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    AEtherBlue

    [441]Nov 24, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    AEtherBlue wrote:
    Orha-Earthbender

    I saw the man jump down onto the other side of the wall.

    I rushed to the front of the shop where I found the same man laying there in front of the shop, but he was now in a Dai-li uniform.


    i was in my dai li uniform when i jumped down the wall and when u found me..so basically..i was wearing the same uniform both times u saw me

    i changed into my red death uniform in between the 2 times u saw me tho

    OOps... sorry...
    Misssed the timespaces there..
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    I edited it

    Edited on 11/24/2006 1:47pm
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    AEtherBlue

    [442]Nov 24, 2006
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    Orha-Earthbender

    After getting my father back into his bed I walked up the stairs with a cup of cold water. I placed it on a table close to the bed and I looked at the Dai-Li guard. "I'll just wait here untill he wakes up. I need to ask him where he saw the firenation comming from." Two or three monutes passed by and the man opened his eyes.

    "Who are you?"the man asked.
    "I'm Talho, the BlackSmith of this shop."I responded.
    "Shop?"The man looked weery so I told him,
    "Look, I need to know something... Where is the Fire Nations Army?"

    He was too tired to respond, I asked myself,"Wait, I'll go ask Dahat, he'd know wheere they where attacking from."
    I walked down the stairs to gather my equiptment and weapons, I rush over to one of the Dai-Li and ask him where I could find Dahat. He told me he was at the outer wall so I rushed there. when I got there I was confronted by 4 Dai-Li soldiers.
    "We cant let anyone leave this city." One of them said.
    "But I have to talk to Dahat." I told them.
    "I'm sorry but we have a crisis on our hands right now and dont need children wandering off."
    I Gave him the nastiest look I could give and headed behind a flight of stairs.. "I'll just have to scare you guys off then."I thought to myself.
    Reaching to the pack at my side I was going to trow a mini smoke bomb at them.

    "My PACK! I left it at the house... Oh no!! my stuff is in there. My Coat!" Remembering about the Dai-Li guard I left in my room. I rushed back to the shop.
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    vegnegun

    [443]Nov 24, 2006
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    General Scorch (Fire Bender)


    Scorch had just informed Rin about the tournement


    Rin and Scorch began to train for the tournement, when Scorch got a thought.

    "Wait a second," said Scorch as he examined the flyer again, "this thing sounds like its an underground tournement."

    "Yeah, so?" asked Rin as she switched from doing push-ups to doing sit-ups.

    "Well, if this things underground, why should we hesitate to use our fire bending?" asked Scorch, "chances are high most of the spectators are wanted criminals and wouldn't dare to report us in fear of getting caught."??

    "Hmm, so, what should we do?" asked Rin.

    "Well, I think this would be a perfect opportunity to test your skills," said Scorch, "just to see how well you bend in combat. You'd be surprised how different your bending could be when your fighting."

    "Oh, I gotcha," said Rin as she stopped and sat up, "but, this things at night, right? Won't my bending be weaker?"

    "Yeah, but not enough for you to notice a HUGE difference," said Scorch.

    "Fine, it seems like its getting late though," said Rin, "should we head toward the village?"

    "Probably," said Scorch. They headed down the village and looked for the club and saw a man selling masks.

    "Masks, get your wooden masks here!" exclaimed the man, "one copper piece only!" Scorch stopped an pulled out two copper pieces.

    "What are you doing?" asked Rin, "those are our last two pieces, don't spend them."

    "Think about it," said Scorch, "we need disguises, just in case someone DOES get the guts to report us, we'd be in trouble. But, with those masks..."

    "They wouldn't recognize us!' Rin finished his sentence, "alright." The turned around and went to the cart. "Wow, so many masks," she said, "which one should I pick?" Scorch picked up a black one, that seemed to??be made of metal.

    "Hey, I thought you said these were wooden," said Scorch.

    "I did, oh well," said the man, "one copper piece still." Scorch examined the mask. It was black and didn't seem to have eye holes. it had two strange, flame-shaped horns on the top left and top right corners.

    "Okay, that sounds fair," said Scorch as he gave the man the copper piece. Rin picked up a similar one that was blue and white.

    "Oh, I like this one," said Rin, "and it matches yours! I'll take it!" Scorch gave the man their last copper piece. Rin and Scorch didn't put the helmets on, yet, and looked for the club. Scorch looked at the flyer again and noticed a small symbol at the corner. He saw a sign with the??same symbol on it.

    "I think this is it," said Scorch, "let's go in." Scorch and Rin went into the building. It was a bar and their was a bartender, and the room was empty.

    "What do you want?" asked the bartender. Scorch looked at the flyer.

    "falco," said??Scorch.

    "Oh, aren't you two a little young to do this?" asked the bartender, "oh well, who am I to judge?" He stomped on the ground and the floor opened to reveal a stairway. Rin and Scorch went down it??into the depths and heard crowds cheering. They approached a desk and put the masks on.

    "Can I help you?" asked the old lady at the desk.

    "We wish to participate in the tournament," said Scorch. He was surprised his voice was different.

    "Okay, what's your name?" she asked. Scorch was curious and said:

    "Rampage."

    "Sorry, thats already taken," said the lady.

    "Ravage," said Scorch.

    "Ravage?"??she asked, "okay. And what about your friend?"

    "Kin," said Rin.

    "Okay, I have you both down," said the lady, "wait in the waiting area behind me until you hear you name called." Scorch and Rin, went into the waiting area.


    "Scorch," said Rin, "what was with the fake names?"


    "It was for our protection," said Scorch,??"and keep in mind that I'm fire nation."??????

    "Oh right," said Rin. They both waited in a room with some questionable looking people, but no Rampage.

    "Good," said Scorch, "it seems we won't have to fight eachother."

    "Why?" asked Rin.

    "Look at the board," said Scorch as he pointed to a rock board that already had their names chizzled in. They were both on side B, and they saw Rampage was on side A. They waited for their names to be called....

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    AEtherBlue

    [444]Nov 24, 2006
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    It's quiet...
    Tooo quiet...
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    Rin-tori

    [445]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Scorch and Rin just entered the underground tournament.

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    Two fighters were called, both earthbenders. The barrages of rocks hit some of the spectators occasionally, but it was too exciting to matter to them.

    "Remind me to not stand so close to the stage." Rin whispered to Scorch. He nodded in agreement.

    After about three rounds, Scorch's alias was called.
    "Ravage and Goten to the stage for a round 1 fight!" The referree called.

    "Good luck." Rin said as Scorch made his way up to the stage.

    Goten was a large, bulky earthbender. He was just shorter than Scorch.

    "Fighters, here are the rules: You can use any means necessary within your own power to win. A loss is not declared unless the opponent is dead, or if I declare that they are unable to continue, or if they give up. Fighters ready, begin!" The referree signaled the start of the fight.

    Goten shifted the ground under Scorch's feet, who stumbled rather than charged towards him. He sent waves of flame towards him, but Goten sent smaller chunks of rocks at him in return. Scorch managed to dodge most of them, but took a devastating blow to the stomach. He reagined his poise and charged towards Goten again, who raised another rock above his head and slammed it down right where Scorch was. He rolled out of the way just in time and grabbed onto Goten's ankle. He burnt his foot and he screamed. While he didn't have a change to fight back, Scorch launched a huge fireball in his direction, sending him sprawling to the floor for cover. Scorch stood over him, ready to attack by the time Goten was ready to surrender.

    "No, please! I give up!" Goten cried pathetically.
    "Winner: Ravage!" The crowd cried with applause.

    Scorch dusted himself up and jumped off the stage. He saw Rin's masked face in the crowd and made his way over to her.

    "Do you think you can top that?" He asked.

    "No,but I'm sure as hell going to try." She said with a laugh.
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    vegnegun

    [446]Nov 24, 2006
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    General Scorch (Fire Bender)

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    Scorch had just made his first victory in the arena
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    The crowd settled down and the anouncer called two other names

    "The next two to fight are," said the announcer, "Reno and Kin."

    "Well, it looks like you're up next," said Scorch, "good luck. And I'll be watching from the audience."

    "Thanks," said Rin. She walked out to the arena and was met by a larger earth bender in hard armor.

    "Okay, you know the rules," said the announcer, "ready?" They both nodded. "Fight!" Reno started by turning the earth she was standing on into quicksand, forcing her to stand still. She hurled a ball of fire at Reno, but Reno rolled out of the way and hurled a small rock at her. Rin forced fire from her feet and broke free from the quicksand and dodged the rock. Rin fired more fire at Reno, hitting his armor three times. It cracked severly and fell of Reno, revealing a fat man. Reno yelled out:

    "Okay, Okay!" he exclaimed, "I quit!" Rin smiled and landed on the ground and went back into the area, hearing the announcer yell:

    "The winner is: Kin!" Rin noticed Scorch in the audience. Scorch met Rin in the room.

    "Not bad," said Scorch, "not bad at all. You have officially passed your test."

    "Yay!" said Rin. Scorch and Rin waited for either of their names to be called again.

    "Please welcome out next contendors," said the announcer, "Rampage and Savage!"

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    AEtherBlue

    [447]Nov 24, 2006
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    ... it's kind of funny that you guys ended up posting for eachothers charicters other than your own ^^... W/e it's working out great... cool story so far... I am not sure what type of personality red death is... i have to attain some more charactaristics from him to be able to wright what he would do..

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    short version-I ran out of ideas
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    vegnegun

    [448]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rampage (Gigantic Axe)


    Rampage had just been called to fight his oppenet, Savage.??


    Rampage walked out from side A and saw his oppenet. He was about 6"6' and had two gigantic claw-like weapons on his hands that had three claws (two on his knuckle and one on his thumb) each were made of iron and were about four feet long. Rampage and Savage both met in the middle and the announcer looked at them.

    "Okay, you two know the rules," he said, "get ready..." He ran away from them, "FIGHT!" Rampage took out his axe and swung at Savage, that jumped over it and landed on the blade, starring at Rampage's eyes. Rampage took his fist and pulled it back, ready to punch Savage off. Savage striked Rampage in the chest with his claw, cutting him, and jumped off the axe blade. Rampage stepped back and quickly regained his balance and lunged at Savage and grabbed him by the throat and lifted him into the air.

    "Hmm," said Rampage, "your pain is lovely, but where is your terror?"

    "Miserable bug," said Savage. He struck Rampage in the gut, forcing Rampage to throw him on the ground.

    "Argh!" exlciamed Rampage in pain. He marched toward Savage and swung his axe down, but stopped. he suddenly got an excited look on his face and stopped.

    "I quit," said Rampage as he pulled his axe back.

    "Um, okay," said the announcer, "the winner is Savage!" The crowd hesitated to cheer this time, but they did. Savage stood up and notcied Rampage had gone into the B side, the same side Savage had to go back into. Savage walked back into the area. Scorch and Rin had watched the performance.

    "I don't like this," said Rin.

    "Neither do I," said Scorch, "I don't like this at all."

    ***A few moments later***

    Savage walked into the hall connecting the room with the arena and saw Rampage waiting for him.

    "What do you want?" asked Savage.

    "I liked your erformance out there," said Rampage, "oh, how rude of me. The names Rampage of the Fire Nation Army."

    "Fire Nation?" asked Savage, "what do you want?"

    "I need a second in command for my ship, and I think your perfect for the job," said Rampage, "what do you think?"

    "What's in it for me?" asked Savage.

    "Hmm, you get a home of the Fire Nation," said Rampage, "and, all the food you can eat."

    "Okay, I'm in," said Savage.

    "Perfect," said Rampage, "okay, here's the plan...."

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [449]Nov 24, 2006
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    alrighty..im back=)

    Red death(master of fire and earth)
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    i woke up, a girl named talho asked me who i was
    then she left

    when she left i looked around the room
    i could tell it was her room

    then i looked into te corner and saw a fire nation soldier armor sticking out
    i thought carefully

    "it cant be..."i said
    "she works for the fire nation?"

    i walked over and i noticed a bag and a vest
    i inspected the bag, and i found mini bombs, stink bonbs, gas bombs and all other bombs
    i inspected the vest and noticed it released gas from some part of the jacket

    these findings confused me
    i decided i would ask her when she got back

    i looked out the window, and the streets were full of ba sing se peasents shopping

    i then decided to look around the rest of the shop
    i looked into 1 room, and saw an old man
    who fell asleep atop the same tai chi sword i saw yesterday in that room
    "i guess thats the girls grandfather then..."i whispered

    then i walked out into the backyard
    it was rocky
    everything was rocky

    "haha" i laughed
    "this is perfect" i said

    then i began training earthbending in the backyard
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    Rin-tori

    [450]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Rin and Scorch were still in the underground tournament.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "These fights are getting boring." Rin said as another fighter was flung from the stage by his opponent, screming for mercy.

    "Yeah, it's all the same thing so far. But I can't believe Rampage just gave up like that." Scorch lowered his voice on his last sentence.

    "I can't believe he hasn't noticed you yet."

    "Yeah, for now we should just lie low so we can keep it that way."

    "Ravage and Savage for their round 2 fight! Step up to the arena!" The referree called.

    "That's me." Scorch said.

    "Good luck!" She called after him.
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [451]Nov 24, 2006
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    red death(master of fire and earth)
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    talho came running back to her blacksmith store and she thought she herd rumbling in the back yard
    she quickly ran upstairs to gather her vest and pack
    as she ran back downstairs, she remembered she didnt see the dai li guard there

    then she heard more rumbling from the backyard
    she peeked out into the backyard and saw the dai li agent training earthbending...
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    vegnegun

    [452]Nov 24, 2006
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    General Scorch (fire bender)

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    Scorch had just been called in the arena to fight Savage.
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    Scorch walked into the arena and saw the blood on Savage's weapons still dripping with blood. The announcer approached them.

    "Okay," said the announcer, "you both know the rules. FIGHT!" Scorch fired a stream of??fire at Savage, but he ducked and rolled out of the roll. Scorch jumed back to avoid an attack that never came. Scorch fired another stream of fire at Savage, but Savage just rolled out of the way.

    "What are you doing?" asked Scorch.

    "Running out the clock," said Savage as he came in close and knocked Scorch over. Scorch wasn't injured, but Savage just hit him hard enough to knock him over.

    "Running out the clock?" asked Scorch, "what are you talking about?" Scorch heard a feminine scream and turned around.

    "That," said Savage. He jumped over Scorch and ran out of the arena. Scorch already knew what was happening and raced after Savage. They left the club and Savage ran into a barn. Scorch followed and saw Savage standing there, waiting for him.

    "Scorch, do you want you're girlfriend back?" he asked, "turn yourself in!" Scorch groaned and knew that he had no way out of this that wouldn't result in Rin's death. He knew though that Rampage was smart enough to keep his barginning chip in place and wouldn't kill her.

    "Argh!" exclaimed Scorch, "fine."

    "Good, he did say you were smart," said Savage, "now hold still..." Savage took out some oddly shaed restraints. Savage hooked his arms and waist in it, having his hands pressed agains his back.

    "Hmm, maybe Rampage is smarter than I thought," said Scorch. Savage took Scorch to the docks and onto Rampage's ship and up to his quarters. Rampage was sitting in a chair and had Rin in similar restraints.

    "Scorch!" exclaimed Rin. Rampage but a cloth in her mouth.

    "Ah, Scorch," said Rampage, "I see you've decided to join us. Please, sit down." Savage pushed Scorch down on a chair. "Now, I think you know how this will work. You agree to come back with me to see my lord and master, and the girl goes free."

    "How could I trust you?" asked Scorch.

    "You have my word," said Rampage.

    "And that's worth about what?" asked Scorch, "half a copper piece?"

    "Silence," said Rampage, "so, do we have a deal or don't we?"

    "Ugh, unfortunately," said Scorch, "I have no choice. I surrender." Rin shook her head signifying no.

    Rampage laughed, "perfect, Savage!" snapped Rampage, "take these two to the cell."

    "What!?" asked Scorch, "I thought you were going to let her go?"

    "Oh, well, you know my word isn't worth S**t" said Rampage. He removed the cloth from Rin's mouth. Savage took Scorch and Rin down to the jail cell and threw them inside.

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    jaketg

    [453]Nov 24, 2006
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    Sorry I'm just typing this on all Avatar forums I can in 10 mins
    JOIN:Avatar Trivia Tournament!!! NNNNOOOOOOOWWWWWWW
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [454]Nov 24, 2006
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    jaketg wrote:
    Sorry I'm just typing this on all Avatar forums I can in 10 mins
    JOIN:Avatar Trivia Tournament!!! NNNNOOOOOOOWWWWWWW

    ure freaking retarded
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    vegnegun

    [458]Nov 24, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    jaketg wrote:
    Sorry I'm just typing this on all Avatar forums I can in 10 mins JOIN:Avatar Trivia Tournament!!! NNNNOOOOOOOWWWWWWW

    ure freaking retarded

    Hey,??TGA, you should do this on all of the fourms too lol.

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    Rin-tori

    [459]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Rin and Scorch had just been captured by Rampage and Savage.

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    After they were thrown in the cell, Rin was almost crying. She knew this could be the last time she saw Scorch, or the last time she would see daylight. "I'm sorry. This is all my fault. I should have fought back. I'm an idiot." She said. She bit her lip and fought back tears.

    "No. I'm sorry I got you into this mess." Scorch said. "We'll find a way out of this, I know it."

    She tried to hide her crying by wiping her tears on her sleeve with no avail. It was obvious that she had lost hope.

    "My brother told me once..." She sobbed and tried to hold her crying back more. "...that a girl can cry when she's alone, but if she cries in public they see her as weak. But we're all alone, right? So I won't be weak?" She wiped her eyes on her sleeve again.

    "Yeah. You're not weak." He gave her a reassuring hug and Rin cried on his shoulder.
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    AEtherBlue

    [460]Nov 24, 2006
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    I ran upstairs after comming in the front, I reached my room and the Dai-Li was gone, "Damnit! he must be out telling everyone my secret" *Crash* "Now I will have to be a fugitive of my own town."*Crash, Bang*"And I'll have to spend my life away from Ba-Sing-Se."*BOOM!*
    Opens the window to the backyard, "What is that Damn noise?!?!?!?!?!".

    Red Death stops EarthBending, "Hey, I hope you dont mind me using your backyard for practice."

    "Argh! Your so noisey! Sure, whatever, I wonder why you havent left yet." I screemed at him, I turned around and was just about to leave when,

    "You have a FireNation Jacket in your pack." He said.

    I stoped."..." I was silent.

    "Now why would an earthbender like you be doing with a FireNation Jacket? Especially one that emitts gas..." He said, "Any normal person would find that a little strange wouldent you?".

    I couldent move, I was petrified... The increadable annoyance became an increadable witness...
    "You can stay..." I said.
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