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    Dafoose

    [7821]Jul 3, 2008
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    Raikiri1103 wrote:
    r3173mpt10n wrote:
    Cool, cool. I'm glad that everyone enjoyed it. And I will remember to put dashes before the scene change. My bad. I have the forced entry kind of set up, or at least the basis of it.
    I sense alot of Narutoishness coming from your sig.

    I'mm.....Sensing too much narutoishness everywhere in the forum, but that's just me. That is a nice naruto sig anyway.

    Double09, there is a line between the time to use grammar correctly and incorrectly. In dialogue, I can understand why you ran the words together, but you were going to mention that the person mumbled the phrase afterward, so it was kind of like repeating yourself. If you want to make sure we understand how a person is speaking, mention it before the dialogue. When people read anything, they aren't just reading the words in their head. They are also reading the words ahead of their eyes, which is why we sometimes understand the tone of voice that someone has before we even get to the part describing it.

    Monk Giatso, or Gyatso. I think it's the one with the "Y", but it could be either. I didn't look it up, but you spelt, uh, the opposite, Giotsu.

    I think that was it. The last thing was your first two sentences, when you said "siam" at the beginning of both, it almost sounded like third person talk.

    HIPPO MAD!!! HIPPO TALK IN THIRD PERSON TOO, LIKE.....CAVEMAN!

    Edited on 07/03/2008 9:03am
    Edited 2 total times.
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    BaiMaoRieji

    [7822]Jul 3, 2008
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    redemption, your post reminded me of when Pokemon was actually good. Excellent work. Now if I can get off my lazy ass and post something... I've attempted every day, but my mind is really f-ed up for some reason.
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    confucioussayhi

    [7823]Jul 3, 2008
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    redemption, your post reminded me of when Pokemon was actually good. Excellent work. Now if I can get off my lazy ass and post something... I've attempted every day, but my mind is really f-ed up for some reason.
    *sleeping*
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    djdfire

    [7824]Jul 3, 2008
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    Double09nhalf wrote:

    "So, um, what are you doing here," said River trying to change the subject, "Doing more research? Oh by the way, when the monk behind the counter ask what topic your researching don't tell him your feeling lucky."

    It's referred towards the google search engine.
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    r3173mpt10n

    [7825]Jul 3, 2008
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:
    redemption, your post reminded me of when Pokemon was actually good. Excellent work. Now if I can get off my lazy ass and post something... I've attempted every day, but my mind is really f-ed up for some reason.

    Thanks. It's good to know that my post is as great as Pokemon! Seriously...it is...no joke intended.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [7826]Jul 3, 2008
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    Wait. So is this an Avatar RPG or a Pokemon discussion thread?
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    djdfire

    [7827]Jul 3, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Wait. So is this an Avatar RPG or a Pokemon discussion thread?
    Seeing how I can see a combination of them on this thread, I guess it's both.
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    confucioussayhi

    [7828]Jul 3, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Wait. So is this an Avatar RPG or a Pokemon discussion thread?
    You should get this b*tchy over more important off-topic crap.

    Not that your sentence was in any way threatening or intimidating anyhow.

    Chad, I'm just going post a little of my own filler tonight. I've been forgetting to do something for a while. I'll do the sword fixing, so you can do what you want still.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [7829]Jul 3, 2008
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    Where's Silo? lol.
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    Double09nhalf

    [7830]Jul 3, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:

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    Raikiri1103 wrote:
    r3173mpt10n wrote:
    Cool, cool. I'm glad that everyone enjoyed it. And I will remember to put dashes before the scene change. My bad. I have the forced entry kind of set up, or at least the basis of it.
    I sense alot of Narutoishness coming from your sig.

    I'mm.....Sensing too much narutoishness everywhere in the forum, but that's just me. That is a nice naruto sig anyway.

    The farce is strong with this one
    I understand Dafoose- next time i'll do that

    Edited on 07/03/2008 5:53pm
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    r3173mpt10n

    [7831]Jul 3, 2008
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    Genesis: Airbending prodigy and master of swords.

    Katsumi: Waterbending prodigy.

    Giro: Earthbending prodigy.

    Karin: Firebending prodigy.

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    Giro and Karin walked down the street and stopped in front of the gates.

    Karin: I sense they are coming, but one of them feels really weak...

    Giro: Is it Kat?

    Karin: I can't tell.

    The gate slowly opened and they saw Genesis, with his shoulder over Katsumi, limping.

    Giro: Woah...

    Karin: Don't just stand there! Go help him!

    Giro: R-right!

    He ran over to him and picked him up.

    Katsumi: We need to head to the nearest inn ASAP.

    Karin: There's one just down that street.

    Katsumi: Well then, let's hurry.

    Karin nodded and they started to walk with Karin in the lead. They saw the inn and started to walk faster. Karin rushed in first and asked for one room. The old woman walked really slowly to the cabinets behind her and searched tediously for the keys.

    Karin: Could you make haste please?!?!?

    Inn Keeper: Slow your horses, girly. Now...where did I put those keys?

    Karin banged her head on the table and then the old woman found them.

    Inn Keeper: There you go. One room.

    Karin: Thanks!

    She swiped the keys from her hand and then rushed over to the room. Giro and Katsumi followed suit. Karin shoved in the keys and then turned them. The door unlocked and they all went in. Giro walked over to the bed and gently layed Genesis on it.

    Giro: I think he went unconscious, but he'll wake up soon enough. So....What do we do now? We have no leader, and he was supposed to be our ticket in...

    Karin: I'm thinking. I'm thinking...

    Katsumi: I can stay here and watch over him.

    Giro: We can dig in.

    Karin: They have some guards down there to, so if we run into them...

    Giro: Should we call off the mission?

    Katsumi: If you want to wait a few months for him to fully heal, then go for it.

    Karin: I guess we have no choice but to...

    A hand grabbed Karin's wrist and she turned around.

    Genesis: There is always a choice...Just don't make the wrong one...

    Karin: What are you suggesting? You want us to go on a suicide mission?

    Genesis: You won't have to because I'm coming with you guys...

    Katsumi: You can't! You'll just end up dying from internal bleeding!

    Giro: She's right. We can't risk it for one mission.

    Genesis: It's not just....any mission....

    Giro: Still...You're in no condition to be suggesting anything that dangerous.

    The room got silent for a second and then Genesis stood up.

    Genesis: See guys? Nothing to worry about. I'm fi...

    He fell on his knees and then spit out blood. Katsumi and Karin helped him up and then put him back on the bed.

    Giro: Alright...I'll go then. These Earthbenders are amateurs, so I should be able to get pretty far on my own...

    Karin: I'm coming with you. You're not going to leave me again.

    Katsumi looked at Genesis' wounds and then looked up at Karin.

    Katsumi: I'll stay here and watch him.

    Giro: Alright. Let's get cracking.

    Karin: No...We leave at midnight. We'll catch them off guard. I will be weaker during the night, so be prepared to do most of the work. Not that you'll have to because we'll be using the element of surprise.

    Giro: Isn't tonight a full moon?

    Katsumi: Yes...I'll be healing him when my strength is at its peak.

    Giro: It's settled then. We leave at midnight and you will stay here and tend to his wounds.

    Karin: Let's get some sleep before we go, so we're refreshed and ready to go.

    They all took a seat somewhere in the room and closed their eyes and, one by one, they all fell asleep.

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    Sorry there's a lot of talking here. The next post will be mostly action.

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    BaiMaoRieji

    [7832]Jul 4, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Where's Silo? lol.

    How should I know? he's your guy.

    too lazy to post. went shopping. in Pennsylvania. For 7 hours. 3 hours' drive both ways.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [7833]Jul 4, 2008
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    BaiMaoRieji wrote:

    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Where's Silo? lol.

    How should I know? he's your guy.

    too lazy to post. went shopping. in Pennsylvania. For 7 hours. 3 hours' drive both ways.



    He's not my guy, lol. You told me to make ONE post for him and so I did. I left him with a plot for you to fill out, but I guess you're choosing to ignore the post.

    Unless Silo's already left your group? I dunno.

    You haven't said his name since my one post.
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    h3r01cdud3

    [7834]Jul 4, 2008
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    Amaterasu Okami: Firebending general

    Haruhi Haetei: Waterbending master

    Hakuro Hakudoshi: Earthbending master

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    At a underground tunnel.............

    Amaterasu: We're lost.

    Hakuro: We are not lost.

    Haruhi: Then you tell us where to go smart @$$!

    Hakuro: That's easy, we go that-away!

    There were three tunnels splitting to different directions.

    Haruhi: :twitch: Which one are you talking about?

    Amaterasu: How did we get down here again? Oh yeah, WE FELL THROUGH A HOLE!

    Hakuro: Okay. Okay. I'll see which one has more vibrations. The right one has the most amount of vibrations, so we will go down that one.

    Amaterasu: The more the vibrations, the more of chance a chance we'll encounter enemies.

    They went down the right tunnel until they saw light up ahead. It turns out it was a group of bandits that were called "The Bandits".

    Bandit: We've got company lads!

    Bandits came from each side and dog-piled the team. Amaterasu sent out a wave of magma that went into every direction and did not stop until every face was melted off.

    Bandit Leader: Good job old bean, but that's not enough to put a scratch on this body of mine!

    The Leader threw Haruhi and Hakuro against huge stones and then grabbed them both and started crushing them slowly. Amaterasu turned his arm into molten magma and the leader's arm off by just grabbing it. Amaterasu kept on constantly punched him in the face until he burned the leader's face so severely that it was peeling off by the minute.

    Bandit Leader: I say!

    Amaterasu cracked his back then kicked him in the crotch.

    Bandit Leader: My word! Reginald!

    Amaterasu tore off the leader's face and burned it to ashes. Amaterasu was smiling very happy, like he liked killing people like that.

    Amaterasu: That actually felt.........rather enjoyable.

    Haruhi: Do you feel well?

    Amaterasu: Quite supercalifradilisticespialidocious, and look it's Ba Sing Se.

    Amaterasu walked over to the Ba Sing Se Gates. Hakuro got up and just gave him a blank stare.

    Hakuro: I don't think we should be around him that much anymore.

    Haruhi: I don't know if the real Amaterasu is in him anymore.

    They walked over to the gates and followed Amaterasu.

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    Comment if you like my post.

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    confucioussayhi

    [7835]Jul 4, 2008
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    Dak(White fire)

    Okay, okay, I'm a terrible liar and general lazy layabout. Here's that post I promised last night. Semi-useless filler.

    ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

    The sounds of battle had ceased. The dust had cleared. A few of the earthbender soldiers lay dead. Many more slave traders laid around them. Dak walked among the bodies looking for anything useful or worth anything in a market. He found a few gilded tags that identified each trader as part of this group. The gold on the edges would fetch some good silver and gold pieces should they reach a market.

    Dak finished combing the dead combatants. as he walked back to the group, he carried twenty-five tags, several exquisite steel daggers and a jade and ruby necklace from the woman that broke his ribs and his...

    He nearly kicked it. It was unmistakable. Nearly broken in half, the twisted remains of his katana lay under some dead trader. Dak kicked the body aside a retrieved it. He only hoped Bai Mao was as good a smith as he said.

    Dak finally returned to the group. There was a basket on the ground with the rest of the scavengings from the battle. Dak dumped his share in and found Bai Mao helping Jasmine with a wounded soldier. Dak waited until they finished and handed the destroyed sword to Bai Mao.

    "Beyond repair?" Dak asked tentatively.

    "You're joking. I thought you knew me better. Gimme a day or so. Where's the sheath?" Bai Mao answered.

    "You mean those two useless pieces of split wood? Can't find them."

    "Well, find a new one. And no rusted junk this time."

    Dak grunted and shrugged his shoulders. He walked off to find a new sheath, but was stopped by Ene.

    "Uh, hey Dak? You've got blood all over your arms..." he said a little timidly.

    Dak looked down. He hadn't noticed, but Ene was right. He had blood well past his elbows.

    Dak stared at it for a few moments and answered in a low, strange tone, "I've been covered in another man's blood for nine years..."

    And with that, he went about his business.

    Ene stared at him like he was mad*. "But, what's that supposed to mean...-" Ene cut short when he saw Bai Mao making a "drop it" gesture.

    //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

    Beware the unholy filler!

    Edited on 07/04/2008 10:14pm
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    ThatLostGuy

    [7836]Jul 5, 2008
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    Dak's final line sounded like a line from a movie
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    picaboomman

    [7837]Jul 6, 2008
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    so i want my bender to be a watebender
    name hak
    northern water tribe what else should i put?
    like a story?
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    r3173mpt10n

    [7838]Jul 6, 2008
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    Name:

    Gender:

    Age:

    Weight:

    Height:

    Hair:

    Eye Color:

    Other Noticeable Features:

    Occupation:

    Weapons:

    Armor/Clothes:

    Personality:

    History:

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

    This is the format. Just copy, paste, and fill it in. Also, if you don't have weapons, then just say like "None." or something like that.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [7839]Jul 6, 2008
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    ^^yah, there you go^^
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    Eman5805

    [7840]Jul 6, 2008
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    picaboomman wrote:
    so i want my bender to be a watebender
    name hak
    northern water tribe what else should i put?
    like a story?


    Entering the fray are we? Hopefully that'll inject some life back in here. I post for hte first time in months, then it goes kinda dead.
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