Gwen hey look at this!:
Pops the tape in!
*tape*Heather: give it to me Cody! Mmm!
*tape*Cody: ohh! Ohh! Yeah right there!
Heather: take it out!
Leshawna: What were you doing we take baths in there!
TELETOON
Gwen hey look at this!:
Pops the tape in!
*tape*Heather: give it to me Cody! Mmm!
*tape*Cody: ohh! Ohh! Yeah right there!
Heather: take it out!
Leshawna: What were you doing we take baths in there!
were planning to get revenge on Harold
Gwen: Sees this other tape and it shows............. Heather making out with......Justin?!
Heather: I-I can explain!........
gwen: Trent let's get back to the cabin!
Trent: Okay!
Heather follows with a camera!
Next morning Heather got the tape and ran and popped it!
* on tape* Trent: Oh yeah! Gwen!
*on tape* Gwen: Trent ;ets do this all night!
D.J: What the?
Cody: Puase the tape! There was something at the other window! Huh? Chris was watching them!
Chris: Uhh! I can explain! See i heard moaning so i went to check it out then i noticed them and ran!
I thought that we were going to make the reunion. I already made the part of Ep 29.
ok ya you guys are right, let's start the 10 year reunion!
I'm not going to be the first to put a part on, but how about it's at somebody's wedding. I'm not going to say who's getting married, that's your call. remember to introduce all of the characters!
Trent and gwen: i can't believe we're getting married!
Geoff and bridgette: us too!
could someone please finish this story?! i really want to know what happens next!
to see who all got married go to my blog second ep of Total Danville Island!
Trent and?
Owen and?
Geoff and?
Dancan SR. and ? SR.!
The problem is you're overextending the characters. They wouldn't say that or do that. The only reason there are hookups on the show is because people like drama and romance. This is getting kind of ridiculous and you are obviously writing. Reading this thread gives no illusion of being a real script or even a novel. Good writers deliver dialouge in the vernacular of when the book was written and where it is set. That makes the characters seem more realistic.
This also holds up one of the four game spots on the forum. I thought people liked my Apples to Apples thread before it was locked. Having this and how much do you know with no set time limit or post limit basically blocks anyone else from ever starting another game thread. I think we should close one form and have a post limit on game threads or a time limit.
Therefore, I propose that we have a time or post limit on all game threads. They can be set by the poster, within reason. (with oversight being moderators.
Can I get a second?