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    AEtherBlue

    [621]Nov 25, 2006
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    AEtherBlue wrote:
    Eman5805 wrote:

    Damn...over a hundred posts since I last came in here...I'm so friggin lost I don't know what to do...and btw my guys name is spelled Rexsten(although it is pronouced as Rex-ton) and he isn't what you would call a nice guy...selfish like a mofo and only cares about himself



    Sorry, ... but I either made your charicter a villain or dead >.>... and I will fix his name.


    Actually i might just be against you if Rexsten had survived the explosion... I just needed to have some link to the other charicters and since you've only been on here a hundred or so posts ago it was a little hard to ask you... sorry >.>
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    Eman5805

    [622]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 11/05/04
    • level: 14
    • rank: Autobot
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    Actually I'd pefer its the latter...cuz since I've been out of the loop so long I don't know what to write so I'm working on making either a Waterbender or a Firebender...I'm gonna try some ideas out but I officially turn over the fate of Rexsten to whoever wants...you want to kill him? go ahead...you want to make him a villian...go ahead

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    vegnegun

    [623]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 12/18/05
    • level: 11
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    ??Scorch & Rin have been betrayed by Fang, and were taken captive onto the ship
    ??

    Savage had just thrown Rin and Scorch into a cell, leaving Scorch unrestrained.

    "Rin, I'm glad your alive," said Scorch as he hugged her, "I thought you were dead."

    "Why?" asked Rin.

    "I overheard somepeople talking about someone dying," said Scorch, "it sounded like it was you."

    "Well, as you can see," said Rin, "I'm fine." She hugged Scorch back, "Now, melt these bars."

    "I can't," said Scorch.

    "Of course you can,"?? said Rin, "just..."

    "NO!" exclaimed Scorch, "look." He tried to fire bend. "Its probably that stupid axe of Rampage's."?? He walked behind Rin.

    "What are you doing?" asked Rin.

    "Well, I may not be able to melt anything, but at least I can make this more barable for you," said Scorch. He broke the chains around Rin's wrists.

    "Thanks," said Rin.

    "Why'd you come after me?" asked Scorch.

    "I told you," said Rin, "I love you." She hugged him again.

    "Hey, even though I can't fire bend," said Scorch, "you still can! Try to melt these bars." Rin??inhauled then exhauled, releasing a strong fire??on the bars. They didn't melt, but they were red and looked bendable. Without hesitation, Scorch grabbed the bars and bent them to make an opening big enough for??them to escape. He let go and his hands were extremely burned.

    "Are your alright?"??she asked.

    "Ah, its just a flesh wound," said Scorch, "lets get out of here."????Scorch and Rin ran out from the jail room and up into a hall and ran through them, coming up on the deck, met by Rampage and Fang.

    "Just as predictable as ever," said Rampage, "Fang, nows your chance to prove your alliance to the fire nation. DESTROY THEM!" Rin stepped forward.

    "I'll fight you," said Rin, "Scorch, you've saved my ass enough times this week. Now, its my turn to save yours!"

    Edited on 11/25/2006 5:21pm
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    Vampdude69

    [624]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 09/25/06
    • level: 6
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    Jax: Earthbender and broadswords master


    Jax has just snuck onto Rampage's boat, and is about to confront the the firebenders


    Jax had waited for long enough. He stood up and opened the door of the storage compartment. He walked upstairs, and he saw an old, soggy map on the ground. They were blueprints of the ship.
    "Ah ha!" he said. He picked them up.
    "If that firebender was captured, he would be in the prison area," he said. He followed the map, and found the stairs leading to the cells. He walked up the stairs, and saw the man with the axe again. And there he was...the firebender!

    But, a man with a sword, was facing off against that girl. He ducked his head down so they couldn't see him.

    That firebender in the back, he can't bend! I'd know that look anywhere. But the bars on the cell are melted. The girl is also a firebender...

    He hopped back up the stairs, and took out his dual broadswords. He pushed the boy with the sword aside.

    "Step back, the firebender is mine!" he yelled.

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    vegnegun

    [625]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 12/18/05
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    Rampage (Gigantic Axe)


    A man had just confronted Rin and Fang
    ??

    "Back off," said Rampage to the boy as he sent a large fire ball toward him, "this is their fight." Rampage began to walk toward the boy, holding his massive axe. "Fang, take care of the girl. Your mine!" Rampage swung his axe at the boy, but the boy rolled out of the way and jumped over Rampage, slashing his back with a sword. Rampage turned around and punched at the ground, missing the boy but denting the ship. The boy lunged at Rampage, but Rampage threw a fire ball at him.

    "You're a??Fire Bender?" asked the boy (Jax), "then prepare to die!" He swung his broad sword and Rampage, but Rampage grabbed it, pulled the boy in, grabbed him by the shirt, and threw him over board. He turned around and saw that Fang and Rin were finished and Fang was walking away. Rampage threw his axe on the hull in front of Fang.

    "Finish it," said Rampage.

    **(Rin, avatarfotre, make a min story for Fang vs. Rin)**

    Edited on 11/25/2006 5:33pm
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    vegnegun

    [627]Nov 25, 2006
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    AEtherBlue wrote:
    Forte shares his comp so he wont be posting for a wile. Sorry, just found that out now..(The fact he had to get off.)

    Well, I guess I'm depending on rin-tori to make the mini vs thingy...

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    Vampdude69

    [628]Nov 25, 2006
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    Jax: (Novice Earthbender and Broadswords Master)


    Jax has just been thrown overboard, and has learned Rampage, Rin, and Scorch are firebenders


    Jax landed in the water, and put his broadswords in his sheath. He cursed at himself.
    "I've failed!" he yelled. The ship moved farther and farther away, until it dissapeared over the horizon.
    "I'm so stupid, why didn't I just kill those people when I had the element of surprise!" he said.

    "Because you are not a masterful bender yet," someone said.

    Jax turned around and he saw a man standing on a huge rock.
    "Who are you?" Jax asked.
    "I am a master earthbender, and I want to help teach you Earthbending," he said.

    "All right," Jax said. "But on one condition."

    "What is it?" he asked.
    "I need to learn quickly to catch that ship. I have some unfinished buisness with those firebenders.

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    vegnegun

    [629]Nov 25, 2006
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    *Awkward Silence*
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    Rin-tori

    [630]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 08/26/06
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    I HATH RETURNED!!!

    *ahem* I'll start on that fight now.
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    vegnegun

    [632]Nov 25, 2006
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    AEtherBlue wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:
    "Finish it," said Rampage.

    **(Rin, avatarfotre, make a min story for Fang vs. Rin)**

    "Finish it," said vagnegun.

    who's vagnegun? is he the one sending me"questionable" material?

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    Eman5805

    [633]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 11/05/04
    • level: 14
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    ? (Waterbender)

    A stranger walks the streets of Ba Sing Se.??The criminal element was ever present in the lower rings. Ready to prey on whoever was foolish enough to venture out of the safety of their homes at night. The stranger walked slowly and silently. The midnight blue robe concealing the stranger's face. Quickly, the stranger was not alone. Three men stepped out of an alleyway in the stranger's path. The stranger stopped, head down with face hidden. Only one was armed, two hammers hung at who apparently was the leader's side.

    "Looks like we've got ourselves a newcomer, boys," the gruff voiced leader said. "Welcome to Ba Sing Se, it's awfully dangerous to be walking alone at night. Isn't it??boys?"

    "You bet it is, alone, in this city, many don't make it out alive," one of the leader's stooges answered.

    "Fortunatly,??we're in the business or protecting newcomers like you. All for the low price of 20 gold pieces. How about it stranger? Don't make the mistake of turning down our generous offer if you value your life."

    The stranger said nothing. The leader got impatient. "Hey! Maybe you didn't hear me, but if you know what's good for you you'll accept our offer."

    More silence from the stranger.The??leader growled and??stepped forward. "I've lost my patience, stranger." He reached for his hammers.

    The stranger's head raised slightly revealing his mouth.??"Do you know??of a man named Zhang Yu?" The stranger suddenly asked.

    The leader stopped. "What? Zhang Yu?"

    "You do not know." The stranger spoke as if stating a known truth. "Then, I hold no reservation." The stranger turned around and began to walk away.

    "What does he think he's doing?" the other stooge asked.

    "You dare turn your back on me?!?" The leader said, furious, and charged hammer's drawn-

    As suddenly as the attack began it ended. The stranger had turned around and stopped the leaders attack by placing his hand on the leader's chest. The leader was a still image. As if turned into a stone statue. Stopped in his tracks by the stranger's hand. The leader's eyes were wide with shocked. He couldn't move, save for twitching. The stanger was controlling him.

    The leader's stooges, before cooky and sure were suddenly afraid and cowardly. They both slowly started backing away? "What in the world...what's wrong, Chief?"

    The??stranger's arm??swung from the leader's chest and the??leader spun on his heal, swinging his hammer. He caught stooge #1 flush on the forehead, with a sickening crack. The man was dead before he hit the ground.

    Stooge #2's instincts were on his side. He ran back down the alley he came from-

    The stranger's arm swept in the direction the man ran and the leader flung his hammer at the man. It toppled end over end,??nailing stooge #2 in the back of the head. The handle hit first and sunk into the man's skull. The stooge fell forward and rolled several feet before coming to a rest.

    The leader grunted again as his body straightend to stand upright, at attention. His body trembled more trying to resist the stranger who just made him kill his comrades.

    "I could smell the blood on those hammers. You and your men have killed before,??but I decided to let you go.??You persisted.??But, you're heart is hard and cold.??If that is??how you choose??to live,??then I shall indeed make your heart cold. All debts repaid." The stranger walked away, raised one arm, and clenched a fist.

    The leader regained control of his body, but he instantly felt something moving inside his chest. His chest was cold. And getting colder. The leader tried to scream for help but his lungs were shriveling. His body??in??immense pain and??getting cold.??

    All at once he knew: his blood, it was freezing. Darkness slowly enveloped him. He fell to his knees, energy seeping away. The pain was fading. As was his heart beat. The leader, who had terroized people in Earth Kingdom villages for protection money and killed all those who refused, lay freezing from the inside out. His heart beat...thump.......thump............

    The last thing the leader saw was the??fading figure of the person who killed him. The woman in the dark blue robe....

    Edited on 11/25/2006 7:51pm
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    Rin-tori

    [634]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 08/26/06
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Just challenged Fang to a fight.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "I can't believe we trusted scum like you!" Rin yelled. "It makes me sick that people like you even exist!"

    "Rin, come on, it's just business. I'd rather be on the winning side in this deal and actually get something out of it. Don't be mad, I'm just calculating in my actions." Fang said.

    "You traitor!" She charged at him with a barrage of fireballs, but he blew them away with his airbending easily. Rin forced fire into her feet to speed her movement and dodged his air blasts, and swept his feet out from under him. She threw a wave of fire over him, but he blew it back at her and forced a jet of air at her. She slammed into the railing of the ship. After regaining her balance, Rin was angrier than ever. She rushed towards him, but he grabbed her hands before she could attack at close-range. Startled, she remembered her first fight with Rampage. She breathed in heavily and sent a blast of fire from her breath. Fang fell back and stumbled to get up, but Rin was ready to attack.

    "All right, I give." Fang finally said. Rin only looked at him in contempt. "I know when my fight is over. I surrender." He put his hands up pitifully.

    "Get up. Slowly." Rin hissed. He stood up and noticed Rin was looking over at Scorch and Rampage, and saw an opportunity. He charged at her and kneed her in the gut, effectively knocking her out. She didn't black out right away, and slumped to the ground. Fang proceeded to walk away to get to Rampage.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Does that work? D:
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    vegnegun

    [635]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 12/18/05
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    Eman5805 wrote:

    ? (Waterbender)

    A stranger walks the streets of Ba Sing Se.??The criminal element was ever present in the lower rings. Ready to prey on whoever was foolish enough to venture out of the safety of their homes at night. The stranger walked slowly and silently. The midnight blue robe concealing the stranger's face. Quickly, the stranger was not alone. Three men stepped out of an alleyway in the stranger's path. The stranger stopped, head down with face hidden. Only one was armed, two hammers hung at who apparently was the leader's side.

    "Looks like we've got ourselves a newcomer, boys," the gruff voiced leader said. "Welcome to Ba Sing Se, it's awfully dangerous to be walking alone at night. Isn't it??boys?"

    "You bet it is, alone, in this city, many don't make it out alive," one of the leader's stooges answered.

    "Fortunatly,??we're in the business or protecting newcomers like you. All for the low price of 20 gold pieces. How about it stranger? Don't make the mistake of turning down our generous offer if you value your life."

    The stranger said nothing. The leader got impatient. "Hey! Maybe you didn't hear me, but if you know what's good for you you'll accept our offer."

    More silence from the stranger.The??leader growled and??stepped forward. "I've lost my patience, stranger." He reached for his hammers.

    The stranger's head raised slightly revealing his mouth.??"Do you know??of a man named Zhang Yu?" The stranger suddenly asked.

    The leader stopped. "What? Zhang Yu?"

    "You do not know." The stranger spoke as if stating a known truth. "Then, I have no futher use for you." The stranger turned around and began to walk away.

    "What does he think he's doing?" the other stooge asked.

    "You dare turn your back on me?!?" The leader said, furious, and charged hammer's drawn-

    As suddenly as the attack began it ended. The stranger had turned around and stopped the leaders attack by placing his hand on the leader's chest. The leader was a still image. As if turned into a stone statue. Stopped in his tracks by the stranger's hand. The leader's eyes were wide with shocked. He couldn't move, save for twitching. The stanger was controlling him.

    The leader's stooges, before cooky and sure were suddenly afraid and cowardly. They both slowly started backing away? "What in the world...what's wrong, Chief?"

    The??stranger's arm??swung from the leader's chest and the??leader spun on his heal, swinging his hammer. He caught stooge #1 flush on the forehead, with a sickening crack. The man was dead before he hit the ground.

    Stooge #2's instincts were on his side. He ran back down the alley he came from-

    The stranger's arm swept in the direction the man ran and the leader flung his hammer at the man. It toppled end over end,??nailing stooge #2 in the back of the head. The handle hit first and sunk into the man's skull. The stooge fell forward and rolled several feet before coming to a rest.

    The leader grunted again as his body straightend to stand upright, at attention. His body trembled more trying to resist the stranger who just made him kill his comrades.

    "I could smell the blood on those hammers. You and your men have killed before.??I can heard in your voice your cold heart. Then, I shall indeed make your heart cold. All debts repaid." The stranger walked away, raised one arm, and clenched a fist.

    The leader regained control of his body, but he instantly felt something moving inside his chest. His chest was cold. And getting colder. The leader tried to scream for help but his lungs were shriveling. His body??in??immense pain and??getting cold.??

    All at once he knew: his blood, it was freezing. Darkness slowly enveloped him. He fell to his knees, energy seeping away. The pain was fading. As was his heart beat. The leader, who had terroized people in Earth Kingdom villages for protection money and killed all those who refused, lay freezing from the inside out. His heart beat...thump.......thump............

    The last thing the leader saw was the??fading figure of the person who killed him. The woman in the dark blue robe....

    WTF, dual personallities? I know I have one, but, do you have permission from TLG? If not, ask before posting again. This is cleary stated in the rules

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    Eman5805

    [637]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 11/05/04
    • level: 14
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    Dual personalites? oh no no no...I've relinquished control of Rexsten...the story has changed??a lot??and was getting away from the core character of Rexsten(he was originally supposed to be an untrustworthy??selfish brute)??so much that I decided it was better to not even bother fighting it and just let that story continue without my prime input, and instead I'm putting my focus on this new character...unless that isn't allowed...
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    AEtherBlue

    [639]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
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    Nvm he will post asap.
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    Rin-tori

    [640]Nov 25, 2006
    • member since: 08/26/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 377
    "Your arm's off!" Cried Rin.

    "It's just a flesh wound." Said Scorch.
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