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    TheGreatAvatar

    [461]Nov 24, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    jaketg wrote:
    Sorry I'm just typing this on all Avatar forums I can in 10 mins JOIN:Avatar Trivia Tournament!!! NNNNOOOOOOOWWWWWWW

    ure freaking retarded

    Hey, TGA, you should do this on all of the fourms too lol.


    haha..too lazy=p
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [462]Nov 24, 2006
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    red death(master of fire and earth)
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    "haha"
    "talho...i wont turn you in"
    "dont worry"i said

    "why?" talho asked

    "well..for 1..u cared for me when i collapsed in front of your store"
    "and 2nd-"
    i emitted a powerful blast of a fireball straight at her,
    but it faded away before it got to her
    "...that's why"
    i said
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    AEtherBlue

    [463]Nov 24, 2006
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    Talho-Earthbender

    Startled by the "Random-style" attack from Red Death, I steped backwards, Red laughed and put out his hand, Palm up.

    A flame lit up and a fireball was sent up 3 feet above him like a firework. "Is that all? I've done more spectacular stuff with bombs and oil." I turned and went down the stairs. I sat at the bottom.

    "What have I gotten myself into?" I asked myself, Biting my lower lip hard enough to bleed. I remembered my father I got up and went over to his room. He was sitting up on his bed staring into the smithing fires. "Thats a bad habbit." He said.
    "What bringing strange men into our house?" I asked.
    "No, hurting yourself in confusion." I looked down and wiped my lip off.

    Edited on 11/24/2006 6:11pm
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    vegnegun

    [464]Nov 24, 2006
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    General Scorch (Fire Bender)


    Scorch and Rin have just had a touching moment in the cell on Rampage's ship


    Scorch was busy trying to figure out how to get Rin, and himself, more importantley Rin. He knew one thing: as long as he was restrained like he was, he couldn't fire bend without killing himself, but Rin could.

    "Hey Rin," said Scorch, "hold still." He kneeled behing her, and to Rin, this was akwered.

    "Uh, what are you doing?" she asked.

    "Well, if I can heat these chains up," said Scorch, "you can break them. Then, you could heat mine."

    "Oh," sniffled Rin, "okay." Scorch blew some hot air on the chains until they melted.

    "Rin, try pulling them apart." Rin pulled them apart and put her hands in front of her. Scorch stood up.

    "Good, do me now." Rin place her hand on Scorch's chains and sent a pulse of heat through them.

    "Okay," said Rin, she had stopped crying, "try it." Scorch tried to pull his chains apart and snapped them. "I'm just dead weight."

    "Don't say that," said Scorch, "its not true."

    "Yes it is," she said.

    "Rin, don't make me fail you," said Scorch, "your such a child." He was trying to cheer her up and it worked. Rin started laughing. "That's better, now, let's get out of here."

    "How?"

    "The easy way." He held his hand out and sent a stream of fire at the bars, melting them in a matter of seconds. They then heard the sound of the engine starting. "Oh no, Rin, stay with me." They both ran up the halls, pushing several fire benders out of the way. They got up to the deck and saw that the ship was away from the shore and was in deep water.

    "Can you swim," Rin asked Scorch.

    "No, why?" asked Scorch.

    "Well, your about to," she said. Rin pushed Scorch over the edge of the deck into the water and dived in after him. They both swam back to shore and got onto the beach and rested. Rin stood up and put her hands in front of her and sent hot air onto her cloths. "I hate having wet cloths." Suddenly, people began to run through the town and Scorch jumped up.

    "Fire Nation?" They went into the town.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [465]Nov 24, 2006
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    red death(master of fire and earth)
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    talho just ran down the stairs

    i stood there and though for a while
    then i continued my bending practice

    i knew talho wouldnt turn me in
    because she had a secret too
    that she kept from everyone else

    i flipped rocks all over the backyard

    then someone looked out his window and said
    "KEEP IT DOW OUT THERE!!"
    "DONT MAKE ME COME OUT THERE!!"
    "YOULL REGRET IT!!"

    i looked up and laughed
    "haha..your a funny man" i said
    then in a split second a rose a rock from the earth and, the rock flew straight at his window

    ...it most likely killed him=)

    "noone disturbs a dai li while hes training" i muttered
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    avatarforte

    [466]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rinkoto Fang-Airbend

    I had followed the scent of the fire nation soldier to, at the moment, appeared to be an abandoned cave. "Hmmm, looks like I missed the party", I noted, seeing signs of a battle. Sniffing around again, I managed to pick up their scent again. "Ba-Sing-Se huh, quite a trip. Better pick up the pace". Pulling a rope hanging from my back, a pair of fabric wings shot out. I used my air-bending to launch myself into the air and then, using it to keep me alfloat, I made off in the direction of the town.

    (About a day later)
    "Man, this place is huge", I said, my jaw hanging. I had heard stories about Ba-Sing-Se, but I'd never seen the city with my own eyes. "Yeesh, maybe a map would be helpful", I thought. But then again", I thought, picking up the scent, "this is so much easier". Unloading the wings again, I took off in the general direction of the scent. About halfway to the scent, it suddenly disappeared. At the time, I was so into tracking it that when it disappeared, I almost forgot I was flying. "Woah, woah, woah", was the only thing I was thinking as I attempted to regain control. Managing to regain control, I glided down to the ground and tried to pick up the scent again, but to no avail. "Hmmm, great. Must have passed over it. Better find it again quick. But first, some shopping needs to be done". Pulling out a small list from my pocket, I read it over in my head. "Food suppiles, medical suppiles, and a sword. Yeah, better start looking for a sword first, it would be the harder thing to find, so it should be dealt with first". Putting the list away, I made my way through the city.

    (Few hours later)
    I had gotten everything BUT the sword. Like no matter who I asked, no one seemed to know a blacksmith. "Yeah, maybe an aerial view would be better", I thought to myself and took to the sky. Looking around, I had even less luck then before. A sound to the right caught my attention. Changing my direction to the source of the sound, I glided down towards the ground. As I got closer, I could see what looked like somebody earth-bending. I landed quickly and was about to call out "Hey there, what's going on" when he shot out a fireball from his hand. "Damn, a fire-bender," I thought quickly preparing myself for a fight. As I got closer, however, I heard him talking to someone. Peeking out, I saw a girl in a window, who looked extremely pissed off. "Eh, to heck with it". I stepped out and called to them. "Hey, sorry for interrupting, but would either of you know a good blacksmith around here". The girl shot a look of pure hatred towards me, enough to make me cringe. Then the look disappeared and she smiled.

    "I'm a blacksmith, the name's Talho. What do you need". The other just looked at me, shocked how I seemed to appear out of nowhere.

    "A sword, one that would be good for an airbender to use." Talho thought it over a minute, then said, "Yeah, I can make that for you. However, it will be a while before it's done. It will take about a day or so. Come back then and I'll have it for you."

    "Okay, thanks. Here, could you lend me something of yours. I'll be able to locate this place faster then when I return." She nodded and tore off a piece of her clothing and handed it to me. "Thanks, I'll be back for that sword". I took to the sky again and, as luck would have it, I picked up the scent again. "Perfect, back to business then". Turning towards the scent, I doubled my speed, not wanting to lose the scent again.

    Just as I made it too a town outside of Ba-Sing-Se, a sudden large gust of wind threw me off balance and I went sailing into the ground. Thankfully, I cushioned the fall with a burst of air. Still hurt like hell though. As I got up, a crowd began to gather, expecting to see the crushed body of the poor soul who had crashed. Instead, they saw me getting up. One person dared to ask, "How are you still alive"?

    "Oh, just a little air-cushion, you know, with airbending", I snickered. I was not prepared for the screams that followed that statement. They scattered, screaming that the fire nation would soon be on their heads. "Oh right, airbenders aren't too common nowadays. Ain't I smart"? Suddenly, the scent I was tracking seemed to be getting closer. "Well, at least something good is gonna come outta this mix-up". For the moment, I couldn't have been any more wrong.
    Edited on 11/24/2006 7:07pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [467]Nov 24, 2006
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    Red death(master of fire and earth)
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    talho went back up the stairs and asked me what my name was threw the windows

    i replied
    "red death"

    then talho went along commenting on my name...
    then a customer came out of nowhere
    i heard talho talking to the customer
    as the customer left,
    i saw him take out a glider and glide into the sky

    i looked up
    "what?"
    "an airbender?"
    "there are still airbenders around?" i said

    i quickly jumped into my room and changed into my red death uniform
    i was so concentrated on 1 thing,
    that i accidently left my dai li uniform on the bed

    i jumped out of the window, and got on to the roof

    the airbender was still in sight
    "i need to meet this air bender" i said

    i jumped across rooves slowly catching up with the airbender
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    AEtherBlue

    [468]Nov 24, 2006
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    Talho-EarthBender-Blacksmith.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I went back up to the window and called out to the Dai-Li,
    "Hey, whats your name?" I asked.
    "Red Death." He responded.
    "Red death... Kinda funky for a name... well, I mean, you DO, Earth AND FireBend... So... I guess I will just have to accept that name." I responed back.

    Then out of the bushes came someone, they called out, "Hey!sorry for interrupting, but would either of you know a good blacksmith around here?".
    "OH MY GOD WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP COMMING AT BAD TIMES..."I thought to myself and bit my lip hard. I gave out a krindge in pain. He looked as if I was kringing at him so I smiled.

    "I'm a blacksmith. My name is Talho. What would you like?"I said

    He asked for some sort of sword good for AirBending, I knew what he would need.. The Tai-Chi sword I had started earlier is meant for the fast. I told him that it would take a couple of days to make and to come back later. He asked for an item to be able to find this place again.. I thought it was a weird request. But I handed him a peice of cloth that was tearing from my skirt.

    "Thanks, I'll be back for that Sword." he said. Then he took off into the sky.

    "Strange fellow" I said to Red, "OOh well beggars can't be choosers, and with the first customer in over 5 years... I wouldent care if he was FireNation." I thought to myself.
    _________________________
    Sorry, TGA, but would you be able to edit it so that you tell me your name?? If you want you can edit it so that you where listenign to us talking.. or you can just be ignoring us ^^...
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [469]Nov 24, 2006
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    Red death(master of fire and earth)
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    i kept running, boosting my jumping heiight and speed by emitting blasts of fire balls from me feet and hands constantly

    in a few minutes, i was right under the air bender

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    AEtherBlue

    [470]Nov 24, 2006
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    Talho-EarthBender-Blacksmith.
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    I went down the stairs and saw red jump into my window and change into a different suit.. "Hey, where you going?" I asked him but he diddent seem to hear me... he started jumping off of roofs in chase of the customer..

    "Those people are wierd..."I said to myself
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    vegnegun

    [471]Nov 24, 2006
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    That's it! I'm taking control of the operation NOW!

    General Scorch (Fire Bender)

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    Just headed into town to stop the fire nation attack

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    Scorch and Rin got into town, ready for a fight, but saw one lonely person simply waking through town. He approached them. Scorch immediatley attacked him, thinking he was a fire nation soldier, with a ball of fire. The man waved his hands around and the fire ball diverted??away from him.??

    "Hey, are you the fire nation taitor?" asked the man (Rinkoto Fang)

    "That depends," said Scorch, "who wants to know?"

    "Rinkoto Fang, master air-bender at your service," said Fang, "you can call me??Fang though."

    "Okay, Fang," said Scorch, "what do you want?"

    "Well, I heard that there was someone fighting the fire nation," said Rinkoto, "and life is just so boring now. I just need something to give my life a little kick, ya know?"

    "Okay, let me talk to my friend real quick," said Scorch. He pulled Rin over to the side. "So, what do you think?"

    "I don't know, he seems nice," said Rin, "I guess its your call."

    "Okay, I guess the more the marrier," said Scorch. He and Rin walked back over to Rinkoto.

    "Whose this?" he asked, "your girlfriend?"

    "Well, uh," began Scorch.

    "Welcome to the team Fang," said Rin. "Just a few things you should know. But, I don't think we should talk here, right Scorch?"

    "Yeah, sure," said Scorch, "let's go somewhere more private."

    "Okay," said Fang, "how about that barn over there?"

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    avatarforte

    [474]Nov 24, 2006
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    Nah, thats good, but just to point out a few quick things.
    1)I'm looking for you guys for information. I join up because I feel like it.
    2)I'm more of a carefree guy, remember. Don't make me to serious, unless I'm angered. ^^
    3)I'm called Fang, I'm sticking to Japanese Style of names.(Last then First) So Rinkoto is my last name(sorry for the confusion).
    4)Red Death is following me, so we need to meet him somehow. Thats all.
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    Rin-tori

    [475]Nov 24, 2006
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    avatarforte wrote:
    Nah, thats good, but just to point out a few quick things.
    1)I'm looking for you guys for information. I join up because I feel like it.
    2)I'm more of a carefree guy, remember. Don't make me to serious, unless I'm angered. ^^
    3)I'm called Fang, I'm sticking to Japanese Style of names.(Last then First) So Rinkoto is my last name(sorry for the confusion).
    4)Red Death is following me, so we need to meet him somehow. Thats all.

    I'll keep that in mind. Thanks! :3
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    vegnegun

    [476]Nov 24, 2006
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    avatarforte wrote:
    Nah, thats good, but just to point out a few quick things. 1)I'm looking for you guys for information. I join up because I feel like it. 2)I'm more of a carefree guy, remember. Don't make me to serious, unless I'm angered. ^^ 3)I'm called Fang, I'm sticking to Japanese Style of names.(Last then First) So Rinkoto is my last name(sorry for the confusion). 4)Red Death is following me, so we need to meet him somehow. Thats all.

    Okay, just edited the meeting post... Does it look better?

    If you have any sugguestions, just email me.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [477]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:
    avatarforte wrote:
    Nah, thats good, but just to point out a few quick things.
    1)I'm looking for you guys for information. I join up because I feel like it.
    2)I'm more of a carefree guy, remember. Don't make me to serious, unless I'm angered. ^^
    3)I'm called Fang, I'm sticking to Japanese Style of names.(Last then First) So Rinkoto is my last name(sorry for the confusion).
    4)Red Death is following me, so we need to meet him somehow. Thats all.

    I'll keep that in mind. Thanks! :3


    well yeah
    ive been looking for atleast 1 airbender, 1 earthbender, 1 water bender, and 1 firebender other than me so we can be in a group....sorta cuz my old group totally split up=p
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    vegnegun

    [478]Nov 24, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    Rin-tori wrote:
    avatarforte wrote:
    Nah, thats good, but just to point out a few quick things. 1)I'm looking for you guys for information. I join up because I feel like it. 2)I'm more of a carefree guy, remember. Don't make me to serious, unless I'm angered. ^^ 3)I'm called Fang, I'm sticking to Japanese Style of names.(Last then First) So Rinkoto is my last name(sorry for the confusion). 4)Red Death is following me, so we need to meet him somehow. Thats all.
    I'll keep that in mind. Thanks! :3


    well yeah
    ive been looking for atleast 1 airbender, 1 earthbender, 1 water bender, and 1 firebender other than me so we can be in a group....sorta cuz my old group totally split up=p

    Well, you know have 2 fire benders now. If you know how to find the other benders you want, just email me.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [479]Nov 24, 2006
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    red death(master of fire and earth)
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    the airbender flew over the outer walls of ba sing se

    i quickly remembered 2 things
    1. I left my dai li uniform on my bed
    "if talho discovers it, shell know i have an alias" i whispered

    2.i remembered that the airbender needed to comeback to get the sword

    i quickly ran back to the shop and sneaked in throught the window
    i quickly changed and jumpd out the window again and resumed my earthbending training,
    hoping talho didnt see anything
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    Rin-tori

    [480]Nov 24, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender) Scorch and Rin just met up with Fang and decided to let him travel with them.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    ??Scorch was sitting on a barrel in the nearby abandoned barn. Rin was sitting in hay, and Fang sat next to her. "So, what do you want exactly?" Scorch asked.

    "Information." Fang answered.

    "Why? You think we're up to something, or about Ram--"

    Scorch covered her mouth with his hand. She slapped it away.

    "There were some guys who attacked my village. One of them was named Mayhem, and I think you've been aquainted with him. Correct me if I'm wrong.??Fang answered.

    Scorch and Rin exchanged glances.

    "So, what were you doing out here by yourself?" Rin asked a safer question this time.

    "I like to live by my own rules. Not have a boss, do what I want, you know. Have fun with no one to tell you what to do."

    "So you??want us for information." Scorch concluded.

    "Well yeah, but??I just thought it would be more fun to tag along with you guys. Like you said, the more the merrier. I don't like to see peoples as just tools. Don't be so stiff!" He joked.

    "Well I think you're going to be a good addition to our little team, Fang. I like your style." Rin said happily.

    "There is one thing, though." Scorch said. "Thanks to me, we're being persued by Rampage. He's a ruthless dog of the Fire Nation army. There's no gaurantee that he's with Mayhem, but if you want to tag along, you should know that you'll be putting yourself in danger."

    "No problem. I've had trouble before, and I'm getting a sword made right now. I think I could help you guys with your persuers if you need me." Fang replied, casually.

    Edited on 11/24/2006 7:52pm
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