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    ThatLostGuy

    [581]Nov 25, 2006
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    Ummmm Vegnegun did you read all the posts since last night??? Becuase Fang already left you two...So, read the posts and edit your story...
    Edited on 11/25/2006 11:32am
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    Rin-tori

    [582]Nov 25, 2006
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    avatarforte wrote:
    Ure telling me, people are begging for this to happen it seems.

    Scarily like Zutara. oO;;
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    vegnegun

    [585]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rampage (Gigantic Axe)

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    Rampage had just lost again to the new trio, Scorch, Rin, and Fang.

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    Rampage and Savage returned to their ship after their defeat.

    "Why does this keep happening?" asked Rampage, "we have every advantage against them and we still keep losing to pack pack of lonely refugies."

    "We're out numbered," said Savage, "and I had to fight a completely different enemy: an air bender."

    "Air bender?" asked Rampage, "hmm, Captian, set a course for Ba-Sin-Sa."

    "Why there?" asked Savage.

    "I figure that's their target destination," said Rampage.

    ---Later that night---

    "Ah, perfect, the serpant's pass," said Rampage, "we're almost there..."

    "Sea serpant spotted!" exclaimed the captain.??

    "Forget about it," said Rampage, "look!" They saw a burst of fire in the distance and knew that it was Scorch.

    -----A few minutes later---------

    Rampage and Savage were getting close to shore, when the serpant spotted the ship and disappeared. The ship docked on the shore and felt the air was still hot. Rampage told the captain to stay in open water to prevent from being spotted. Rampage and Savage were alone now and made their way toward Ba-Sin-Sa.

    Edited on 11/25/2006 11:57am
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    avatarforte

    [590]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rinkoto Fang-AirBender

    -Just seperated from Scorch and Rin to handle some buisness in town.-

    He had been flying for only about an hour before he reached Ba-Sing-Se again. Quickly picking up the scent of the blacksmith, I turned towards it, almost jumping for joy in seeing what my sword would look like. I was so into the idea of what it would look like, I almost missed the guy that was jumping beside me.

    "Hey there, how's it going", the young man said. Taken by surprise, I crashed into a roof, bounced off and managed to stop myself from crashing into the ground. "Ow, ow, ow, gotta learn to pay more attention to what I'm doing". Looking up, I saw the man standing before, his eyes almost analyzing me. "Uh, hi", I said.

    "Hi, my names Red Death. What's yours? Are you really an airbender? Are you the Avatar? Where did you come from?" The questions just flowed outta his mouth.

    "Woah, calm down man. Its nice to meet you too. And to answer your questions: my name is Fang, yes I'm an airbender, no I'm not the Avatar and from a small Earth Nation village named Hiyodo. Now you wanna tell me why your so eager about meeting me?" Before he could answer, I picked up what sounded to be a fight, coming from the direction of the blacksmith's scent. "Nevermind, something's happening to the blacksmith, I'm going to check it out. Coming?" He nodded and we sped off towards the scent.
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    vegnegun

    [592]Nov 25, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Scorch and Rin began to make their way to Ba-Sin-Sa


    Scorch and Rin had been running for about 20 minutes, when Scorch had to stop.

    "Scorch, what's wrong," asked Rin.

    "Too... tired," said Scorch, "must... rest." He fell onto the ground from exhaustion. After a few minutes of resting, Scorch slowly began to stand up and saw that Rampage and Savage were getting closer. "That's it! I'm tired of running!"

    "What?" asked Rin, "your joking right? Please tell me your joking."

    "No, if we don't make a stand now, they'll get into the city." said Scorch. Scorch and Rin waited for Rampage and Savage to get close.

    "So, you've finally decided to stop running, eh?" asked Rampage. "Normally, I would give you the chance to surrender, but..." He drew his axe, "I don't feel like wasting the time." Scorch made fists and Rin tried to light fire in her hands, but the flame immediately retreated to Rampage's axe. "Ha, quiet an interesting artifact, this axe. Able to absorb all fire with ease." He began to laugh histerically.

    "I think I've already proven to you that I don't need fire to kick your ass, Rampage," said Scorch. Scorch lunged at Rampage, and Rampage knocked him down with his fist. Savage charged at Rin, with open claws. Scorch recovered from the attack and jumped up to Rampage and grabbed his neck, pulling him down to the ground, putting him in a headlock. Rampage stood up and grabbed Scorch with his massive hand and threw him against a cliff wall. Scorch fell to the ground, gasping for air, when he heard Rin scream. He looked up and saw her??stomach was covered with her own blood.

    "RIN NO!" exclaimed Scorch. He felt his body lose control of itself and Scorch black out.

    "What is that?" asked Savage as he covered his eyes. Scorch's body began to glow red, like a ruby, and was encased in a crystal shell that began to crack. The shell bursted into a million pieces, to reveal that Scorch had turned into the very thng that Kujo had warned him about: Pyro, the Great Fire Dragon. It was massive, standing a half foot over Rampage. It's head??and??neck was encased in a red, shining metal shell. It stood on its two massive hind legs and had two short arms, each with four black claws. It's wings were massive as well, spanning over 15 feet, with claws at the end. And last but not least, his tail. Nearly makeing the length of himself 1.5 times longer than its body alone, It had a massive three taloned claw at the very end. It screeched into the air, forcing Rampage's axe to turn steel gray, as opposed to its normal red.

    "What is that thing?" asked Rampage. Pyro breathed a long stream of fire at Rampage, forcing him to move out of the way. Savage attempted to make a back attack, but Pyro swung his massive tail at him, smashing him against the canyon wall. Savage moaned and attempted to lift himself up, but was unable to. Rampage got up, and boy, he was PISSED. He swung his axe at Pyro's back, but Pyro whirled around and grabbed the blade of the axe with his mouth, grabbing it, then tossing it aside. Rampage looked at Pyro and slowly walked away, back toward the serpants pass. Pyro began to glow ruby read and a large light filled the area and when it cleared, Scorch was standing there.

    "Rin!" exclaimed Scorch. He ran over to Rin and saw that Rampage and Savage were gone. He held Rin in his arms. "Rin, Rin! Please, you have to wake up."

    She opened her eyes, "I don't blame you..."

    "No! This is all my fault!" He picked up Rin in his arms and flew to Ba-Sin-Sa, not caring about the wall's guards.??He found a medical center and they patched her up. Scorch was sitting next to her bed, crying. Rin slowly began to wake up.

    "Are your crying?" asked Rin, "that seems kinda childish, don't you think?" She laughed, but then coughed.

    "Rin, we can't travel together anymore," said Scorch, "I didn't want you to get hurt... But you did... And, I just can't risk it again." (Rin, go ahead and take it from here!)

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    ThatLostGuy

    [593]Nov 25, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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    Tank and Glide (two black brothers from the circus) just said they would help me find my friends. What I didn't know was that they were secretly working for the Fire Nation as spies for Spike, Bulldozer, and Mayhem....
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    The three of us set off in search of Orinth, Rexsten, Hevet, and Red Death. I had no idea where to look. I was asking random people I have never met and soon enough I was given a sign. I looked up into the sky and from right above me I saw Red Death and an air bender soar from roof-top to roof-top. I yelled to Glide and Tank, "I just saw Red Death. Hurry up. He went this way!"
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    We began to ran through small alley-ways and pushing down people and garbage cans. We were hopping walls and soon enough we couldn't find Red Death. But, we did know the general location he was in. I was now standing in a big street and I saw Scorch flying and??holding a wounded??Rin. I was going to attack but I said to myslef, "Scorch! your time will come after I find my friends." Tank said, "Did you just say something? Do you know that tall fellow and that girl over there?" I replied, "Ummm yeah I know them." Glide said, "Are they a part of your team?" I answered, "No no no. Don't worry about those two."
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    We continued searching houses and soon enough we ran into a man who said he knew Red Death. The man's name was Dahat (Talho's friend). Dahat said, "Yeah. I know Red Death. He is over at my friend Talho's house." I replied, "Oh thank you Dahat. I really appreciate it. Can you take us to Talho's house?" Dahat responded, "Sure, no problem."
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    Dahat began leading Tank, Glide, and I to Talho's house.
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    ***I won't be on again until tonight. When I come home tonight I expect a good fight. As of now, like everyone is going to Talho's house or is already there. Also, I expect someone to include Hevet, Rexsten, and Orinth in the RPG again (they are in the house of Talho's neighbor).***

    Edited on 11/25/2006 1:17pm
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    ThatLostGuy

    [594]Nov 25, 2006
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    Okay I will be back later....I just edited my last post a little to fit Vegnegun's most recent post...be back later..
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    AEtherBlue

    [595]Nov 25, 2006
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    Read Death - FireBending-EarthBending
    (Note: I'm posting for TGA because he is curretally grounded.(And I can't wait any longer T_T))
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    After witnessing what Talho had did so much better than I could even though I had mastered EarthBending, I was struck. "How old was this Talho person?" I asked myself."Wait, did she call me Novice? Damn her. Well, whatever. I don't care what a poor blacksmith thinks of me anyways. Time to get down to some real training."

    I started to move some rocks when Talho sppeared at her window. "Whats this girl doing now?" I asked myself. She started undressing and I looked away."Damn, doesent this girl have modesty?" I asked myself. I looked back at the window and she was gone."Good at least she diddent notice me when I was looking. She should really learn to close her window, especially when there is a guest in her backyard." She suddenly appeared in the window again, this time she had no shirt. The rock droped and I caust it befor it hit the ground."Godddamnit! Doesent she realize there is an OPEN window right next to -" I was interuped in my thoughts.

    A man fell from a the hole I made in the neighbors wall. "Damn, it's that dead guy. I better leave before she sees him, I dont exactly need that kind of attention right now." I thought to myself. I lept onto the roof and towards the east untill I passed an inner wall, "Damn, this place is HUGE." I thought to myself. I noticed the AirBender I had met a wile back and decided to follow him.

    "I have some questions for him" I said.

    I lept the building untill I cuaght up with him. "Hey," I said.

    Edited on 11/25/2006 1:30pm
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    vegnegun

    [596]Nov 25, 2006
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    Holy crap, here's a few pics of Pyro (can't believe how dead on some of these are)

    Hope these help....

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    Rin-tori

    [597]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Scorch and Rin just got attacked by Rampage and Savage. Rin got hurt badly and Scorch took her into the city to recover.

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    "No, I don't want to leave you alone like that. I just don't..." She told him.

    "I can't watch you in danger because of me. I'm sorry, but it's too dangerous for you to stay with me any longer." Scorch said.

    "You don't understand..." She coughed.

    "I don't want to leave you." She continued. "We're a team and we're there for each other, and I don't care if that means I'm in danger. I'll be okay. I'm worried about you, because if you're by yourself...I don't want to think of what Rampage could do..."

    "No! I don't want to see you hurt again."

    "Scorch, listen to me. You think you have it so damn hard...but you need to let people care about you. If I get hurt, then it's for a good reason."

    He couldn't think of what to say.

    Edited on 11/25/2006 1:41pm
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    vegnegun

    [598]Nov 25, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Rin was trying to convince Scorch no to leave her.

    "And what reason would that be?" asked Scorch, "just because I want to see this??useless war end? Yeah, this seems really fitting."

    "No, that's not it," said Rin, "Scorch, please, I'm begging you, don't leave me. You're the only person that I've ever..." She coughed again, "Please, Scorch , don't leave me." She sat up and reached for him. Scorch got up and moved to her bed side. Rin lunged for him and hugged him, refusing to let go...

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    Rin-tori

    [599]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Scorch just told Rin it was too dangerous for her to be around him.

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    "I don't want you to leave, Scorch. I'm worried about you." Rin said, in desparation.

    "I don't want to see you hurt again. I'm sorry..." Was all Scorch could say.

    "If you leave, you'll be hurting me even more." She pleaded.

    Scorch remained silent.

    "I only worry about you because...because I'm in love with you." She said, finally. She was about to cry.
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    AEtherBlue

    [600]Nov 25, 2006
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    Talho-EarthBender-Blacksmith.
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    Just attacked Orinth and Havet in believing that they killed my neighbor. Unseeing rexton who had been pushed out the window as I was going up the stairs.
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    "I dont know who you are, but we just got here." Orinth said.

    "And killed my neigbor" I told him back. "I dont need kids like you just comming around and destroying my life."

    "We diddent do that!" Havet interupted. I swung around again and launched the weights into the wall again.

    "Shut up. You know there no way that you could have just wound up in a dead guys HOUSE!" I said.

    "I'm not a KID!" yelled Orinth, he jumped up and slammed his foot against the floorboard I used to lift him. Nothing happened.

    "You shut up too!" I yelled. I kicked up the floorboard again but Orinth dodged.

    "How come you murderers think I would just beleive you?" I yelled.

    "There telling the truth Talho" A voice came from behind me, I turned around and I saw something I was'nt expecting.

    "Rexsten, what're you doing here?" I said. Rexsten was standing at the bottom of the staircase.

    ~~~~~~~~5 Years ago~~~~~~~
    *Boom!* A small firecracker went off, "Whoa, how'd you make that?" Rexsten asked.

    "I founds some black pwder in my dads workshop. He was using it to make a brand new weapon to fight against the FireNation with. So I just wrapped it up" I said in return and smiled.

    It was summer in a village of earthbenders just south of Ba-Sing-Se, I was trying to help my dad pack for our big trip to the city.

    "Dad, you need any help packing these things?"I asked

    "No." He replied, "Your just a little young. Why dont you go practice some EarthBending over there with your freind? I'm sure he'd like to see it since he'll only be here for a day or two more."

    "No, I want to help you pack!"I said back in defyment.

    "Tell you what, how about you go work on your new sword untill we are done packing." He replied.

    "But I'm not good, It's al bent awquardly and misshaped." I said.

    "Awquard, wow, when did you get suck big words Talho?" He joked.

    "I'm not a kid anymore dad, I do know english." I said.

    "So you do." He replied handing another box to a man in the carrage. Rexsten was looking in our shop and examining the sword I had tried to Smith.

    "Wow, this is cool. Did you make it?" He asked me.

    "Yea. Do you like it? You can have it if you'd like." I responded.

    "Really? Thanks!" He told me in return. "I'll always keep it with me."

    We went off and played in the feild, I showed him some more tricks I could do with the black powder and some EarthBending as well. Soon it was dark and my father called out to me.

    "Talho! Lets go!" He called. I told my goodbyes to Rexsten and then hoped in the back of the carrage.

    "Where are we going?" I asked my dad.

    "To a new life." Said my dad.
    ~~~~~~~~Flashback End~~~~~~~~

    "Rexsten, what're you doing here?" Stunned and paralized by old memories.

    "Just put down the weights, I need to talk to you." He said with a distant and unforgiving look on his face as he stared at the floor. He never made eye contact.

    "Sure." I said. I took the weights out of the wall. Dust crumbled onto Havets shoulder as they dislodged.

    "Sorry," Rexsten said,"I lost your sword."
    Edited on 11/25/2006 9:14pm
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