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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7741]Jun 28, 2008
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    Name: "Ridge" (True name unknown)
    Status: Fomer Fire Nation archer
    Special move: Trick arrows
    Height: 6'2"
    Age: 21
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 160
    Eyes: Amber
    Hair: Black
    Personality: Ridge is a womanizing drunk of a mercanary who seems to solve all of his problems through either alcohol or women. He mellowed out some during his stay in the Dark Pits (When it comes to alcohol), although he now seems to be even MORE of a womanizer, he is generally more relaxed and calm.

    Abilities: Ridge is a master archer, having the highest quality training from the best archers in the world. At the age of 13, he mastered archery, and by 15 had been trained in tracking, hunting, and the creation of trick arrows for battle. He can use many different kinds of arrows to fight with, and combined with his skill with the bow this makes him a particularly deadly opponent. He has exploding, poison, poison gas, "everfire" (Arrows that generate fire that can't be quelled by water), smoke, and bola arrows, as well as various chemical agent arrows such as knockout gas arrows.

    Aside from these, Ridge can move with great speed and agility, and possesses the highest, finest conditioned possible hand eye coordination and dexterity possible for a human being, as well as photographic memory.

    Weapons: Ridge uses a special, customized bow with a custom aiming device, a scope like device, and fully decked out custom features. The entire bow was created from scratch by him during his stay in the weapons room at the Dark Pits. He also uses custom arrows and create arrows on his own, showing expert craftsmanship when it comes to creating bows and arrows.

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    Double09nhalf

    [7742]Jun 28, 2008
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    Eman, it was nice to see a post from you. I enjoyed it.

    same here

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    Dafoose

    [7743]Jun 28, 2008
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    r3173mpt10n wrote:
    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    Amaterasu Okami: Firebending general

    Haruhi Haetei: Waterbending apprentice

    Hakuro Hakudoshi: Earthbending master

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    At the gate of Omashu.....................

    Brock Lee: Hello, my name is Brock Lee.

    Amaterasu: Broccoli?

    Brock Lee: That is correct!

    Amaterasu: So you're a green that I'd like to eat?!?!?

    Brock Lee: Precise....No! Let me spell it out for you!

    Amaterasu: No. Let me, B R O C K L E E.

    Brock Lee: No, Garrrr!!!!!! This always happens to me when I say my name! Say my name! When nobody's around you say baby I love you! Why the sudden change?!?!? Say my name! Say my name! Now we must fight because your being annoying because of my name.....name.....name......

    Amaterasu: What?!?!? What's with that echoing?!?!?!? That didn't even make sense!

    Brock Lee: YOU didn't make sense.......sense.......sense.....

    A tumbleweed rolled by and they gave each other blank stares.

    Amaterasu: .................Don't reject the idea that you come from a family of vegetables.

    Hakuro: I'll win this - BY A ROCKALANCHE!!! Garrrrr!!!!

    A lot of rocks came down most of them were pebbles until one that was shaped like a hand grenade came down. He threw the rock in his face.

    Amaterasu: ........

    Hakuro: That was just to get him distracted, now for the real ROCKALANCHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    A boulder the size of a boulder came rushing down and cracked the hand grenade shaped one and it smelled like a rotten egg that you can smell a mile away.

    Haruhi: .......A Rock Golem egg. When the scent gets picked up in the mothers nose it will know its baby died. Now I suggest we hit the old, dusty trail. I can see clearly now the rain has gone!!! I can see all of the obstacles in my way!!!!

    The group ran as far as they could. The rock golem mother growled and snarled. It held Brock Lee and ate him.

    Rock Golem: Bleh! Broccoli!

    It soon disabled itself and self destructed.

    Amaterasu: .................

    The team kept on running without looking back. And they sang songs.......Yeah......songs.....

    This.....is....the most random post....ever.....

    Wow. I agree. Brock lee...Rock Lee...Tell your related family member to stop stealing other peoples Ideas. Is he your brother or cousin?

    Good Post Second sign. And nice new character. Ridge is unique indeed.

    Mei-Chi, I think you're right. Gender specification is important. Where is TLG? He should be taking care of these new people.

    This is a part of my newest post, I'm not finished yet, But it's really long anyways. So it would be better if I posted it in parts anyway. Sorry if it's boring right now, but I'm preparing for everything.
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    Kela Dasman and Agua Mar: Waterbenders. Saze: Intermediate blue firebender.
    Day 32: The North Pole Days
    The apartment, Morning.

    Bitter taste of what had to be something Kela ate yesterday was present in his mouth. But he could not figure out what it was. He woke up in his bed and his eyes were slightly tired. The sun was just beginning to rise, with a crisp glow through the window, adding heat to his face. He rubbed his eyes softly once again as he woke up and shook his head rapidly. 'Waking up today is a killer...' he thought. He sat up more straightly in his bed and stared at the wall in front of him. The wall was very blank and had a simple artistic painting of a glacier in front of a sunset, which made the picture look orange. It was framed in a crystal and wood woven border that added mysticism to it as well. Kela wished for a second that he could be on that glacier. His mind went blank for a few minutes as well. After phasing out, he decided his time in bed was over.

    He stood up and stretched his arms, while yawning. He walked over to the bathroom and washed his face and his teeth. His eyes were hardly open, so he used the sensation of brushing teeth and washing his face to a pleasurable degree. He gargled the water into the sink and poured himself a glass of water to drink. With his water and clean face, he walked into the entry room and stood in front of the window. He squinted out the panoramic window to the North Pole, which was turning from orange to yellow. Then he fell asleep standing up. Realizing what he was doing, he placed the cup of water on the windowsill so that he wouldn't drop it.

    Then he realized that Mar was gone. He didn't see her as he walked back and forth through the rooms. He checked Saze's room and noticed that he was gone as well. 'Where is everybody?' He thought. He walked back into his room and put on his clothes. Afterwards, he walked to the Pai Sho table and cleared off all the pieces and put them into their holding box. He then walked over to the corner where the food was and grabbed some bread in his left hand. But with his right, he kept searching for more food. But he had forgotten that when it came to food for them, it was basically black and white. He groggily closed his eyes and sighed, then yawned, grabbing his stomach with his right hand and placing the food on the table. He turned the chair facing the fireplace around to face the table. He slouched comfortable in the chair and closed his eyes for a moment, as if he was not ready to wake up. But then he forced himself to place the food in his mouth the moment he remembered to eat.

    After he finished what was supposed to be breakfast, he walked downstairs to the lobby of the apartments, where he saw Mar at a separate counter at the receptionist's desk. It seemed that the counter was recently installed that morning. On the counter was a sheet with names and times, as well as amounts of money next to them. There was a line in front of the desk of about two or three people. He looked at the countertop lazily and closed his eyes for another second. But after he opened them, he saw the triangular sign on the desk that said, "Receptionist for Heating." His eyes became wide opened with surprise. As he rubbed his eyes, his expression became calmer. 'Clearly, this has been what Saze and Mar have been up to.' He thought.

    Kela waited in the line for heating until it was his turn. He crossed his arms and leaned against the real receptionists desk, which was tall enough for leaning and gave Mar a sarcastic look.
    "Mar, you have gone too far." He said. Mar looked up with a scared look and said, "I can explain."
    Kela sighed and wiped his mouth of crumbs from the bread he ate earlier. "You ate the rest of the fish jerky, didn't you?" Mar shyed away from this comment and said, "No, actually, I didn't quite have an appetite this morning, Saze ate it." She smiled. But then she turned around in the chair she was sitting in and stood up. She began walking toward the pipes room. She turned while walking and said, "I'll be right back, I have to Saze something." She entered the room and Kela could hear her say, "Ok Saze, we need heat on rooms 111 in five minutes, 221 in 10, and 56 in 15." But afterwards, he heard an echo from Saze saying in response, "Couldn't you give me rooms that are closer together so I don't have to run up and down these stairs?" Mar was slowly backing out the exit and said, "Well, that's pretty much everyone for this morning, just come back up to the apartment when you are done." Mar closed the door and Kela heard it close once Saze replied, "Okay..."

    Mar returned to the desk she was working at and put all the papers in a single drawer underneath the desk. Then she took the sign on the desk and turned it around so that it said "Out of Business."
    Kela raised his eyebrow at the reverse side of the sign and said, "Running on empty already?" Mar smirked and said, while she walked around the desk to stand by Kela, "No, we put "Out of Business" to keep people away, but we understand that this tactic will still have others who see us work here ask, "will you ever do it again?" and then are at liberty to say, "maybe".
    Kela scratched his head, "I don't get it." He said. The receptionist at the counter walked in through the door, carrying a large stack of papers. He said as she walked in, "Here are the newspapers. We get them now, since the people who make them are trying to start a business by selling the first newspapers here in the North Pole." She put the papers down on the raised part of the counter next to the stairway. "I'll just put them here so that people will grab them on their way up." She said to herself. Then she sat down at her usual spot and began writing names on the sheet she always worked on.

    Kela grabbed one of the newspapers and started to read it. "So they make the news in bulk now?" He asked. The receptionist replied, "Yes, one of my colleagues started his idea earlier than mine." She said. She sighed and moved papers underneath one another. She stopped what she was doing and looked directly at them. "He wanted to make it so that more news could be brought to the people of the North Pole in larger quantities. It's mostly about our region, not much about other stuff going on in other nations. " She took a pencil out and began sharpening it with a small knife. "He has the money to hire people with traveling skills to go to other nations and come back with the news." She said. "He pays for information, and appreciates contributions to the business. He is the editor, and inventor of the North Pole's printing press." She continued, "His name is Norman Shawl."
    Kela opened the newspaper and started skimming the paper from afar. The paper was called Polar Presses and had an artistic drawing of a penguin and a polar bear reading a newspaper together. Kela shuddered "Where is the news about other nations?" he asked. He wasn't particularly interested in North Pole news. "The receptionist answered, "It is in the back, they only have enough news for one page." Kela rolled up the paper and put it in his pocket. "I will read it later. Thank you."
    The receptionist smiled, "Don't thank me...thank Norman!"

    Mar exited the building with Kela. "Where are you going?" she asked. Kela took a breath of fresh air and stretched his arms in the air. "I wanted to take a walk around and buy some food, and I think I'll meet this Norman guy." He said. They started walking to the back of the apartment building to the docks. He began unfastening the boat when Mar said, "What about Saze?" She said. Kela stopped unfastening the boat, "Oh yeah..." They ran back to the lobby and waited for Saze. Mar and Kela sat in some chairs and Kela put his head back and faced the ceiling. "We really have to start planning ahead." He said. Mar laughed. "You don't even know where Norman is, do you Kela?" she asked.
    Kela closed his eyes and rested. He replied, "I'm am from a place where there is really no place to go. I don't really know where anything is specifically." He opened his eyes again and said, "But that's really what I want to know. I want to know where these places are and what they are about. That is why I left." They were quiet for a short while, and Mar said, "It wasn't because of the penguins, huh?" Kela laughed and said, "No duh." Then Kela thought for a moment. "It wouldn't hurt to get a map." He stood up and approached the receptionist. "Do you have a map?" He asked. The receptionist pulled out a map of the North Pole in detail and circled a place on the map. She drew a line to another place and drew and "X". She said, "The circle is the apartment and the X is Norman's workshop." She said. Kela took the map and said, "Thank you, may I have two please?"

    A short while later, Saze came out from the pipes room and said, "Whew, I'm finally done." He sat down in the chair Kela was sitting in. Mar got up and said to Saze, "Are you ready?" Saze looked back at Mar with a confused look. "Ready for what?" Kela started walking out the door already and said without turning around. "We were going to visit a few places and pick up some food," He stood in the doorway and turned around. "Are you coming?"

    Edited on 06/28/2008 9:48am
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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7744]Jun 28, 2008
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    You know what's absolutely insane?

    My character has the same name as a minor, completely forgotten Naruto character.

    I liked the first name so I used it, but I didn't know I had the same last name.

    O_o

    I can go back and change that, if you guys want.

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    Double09nhalf

    [7745]Jun 28, 2008
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    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    A boulder the size of a boulder came rushing down and cracked the hand grenade shaped one and it smelled like a rotten egg that you can smell a mile away.

    This is my favorite line (A boulder the size of a boulder)

    by the way Rock Lee is ten times cooler

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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7746]Jun 28, 2008
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    Double09nhalf wrote:
    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    A boulder the size of a boulder came rushing down and cracked the hand grenade shaped one and it smelled like a rotten egg that you can smell a mile away.

    This is my favorite line (A boulder the size of a boulder)

    by the way Rock Lee is ten times cooler

    I think my head asploded.

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    Dafoose

    [7747]Jun 28, 2008
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    -TheSecondSign- wrote:

    You know what's absolutely insane?

    My character has the same name as a minor, completely forgotten Naruto character.

    I liked the first name so I used it, but I didn't know I had the same last name.

    O_o

    I can go back and change that, if you guys want.

    Yeah...I was going to tell you that, because I thought you already knew, but I was surprised when you just figured it out. Dosu was a minor character that was a ninja from the village of sound, but was killed when he approached Gaara.

    DEFINETLY give him a new name. Make it a chinese name, not Japanese. Pretty please? I'm sure you are creative enough to give him a good name.

    And wtf, "A boulder the size of a boulder?" hey Herocould or something with the numbers, Redemptions family member, could you, like, get help from me or Redemption before you post stuff like that. I mean, It's hilarious and all, but...if you want to impress your story upon us and make it mean something other than a joke, than try harder. Not trying to be harsh.

    What do you guys think of Part one to the interesting plot of the North Pole days? (You're thinking 'OMG that was part one?!!' I haven't finished typing the rest of it yet, but I'm getting there. I'm really busy.

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    picaboomman

    [7748]Jun 28, 2008
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    i dont get what to do
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    Dafoose

    [7749]Jun 28, 2008
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    picaboomman wrote:
    i dont get what to do
    Ah-HA!!! You again! You are picabooman. You posted on this thread randomly a long time ago and now you are back!!!:0 ???

    Well, more seriously, you are supposed to post "stories" of a character you make up to role play in our "Avatar World." We try to stay realistic, despite other things, but its fun, and there are people who actually read what you post and comment it.

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    picaboomman

    [7750]Jun 28, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:

    picaboomman wrote:
    i dont get what to do
    Ah-HA!!! You again! You are picabooman. You posted on this thread randomly a long time ago and now you are back!!!:0 ???

    Well, more seriously, you are supposed to post "stories" of a character you make up to role play in our "Avatar World." We try to stay realistic, despite other things, but its fun, and there are people who actually read what you post and comment it.


    oh
    thanks
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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7751]Jun 28, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:
    -TheSecondSign- wrote:

    You know what's absolutely insane?

    My character has the same name as a minor, completely forgotten Naruto character.

    I liked the first name so I used it, but I didn't know I had the same last name.

    O_o

    I can go back and change that, if you guys want.

    Yeah...I was going to tell you that, because I thought you already knew, but I was surprised when you just figured it out. Dosu was a minor character that was a ninja from the village of sound, but was killed when he approached Gaara.

    DEFINETLY give him a new name. Make it a chinese name, not Japanese. Pretty please? I'm sure you are creative enough to give him a good name.

    And wtf, "A boulder the size of a boulder?" hey Herocould or something with the numbers, Redemptions family member, could you, like, get help from me or Redemption before you post stuff like that. I mean, It's hilarious and all, but...if you want to impress your story upon us and make it mean something other than a joke, than try harder. Not trying to be harsh.

    What do you guys think of Part one to the interesting plot of the North Pole days? (You're thinking 'OMG that was part one?!!' I haven't finished typing the rest of it yet, but I'm getting there. I'm really busy.

    I actually used some names from minor, less well known manga and anime that I was a fan of, almost as a tribute, but I did NOT mean to take Dosu's WHOLE name. I always thought Dosu was ballin', but at most his name was meant to be a tribute of sorts to the original character.

    NOT a copy.

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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7752]Jun 28, 2008
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    God, editing the dozen or so posts I made will be necessary but a pain in my arse.

    It will mean longer time until the next post, because that just DOESN'T sound fun at all.

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    Dafoose

    [7753]Jun 28, 2008
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    -TheSecondSign- wrote:

    God, editing the dozen or so posts I made will be necessary but a pain in my arse.

    It will mean longer time until the next post, because that just DOESN'T sound fun at all.

    You don't have to edit all your posts. Just put a small reminder or keep the name each time before you post and start posting with the new name. It'll rub in.
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    h3r01cdud3

    [7754]Jun 28, 2008
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    Amaterasu Okami: Firebending general

    Haruhi Haetei: Waterbending apprentice

    Hakuro Hakudoshi: Earthbending master

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    At the entrance of a temple......................

    Haruhi: Are you sure we should go in Ami.

    Amaterasu: It's the only way to get to the scroll.

    Haruhi: I have a bad feeling about this.

    They stepped inside the temple and saw a series of dead bodies as they stepped inside.Haruhi screamed out loud, but Hakuro covered her mouth. Amaterasu found claws laying on a body that resembled sand. They walked until they saw the end of the hall and suddenly, five sand golems appeared out of the sand in the ground and was guarding the stairs to the next floor. Amaterasu used his fire bending to turn one into glass, and Hakuro broke the glass into pieces. Haruhi used shards of ice to secure two of the golems. Hakuro jumped in and used sandbending to disable the two golems.

    Amaterasu firebended the two golems into glass, and Hakuro broke the two golems. The last one had a sword stuck inside it. It used all the sand left to create a harder armor around it. Amaterasu firebended the hardened sand around it. Haruhi used ice shards to secure the golem from moving. Amaterasu charged toward the golem and pulled out the sword. It was inscribed with the words "Black Night". He swung the sword once and sliced the golem in half. He turned the golem into glass and to finish it off he struck the face of the golem and the two pieces shattered across the floor. They ran up the steps to the next floor.

    Amaterasu: They must be guarding something.

    Haruhi: It must be the scroll.

    By the time they reached the next floor there were even less bodies that showed major series of damage. Amaterasu found claw marks on the bodies.

    Amaterasu: I think this is your kind of bending Haruhi.

    Three mud golems came out from the bodies. Haruhi waterbended her own golem. She swung her arms and the golem copied. The golem grabbed the other two golems and smashed it's head into both of them. It absorbed the weaker one but the last one swiped it's claws so it won't get absorbed.

    Haruhi: That was fairly easy.

    They ran up the steps until they found a scroll. Amaterasu grabbed the scroll and they ran out of the temple.The temple collapsed as they got outside.

    Amaterasu: Mission accomplished.

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    r3173mpt10n

    [7755]Jun 28, 2008
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    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    Amaterasu: Mission accomplished.


    Haha. This reminded me of something...
    George Bush is standing on a navy battleship with the banner stating:
    "Mission Accomplished!"
    so...
    Amaterasu = George Bush
    Haha.
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    Dafoose

    [7756]Jun 28, 2008
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    What is a sand golem?
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    r3173mpt10n

    [7757]Jun 28, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:
    What is a sand golem?

    I would like to know to.
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    h3r01cdud3

    [7758]Jun 28, 2008
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    A sand golem is basically a rock golem but instead of rocks it uses sand to move easier
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    Dafoose

    [7759]Jun 28, 2008
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    h3r01cdud3 wrote:
    A sand golem is basically a rock golem but instead of rocks it uses sand to move easier

    Okay, I think I kind of figured...What is a Golem specifically? Origin, description, detail, background, purpose, popuri...

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    -TheSecondSign-

    [7760]Jun 28, 2008
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    Day by day I'll change all my original posts out, so they eventually fit perfectly, because I'm like that.

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