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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1181]Dec 9, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
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    Red death(master of fire and earth)
    (lao)
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    "You let the prisoners get away?!"i screamed at my soldiers
    "wu xei is gunna have to wait"
    "i want those prisoners back under my custody"
    "and i want them back now!"i ordered

    "yes sir"my soldiers replied

    ---10 minutes later-----

    "sir..we found a hole in the ground close to wu xei village sir"i a soldier reported

    "hmm"i replied
    "well..what are you waiting for?"
    "follow the hole"i yelled

    we all entered the tunnel and walked along until we approached through the serpents past
    once we got out,
    i made the tunnel crumble with my earthbending

    we all looked foward and saw the serpent

    "hahaha"i yelled
    "theyre trying to fight the serpent?"
    "take them down" i yelled at my soldiers

    i ordered 20 soldiers to wait at the entrance of the serpents pass
    and 30 more soldiers to wait in an ambush spot on the other side incase the prisoners made it across

    the rest of the 50 soldiers charged and started firing fire balls at the resitance leader and lee

    "surrender or suffer"i yelled to them

    "never!!"lee yelled back

    then they went underwater
    i told my men to spread out around the broken parts of the serpents pass
    and to stay away from the ledges

    then the serpent floated above the water surface with a hole in its head and lee jumped out

    "hmph...he thinks he killed it"i said to myself

    all of a sudden lee spotted all the soldiers surrounding him and the resistance leader
    "oh damn"lee said

    i grinned
    and sent an immidiate shock of lightning at him
    hitting him square in the chest
    sending him flying across to the other side of the pass
    with his hooked swords flying back at me

    i caught the swords while my fn soldiers on the other side of the pass
    cuffed lee once again
    they then knocked him out cold

    the resistance leader tried to escape,
    but my 30 ambush soldiers immidiately caught him with a flood of metal cuffs

    "were going back to ba sing se to get these people in a proper prison cell first"i said to my soldiers
    "lets go"

    we managed to make it aross the serpants pass and back to ba sing se
    we entered the palace

    "azula, we have caught two prisoners"
    "one goes by the name of lee"
    "and the other is a resistance leader of xu wei village"i said

    "good"azula said

    azula then signaled her guards to bring the men into their jail cells
    Edited on 12/09/2006 8:50pm
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    avatarforte

    [1185]Dec 9, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
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    Fang-Air-bender

    -Doing Basic Training with Ami-

    I felt the wind flow around me, trusting it over all my senses. I could tell where Ami was, seeing her through the wind. I could feel the water she sent at me coming. And I blocked it perfectly.

    "Wow, you can block without seeing it coming. That's amazing." Ami said. I let the breath I was holding out and smiled at her.

    "I had a pretty good idea how to do it already. I just never really tried to do it before. And you Ami, are truly amazing. I've never seen a water-bender who was that quick on her feet". She blushed, knowing that I was referring to earlier when she had sidestepped me and knocked me on my behind.

    "Thank. How do you think the others are doing?" I looked up to the cliff top, then to my wings.

    "Well, its going to take about another 3 days to repair my wings. Till then, we're grounded."

    "What about food? How are we going to get any?" I sighed and took a smell of the air and turned toward a small cave. A wild boar came running out and charged me. I called my sword to me using my air-bending and sidestepped its charge.

    "Ami, stop its movement!: I yelled to her. She sent water from the nearby pool at its feet, freezing them to the ground. The boar couldn't move and I took the chance. I struck it once, hitting it in a vital place that caused it to drop instantly. It didnt even feel the pain. "There we go, this guy will last us at least 3 days. As for plants, there was a bunch of bushes aways back, so thats covered too." I picked up the boar with my airbending and set it aside. I then went back to practice my air-bending. Ami went back to her training too. A few hours later, we finished and I got ready to cook the boar. Ami, however, asked to do it and after we ate, I was stuffed.

    "So, how was it?" she asked.

    "Phew, not even I can cook that good and I've had to do it for years. You truly are amazing Ami". I gave her a little kiss on the forehead. "Now then, I'm going to work on my wings for a while, then we should rest. Tomorrow, we are going to do something really important".

    "And what would that be?" she asked, putting the boar leftover in a case of ice.

    "Learning how to tandem-battle", I said, grinning.
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    AEtherBlue

    [1188]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 5
    • rank: Caveman Lawyer
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    Orha - EarthBender
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Had just been presented a proposition by Azula.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "Well? What do you say? I could use your unique talents, Orha of the Blood" She said to me.

    "Azula, we have caught two prisoners. One goes by the name of lee, and the other is a resistance leader of xu wei village" a voice came from the hall to the left, Azula turned her head and walked down to greet him, the guard at the door started to close the door, looking down the hall at the newly captured.

    I quietly ran up and head-butted him, he fel to the ground and I kicked his head. He fell uncontiouse to the ground. I looked down the hall. But they seemed not to notice. I ran up behind this one guy, I jumped and landed a drop kick to him, he flung and hit the paralel wall. the soldiers, all in a circle looked up at me, I ran over to Azula and went right up to her face and sneered, "Hey, I thought about your idea. But I think your full of **** I kicked out her leg and she fell, a dai-li attacked me from behind with a boulder, I ducked it out and jumped up and planed my knees into his shoulders, I looked down at him as he looked up, "Hey," I smiled at him and grabbed his head, I launed myself up and trew him against a wall, I put my hand up to bend a brick into him, a sharp pain went through me, I fell, one knee to the ground. I got back up and I looked over to the Fire nation soldiers, I lifted my hands and a rock wall came up. I pushed out my hands and the wall slid towards them.

    "Damn, I'm getting tired of this." I said. I decided to bend out spikes on the wall and crush the lot, I gripped my fingers together but another sharp pain. I cried out in pain and the rock wall stoped sliding. I looked over at the people stuck on the floor and ran over to them. I quickly picked up one by the shirt.

    "What about me?" The seccond person asked. I gripped his hair and looked at him in the eye. I was more upset than anything I had ever been in my life,

    "What is wrong with me? I can't do anything at all! God, I should kill you!" I pulled him up and pulled back my fist,

    Crack.

    S pike of unbearabe pain shot through my brain. I let him go and gripped my head, "Arghh!" I yelled. I kicked him down and ran for it out the door with a person on my shoulder. "What is wrong with me?" I asked myself. I ran out and down to the only place I thought was normal, wich wasent.

    I ran down and saught the place I had woken up. I thought that people whouldent find me there too easily. I made it back and we sat down to rest. I looked around, I couldent get a clear view, everything was going strange again. I looked over to the man and I asked, "What's your name?"

    "I'm lee," He said. Still unable to look cearly i started looking at random things. My eyes jutted around and I tried to stay focused but it was impossible.

    "Good," I said, I fell unconciuos.
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    Lord-darkboy

    [1189]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 10/11/06
    • level: 10
    • rank: Holy Level 10!
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    vegnegun wrote:

    Rin-tori wrote:
    Holy crap, I have a headache. And waaaaaaaayyy too much happened in the short time I was gone. I'm going to be busy for most of tomorrow, so don't wait up for me. And another thing, Rin has been captured/kidnapped a total of three times: First in the tournament, then by Jax, and now by Zeth. All this kidnapping reminds me of Samurai Champloo and Fuu for some reason.

    Uh, Rin, I don't mean it to seem that u weren't good enough to be captued this time, but you aren't??water bender are you? And Ami hasn't been kidnapped nor is she a teacher. So, that can only leave one person... Not Rin, Ami, or Toph.

    Now, who is the only female left at the temple, aside from Fang? (its a joke Fang)

    its katara being kidnapped again jeezus she really needs to be more carefull

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    crazyman321

    [1190]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 10/21/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 4,264

    Lee(earthbender)

    somewhere with ohra

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    "well that was akward"I said as??I sat down next to Ohra."Now??I have to find a way to get back to Ba Sing Se??and break xen out".starts looking at ohra,"I wonder who this is, and why did she help me".I start trying to wake her up again but??she wont wake up."Now what am i supposed to do,I dont even know where I am"i said in a depressed voice."while shes sleepin i'll watch for intruders".i run up the wall and use earthbending to stay up there if anyone comes.

    Edited on 12/10/2006 10:17am
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    djdfire

    [1191]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 12/04/06
    • level: 10
    • rank: Holy Level 10!
    • posts: 983

    Ariel (waterbender). Going into the king's palace.

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    The two girls walked into the palace when all of sudden, a blue fireball flies through the air towards Ariel. Ariel takes out here fans and quickly knocks out the fireball, runnig towrds the person who threw it. Suddenly another girl jumps from the ceiling, shooting the fireballs everywhere. Ariel runs towards the wall, dodging the fireballs in the process, and does a backflip off the wall, throwng her fan at the girl. The girltries to burn the fan but it didn't work as her arm got slashed at by the mystical object. Ariel then starts to waterbend the water in the girl's body, causing water to comm from the wound and wrap around??the girl's??arm.??When Jasmine saw this she raced towards Ariel and pleaded her to stop. Bewildered, Ariel stopped her attack and looked at her new friend, wondering why she wanted to spare this firebender.

    " Why in the hell do you wanna save her???!!!", yelled a very angry and confused Ariel.

    "Remember when I said was the youngest daughter. Well, that girl over there is my sister.", Jasmine replied.

    "Who in the hell??is she supposed to be anyway? A??warrior or something?", the girl asked while holding her arm to keep it??from??bleeding.

    "My name is Ariel and I'm a??master waterbender. Who are??you supposed to be? A spoiled rat's ass brat or something?", Ariel asked back spitefully.

    "Princess Kira for your information. And??nice comeback Ariel, I might use that one myself.", Kira laughed.

    "You mean you're not mad at me or something?", Ariel asked confused.

    "Naw. Besides you've got mad combat skills. Can't wait to see what your like in a??war like battle.", Kira stated??while clutching her arm her arm harder. Jasmine rushed to her older sister's aid, healing her with little bit of water.

    "Hey since your her wanna come to our little party tonight? I promise ya that junk is gonna be raw. Trust me", Kira asked.

    " Sure", Ariel answered.??

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    (At the party)

    The three girls were at the party, having fun and moving about. Ariel told people about the hardships of her life on the ocean and ended up getting praised for being such a survivor on one the Earth's deadliest weapons. Then a man arrived from the woods, all burnt up. The people then looked at each other with fear in their eyes, hoping he wouldn't say one little word.

    "FIREBENDERS!!!!!!!", the man screeched as he fell to the ground fainting. The people then scattered to get into fighting positions. The three girls ran towards the palace.

    "Remeber when I said that I couldn't wait to see you in a war-like battle? Well nows the time cause??everyone??that's a bender or warrior??this village??fights including us.",Kira said getting ready for battle.

    " I like this village then", Ariel stated happily as she got ready to fight to.

    The girls then ran outside the palace and towards their hidingspot. In a tree that's almost impossible to burn. Ariel adjudsted the huge water sack that Jasmine gave her so that she she can bend and still be able to do hand yo hand combat also. The people in the village waited quietly until the saw hundreds of fireballs coming through the trees and the soldiers arriving in their village following three girls in front of them. Ariel gasped siliently as she recongnized the three girls. One girl then raised her hand and shot a blue fireball at the palace, and that's when the entire village jumped off the tree and attacked the Fire Nation soldiers.


    As the fight started Kira, Ariel, and Jasmine raced towards the other three girls in charge of this army. Jasmine started to fight the girl who??very agile and acrobatic while Kira??attacked the girl who looked depressed and threw projectiles everywhere. Leaving Ariel with the one who shot out the blue fireballs. Ariel attacked her with a large water whip driving the girl back. The girl then started to charge up her blue flame??but was automaticlly pushed back some more by a huge wave. Ariel the made the wave become a mist and started attack the other girl with water whips frm inside the mist. Then as she was about to dekiver the final blow, she someone scream and it soundeed a lot like Jasmine.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1193]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
    • level: 4
    • rank: Thighmaster
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    red death(master of fire and earth)(lao)
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    i woke up afer azula ordered her guards to splash water on me

    "what the hell happened?"i asked one of the guards

    "some one knocked you out"he replied

    i stared at him
    "who?"i asked

    "orha"i replied
    "shes dangerous-"the soldier said

    "and shes mines"i interrupted
    "gather the guards-"

    the soldier cut me off
    "and she left with that guy named lee"he said

    i smiled
    "even better"

    as my guads were gathered up,
    we walked through ba sing se
    asking people if they saw
    lee or orha

    the civilians' cooperation led us no further than the inner walls of ba sing se

    "well this is just great" i said
    "where the hell did they go?"

    i sent 40 soldiers to walk around the inner wall of ba sing se to see if they were hiding there
    and i sent 40 more soldiers to spread out to see if they could spot orha and lee
    i stayed at the entrance of the inner wall with my 20 soldiers left
    Edited on 12/10/2006 10:30am
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    Rin-tori

    [1198]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 08/26/06
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    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 377
    Rin (Firebender)

    Scorch was fighting with Zeth.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    It all happened so suddenly. First Rin heard the sounds of lightning, obviously directed towards Scorch. Then she heard Katara join the fight, but Zeth struck Scorch down before he could assist her.

    Then, Katara was struck. She heard her scream and fall. That???s when Rin came out of hiding.

    ???Put her down, Zeth! She???s not your target!???

    ???As long as I have a bargaining chip, I???ll get my target anyway.??? Zeth said. He shot a bolt of lightning at her. Rin tried to block it with a wave of fire but was struck and fell to the ground. She managed to get back up again and charged at him with blasts of fire. Zeth evaded her attacks as if they were nothing, and quickly shot more lightning at her. Rin ran from the ruthless attacks, and finally retaliated. She built up all her chi and charged at him with a stream of fire, and when she got close enough, she breathed fire and he fell to the ground with an unconscious Katara. She raced over to him and cornered him in a fighting stance, ready to strike. ???I surrender. You can take the girl. I???m finished here.??? He muttered.

    Rin looked back between a severely injured Scorch and an unconscious Katara. When Zeth noticed she let her guard down, he stood up and launched a ruthless flurry of lightning at her. Rin was struck and fell once again, and Zeth left with Katara. After a few minutes of frantically trying to stand, Rin limped over to Scorch. She was in a bad state, but he was almost dead. Then she noticed the note Zeth left. She pocketed it and tried to find any fractured bones on Scorch, but much to her relief he was mostly intact.

    ???Rin???I???I can???t move?????? Scorch said. He was obviously badly hurt even without broken bones.

    ???It???s probably because your chi has been weakened from the lightning. I don???t think you???re bleeding that much???mostly superficial wounds. Nothing internal except your bending being thrown out of whack. He got me too.??? Rin said.

    Her body ached all over, but mostly where Zeth struck her. Once in the back and once in the arm. Nothing completely vital was struck, much to her relief. ???We???ll have to stay at the temple until Ami and Fang come back. It???s useless to try and follow Zeth now.??? She muttered.

    ???Damnit???next time, I???ll be sure to kick Zeth???s ass?????? Scorch said. He was still in pain, but hopefully Ami could help him.

    ???I???m going to find the others. Hopefully one of Aang???s friends can help us???and I have to tell him???well???what happened to Katara?????? Rin said, reluctantly. She tried to stand again, but it hurt too much. ???Maybe I should stay here for now?????? She convinced herself.

    She waited by Scorch???s side.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1199]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
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    Spike (Archer)

    I said, "Lets go Avatar hunting! Hahahaha!" All of a sudden I saw Zeth running with an unconscious Katar in his hands. I stepped in his path and said, "Well hi there. Where are you going?" Zeth quickly said, "To the mountains, near Ba-Sing-Se. I must go now though, my 3 friends are in a hurry to leave. We must stick to our deal and meet Rampage.."

    I yelled, "WHAT! Rampage! Lemme guess, is he with an ugly fellow named Savage?" Zeth said, "Yes but that doesn't matter. I must go now!" Zeth ran away and I yelled, "Your an idiot! Rampage was banished from the Fire Nation! Zeth, you are your three friends are idiots!"

    Zeth was gone. All of a sudden Aang, Sakka and Toph came out of a room in the Air Temple. I said, "Please. If you hurt me then you will never know where Katara is!" Aangs eyes glowed and I yelled, "Easy there! Don't go crazy kid!" Aang roared, "Where is Katara?!?!" I replied, "The mountains near Ba-Sing-Se." Aang, Sokka, and Toph immediately ran off, probably towards their flying bison.

    Mayhem said, "Well. The Avatar was there. We could have killed him!" I replied, "No, he would have killed us! His eyes were glowing. If I didn't give him the information he wanted then he would have went into the Avatar State and killed all three of us. Don't worry though, we will kill the Avatar when he is caught off guard!"


    Bulldozer said, "So, now what?" I replied, "The mountains near Ba-Sing-Se is our next destination!"

    Edited on 12/10/2006 12:35pm
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    Lord-darkboy

    [1200]Dec 10, 2006
    • member since: 10/11/06
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    Darkboy "D" (fire, water, earth, air)


    was hit by lighting from zeth in the back and fell unconsious


    'wake up darkboy'a voice said

    'don't call me darkboy its "D" now'i said

    'that doesn't matter now you have to get up right away, and heal that back of you' he said again, i've got up and i felt pain running through my body as i felt that there was a hole in my back and i started to heal it wich wasn't very easy.

    'WHERE IS PYRO' i shouted when i realized he was gone

    'i don't know it, but i think he left' said that voice again

    'then there is no reason for me to stay here' i said when i took off and flew away

    'any idea where youre going to' the voice asked

    'yes'i replied 'i'm going to the mauntains of Ba-Sing-Se i need to meditate and there the perfect spot, besides of the criminals that live in the mauntains they will form a good training' and i flew further to the mauntains of Ba-Sing-Se i saw that my old meditating spot was still there and noone was around it i landed and started to meditate.

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