Avatar: The Last Airbender: Avatar RPG*: Create your own Bender

ThatLostGuy
[1261]Dec 11, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
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Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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I yelled, "Ahhh!" I was in pain but I managed to stand up and face Wicker and Red Death once more. Wicker laughed and said, "Red Death and I, together, WILL KILL YOU Willy!" I coughed and said, "No, no you won't!" I looked around and I saw that all of Lu's men were dead. I looked around for my 6 soldiers but I couldn't find them. I was totally surrounded by Wicker, Red Death, and at least 90 of Red Death's soldiers.
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Wicker and Red Death slowly walked towards me. I backed away and I stepped on someone who was lying on the floor. The person coughed and yelled, "Get off of me!" The person stood up and it was D. D was confused and he didn't know who to fight or what was going on. I yelled, "D. All of these men are traitors! Help me attack them!" D looked at me and said, "NO! I don't trust you Willy. D walked away from me and stood in the huge crowd of Red Death's soldiers.
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Red Death laughed and said, "Nice try! But, there is no one here who will save you or even help you!" I heard someone coughing and then a man stood up next to me. It was one of my soldiers! The soldier said, "Commander Woo. I am still loyal to you and I will fight by your side! My name is Berracore." -
I replied, "Thank you Berracore..." Berracore and I stood nex to each other and we stared at Red Death and Wicker who were ready to fight. We were still surrounded by at least 90 of Red Death's men as well as Lu and D....The fight was about to continue...
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crazyman321
[1262]Dec 11, 2006
member since: 10/21/06
level: 6
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ee(earth bender)
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after i finished talking to aang and his friends i left for the night.i checked to see if orha was alright,she was still sleeping."i wonder whats wrong with her" i thought in my head"shes been sleeping the past 2 days".i decided to keep her hidden underground as usual and i closed the hole in the side of the mountain so no one would know there were people there.
the next morning i got up and let out a big yawn.i checked orha as usual and started using earthbending to walk on the side of the mountain again.i saw that there were two people meditating(scorch and kai)i watched for a little while but left,i then saw a girl practicing firebending i watched for a while,but then she walked away towards toph.
after that i went down the mountain and caught some fish??water and animals.i went back to the cave and started a nice fire to cook the food."even though orha is sleep she still needs food" i thought,so i decided to give her some of the water,and small pieces of food with the water so she doesnt choke.i left the cave,closed the wall and started walking on the wall again and saw that guy(scorch)was done with his meditating??and a large animal flew overhead it landed and a few people got off??,i decided to jump down and i asked them"whats your names and what??are you guys??doing"?"my name is lee,im an earthbender,but im sure toph already knew"
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ThatLostGuy
[1263]Dec 11, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
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guys its "deleting" time. Dlete the posts that mock others..lol! I don't think Novoxy is here, we will just talk to him tomorrow about his new overpowered powers...
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Lord-darkboy
[1264]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 10/11/06
level: 10
rank: Holy Level 10!
posts: 1,237
Darkboy "D" (fire, water, earth, air)
i was captured by red death
as everything was going as planned i must still admit it he had a strong fist, my face was covered in blood from running against that rock wall and that punch i kept myself on a low profile he shall taste my revenge one day, i was ripped out of my thoughts when someone (willy) stept on me i coughed and yelled at him to get of me, when i was up i was confused i had absolutely no idea what was going on till willy ask me to help him, my first thoughts were yes i wanted revenge on red death for at the eastern air temple but then i rememberd something and i declined his request and went between the 90 men that were surounding them.
'someone get these handcuffs of me' i said against some soldiers
'no, your still a traitor off the fire nation' a soldier said to me i glared at him
'do not forget your rank against me corporal' i said
'i won't i'm a corporal and your a traitor' he said laughing
'no, wrong i am D headtactition of the army, trusted friend of the royal family, master of all the elements and heir of the throne when the're are no succeeders' i said ' NOW RELEASE ME'
the corporal eyes became wide and bowed to me with apologies 'send someone to get the keys he said to a soldier when the soldier moved away i turned back to the fight it seemed like a fourth man joined the game (berracore)
'don't worry willy i won't let things going out of control i had some revenge on you but red death has to pay a larger prize' i said with a voice barely higher then a wisper
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Novoxy
[1266]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 12/10/06
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I'll just make a new character if you don't like Novoxy

Name-Sparky(named for his excellent arts in electricity)

Element-Firebending

Age-15

Gender-Male

Personality-Destructive but is good within himself.

Looks-5'4" White skin. long, black and red hair. Wears long white and black coat on top of fire nation clothes.

Backround-Born to serve the fire nation but born to destroy the fire nation. As a young child he was always against the fire nation ways but he knew in order to survive he must stay with them. But now that he has grown the past years he has left Azula's side at Ba-Sin-Sa to hopefully join up with the Avatar and stop this war. He is now finishing off his electricity training and going off to find the Avatar. He is yet to find a Master firebender to train him in firebending because he is yet to even master the basics. He has mostly trained in the arts of electricity.
Edited on 12/12/2006 9:06am
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Novoxy
[1267]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 12/10/06
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Sparky(Firebender)
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-----Ba~Sin~Se-----

"Ahh!" I yell running from earth and fire benders. Wait why am i running? I thought to myself. I turn around and I blast a few bolts lightning and to follow that I slam my hands together and it shoots out a long then strip of lightning.

That should take care of them for now, I think to myself. I make a big ball of lightning behind me and blast up into the air to make a big jump, jumping over the walls of Ba-Sin-Se. I make a large orb of lightning and some fire mixed up together to make a shield. A big thud comes. I crawl out of the crater and look up. "Freedom," I say as I look at the beautiful horizon. I would stay here but I must go, I think.

-----Outside Walls of Ba~Sin~Se-----

Zuko notices that I am not at Azula's side and he goes off to find me.

I see someone jumping over the wall then charging at me. "Zuko," I say with no suprise. "What?"

"Haaa!" Zuko blasts about 10 fireballs at me. I dogde all but, 1 that Zuko controled to hit me. It knocks me down, I get up.

"Sssss huu!" I shoot 2 long links of lightning followed by 2 fire balls. He dogdes them all I follow it up with 3 large orbs of lightning and then i breathe out 2 fire balls. I start shivering. I'm running out of chakara, I think. I breath in and start dogding Zuko's attacks. 3 fire balls hit me, "just flesh wounds," I say. I reach into my coat and breath out on my claws that I got out of my coat. Electricity runs through them.

"Zuko," I say, " I'm giving you a chance to resign from the Fire Nation and join with me."

"No, if I wouldn't join with my uncle why would I join with you!"

"Fine." I come charging at him then jump over him and hit him with the dull part of the claws. Only making the electricity hit him on the spinal cord and paralyzing him. "I think you'll change your mind sooner or later." I leave him laying there for his gaurds to come get him.

"Cool," I say putting the claws back into my coat looking up at a mountain seeing sparks and fire flying everywhere. "I think I'll go there."

Edited on 12/12/2006 10:25am
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Novoxy
[1268]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 12/10/06
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Sparky(Firebender)
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-----On the Way to the Mountain Near Ba~Sin~Se-----

While I am walking to the mountain I hear footsteps. "What the hell?" I say. 3 Fire Nation Guards coming at me shooting fire balls at me. "Hey guys! Whats up?" They start to slow down. I attack seeming that I have little chakara I must conserve it. So... I jump at them take out my claws and cut them up a little. Then, I punch in the back andshoot electricity shoot down there back making them temporarly paralyzed. I kick em' while they are on the ground."Ha lemme guess Zuko was lying on the floor paralyzed and he managed to tell you to come get me?

"Yes," one of the gaurds managed to mutter.

I chuckle "Hahaha," then I walk away.

After a few hours of walking I get my chakara all charged up. I'm getting closer to the mountain. So I charge up some electricity and shot up 10 bolts of lightning. "Haha. Wonder if it will hit anyone?"

I soon get to the bottom of the mountain.

-----Climbing the Mountain-----

I get out my claws and latch on to the mountain. "This is gonna take a while." I say and turn to see if Zuko is still laying down paralyzed. He's not, he's limping his way to the mountain. "Hmmmm... I guess I'll wait for him..." I hop down and rest a little.
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Novoxy
[1269]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 12/10/06
level: 7
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Sparky(Firebender)
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-----Laying Down Sleeping...Dreaming-----

I was laying down sleeping away waiting for Zuko. So as I'm sleeping of course I'm dreaming.

"The Avatar... It's him! Wait why is he here?" I say as the Avatar looks at me and points at me.

"I'm here for you!" The Avatar says immediatly goe into the avatar state. "Fire Nation scum!"

"I'm no longer Fire Nation!"

"Liar!"

"No No Noooooo!" The Avatr shoots earth, water, wind, and fire at me.

"Ah!" I wake up. Zuko running at me now.

-----The bottom of the Mountain-----

I start running at him blasting him with large amounts of electricty. I shot about 40 only 6 hit. I make a orb of fire and lightning the size of 2 of my heads. I shoot 3 at him none hit so I turn them around 2 hit back 1 hits the side. He's still coming at me.

"He doesn't give up does he?" I say.

"I destroy you and I will catch the Avatar!" He says.

"Okay?" I say. We both blast a bunch of attacks at each other. "Alright now I'm pissed!"

I charge up a shot dogding a few of Zuko's attacks and getting hit by his attacks. I make orb size of a small boulder.

"Yaaahhh!" The large orb leaves my hands. He makes one fast and shoots his. They collide trying to push each others blast away. I start breathing fire and shooting electricity into and around the orbs. I run towards the orbs and jump over them. I shoot at least 20 bolts of lightning and fire. He gets knocked down but I loose all my chi and fall to ground shivering with no heat from the sun. Only cold rain... I lay there... Waiting hoping for someone besides the Di-lee and fire nation to find me.
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ElJorro
[1270]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 10/23/06
level: 7
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posts: 492
Here are some Airbenders I made up
Riddet. late teens-Male, Has long brown hair in a ponytail. Instead of a staff he uses two swords. Much more agressive as an airbender.
Yuki- An airbender sumo wrestler- specialty is breathing and blowing
Spina- Airbender woman late twenties- knife thrower
Salit and Sali- twin girls 12 years old, tagteam airbending
Ruit- Actually quintuplets speciality is moving really fast and switching places to confuse enemies
Retea- An airbender archer.
Cyclone- Airbender in thick armor, spins blades at high speeds to create tornados
Funar- A small sleek airbender with poison dart blow gun
Emite- young girl who attacks enemies with an airball
Aurae- Airbender Geisha
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Eman5805

[1271]Dec 12, 2006

member since: 11/05/04
level: 14
rank: Autobot
posts: 5,943

ElJorro wrote:

Here are some Airbenders I made up

Riddet. late teens-Male, Has long brown hair in a ponytail. Instead of a staff he uses two swords. Much more agressive as an airbender.

Yuki- An airbender sumo wrestler- specialty is breathing and blowing

Spina- Airbender woman late twenties- knife thrower

Salit and Sali- twin girls 12 years old, tagteam airbending

Ruit- Actually quintuplets speciality is moving really fast and switching places to confuse enemies

Retea- An airbender archer.

Cyclone- Airbender in thick armor, spins blades at high speeds to create tornados

Funar- A small sleek airbender with poison dart blow gun

Emite- young girl who attacks enemies with an airball

Aurae- Airbender Geisha

Airbender Geisha? well okay then

But anyway,??I would say I don't think you can do that but I did introduce the Luna Sedai maybe you'll get away with it...I really don't know as I'm not runnin' this ship...

Edited on 12/12/2006 1:03pm

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Lord-darkboy

[1273]Dec 12, 2006

member since: 10/11/06
level: 10
rank: Holy Level 10!
posts: 1,237

Novoxy wrote:

Eman5805 wrote:

ElJorro wrote:

Here are some Airbenders I made up

Riddet. late teens-Male, Has long brown hair in a ponytail. Instead of a staff he uses two swords. Much more agressive as an airbender.

Yuki- An airbender sumo wrestler- specialty is breathing and blowing

Spina- Airbender woman late twenties- knife thrower

Salit and Sali- twin girls 12 years old, tagteam airbending

Ruit- Actually quintuplets speciality is moving really fast and switching places to confuse enemies

Retea- An airbender archer.

Cyclone- Airbender in thick armor, spins blades at high speeds to create tornados

Funar- A small sleek airbender with poison dart blow gun

Emite- young girl who attacks enemies with an airball

Aurae- Airbender Geisha

Airbender Geisha? well okay then

But anyway, I would say I don't think you can do that but I did introduce the Luna Sedai maybe you'll get away with it...I really don't know as I'm not runnin' this ship...

Idk... that is a lot of people for air benders when there is only 1 left besides darkboy...

and fang

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ThatLostGuy
[1274]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
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Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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Berracore (one of my soldiers) stood next to me and we were about to fight Red Death and Wicker. Berracore and I were also surrounded by 90 of Red Death's men as well as Lu and D.
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Wicker immediately shot a fireball at my face and I created a "Rock Wall" around Berracore and I, dodging the fireball. Berracore leaned over the "Rock Wall" and shot fireballs at Red Death. Red Death did a funny dance in order to doge the fireballs. Wicker hopped over the "Rock Wall" and I shot a boulder at him. Direct hit! Wicker went flying and he fell to the ground.
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Red Death went after Berracore. Red Death shot two boulders at Berracore followed by a fireball. One boulder hit Berracore in the leg and the fireball hit his shoulder. Berracore fell to the ground in agony. I shot a boulder at Red Death and it hit him in the arm. Red Death spun but he stood on his feet as I sent another boulder at him which hit Red Death in his chest. Red Death fell to the floor and I heard a scream come from the crowd of at least 90 people surrounding me.
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All of a sudden, Lu came out on to the battlefield yelling, "Now that you have weakened Red Death I will kill both of you!" I was stunned and I thought, why would Lu want both Red Death and I dead? -
Lu shot a fireball at the ground and the ground near me broke and a hole formed in the ground. The hole had flames coming out of it. Lu ran at me and attempting to push me into the "Flame Pit" but I punched Lu right in the nose and Lu fell to the ground. I yelled to the 90 people surrounding me, "I have knocked out three of you and I will fight till my death! I cannot understand why all of you think I am the traitor! Red Death is the traitor, not I! But if you still wish to fight me, then bring it!"
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D stepped out of the crowd of 90 people and said, "I do not like you one bit Willy. I am here for one reason, to protect a villiage not far from here. Willy, you and Red Death have betrayed me in the past. But, I have already had my revenge on you when I attacked you back in Ba-Sing-Se. It is Red Death that I want revenge on now!" I laughed and said, "Okay. Cool!" I shot a boulder at D and D was sent to the ground. I yelled, "D, do you think I would actually trust scum like you? Hahaha NO!"
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Hisssss! A fireball hit me in the back and I fell to the ground. Wicker walked over to me and he said, "Haha good try Willy!" Wicker helped Red Death stand up as I layed on the ground, tired and hurt. Wicker continued, "Red Death. Shall I kill Willy or should we torture him in prison for the rest of his miserable life?"
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Vampdude69
[1275]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 09/25/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
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Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master
Jax has gone off to train
Jax walked away from Ami and Fang. He knew they needed their "private time".
He walked to a river and bended a rock so he could walk across it. He splashed some water on his face.
He looked into his reflection and saw the Dark Jax.
"Hello Jax," it said.
"What do you want?" Jax said.
"I've come back to claim whats mine!" it yelled.
"And what would that be?" Jax asked.
"Your body!" the spirit yelled.
The spirit went inside Jax's body and went into his brain. Jax lost control of his muscles, and his mind. The Dark Jax has taken over. His eyes were pitch black. His clothes returned to the red stiped black clothes. His swords had the insignia on it again, and he drew his swords and walked back to the camp.
He saw Ami and Fang sitting there. He walked towards them, and flung the earth underneath them, and they went flying and rolled on the ground. Jax readied his swords in a fighting stance.
He was Jax no longer.
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Merhimek
[1276]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 07/05/05
level: 17
rank: The Crazy Neighbor
posts: 207
Name: Kris
Weight:126(my real weight)
Height:5ft 3in(yes my real hight)
Age:14
Is an earthbender.
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TheGreatAvatar
[1277]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 11/07/06
level: 4
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posts: 517
red death(master of fire and earth)
(liao)
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i looked at wicker
"arrest willy woo for being a traitor of the fire nation" i said
"arrest berracore as well for being a traitor to the fire nation"
"and take off that guy's mask"i said pointing at captain lu

wicker took off the mans mask

i looked in shock

"captain lu?"i said

he only glared at me

"arrest captain lu for being a traitor of the fire nation as well"i said
"as for D...I will talk to him"

"but sir?-"wicker said

"i said i will talk to him"i replied

"yes sir"wicker said

"now go with my 90 soldiers back to the palace"i said

"Yes sir"wicker replied

all of my soldiers and wicker left with the prisoners,
leaving me face to face with D

"you saved my life"i said

"unwillingly"D immidiately replied

"you wanted revenge?"i asked
"well here it is"

i stood in place with a calm stance

"you can beat me up now"i said

"what?"D said in a startled voice

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TheGreatAvatar
[1278]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 11/07/06
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captain lu(master fire bender)
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"release me now!!"i yelled at wicker who was leading the troop of soldiers down the mountain

wicker didnt respond
i looked at the 2 guards bringing me down the mountain

"release me"i said
"i am your captain"

"not anymore"one of the men said
as they kept walking

i kept looking around for openings as the troops passed by a sleeping man
the troops ignored him,
but i kicked a rock at him(sparky)

he woke up and was about to glare at me,
but then he noticed the tremendous amount of fire nation

i signaled with my eyes to get him to move a little closer
and he did

"help me out"i whispered

he hesitated,
but then shot 2 bolts of lightning at the 2 guards who flew back instantly
he then unlocked my cuffs
as i signaled him to run back up the mountain

we both ran up the mountain with 40 fire nation soldiers chasing us
we didnt look back
we just kept running
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ThatLostGuy
[1280]Dec 12, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
level: 11
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Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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Berracore, Lu, and I were captured by Red Death's 90 men and and Wicker. Berracore, Lu, and I were chained and we had no idea who had the keys to our chains. Then all of a sudden lightning struck some of the 90 men escorting us back to the palace in Ba-Sing-Se. Soon enough, Lu and some other man (Sparky) were running full speed up the mountain. 40 of Red Death's men chased after Lu and his new friend (Sparky).
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Berracore and I were still chained up and we were still being led down the mountain. Soon enough we reached the bottom of the mountain and we were standing at the outer wall of Ba-Sing-Se. The 50 men escorting us down the mountain led us in through a small hole in the outer wall and we began our walk to Azula at the palace...
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