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Script/Screenplay for an Avatar Movie that is CG Based (Writing test on pg 13)

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    obsessedchic1

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    tico1125 wrote:
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    wow, I'm just reallising my spelling sucks! I didn't mean that, but it's a good idea, what I tried to say was... *opens www.wordreference.com*

    We shouldn't make a script starting with the beginning of the story, we should start with the end, nobody would understand, then we put the begginnig, so peopple would understand a little bit, then we continue with the end, until everything get's so confusing that the story is showed since the beggining, until the end, just since then we would be making a movie with a chronological order in the events of the plot.

    Example: The Battle starts when evrybody in the gaang is fighting against Iroh, incluiding Zuko and Azula as allies, so people will think WTF is happening? Azula workibg with the gaang?, then we show Avatar Roku talking about to capture an spirit, then we show Iroh figting against Azula... and then her helping the Gaang against Iroh, then we show how the war against Ozai ended, and then how did it started... we continue with the finnal battle, and we see Aang fighting at the top of his abilities, then, Aang's origing and story with the air nomads... and then the water and fire sibling's childhood, then, in the final battle, we show the spirit coming out from Iroh's body... then we start a chronological order on the events about how started the war, how they captured the spirit, how the gaang and the fire sibling meet each other, and like that until the end of the movie.

    Shortly, the movie would be as a complicated puzzle that the public must join together, and by the end they'll understand everything. Just like that movie called the other, with Nicole Kidman, you didn't understood anything until you realice she and her family were dead, and that they were the ghosts
    I love that movie! It made you think alot...but most movies that are made are made out of order...I mean in production...but I guess we have to take another vote on this.
    No offense...but I'm a little confused about this. Actually, very confused. May you explain it again?

    The movie shouldn't star with aang's origins or with the beggining of the war or when the spirit was sealed (by the way, I think we shouldn't use Avatar Roku in here, we need an older one, like Kyoshi or even an older one).

    The moovie should start with a scene with one of the final fights, then, the movie should continue showing the public what happened to end like that. EXAMPLE:

    (This is the movie script order, how would look like in the teathers, not the order we should create it)

    1?? Iroh vs Gang and fire siblings (if you want to we could put some kyoshi warriors and freedom fighter)

    2?? (past) Ozai being defeated

    3?? (after Ozai's defeat) Iroh going mad with his power, and fighting against Azula.

    4?? Iroh vs Gang and fire siblings (if you want to we could put some kyoshi warriors and freedom fighter) (how continues the fight)

    5?? (past) How a spirit the public doesn't know anything about is sealed by Koh, and an Avatar

    6?? (after 5??) How started the war.

    7?? ( Iroh vs gang Fight continues) Aang's high air bending skills/level.

    8?? (past) Aang's origins and life at the air temple.

    9?? Like 7?? but with Water siblings

    10?? Just as 8 but with Fire siblings

    11?? Some Ursa and Ozai relationship.

    12?? How the gaang joined

    13?? then we put all the rest of the movie with a chronological order, and we managed to make people understand everything when there are just 30 minutes left to the end of the movie.

    ??My biggest problem with the whole Iroh being possessed by an evil spirit thing is that right now in the show they do not show any indication that he has evil thoughts.?? He looks to settle down in life and bring Zuko out of the dark thoughts to make him into someone that will end the war.

    Well maybe we could foreshadow Iroh being possesed later on because of the Sozain's comet. Not necessarily in the past.
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    tico1125

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    Taang_Forever wrote:
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    My biggest problem with the whole Iroh being possessed by an evil spirit thing is that right now in the show they do not show any indication that he has evil thoughts. He looks to settle down in life and bring Zuko out of the dark thoughts to make him into someone that will end the war.


    It's not like he willingly gets taken over. it wasn't his choice.

    Ok so he gets taken over after the comet is destroyed??? That is my major confusion.
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    tico1125 wrote:
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    Well I wanted the movie to be in the future, so why not make two movies? Past first, and then after Avatar is over we can make another one with what we got.

    We could do that.?? That way we will have more explanations on what is going on.

    Yeah! That way we could have something to look forward after the show.
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    andreitayehp

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    tico1125 wrote:

    ??My biggest problem with the whole Iroh being possessed by an evil spirit thing is that right now in the show they do not show any indication that he has evil thoughts.?? He looks to settle down in life and bring Zuko out of the dark thoughts to make him into someone that will end the war.

    It's supposed Iroh was possessed after Aang destroying Sozin's comet (after Aang releases the spirit, in other words, just befere he becomes Fire Lord )

    But you should rean Taang Forever post, there is everything!

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    Taang_Forever

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    tico1125 wrote:

    Ok so he gets taken over after the comet is destroyed??? That is my major confusion.


    My idea had the comet being a prison for an evil spirit. When Aang destroyed that comet he destroyed the prison, releasing the spirit who chose to reside within Iroh, whether because he was the strongest there(I doubt Azula is better) or because of his age, and he would've been easier to capture. his sickness is due to him resisting against the spirit trying to take control. Now do you get it?
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    tico1125 wrote:
    Taang_Forever wrote:
    tico1125 wrote:

    My biggest problem with the whole Iroh being possessed by an evil spirit thing is that right now in the show they do not show any indication that he has evil thoughts. He looks to settle down in life and bring Zuko out of the dark thoughts to make him into someone that will end the war.


    It's not like he willingly gets taken over. it wasn't his choice.

    Ok so he gets taken over after the comet is destroyed??? That is my major confusion.

    Or that could be discussed if we make the other movie.
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    tico1125

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    Alright.?? Lets do this.?? I will create a blog on my profile.?? Just comment on the blog what part you want to take in the whole creation.?? Then when all of the parts are filled then we can get to work.?? I will put all the details in the blog.?? I have also made everyone that posted in this thread one of my friends.?? So let's have some fun!
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    Strix_Moonwing

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    tico1125 wrote:
    Alright.?? Lets do this.?? I will create a blog on my profile.?? Just comment on the blog what part you want to take in the whole creation.?? Then when all of the parts are filled then we can get to work.?? I will put all the details in the blog.?? I have also made everyone that posted in this thread one of my friends.?? So let's have some fun!


    Okay, sounds great with me!
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    obsessedchic1

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    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    tico1125 wrote:
    Alright.?? Lets do this.?? I will create a blog on my profile.?? Just comment on the blog what part you want to take in the whole creation.?? Then when all of the parts are filled then we can get to work.?? I will put all the details in the blog.?? I have also made everyone that posted in this thread one of my friends.?? So let's have some fun!


    Okay, sounds great with me!

    Ditto
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    gravity1690

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    I really like this idea about the entire movie with Iroh being possesed etc. If i can be of help feel free to use me... I am thinking maybe at first have it a show in the past like when they are putting the spirit in the comet etc.... and it is during the period of the first avatar which was put in place to stop the spirit and the avatar chain would continue to make sure that it was never released?... im guessing like hes always in the avatar state or not that idk has all the powers????!?!?? and then they capture it... then they go to the period lets say if ozai was killed some time after that.... Iroh is possesed by this spirit of massive power and is given immense power.. and the story with him is happening... News in the spirit world is that the spirit was released and everyone is panicking.. Roku goes to Aang and warns him about it... telling him he has to stop him IN the avatar state because that is the only way but thats a massive risk because of how easily the spirit can kill through iroh and if he dies in that state everything is lost because there will be no avatar to stop the spirit.... idk exactly im thinking of this as we go... i might change it later a bit... except the only problem is everyone is losing their bending because of this spirit so they are on a time limit.. and i really have no idea of what would be next... let me know what you guys thing about it..
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    To help us understand more of the Avatar we could research about the Dalai Lama, isn't that where the Avatar idea is taken from?
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    gravity1690 wrote:
    I really like this idea about the entire movie with Iroh being possesed etc. If i can be of help feel free to use me... I am thinking maybe at first have it a show in the past like when they are putting the spirit in the comet etc.... and it is during the period of the first avatar which was put in place to stop the spirit and the avatar chain would continue to make sure that it was never released?... im guessing like hes always in the avatar state or not that idk has all the powers????!?!?? and then they capture it... then they go to the period lets say if ozai was killed some time after that.... Iroh is possesed by this spirit of massive power and is given immense power.. and the story with him is happening... News in the spirit world is that the spirit was released and everyone is panicking.. Roku goes to Aang and warns him about it... telling him he has to stop him IN the avatar state because that is the only way.... idk exactly im thinking of this as we go... i might change it later a bit... except the only problem is everyone is losing their bending because of this spirit so they are on a time limit.. and i really have no idea of what would be next... let me know what you guys thing about it..


    Well thank you for supporting my idea, but contrary to the poll everyone decided to make the movie take place in the past. The one taking place after season three will begin... after season three is over. Which is when we'll start making it. Your help in this is apreciated though.
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    gravity1690

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    well then i guess ill watch this and see what people decide to do exactly and ill try to build on that
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    Ok.?? I have posted the blog and I have update the first entry to this thread.?? Feel free to enjoy my other blogs.?? BTW I have written my own book that is similar to Avatar.?? I wrote it way before the show even came out.?? I have had a summary of the story in my profile for some time now.?? Feel free to look at it and comment.?? I may even start putting some of the story online for everyone to read.?? I will no reveal the whole thing because I am working on publishing the book but I am sure you will like the story since it takes place in present time.
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    andreitayehp

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    We should do this movie as an OVA, I know this is not Anime, but that'll work, I think , I also belied that all people that are involve in this shoud have and special signature, or an special bar on it, and all of us should write with the same letter, for example, the one I'm using right now, and each of us should use a different color to make this thread more fun and not so boring to read.... this would be my color, what do you think?

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    gravity1690 wrote:
    I really like this idea about the entire movie with Iroh being possesed etc. If i can be of help feel free to use me... I am thinking maybe at first have it a show in the past like when they are putting the spirit in the comet etc.... and it is during the period of the first avatar which was put in place to stop the spirit and the avatar chain would continue to make sure that it was never released?... im guessing like hes always in the avatar state or not that idk has all the powers????!?!?? and then they capture it... then they go to the period lets say if ozai was killed some time after that.... Iroh is possesed by this spirit of massive power and is given immense power.. and the story with him is happening... News in the spirit world is that the spirit was released and everyone is panicking.. Roku goes to Aang and warns him about it... telling him he has to stop him IN the avatar state because that is the only way but thats a massive risk because of how easily the spirit can kill through iroh and if he dies in that state everything is lost because there will be no avatar to stop the spirit.... idk exactly im thinking of this as we go... i might change it later a bit... except the only problem is everyone is losing their bending because of this spirit so they are on a time limit.. and i really have no idea of what would be next... let me know what you guys thing about it..

    This deifnitely has some great ideas for the second movie.?? We will keep it so we can incorporate them.
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    tico1125

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    andreitayehp wrote:

    We should do this movie as an OVA, I know this is not Anime, but that'll work, I think , I also belied that all people that are involve in this shoud have and special signature, or an special bar on it, and all of us should write with the same letter, for example, the one I'm using right now, and each of us should use a different color to make this thread more fun and not so boring to read.... this would be my color, what do you think?

    I like the idea about using different lettering but I think it would be good after we have all the assignments.?? BTW, I am sometimes very dumb but what is "OVA?"
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    I can't change my font color, but I'll use this font and at the end I will add this: k

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    andreitayehp wrote:

    We should do this movie as an OVA, I know this is not Anime, but that'll work, I think , I also belied that all people that are involve in this shoud have and special signature, or an special bar on it, and all of us should write with the same letter, for example, the one I'm using right now, and each of us should use a different color to make this thread more fun and not so boring to read.... this would be my color, what do you think?

    ??Okay, I guess that would be alright. It might make it easier to see who's saying what.
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