Okay, let's go down to the village and see if we can find something to eat," said Scorch.

    "Uh, there might be a problem," said Rin, "I don't have any money with me, not even a copper piece."

    "Well, that might be a problem," said Scorch, "let's just go down there and see if we can find a job, just enough to make a little money for food."

    "Okay," said Rin, "could we walk though?"

    "Sure, that'll probably be best," said Scorch, "this is an earth kingdom town anyway." They headed down to the town, hoping to find a way to make a quick copper piece.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [418]Nov 24, 2006
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    Red death(master of fire and earth)
    -----------------------------------
    We split up
    the first room i enterd was a supply room
    i heard a scream...most likely coming from rexsten
    but i couldnt stop searching for the jail cell
    then i heard hevet getting caught
    i was under alot of pressure

    i entered a weaponry room
    then i enterd a office room
    rampage's room

    i discovered records of him destroying towns
    killing innocent people

    my feelings about rampage immidatelly changed

    "rampage has to go down" i said
    i searched around more, and i found a record that rampage was going to inflitrate ba sing se next
    then he would return to the fn with all the captors
    including ornith, willy, and the others

    i had to get to ba sing se as fast as i can
    i sneaked off the ship and started running towards ba sing se...
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [419]Nov 24, 2006
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    Red death(master of fire and earth)
    ------------------------------------

    i wasnt long before i reached the beginning of a wide spread desert
    i remembered this place clearly
    **flashback**
    i was 10 years old

    i ran away from the fire nation
    i was going to ba sing se
    but i had to cross a desert

    for 3 days i walked along the desert with no food
    then i suddenly collapsed

    i woke up
    i found out i was under the hospitality of sand benders
    they fed me every day
    i helped them catch creatures to trade to the beatle headed merchants

    i lived with them for 8 months
    but i finally had to leave
    i made alot of sand bending friends there

    they knew i was a firebender, but they didnt care
    "im sorry"i said to the sand bender leader
    "i have to go"

    "we hope to see you again flame(their nickname for me cuz they didnt like calling me by red eath)" replied the leader
    "we packed your bag with food, now go on"

    "thanks" i replied
    and i left
    **flashback end**

    "Flame?!" i heard someone say

    I looked up and saw a group of sandbenders standing before me
    "SHA-MO(leader of the sand benders)!!"i yelled

    sha-mo walked foward and said
    "we missed you"
    "we knew wed see you again too"

    i hugged sha-mo

    "so..."sha-mo said
    "what brings you back out here?"

    I replied
    "i have to get back to ba sing se-"

    "which reminds me..."he interrupted
    "when did you leave ba sing se?"

    "around 2 years ago, to go to omashu" i replied
    "i used to be an omashu guard, but i left to stop the war"

    "haha..our flame out to stop the war"
    "how nice" he said
    "need any help?"

    "..well..."i thought
    "can you get me across this desert quickly?" i asked
    "i need to get to ba sing se quickly to save my friends"

    "of course we can!!"
    "come on" sha-mo said

    he indicated for me to get on one of the sand-sailors
    i got on, and off we sailed
    Edited on 11/24/2006 11:40am
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    AEtherBlue

    [420]Nov 24, 2006
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    Orha-Earth Bender/Master Blacksmith

    Working on my newest addition to my "Failed Dreams", A Tai-Chi sword, able to cut through iron and steel. I took a break fom my leighbors to find my father blacksmithing,

    "Father!", I said shocked, rushing over to the sick man,"You need your rest, the medication doesent come in till you're sleeping."

    "I've had enough of pills, Talho. I am a man, I know when my time is up. I just want to spend my last days doing what I love to instead of waiting in a bed for a false hope." He answered to me sternly.

    "No! You can get better father. The doctors said in time you could heal." I told him.

    "The doctors know nothing of a worriers honor. They cant jus-" He stoped."Urgh!" He fell to the floor.

    "Father!" I knelt onto the ground and tried to brace him but he was unconcious. I put him back in his bed and gave him some pills. He opened his eyes.

    "Maby I am destined to be bedridden. But you shouldent have to stay here, you should go and do what you want. Do something your GOOD at, and make lots of money tolive in happyness." he fell asleep again.

    I got up and walked out the door, "You don't know what I'm good at."

    She exits.
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