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    avatarforte

    [1323]Dec 14, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
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    Fang-Air-bender

    It was the fourth night since Katara had been kidnapped. We had our plan to deal with the assassins who had taken her. Now all we could do was wait for the day to arrive. It was close to the night, since all everyone had did was train a bit more. Now, everyone was off doing their own thing. Rin and Scorch has gone into the temple to talk. Ami was hanging with Aang. And Jax was learning some new earth-bending skills from Toph. I sighed and continued my training as well. I had learned a few new tricks to use against that ice person. Shockingly, another air-bender had arrived with an injured person and Ami had spent most of the day trying to heal her. I had recongized her as the blacksmith who made my sword, cept she was now missing an arm. I couldn't worry about that however, since more important things came first.

    "Hey Fang, are you busy?" I heard Ami call from below. I looked down and saw her standing at the base of the tower I was resting on.

    "Not really. Why, what's up?" She motioned for me to follow. I shrugged and jumped down. She took me to a small little door and told me to go through. I almost dropped my jaw at the sight. There were flowers everywhere. "Wow, I can't believe this could happen up here".

    "Niether did I, until Aang showed me earlier." I moved into the field, smelling the wonderful scents and the unhindered breeze. For an airbender, this was heaven. I looked and watched Ami, exploring the field as well. The field only helped to make me love her more. I turned away, then asked.

    "So, are you sure your ready for this battle? I mean, you've been healing a lot of people lately, so you might be tired." I got no response. "Ami?" I looked back to see her laying face first on the ground. I ran over to her. "Ami, Ami, can you hear me". I checked her temperature. She was burning up. I cursed, picked her up and ran out of the field. Rin, who was passing by, saw me run by, carrying Ami.

    "What happened?" she asked, keeping pace with me. "I think she has a fever, but she's burning up bad." We got her into one of the temple's rooms and put her on the bed. She seemed to be getting worse by the minute. "What the hell is making her this sick?" I could only hope it wasnt fatal.
    Edited on 12/14/2006 1:14pm
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1327]Dec 14, 2006
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    Willy Woo
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    I was cpatured now my Red Death, D, Wicker, adn 90 of Red Death's soldiers. During the fight against all of them and the Lactopuss, Berracore was knocked out. I started the fight with four soldiers, and it ended with Berracore and I getting captured. One of my soldiers died and the other one disappeared.
    -
    I was put in metal chains. I was brought into a little tent and handcuffed to a metal bar in my tent. I had no clue where Berracore or my other soldier was.
    -
    Wicker walked into the room and said, "Willy! Its time that you pay for what you have done! You have evaded me for long enough and now your gonna get hurt!" Wicker ripped off my shirt and I became freezing. My nude chest stood weak in the freezing wind. Wicker pulled out a whip and said, "Hahahaha I have been waiting for this. Willy, you are about to go through hell!"
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1328]Dec 14, 2006
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    Captain Lu(master firebender)
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    "ughh"
    "release me"i said to the soldier that was hauling me up the mountain

    i looked up as i heard a roar
    i saw a lactopuss

    "what the hell?"i said to myself

    i heard liao scream orders to his men
    the soldier hauling me was one of the soldiers that was to distract the lactopuss
    all they were doing was shooting fireballs at the lactopuss
    -
    eventually the lactopuss dug back down,
    and i was once again hauled to complete the circle surrounding willy woo
    i saw willy woo get knocked out
    -
    i was once again hauled
    until we reached flat land that liao was pointing at

    liao came up to me as the soldier left
    "finally wide awake?"he said

    "let me go"i said
    "I order you to let me go!!"i yelled this time

    "i dont take orders from traitors"
    he replied

    "now"liao said
    sitting down
    "where is your master?"

    i looked up
    "i will bring you to him after your mission is done i replied...as you said before"

    he knodded
    "ok"said liao
    he then got up and dragged me into D's tent

    "D is gunna watch you tonight"liao said
    "behave now"
    liao smiled

    i glared at liao,
    then at D

    "D...let me go"
    "youre arresing a fire nation captain"i said

    "heres the deal"D said
    "ill let you go once you tell me where your master is,
    and once we confirm hes there...youll be free"
    D said sipping his tea

    a soldier came in
    "sorry for the interruption"he said
    "i need to make the makeshift prison"

    D knodded
    "ahh..the makeshift prison"
    "that was a great invention..."
    "just a few bars with a few locks"D said

    i looked at D
    "you are not going to put a captain of the fire nation army in that cell-"i yelled

    "fire nation traitor you mean"D said
    "and yes..i will put u in there"

    after the soldier left
    D forced me inside
    and locked it
    "wheres?? willy and berracore anyways?"

    "Willy is going through torture by wicker...then hes gunna be locked up in Liao's tent"
    "and berracore is gunna be locked up in wickers tent"D said

    it was a long silence

    "come on D"i said
    "let me go"
    "please"

    D smiled as he was going to bed

    "youre gunna have to do better than that"D said


    Edited on 12/14/2006 1:32pm
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    Kathleen2006

    [1330]Dec 14, 2006
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    Ami (Waterbender)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I looked around myself and gasped in horror it was not a fight it was a slaughter... I saw Fang and the others fighting the Fire Nation.

    "Rin!" I ran to Rin who was fighting to the best of her ability

    "We have to get rid of these chumps, now"

    "I know"

    I tried to fight of the fire Nation Scum that had attacked us.

    I then caught sight of something that caused my heart to stop, it was Fang, he was greatly outnumbered and I could tell this could be his last fight.

    "Fang!" I screamed tears welling in my eyes and I tried to run to him, it was just like the attack on my home when my parents were killed, I couldn't get to him, not fast enough I saw him fall to the ground and not get back up. I knelt at his side tears roling down my cheeks "Fang, you can't die on me, you can't leave me, you were the first person since my parents died that I truely felt safe with..." I wept "Fang wake up..." it was useless, he was no longer breathing I started sobbing hard my face hidden in his shirt "Fang"

    The few survivors stood around me

    "This is all your fault Ami" Scorch said

    "Yeah, if you had never come maybe Fang would still be alive" Rin accused

    "What... how the hell is it my fault?" I demanded through my tears

    "You were wanted by them and by traveling with the rest of us you put us all in danger" Scorch said "you are no longer welcome as a member of this team, Ami"

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Fang didn't know what to do except try to get her fever down and wait to see if she would be okay, he could hear her crying in her sleep and figured she was having a fever induced nightmare... he just didn't know how badly she was suffering

    He placed his hand on her forehad as he noticed that she was sweating.

    "Finally, her fever is going down" Fang smiled but a few minutes later that smile fell as he felt her again and felt that she felt ice cold... was a waterbender suposed to be cold... no, not this cold!

    "What the hell is wrong with her?" he wondered

    "Fang..." Ami moaned deliriously

    "Yes, I'm right here" he said

    "will you hold me?"

    He didn't know how to respond, he turned towards the closed door, good, they had privacy

    "Of course" He sat on the edge of the bed and moved her so she was on her side and then laid down behind her and pulled her back close to his chest and watched her eyes drift shut again, she couldn't have been aware to know that she had made that request so she might be surprised to she that he was holding her... either way she had to get to normal body temperature quickly or she would be in trouble, serious trouble

    Edited on 12/15/2006 11:42am
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1331]Dec 14, 2006
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    Spike (Archer)

    I looked at Bulldozer and Mayhem and said, "Dam this is a long walk to the mountains! But, hopefully we will get there before Aang and his friends so. Then I will kill the Avatar and become Lord of the Fire Nation!"

    Bulldozer added, "Whould you shut up!" I laughed and said, "You can't even spell s-h-u-t u-p..."

    Edited on 12/14/2006 1:54pm
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    Lord-darkboy

    [1332]Dec 14, 2006
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    Darkboy "D" (fire, earth, air, water)


    willy was captured and the camp was setting up


    Willy was starting to annoy me after betraying me twice his punishment won't be easy this time, I went looking in Willy's tent and saw he was still unconsious, i decided to wake him up on MY way i grabbed a bucket to water and made it as cold as possible before it turned into ice when the water was cold enough (1??C or 33.8??F) i spalshed it over him in wich he awoken very quickly and not to happy either.

    'WHAT THE F***, WHO DARES TO AWAKE ME' he yelled

    '*sigh* a very hot blond chick with deep blue eyes in a bikini wants to see you' I said 'idiot'

    willy's eyes narrowed as he reconized my voice 'oh great why is it that your always here when i'm captured, don't you dare to attack me in front' he said at these words i putted my foot against hit neck and pushed him against pile where he was bound at.

    'if your so weak that you get captured allready before i can come into action it isn't my fault now isn't it willy' i said while removing my feet he was breathing very heavy 'willy 'i started 'as far i can say consider yourself lucky your one of the few people that survived it after betraying me twice but noone i repeat noone ever survived the third one'

    'for everything there's a first time D' he said with anger in his voice

    'what a nice necklace do you think it will be worth something on the market?'i asked him while taking his amulet in my hand, willy tried to bite me but i pulled away just in time i earthbended a chair up and sat on it 'tell me willy why is that necklace so important to you?'i asked

    'NONE OF YOUR BUSSINES'??Willy yelled at me

    'fine we'll talk about this later' i said while walking out of the door 'o yes willy, your little friends all died on the mauntain' I lied to him ' they were pitiful and had no right to live' i started to grin ' if you want i can always give you the heads of them and that old man of Ba-Sing-Se (hevet)' I said laughing what i was trying to do was breaking him make him go in a rage and make alot of mistakes wich will kill him

    'where are you so happy about' Red death said

    'nothing' I replied and went into my tent.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1333]Dec 14, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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    "AHHHHHH", I screamed in pain. Wicker whipped my back and watched the blood ooze out of my body. Wicker then said, "Hahaha Willy! Don't worry. I am not gonna kill you, yet! I will be back soon to torture you some more! Hahahaha!"
    -
    Wicker left the room and a few minutes later D entered the room. D didn't even notice the whip-marks (lashes) on my back, or the blood on the floor. (see post 1332)
    -
    D left the room. I thought in my head..."Wow, I forgot all about Hevet. And now, he is dead. Berracore is dead. My soldiers are all dead. I have nothing left to live for. The only purpose I serve now is as Wicker's punching bag. But, D of course could be lying..."
    -
    The blood stopped coming out of my back and I sat half nude on the cold dirt. Waiting for nothing except another beating, most likely. I was hopeless. I was captured and there was no way out of it!
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1334]Dec 14, 2006
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    red death(master of fire and water)
    (liao)
    ---------------------------------
    i entered the tent as D left
    i sat on the chair that D made with earthbending
    and i looked at willy

    "tell me willy.."i said
    "do you have any information you want to tell me and my soldiers?"

    willy glared at me
    "no"he said

    "i just wanted you to know..."i said
    "you wont be going through another beating..at least until we reach the palace..."
    "of course if you dont try anything stupid"
    "were heading back tommorow morning"i said

    then i got into my bed and rested until the next morning

    -----------------------next morning------------------------

    all the soldiers awoke,
    and we ate food that was aved from the scavaged villages

    we started heading back down the mountain

    "cant wait to see what happens when azula gets her hands on willy"i said to wicker and D
    and we all smiled
    Edited on 12/14/2006 3:41pm
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    danlohr

    [1335]Dec 14, 2006
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    name: wunky
    bender: air
    gender: male
    power: none
    status: sucks at everything

    history: wunky was a normal born airbender that sucks at everything.
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1336]Dec 14, 2006
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    danlohr wrote:
    name: wunky
    bender: air
    gender: male
    power: none
    status: sucks at everything

    history: wunky was a normal born airbender that sucks at everything.

    ??dude..take this rpg seriously..we really dont have time for you n00bs making these 1 word descriptions


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    vegnegun

    [1337]Dec 14, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Firebender) (This happens before Ami gets sick, the third day)


    Fang and Ami had just gotten back to the temple and went on to do there own thing

    Scorch and Rin had been training for most of the day when Scorch's hand suddenly began to clentch and spark with orange lightning. He quickly hid it behind his back and looked at Rin, who was attempting to??use the fire-dagger technique. "Rin, its getting late," said Scorch, "I think we should give it a rest and try again tomorrow."

    "No," she barked, "I know I can do this. Please just a little longer?"??She looked at Scorch and her eyes shimmered in the moon, and sighed then nodded.

    "Okay," said Scorch as he felt his hand unclentch, "take your stance again." Scorch studied her. "This seems right. I wonder why you can't seem to get this..." He then noticed her hands were loose and snickered.

    "What?" asked Rin, "why are??you laughing?"

    "Rin, tighten your grip and try again," said Scorch. Rin clencthed her hands and threw them to her sides and two short streams of fire came out and held.

    "Oh, well, this is embarrising," said Rin as she yawned. "Okay, let's hit the hay then I guess." Scorch flexed his hand and nodded, ignoring his hand and he went into the temple chamber with Rin. Scorch laid down on the ground and Rin laid down at his side.

    "Rin, what are you doing?" asked Scorch.

    "Snuggling," said Rin as she looked up, "what, you don't want to?"

    "No, its just, this is suddle, don't you think?" asked Scorch.

    "Aw, don't be a wet blanket Scorch," said Rin. She began to snore immediatley after that and Scorch realized she was out cold.

    "Ah well," said Scorch, "she??does look cute when she's asleep." He lyed back and slowly let sleep take him.

    THE NEXT MORNING (fourth day)

    Scorch woke up and Rin was still on him, and he didn't??mind it. He laid back and relaxed, then Rin's arms began to tighted around Scorch's ribs, causing him??pain. "Rin, let go," said Scorch as he slid her off him. She opened her eyes and looked up at him.

    "Scorch, what's wrong?"??she asked.

    "You were hurting me," said Scorch. He then remembered that he wanted to talk to her about what the guru had said to him. And, hoping to get closer to??Rin emotionally, he wanted to tell her. She sat up and began to rub her eyes and looked at him. It was cloudy outside and Scorch knew that this would be the perfect time to tell her. "Rin, let's not train just yet. The sun isn't visable."

    Rin looked into the sky, "okay, I guess we could take a break this morning." Scorch sighed heavily before getting up, and lit a small fire.

    "Rin,??I wanted to talk to you since yesterday, but I didn't have a chance to," said Scorch.

    "Okay," said Rin, "what am I doing wrong?"

    "Nothing, I just wanted to tell you what the guru told me," said Scorch, "about my parents. Obsidian, the one who I told you was my brother, isn't."

    "Yeah,??so you don't have a biological brother," said Rin, "at least your parents are still alive."??Scorch was silent for a moment and looked down to the gound, a tear ran down his eye. "I'm sorry, I didn't??mean it."

    "At least??you remember your parents," said Scorch, "I lost my real ones when I was very young. My parents adopted me after mine were killed." Rin crawled over to Scorch and hugged him.

    "Its okay," said??Rin, "I know it probably hurts, but, this helps you get over it, trust me." Scorch hugged Rin back and saw that his hand had begun to spark and clentch again.

    "Don't listen to her," said Pyro in Scorch's head, "she doesn't really care for you. She only wants you to shut up and teach her firebending. You are nothing??but a tool for her." Scorch shook his hed and hugged her again.

    "I'm going to give you sometime alone," said Rin, "you probably need sometime alone." She stood up and??began to walk away. Scorch grabbed her hand and stood up, kissing her.

    He backed off and said, "thanks Rin." Rin nodded and smiled before going outside to do who knows what.??Scorch lyed down again and closed his eyes again, hoping to sleep the pain away, not aware of the events going on outside.??

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    Novoxy

    [1338]Dec 14, 2006
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender and Dagger Weilder)
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    -----Ba~Sin~Se Palace Hallways with Azula-----

    "So, hows it been Azula?" I say as we walk down the hallway i kinda grin and put my hand through my hair. She turns to me and smiles.

    "Well... You know how it is... What have you been my gaurd for like almost a year now..." She says then turns back and looks ahead to see a guard. She looks back at me and smiles "Remember that?" She says looking at me and I smile.

    "You bet I do! Please Azula! Can we for old times sakes..." I say to her pleading. She turns and looks at me with a grimace face. Then smiles.

    "Yea! Sure have fun I'll watch!" She says patting me on the back. I run towards the gaurd he looks at me and knows what I am doing I have done it to him before.

    "Ahhh!" He says running with a scared face. I'm laughing like never in my life.

    "Hahahahahahaha!" I laugh grabbing a dagger in one hand and then I shot a lightning bolt at his feet he bounces up I throw the dagger it catches his pants and plyes him into the wall. I shot lil sparks of lightning at him. Then I run up to him take my dagger and staticlly charge him up and stick him onto the wall. He struggles and yells, "Ahhhh!! Help!!" Causing more gaurds to come I stomp my foot on the ground and slide it and then walk. They all freeze then they start walking towards me as well. I have controled there foot movement I jump up onto the roof then let go of there electricity they jump upside down and fall on there necks. "Haha!" I laugh.

    "Okay okay, thats enough Sparky hahaha," she says laughing. I run back over to her. Then I turn and look at her she is smiling this is probably the happiest I have ever seen Azula... I feel bad that she is Fire Nation she looks much happier having fun with me than sitting on that throne with them idiot girls.

    "Azula... theres something I need to tell you," I said with a worried face, "well... it's just that... ummm Zuko... he must have thought that I was leaving the Fire Nation by running away to take on this Scorch guy myself. So... Me and Zuko kinda fought... he just ended up humiliating himself I would have killed him if he wasn't your brother so yeah." I say chuckling some.

    "Oh really?" Azula says smiling. I knew chasing the gaurds and stuff would make her in a better mood so I could tell her this without having to cut my work to short. "How did that go? You win?"

    "Sadly yes... twice... it was fun though totally worth it though." I say.

    "Wow... Thats probably why the Gaurds thought you were supposed to be in jail." She said still smiling.

    "Yeah that and I kiddnapped Captain Lu since he betrayed the Fire Nation so I was gonna bring him to you. But then Red Death, Wicker, and Darkboys Gaurds saw me and immediatly thought I was gonna harm him. So when he comes here you can't really trust him, he's probably just telling Red Death and Wicker and them that I'm the trader when he tried to kill me." I said even though it was partically all lies just to get rid of Lu. "He he is a fool for betraying the Fire Nation!" I yell my fist clinching and bursting with lightning.

    "Sparky, chill out... it's alright he will be prosicuted." Azula says.

    "No, I want to kill him." I say with great relief that she believes me.

    "Okay then so glad to see that you don't like traders," She says with a straight face.

    "I desipse them... I will kill them all..." I say we finally arrive to my old Armory room. "Home Sweet Home..."

    "Okay then I'll be out on my throne." Azula says sadly.

    "Okay I'll be there to gaurd you in a bit." I say I walk into my room. Rampage sitting on my bed. "Hey, can I get a lil privacy? Let me get on my armor and we can talk I know what you wanna talk about." He walks out for a bit and I change out of my old raggedy robe and put on some Elite Lightning clothes. "Alright come on!" I yell to Rampage he comes in and I pull out 2 chairs we sit. "So? Lemme guess you wanna talk about Scorch?"

    "Actually no...Azula..." He says "You seem attached. Something going on?"

    "No just a act. I hate Fire Nation."

    "Me too. Now as for Azula I have a great plan." We sit and talk for a few hours.

    "Alrighty then! We will do that. I need to get out there to Azula now." I say

    "Okay then later." Rampage says and we both walk out of the room we go seperate directions. I arrive at the throne. "Sorry I am late I was talking to Rampage about Scorch."

    "It's okay, just glad you actually came." She says... She knows nothing...
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    avatarforte

    [1339]Dec 14, 2006
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    Zeth-Lightning Bender

    It was all too perfect. The bracelet he had stolen from the weak little girl(talho). The airbender(shido) had been a shock to him but it was of no importance. He had found what he had been told to find. An artifact, one that would make sure he would reign victorious in the battle to come. If his info was good, this would negate the firebender and airbender's spirits. "My team will win today, then we'll kill the Avatar as well. We'll be heroes to the fire nation and live as gods." His laugh echoed throughout the caverns.

    "So sure of yourself, aren't you?" came a voice. Zeth stopped laughing and started searching the room.

    "Whos there? Show yourself". Zeth yelled out, still looking for the source of the voice.

    "Are you scared? I thought you feared nothing. Or maybe you just fear everything and use those others as protection, so that while they die, you can get away?" said the voice again.

    "SHUT UP!" Zeth screamed, shooting a blast of lightning towards where the voice came from. The lightning smashed into the cavern wall, leaving a huge whole. Zeth was sweating and huffing. "Hmmm, inpressive. But you'll need more power if you wish to kill those fools."

    "Are you saying I can get this power from you? Where is it then?"

    "Fool, I am the power". Zeth suddenly felt something enter his body, and he could feel the power flowing through him.

    "Unbelieveable. I could easily destroy them now. But that would be no fun. Ill use this power if I need to, but I doubt that I will have too. Understand?"

    "Perfectly, master Zeth". Zeth's laugh once more echoed throughout the caverns.

    -------------------------------------------------------------
    Dark Jax laughed. The fool had willing allowed him into his body and thought he had compelete comtrol. But he would soon learn, when those fools weakened his body and mind, it would be his. And then, everything would be his. The power of Pyro and Exodus, the girls with them, money, everything. The part of him that Zeth couldn't see laughed, a cold and heartless laugh that would cause even the bravest soul to shudder.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [1340]Dec 14, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)

    I was being led down the mountain-side in chains. I was beaten up from all the whip-lashes I absorbed from Wicker. D was playing mind games with me and I had no clue if Berracore, my soldiers, or Hevet were alive. Red Death was constantly warning me that Azula was going to kill me and sentence me to death...I thought in my head, "Willy, you gave it a good run, but now your just too tired to keep on running."

    Finally we reached Ba-Sing-Se and I was led by Wicker, D, Red Death, and Red Death's 90 soldiers into the palace (Fire Nation Capital) of Ba-Sing-Se. I was led to a throne room and I was thrown on the floor, still with no shirt on which revealed the whip lashes on my back. I looked up in agony at Azula's cruel face.

    Azula looked down at me and then yelled at me, "You liar! You tricked me into beleiving that Liao (Red Death) was a traitor! When in fact, you are the traitor!" I replied, "No! I will tell you the truth Azula, for I know my life is at stake. Liao and I are both traitors! About a month ago I was against all Fire Nation citzens. But, I was accomplsihing nothing so I joined the Fire Nation due to the fact that my life was a joke! The only dam reason I attacked Wicker, Liao, and D was because they were attacking me. What was I gonna do, let them kill me?"

    ??Azula was listening carefully and she said, "I see. But, you attacked the Fire Nation by attacking Liao, D, and Wicker! You are a traitor for that!" I yelled back, "IN SELF DEFENSE YOUR HIGHNESS!" She frowned and said, "Go on..."

    I continued, "Liao was on my team when I was against all Fire Nation citzens about a month ago. I had a team of five men and Liao was on my team! Therefore, Liao was on the Fire Nation, then he betrayed them and joined my team against the Fire Nation, and now he joined the Fire Nation again! Liao cannot be trusted! He is a traitor!"

    Red Death (Liao) ran over towards me to attack me but one of Azula's guards with two black daggers (Sparky) stopped Red Death in his path yelling, "Halt Liao! This is between Willy and Azula! You will have your turn to speak soon! So, step back if you please." Red Death looked at the man and said, "Do I know you?"

    ??Azula yelled, "Shush up Liao. I am talking to Willy right now! So can you stop interrupting me!" Red Death replied, "Yes. I'm sorry." Azula looked at me again and said, "So, you and Liao are both traitors?" I replied, "Yes! But I am a traitor due to me defending myself from Wicker, D, and Liao!" Wicker roared, "Willy you lying basta*d! You said you hated the Fire Nation! I don't trust you one bit and I never will!"

    Azula didn't know what to do....

    Edited on 12/14/2006 7:22pm
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