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episode 28- the yacht party (create-an-episode!)

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    jojo2014

    [61]Jul 24, 2008
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    gwen: i think ill have

    she runs into the bathroom to puke.

    trent: ok someone has to go ask him why hes eating the mold.

    geoff: ill go do it.

    geoff walks over to the guys table.

    geoff: excuse me sir.

    man: yes. can i help you.

    geoff: yeah me and myfriends over here want to know why your eating the mold.

    man:you see this isnt just any mold its the rarest i cold find. this mold is sacred to me because im the only man in the world that can eat this stuff.

    geoff: i can see that. so not all the food is like that right?

    man:no of course not or the health inspectors would shut it down.

    geoff: ok thank you for your time.

    geoff walks back and stares at everyone.

    bridgette: whats wrong?

    just then he goes and pukes in the bathroom.

    geoff: feeew. now im better. he says hes the only guy that eats mold so i guess thats a rare mold.

    lashawna: ok so is the food safe here. you know no mold.

    geoff: yeah perfectly ssafe.

    chris: ok guys what will it be?

    geoff: well 2 salads one for me and one for bridgette. and well have your finest spaghettii no meat sauce just tomato marinara whatever besides meat.and no mold please.

    trent: gwen and i will have...

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    80sfan1983

    [62]Jul 24, 2008
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    Trent:OK we'll have 2 salads 2 lasagnas with extra cheese and sauce and 2 Dr.Pepper's

    the watter looks at Bridgette and Geoff

    watter:what will you 2 have to drink?

    Bridgette:we'll have 2 spires

    Harold:we'll take 2 lobster Fara diavolos and 2 lemonade's

    Sadie:we'll take 2 baked ziti's and 2 Coke's

    D.J.:we'll have the same

    Katie:thinks D.J.!

    Tyler:me and Lind's we'll have chicken lasagna with Alfredo sauce and a diet Coke for her and a Coke for me

    Noah:Beth and I well have spaghetti and 2 Pepsi's

    Courtney,Duncan,Ezekiel & Eva odder lasagna and Sprite

    Owen:MAN!!!! everything looks soooo good!

    Izzy:Owen we each have to get one thing

    Owen:but I'm hungry!!!!!

    Izzy:well you can have a large

    Owen:well......OK I have spaghetti in extra meat sauce and a Dr.Pepper

    Izzy:I'll have the same only a small

    the watter moves on to Cody and Heather who are marking out,the watter clears his through but they do not stop he waits a couple of more minutes.finally LeShawa bangs on the table

    LeShawna:yo queen bee and wannabe Harry up and oder we have't got all night!

    they Finlay stop Heather gives LeShawna a dirty look

    Cody:OK I have lobster Fara diavolo and a Coke

    Heater: and I'll have a salad eggplant Parmesan and I Diet Coke

    watter movies on to Chris

    Chris:I'll have......

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    jojo2014

    [63]Jul 24, 2008
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    chris: ill have...

    he wispers his order.

    chris: ill have the spaghettii the baked ziti the lobster pretty much everything on the plate. oh and you see theese couples here are there names put the couples names on different pastries ok.thaanks.

    the waiter comes out with the food.

    geoff: wow looks great.

    some people start eating there salads while others pig out like owen.

    owen: mmmmmmmmmm this is heaven. hey chris are you gonna finish all that.

    chris: heck yeah

    bridgette: yeah thats ALOT of food.

    chris: hey im hungry leave me alone.

    geoff: whatever.

    geoff and bridgette start eating there spaghettii and they somehow find the same noodle which leads them to.....

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    bltduffy

    [64]Jul 25, 2008
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    It leads them to kiss
    Bridgette:Wow Geoff your a good kisser.
    Geoff: thanks Bridgette.
    Trent:that was good. wasen't it Gwen?
    Gwen:yeah.
    Heather:Oh god now im going to weigh 123 pounds after this.
    Cody:I like girls that have fat to them(Heather slaps him and they start making out.
    Meanwhile with LeShawna.......
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    typogirl

    [65]Jul 25, 2008
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    jojo2014 wrote:
    sorry typogirl i was starting off from where ultimatekey was writing. we can either start from your story or mine. i dont care.


    IT's okay, let's keep the story the way it is.
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    jojo2014

    [66]Jul 25, 2008
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    Lashawna: wow harold you know how to order this lobster is DA BOMB!

    Harold: anything for my sugar.

    everybody finishes there dinner and then Chris stands up to give a speech.

    Chris: everyone may i have your attention. i know you guys have made some relationships here at total drama island.

    all the couples hug and kiss.

    Chris: so i ordered a little some thing for you guys.

    just then all the waiters come out with the pastries with the couples names on them.

    geoff: wow this is awesome man couldnt have baked this cake better myself.

    just then geoff stands up to give a speech.

    Geoff: everyone heres a toast to all of the couples here and all the great friends,and amazeing girlfriend, i made hear so uh cheers.

    bridgette geta a little teary eye from the speech.

    geoff: now this song im about to dedicate goes out to a very special person. he starts singing the song about...

    p.s. if you want to write the song that would be totallty awesome.

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    evilcartman42

    [67]Jul 26, 2008
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    (Geoff starts to sing)

    My friends will always be around
    If they sold coolness by the pound
    They'd all be stinkin' rich
    Stayin' at the Ritz
    Guaranteed to getcha' hoppin'
    Need some clothes they'll take you shoppin'
    Or hang out just like this
    Oh yeah.
    Who knows what the future's gonna bring
    I don't know much but
    I'll tell you one thing
    I can depend on my friends for everything
    don't matter where or when
    Through anything
    Right 'til the end
    I can depend on my friends

    (Everyone starts to clap)

    Trent: Dude that was totally awesome I don't think that I could write a better song

    Geoff: Thanks dude!

    Bridgette: Hey guys you want to head back to the yacht before we all have to go home

    Gwen: Yeah lets go back

    (Everyone including Chris heads back to the boat)

    Chris: You guys can do what ever you want but I am going to lay down I think I regret eating all that food right now.

    Owen: Hey look what I found its a old ouija board

    DJ: Hey lets not mess with that dude I hear that those kind of board games have some type of freaky power right there man.

    Duncan: Oh come on man don't be a chicken let play set it up Owen

    Trent: So how do we play?

    Gwen: The instructions say you have to ask questions and the person who has to hold the planchette or movable indicator has to be a...

    Heather: What does the holder have to be goth girl?

    Harold: A virgin

    Courtney: So who wants to hold the planchette?

    (No one answers)

    (So whoever you pick for the virgin do not let it be the following people because they are to predictable Cody, Noah, Beth, Harold and you can't pick Ezekiel because he lost his to Eva earlier)

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    ultimatekey

    [68]Jul 26, 2008
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    (MEANWHILE BACK AT THE YACHT)

    Chef: Oh man, I'm all alone. Wait this is good. I dont have to listen to thos snot nosed-teenagers! Oh, what should I try first? Oh I know, I should try the dance machine!

    Chef dancing embarrasingly

    Chef: Ouch, I broke my back! I'm going to grab something out of fattie(Owen) fridge.

    Everything was going well until something happened at the yacht....................

    (Oh yeah, by the way people, you can start with the teens playing the game storyline, but make sure to include Chef at the yacht okay?)

    Edited on 07/26/2008 11:43am
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    jojo2014

    [69]Jul 26, 2008
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    heather: fine ill do it.

    everybodys in shock.

    heather:what i am one. just cause im mean and pretty doesnt mean ive done it already.

    gwen:uhh ok i guess she hold it. who wants to ask the first?

    no one answers

    geoff: ill do it.

    bridgette:no you cant what if there is a spirit and it comes after you.

    geoff:dont worry ill be o.k.

    he asks the question.

    geoff:is there a spirit here?

    the handle starts spelling out something.

    the handle spells out GET OUT!!!

    bridgette: see i told you geoff theres something here.

    she gets so scared she somehow landed in geoffs lap.

    geoffk let me ask it something else. who do you want?

    handle:GEOFF GET OUT!!

    bridgette: it wants you.

    geoff:whooah why would it want me?

    bridgette: i dont know but you better stop asking questions.

    just then the lights go out.the spirit picks up geoff and takes him away.

    bridgette: GEOFF!!!no your not taking my boyfriend you stupid spirit. bridgette is able to get her hands on his leg and when the lights turn on the two are gone.

    trent: oh no the spirit took geoff and bridgette.

    gwen:what are we gonna do now?

    heather: oh who cares theyre probably dead together forget about it.

    everyone gasps at her comment.

    d.j.: weve gotta go find them.

    they splitup and start looking for them but theyre found nowhere...

    what happens next are they dead, did they live, is this a prank? what could it passably be.

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    ultimatekey

    [70]Jul 26, 2008
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    Meanwhile, back at the yacht

    Chef: Hey whats going on, why did the light went out

    Chef got a match and lighted it, and he saw a ghost

    Ghost: BOO!

    Chef: AHH

    Chef drops the match, and it started a fire

    Chef runs out of the Yacht, while the ghost laughs wickedly!

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    evilcartman42

    [71]Jul 26, 2008
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    Okay that was a total shock to me about Heather being the virgin. I really didn't think anyone was going to pick her. Wow is all I can really say.
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    jojo2014

    [72]Jul 26, 2008
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    i decided to pick heather cause it would be a shocker.

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    jojo2014

    [73]Jul 26, 2008
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    owen: do you smell smoke.

    gwen: yeah its coming from the kitchen.

    everyone starts walking back to the kitchen.

    lashawna: ohh thats not good!

    everyone runs out of the yacht onto the island nearby.

    dj: what about bridgette and geoff.

    duncan: im sure they smelled the smoke and got out of that fire already.

    as soon as duncan finished the sentence geoff came out of the yacht.

    courtney: geoff! wait wheres bridgette.

    geoff:wait shes not out here.

    courtney: no

    geoff: oh no. we got split up but i managed to find her but when we were coming out she was ahead of me. i have to find her.

    everyone:noooooo!!!!!

    geoff runs back into the yacht to find bridgette. he has 30 minutes to find her and get out before the yacht explodes.

    geoff:BRIDGETTE!!!!! BRIDGETTE WHERE ARE YOU.PLEASE ANSWER ME

    he gets on his knees and starts to cry.

    geoff: i cant live without you. i wont lose you

    he gets up and then checks the last door to find her passed out.5 minutes until the boat explodes.

    geoff:bridgette.wake up please wake up.

    bridgette has been knocked out cold by a piece of wood smacking her on her head.2 minutes left.

    geoff picks up bridgette and runs as fast as he can out of the yacht.

    geoff:i have to make it. for bridgette

    as hes running he gets hit in the head by the ghost with a block of wood he starts bleeding.30 seconds.

    geoff runs as fat as he can to the nearest exit which is on the other side of the island.5 seconds left.

    he leaps into the air towards the island and he made it as soon as he touched the land the yacht exploded.

    geoff:i.....made........it...........

    he passes out due to the concusion of the block of wood.

    everyone swims to the other side and finds geoffs head bleeding and then bridgette wakes up...

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    ultimatekey

    [74]Jul 27, 2008
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    Owen: What are we going to do about that ghost.

    Izzy: We could do a seance.
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    foobacoligist

    [75]Jul 27, 2008
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    Courtney: um, GUYS?! in case you haven't noticed, there are two unconscious people here!

    Owen and Izzy: riiiiiight..... (they start talking about the seance again)

    Courtney: I give up!

    just then, bridgette wakes up, looks around her, and quickly realizes what happened

    Bridgette: oh my god! is he ok????

    Leshawna: we don't know girl, hang in there

    Bridgette starts nudging geoff

    Bridgette: Geoff! geoff, wake up!

    Geoff: (in his sleep or whatever he's in ) Lindsay....

    Bridgette: what?!

    she runs away crying

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    NejiShikamaru

    [76]Jul 27, 2008
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    (Izzy pulls out a Ouija Board)
    Izzy: C'mon guys! Make a circle and hold hands! Let's contact that ghost!
    (everyone but Owen backs away)
    Heather: Izzy! Geoff needs medical attention!
    Bridgette: Geoff needs his head examined! *sobs*
    Izzy: Pfft...what babies...OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH!!!*grabs Owen's hand*
    Owen: Oh jeez...
    Izzy: (eerily) SPIRITS COME FORTH!!!!!!! OOOOOOOHHHH!!
    Heather: (to Lindsay) I hope she knows what she's doing...
    Izzy: What ailllllsssss youuuuu???
    (suddenly a thumping noise occurs)
    Lindsay: Oh my god!!
    Izzy: Use our Ouija Board and tell us what ails you!!!!
    (the Ouija Board marker begins to move...it spells out I-S-A-T-O-N-A-T-H-U-M-B-T-A-C-K-O-U-C-H)
    Heather: A THUMBTACK? A THUMBTACK? Oh my god, that's what wrong?
    (the marker swings past Heather's face, something has happened to Heather!)

    And scene...What happens to Heather that the ghost has done with the Ouija Board marker?
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    jojo2014

    [77]Jul 27, 2008
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    cody: OMG! heather your,how do i say this, your eybrows are burnt and your bald and you look pale.

    heather: i dont feel good.

    heather is diagnosed with an unknown disease that only the ghost can cure.

    (meanwhile bridgette is sitting on a hamock she found in the woods crying)

    bridgette: i cant believe he forgot about me.

    on the other side of the island geoff wakes up.

    geoff: what happened.

    gwen:you passed out.

    geoff: oh yeah i had the best and wierdest dream. bridgette and i were surfing together the day before our wedding. and then lindsay showed up and tried to ruin it by kissing me. i told her the only women that i loved was bridgette. wheres bridgette anyway?

    gwen: you slightly woke up and said lindsay so she ran into the woods crying thinking that you were dreaming about lindsay.

    geoff: what i gotta go find her you know she cant be alone in the woods at night.

    geoff runs into the woods.

    geoff: BRIDGETTE, BRIDGETTE.

    bridgette: oh no i think the ghost found me.

    she pretends to be asleep in the hammock so the ghost wont find her.

    geoff:bridgette is that you?

    he runs to the hammock.

    bridgette: wake up wake up. oh no shes probably been messed with by the ghost.

    he gets on the hammock and talks to himself not knowing that bridgette is actually listening to him.

    on the other side of the island everyone calls to the ghost to heal heather.

    izzzy: ohh dark spirit please heal our friend heather.

    she has a hard time calling heather her friend.

    izzy: what can we do to heal her.

    the ghost answers

    ghost: GIVE ME ONE GOOD REASON I SHOULD HELP HER.

    everyone starts thinking about how to heal heather.

    meanwhile back with bridgette and geoff. geoff talks about his dream.

    geoff: oh if only i could tell you the reason why i said lindsay.

    bridgette wakes up.

    bridgette: what are you doing here you big liar.

    she tries to get out of the hammock bu geoff stops her.

    geoff: just listen to what i have to say.

    bridgette: ok ill give you 30 seconds to explain youself.

    geoff: ok i hd this really awesome dream about us.

    bridgette:20 seconds.

    geoff: ok so we were surfing together on the beach and then i asked you to marry me so we were about to get married when.

    bridgette:times up.

    geoff:what no listen. as i was going to say i do lindsay showed up and kissed me.

    bridgette interupts

    bridgette: ohhhh im so out of here.

    geoff:no wait i pulled her off and said that the only girl that i loved was...

    bridgette interupts

    bridgette: lindsay right i mean you dont care about me you only like lindsay.

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    toucansquak7

    [78]Jul 27, 2008
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    Heather:Guys help!!!!!!!!!!!

    Trent: Should we help?

    Lindsay: Nah, Tim. She was all rude to us and stuff.

    Trent: Uh... It's Trent.

    Harold: Whatever. Should we save her?

    (Cody sees the other campers and comes running to them)

    Cody: What's going on?

    Owen: A spirit just took Heather.

    Cody: Noooooo!

    Duncan: Chill, Geek boy.

    Katie and Sadie: Duncan's right.

    CodyTo Heather) I'll save you!

    Cody: Oh no!

    (Why does Cody say Oh No? Is he hurt? Let's see. Oh, and I'm new to Tv.com so please don't be rude to me)

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    toucansquak7

    [79]Jul 27, 2008
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    cody trips over log
    Cody: Ahhh!
    Geoff: Is he okay?
    Codyooooh!
    Heather: Set me down you dastardly freak!
    Ghost: Okay
    Heather: Yay! I'm free! Freedom!
    Harold: More like Freedumb!
    Heather: Excuse me Geek boy!
    Harold: Yeah.You heard me.Dumb.
    Leshawna: Sugar, Don't fight. It's for your own good.
    Harold: No baby, It's ok.
    Harold: I will Fight for my rights!
    Geoff: We gotta Get Cody to a hospital.
    Leshawna: Babe, this fighting has to wait.
    Harold: Ok.
    Harolds pants fall down and he blushes. Every body but Tyler and LeShawna laugh.
    Ezekiel and Eva: We're back! (Looks at Harold's underwear) Oh my god! Lindsay: I know right?
    Noah: Okay I have no Idea what we're doing.
    Eva: Finding The yacht, Nitwit
    Noah: Whoa, Angerlady, Curb your tember!
    Eva :RRRR!
    Beth: You two stop now!
    Eva punches Noah And Beth in the face.
    Geoff: I found the yacht!
    Heather: Lets go!
    Cody, Beth and Noah: Oh great.
    Heather: (to cody)Just in case you die. Heather kisses Cody.
    Geoff: Everybody in the yacht?
    Owen: Yes.
    Geoff: Who's paddling?
    DJ AND Duncan: We are.
    (Will all 3 wounded campers be ok? Will they run out of time?
    Will someone die?)
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    jojo2014

    [80]Jul 27, 2008
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    how are they on the yacht if it blew up when i wrote part of the story?
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