clever.....*trying to get involved*
I guess I oughta butt out till the writing thing is sorted out, eh?
Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
clever.....*trying to get involved*
I guess I oughta butt out till the writing thing is sorted out, eh?
Hey there! I hope it's not too late to post mine, I had a lot of problems to post it, since it was too large, so I??ll post again,?? (did you realised I've erased a message?) Well, here it goes!
??We see some characters' legs running, like Kyoshi Warriors or Freedom Fighters in different places, with war sounds at sunlight, until we see, in the night, shadows of two tall people pulling a shorter one by force; it seems it's pretty difficult for them to do that. They are in a forest, while the image zooms in, we realise the shorter person is a woman, then, after a scream we realise that she is a dramatically, decadently impoverished and thinner Azula, being pulled by Zuko and Sokka.??
Sokka: Wow, it's incredibly! You were right! This harpy never dies! (While Zuko holds her hands and Sokka ties them), hey, Prince Zuzu (Zuko grunts angry by Sokka's last words, and because Azula is still struggling to escape) would you like to tell me again why are we doing this? (Scared at Zuko's face) I... I alredy know we need a lot of help in this war, but this is too much... I mean, I alredy had enough with your help...
Zuko: (After exhalating fire and a Sokka's bad hidden shriek) How many times do I need to tell you not to call me like that!(Mad) You little water peasant! (While Azula scratches Sokka and screams "Let me go!, You pair of pathetic!")
Sokka: Hey! How did you just called me? (With a too opened eyes) I'm gonna kill you, Prince Zuzu! Ouch! (Azula just triend to shoot him RED flames)
The two boys start fighting, Zuko without bending, until he gets mad, and tries to shoot flames at him.
Toph: Would you like to stop discussing, guys? (Squeezes both down with EarthBending, at the same time that Katara soaks Azula with WaterBending, since she tried to burn the ropes)
Azula & Zuko: Crap!
Katara: You know this new Fire Lord (Azula grunts) is too powerful, Sokka, you cannot even imagine how I hate to say this, but... we really need her help!
Azula: You must be dreaming if you believe I am going to help such losers! (With a mad??expression while Zuko and Katara glare at her with hate) You are just lucky that I have been hidding, that I'm not at the top of my skills, I'll kill you all! (While Toph releases Sokka and Zuko)??
Zuko: (Angry) Azula! You know that if we loose, the entire world would be in danger, including yourself! If you don't help us, then you'll probably die, accept it, nobody will help such evil, selfish person, even your "friends", Ty Lee and Mai are helping us! They alredy are with Aang at the South Pole!
Azula: (Opening her eyes widely, in anger) What?! I HATE YOU ZUKO!!! I WON'T HELP YOU!!!
Sokka: Let's make a deal, you help us, and then you'll be free to kick Prince Zuzu's ass, (everybody look at him with a WTF face, while Katara and Toph Cry: "Sokka!!!") What? I'm the idea guy, remember?
Zuko: I have a better idea, ponytail!??Why don't we kick YOUR ass instead? I'll go first!
They try to fight again but Toph stops them while Katara puts a resignation face
100 YEARS AGO...
Ok, I haven't finnished, and I know this wasn't on Tico's post, but what goes next is from there, but I'll post it apart from this, I don't wanna have problems again... wait to my next post?? (I'll put it here right now)
| andreitayehp wrote: |
Hey there! I hope it's not too late to post mine, I had a lot of problems to post it, since it was too large, so I??ll post again,?? (did you realised I've erased a message?) Well, here it goes! ??We seesome characters' legs running, like Kyoshi Warriors or Freedom Fighters in different places, with war sounds at sunlight, until we see, in the night, shadows of two tall people pulling a shorter one by force; it seems it's pretty difficult for them to do that. They are in a forest, while the image zooms in, we realise the shorter person is a woman, then, after a scream we realise that she is a dramatically, decadently impoverished and thinner Azula, being pulled by Zuko and Sokka.?? Sokka: Wow, it's incredibly! You were right! This harpy never dies! (While Zuko holds her hands and Sokka ties them), hey, Prince Zuzu (Zuko grunts angry by Sokka's last words, and because Azula is still struggling to escape) would you like to tell me again why are we doing this? (Scared at Zuko's face) I... I alredy know??we need a lot of help in this war, but this is too much... I mean, I alredy had enough with your help... Zuko: (After exhalating fire and a Sokka's bad hidden shriek) How many times do I need to tell you not to call me like that!(Mad) You little water peasant! (While Azula scratches Sokka and screams "Let me go!, You pair of pathetic!") Sokka: Hey! How did you just called me, Prince Zuzu? (With a too opened eyes) I'm gonna kill you! Ouch! (Azula just triend to shoot him RED flames) The two boys start fighting, Zuko without bending, until he gets mad, and tries to shoot flames at him. Toph: Would you like to stop discussing, guys? (Squeezes both down with EarthBending, at the same time that Katara soaks Azula with WaterBending, since she tried to burn the ropes) Azula & Zuko: Crap! Katara: You know this new Fire Lord (Azula grunts) is too powerful, Sokka, you cannot even imagine how I hate to say this, but... we really need her help! Azula: You must be dreaming if you believe I am going to help such losers! (With a mad??expression while Zuko and Katara glare at her with hate) You are just lucky that I have been hidding, that I'm not at my top of my skills, I'll kill you all! (While Toph releases Sokka and Zuko)?? Zuko: (Angry) Azula! You know that if we loose, the entire world would be in danger, including yourself! If you don't help us, then you'll die, accept it, nobody will help such evil, selfish person, even your "friends", Ty Lee and Mai are helping us! They alredy are with Aang at the South Pole! Azula: (Opening her eyes widely, in anger) What?! I HATE YOU ZUKO!!! I WON'T HELP YOU!!! Sokka: Let's make a deal, you help us, and then you'll be free to kick Prince Zuzu's ass, (everybody look at him with a WTF face, while Katara and Toph Cry: "Sokka!!!") What? I'm the idea guy, remember? Zuko: I have a better idea, ponytail! Why don't we kick your ass instead? I'll go first! They try to fight again but Toph stops them while Katara puts a resignation face 100 YEARS AGO... Ok, I haven't finnished, and I know this wasn't on Tico's post, but what goes next is from there, but I'll postit apart from this, I don't wanna have problems again... wait to my next post (I'll put it here right now) |
Ok, I'll continue on the next post!
100 YEARS AGO...
We see Fire Lord Sozin's War Room, he is in his throne, and the crones that were with Azula in "The Avatar State" and "Return to Omashu" are sitted in front of him, in cushions on the floor, they are not old, they are actually pretty young, like 20 years old, they are short, and have a perfect posture, a very evil look. They wear the same clothes and hair style that in the chapters I've mentioned...
Lady1: Your highness, if you really want to be the world's emperor, you need to act quickly...
Lady2: Now, that your grandfather, Avatar Roku has finally died, you are free to star a war...
Both of them:In order to win, you must destroy the new Avatar!
Sozin:????Sounds pretty easy... But how it's supposed that I'll be able to do that? The Air Nomads are not going to just hand him to me... They'll fight, and maybe they'll ask Ba si Se help...
Lady1: Sir,??we have felt a huge amount of power coming from the skies
Lady2: ??We don't know were it's power comes from, but
Both of??them:It's acomet that will give you and each FireBender strength enough as to destroy Air Nomads forever...
(We see Ozai's evil face with a diabolical smile)
PRESENT TIME...
(Now we are at the South Pole, The gang, Zuko and the angels join together outside of Sokka and Katara's new ice-maded-house. Kana has died a day after finished the first war, it was pretty difficult for the ganf to cheer Katara up, but Aang and Zuko, which had lose people they loved too, consoled her. The Southern Water Tribe was now a city almost as big as the Northern Water Tribe, it didn't had rivers instead of streets, tough, since the WaterBenders wanted to it be different, the building infrastructure style was like tall skycrapes and houses with round roofs. Toph and Zuko had becomed the best friends, since both were throught the same lost; the water siblings are talking with Aang, while:
Ty Lee: Azula! I've miseed you so much! (Runs happily toward her and tries to give her a hug, while Mai is near she, looking at Zuko talking with Toph)
Azula: (with a mad expression) STAY AWAY FROM ME YOU TRAITOR! (Ty Lee moves back scared, while all the rest look at them) HOW YOU EVEN DARE TO TALK TO ME! HOW ON HELL ARE YOU HELPING ZUKO'S GANG?!!
Aang: Hey! I thought this was MY gang.
Mai: (As cold as always) Hey! It's not for Zuko, it's for the world's safety, and balnce between the Nations, and blah blah.... anyway, I like to help him; do you have any problem with that?
(A long silence)
Azula: HOW DO YOU DARE TO TALK TO ME LIKE THAT! LET ME REMIND YOU SOMETHING! IF YOU ARE NOT STILL BORED IN OMASHU,IT's JUST THANKS TO ME!!! AFTER ALL I HAVE DONE FOR YOU!!! YOU WEREN'T EVEN THERE TO HELP ME AGAINST IROH!!! HOW ON HELL...
| andreitayehp wrote: |
Ok, I'll continue on the next post! 100 YEARS AGO... We see Fire Lord Sozin's War Room, he is in his throne, and the crones that were with Azula in "The Avatar State" and "Return to Omashu" are sitted in front of him, in cushions on the floor, they are not old, they are actually pretty young, like 20 years old, they are short, and have a perfect posture, a very evil look. They wear the same clothes and hair style that in the chapters I've mentioned... Lady1: Your highness, if you really want to be the world's emperor, you need to act quickly... Lady2: Now, that your grandfather, Avatar Roku has finally died, you are free to start a war... Both of them:In order to win, you must destroy the new Avatar! Sozin:????Sounds pretty easy... But how it's supposed that I'll be able to do that? The Air Nomads are not going to just hand him to me... They'll fight, and maybe they'll ask Ba si Se help... Lady1: Sir,??we have felt a huge amount of power coming from the skies Lady2: ??We don't know were it's power comes from, but Both of??them:It's acomet that will give you and each FireBender strength enough as to destroy Air Nomads forever... (We see Ozai's evil face with a diabolical smile) PRESENT TIME... (Now we are at the South Pole, The gang, Zuko and the angels join together outside of Sokka and Katara's new ice-maded-house. Kana has died a day after finished the first war, it was pretty difficult for the ganf to cheer Katara up, but Aang and Zuko, which had lose people they loved too, consoled her, The Southern Water Tribe was now a city almost as big as the Northern Water Tribe, it didn't had rivers instead of streets, tough, since the WaterBenders wanted it to be different, the building infrastructure style was like tall skycrapes and houses with round roofs. Toph and Zuko had becomed the best friens, since both are throught the same lost; the water siblings are talking with Aang, while: Ty Lee: Azula! I've miseed you so much! (Runs happily toward her and tries to give her a hug, while Mai is near she, looking at Zuko talking with Toph) Azula: (with a mad expression) STAY AWAY FROM ME YOU TRAITOR! (Ty Lee moves back scared and the rest of the loo them) HOW YOU DARE EVEN TO TALK TO ME! HOW ON HELL ARE YOU HELPING ZUKO'S GANG?!! Aang: Hey! I thought this was MY gang. Mai: (As cold as always) Hey! It's not for Zuko, it's for the world's safety, and balance between the Nations, and blah blah.... anyway, I like to help him; do you have any problem with that? (A long silence) Azula: HOW DO YOU DARE TO TALK TO ME LIKE THAT! LET ME REMIND YOU SOMETHING! IF YOU ARE NOT STILL BORED IN NEW OZAI (Aang says quietly "Omashu..."),IT's JUST THANKS TO ME!!! AFTER ALL I HAVE DONE FOR YOU!!! YOU WEREN'T EVEN THERE TO HELP ME AGAINST IROH!!! HOW ON HELL... |
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Zuko: UNCLE IROH FOR YOU! I cannot believe what you are saying, plese, don't make me laugh... After all you have done for them? (Ty Lee starts crying) You have not done anything else but giving them orders; you never treated them as friends, just as servants! That cannot be called friendship!
Azula: And what do you know about friendship, Zuko? You don't have any friends! Lu Ten's dead! And you also have lost your uncle, you betrayed me, then he did the same with you!The only thing you have is your honour... Ooops! (Zuko is a bit ashamed, a bit mad)??Excuse me, I had forgotten, you lost it!
Katara: (Angry) Shut up! He has a huge amount of honour, bigger than all the honour you'll have in your whole life! And he HAS friends! Me!??I'm his friend!
Toph: Yay! Me two!
Ty Lee: (Holding Mai's hand up) We three!
Mai:You mean four, right? But that's not important, (blushing) I mean, not right now... The most important is the war...
Aang: Yeah! She's right, we need to move on if we wanna defeat Iroh...
We see Zuko's sad and disapointed face...
A MONTH AFTER OZAI'S DEFEAT
At the royal palace:
We see the Fire Lord Throne, with Iroh, since Zuko, acording to himself wasn't ready to be Fire Lord. Suddenly, a servant enters screaming:
Servant:No way! You are not allowed to enter like that! You cannot! ( We see blue flames and the servant goes out running, while mad Azula enters)
Iroh: Azula! It is a pleasure... I think...
Azula: Don't be sarcastic, uncle, I want I just wanted to know... WHY ARE YOU HERE!!! IT'S SUPPOSED YOU GAVE YOUR TRHONE TO MY FATHER'S FAMILY, YOU HAVE ALREDY LOST YOUR OPORTUNITY!!!
Iroh: I could not obligue Prince Zuko to take it, if that's what you mean, Azula... I'll call a servant for a relaxing Jin Seng tea...
Azula: NO THANKS! YOU! KNOW EXACTLY WHAT I MEAN!!! I AM ALREDY ABLE TO TAKE THE THRONE!! AGNI KAI!!! (Iroh smiles evily)
We don't see the entire Agni Kai, but just Azula shooting lightening at his uncle, wich he absorbs and mix with his own one, creating a white one that knocks Azula down inmediatly.. Then we see her being expulsed by Iroh and a lot of Royal Guards...
Iroh: Dear, did you really believe you'll be able to defeat me?
Azula: You'll regret for this I swear it!
Iroh: Really? I'd love to see that, really, nobody will help you, everyworld hates you! Even your own brother!?? He'd choose to help his (mocking) his lovely and comprensive uncle Iroh, rather than his Evil little spoiled brat sister... The Throne is mine, so the next war! I'll be the World's emperor...
Azula: Now I understand why Zuko said father was crazy... (thibking) Is this really the Iroh I know?...
Actually, I haven't finished, I have more in my mother tongue, in Word format, more about the begginig of the 1?? war, but I'm tired now... it's like 3 o' clok, you know....?? I'll post it here tomorow (I tried to copy and paste, but it didn't work!) bye!
| andreitayehp wrote: |
?? Actually, I haven't finished, I have more in my mother tongue, in Word format, more about the begginig of the 1?? war, but I'm tired now... it's like 3 o' clok, you know.... I'll post it here tomorow (I tried to copy and paste, but it didn't work!) bye! |
| tico1125 wrote: | ||
Actually when I saw the whole four toy thing I immediately thought that they represented the four elements.?? It seems to be a trend with the show. |
| tico1125 wrote: | ||
Actually when I saw the whole four toy thing I immediately thought that they represented the four elements.?? It seems to be a trend with the show. |
| confucioussayhi wrote: |
| It's in hebrew but yeah, Toph means small drum or tambourine(if wiki isn't screwin' with my head!) Oh, if I get the writer role, I call Toph's birth/life, if its in this movie. I'll share with Taang if he/she wants to but I at least want the birth sequence. Please? |
| Taang_Forever wrote: |
| Er-- Ah, doesn't matter. |
| Taang_Forever wrote: |
| Well, it's just that I wanted to do the earth rumble stuff, seeing as I can't do the birth scene, mostly because I wouldn't know how to write it with all the emotion a scene like that takes, not to mention good vocabulary for how emotional it might get when her parents see their child is born blind... I'm mildly good at action scenes, probably a seven, but it's the stuff I really like to write about. But like you said, we'll decide later. I always have that fanfic though. |
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