Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
Here's alink to the thread if you wan't to read all of them.
here's my 1st chap (its actually an intro called Amarillo Sky??
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(note frm me: I went w/ the 1st one b/c I heard there were already ffs like the 2nd one. also I've got a kindof code thingy you guys will have to follow. its only that '...' means thoughts not speacking & please leave your thoughts [any thougts at all about the story] in the comments. I like to read your feedback)
July 14th, year 84 of the war
It was a warm day in the firenation with some??on and off rain. Princess Ursa, who was expecting her first child soon, was in the gardon after and small summer shower. She was admiring the roses when she heard a small sound coming from a tree near the pond. It sounded like the cry of a baby.
Ursa: 'what could it be? the servents don't have children, I don't have children, and Lue Ten is far too old to make that sound'
Ursa walked cautiously over to the tree to investigate. she found only what seemed like a basket of blankets, though she could her the muffled cry. she removed the top blanket to reveal a baby girl.??The baby's hair was??gold and her eyes??matched the color of?? the sky after it rains, gray with a??light tint of blue.??Even though she did not match the ideal firenation woman, dark hair and auburn??eyes, she was still a beautiful baby. Also in the basket was a note that read, Please take in my child.??I am forced to leave her for I must flee from my husband. Her name is Sandrea. She was born only a week ago. Keep her safe and raise her well. - a??mother??.??Ursa called a servent, Dorinda,??from the house. Dorinda was facinated with children and was very helpful to Ursa during her time of maturnity. She was clearly the best choice to care for this baby, for Ursa knew her husband would not approve of??caring for an abandoned baby by herself. The servent agreed to take in the child and to care for it??as her own.??Exactly a week from that moment Ursa's first child, Zuko, was born.??????????
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here's my 1st chap (its actually an intro called Amarillo Sky?? * * * (note frm me: I went w/ the 1st one b/c I heard there were already ffs like the 2nd one. also I've got a kindof code thingy you guys will have to follow. its only that '...' means thoughts not speacking & please leave your thoughts [any thougts at all about the story] in the comments. I like to read your feedback) July 14th, year 84 of the war It was a warm day in the firenation with some??on and off rain. Princess Ursa, who was expecting her first child soon, was in the gardon after and small summer shower. She was admiring the roses when she heard a small sound coming from a tree near the pond. It sounded like the cry of a baby. Ursa: 'what could it be? the servents don't have children, I don't have children, and Lue Ten is far too old to make that sound' Ursa walked cautiously over to the tree to investigate. she found only what seemed like a basket of blankets, though she could her the muffled cry. she removed the top blanket to reveal a baby girl.??The baby's hair was??gold and her eyes??matched the color of?? the sky after it rains, gray with a??light tint of blue.??Even though she did not match the ideal firenation woman, dark hair and auburn??eyes, she was still a beautiful baby. Also in the basket was a note that read, Please take in my child.??I am forced to leave her for I must flee from my husband. Her name is Sandrea. She was born only a week ago. Keep her safe and raise her well. - a??mother??.??Ursa called a servent, Dorinda,??from the house. Dorinda was facinated with children and was very helpful to Ursa during her time of maturnity. She was clearly the best choice to care for this baby, for Ursa knew her husband would not approve of??caring for an abandoned baby by herself. The servent agreed to take in the child and to care for it??as her own.??Exactly a week from that moment Ursa's first child, Zuko, was born.?????????? |
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| when should I post chap 1(this is the intro) and 2 |
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| here's the next chap b/c I'm bored * * * * chap 1/ My little Girl August 18, year 87 of the war It was a warm, sunny day in the firenation. Sandrea had her face pressed up against the tree in the garden with her toy bear in the grass behind her. Sandrea: one, two, fwee, ummm da number after fwee, umm da number after dat, da number after dat, da number after dat, da number after dat, da number after dat, um da number after dat, ten! Weddy or not hee I come! Sandrea turned around only to the disapointment that her bear hadn't moved. Sandrea: Beary! How are we spposed to pway da game if you can't wember da wules?! Little Zuko came up behind her dragging his favorite toy, a little wooden sword. Zuko: Who are you talkin to? Sandrea: My fwend Beary. He won't pway da game wite Zuko: your fwend is a toy? Sandea: Ya. he's da only one who'll pway wiff me. Zuko: I'll pway wiff you.My mom's busy wiff my sister.ummmm what's your name? Sandrea: I'm Sandwea, but my mom only calls me dat when she's mad at me. I like Sandy bedder. Zuko: Oh ok. I'm Suko Sandrea: ok Suko Zuko: no Sssuko Sandrea: Dat's wat I said. Zuko: no you didn't Sandrea: yes I did Zuko: no you said SSSSSSSSSSSSUKO Sandrea: SAME DING Zuko: NO ITS NOT Sandrea: Whatever. you wanna pway or not? Zuko: ok. what are you pwaying Sandrea: Hide & Seek They played together all day and they were insepperable from then on. They didn't know at that time that the tree in the garden is where they...I'm getting ahead of myself. (anywho) They would go through life toghter.They'd deal with life and death, and Azula together. (and your all gonna get to read about it) Sandy's Journal My little Girl-Tim Mcgraw Beutiful baby from the outside in/ Chase you dreams but always know the road/ that'll lead you home again/ goand take on this old world/ but to me know you'll always be/ my little girl |
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| It was cool. 9/10 |
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