Okay, well, since it seems I can't do anything more tonight, I'm done for the day.

General Scorch will return!

Dark Shadow. (Expert Assassin)

I went back to the abandoned house on the inner ring, something told me i would see "D" again if i waited.

I recalled when that old bastard Rampage used to bend, but now most of his chi was captured on my daggers.

Flashback----

It was a hot summer, one of my first missions. I was only 16.

An earth kingdom duke??would give me 5000 pieces of gold if could infiltrate the fire nation and eliminate mr. Rampage. So after months of travel from the Earth Kingdom to?? the FN i arrived hidden on a crate on an old fishing boat.?? I traveled hidden in the shadows for??about tree days, and i finally made it to the small town of Zai-Beng.

Rampage was one of the captains of the city guard, while i moved from rooftop to rooftop i saw a great commotion on the people, i followed them with my sight to a huge arena.?? I jumped from one of the tall buildings to the arena's wall and i attached my self to it with my daggers.

There was a huge battle, One of the warriors was gigantic, but i mean a monster, i realized he was my target. He was fighting against other 5 firebenders and??he was wining.

He used his huge War Axe to create enormous?? waves of fire that could not be blocked by his enemy's bending. He also used the axe as a shield, he looked invincible. When one of the firebender soldiers got distracted Rampage struck him and dived him into to bloody pieces of burened meat. The other opponents were shocked.

While they were fighting i jumped to the middle of the arena. Everyone stoped and starred at my amazed.?? The five Firebenders attacked me, but all their fire strikes were to slow for me, i jumped with grace and avoided them all.One by one i killed the 4 novice firebenders by breaking their neck, striking their hearth and slaying their throat. Finally it was me against Rampage, he screamed a battle cry and waved his huge weapon. The fire strikes never touched me. i just??evaded my way into the monster's body.

When i was there i jumped directly into his chest and deeply perforated his hearth with my daggers, my daggers glowed and i "felt" his chi being absorbed.

He was dead (I tought) so i climbed back to the top of the arena and i left the town with the hole FN army trowing fireballs behind me.

It was fun...

I think Rampage survived because of his extreme size and muscle body, maybe??I could not reach his heart, but i was sure of something, HE COULD NOT BEND any more.

Name: Pain (somebody translate it to chinese for me)

male

Bending: Fire

Nation: earth

Bio: his mother was raped by a fire nation soldier during a raid. When he was found to be a firebender, the village kicked him out. he is a solitary traveler. He will firebend only in an extreme emergency, which usually gets him arrested or kicked out of whatever vllage he's in.

more later. gotta run

Name: Hannisa Okati

Age: 15

Bending and abilities:Waterbender and has great fighting skills.

Bio: When she was 13 she traveled to the Earth Kingdom with her family runing from thir attacked home in the South Pole a few miles away from katara's home. Nobody knew it existed until it was attacked. When in the Earth Kingdom tricked people in villages she was the Avatar and somo believed her and when she was tricked into doing firebending and she couldn't she was pushed out of the village wothout her family that was arrested of trying to steal.

From this lesson she learned to be truthful and met a lst baby close to a burning house with that babes parents dead.She now protects the baby called Orok with her life and helps pthers with her powers when having problems with the Fire Nation.

More to come.

Hannisa Okati- my story is different but she soon will interact with the villians you have created.

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Hannisa now was in her 5th mile with the baby on her back, she couldn't find any food, water or a village with a shelter plus sh thought she couldn't go into any village thinking her infamous act spread through the entire Earth Kingdom.

She then looked upon a forest big one cause she looked for an ending with her eyes and couldn't find one, sh netered thinking it would be fresh and probably could find some food and maybe a lake.

She sees a big tree with many berries and she sees hope. She goes to grab one and a firebender attachs her, it was an old man with a very scarred face, he kept throwing fireballs at her nad she started to run and sees the old man sends big Saber-Tooth Mosse Lioness??after her and worries more until she sees a lake. She dawns upon the lake and waits for the Saber-Tooth Mosse-Lioness??to get closer and sends a wave to them holding them back and making them run.

She now is a bit more relaxed but dreams of the berries. At least she has some water she thinks. She puts the baby to sleep close to a tree near the river and undresses and starts taking a bath when she sees a boy looking at her bathing. Sh throws a splash that snds him away. She gets out packssome water and starts walking again thinking of the boy.She then sees the boy again and says ''Wait! I don't want ot hurt you''; and the boy stops. He then looks back and sees he is gorgeous, has yellow honey eyes, soft hair that reaches the end of his neck and tells her ''Need food ?'' and she says ''Yes''.

More to come.