Avatar: The Last Airbender: Avatar RPG*: Create your own Bender

TheGreatAvatar
[1102]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 11/07/06
level: 4
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Captain Lu
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"Welcome to the fire nation army"i said
"your uniform is here"

a new soldier has joined the army
azula has a liking for him
she immidiately gave him the lieutenant rank
atleast hes under my control

"here is your battalion of 100 elite soldiers...hand picked by azula"i said

"thank you sir"he replied

he walked off with his battalion
he was headed towards xu wei village

"hmph"
"he wants to take on the resistance team"i said

"Lunch time!!"a guard yelled from the tower
the on duty shift went for lunch, while the off duty shift came out to guard

i left the palace and snuck around ba sing se
i climbed through a tunnel
and entered the sewers
i made several turns before emerging from the sewers
to find myself in the hq of my master's team
it was called
the death brotherhood

"sir"i said kneeling down
"there is a new soldier in the army, that azula favors very much"

"how much?" the mysterious figure said

"azula gave him lieutenant rank right when he joined, sir"i said

the man grunted
"take him out"the man said

"yes sir" i replied

"-and the earthbending one"the man interrupted

"how did you know?-"i asked

"hahaha"
"im strife" strife said
"i know everything!!" he yelled

"yes sir"
"you do sir"i answered

then i left and headed back towards the palace
with only 2 things on my mind
ake out lao
and take out willy woo
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crazyman321

[1105]Dec 8, 2006

member since: 10/21/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
posts: 4,264

TheGreatAvatar wrote:

Captain Lu
-------------------------
"Welcome to the fire nation army"i said
"your uniform is here"

a new soldier has joined the army
azula has a liking for him
she immidiately gave him the lieutenant rank
atleast hes under my control

"here is your battalion of 100 elite soldiers...hand picked by azula"i said

"thank you sir"he replied

he walked off with his battalion
he was headed towards xu wei village

"hmph"
"he wants to take on the resistance team"i said

"Lunch time!!"a guard yelled from the tower
the on duty shift went for lunch, while the off duty shift came out to guard

i left the palace and snuck around ba sing se
i climbed through a tunnel
and entered the sewers
i made several turns before emerging from the sewers
to find myself in the hq of my master's team
it was called
the death brotherhood

"sir"i said kneeling down
"there is a new soldier in the army, that azula favors very much"

"how much?" the mysterious figure said

"azula gave him lieutenant rank right when he joined, sir"i said

the man grunted
"take him out"the man said

"yes sir" i replied

"-and the earthbending one"the man interrupted

"how did you know?-"i asked

"hahaha"
"im strife" strife said
"i know everything!!" he yelled

"yes sir"
"you do sir"i answered

then i left and headed back towards the palace
with only 2 things on my mind
ake out lao
and take out willy woo

do you have 2 characters

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ThatLostGuy
[1107]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
level: 11
rank: Red Shirted Lt.
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Well I am back...I am still wondering what happened to Pyro...I will make a post for Spike soon and I will solve what happened to Bulldozer and Mayhe...Also, Red Death I never said you could have to characters, but whatever. Go ahead, just make sure you CAPITALIZE CHARACTER's NAMES!..otherwise no one will figure out that Red Death's real name is Laoi...
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TheGreatAvatar

[1108]Dec 8, 2006

member since: 11/07/06
level: 4
rank: Thighmaster
posts: 517

ThatLostGuy wrote:

Well I am back...I am still wondering what happened to Pyro...I will make a post for Spike soon and I will solve what happened to Bulldozer and Mayhe...Also, Red Death I never said you could have to characters, but whatever. Go ahead, just make sure you CAPITALIZE CHARACTER's NAMES!..otherwise no one will figure out that Red Death's real name is Laoi...

gotchya=)

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crazyman321
[1109]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 10/21/06
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Lee (earthbender)??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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as lee walks towards the great wall of Ba Sing Se he starts admiring it and its beauty
"what have they done to you Ba Sing Se,you use to be such a great city",i said
as the sun shined and the wind blew Lee remembered when he was a kid and he would go outside with his friends and play different sports earthbending style
as he continued to walk forward he saw a army of fire nation warriors fighting a group of earthbenders
he kept his distance??and quietly watched,none of them noticed,while he hid he was wondering what was going on over there
???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? hows that
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ThatLostGuy

[1110]Dec 8, 2006

member since: 08/23/06
level: 11
rank: Red Shirted Lt.
posts: 2,484

crazyman321 wrote:

Lee (earthbender)??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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as lee walks towards the great wall of Ba Sing Se he starts admiring it and its beauty

"what have they done to you Ba Sing Se,you use to be such a great city",i said

as the sun shined and the wind blew Lee remembered when he was a kid and he would go outside with his friends and play different sports earthbending style

as he continued to walk forward he saw a army of fire nation warriors fighting a group of earthbenders

he kept his distance??and quietly watched,none of them noticed,while he hid he was wondering what was going on over there

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? hows that

Its good for the exception that your character has no "history"...say if you have parents...where you learned to train, birthplace...

Edited on 12/08/2006 8:43pm

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crazyman321

[1111]Dec 8, 2006

member since: 10/21/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
posts: 4,264

ThatLostGuy wrote:

crazyman321 wrote:

Lee (earthbender)??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

--------------------------------

as lee walks towards the great wall of Ba Sing Se he starts admiring it and its beauty

"what have they done to you Ba Sing Se,you use to be such a great city",i said

as the sun shined and the wind blew Lee remembered when he was a kid and he would go outside with his friends and play different sports earthbending style

as he continued to walk forward he saw a army of fire nation warriors fighting a group of earthbenders

he kept his distance??and quietly watched,none of them noticed,while he hid he was wondering what was going on over there

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? hows that

Its good for the exception that your character has no "history"...say if you have parents...where you learned to trait, yada yada, birthplace...

ill put stuff like that in all my other posts lets just continue the rpg

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TheGreatAvatar
[1112]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 11/07/06
level: 4
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posts: 517
im just waiting for willy woo to post so i can continue=)
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crazyman321
[1113]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 10/21/06
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TheGreatAvatar wrote:

im just waiting for willy woo to post so i can continue=)
1.where is he

2.who is he

3.what does he do in this rpg
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ThatLostGuy
[1114]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
level: 11
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Spike (Archer)
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I blacked out! The last thing I remember was geting secretly attacked by some Fire Nation guy (Red Death) and D.....
-
I woke up suprisingly where I had blacked out. I thought I would wake up in some dark chamber and I would be getting whipped or something. I said to myself, "What a relief!" I then saw Mayhem lying on the floor. His shoulder was cut open but I could tell that the bleeding had stopped. -
I shook Mayhem and said, "Mayhem! Get up man! Get up!" Mayhem's eyes opened wide and Mayhem yawned. He said, "Where-where am I?" I replied, "We are still at the Eastern Air Temple. C'mon. Lets go find Bulldozer, or possibly Bulldozer in some rhino's body. Hahahaha!"
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We walked through the temple and we didn't run into anyone suprisingly. I knew that someone had to still be here. Like maybe the guru or Aang and his friends. Mayhem shouted, "Look! Over there!" Mayhem and I ran to the edge of the Air Temple and Bulldozer was lying there, with his legs hanging off of the Air Temple. Mayhem and I pulled Bulldozer back on to solid ground. I shook him and Bulldozer immediately stood up. Bulldozer said, "Was I a Rhino?" I replied, "Yeah. And you were one hell of a fighter! Good job man! You gave it your best shot! And, I'm sorry for not beleiving you when you said that Kujo put a spirit in your body." Bulldozer smiled and said, "I told you so!"
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I said, "Well the three of us are back together now! So, now what?" Mayhem roared, "I say we go Avatar hunting!" I laughed and Bulldozer said, "I agree! Lets go Avatar hunting!" I yelled, "Okay then, lets go Avatar hunting!"
Edited on 12/08/2006 8:58pm
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ThatLostGuy
[1115]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
level: 11
rank: Red Shirted Lt.
posts: 2,484
crazyman321 wrote:

TheGreatAvatar wrote:

im just waiting for willy woo to post so i can continue=)
1.where is he

2.who is he

3.what does he do in this rpg

Are you kidding me! You just radomly appeared in this RPG out of nowhere. You haven't went to www.freewebs.com/avatarRPG and read the "rules" or "Currently in the RPG"...and I AM THE LEADER OF THIS RPG! I dont care if people in this RPG make fun of my characters of me...but some NOOB like you, I just don't respect that or you....I think you should delete your post and add your character's history such as birth place, how you learned to train, parents, etc. before you post...and if you dont do that then no one will interact with your character.
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So, its your choice. Follow the rules or not be in the RPG at all...And by the way, I don't accept "back-talking" as an option, thats just rude!
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TheGreatAvatar
[1116]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 11/07/06
level: 4
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posts: 517
sigh

ok..thatlostguy
its ure choice what u want to do next with willy woo=)
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crazyman321
[1117]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 10/21/06
level: 6
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Lee (earthbender)
as i continued to watch th fight i remembered all my good times in Ba Sing Se
i remembered when me and my dad would go outside and get something to eat,and we would practice earthbending together
the days i would go to my earthbending school and sparr with friends,then during recess we would play earthbending soccer,basketball,and football
somedays i would just enjoy the day and walk around the city
my anger built up in my body and i couldnt contain it anymore,"the fire nation will pay"i said in a loud voice and all?? of the people hear me
i get in a fighting stance and stomp my foot as??3 rocks rise in the air i kick them towards the fire nation soldiers,then i do the same 2 more times towards the soldiers
"You will pay",i yelled as i kicked 2 rocks at the leader of the soldiers
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crazyman321

[1118]Dec 8, 2006

member since: 10/21/06
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ThatLostGuy wrote:

crazyman321 wrote:

TheGreatAvatar wrote:

im just waiting for willy woo to post so i can continue=)

1.where is he

2.who is he

3.what does he do in this rpg

Are you kidding me! You just radomly appeared in this RPG out of nowhere. You haven't went to www.freewebs.com/avatarRPG and read the "rules" or "Currently in the RPG"...and I AM THE LEADER OF THIS RPG! I dont care if people in this RPG make fun of my characters of me...but some NOOB like you, I just don't respect that or you....I think you should delete your post and add your character's history such as birth place, how you learned to train, parents, etc. before you post...and if you dont do that then no one will interact with your character.
-
So, its your choice. Follow the rules or not be in the RPG at all...And by the way, I don't accept "back-talking" as an option, thats just rude!

sorry,sorry,sorry,i didnt know about the website,ill fix my post,and ill be back when im done,can you still interact with my above post,ill be back and repost my stuff

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TheGreatAvatar

[1119]Dec 8, 2006

member since: 11/07/06
level: 4
rank: Thighmaster
posts: 517

crazyman321 wrote:

Lee (earthbender)

as i continued to watch th fight i remembered all my good times in Ba Sing Se

i remembered when me and my dad would go outside and get something to eat,and we would practice earthbending together

the days i would go to my earthbending school and sparr with friends,then during recess we would play earthbending soccer,basketball,and football

somedays i would just enjoy the day and walk around the city

my anger built up in my body and i couldnt contain it anymore,"the fire nation will pay"i said in a loud voice and all of the people hear me

i get in a fighting stance and stomp my foot as 3 rocks rise in the air i kick them towards the fire nation soldiers,then i do the same 2 more times towards the soldiers

"You will pay",i yelled as i kicked 2 rocks at the leader of the soldiers

well i guess thats good enough if you just started playing

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crazyman321
[1120]Dec 8, 2006
member since: 10/21/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
posts: 4,264
name:Lee Atamaru(i made up the last name,im not good at making names)
status:earth bender
special move:raining earth
height:5'5
gender:male
age:21
eyes:light??brown??
hair:black
personality:hes calm and sometimes rushes into a battle sometimes he doesnt,he has mastered earth but is still trying to find someone to teach him??more even though he has already learned everything he needs,he has entered the earthbending tournament twice but both??times defeated by toph,after that he started looking for her to?? train him but never found her.he heard a rumor about toph metal bending so he is now looking for her
he grew up in Ba Sing Se with his mother father and grandfather.he was always very calm and didnt let people push him around,he learned earthbending at the age of 8,his father taught him the basics.once his parents got enough money to pay for more advanced training he got taught by master tai long at the age of 11.at the age of?? 17 he left Ba Sing Se to travel the world and learn more.at the age of 21 he came back to Ba Sing Se to see his family and friends again.when he came back he noticed that it had been taken over by fire nation
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????is that good,and again i say im sorry,it just seemed interesting so i tried to see if i can join
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