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    Kathleen2006

    [1341]Dec 14, 2006
    • member since: 07/06/06
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    I knelt crying over Fang's body as my friends began to walk away, I knew that they were abandoning me at that second and it was killing me inside.

    Then I heard a wolf growling and I looked up to see a shaggy grey wolf standing in front of them bearing her teeth, it was obvious she knew what was happening. They split and went on and she came forward towards me, calming in her approach.

    "I would destroy them, but I didn't think I should traumatize you worse than you've already been" she said, her mouth didn't move, but I still heard the words

    "Who are you?" I asked

    "My name is Exodus, I am the spirt that aids Fang..." she said

    "You're the wolf..." I wasn't sure how safe I was, she had been the one that helped him destroy those bandits earlier.

    "Don't be afraid... he want's you protected, that's why he asked for my power" Exodus explained "I do what he asks me to do, and he asked me to protect you, and I will... he knew you were having a nightmare, he didn't know it was this bad" she said looking at the lifeless version of Fang from my dream that soon disappeared along with the rest of the landscape

    "What's happening?" I demanded

    "I'm removing the illusions... Fang is alive and well... and your friends do still care for you" Exodus explained

    "Really?" I asked

    "Yes, really, but you need to wake up now... Fang is waiting for you" Exodus disappeared "don't be afraid if you wake and Fang is holding you, in a delrious state you asked him to hold you and he complied, that is when he sent me to help you"

    >>

    I woke slowly and felt that Exodus had been telling the truth, Fang was holding me. I shifted in his arms to now face him and snuggled under his chin to absorb the warmth from his body as it was rather chilly. I smiled knowing that I was really safe in his arms.

    "Thank you Fang, for giving me my security back" I whispered before drifting off into a dreamless sleep.

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1342]Dec 14, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
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    red death(master of fire and earth)
    (liao)
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    D walked fowardand interrupted the silence

    "princess, will you please give lieutenant liao a chance to speak?"D asked

    Azula hesitated

    "yes..okay"
    "bring him in"azula replied

    D brought me in

    "princess"i said
    "yes..i was on theyre team of 5 once"

    azula stared in shock

    "but there was a reason"
    "i was acting as a spy"i said
    "when they got close enough to attacking firebenders, i would have betrayed them, but they didnt get close to 1 kill"

    "you liar!!"willy yelled

    "shut up willy!"azula yelled at willy

    azula glared at me
    then at willy

    "i would never betray the fire nation princess"i said

    "very well"azula said
    "this is only because of my trust for you from fire nation academy though"azula said
    "will you bring in wicker and D?"

    "yes princess"i replied

    i brought wicker and D in,
    and azula said
    "wicker, D, and lieutenant Liao"
    "you chaught willy woo"
    "so i will give all of you a chance to debate on what you want to do with him"azula said

    wicker, D and i looked at eachother
    after a small conversation we agreed on 1 thing

    "well, princess"i said
    "we agreed to sentence willy to 5 years in jail"

    "thats it?"azula said

    "well..yeah"D said

    "alright"azula said sighing

    "what a waste of a prison cell for just 5 years...but..your choice"azula said

    2 dai li agents dragged willy woo off into his cell as i walked foward to azula

    "azula, we have also captured captain lu, who tried to kill me
    and berracore, who assisted willy woo"i said

    azula immidiately said
    "dai li agents!!"
    "bring captain lu to the negotiation room"
    "and bring berracore to the prison cells in the 2nd prison room"

    "second prison room?"i asked

    "yeah"azula replied
    "i had 9 more prison rooms with 50 cells each made"

    "why?"i asked

    "why not?"azula replied smiling

    i got up
    "whos that guy with the black daggers?"i asked

    "oh...hes sparky..my bodyguard"azula replied

    "oh"i said

    i started to walk out of the room
    as i heard azula

    "wait"azula said
    "you and wicker are getting a promotion"

    wicker and i swivled around in shock
    we bowed

    "thank you princess"we said together

    "wicker is now captain"azula said
    "you will be given 100 men in your new rank"

    "thank you princess"wicker said

    "as for you"azula said pointing at me
    "you are now Commanding general"

    i looked up in shock and azula smiled

    "thank you princess"i said

    "you are now in charge of all the fire nation soldiers and my dai li"azula said
    "have fun"

    azula smiled
    and i smiled back

    i left the room with D and wicker
    then i bumped into sparky again
    Edited on 12/14/2006 8:14pm
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    djdfire

    [1343]Dec 14, 2006
    • member since: 12/04/06
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    Ariel (master waterbender)

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    Just defeated a bunch of FN soldiers

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    The three girls entered the palace after the battle, exhausted yet ready to go th FN.


    "So tell me why the Fire Nation is looking for you?", Kira asked while packing.

    "Well, my family used the the connection between the Water Tribes and the Fire Nation. When Sozin started this war, we were cut off from returning to the Water Tribes and forced to serve the Fire Nation and help them win the war. During Azulon's rule my mom became best friends with his son Iroh and his daughter-in-law, Ursa, especially Ursa. Me, I became friends with Ursa's oldest child Zuko and bitter enemies with her daughter Azula. Years later, Ursa was presumed dead and her husband became Fire Lord. Fire Lord Ozai then banished his son after he failed to participate in an Agni Kai. This punishment made my mom furious as she and Ozai had a heated arguement which turned into a huge fight, Ozai ultimitaely winning the battle by killing her and banishing me for suspensions of treachery against the Fre Nation. Now I guess Ozai wants me back but why, I don't know", Ariel explained while she finished packing. All of a sudden the three girls heard a sound in the palace and quickly got into fighting stances. When a man walked in the room, Kira and Jasmine ran toward him screaming at the top of their lungs

    "DADDY". Meanwhile, Ariel looked at the king, thinking she's seen him before. Just by looking at him she could tell that he was an elite firebender and most likely Kira's teacher, leaving the only person that could have given Jasmine her waterbending powers must be her mother. King Creon saw her looking and he said in a booming voice

    "Well look what we have here. Ariel Zufalon, the daughter of probably the most powerful waterbender I knew Erica Zufalon. Now I just got done hearing your conversation and I must say that I'm sorry to hear about Erica's death and I'm glad that you want to include my daughters in your quest. I will of course supply you with the anything you need."

    The girls looked at each other quickly and bowed and said "Thank You".

    Early the next morning, the girls set off in a small ship full of supplies, to the FN. Hoping to get some answers to their questions and to find out why Fire Lord Ozai wants Ariel after he banished he five years ago.

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    Novoxy

    [1344]Dec 14, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    red death(master of fire and earth)
    (liao)
    ------------------------------------
    D walked fowardand interrupted the silence

    "princess, will you please give lieutenant liao a chance to speak?"D asked

    Azula hesitated

    "yes..okay"
    "bring him in"azula replied

    D brought me in

    "princess"i said
    "yes..i was on theyre team of 5 once"

    azula stared in shock

    "but there was a reason"
    "i was acting as a spy"i said
    "when they got close enough to attacking firebenders, i would have betrayed them, but they didnt get close to 1 kill"

    "you liar!!"willy yelled

    "shut up willy!"azula yelled at willy

    azula glared at me
    then at willy

    "i would never betray the fire nation princess"i said

    "very well"azula said
    "this is only because of my trust for you from fire nation academy though"azula said
    "will you bring in wicker and D?"

    "yes princess"i replied

    i brought wicker and D in,
    and azula said
    "wicker, D, and lieutenant Liao"
    "you chaught willy woo"
    "so i will give all of you a chance to debate on what you want to do with him"azula said

    wicker, D and i looked at eachother
    after a small conversation we agreed on 1 thing

    "well, princess"i said
    "we agreed to sentence willy to 5 years in jail"

    "thats it?"azula said

    "well..yeah"D said

    "alright"azula said sighing

    "what a waste of a prison cell for just 5 years...but..your choice"azula said

    2 dai li agents dragged willy woo off into his cell as i walked foward to azula

    "azula, we have also captured captain lu, who tried to kill me
    and berracore, who assisted willy woo"i said

    azula immidiately said
    "dai li agents!!"
    "bring captain lu to the negotiation room"
    "and bring berracore to the prison cells in the 2nd prison room"

    "second prison room?"i asked

    "yeah"azula replied
    "i had 9 more prison rooms with 50 cells each made"

    "why?"i asked

    "why not?"azula replied smiling

    i got up
    "whos that guy with the black daggers?"i asked

    "oh...hes sparky..my bodyguard"azula replied

    "oh"i said

    i started to walk out of the room
    as i heard azula

    "wait"azula said
    "you and wicker are getting a promotion"

    wicker and i swivled around in shock
    we bowed

    "thank you princess"we said together

    "wicker is now captain"azula said
    "you will be given 100 men in your new rank"

    "thank you princess"wicker said

    "as for you"azula said pointing at me
    "you are now Commanding general"

    i looked up in shock and azula smiled

    "thank you princess"i said

    "you are now in charge of all the fire nation soldiers and my dai li"azula said
    "have fun"

    azula smiled
    and i smiled bank

    i left the room with D and wicker
    then i bumped into sparky again
    noone post! on this story i will get to it tomorrow
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    crazyman321

    [1345]Dec 14, 2006
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    Lee (earthbender)

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    i woke up the next morning and realised orha was gone."she must've left while i was sleeping,but thats ok"i thought in my head.i decided to get up and explore the??around the mountain.i climbed the sides of the mountain and found a very large cave and walked into it.

    i lit a candle and walked deep inside the cave.as the light of??my first candle slowly died down i lit the second one.out of nowhere 30 wolfbats flew towards me.i quickly made a rock wall and all of them hit the wall and??fell to the ground.after that wolfbats woke up and surrounded me from all directions.one of them quickly flew by me and made me drop the candle.now the only light was a small bit coming fom a hole.

    before the wolfbats attacked me a large hole suddenly appeard in the wall.and a large badgermole,as it attacked them i took this chance to run away.as soon as i got out the badgermole appeared again ready to attack me too.i remembered that badgermoles liked music so i sang a song as the badgermole quietly went back into the cave."well that was fun"i said as i started exploring somemore.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [1346]Dec 14, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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    Azula said, "Willy Woo. You are sentenced to five years in prison!" I was dragged off to my jail cell. But as I was dragged off I heard Azula say, "Put Berracore in the second prison room!" I now knew that Berracore was still alive. I was then dragged into my cold, dark cell. -
    I was thrown a shirt that smelled nasty. I put it on and I felt a little warmer. I had no weapon now, my swords and armor were taken away from me. I was in a metal cage-type cell. I tried to Earth Bend, but there was nothing to bend...
    -
    I was alone in a jail cell. I had nothing to look foward to, except my escape...
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    avatarforte

    [1347]Dec 14, 2006
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    Fang-Air-bender

    She was okay. I felt her move in my arms and her words. My idea had worked. I felt Exodus return to me. "Thanks Exodus". The wolf smiled at me, well, what I could guess was a smile.

    "Your welcome Fang. I think I've owed you for some time now." I thanked her and went back to Ami. She was resting peacefully now, he temperature returning to normal. I moved away for her, and looked around the room we were in. A nearby door led me to the room where the 2 people who had arrived yesterday were resting. The girl, the blacksmith, was missing her left arm. From the wound, it was apparent that the arm was torn off. But who would do such a thing? Well, I guess thats something we would have to ask her when she woke up. The other one, a small boy, was familar to me. But I just couldn't remember who it was. I shrugged. Everything would be relieved later.

    "Fang, where are you", I heard Ami say weakly. I turned back and closed the door behind me. I moved back to her side, ,hugging her.

    "Dont worry, I wont leave you. Not now, not ever". I felt her relax, then I passed into a deep sleep with her.
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    vegnegun

    [1348]Dec 14, 2006
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    Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Scorch had just fallen asleep, hoping to rid the pain

    Scorch is in a village in a forest, and is with two people. He looks at them and into their eyes.

    "Mom, dad?" he asked. The figures nodded. The forest suddenly burned down and a gigantic ball of fire swept them away. Scorch looked up and saw Pyro flying over head.

    "They are gone Scorch," said Pyro. "You are now nothing, but a worthless mortal." The ground began to shake and shattered and Scorch fell into a pit of lava bellow, landing on a rock. He slowly got up and saw the lava in front of him stir and Pyro rise out of it. Scorch was encased by Orange Lightning and was unable to move. Pyro opened his mouth wide and fired a stram of fire at Scorch. Scorch didn't scream, more like couldn't scream, and felt every seering pain run over his body. He then heard a familiar voice calling to him.

    "Scorch... Scorch," said the voice. "It's okay. Wake up Scorch!" Scorch was blinded by a white light and saw Rin sitting over him, shaking him.

    "Hey, take it easy," said Scorch, "I'm awake." Rin stopped and picked him up to her chest, holding him tightly.

    "You had me so worried," said Rin. "I've never seen you like that." Scorch hugged Rin back.

    "Don't worry," said Scorch, "I'll be here, always. And no force in heaven or Earth will change that."

    "Doubt it," said Pyro's voice in his head before laughing hysterically.

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    Kathleen2006

    [1349]Dec 14, 2006
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    Ami (Waterbender)

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    I woke later to find that Fang was still holding me warmly in his arms. I found his strength comforting and the presence of??Exodus less scary than I had first seen her. I had met her... I knew she would protect me as long as that was Fang's wish.

    In my heart I wanted to know that I could spend the rest of my nights sleeping within the protection of his embrace, but I knew my uncle, he probably had me a fiance picked out... but I refused to think about that, I only wanted to think about the man that was holding me.

    I snuggled into his chest as the air had become chilly and I was rather cold

    "It's okay, Ami... I'm still right here"

    I smiled I knew he was there both physically and emotionally

    "Nothing will tear me away from you, I promise" he said

    I smiled to myself I knew that he was the one for me, but would my uncle agree, now that I didn't know all I knew is that I was in the arms of the man I wanted to marry.

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    AEtherBlue

    [1350]Dec 14, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
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    Talho - EarthBender.
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    Is unconscious, after being healed as much as possible by Ami.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I woke up in a strange place. I was high atop a mountian. I looked around me "Where am I?" I asked myself.

    "You are at the origin. The place of the start."A man said." Everything you see around you is just beginning, just as you, young one, have just started your life." I looked down at the man, he was sitting on a stone, in a medatative position. "Sit" he said, a flat stone came up behind me, I sat.

    "Who are you?" I asked him. The strange man took out a bottle and drank some of it.

    "It is none of the matter." H said still holding the bottle. "I would worry about the scars of battle", he pointed to my arm. I looked down to see nothing but my shoulder there, the skin was bruised and mis-shapen,

    "Oh my god" I said and I stood up I grabbed my arm but when I looked again it was back. Nothing was wrong."What? Was that?"

    "That is something you will have to face in the future. For now there is something much more sinister. It lurks inside of you. And makes you do horrible things." He warned me.

    "I diddent do anything horrible to anybody yet." I told him back, sceptical.

    "Sit." He told me, I was reluctant at first but he gestured towards the seat again and I obeyed. "Now, I will tell you this, you have an entity in you, and it wants to break free of your mortal bonds. But it can't yet. It needs a gateway to get out of you." He told me."Your freinds already have had this sort of experience, however this power is too great for you. I'm afraid it might consume you. You cannot let this controll you, but you cannot controll it. You have never properly bonded and I'm afraid that you may never bond again."

    "Thats ok, If this thing really is that horrible, then there is no reason to keep it right?" I told him.

    "Verry true in most cases, but I am also afraid that this spirit is grasping onto you for your life force. It is unable to leave it's self, or it will die. That is why you must give it some of your life force, but in order to do that you give up a peice of yourself. A peice of your life force." He told me.

    "I will do whatever it takes... I just want a normal life." I told him.

    "The path of destiny has already been layed out, it is impossible to go off th road. All that we can do is to get rid of the obsticals on that raod." He told me.

    "Ok, what do I have to do?" I asked him.

    "First you must confront your deamon, then accept it, then let it go, only after this can you force the spirit out of your body and into the spirit world." He told me. "First, let us clear your mind. Then, we will regain the memories that bind you to this world. Close your eyes." He told me. I closed my eyes."Now, imagine yourself as emptyness, you are a vast container of nothing ready to be filled with knowlege and information." I imagined an empty jar. "That will do. Now, imagine what you fear most and put it into the jar." I tried to imagine something, but nothing came up, i tried harder and a vague image set inside my mind. It started as a shape and then added colour, it was a man. An old man, who was he? Why would I be afraid of him? No, I wasent afraid, I felt warmthe through him.

    "Dad?" I asked myself. The vision came clearer, now I was getting scared a little more, I had flashbacks of the man burning and a veiw of another man standing beside him, I saw them both burn. I screamed out.

    "Put it inside the jar, The jar my child!" He exclaimed. I imagined the burning people going out and then the jar lid closed. Tears streaming down my face. I sobed a little and looked up at the man. "Now, we will make contact with the spirit. Invision yourself. Imagine the worst thing you could become. Imagine what you have seen and what you have experienced through your life and channel the negetive into this image." I tried to do so, I imagined all the bad things that had happened to me. All the things I had done, other people had done and I treid to invision myself as that, infront of me. A picture came clear. It was me, no, not me.

    "Hello Talho," It said. "My name is." It said. The blank words were mouthed out but I couldent understand them.

    "You must communicate with it, unless you know the name of your spirit you cannot let it go." I heard a voice come into the vision.

    "Dont worry about him talho, I'm your freind. No, not your freind, I am YOU." The other version of me said.

    "Your not me. Your something that came along for the ride, your an infection. I dont need you." I told it.

    "No, but I need you." It told me.

    "You must be agressive, only then will you learn it's name. Push hard and think hard." The man said to me.

    "Your dont belong here. You are nothing for me. I dont want you. LEAVE NOW!" I pushed out real hard and forced it back.

    "Your nothing but a slave you know that? You need me to do your dirty work. I hide your emotions for you so you can live in your bliss. I give you everything." It told me.

    "I can live without you. You arent needed. Leave me alone. This is my body. LEAVE NOW!" I gave another hard push. This time almost. Iradicating the image of me. The spirit jumped back.

    "Hello, Talho. My name is ORHA." It said as it fell into darkness.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    "AAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!" I screamed aloud. I woke up to a sharp pain on my arm, I felt around and I found nothing, my shoulder was bandadged up, but there was nothing attatched to it. I had a flashback and I gripped my head and sat up, tears flowing down my face. I noticed a boy laying beside me, I flashed back to when he was standing in the bar. I shot up and screamed. I ran from the site gripping my head and tripped over a rock. I hit my head against the ground. I stared at the ground for several minutes, I saw a spider pass by, stinging up it's web.
    "I accept you, Orha" I said to myself.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    "Now for the third step." The old man said. I was back and sitting on the stone again.

    "That looke so real." I told him.

    "It was real. You must not only accept the reality of this spirit but the reality of your life. You have done many things that you are unaware of. But now is not the time for that. Now is the time for you to free yourself from your spirit. You must let it have some of your life force. But you will loose something of yourself in return."

    "I am ready." I said.

    "You must present your life force to the spirit. Only when it selects what it wants will you be able to purge yourself of it." he instructed. I presented myself to the darkness where it was hiding.

    "You think I will just pick something I like and leave?" It said.

    "If you dont I will kill myself and you will die too." I said to it. It paused.

    "It seems you've played your cards well. I dont know what to take. Will it be your eyes? Your ears? Ahh. Yes, this is what I want, I want your heart." It told me.

    "Deal." I said. It gave a grizally laugh. And disapeared.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I woke up again. This time, closer to some water. My head throbed, I touched it and it was bandaged. I looked around. No one was there. I looked down to my arm. It was gone.

    "Hello?" I asked.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Posters notes:

    Talho woke up and ran to another area, tripped and fell hitting her head, Ami and fang come out and bring her back to the camp. (Post something)

    When she wakes up the seccond time, Aim or Fang or both greet her. Any additional posting will be done after that. Sorry if you wanted to do something else. I can Change my post if nessasary.
    ??????
    ?????? Thank You.
    (TEH DRAMA)
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    Novoxy

    [1351]Dec 15, 2006
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender and Black Dagger Weilder)
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    -----Ba~Sin~Se Throne Room-----

    Red Death starts to walk to out of the room bumping into me, "Watch it..." I say. Red Death grins then says, "I know who you are I think?"?? I look at him in a confused look, " I doubt that cause I have never seen you... and if you wish to make something out of this then we can..."?? He smiles at me, "You think you're soo good don't you?" Red Death says as Rampage walks up Liao looks at Rampage. "Okay then... how about a Angi-Kai... if your so good... actually how about both of you, you both look like weaklings."

    "Okay," Me and Rampage say. "Just one more thing to make this interesting... how about we do this to death? So we know the loser doesn't have be hummilated any longer." I say. "Deal," Liao says and walks away, "Meet me outside in 3 hours."

    "Haha! We got this in the bag!" I say smiling. "Let me approve with Azula." I walk over to the throne.

    "Azula I have a Angi-Kai to the death with Liao and Rampage is in it too he's gonna help it's in 3 hours... Do you approve of this? Then, after this I will go ahead and give the death penalty to Lu." I say.

    "Okay, just don't make it quick. I want to see this so I want it interesting." Azula says.

    "Thank you, Azula we won't dissapoint you." I say.

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    Red Death/Lu Scorch wants to take it from here so yea don't continue on this... if you are going to post, then post wat you are doing during the 3 hours before...
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    Novoxy

    [1352]Dec 15, 2006
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    Sparky(Lightning Bender and Black Dagger Weilder)
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    -----Ba~Sin~Se Throne Room-----

    "Okay Rampage, she approved of it.And your friend Savage I have a plan for what we can use him for... " I say walking up to him.

    "Okay great, for those remaining 3 hours lets train outside the city." Rampage says, we walk outside to the loud and excitful Ba~Sin~Se. We walk a little bit and then we get to the city transportation to get us to the outside wall. We take it and we run out to a open feild.

    "Wow... it's awesome out here..." I say looking around. "Not any more!" I say lashing out giant bolts of lightning through the grass burning it down. "Okay now Rampage stop the fire with your axe so it don't spread much farther than needed." I say and Rampage runs out there and goes in a complete circle stoping the fire. "Okay," he says coming back. "We can train for about a hour then we go back and rest some then we fight Liao." Rampage says. "Okay, sounds like a plan." I say walking out a little then turning around shooting a ball of lightning at him. He lifts his axe up in front of it and it absorbs it. I run at him and lightning up my fist and then punch him in the back. "Ahh..." He says. Turning his axe to the side swinging it at me hitting me in my stomach sending me flying. "Ahhhhhh!!" I get up and start charging at him. "Now I know what to do." I say I run up on him punch him jump back throw a few bolts at him then he starts to charge at me. He hits me with his fist in my chest I bend over and he jams his knee in my stomach. "Ow, okay okay, its about time to leave... your good..." I say. "Yea you too... but a little better than you, are you okay?" Rampage says. "Yeah I'll be fine just let me tie my shoe..." I bend over and he is right in front of me I look up and pull my fist back and knock him right in his boys.... "Oooooo..." He said falling to the ground. "Haha, gotcha!" I say running away back to the transportation train. He starts running after me we both end up getting on the train before it leaves. We finally get back to the Palace and we decide to rest up. "That was fun!" I say. "Haha yeah, most fun I have had in a while." He says smiling.

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    Okay now u can take it scorch i had to do that before... cuz u no...
    Edited on 12/15/2006 11:03am
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    Lord-darkboy

    [1353]Dec 15, 2006
    • member since: 10/11/06
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    • rank: Holy Level 10!
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    Darkboy "D" (fire, water, earth, air)


    red death challenged rampage and sparky to an agni kai till death


    i saw how red death was training out there but two vs one didn't seem to fair to me so i went down to learn him a little trick

    listen to me those 2 are a deadly??team and you can get killed before the battle even start, you need a plan and new tactics tell me do you know how to redirect lighting?' i asked

    'redirect it thats impossible once it fired you cannot bend it to another way' red death said angry

    '*sigh*?? just believe me' i said 'we have 3 hours that will be enough for you to masterd the redirecting and how to create a plan and maybe some rest to' i said

    'i told you before YOU.CANNOT. REDIRECT.LIGHTING' red death said very slowly in the hope i would understand

    'if you don't believe my words maybe you believe my actions then'i said ' fire you lighting at me NOW'

    'w-what no way' he started

    'just do it i'll be fine' i said while taking my stance

    'fine but you asked for it' he said while charging up lighting

    'yea yea just fire allready' i said after i said that the lighting camed my way and i redirected it on iroh's way

    't-thats impossible' red death said

    'this little trick i learned from iroh, agni knows where he is now' i said

    'are you going to teach it to me?' red death asked

    'ofcourse' i replied

    ***1 hour later ***(i do feel little for it to type iroh lessons in it)

    'now lets see if you've got it'i said and started to charge up lighting ' remember never let the lighting-'

    'cross your heart' red death said after i fired i saw red death redirected the lighting and i was satisfiet

    'now go in and think off a plan train some little mor and don't forget to rest' i said to red death

    'thanks D' red death said before he walked back into the palace i just went to a spot to relax a bit

    Edited on 12/15/2006 12:32pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1354]Dec 15, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
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    • rank: Thighmaster
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    red death(master of fire and earth)
    (laio)
    --------------------------------
    i returned to my room to think after the redirecting lesson with D

    "commanding general liao"i heard azula say

    azula walked into my room

    "yes princess"i replied bowing

    "oh please liao"she replied
    "i told you you could call me azula"
    "now get up"

    "yes..azula"i said smiling

    "i heard you got yourself into an agni kai with rampage and sparky"azula said

    "yes i did"i said

    "dont underestimate them"azula said
    "sparky is a lightning bender"
    "and rampage is one who uses brute force and a fire/lightning absorbing axe"
    "and he apparently has no vital points as i learned a few hours ago"azula said smiling

    i laughed

    "but you wont go down to easily right?"
    "i mean prodigys put up good fights right?"azula said

    "prodigy?"i said

    i just remembered the sun and the undeveloped spirit within me

    "howd you know?"i saked azula

    "a experienced prodigy always knows another prodigy"azula replied grinning

    "ok..down to buisness"azula said returning to a straight face
    "remember the forms in fire nation academy"she said pacing back and forth
    "youre going to need to use all your skills if you want to win"
    "im gunna be watching...so dont dissapoint me"
    "you have about 2 more hours"

    azula left the room

    i then looked out the window to see a nice plain field

    "perfect"i said

    and i jumped out the window into the field carrying my two broadswords and my ninja stars
    i earthbended 10 pillars up surrounding me,
    and i started throwing my ninja stars straight in the middle of each pillar,
    i then took my ninja stars back and made the pillars o down,
    as i practiced with my broadswords
    i managed to merge my lightning bending into my broadsword skills to make my broadswords even more powerful


    Edited on 12/15/2006 12:26pm
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1359]Dec 15, 2006
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    nah..ill just leave it
    im not in the mood to describe a fight right now=p

    red death(master of fire and earth)
    (liao)
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    after my training was finished
    there was about half an hour left


    i got back to my room in the palace and removed my fire nation armor
    i then wore...agni kai clothes=D

    i was walking through the palace after changing,
    and i noticed a slightly injured ty lee

    "wow...what happened to you?"i said

    she looked at me
    "rampage has o vital points"she replied frowning

    "oh..so thats how azula knew"i said
    "well..hope you get better"and i walked off

    "are those agni kai clothes?"ty lee said
    "who are you fighting?"

    "sparky and rampage"i said

    ty lee frowned again
    "well..good luck...cuz your gunna need it"she said

    "thanks"i replied

    i then walked outside and saw a new addition to the front lawn
    a agni kai stadium
    i walked in and started stretching
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [1360]Dec 15, 2006
    • member since: 11/07/06
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    • rank: Thighmaster
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    yo and guys
    can u consult with me before you put me in an agni kai-.-
    that agni kai threw me off when i first read it-.-
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