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    ThatLostGuy

    [1222]Dec 11, 2006
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    Nickpick wrote:

    Lucas (Firebender)
    ----------------------------

    *Lucas Breaks Down A Door And Sees All The People Hiding All Together*

    Lucas: Where Is He

    *People Shake There Head (No)*

    Lucas: I Said Where Is He

    *They Keep Shaking There Head No*

    Lucas: So Be It

    *Lucas Walks Outside And Burns The Building They Are In Down*

    Lucas: AGHHHHHH

    *Lucas Wakes Up*

    Lucas: Again Not Again

    *Lucas Gets Up And Gets Dress And Walks Outside And Sees The Big Fire Nation Flag*

    Lucas: Damn You

    *Lucas Leaves And Enters The Woods*


    You don't have to write like that...you can say...Lucas said, "AGHHH!" People screamed as I burned their building down...also write your name and what bending power you have before each post...
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1223]Dec 11, 2006
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    Spike (Archer)
    -
    Bulldozer said, "So, now what?" I replied, "The mountains near Ba-Sing-Se is our next destination!" Buldozer walked to the secret staircase and he touched his hand to it. The door secret door opened due to the fact that Bulldozer has a War Spirit inside his body. Mayhem, Bulldozer, and I walked down the staircase and we were soon at the bottom of the mountain.
    -
    The door slid open and I saw three people in the distance. I recognized them (Fang, Jax, and Ami). The three of us began to walk to them and along the way we saw a whole bunch of dead bandits. We snuck up on the three people and all three of them looked scarred and tired. One of the three was even sleeping (Fang). Without them noticing me I sncuk up on the three people.
    -
    Mayhem charged and one of the three (Jax) instantly turned around but he was clotheslined in the throat by Mayhem. Jax blacked out. The girl (Ami) stood up and shot some water at us. Bulldozer jumped in front of Mayhem and I, and he was unaffected by the water. Bulldozer picked Ami up and he smashed her into the ground. He kicked her in the stomach and we handcuffed her hands behind her back. We then handcuffed Jax and Fang with teh metal handcuffs. -
    The three people were all yelling at us and they were all so tired. Fang is an Air Bender but he was so tired that he couldn't even blow air at us with his mouth. I laughed and said to the three people, "Hahaha that was an easy fight!" I took the money that the three people had from their pockets. I continued, "Wow! Thats a lot of money! Thank you!" Bulldozer moved the three people into a nearby cave. Bulldozer then punched the side of the cave with all his might and the cave collapsed. Mayhem said, "Well, if they survive that then I have respect for those 3 people! Hahaha!" I laughed and said, "Yes. They are probably alive but they is no way they can escape a dark cave with no food while they are handcuffed..."
    -
    I continued, "Well, lets start walking. Hopefully we will be at the mountains near Ba-Sing-Se soon..."

    Edited on 12/11/2006 1:10pm
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    Lord-darkboy

    [1224]Dec 11, 2006
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    Darkboy "D" (fire, water, earth, air)


    i was still meditating on thr mauntains top


    just as i sat there unmoveble, still the snow was becoming cold when nightfall came i decided to move on my mind was on peace again and i took a map from my bag.

    'lets see i'm right here and there 4 villages here, here, here and here, well seems like this one is the closest to me' i said and i went to the village the villagers were peacefully in harmony with each other everyone knew each other as i entered the village and went to the inn 'a room for 1 person pls' i asked and i've gotten my key it was far too early to sleep so i walked through the village i was suprised how nice they were even against strangers everywhere where i went to i've got a hi, good evening or just a friendly smile but the harmony was broken when some men ran into the village

    'HELP, HELP' they shouted while running throught the villages i saw some of them where burned but still i hope what i thought wasn't real when the men were calmed they finally spoked

    'f-f-firenation destroyed o-our village w-were the only survivors' the man said

    'what is the firenation doing in these mauntains'i thought ' whatever it is it won't be good' i went to the men and said 'don't worry as long i am here i will do my best to protect you' the villigars looked at me and thanked me they ask me if they could do something for me and i said 'yes, yes you can2 things actually 1. you will awake me when the fire nation is here and 2.' i sighted first' do not abandon me when i use firebending myself' i could see the villigars were shocked with the fire bending news and they had a smal talk outside the house and they agreed i could stay as long as i wanted if i protected them i was very thankfully for this news

    'it has becommen late should you go to sleep' one of the villigars said

    i looked at the sky and felt sleep was overpowering me i went back to the inn and after a delicious meal i went to bed hoping i could sleep before the firenation invaded this village.

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    AEtherBlue

    [1225]Dec 11, 2006
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    Nickpick wrote:

    Lucas (Firebender)
    ----------------------------

    *Lucas Breaks Down A Door And Sees All The People Hiding All Together*

    Lucas: Where Is He

    *People Shake There Head (No)*

    Lucas: I Said Where Is He

    *They Keep Shaking There Head No*

    Lucas: So Be It

    *Lucas Walks Outside And Burns The Building They Are In Down*

    Lucas: AGHHHHHH

    *Lucas Wakes Up*

    Lucas: Again Not Again

    *Lucas Gets Up And Gets Dress And Walks Outside And Sees The Big Fire Nation Flag*

    Lucas: Damn You

    *Lucas Leaves And Enters The Woods*



    NickPick, could you please write in standard for us? it gets really complicated in script.
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    Nickpick

    [1226]Dec 11, 2006
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    thanks for the help but i will write like i write in other rpg's

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1227]Dec 11, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
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    red death(master of fire and earth)
    (liao)
    ---------------------------------------
    i woke up the next morning and all my soldiers were awake ravaging the burnt village for food
    they found alot of food,
    and we had a big breakfast

    "i still dont know where that damn guy lee went"i said

    i walked to the extra food and brought them to willy woo's camp
    i woke up willy woo and gave him the food
    he still had that strange look?? in his eyes
    but i gave him the food and walked away

    "alright guys"i said to my soldiers
    "were taking the next village"

    "yes sir"they replied

    all the soldiers got in poition and marched up the mountain to take the next village
    but we were halted half way through

    "looks like you got your job"someone said
    i looked to my side and saw it was D

    "D"i said to myself

    "dont bother these villages"D said

    "hahaha"i laughed
    "youre a friend of azula i thought"
    "but yet..youre halting her men to take a village for the fire nation?"

    "yes-"D replied

    "get out of my way"i interrupted
    "this village is mines"i said
    "and theres nothing you can do to stop me"

    D walked in front of me"
    "oh yes i can stop you"D said in a fighting stance

    "youre a traitor to the fire nation"i said

    but then D didnt reply and charged straight at me
    i quickly rose a rock wall from the ground,
    striking D in the face

    D got up with a bloody nose but then enflamed his hands
    he shot numerous fireballs at me,
    which i blocked and dodged with no problem

    then D created a large fire whip
    and whipped it at the snow in front of me
    making the snow splash everywhere

    when i looked away from the snow,
    D charged and kicked me with a flaming kick

    I fell to the ground
    but quickly recovered

    i then pnched D in the face

    as he fell to the ground,
    willy woo and his army arrived

    i noticed willy woo had a new soldier with a red mohawk

    the man with the red mohawk ran towards D and cuffed him
    "hey"the red mohawked man said to me
    "you need this guy cuffed?"

    "yes i do"i said
    "hes a traitor to the fire nation"

    "by the way"the red mohawked man said
    "im wicker"

    "im Liao"i replied

    then my soldiers, willys soldiers, willy woo and i marched up the mountain to the next village

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1229]Dec 11, 2006
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    Captain Lu(fire bender)
    ------------------------
    (taking place when Red death and willy woo wake up on the mountains of ba sing se)
    I was given a troop of 50 elite men by strife, my master
    these men were master warriors
    some of them were not benders,
    while some were earth, and fire benders

    they were under my command

    "Men!!"i yelled
    "I am your new Commander"
    "we are on a mission to take out Lieutenant Liao and Commander Woo and anyone who is in our path"
    "Now follow me!!"

    "Yes sir"they responded

    we marched out of the hq and were headed to the palace
    i showed them a warehouse where they could wait while i searched for the whereabouts of the 2 men

    i reached the palace and found hat Lieutenant Liao had just sent a note to Azula requesting 99 of the new Uniforms from the mountains of ba sing se

    "so Liao has made it to the mountains of ba sing se huh?"i said to myself
    "and...what about woo?..."

    i searched for any sign of the whereabouts of willy woo,
    but as i looked closer to the note requesting uniforms,
    i saw that Liao had met up with Willy woo on the mountains

    "haha"i laughed
    "theyre together"i said

    i left the palace and went off to find my men
    i reached the warehouse and got my men back together

    "Lieutenant Liao and commander woo are at the mountains of ba sing se"i said to my men
    "with about 99 men"
    "maybe more or maybe less"
    "so be ready"i said

    we marched towards the mountains of ba sing se,
    but as we were about to climb,
    we noticed a cave in

    "this is no natural disaster"i said to my men
    "earthbenders, clear it out"

    "Yes sir"the earthbenders yelled

    they cleared out the cave in and we saw 3 people
    (jak,fang,ami)
    they were tied up

    "what the hell?"i said to myself

    i burned the ropes and they were let free
    one of the quick ones(fang) said thank you and they left

    (takes place while red death and willy woo are marching to the next village)

    but we continued our climb over the mountains of ba sing se
    we reached the top, and noticed a burnt down village
    then we kept walking, and eventually, we saw lieutenant liao and commander woo

    my men and i were wearing special uniforms that covered our masks

    "So, looks like there's lieutenant liao and commander woo"i said

    "who are you?"Liao asked

    "that is not important..."i said
    "o wait...is that wicker too?"

    "who are you?"wicker asked

    "lets just say...im your killer"i said
    "CHARGE!!"i yelled at my men

    they charged and a giant fight erupted between my men and
    Lieutenant Liao and Willy Woo's men
    Edited on 12/11/2006 6:34pm
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    vegnegun

    [1230]Dec 11, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Firebender)


    Scorch had begun to rest for the night

    Scorch woke up in the morning, Rin was snuggling him like a giant stuffed platapuss bear. Scorch sat up and watched her sleep for a few minutes before finally poking at her head. "Hey, sleepy head, wake up."

    Her eyes flickered open, "just five more minutes Scorch."

    "I don't think so," said Scorch as he lifted her head up, "we only have five more days to train before we have to leave and get Katara. Now... get up Rin." He pushed her all the way up into an upright position and she rubbed her eyes.

    "What are you going to teach me today?" she asked.

    "Well, today," said Scorch, "I want to get the whole Pyro thing out of the way ASAP."

    "So, why'd you wake me up?" asked Rin.

    "You need to go over the basics," said Scorch, "I bet you are a little tired from yesterday."

    "Oh no," said Rin, "really?"

    "Hey, don't be sarcastic with me," said Scorch, "I'm doing this for you, and you only." Scorch got up and felt fully energized. "Now, where's Kai?" He walked out of the chamber and heard a wolf howl in the distance, but ignored it.

    "Good luck Scorch!" called Rin (Rin, tell about this). Scorch looked back and waved at Rin whom was, what seemed to be, waving at her. Scorch walked to the mountain Kai had been sitting at earlier and flew up it, not bothering taking the stairs. He saw Kai meditating on the mountain and he opened his eyes.

    "Ah, Scorch," said Kai, "I've been waiting for you. Where's your friend?"

    "Not sure," said Scorch, "can we please start?"

    "Anxious are we?" asked Kai as he stood over Scorch, "I don't blame you. Pyro is quiet the hand full by the looks of it. Please, sit down." Scorch sat down and waited for Kai's next instruction. "Now, Pyro, like all animals, must drink. But this spirit hasn't been drinking water. He's been drinking your chakra, making you weak and him stronger."

    Scorch nodded, "so, what can I do to stop him from, er, drinking?"

    "The answer is quiet simple," said Kai, "you must open the chakra pools he drinks from and allow them to flow to others. Earth, deals with survival, blocked by fear. Water, deals with pleasure, blocked by guilt, Fire deals with willpower, blocked by shame. Heart deals with love, blocked by grief. Sound, deals with truth, blocked by lies. Light deals with insight, blocked by illusion. And finally, thought, deals with pure cosmic energy and blocked by earthly attachment. Pyro only feeds off of three of these. He??feeds off the earth, water, fire, and light chakras. You Scorch must??release the blocks of each of these??chakras, which will not be easily done."

    "I understand," said Scorch.

    Kai nodded, "good. The first three will be easy. But getting to the light chakra will be very difficult to reach, it being at the neck of the body, and the earth being at the bottom of the spine. We will start with the earth chakra and work our way from there."

    "Okay," said Scorch.

    Kai sat down next??to Scorch, "Now, think of everything that makes you scared. Visualize them." Scorch closed his eyes and saw the images of the Fire Nation taking over the world. He saw Rin's dead body on the ground, and finally he stood face to face with himself that slowly turned into Pyro and breathed fire all over Scorch. Scorch began to yell in pain. "Scorch, its not real, let it go!" Scorch stopped and shook it off and felt a sense of relief. "Good," said Kai, "you have just opened the earth chakra."

    "Noooooooo!" exclaimed Pyro in Scorch's head, "I.... will.... not.... be.... denied!"

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1231]Dec 11, 2006
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    Red death(master of fire and earth)
    (liao)
    --------------------------------------
    we were marching up the mountain when a mysterious man attacked us with 50 other elite soldiers

    i engaged in combat with a giant soldier with a hammer
    he seemed to be a earthbender

    i looked around and saw willy woo fighting the mysterious man
    and wicker was fighting a great martial artist

    i kicked constant fireballs at the man repeatedly which seemed to be throwing him off course
    i charged,
    but when i jumped and was about to attack him,

    he punched me in the guts in mid air

    i fell to the ground in pain,
    but recovered quickly and shot a quick bolt of lightning staright at the man

    it hit the man in his shoulder with hard contact,
    pushing the man of the ground, making him swerve one way,
    and he fell to the ground flat on his face

    he was unconcious

    i then ran towards the mysterious man willy woo was fighting
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    Eman5805

    [1232]Dec 11, 2006
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    Is there ANYONE currently in Ba Sing Se save for Indra (The Stranger)?
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    Eman5805

    [1234]Dec 11, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    Eman5805 wrote:
    Is there ANYONE currently in Ba Sing Se save for Indra (The Stranger)?

    well if you count people in the mountains of ba sing se.....
    theres?? zeth
    katara
    fang
    ami
    jak
    liao(red death) and his 98 men
    captain lu and his 50 men
    commander willy woo and his 7 men
    3 villages on the mountains
    and D
    spike
    mayhem
    ??and bulldozer

    What about in the city itself?

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1237]Dec 11, 2006
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    Novoxy wrote:
    General Novoxy Lee (Master Firebender)
    --------------------------------------------------------
    -----Underground EN Base Prison Cell-----

    "Whew..." I said with relief."That was hard and long... Now time to breakout"

    I got up and blew down the door with a big ball of electricity."Rahh!" I yelled. As a whole squad of Earth Nation Warriors come running at me. I spin with fire coming out one hand and electricity out the other. "Hu hu ha! They can't take me now!" I yell to myself.

    I keep running through the tunnels as they close in. Earth Benders running under the ground shooting earth segments up at me. One hits me. "Son of a.... now I'm mad... Rahhh!" I yell shooting down electricity down through the dirt burning them and paralyze them causing them to bury themselves alive. "Ha Dead... 23... here come." I pick them off 2 by 2. "Never mind... Dead...39... I'm on a roll!!" I run through seeing a little crack of light through the roof. "Ha! I stand with 1 hand going from side and the other blasting through the roof. Finally...


    -----Outside of the EN Underground Base-----

    " No..." I looks straight in front of him and there lies..." Ba-Sin-Sa" I starts to run towards the city to tell Azula about the base when I notice a sign with my face on it reads.

    WANTED!

    Wanted for abandoning
    his troops in war.
    Reward-10,000 GPs

    "10,000? Thats it?" I say. Plans have changed i guess... I see someone blast fire through a wall. "The old man from before jumps out i see Zuko... That means the old man is... Iroh... And Zuko is fighting Azula. It has to be.

    I charge up some chakra and blast off...

    (this is before finalle)



    no..everything going on is after the finale...so iroh is in jail and zuko is with azula
    follow the plot with everyone else or well all be confused
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    Eman5805

    [1239]Dec 11, 2006
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    Novoxy wrote:
    Eman5805 wrote:

    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    Eman5805 wrote:
    Is there ANYONE currently in Ba Sing Se save for Indra (The Stranger)?

    well if you count people in the mountains of ba sing se.....
    theres zeth
    katara
    fang
    ami
    jak
    liao(red death) and his 98 men
    captain lu and his 50 men
    commander willy woo and his 7 men
    3 villages on the mountains
    and D
    spike
    mayhem
    and bulldozer

    What about in the city itself?

    going to ba sin sa

    My character is already there, just wonder who I can have her interact with...

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