Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
Welcome to the Avatar Fanfic Festival Game! This is kind of like a Film Festival, except we will be judging Fanfics!
Every "author" will submit a the first chapter of their fanfic. We will rate it 1-10, and whoevers is the best will continue!
If there is a tie in the??1st chapter??contest, there will be a second round faceoff.
LETS START!
Authors post your first chapters
Aang rocks
| Vampdude69 wrote: |
Welcome to the Avatar Fanfic Festival Game! This is kind of like a Film Festival, except we will be judging Fanfics! Aang rocks |
| go_ugly_people wrote: | ||
i dont know if this is going to work |
| confucioussayhi wrote: | ||||
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yea sure
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| go_ugly_people wrote: | ||||||
5! jk |
ADVERTISE FOR THE AVATAR FANFIC FESTIVAL GAME!!!
Copy and paste this, and put them on??random threads!
Chapter-1-Dark Aftermath
Disclaimer-I do not own Avatar in any way shape or form but I own the ring.
Life has a funny way of screwing over it's saviors. Just when it looks like the heroes will come out on top, the ground falls from under their feet and they decsend into hell. For the Avatar Aang, this is how it happened. The failed attempt to take the Fire Nation capital cost them all. Aang was now a spectacle for all patrons to see. Appa was in the cirus, Momo was a??Higher-up's exotic??pet. History doesn't yet show the lives of Katara, Sokka, and Toph. Katara and Sokka were rumored to have escaped at the last minute. Toph's whereabouts were unknown.
8 Years after the war-
"Damn." the girl thought "He's tougher than Skan said he was. Ahh!" She dodged a particularly nasty looking, blood-stained flail. She jumped on the man's back slashing his hand with the puny dagger that she was allowed. The brute dropped his weapon, and picked her up. She was being held by the throat, when she bit the man's hand. For the second time he howled and dropped his victim. His eyes caught sight of his flail and he went for it.
As he was awaiting the verdict, the crowd cheered the girl's death. "What kind of people do this?" She asked herself mentally. The man with a flaming crown of gold in the center throne turned his thumb down. The giant smiled, his flail would taste blood today. "NO!" The girl cried out. "I will not die here!" The giant recoiled in suprise. The girl knew she wasn't supposed to show her power yet but she didn't care. Maximum was better than this. She put her hand to the ground forcefully, then retracted it with a gripping motion. The brute didn't have time to react to the razor sharp earth spires that went through his chest.
I know it is very short but its easier for me that way. If it sounds too violent please tell me and I will tone it down.
How bout' them Apple's?
Here's mine. It's a little rough around the edges, and I'm my biggest crtic when I say, it's great! Here we go.
Uh- yeah once there was this kid. And- in the ice he froze-un. Oh and he has a arrow. Um..... I think he may be the avatar.
Theres this other kid. He seems bad. Very bad indeed. I think he has like- this acid scar or somthing. I think he will try to catch avatar.
Later, a blind kid- I think she may be blind- is rocky benders. She is good.
Maby they will work together not together-un and become a elite force of swift justice and supplement. But later??at these things.. I think they are the crossroad of ministry or somthing... uh, yeah. The bad kid made a bad thing and beat up the good.
In season twee which comes either before or after season toe I think the bad kid will be good for goodness sakes, and uh... right.
Avytar is great I love Avytar. And Mashed Potatos. And Puppies. And Mushrooms.
THis has been?? my fanfic. Tune in later for.. uh... more I think.
| confucioussayhi wrote: |
Chapter-1-Dark Aftermath Disclaimer-I do not own Avatar in any way shape or form but I own the ring. Life has a funny way of screwing over it's saviors. Just when it looks like the heroes will come out on top, the ground falls from under their feet and they decsend into hell. For the Avatar Aang, this is how it happened. The failed attempt to take the Fire Nation capital cost them all. Aang was now a spectacle for all patrons to see. Appa was in the cirus, Momo was a??Higher-up's exotic??pet. History doesn't yet show the lives of Katara, Sokka, and Toph. Katara and Sokka were rumored to have escaped at the last minute. Toph's whereabouts were unknown. 8 Years after the war- "Damn." the girl thought "He's tougher than Skan said he was. Ahh!" She dodged a particularly nasty looking, blood-stained flail. She jumped on the man's back slashing his hand with the puny dagger that she was allowed. The brute dropped his weapon, and picked her up. She was being held by the throat, when she bit the man's hand. For the second time he howled and dropped his victim. His eyes caught sight of his flail and he went for it. As he was awaiting the verdict, the crowd cheered the girl's death. "What kind of people do this?" She asked herself mentally. The man with a flaming crown of gold in the center throne turned his thumb down. The giant smiled, his flail would taste blood today. "NO!" The girl cried out. "I will not die here!" The giant recoiled in suprise. The girl knew she wasn't supposed to show her power yet but she didn't care. Maximum was better than this. She put her hand to the ground forcefully, then retracted it with a gripping motion. The brute didn't have time to react to the razor sharp earth spires that went through his chest. I know it is very short but its easier for me that way. If it sounds too violent please tell me and I will tone it down. How bout' them Apple's? |
| go_ugly_people wrote: | ||
hell yeah 5 |
| confucioussayhi wrote: |
Chapter-1-Dark Aftermath Disclaimer-I do not own Avatar in any way shape or form but I own the ring. Life has a funny way of screwing over it's saviors. Just when it looks like the heroes will come out on top, the ground falls from under their feet and they decsend into hell. For the Avatar Aang, this is how it happened. The failed attempt to take the Fire Nation capital cost them all. Aang was now a spectacle for all patrons to see. Appa was in the cirus, Momo was a??Higher-up's exotic??pet. History doesn't yet show the lives of Katara, Sokka, and Toph. Katara and Sokka were rumored to have escaped at the last minute. Toph's whereabouts were unknown. 8 Years after the war- "Damn." the girl thought "He's tougher than Skan said he was. Ahh!" She dodged a particularly nasty looking, blood-stained flail. She jumped on the man's back slashing his hand with the puny dagger that she was allowed. The brute dropped his weapon, and picked her up. She was being held by the throat, when she bit the man's hand. For the second time he howled and dropped his victim. His eyes caught sight of his flail and he went for it. As he was awaiting the verdict, the crowd cheered the girl's death. "What kind of people do this?" She asked herself mentally. The man with a flaming crown of gold in the center throne turned his thumb down. The giant smiled, his flail would taste blood today. "NO!" The girl cried out. "I will not die here!" The giant recoiled in suprise. The girl knew she wasn't supposed to show her power yet but she didn't care. Maximum was better than this. She put her hand to the ground forcefully, then retracted it with a gripping motion. The brute didn't have time to react to the razor sharp earth spires that went through his chest. I know it is very short but its easier for me that way. If it sounds too violent please tell me and I will tone it down. How bout' them Apple's? |
Great job(this is like the 10 time i have said it)?????? 10
| Vampdude69 wrote: |
ADVERTISE FOR THE AVATAR FANFIC FESTIVAL GAME!!! |
| xlA_V_A_T_A_Rlx wrote: | ||
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send it to all your friends. i am doing that right now
| confucioussayhi wrote: |
Chapter-1-Dark Aftermath Disclaimer-I do not own Avatar in any way shape or form but I own the ring. Life has a funny way of screwing over it's saviors. Just when it looks like the heroes will come out on top, the ground falls from under their feet and they decsend into hell. For the Avatar Aang, this is how it happened. The failed attempt to take the Fire Nation capital cost them all. Aang was now a spectacle for all patrons to see. Appa was in the cirus, Momo was a??Higher-up's exotic??pet. History doesn't yet show the lives of Katara, Sokka, and Toph. Katara and Sokka were rumored to have escaped at the last minute. Toph's whereabouts were unknown. 8 Years after the war- "Damn." the girl thought "He's tougher than Skan said he was. Ahh!" She dodged a particularly nasty looking, blood-stained flail. She jumped on the man's back slashing his hand with the puny dagger that she was allowed. The brute dropped his weapon, and picked her up. She was being held by the throat, when she bit the man's hand. For the second time he howled and dropped his victim. His eyes caught sight of his flail and he went for it. As he was awaiting the verdict, the crowd cheered the girl's death. "What kind of people do this?" She asked herself mentally. The man with a flaming crown of gold in the center throne turned his thumb down. The giant smiled, his flail would taste blood today. "NO!" The girl cried out. "I will not die here!" The giant recoiled in suprise. The girl knew she wasn't supposed to show her power yet but she didn't care. Maximum was better than this. She put her hand to the ground forcefully, then retracted it with a gripping motion. The brute didn't have time to react to the razor sharp earth spires that went through his chest. I know it is very short but its easier for me that way. If it sounds too violent please tell me and I will tone it down. How bout' them Apple's? |
| xlA_V_A_T_A_Rlx wrote: | ||
A little too violent, yet good. 7 |
