Avatar: The Last Airbender: Avatar RPG*: Create your own Bender

Avatar RPG*: Create your own Bender

djdfire
[1201]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 12/04/06
level: 10
rank: Holy Level 10!
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Ariel started to run towrds the sound of the scream when the girl Ariel was fighting jumped in front of her, blocking her way.
"Move Azula", Ariel growled.
"No way Ariel" Azula said back with an unusually high pitched voice. Ariel stared at Azula??and pondered why she was using that high pitched voice. Then it hit her.
"You're not Azula are you? I bet you're not even a girl" , she stated.??
"Wow! Ozai was right you are quick thinker", the fake Azula said as he ran towrds Ariel. Furious, the waterbender summoned a huge that blocked all of the firebender's attacks and then sent the wave at him, increasing the wave's pressure so it would crush him??immediatly. After getting rid of the fake Azula she rushed to??find Kira so they both can try to help Jasmine.
Kira was dodging all of the projectiles thrown at her and sending fire projectiles of her own. When she relized that the other girl was getting weary, she rushed to end to??kill the girl when the girl almost stabbed her with a huge??needle. Kira then lost her balance and was almost killed until a huge wave came and crushed the other girl before her. Ariel then appeared out of the woods, running towards Kira.
"Hey Kira. I think that Jasmine??is in trouble and also you were fighting a man not a girl", Ariel said while leading Kira??towards her sister. Kira and Ariel found Jasmine fighting ten powerful firebenders and??a very agile girl. Jasmine was trying to fend off the firbenders while attacking the other girl. Kira and Ariel ran into the fight defeating most of the firebenders leaving Jasmine to fight the other girl. Jasmine??made huge icicles and threw them at??the girl, one narrowly missing the girls head. Ariel then??used a water whip and wrapped it around the other gir's legs??and slung her down to the ground.
Ariel then used another water whip and wrapped it around her neck and hung the girl from the tree.
"What is the Fire Nation doing here???", Ariel asked, tightning the hold over her neck.
'To capture you. That's what. Ozai has been tracking you ever since??you were banished. He wants??you to come back and help him win this war. Ozai only banished you because he knew it would make you mad and make you train endlessly??so you can defeat him. He's sorry about the death of??your mother and wishes you would come back so you can fufill your mother's destiny to help the Fire Nation rule over all??nations. He wants no needs you to come back home" the??girl answered.????
"Why are ya'll dressing like girls then", Ariel asked while she tightened the water slightly.
"Because we knew that you had an intense rivarly with Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai so we decided to dress like them to make you mad and capture you" the man said. Ariel decided that she had heard enough and choked the man out.
(After the fight)
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"So what are you going to do?", aksed both Jasmine and Kira. Ariel just looked at them deep in thought and had finally came to a decision.
"We'll go to the Fire Nation but first I've got a friend in mind that might help us", Ariel said wlaking toward the palace.
"Oh and by the way. We leave at midnight"
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crazyman321
[1202]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 10/21/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
posts: 4,264
lee(eartbender)
climbing on walls
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while climbing the walls on the side of the mountain i noticed a person on the side of the mountain meditating.i decided to keep my distance and stay hidden.then i noticed a large white creature fly over me,it landed on the other side of the mountain.i quickly climbed to the other side of the mountain to check it out.once i got over there i saw 2 familiar sights,i saw toph who is the person who beat me in a earth rumble tournament a few years back.i also saw the avatar,i knew it was him because someone told me it was a bald kid with blue arrows.i saw a few other people with them but i didnt know them.
i then noticed a few people a good distance away from the mountain coming this way(willy woo)"who is that and why are there so many people coming to this mountain"i said
to make sure that ohra would be ok while she was unconscience i made a hole in the ground where she was sleeping,i also got some glowing rocks and put her and the rocks down there,i closed the but i made some holes in random spots for air.after that i left the cave and started spying on the avatar and his friends
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vegnegun
[1203]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 12/18/05
level: 11
rank: Red Shirted Lt.
posts: 457
Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)
Rin was waiting by Scorch's side
Scorch had been on the ground and Rin had been waiting next to him.
"No Rin," said Scorch, "I'll break the news to the others." Scorch tried to get his feet under him and stand up, but ended up falling flat on his face and Rin laughed. "Hey, that's not funny." He tried again and was able to stand barely. "I'll go find someone to help you, okay?"
"Sure," said Rin. Scorch took a??stick lying on the ground and, using it as a cane, and walked into the temple's chamber.
"Hello!?" yelled Scorch, "is there anyone here? Aang, Sokka, Toph?" Scorch was having trouble keeping his balance. He finally fell to the ground.
"Ugh, what's with all the racket?" asked a feminen voice, it was Toph.
"Oh Toph, thank goodness you're here," said Scorch, "I need help. Rin and I are seriously injured, and I can barely walk. The same with Rin, she can't even stand."
"Okay, jeez," said Toph, "I'll find twinkletoes to help you two." Scorch tried again to get up and heard footsteps coming towards him. He looked up and saw Toph coming back with Aang.
"Scorch, have you seen Katara?" asked Aang.
"Er, that's actually a funny story," said Scorch, "let me explain. Those assasins that came here, they were looking for me. No doubt they were hired by my older brother. Anyway, they couldn't catch me. And, well, they're blackmailing me, or us, now."
"What are you saying?" asked Aang.
Scorch sighed, "they kidnapped Katara."
"They did what!?" exclaimed Aang.
"They kidnapped her," said Scorch, "and in order to get her back, I must go and turn myself in."
"Well, will you?" asked Aang.
"I have no choice," said Scorch, "but not now, we still have six days before we have to go. I need to recover and teach Rin some more firebending moves. Plus, I need to finish my buisness with the guru."
"Okay," said Aang. He helped Scorch up and onto a stone. He then went outside and came back in with Rin. It was already getting close to night fall, so he just dozed off and waited for morning.
Edited on 12/10/2006 8:22pm
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avatarforte
[1204]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 11/23/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
posts: 401
????Fang-Air-bender

-Training with Ami-

The rock wall cracked but helf its ground. I sighed and slumped to the ground. I had been focusing on how to increase the power of my wind blasts. However, I had only been able to make them a little stronger. "This wouldn't do", I thought. "I need to be able to break the ice without the air claw. That way, I could get closer to her and take her out". I looked over to Ami, was training in the small pool of water that was nearby. She was spinning the water, then firing it at targets. The water shotout quick and precise, nailing her targets dead on each time. It was amazing just to be near her. She was not only smart and strong, but was also beaufiful. She was almost perfect. And she had suffered, just like I had. I shook my head. "No, focus on the task at hand". Yet, I still turned to look at her again. But this time, I saw something I could use. "The rotation, hmmmm". I turned back to the wall and forced the air to rotate in the blast. I shot it at the wall and it drilled right into the rock. I smiled. I looked back to see Ami doing something similar to my air claw, but with water. She clawed a hole in the rock, the came over to me.

"Looks like we both learned something from each other". I nodded and then thought deeply. "Okay, we rest for one hour, then we practice the double-team." "Why do we need to learn how to tandem battle", she asked.

"Cause when we get back, we taking down that ice girl. And I've already figured out how to do it".

(Ami, take over the tandem-training part)
Edited on 12/22/2006 2:49pm
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crazyman321
[1205]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 10/21/06
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lee (earthbender)
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i continued to spy on the avatar for hours,every once in a while i go to the other side of the mountain and check orha the meditating man and those people far away
the medittating man was still meditating,ohra was still sleeping,and the people in the distance(willy woo)had setup their camp.i checked on the avatar and his friends again and i heard one of them talk about some interesting stuff(scorch)"WHOS THERE"toph yelled in my direction.she stomped her foot causing a rock under me to knock me off the wall,and i landed right in front of aang,scorch,and toph.
"i guess you found me" i said"yes we did"??toph said
"well well well if it isnt the blind bandit" i said in a confident voice"i havent seen you since you beat me at earth rumble 4."i remember you" she said,they use to call you??the landmine,you were one of my toughest oponents ever"
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we both got into our fighting stances and the fight began.i started off by throwing 2 rocks at toph,but she grabbed them both and threw them back at me.i dodged them went underground and tried to hit her from there,but she felt my movement and as soon as i came up she knocked me out the ring.
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"im not here to start a fight"i said in a kind voice i just want you guys to help me.i then explained to them everything that had happened to me so far.
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Vampdude69
[1206]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 09/25/06
level: 6
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Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master

Jax has just landed at the bottom of the cliff, and is too wounded to move
Jax couldn't move any muscles. He could hear the sound of a waterfall in the distance. He could sense vibrations of people moving.
"I...need....help!" he said.
He started to crawl, but that hurt. He tried to bend, but he could barely move a pebble on the ground.
He started to crawl some more, and fought through the pain. Ahead he could see two people, but his vision was blurred. He could tell he was about to pass out.
He kept crawling. He was losing it. He knew he was going to pass out.
One of the two was a waterbender, and a female. The other, he could remember, but didn't know right now.
"Help..................me," Jax said. His head fell on the ground, and he passed out.
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Ami, Fang, ur turn
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TheGreatAvatar
[1207]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 11/07/06
level: 4
rank: Thighmaster
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red death(master of fire and earth)(lao)
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cooperation of the civilians led us to the mounains of ba sing se
we walked foward and i saw willy woo making camp
i walked into camp as i noticed there were so little soldiers

i was allowed to enter the main camp in which willy woo was in

"since when did the fire nation start giving 10 men battalions?"i asked

he looked up and said
"never"
"rampage just killed off 30 of my men"

i looked at him
"well thats akward"

"since when did the fn start giving 100 men battalions?"he asked

"since..about yesterday"i responded smiling

"...well"willy woo said
"im glad you rejoined the fn"

"me too"i said

"there are 2 people up there"he said pointing to the mountains
"lee and orha"i believe

"you know them?"i asked

"no"he responded
"2 of my spies"reported it to me he said

i smiled

"well..im looking for them too"i said
"when are you gonna attack?"i asked

"when he leasts expects it.....now"he said

all of our soldiers stealthly climbed up the mountains
me and willywoo then saw a man carrying katara climb pass us
i looked at willy

"go get'em" willy said silently

i knodded
i chased the man ino a cave in the mountains
the man looked around as if he was looking for someone,
but then laid katara down and sat down next to her as if waiting or someone

"waiting for someone?"i asked

the man looked up in shock
"who are you?"he replied

"oh..im just a lieutenant of the fire nation army"i replied
"now what are you doing?"

"nothing" he replied
"im just giving this girl to rampage"he said

all of a sudden a voice came into my head
"remember your destiny"
"you are a prodigy it said"

in my thoughts i saw the sun again
it sent a swirliing mass of enrgy into me
i closed my eyes,
and when i opened them,
they were glowing orange

"release katara"i said

"what?"he said
"never"

he ran at me and rammed me off the mountain
we were slowly being cushioned from branches sticking out of the mountain before we hit the ground
we recovered and he sent a shock of lightning at me

"a lightning bender i see"i said
"well this is gonna be fun"

i ran at him jumping up and sending 2 quick shots of lightning at him

he dodged and said
"youre a lightning bender too?"

"yes i am"i replied

i then sent a wave of rocks at him
he was unexpected that i could earthbend and got hit in the chest flying into the air

he got up
"what the hell?"he said
"this isntpossible...youre a earth and fire bender?"

"you got that right"i grinned

he ran at me sending a gigantic wave of lightning at me as i created my own lightning barrier
bothe the wave and the barrier dissapeared on contact and i ran foward
just when it looked like i was about to strike,
i dug into the ground

he looked around frantically till i came out right infront of him and punched him straight in the face
he got up quickly and ran fowards?? straight at me sending 10 quick bolts at me
i dodged them, but the last 1 hit my shoulder

i ran foward quickly,
but as i ran foward,
my uncontrolled spirit inside me let go
my eyes turned back regular and i stopped

"what the hell?"i said

the man laughed
"not too powerful after all huh?"he said

i glared at him and ran foward again

this time he ran foward too and we both jumped into the air and clashed
we were striking eachother with hand to hand combat in the air
as we pulled our fists back to strike,
you could see sparks of ;ightning flying from our fists
creating a sort of ligh show besides the mountain

by this time, willy woo and his soldiers and my soldiers reached the top

we kept striking eachother with hand to hand combat until i kicked him in the guts
he fell back onto the floor and fell unconcious

right when i was about to move foward to check to see if he was unconcious,
he suprise attacked me,
sending an immidiate lightning bolt at me striking me in the chest

i fell back and he got up

he ran towards me and jumped up,
as if to stomp on me
but i quickly moved out of the way,
grabbed his fett and tripped him

we both got up at the same time and continued our hand to hand combat
Edited on 12/10/2006 7:51pm
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ThatLostGuy
[1208]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
level: 11
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Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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I walked out of the bloody nursery and said, "Kill number 21." By now, the villiage we attacked was destroyed. Fire was burning down buildings everywhere and my 10 soldiers were killing off the last of the remaining survivors. I roared, "Soldiers! This villiage is now under Fire Nation control." -
I looked up at a massive mountain that was nearby. I continued, "Come men. There are a few villiages on that mountain. We will climb the mountain and destroy the villiages. I beleive there are about three or four villiages on the mountain. Now, lets move!"
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My ten soldiers and I had been walking for a little while and I heard noises from up on the mountain (Orha, Lee, Aang, Toph, Sokka). Soon, Red Death and his 100 Fire Nation soldiers appeared out of nowhere. (Read post 1207)....
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Red Death disappered. I thought I saw him run into a cave. All of a sudden lightning filled the sky. Red Death's 100 men and my 10 men reached the top of the mountain. It was very windy out. The part of the mountain that all of us were standing on was filled with snow. I saw a bunch of Fire Nation soldiers slide off of the mountain, most likely to their death. I could barely see. I edged my way to the side of the mountain and I saw Red Death fighting some Lighting Bender.
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I looked at Red Death's 100 soldiers and I said, "If you are under the command of Red Death then go down the mountain and help him! This is an order. He is your commander and he needs your help!" One of Red Death's soldiers said, "But it is too slippery. We cannot make it." I roared, "GO! NOW! Climb back down the mountain and help your leader!" The 100 soldiers obeyed my orders and climbed down the mountain.
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I turned back to my soldiers and yelled, "WHAT! There are only six of you now. How is it that four of MY men fell off the mountain! Well men, lets go search for a villiage. I do not care for Red Death. He joined the Fire Nation, bah! Either Red Death is a copycat or a coward, just like I was! I hate Red Death now, and when he least expects it, I WILL CUT HIS THROAT!" One of my remaining soldiers said, "But he is a Fire Nation Leader!" I replied, "Yes, but at one point in his life he was against the Fire Nation. And he will die for that!" I didnt't tell my six men that I too was once against all Fire Nation citzens...From now on, every time I see Red Death I will lie to him and eventually I will kill him...
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I said, "Come men. Even though the Avatar and some escaped people (Lee) are here, I don't care. Lets go find some more villiages. I'm in the mood for some bloodshed..."
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avatarforte
[1209]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 11/23/06
level: 6
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Shido-Air-Bender(this is my brother's character)

Ba-Sing-Se was so boring. I walked down the familar streets which I had been traveling down for the past two years. I looked around to make sure no one was watching, then flew up into the air, using my cloak as a glider. For about a year now, I had been trying to find out anything about my older brother, who was said to be seen in Ba-Sing-Se. I noticed two fire benders moving throughout the town, so I flew down and hid from their sight. They quickly moved on, but more were right behind them. "Have the fire nation troops invaded the city", I thought. Hearing the fire nation troops coming closer to where I was hiding, I ran into the nearest house. Right into one very angry girl.
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TheGreatAvatar
[1210]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 11/07/06
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red death(master of fire and earth)
(lao)
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i was succesfully able to knock out the lightning bender cold

i returned to climb the mountain an returned to the cave
i untied katara,
but i suspected if i stayed there she would think i was her captor, so i threw a cloth over her, and climbed to the top

i reached a snow padded village and met up with my now 98 soldiers

"clumsy soldiers"i said
"dont slip off the damn mountain"

i walked fowards to find willy woo,
but i couldnt find him

"where did they go?"i aske dmy soldiers
they didnt know

"well..we'll wait until a village goes down with his blood thirsty soul"
"in the mean time...lee and orha..."i said

"yes sir"the soldiers replied

we marched along and bumped into lee

"well well well"i said
"if it isnt....lee"

"guys im sorry"
"his is getting tiring"
"i dont want to have to get chased by you people anymore" he said

i laughed
"it was time to choose your destiny...and youve chosen your destiny to be under the custody of the fn"i said

"never" he yelled

lee created a rock wall and started running
i calmly pushed the rock wall back down and chased with my 98 soldiers

we started firing consecutive fire balls at him
lee managed to dodge most of it,
but 1 fire ball struck him in the back and lee fell

me and my soldiers ran up to lee and were about to cuff him, but a slab of rock flew at me
i fell back and looked up

it was orha
"wait a second"i said
"i know you"
"tal-"

"no u dont"she interrupted

than orha picked up lee and ran away into the distance

a soldier came up to me and said
"do you want to chase them?"

"not yet"i replied
"i need to think"

"yes sir"the soldier replied

my soldiers and i turned around to see a village in flames
"well guys,looks like willy woo struck again"i said

we all walked foward and met up with willy woo
we started talking and setting up camp,
but this time, i saw something different in his eyes

when we all went back to our respective camps for the night,
i stayed up and alert
i felt something different

but while on guard,
i fell asleep

the sun reappeared and said
"watch out for those you believe are your friends"

i looked at the sun and said
"what?..what do you mean?"

but it didnt respond, and the sun dissapeared

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Kathleen2006
[1211]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 07/06/06
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Ami (Waterbender)
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I looked over and gasped in shock as I saw the guy that attacked Rin now barely alive on the ground
"Should we help him?" I asked Fang
"I guess so, he helped us" Fang replied, I could tell he wasn't really sure.
"Okay, could you help me" I asked as I tried to drag the stranger to the water
"Sure" Fang replied and we had him at the water's edge in no time and I began to heal his wounds
"Yesh, I think I'm gonna need more than an hour to recover after this amout of healing..." Ami sighed "this type of bending can leave me exausted"
Jax woke slowly
"What happened?"
"Not exactly sure, we were resting after doing some training and we found you" I said as I continued to heal the most severe injuries, the slight scrapes and stuff could be left till last
After about twenty minutes of healing
"Whew, finished, you should be as good as new..." I paused "I never caught your name"
"Jax, you?"
"Ami"
I could see hints of what I read as jelousy in Fang's eyes, but I wasn't sure that I was reading right... I left him be, this guy was just a patient and I was the healer, that was all that was between Jax and me and if Fang had a problem well that was his business not mine
I laid back against a rock to rest some
(Fang, I'm gonna pass the torch back to you and Jax)
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ThatLostGuy
[1212]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
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Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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I said to my 6 soldiers, "Look! I see a very small villiage over there. This should be an easy victory!" My 6 soldiers launched fireballs at the very small villiage. I ran into the villiage with my sword raised high. There were a few citzens standing in the street yelling, "Please! Don't hurt me!" I yelled, "Get on your knee's if you want to be spared!" Four people got on their knee's and I walked towards them. I whipped out my sword and cut off all four of their heads. I said, "Kill number 25..."
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My six soldiers finished burning the villiage to the ground and killing the few survivors. Then Red Death and his 98 soldiers appeared and Red Death and I briefly talked. All of us then set up camp for the night.
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I was in a tent by myself and I said to myslef, "Not yet Willy. I will kill Red Death, but not yet. Soon Willy. I just have to wait a little longer before I slit his throat, that basta*d. And soon all of my enemies will fall!" -
All of a sudden my tent opened and snow came at my face. I yelled, "Waht the hell. Close my tent." One of my soldiers said, "I'm sorry Commander Woo, but we have a visitor." Wicker, the man with the red mohawk, walked into the room. Wicker said, "Hello there scoundrel. I know your secret Willy. I know that you hate the Fire Nation!" I yelled at him, "No I don't! Not anymore. The old Willy hated the Fire Nation buyt the new Willy is a part of the Fire Nation. I am a Commander now!"
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Wicker laughed and said, "Okay whatever you say. I am a Commander now too! But, I was just ambushed. I was leading a fairly small group of soldiers near this mountain when I was attacked by Rampage and Savage. Dam them! Rampage was banished from the Fire Nation and now he killed my whole troop except for me! Willy, can I join your troop for a little while?" I replied, "Well, my troop consists of six men. But, sure lets make my troop seven men now. Wicker, you can join. So, we are friends now?" Wicker replied, "Yes but I will be watching you! If I see any funny business with you then I will kill you Willy! You and I have had a long past, and I personally hate you!"
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I replied, "Okay well I am a Fire Nation Commander now! I will not harm the Fire Nation anymore!" Wicker smiled and he shook my hand. In my head I knew that if Wicker saw me attack Red Death then he would surely kill me. So, I had to wait before I attacked Red Death. Or, I could just kill Wicker first...
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avatarforte
[1213]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 11/23/06
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Fang-Air-bender

-Just found Jax-

I sighed, "So much for being alone". Oh well, Jax could be useful, since he was up there longer and might be able to tell me and Ami what happened. I walked over to him and sat down. "One minute you're stuck to a wall, the next, your down here beaten and brusied. Not a good day for you it seems".

"Can I take that as a joke?" he asked me. I laughed. Finally, someone who understood my cracks.

"Sure. Now, what can you tell me about what happened up there?" He closed his eyes, thinking then started.

"Not much, I was out cold. From what I can tell, Scorch managed to change back but was beaten by the lightning bender, I was beaten down by the one who controlled sand and the the others bolted after they left. I managed to hear that they took someone hostage, but I don't know who." I thought this over, knowing that I would need the rest of the information to figure this out. A noise distracted me from my thoughts, and I turned to look at what it was. Suddenly, a group of bandits came out of the area behind us, chatting amongst themselves. They had already seen us, so there no point in running.

"Jax, was it? Protect her with your life, you got that?" Jax nodded and moved to guard Ami, who was weakened from healing him. I grabbed my sword and rushed them before they could process what was happening. I launched into the air and landed behind the guy in the back. A quick blast to his back put him down. By now, they had realized they were under attack and began to strike back. There were 10 of them in total, minus the one I had taken down. 6 moved in on me and the others went for Jax and Ami. I quickly dropped two more, knocking them out with wind slashes from my sword. Jax, in the distance, was taking them down with earth-bending. I sidestepped a lunge and brought my leg down on the back on the man's neck. He fell and the other 3 changed their mind, rushing for the weaker targets. I stopped another one, knocking him down with a wind blast from behind.

"Fang, get over here." I looked up to see Jax stumbling. Of course he wouldnt be 100%, he just got healed. I cursed, knowing I was too far to be of any help. I closed my eyes and focused on calling Exodus.

"Please Exodus, let me have the power to save them. Don't let her die". "As you wish". I felt the change happening again. I could see my hands, the nails growing longer. My hair shot up, ny teeth grinded together, turning into fangs. The power returned and so did the hunger. The hunger for death. I charged ahead, tearing the nearest bandit apart. He hadnt even hit the ground before I tore the next one apart with wind blasts. The remaining bandits turned, saw me, then grabbed Ami.

"Not another move or she loses her..... " he never finished. Jax nailed him from behind with a rock. I took the opprutunity and finished off the remaining bandits. I stood over their bodies, my blood boiling. It wasnt enough. I had to kill more. I looked to Ami and Jax, but I quickly looked away. "No, gain control, gain control". I tried but Iw as slowly losing it. I fell to my knees, screaming. I was going to lose it and kill them. Kill Ami. And there was nothing I could do.
(Ami, take it from here)
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AEtherBlue
[1214]Dec 10, 2006
member since: 11/23/06
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Talho - Earthbender
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Was last, jabbing at her arm protector with a metal rod.
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I woke up to the sound of explosions, I got up an looked outside, nothing there. I walked over to my door and I went over to open it.

Boom. the door came down and a child rushed in and ran into me. He fell to the ground and I looked down at him.

"Do you normally go into peoples houses un-invited?" I asked him with an angry expression. He just stared at me, I sighed and picked him off of his feet. "You know how much trouble the city is in right now?" I asked him. I carried him over to my couch. I sat him down, "What's your name little man?"

"My name is Shido, I'm looking for my big br-" He said as we where interupted by a fire nation soldier. he pointed over to us.

"You're tha-" I chucked a dampening bucket at him, knocking him over, I flipped my table over and kicked it to slide into him, I bolted upstairs and bended a rock wall to the staircase. I headed for my room and pulled open the door. I shoved him inside and closed it off. I ran over to the third room and kicked out the door. I pulled out an old bow and my battle fans, I folded them up and cliped them to a holder that goes on my back, I got out the quiver and ran back over to my room, the bottom of the stairs was blown open with fire I bolted past my rock barrier and bent it back, Shido was standing there, I rushed over to the corner and pulled out a coat, I trew him the bow and quiver and quickly put on the coat, I shoveled rockes into the pockets from inside my closet, I looked back at Shido.

"For luck." I told him. "Now come on!" I pulled him and we lept out the window, I saw the man come in just as we landed, I ran over to the side and started off a precation that was at the side of the house. It was a fuse going to my room. The man pointed at me and was about to yell something but then the explosives that i had wired went off and the room exploded, sending the man flying out of the window and into the yard, he was uncontiouse.

I pulled Shido up and we jumped the fence, we ran and ran, I jumped the inner wall to the lower parts of ba-sing-se. I looked around at some people in the alley we landed in. I pulled Shido to the side and we ran to another part of the lower ba-sing-se. We ran into a bar. I went up to the guy standing there, and asked him if we could sit down, he nodded and we sat at a corner table. We both calmed down and caught our breath.

"Whats your name?" He asked.

"Oh, I suppose I diddent give you my name yet." I told him, "I'm Talho. But more importantally, why where those fire nation soldiers in ba-sing-se? Whats happening with the dai-li?" I asked him. He diddent seem to respond. "I guess you don't know either. But it looked like they where chasing you. What did you do?"

"I diddent do anything, I've never even been here my whole life." He said.

"You must've done something, that guy had a look on his face like you where a monster." I told him

"Wait, I'm the monster? I think you are! How did you get us here so fast? As you where dragging me behind you. You must have SOME dark secrets to rig your house like that." He retaliated.

"I have no idea who's house that is." I said to him."I just woke up there. I dont even know how I got you that bow. Or these." She points to the fans on her back. "I keep on remembering these things but never knowing where they came from. But-"

"I'm looking for my brother. I was told he was here." he said.

"Whats his name?" I asked.

"I'm not sure, I just know he's like me." he responded.

"Alright." I got up."We wont be able to find him here." I said.

"30 gold sitting fee." I heard from behind me.

"Wha-" I turned around to find a fist in my face, It connected and I was flung to the wall. I looked up lying face down, "This guy was HUGE!" I thought. He came over and stepped on my neck.

"You got money?" He asked witha smile.

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chriz_festin
[1217]Dec 11, 2006
member since: 12/07/06
level: 1
rank: Weatherman
posts: 1
Name: Chriz John Festin Status: Air-bender Special move: Tornado Blast, Air Force Fields, Flight Height: 5'10" Age: 15 Gender: Male Weight: 126 Eyes: Brown Hair: Black Personality: A down to earth smart guy who helps damsels in distress. He can make powerful air waves to help his nomads to defeat the evil fire nation.
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Kathleen2006
[1218]Dec 11, 2006
member since: 07/06/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
posts: 76
Ami (Waterbender)
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Afraid wasn't close to the way I felt as I watched Fang turn into his spirit form and destroy the bandits that attacked us. I feared what might happen if he couldn't control the power. I could have screamed as he turned to me.
"Fang... Fang please you have to stop this... Fang... I... I love you, but I hate to see you this way" I cried "Fang come on you have to come out of this or you'll do something you'll regret"
I watched him as he slowly slipped out of the strange form and to normal... he passed out to the ground after that.
"Fang" I whispered and ran to his side I wasn't sure if he had heard what I said. I cradled his head in my arms as tears of fear came to my eyes "You shouldn't have evoked the spirit, you can't control it yet" I whispered as I rested his head on my lap "Fang, wake up" I turned to Jax "Jax, here" I pulled the water skin off and handed it to him... "Fill it with water for me, now!" I orderd
"Are you sure your up to it"
"I have to be up to it, it's the only way he can be saved"
Jax did as I had asked him, but as he returned Fang woke
"Don't worry about healing me" he whispered "I'm not hurt bad enough to warrent you wasting your streingth on me" he whispered
"Fang..." I choked out his name "... your a fool" I cried
"But you still love me" he replied "just as I do you"
"You heard me... you moron!"I laughed slightly
He gave me one more kiss and said "Am I still a moron"
"You beat ten bandits single hadedly by using your spirit power recklessly, yes your still a moron..." I paused with a cheeky smile "... but your my moron!"
He laughed weakly
"Get some rest, it's late, we can train in the morning" I sighed
"Goes and goes the time goes on we are not alone
we'll live on together and we will find some precious things
sometimes we'll wear smiles sometimes we will cry sometimes
Don't forget believe in yourself tomorrows never die" I sang barely above a whisper the way my mother did when I didn't feel good or was sad. I watched him fall asleep and I could help but smile, the old song still worked I watched as Jax stood there, he started to speak but I quieted him by putting a finger to my lips then pointing out Fang as he slept, my lap, his pillow
"Okay" Jax whispered "I take it you don't need this"
"Yes, we might get attacked again, and I'd rather not be caught without any water to bend"
"Okay, now what?" Jax asked
"Now we rest, we can find the others in the morning when it's light out, it'll be easer to see where we're going then"
"Okay"
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I know I ripped the lyrics off of the English translation of "Every Heart" I can't write a song. Just to make it clear for the people out there who are hatters, I don't own that song (happy?)
Edited on 12/11/2006 10:26am
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Novoxy
[1219]Dec 11, 2006
member since: 12/10/06
level: 7
rank: Talk Show Host
posts: 1,514
still no keyboard... but im gonna get one maybe tonight.... im gonna write a little...
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Nickpick
[1220]Dec 11, 2006
member since: 08/20/05
level: 35
rank: Beverly Hillbilly
posts: 8,261
Lucas (Firebender)
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*Lucas Breaks Down A Door And Sees All The People Hiding All Together*
Lucas: Where Is He
*People Shake There Head (No)*
Lucas: I Said Where Is He
*They Keep Shaking There Head No*
Lucas: So Be It
*Lucas Walks Outside And Burns The Building They Are In Down*
Lucas: AGHHHHHH
*Lucas Wakes Up*
Lucas: Again Not Again
*Lucas Gets Up And Gets Dress And Walks Outside And Sees The Big Fire Nation Flag*
Lucas: Damn You
*Lucas Leaves And Enters The Woods*
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