| ThatLostGuy wrote: |
| I've read everything but Dafoose's long post a page back. I'll get to that later. My new job just began (weekdays: 8 to 5)... its a lot of fun |
Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
| ThatLostGuy wrote: |
| I've read everything but Dafoose's long post a page back. I'll get to that later. My new job just began (weekdays: 8 to 5)... its a lot of fun |
| BaiMaoRieji wrote: |
Here's a crude map of the World for my story. I thought it would help me stay on track, because I was getting quite confused myself. Note that I made some adjustments to the actual map. The green circle is Po-Kun. The Red Square is Ru-Kabe. The Blue line running through Ru-Kabe is the river we're following. The cirle that's just south of my added river is the Swamp, according to nick.com, and that red triangle near the FN is the island where the slaves are being kept... I think that's all... Post commences. |
Name: Dan
Status: Earth/Plant Bender
Interesting Notes: Toph's great grandson
The New avatar
Him Blaze, Aang II, and Yoshi(I'll make them later) go on a journey around the world to master all 4 elements
[/QUOTE]Golems are mythical creatures made entirely out of a specific element. A rock golem would be a roughly man-shaped stone giant. Simply put. I don't know where it originated from. [/QUOTE]
Golems 101
Name: Blaze
Age: 14
Status: firebender
Interesting Info: Zuko and Mai's great Grandson
Dan's best friend
Can Bend smoke
Name: Yoshi
Age: 14
Status: Airbender
Interesting info: Aang and Katara's Great Granddaughter
Dan's girlfriend
Name: Aang II
Status: Waterbender
Age: 10
Interesting info: Yoshi's little brother
| bag2218 wrote: |
The New avatar |
| bag2218 wrote: |
| Name: Yoshi Age: 14 Status: Airbender Interesting info: Aang and Katara's Great Granddaughter Dan's girlfriend
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Ok...pick one! We aren't going to choose for you.
logically speaking, an earth bender can't bend plants. That's a waterbenders talent. Your characters are also childish and lack a background and lack a lot lot of information.
I don't want to type another set of rules if none of you new guys are going to read them. And I don't think, "Aang and Katara's" kid is going to cut it in this RP. We won't even know if Kataang is real by the end of the series anyway.
Not to mention, you are copying Naruto, over and over. You new guys always do. Your earthbending character-is not the first hokage, ok? Let alone the Avatar. Not to mention, this is all just really sad. I'm not going to lie.
| r3173mpt10n wrote: | ||
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o ok....oooooooooooh I feel dumb I forgot this was an RPG I thought everyone was just creating benders
| Dafoose wrote: | ||
Ok...pick one! We aren't going to choose for you. logically speaking, an earth bender can't bend plants. That's a waterbenders talent. Your characters are also childish and lack a background and lack a lot lot of information. I don't want to type another set of rules if none of you new guys are going to read them. And I don't think, "Aang and Katara's" kid is going to cut it in this RP. We won't even know if Kataang is real by the end of the series anyway. |
Sorry, I feel really dumb. I comepletely forgot about the RPG part of "Avatar RPG: Create your own Bender"
| bag2218 wrote: | ||||
Sorry, I feel really dumb. I comepletely forgot about the RPG part of "Avatar RPG: Create your own Bender" |
1)There is only ONE character that can have all the elements (air, earth, fire, water), and that is Darkboy. Darkboy had already said though that his powers are weak due to some curse...But please, please, please, Darkboy, DO NOT OVERUSE YOU POWERS!
2)Every character should have a REAL NAME! If you want to keep your name a secret to the other characters in the game, then thats okay. But, don't say that you never learned your name. That will get very annyoing. And in the future, when someone's real name is figured out by another character, then begin to ALWAYS call them by their real name. (For example, the "Dark Shadow's" real name is Shujaka. Lets say my character, Willy Woo, finds out his real name. Then, from then on Willy Woo will ALWAYS call the "Dark Shadow" Shujaka, rather then still calling him the "Dark Shadow".
3)On TV.com, send me (ThatLostGuy) a short description of your character. The description should include: real name, nickname if they have one, a minor description (short, a bully, black hair, white eyes, etc.), history (is cursed, an assassin, trained as a dai-li), and they're bending power if any (water, earth, fire, air, martial arts, daggers, etc.).... When I receive the description of your character, I will add you to the list of characters....
4)In the event that two stories follow the same characters at the same time, the creators must come to a mutual agreement to change and/or delete one. If the creators cannot come to a peaceful agreement, or negotiate, it will be up to the fourm leader, ThatLostGuy, to decide which will stay and which will go...
5)If you want to have deul roles (play two characters at once) then you must message ThatLostGuy first. If he says that you are allowed to deul role then you may do say. If he says that you cannot deul role, then don't....
6)Before each post on TV.com you must write: Your characters name (Willy Woo), their bending power (earth, water, martial arts), and in the first sentence briefly say what just happened (I just escaped the fight with General Scorch)....
7)I thought this was common sense and obvious but I guess I was wrong. Well, DO NOT kill off other people's characters without asking them! Please! I will say it again. DO NOT kill off other people's character's without asking them!
You cannot bend more than one element (with the exception of Fire and Lightning) so keep it simple and down to one element. This means your character cannot bend fire and water or something-or-other.
Any other rules? Just message me and I will add it if its a good rule!
Thnx for posting the rulez Im gonna use the first guy tht I made
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Name: Bryce
Age: 14
Status: I think tht's pretty obvious. But in case ur stupid, He's a waterbender.
Eyes: Look at the picture
hair: look at the picture...again
favorite color: LOOK AT THE DAM PICTURE!!!!!
Story: Im not very good at writing bios but basically, he lived in the Northern Water Tribe, they get attacked by the fire nation, saved by the avatar, Bryce leaves the NWT to track down the avatar and help him master waterbending
I'd kinda like to see the new gaang (my own opinion)
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Siam- airbender
Mizuhior- firebender/swordsman
Master Ikasoruk- Master Swordsman
~~At the western airtemple~~
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It had been two days since they had arrived and there had been no sign of the fire nation troops. Even though this put an edge on everyone's mood there was little to complain about. In fact Siam was already getting used to sleeping in a bed only to wake up and enjoy the bathhouse. And since the temple consisted of mostly monks Siam almost had the entire women's side to herself. She also got a chance to spare with Mizuhiro who turned out to be a good challenge despite his young age. They had found a training ground that was filled with bamboo poles and decided to practice on the there. Siam had left behind her staff and for the training purposes brought a bamboo pole one . Mizuhiro also put away his sword and instead brought a wooden one. Master Ikasoruk stood on the side lines as the judge.
Eyeing both of them Master Ikasoruk brought his sword down, "Start."
To start off Mizuhiro bended a fire ball together. The flame turned from red to blue to purple. Mizuhiro smiled at the confused Siam as he shot it straight up into the sky. He then jumped into action and brought his fist forward releasing a flame that shot towards Siam. She gracefully dodged it only to find herself in the path of another. She smirked and flicked her fingers in the air dissipating the ball of flame like it was smoke. Mizuhiro released three powerful shots more then twisted around and released four more simultaneously. Siam playfully distinguished them all and laughed as the smoke gathered around her.
"Mizuhiro is that all you can do?" asked Siam.
She tried to locate him through the smoke but it was growing too thick. See was about to swing her staff around to clear the smoke when saw movement in her peripheral view. Just as Mizuhiro was about strike, Siam used her staff to vault backwards over him. As she landed she ducked low and brought her staff around to trip him. Mizuhiro saw this and jumped backward rolling off Siam's back. They both leapt apart from each other and got into their defensive positions.
"You have good strategy," said Siam.
"And you've got good reflexives but better stay on your toes," said Mizuhiro.
With the pleasantries concluded they both resumed their duel with renewed enthusiasm. Mizuhiro was releasing his fire attacks less frequently and instead used blue fire. Mizuhiro charged up a massive ball of fire and shot it at Siam. She twirled her staff in front of her to shield herself from the blast but she started to slide back as the fire ball turned to smoke and dropped her staff. As Siam lost her footing Mizuhiro jumped through the smoke with sword in hand about to strike.
"Checkmate," said Mizuhiro.
But when the smoke cleared Mizuhiro realized he had struck nothing but air; air gauntlets to be exact. In order to defend herself Siam had put her arms up and airbended gauntlets around them. As she got up she smirked. Siam immediately put her wrist together and shot her hands out causing a massive gust into Mizuhiro's face. He stumbled backward as he saw Siam charging toward him. Mizuhiro tried to bring his sword up to defend but Siam picked up her staff as she did a forward flip that kicked his sword into the ground. As she landed on her feet Siam brought her staff underneath his chin.
"Checkmate," said Siam.
"I don't think so," replied Mizuhiro looking up.
Siam followed his gaze to see his ball of flame coming down on top of her. With only a couple seconds before impact she had to do something. Siam then turned to Mizuhiro and laughed.
In his bewilderment Mizuhiro said, "Whaaa?"
In the middle of his sentence Siam had gripped his arms. She tucked in her knees and rolled backward with Mizuhiro on top and kicked him into the air and she rebounded onto her feet. Mizuhiro went flying into his own fire ball and landed on the ground in a heap.
"Siam wins," said Master Ikasoruk.
Siam brushed her clothes off and walked over the smoldering lump formerly known as Mizuhiro, "Hey that was really fun do you want to go to the library next?"
"Uuuungh," was all he could reply.
"Well if you don't want to go that's fine. See you guys later."
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I hope you thought it was funny enough. let me know.
ps notice the strategy involved
| Double09nhalf wrote: |
| I'd kinda like to see the new gaang (my own opinion) ////////////////////////////// Siam- airbender Mizuhior- firebender/swordsman Master Ikasoruk- Master Swordsman ~~At the western airtemple~~ /////////////////////////////// It had been two days since they had arrived and there had been no sign of the fire nation troops. Even though this put an edge on everyone's mood there was little to complain about. In fact Siam was already getting used to sleeping in a bed only to wake up and enjoy the bathhouse. And since the temple consisted of mostly monks Siam almost had the entire women's side to herself. She also got a chance to spare with Mizuhiro who turned out to be a good challenge despite his young age. They had found a training ground that was filled with bamboo poles and decided to practice on the there. Siam had left behind her staff and for the training purposes brought a bamboo pole one . Mizuhiro also put away his sword and instead brought a wooden one. Master Ikasoruk stood on the side lines as the judge. Eyeing both of them Master Ikasoruk brought his sword down, "Start." To start off Mizuhiro bended a fire ball together. The flame turned from red to blue to purple. Mizuhiro smiled at the confused Siam as he shot it straight up into the sky. He then jumped into action and brought his fist forward releasing a flame that shot towards Siam. She gracefully dodged it only to find herself in the path of another. She smirked and flicked her fingers in the air dissipating the ball of flame like it was smoke. Mizuhiro released three powerful shots more then twisted around and released four more simultaneously. Siam playfully distinguished them all and laughed as the smoke gathered around her. "Mizuhiro is that all you can do?" asked Siam. She tried to locate him through the smoke but it was growing too thick. See was about to swing her staff around to clear the smoke when saw movement in her peripheral view. Just as Mizuhiro was about strike, Siam used her staff to vault backwards over him. As she landed she ducked low and brought her staff around to trip him. Mizuhiro saw this and jumped backward rolling off Siam's back. They both leapt apart from each other and got into their defensive positions. "You have good strategy," said Siam. "And you've got good reflexives but better stay on your toes," said Mizuhiro. With the pleasantries concluded they both resumed their duel with renewed enthusiasm. Mizuhiro was releasing his fire attacks less frequently and instead used blue fire. Mizuhiro charged up a massive ball of fire and shot it at Siam. She twirled her staff in front of her to shield herself from the blast but she started to slide back as the fire ball turned to smoke and dropped her staff. As Siam lost her footing Mizuhiro jumped through the smoke with sword in hand about to strike. "Checkmate," said Mizuhiro. But when the smoke cleared Mizuhiro realized he had struck nothing but air; air gauntlets to be exact. In order to defend herself Siam had put her arms up and airbended gauntlets around them. As she got up she smirked. Siam immediately put her wrist together and shot her hands out causing a massive gust into Mizuhiro's face. He stumbled backward as he saw Siam charging toward him. Mizuhiro tried to bring his sword up to defend but Siam picked up her staff as she did a forward flip that kicked his sword into the ground. As she landed on her feet Siam brought her staff underneath his chin. "Checkmate," said Siam. "I don't think so," replied Mizuhiro looking up. Siam followed his gaze to see his ball of flame coming down on top of her. With only a couple seconds before impact she had to do something. Siam then turned to Mizuhiro and laughed. In his bewilderment Mizuhiro said, "Whaaa?" In the middle of his sentence Siam had gripped his arms. She tucked in her knees and rolled backward with Mizuhiro on top and kicked him into the air and she rebounded onto her feet. Mizuhiro went flying into his own fire ball and landed on the ground in a heap. "Siam wins," said Master Ikasoruk. Siam brushed her clothes off and walked over the smoldering lump formerly known as Mizuhiro, "Hey that was really fun do you want to go to the library next?" "Uuuungh," was all he could reply. "Well if you don't want to go that's fine. See you guys later." //////////////////////// I hope you thought it was funny enough. let me know. ps notice the strategy involved |
| Dafoose wrote: | ||
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So good it deserved a second posting?
When i wrote this i discovered something...
my writers block isn't with dialoge or traveling/misc but fight scenes
this one stumped me on how i should finish it. Also i try to make the fight scene um... imagionable so the readers can picure it.
The last hard part is not being repetative with action words like "A boulder the size of a boulder" (sorry but it was the best ex.) or just shooting flame balls over and over... kinda did that anyway
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