Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
Okay. So, what I've read and understood so far is that this is taking place in the past, CG animated, and we are assigning jobs later on, right?
Well, I still call storyboardist. |D Sorry...I'm feeling a bit off, I haven't been on this thread all day. Someone should organize and keep record of all these things, instead of having one look through ALL the pages.
Well, I think everyone agreed assigning(Sp??) jobs once "everyone's connected".
But you could be a big help with organizing...!
tico1125 wrote: |
I created the below plot for if we decide to do something that takes place before the show instead. I think it is a pretty solid story. Let me know what you all think. Opening Scene: Gyatso comes to find the note from Aang while he tries to Meanwhile the evil monk goes to the Sozin and tells him what Elsewhere Aang battles in the storm but becomes lost in the While the battle rages many of the airbenders are able to After a few years Sozin had a child name Azulon whom he Azulon saw the minor losses as a victory because he knew Meanwhile Ozai stayed at home in the fire nation helping Iroh sent many letters of his fight with Ba Sing Se but news He drank heavily and attempted suicide. (This is when he has his encounter with the Meanwhile Ozai visits with Azulon to talk about revoking The next day Zuko finds out about his mother leaving and At this point the story picks up with Zuko???s story and ?? Let me know if you want more. |
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Ok everyone. The above is the basis for the storyline. I think we could use it to determine the writers. So here is the deal.
Write something that works on what we are trying to
accomplish. Use what I wrote up above as a basis to
start from. Give me a bit of dialogue from one of the scenes and some
naration of the scene itself. I think you all have some great potential to be a writer for this movie. However we have to take the best fit. Thank you for all of your input as it is greatly
appreciated.
Please post your submissions after this post.?? I will check on this in the morning. By then hopefully we will have what we need to judge from. Please keep the submission to something about 2 pages long (if you are using MS Word as the editor.) I will then make a poll on this thread for the best five.?? From there everyone will vote for the best one.?? We will take the top three.?? When the writers are determined then I have software to enable us to write the script. I will try and get it to you.
Good luck to all of you.
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BlindBandit wrote: |
But we're not making live action! CG is Computer Graphics...otherwise, I've been taught terribly wrong. |D |
andreitayehp wrote: |
Actually, I think the CG should be based in actors... it would be an easier work, mixing the animated show character features with actors features, for example, a Toph with Dakota Fanning features... |
It seems you didn't understood me at all! I didn't say that! I said that our characters fromCG should look like some actors, not to contract them... I'm 16, not 10!, of course I know that! (and I'm pretty mature, by the way, the eldest sister in my family... the youngest in the class...?? )
Okay here's my post. It's my version of the opening scene...
Opening Scene: (scene opens with the Avatar theme playing while the camera is following a hawk over the ocean, which is reddish because of the sunset. The hawk flies upward and we see Crescent Island. The hawk flies lower as it flies towards the tall tower of the Fire Temple. The hawk flies towards an open window, but flaps away in surprise as a bright light is flashed)
Scene 1: (As the light flashes, the camera zooms inside the room while a man lies dieing in a small cot. A Fire sage sits in a chair and looks over the man. The man coughs and the Fire Sage leans over, worried.)
??Fire Sage: (in worried whisper) Avatar Roku! (turns to a feeble man behind him) What are you doing standing around? Can???t you see Avatar Roku need assistances!? Make yourself useful!
Avatar Roku: (raises hand weakly) No???I need nothing.
Fire Sage: But sir, your condition is getting worse. The Water Tribes are sending their best healers. In a day or two they shall???.
Avatar Roku: Healers can do nothing. Even if they could I would not let them???(pauses) The spirit of Kyoshi has spoken to me. The flames I have lit for so many years as Avatar have finally died. It is time for me to join the avatars before me so I can light the fire once again???..
??Fire Sage: (grabs Avatar Roku???s hand) No???.the world needs the avatar! More than ever! Please sir???.
Avatar Roku: (shudders silently) The world shall never be without an Avatar???.never???.(eyes close for last time as the candles by his bed die out.)
(The Fire Sage bows his head as more Fire keepers rush into the room. We can barely hear them whispering to eachother as the camera zooms out of the room and follows the flight of the hawk as it glides across the red skies.)
??Scene 2: (The camera glides across the ocean, which is now dark with nighttime. It keeps going until it reaches the cliffs and angles upwards at a fast pace. It keeps going upward until it is above the mountain peaks and we see an Air nation temple, windows glowing with the light from inside. We zoom in until we are inside a dimly lit room with a dark haired woman, lying on her back on some blankets, deeply in labor. A bald young man is on his knees besides her, holding her hand while some female monks are helping her.)
Man: (brushing a lock of hair from woman???s face) Don???t worry; it???ll be over soon, Remi.
Remi: (face softens as she looks at man) Thank you, Tong. (her faces twists in face and she squeezes tightly on Tong???s hand as she growls in pain)
Tong: (face is also twisted in pain as Remi continues to squeeze his hand, tighter.) I can???t feel my hand???..
Female monk: (baths Remi???s forehead with wet cloth) The little one is coming, dear.
Tong: (winces as Remi squeezes hand harder) Uh, can you make it come a little faster? (gets hit on head with staff)
Female monk: You don???t rush babies!
Remi: (screams in pain. Both Tong and female monk look at her in surprise) Coming???.he???s coming!
Female monk: (growls at a female monk apprentice) Didn???t you hear her? The baby is coming! Get some towels and water, now Kayo!
Kayo: (bows head, nervously) Yes, ma! (rushes out room)
Scene 3: (We watch as Kayo, the little female monk apprentice, rush down the temple stair, running past many other female monks along the way. She rushes inside a room and disappears. A second later, she reappears with a armful of blankets and a bowl of water. She carefully walks back towards the staircase and passes a large wooden door. She hears voices coming from it and stops.)
Voice one: Avatar Roku is dead???
(Kayo presses ear towards door)
Voice two: No, it can???t be true.
Voice one: But, it is. The Fire Sage sent a message hawk an hour ago???.died at sunset.
Voice two: Then who is next?
Voice one: What do you mean?
Voice two: I mean, who is the next Avatar? The world is at war. We can not be without an Avatar.
Voice one: Nobody knows. All we know is that the child shall be an air bender.
Voice two: How do you know that?
Voice one: It has always been like that! It is part of the cycle. First is air, then is water, then is earth, then fire???.and back to air. Avatar Roku was the flame that lit the way???now it is the new Avatar???s turn to blow us in the right direction.
(Kayo???s eyes widen in shock and she lets out a small gasp at hearing that the next Avatar is an airbender.)
Voice two: Did you hear something?
(Kayo covers her mouth and rushes back upstairs. As she nears the room where Tong and Remi are, she hears a loud wailing. She presses her hand against the door and slowly peeks in. Through the crack in the door, she see Remi, sitting up in her bed of blankets with a small bundle in her arms. Tong has his arm folded around her looking proud while the female monk just sits back and smiles. The monk spies Kayo and gestures her in)
Female monk: Come in child???.and see a most wonderful miracle.
(Kayo sits on the floor, next to Remi and watches as Remi reveals a small baby boy in her arms. The baby is asleep peacefully as Kayo gazes at it in wonder.)
Kayo: What is the baby???s name?
Tong: Tong junior, of course! (gets smacked again by female monk)
Female monk: (scoffs) Not on your life, mister!
??Remi: (chuckles softly) I shall name him Aang???.after his grandfather, the greatest airbender ever known.
Tong; (grumbles) I still think???..(stops as Female monk glares at him) Aang???Aang is good!
Remi: (holds the baby close) Aang???.my little Aang.
Tong: (hugs his wife and son close) Our little airbender???..
Kayo: (remembers what she heard earlier) ???The next Avatar shall be an airbender???shall blow us in the right direction.??? (whispers softly) Aang???the next Avatar.
Sorry if I made any mistakes...post more later!
electricblue18 wrote: |
I'll write something tonight. Night is when I work best, and I think about things the most. Right now, I'm not at my best, even though it's 9:22 here. Maybe I'll start about 12:00 or 1:00. |
*high fives* Ya rly!! I can't work during the day, too eventful ;_;?? As for the Look-a-Like part, that might be a good idea..whoever's in charge of that team may have to think it over. But I think we're making good progress!
@ Strix_: That's good so far, but make sure to PM it to Tico for convenience.??