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    avatarforte

    [601]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rinkoto Fang-Airbender

    -Just meet Red Death and was going to the blacksmiths-

    "That scent, it couldn't be", I thought to myself. Slowing down, I landed and took a deep breath. "Nah, there's no way, they are looking for me". Taking a deeper breath, he noticed wht smelled like blood. "No, don't think that, there's no way. Hope you guys are okay, especially you Rin," I said sliently to myself.

    "Is something wrong", Red Death asked me, staring at me with a look of curiousity.

    "No, its nothing. Come on, we're almost there." With that, we took off again towards the blacksmith's, hoping to discover what was happening.
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    vegnegun

    [602]Nov 25, 2006
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    General Scorch


    Rin had just revealed her feelings for Scorch

    "What did you say?" asked Scorch.

    "I love you!" exclaimed Rin, "please, don't leave me!"

    "I'm sorry," said Scorch, "I'm gonna try to find Fang. But I'll be back." Scorch left Rin and ran toward the center of town looking for a blacksmith, hoping he would find Fang too. It was starting to get dark out and Scorch gave up and began to head back to the hospital. He was almost there when he heard two women talking.

    "Did you hear about the girl in the hospital?" asked one woman.

    "Yeah, its a shame," said another. "A young man brought her in, but they couldn't do anything to save her."

    "What?" muttered Scorch to himself.

    "Poor dear, she had to go like that," said the woman. Scorch had heard enough and ran behind another building and began to rise into the air.

    "Rin, I will avenge you," said Scorch. He flew out of the city to find Rampage.

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    Rin-tori

    [604]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Scorch had just left.

    ??~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "So that's it? It was all a waste?"??Rin asked herself.

    She was crying now, but she was thinking in desparation what to do.

    "That's it...I'll go and find him." She told herself.

    Rin??was too exhausted to move, and had lost a lot of blood. She fell asleep.

    Edited on 11/25/2006 2:48pm
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    avatarforte

    [605]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rinkoto Fang-Airbender

    "Whats this", I thought. I saw what looked like appeared to be EarthBenders fighting. "Wonder why her scent seems to be here. Red Death,were going down." He nodded and we went in for a landing. I should of known this was going to turn out bad, but guess I didnt think too hard on the matter. Soon I would find myself in the biggest fight of my life.

    Prepare yourselves, we got something big about to go down. I have to go for a little bit, but I'll be back later, so dont go to far ahead please.
    Edited on 11/25/2006 2:57pm
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    vegnegun

    [606]Nov 25, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    ??Scorch had just left Ba-Sin-Sa to find Rampage and Savage

    Scorch had been flying for a few minutes and saw the figures of Rampage and Savage.

    "Rampage," said Scorch to himself, "she's gone! And its all because of you!" He encased his body in fire and rushed down toward Rampage, knocking him down and burning his back. He then set his sights for Savage and charged at him before the axe took effect on his bending. He knocked Savage over, also burning him. The axe finally took effect, forcing Scorch's fire armor to to disappear.

    "A bold move, Scorch," said Rampage, "daring to come and face me and Savage, one on one."

    "More like two on one," laughed Savage.

    "You killed her!" exclaimed Scorch as he whirled around and Savage before lunging at him. He tackled him and pined him on the ground. Scorch felt Rampage grab him by the neck, laughing histerically.

    "You are such a hypocrite," said Rampage, "you say that emotion is your greatest weakness, and yet that's what your using right now. Scorch saw that his hands began to glow ruby red and did not black out this time.

    "What, what's happening to me!?" exclaimed Scorch. This??transformation process was, in fact, very painful. Rampage was??forced to let??go.

    "Not again," said Rampage, "Savage, retreat!" Rampage and Savage ran for their lives, not knowing what was behind them. Scorch had just transformed into Pyro again and flew towards them. Scorch??couldn't believe the power he was feeling (due to the fact he is now??aware of everything that's happening as apposed to last time). He charged at them and grabbed Rampage with the claw at the end of his tail. He held Rampage to his face and roared at??him.

    "I should be thanking you," said Pyro, "without your treachery, I wouldn't be as powerful as I am now! Allow me to thank you!" He hurled Rampage agains a cliff wall, knocking him out cold. Pyro looked at Savage next and flew towards him, cutting off his way of escape. He breathed fire at him, but Savage ducked and tried to stab the beast in the gut with his claws, only breaking them like glass. Scorch was about ready to finish Savage off for good, when he felt the axe attack his back. Pyro turned around and roared at Rampage, emitting a bright light. He lunged at Rampage takcling him on the ground. He felt a strong gust of wind hit him in the chest, pushing him away from Rampage.??Pyro landed and looked up and saw Fang with a familiar figure in the air. Pyro reverted back to Scorch. Fang landed with Rin, and Rin stepped between Scorch and Rampage, sticking her arms out, signaling them to stop. Scorch tries to go near Rin, but feels a power inside him and a black flame comes from Scorch and goes to Rampage. Rampage breaths out and fire comes from his breath.

    "No, Rin, watch out!" exclaims Scorch as he??tries to fire bend, with no succuess. "What,??no!" Fang walks up to Scorch and whispers in his ear. Fang knocks??Scorch over, holding a long, thing sword to his throat.

    "Lord Rampage, I have captured the traitor," said Fang.

    "Look whose talking," said Scorch.??

    "Hmm, intersting," said Rampage, "what do you want?"

    "Merely to serve under your greatness." said Fang.

    "Well, I do like your resume`," said Rampage, "Savage, take the girl captive and restrain Scorch. You, come with me." Rampage took the three, including the traitor??Fang, back the his ship.????

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    vegnegun

    [607]Nov 25, 2006
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    AEtherBlue wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:

    General Scorch

    Rin had just revealed her feelings for Scorch

    "What did you say?" asked Scorch.

    "I love you!" exclaimed Rin, "please, don't leave me!"

    "I'm sorry," said Scorch, "I'm gonna try to find Fang. But I'll be back." Scorch left Rin and ran toward the center of town looking for a blacksmith, hoping he would find Fang too. It was starting to get dark out and Scorch gave up and began to head back to the hospital. He was almost there when he heard two women talking.

    "Did you hear about the girl in the hospital?" asked one woman.

    "Yeah, its a shame," said another. "A young man brought her in, but they couldn't do anything to save her."

    "What?" muttered Scorch to himself.

    "Poor dear, she had to go like that," said the woman. Scorch had heard enough and ran behind another building and began to rise into the air.

    "Rin, I will avenge you," said Scorch. He flew out of the city to find Rampage.

    Noooo! not RIN, you bastards!!! You killed off rin!

    I think you mean: Oh my god! They killed Rin! You Bastards!

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    Rin-tori

    [608]Nov 25, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:
    AEtherBlue wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:

    General Scorch

    Rin had just revealed her feelings for Scorch

    "What did you say?" asked Scorch.

    "I love you!" exclaimed Rin, "please, don't leave me!"

    "I'm sorry," said Scorch, "I'm gonna try to find Fang. But I'll be back." Scorch left Rin and ran toward the center of town looking for a blacksmith, hoping he would find Fang too. It was starting to get dark out and Scorch gave up and began to head back to the hospital. He was almost there when he heard two women talking.

    "Did you hear about the girl in the hospital?" asked one woman.

    "Yeah, its a shame," said another. "A young man brought her in, but they couldn't do anything to save her."

    "What?" muttered Scorch to himself.

    "Poor dear, she had to go like that," said the woman. Scorch had heard enough and ran behind another building and began to rise into the air.

    "Rin, I will avenge you," said Scorch. He flew out of the city to find Rampage.

    Noooo! not RIN, you bastards!!! You killed off rin!

    I think you mean: Oh my god! They killed Rin! You Bastards!


    ...
    WTF just happened?
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    Rin-tori

    [610]Nov 25, 2006
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    Uhm...did Fang just kidnap Rin? Your post left meh teh conf00zed. D:

    Edit:

    Gah, I'll be back in an hour??or so.

    Edited on 11/25/2006 3:26pm
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    vegnegun

    [611]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:
    Uhm...did Fang just kidnap Rin? Your post left meh teh conf00zed. D:

    I left that up to avatarforte to decide. I never said how/what/when/who/why/where.

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    Rin-tori

    [612]Nov 25, 2006
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    vegnegun wrote:

    Rin-tori wrote:
    Uhm...did Fang just kidnap Rin? Your post left meh teh conf00zed. D:

    I left that up to avatarforte to decide. I never said how/what/when/who/why/where.


    The polls shall tip in our favor. Muahaha. XD

    j/k.
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    vegnegun

    [613]Nov 25, 2006
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    Rin-tori wrote:
    vegnegun wrote:

    Rin-tori wrote:
    Uhm...did Fang just kidnap Rin? Your post left meh teh conf00zed. D:

    I left that up to avatarforte to decide. I never said how/what/when/who/why/where.

    The polls shall tip in our favor. Muahaha. XD j/k.

    Mwuhahahahahahahaha.... doubt it.

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    AEtherBlue

    [614]Nov 25, 2006
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    Talho-EarthBender-Blacksmith.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I just met rexton for the first time in 5 years
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    "What?" I asked.

    "I lost your sword. I said." Rexsten replied. He was now at the top of the stairs.

    "Ooh, thats ok. I can make you a new one. I am actually alot better now." I told him.

    "How come you left me there?" Said Rexsten.

    "What do you mean?"I paused."Werent you supposed to go back to you village with your parents anyways?" I replied.

    "My village was attacked by the FireNation. There where no more parents to come pick me up! I had no one." He said in a loud tone. I droped my weights to the floor. Now completely un-understanding the situation.

    "What you mean they where killed?" I asked.

    "THEY WHERE DEAD!" He shouted at me, stareing at the ground. "They left me behind that day just as you had. I've had nothing for so long, and now that you just appear out of nowhere, it's just..."

    "Wait a minute, you came out of nowhere on me! I did nothing wrong."I said.

    "Exept attack me and Havet here. Oh, and called me a kid." Orinth said.

    "Shut up." Me and Rexsten said in unison.

    "I just dont think I'm-"*BOOM, boom, boom, BOOM.* Explosions came from my house.

    "DAD!" I yelled out and jumped through the hole in the wall.

    "Talho!" Rexsten replied after me.

    I ran and jumped the fence, I headed inside through the front, there was a guy standing there at the door, I recognized the face, it was a soldier from the FN battalion I was in,

    "So, this is where you lived? Nice place you got here." He smirked, "Hope you dont mind the visit."

    "A voice came from inside the shop, hmm nice crftsmanship you have here. How much for your sword young lady?" Another smirk came from the guy inside the shop.

    "I'm not selling anything here. What was that niose jsut a wile ago?" I announced.

    "Oh, that? oh we found some interesting evidence, but since you where one of us, we decided to just get rid of it in the fire in the room overthere, but when we got there we saw someone sleeping. Damn did he ever wake up fast! He kept ranting stuff like, "My daughter would never do something as horrible as that!" and stuff."The man said.

    "You basterds!" I said, "Where's my dad."

    "We thought it was funny that you diddent tell your dear pappy about us, so shocked in fact I just snapped. Dont worry tho, he's not dead. we just tied him to the tree in your back yard. he'll be fine and long as it doesent catch fire or anything." He laughed.

    The commander could be seen in the background pouring oil onto the tree.

    "Don't!"I yelled and ran towards the door, the man at guard stoped me, I pulled away from him and steped on his foot, probably breaking it. The guy in the shop threw down the sword and ran over to me. they both grabbed me and flung me to the floor, the wood cracked underneith my weight. The two men held me down.

    "Oh, my how heavy you are! Wahts this? Training weights?" One of them opened up the tie on the ancke of my pants and the weights fell out."Wow that's lots, what could you be training for? It couldent be for something so trivial as to attack our trou-" He was interupted by me trowing him off of me, he was lunged into the air ans he hit the wall.

    "Hey!"Said the other man. He was a big one. I kicked up into his crotch and he was lonched into the roof. I quickly got up and ran straight for the door, when I got out, the commander was standing there pointing a finger to the uncontiouse man tied to the tree.

    "Whoa, what you think your gonna do? You dont want your father crispier than the coal in the smithing fire." He said.

    I stoped, "What do you want from me?" I asked.

    "It's simple. Just be out little slave untill we get tired of you... then I'll let your dad go free. I've seen your BlackSmithing skills, I'd like you to make wepons for the Fire Nation, Orha... or, wait. Should I say Talho?"He gave a big grin.

    "I dont think she can do that for you." A wall of earth surrounded my father, "She still has to have her talk with Rexton here." Orinth said standing in the gaping hole of the house next to mine.

    "Damn," He said then flung a filreball at Orinth, Orinth got hit in the head and was nocked into Hevet, both where uncontiose, I ran inside the shop and grabbed two grand sabres. I let myself fall into the ground and I spouted up behind the commander, I took a swing at him but he dodged doing a role, my sabre hit the rock on the tree. I lept into the air and tried to slice him down the middle but he blasted me with fire, I landed and took off the collar I was wearing. He had burnt my pants, one of my suspenders had come off. I swunf my swords arounf my body and cut the other one loose, hte heavy pants fell to the ground, I jupmed out of my boots at him, he could barely catch my movements and I had jabbed him in the side, He moved his hand over and blasted my stomach with fire. I lost grip of one of my swords as I griped my stomach. He picked it up and swung at me, he lit it on fire and mealted hot meatal onto my skin, it burnt me and I lost grip of the other sword. He quickly kicked me then listed me by my shirt.

    "You cant beat FireBending, little girl. Maby I'll chop off your pritty little legs and have you work with stumps for me?" He said with a grin. He put the sabre up to my leg and pressed it, I started bleading. I shifted my hand towards the wound at his side, he threw me to the ground.

    "I suppose women can fight dirty too." He said. I pointed my finger to his side once again, "No, no. you cant reach me from there child you have to get a little clos-" He stoped. I moved my hand to his right and his side exploded. He screamed in pain and clutched his missing side, he rolled on the ground as I got up.

    "I suppose you can feel the grains of sand in your blood by now." I looked down at him with bloodlust in my eyes. I stomped on his wound and he screamed. I smiled."I hope your having fun cause I am." I said in a low voice. I pointed an open hand to his right arm and I moved it to the side, the arm tore off in a bloody mess. He screamed again, this time he fell uncontiose from pain. "Aww, your no fun." I said to him. I pointed my hand back at his head. A seccond passed then suddenly his head exploded. Leaving blood everywhere. I stopped and turned towards Rexsten who was kneeling at the hole in the wall, as I walked the disfigured corpse behind me sunk into the sand. leaving no trace of the body, Rexsten looked into my eyes as though I where evil.

    "What is this? Why is my body doing this? I cant stop myself!" My mind was trapped inside a body that wouldent respond.

    (3 rd person)
    ~~~~~~~~
    Even though Rexsten hadent heard her inside her own mind he knew what she was saying. He lept down from the hole and took talho into his arms, she was still trying to walk towards the house, but rexton held her tight.

    "I knew you I shouldent have given this to you." He reached for an armor connected to her arm, as soon as he touched it a shock wen through his body and he was flung backwards. Her mind blanked out.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Minutes later.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    (First Person)
    ~~~~~~~~~
    I woke up to see Rexsten standing beside my father staring at the ground. "Rexsten what're you doing?" I asked. He looked up at me with a happy expression. I smiled back, "So, we won?" I asked. He just stood there smiling at me,

    "You leave me for five years than steal my most preciuse item??". My smile faded.

    "What do you mean?" I asked.

    "You stole that," he pointed to my arm. I looked down at the fore-arm protector I had on.

    "But, I thought it was a gift." I said to him.

    "It was but I wanted it back, but it diddent let me even touch it! It is stuck to you! I knew I shouldent have given it back to you!"

    "If you want it back here you go!" I said I gripped for the latch but I couldent find it. I tried to pull it off of my arm, but it wouldent budge."I just can't get it off right now but if we go back into the shop I'm sure dad can get thi-". I looked up and saw one of my bomds in his hand. It was lit. "What're you going to do with that? Rexsten? REXSTEN!"

    "Goodbye Talho." He dropped the bomb to the ground and it made a fizz as the whick went into the bomb, it hit the ground and exploded.

    "Rexsten!" My voice was drowned out by the explosion.
    (To be continued, I need a break. tell me if it need editing.)

    Edited on 11/25/2006 5:06pm
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    Vampdude69

    [616]Nov 25, 2006
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    my post with Jax will be a little late, it will be when Scorch fought Rampage.
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    vegnegun

    [617]Nov 25, 2006
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    Well, just looked at the polls...

    AND now it seems I might have to choke a B**ch (as said by Wayne Brady) *crys* can't believe how far I've fallen.

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    Eman5805

    [618]Nov 25, 2006
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    Damn...over a hundred posts since I last came in here...I'm so friggin lost I don't know what to do...and btw my guys name is spelled??Rexsten(although it is??pronouced as Rex-ton) and he isn't what you would call a nice guy...selfish like a mofo and only cares about himself

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    Vampdude69

    [619]Nov 25, 2006
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    Jax (Earthbender and broadswords master)

    He left his house, and saw firebenders

    -----------------------------

    Jax left his small house waving to his aunt. He had his broadswords with him as usual. He liked to sneak up to the top of the Outer Wall just to get the guards mad. He reached the ladder where it led up, and he climbed. He looked up, and he saw someone flying out of the city.

    Who could that be? he thought to himself.

    He finally reached the top of the wall, when he looked out, and saw a firebender fighting two men. One had a huge axe.

    "Firebenders," he said. His face turned angry, and trying to earthbend, he made a very crooked, but useful staircase out of the city. When he reached the bottom, he saw a girl, and the firebender. He saw them being carried off to a ship.
    "Serves that firebender, to be captured. But that doens't equal to what they've done to me," he said. He thought of hurting that firebender.
    "I'll show him," he said. He ran towards the boat, and stowed away in the storage compartment.

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    AEtherBlue

    [620]Nov 25, 2006
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    Eman5805 wrote:

    Damn...over a hundred posts since I last came in here...I'm so friggin lost I don't know what to do...and btw my guys name is spelled Rexsten(although it is pronouced as Rex-ton) and he isn't what you would call a nice guy...selfish like a mofo and only cares about himself



    Sorry, ... but I either made your charicter a villain or dead >.>... and I will fix his name.
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