I've got a couple ideas for the S.P. invasion and/or what happened to Ursa, and also wanted to ask this:

Lu Ten. Could we go anywhere with him?

should we make the plot of the movie about the plot of avatar or make up our own ???????

Yeah, bit confusing, but its there...

Anywho, I don't think my computer wants me to help. I tried about three times to start something, and it's not working. I'll be back after I kill my sister as a sacrifice to the great gods of the computer.

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This is the story format of my entry. I hope you enjoy it! Sorry for the suckiness of the layout, I can't get it to do it right.
Meanwhile the evil monk goes to
the Sozin and tells him what
is happening. Sozin sees the opportunity

for them to strike at the southern temple and other areas of the world just as

a comet is passing by he finds that it increases the power of fire

benders. Many were caught off guard as

the fire nation army attacked them. A

huge fight takes place as the young monks die off easily.
Fire Nation Palace,
War Chamber, Day 1 & 2
Afiko arrived at the palace in
haste to see Fire Lord Sozin. As he walked into the War Chamber, he noticed
Sozin sitting on the floor with his eyes closed. He walked up to Sozin, and
started backing away cautiously. ???Wait right there!??? boomed Sozin, ???Do not
leave just yet! It is the day before my soldiers leave for war.??? Afiko
whispered, ???The day is coming soon, Fire Lord Sozin. The pathetic Air Temples
will fall in unison. There is nothing they can do to protect themselves from
you, great Fire Lord. Your armies will stomp all over those wretched so called
???benders???. Sozin spoke in an intimidating voice, ???You speak as a great admiral,
yet you have no bravery or courage. I believe that you came here to so we can
show pity towards you. You are no High Monk, not until you prove to me that you
are.???
Afiko bowed
to Sozin swiftly. Afiko spoke as a coward, ???B-b-b-but sir, I AM a great
admiral! I am the fiercest airbender in all of the lands! I will stand beside
you as your armies wipe out the rest of my pathetic people!??? He whispered, ???I
give all of my services to you, Mighty One!??? Sozin softly said, ???You are no
great admiral, but I may give you a chance. You have betrayed your OWN people,
and we will not wait when you deceive the Fire Nation as well. You will be
watched, all day and all night. Remember, over a hundred guards are stationed
at this Palace, inside and out. You are quarantined to the Palace until you are
needed in the battlefield. My guards will now escort you to your room.??? Afiko
gave Sozin a baffled look. Afiko was confused, ???Wh-wh-what!? I would NEVER
betray the Fire Nation! You are much too powerful. I came here to be deemed
High Monk by the greatest firebender to ever live, and you quarantine me in the
palace!???? Sozin interrupted the monk, ???Afiko, we do not want you changing sides
in this war after you have come here. Understand that we do not truly know if
you are a spy or not, but we thank you for the valuable information. Our armies
will be on the doorstep of the Southern Air Temple within weeks.??? Sozin gave
Afiko a cruel grin as Afiko was escorted to his room.
The next
day, Sozin walked into the War Chamber to find that the admirals were already
there. Sozin asked, ???Why are the four of you here so early???? One of the
admirals whispered, ???This is our first war. We have not seen the other benders
fight. We are great benders, but we are beginning to have second thoughts??????
Sozin interrupted, ???YOU WILL NOT HAVE SECOND THOUGHTS! YOU WILL MARCH IN, AND
DESTROY THOSE AIR NOMADS!??? He slammed his fist on the table, and a couple of
sparks flew from his fist. ???You, you are the admirals that will go down in
history for destroying the Air Nomads. YOU are the great conquerors that will
bring down the Air Nomads! ALL OF YOU will achieve the ranks as great men who
fought against the Air Nomads, and won! Tonight, we will begin our journey to
the Air Temples, where we will fight the first battles of this grand war, and
we will be VICTORIOUS!??? Sozin sat back down, and bowed his head in silence.
Admiral Zhoka spoke, ???You are
right, Fire Lord Sozin. This is the year that we will invade the temples, and destroy
the Air Nomads once and for all.??? Sozin said, ???The first temple to fall will be
where the traitor was from, and where the Avatar is??? the Southern Air Temple. This
is the strongest temple, so it will be best to catch them off guard while we
have the chance. Also, each of our soldiers will have the strength of ten
firebenders,??? he shouted, ???We are INVINCIBLE!??? The admirals were baffled by
Sozin. They did not know what he was talking about. Zhoka said confused,
???Wh-what do you mean!? We are not THAT strong. We do not have enough chi
enhancing tea to give to our tens of thousands of soldiers!???
Sozin gave them a wicked grin and
whispered, ???But I, the greatest firebender to ever live, have made a discovery???
a discovery that will make us unbeatable to the rest of the world! All of you
will see during the last Air Nomad battle. It will finish off the Air Nomads???
but for now, we must invade the Southern Air Temple, the strongest and most
fortified temple of them all! There, at that first battle, WE WILL SHOW THE
WORLD HOW MUCH DESTRUCTION THE FIRE NATION CAN DO!??? The admirals saluted Sozin,
and walked out of the chamber in silence, knowing that they will be leaving
that night for the Southern Air Temple.
The Invasion
After journeying for weeks across
the ocean, they finally reached the Southern Air Temple. They set up their camp
at the base of the Potola Mountain range in a large
field of wondrous green grass, wildflowers, and a stream of clear water flowing
nearby. The sky was a perfect blue, but it would not be for long. War was upon
this field. There was no longer harmony between the nations, and the monks knew
it. The monks knew that the firebenders would one day get out of hand.
In the field, over 5,000 soldiers
were training for the invasion. They were ready to do whatever task Admiral
Zhoka gave to them. They were all ready to attack the Southern Air Temple,
which would be the first battle for the war. The admiral was walking around
camp, watching the training, and perfecting the moves of new recruits who had
not known of war. Zhoka was giving the soldiers his advice, ???No, no, you have
it all wrong young private! What are they teaching you these days!? It is all
in the breath. It does not matter how hard you punch, it is all in the breath.
You take in the oxygen and you?????? A messenger ran up to Zhoka, startling him.
The messenger was panting when he managed to whisper the words, ???Admiral Zhoka!
Admiral Zhoka!??? Zhoka was surprised, ???What, what is it lad!???? The messenger
worriedly said, ???It???s the Air Nomads, sir! They spotted two young privates in
the mountains and they took them to the temples! We must prepare for battle!???
Zhoka was ready for anything. He
yelled, ???ROUND UP THE LIGHTNING TEAM! THEY MUST BE AT THE FRONT OF THE BATTLE!??? Zhoka took out
the war horn, and thought to himself. This
is the first battle of the Fire Nation, we must win, or we will be laughed at
and called fools around the world. He looked up at the mountains brutally,
and he blew the war horn. The Fire Nation military gathered behind him. The
Lightning team was up front; ready to take out any obstacle that stood in their
way. The sun was straight overhead. There were no shadows, and the firebenders
were at their strongest in the day. They were ready.
Zhoka took out the war horn yet
again, and blew it. Generals of the smaller battalions got out the bison
whistles they had made in the Fire Nation. The generals lifted the wooden
whistles to their lips, and they blew. The screeching noise rang throughout the
mountains. From the nearest mountains, hundreds of bison came swarming into the
field. The firebenders did not expect what they had seen. The bison were
carrying airbenders, and at the front of them all, was Monk Gyatso. Gyatso
shouted to Zhoka and the rest of the army, ???You will NOT take our home away
from us! We have questioned the soldiers, and they betrayed you! We may not
have all of our airbenders here and ready, but our land will not fall without
resistance! You will face the wrath of the airbenders!???
Zhoka quickly yelled, ???Get to the trebuchets!
It does not matter if the bison are killed; we will find a way up into the Air Temple!
Lightning Team, STRIKE WITH ME!??? Zhoka and the team of lightningbenders kneeled
down on one knee. They all took deep breaths, and put all of the fury that had
been inside them for so long into the lightning. They shot the lightning in
unity. Thirty of the largest strikes of lightning ever created hurled straight
for Monk Gyatso, but Monk Gyatso knew what to do. He took out his glider, and
he flew straight up towards the aqua blue sky. He headed down, and created a
large vortex as he dived. The vortex took in all of the lightning, and shot it
back out towards the Fire Nation Army. The benders quickly deflected the
lightning, and they were right back to attacking. The trebuchets were ready,
and they began bombing the bison. The bison feared the fire, and they headed
towards ground.
Gyatso was pulling out of his dive,
when suddenly, one bolt of lightning from Zhoka struck Gyatso in the leg.
Gyatso crashed into the ground, and airbenders surrounded him, trying to
protect him from harm. They begged for mercy. They didn???t want the airbender
killed. They pleaded, until finally one of the bravest bison came and carried
Gyatso off into the mountains. Zhoka shouted, ???General Voy, get some of those
grounded bison and take your battalion to follow the monk!??? Voy shouted, ???Right
away sir!??? Voy and his soldiers saluted him and they ran off to where the bison
were located. They got on the tops of the bison, and headed after Gyatso. The
airbenders tried to bring the bison down, but the firebenders were closing in
on them. The airbenders knew that the battle was lost. The airbenders began
retreating into the mountains to find shelter and refuge, but the firebenders
kept on coming. There were just too many??? the airbenders could not hold them
back.
Many of the airbenders died in the
battlefield, but some retreated to the Southern Air Temple. The firebenders
took the bison that were left behind, and they followed Voy into the mountains.
Hundreds of firebenders that got to the temple surrounded it. Children did not
have time to hide; they had to fight with the remaining airbenders. Within
minutes, the firebenders brutally killed the rest of the airbenders that were
fighting, and they searched for Monk Gyatso. When they found him, they saw him
lying on the ground, panting. Gyatso called upon the spirits to help him, but
he did not wait for a response. He stood up on his burnt leg, and he reached
for his staff, and he began airbending like no other has seen before. He
created huge tornadoes that shook the ground. He blew the strongest currents
into crevices in the mountain, and the mountain range shook under Gyatso???s
power. He must have wiped out hundreds of firebenders, but more kept on coming.
He could not go on much longer.
Gyatso was worn out, but he fought
back anyway. He was cornered into a building of the Air Temple,
where gliders were stored. He reached for one of the gliders after his had been
burned to ash. As he reached, one of the soldiers dived for Gyatso???s arm.
Another firebender pinned his other arm to the ground. Gyatso did not have
enough strength to blow back the firebenders. They closed in on him. Zhoka
moved the firebenders to the side. He whispered to Gyatso in a harsh voice, ???You
have fought well, but your people are a dying race. Understand this before you
die. Fire is THE superior element. This is the first battle of many. The Fire
Nation will destroy the Air Nomads, the Earth Kingdom,
and the Water Tribes. We will rule the world.??? Gyatso whispered to the admiral
as he was panting, ???You may take the world for your own one day, but you must
know that there is always going to be the idea of a rebellion. Not all of the
people will follow your command. My people may become extinct, but the Avatar
will return. The Avatar will restore peace to this world. It may be in one year
or one hundred, but the world will one day live in harmony once again. Fire is
NOT the superior element. There is no superior element, for we are all equal,
but I shall die fighting for my nation. You all are fools to follow the orders
of your corrupt Fire Lord.??? One small tear trickled down the side of Gyatso???s
face.
With that, Zhoka charged up the
lightning in his body, and with a final strike, struck Gyatso right in the
heart, killing him.??? Zhoka stood on the mountain, overlooking the field
triumphantly. He looked around and he yelled to the other men, ???This day, we
have taken the Southern Air Temple! They could not hold back the superior
element! We will destroy the strongholds of the Air Nomads, Earth Kingdom,
and Water Tribes! We are immortal!??? The rest of the men shouted in conquest.
Among the green battlefield,
however, there was no longer peace. Hundreds of bodies were strewn across the
field in defeat. Most of them were Air Nomad, but there were some Fire Nation
soldiers too. Innocent people had died in the battle from the destructive Fire
Nation forces. The field was ablaze, the grass was brown and dry, and the sky
was red as the sun was setting over the ocean in the west. The stream no longer
flowed like it did so calmly before, the stream was instead, moving at a fast
pace, and small waves were created. It was a murky brown color instead of
clear. The hermit crabs that had lived in the stream were long gone, leaving it
to be uninhabited.
Just then, Zhoka heard the words of
his father. ???Remember son, the world is not separated into four nations, it is
already one. We are all one people, separated by our different styles of life.
We keep each other in balance. The nations must stick together and keep balance
so we can live in harmony.??? Balance,
Zhoka thought, balance keeps us alive. Without balance, the world will go into
corruption and chaos. A tear stroked his face. Zhoka had realized his
brutal actions, and he fled for a bison. The firebenders began shouting after
him, asking where he was going, but those firebenders never saw the admiral
again???