Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
| Dafoose wrote: |
| I agree with darkboy. They're a great cast and all, but we've got our own cast of charcters here. (Actul killing. |
Of which there is an assured abundance for as much entertainment as possible.
After all, Ridge just killed a guy with a pebble.
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: | ||
Of which there is an assured abundance for as much entertainment as possible. After all, Ridge just killed a guy with a pebble. |
made a bigger descision, no more main characters after last chapter "Book 1 Chapter 3" for my series until the second to the last episode where one of them guards something and dies. Which is brutal.
Book 1 Chapter 4: The Middle of Somewhere
Characters: Ryan Gaia and Suta-Shutaru
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-The Next Morning-
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I didn't go to sleep that night. I had so many questions for the Avatar, I was leaving my Master Sokka, running off to god knows where to find a murderer. I had a lot on my mind if you could imagine. The sun shown brightly through the windows and I put on my pants then my shirt and stretched. I rounded my already packed side bag over my shoulder and headed out towards the main hall. Halfway there Shutaru joined me. "Morning." she quietly yawned, obviously she was not a morning person. She no longer had the face paint on but normal clothes which didn't bother me, but looked weird I guess. "My father has been preventing me from having any boyfriends from the time I was 14. Yet he lets me run off with you without thinking twice. You must be really trustworthy." "Yeah your father is a very strange man, I spent nearly four weeks alone with him and I kno-" "No you weren't alone, we were watching you and him the entire time to make sure you weren't going to attempt anything." "Gee thanks." We approached the gates where Master Sokka awaited. He and Sukki were about to burst into tears and gave both of us big hugs, love, and their wishes. "You want to head northwest until you get to the desert. Make sure you get nice and lost, it'll be the only way to draw out your next master, he will teach you to control your earthbending and make its reflexes as quick as Zuko's lightning." Although I questioned what he said I remember everything he has taught me: how to read maps, fighting styles to enhance my earthbending, patience, and how to think like a warrior. We walked onwards to fulfill my families closure.
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-Traveling-
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"There is somewhere we must go before we decide to get lost. I was in a pub last night surfing the locals for some info and apparently the Black Rose society struck a temple somewhere on the out skirts of the Fire Nations main land. I'm pretty sure they didn't take on that fortress without a couple of them dieing or at least being injured. We should check and then from there move out into the desert" Suta-Shutaru nodded with agreement and I must admit I love the fact that during this entire journey she has only complained once about our destination and it involved going through a fiery, gassy, volcano turf that I immediately agreed upon. I think that she really understands how much capturing Kamome was to me. Farther and farther we traveled. We didn't talk much unless we were setting up camp and getting ready for our lookout shifts at which point we could barely stop talking. On the third day of our departure from Kyoshi we came upon the fortress that had been a battle ground upon three days prior.
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-The Black Rose Society-
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Dead people with pikes running through them everywhere. A giant rose made out of a black eternal fire blazed upon the side of the castle. Truly horrific. "Well, well, what do we have here boys?" we turned around with haste and noticed three men with vines tattooed all up their arms to their foreheads with a heavy black and maroon rose on the forehead. "They're from the BR society" I whispered. "Obviously what do we do?" In order for someone to be a black rose they must be able to bend. They raised their arms and was about to push out fire but I was too quick for them. I created a sinkhole for me and Suta-Shutaru to escape in. I covered my tracks but one of them was apparently a decent Earthbender because they lifted Suta-Shutaru right out of the ground. "NO!" I screamed and jumped out of the ground bringing everything with me. I created a sphere of rocks so no flame or Earth could hit me. I coiled my fists and coiled the Earth around the Earthbender holding Suta-Shutaru and snapped his neck before he had time to react. I was different now. I could feel it. I looked down at my hands and they were twitching as were the muscles up my arm. I slid my right foot to the right creating a wall in front of me as the firebender struck. His fireball was completely pathetic. I created two cone like spears out of the wall and launched them at the two guys as Suta-Shutaru returned behind the wall with me. Straight through their faces. The pikes had blood trickling down them and Suta-Shutaru clutched my chest and cried. "They were going to kill both of us Suta. I will not let anything happen to either of us until I get the chance to face Kamome."
"Here's your chance then." I spun around and their stood what looked to be like a very powerful leader in the black rose committee. "Do you know Kamome?" I said. "Know him? I am him! Ahhhahahahaahah. Foolish boy comeback to end the Gaia family line?" he cackled "You don't stand a chance against me, I am the original, legendary, creator of the Black Rose Society! No mere weak, young, untrained Earthbender with a vengeance is going to hurt me!" he yelled. "I will kill you! Aaaaaaaah!!!!" And with a my muster that I had I gathered the sphere once more. This time he was going to die. The spikes were formed now for the aiming. Then the sphere broke and I was launched many feet back. My last glimpse of life? My last thought? "Orion!!!!" No Suta-Shutaru I won't let you down. I created a sphere once more and burrowed into the Earth. We ended up on some island thousand of miles away from where we were. The town's hospital brought me in and begin treating me. My vision was blurry and I could barely move. They couldn't sedate me because of the nervous system they were cutting at. I looked down and my right arm and right side of my chest was covered with a dieing out black fire. Like the fire on the castle wall. I gasped for air and in doing so coughed up my own blood. I think I am going to die.
Khuzo, mercanary
Ridge, archer
Reika and Shungo
Ba Sing Se
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Khuzo was dreaming. Something like dreaming didn't happen to Khuzo very often, but when it did, it was generally about past events, as if his brain couldn't just live it once. It had to relive it, over and over again. He groaned, causing Reika to lift her head up and look in his direction. She had been out for some time. Reika wondered what someone like Khuzo could possibly dream about.
In his head, he saw battlefields, he was back in the battle again. Fire Nation stood before himin waves, hundreds, against his tiny, resource starved tribe. It was a typical raid, but the Fire Nation soldiers were far from their usual, ferocious selves. Seeing something far more horrifying than itself could cause even the angriest, biggest animal to shirk in fear. Around him, his friends and family stood, weapons raised. The soldiers ahead of them were hardly pushing forward. There at least 400 strong, against 30 tribesmen. Hardly an even fight. As the drums sounded, his father took the charge. Khuzo led behind him, and the enemy cavalry rushed forward.
Ridge walking in awoke Khuzo from his dream and he tipped his hat up. They looked at eachother, and Ridge nodded at him. Khuzo tipped his hat back down, but Shungo almost kicked down the door with his arrival. Khuzo jerked up and looked around.
"Oh, sorry Khuzo," he said. He was carrying new, clean clothing.
"I got stuff for us, I figured you guys were OK."
Khuzo looked down at his clothing. It smelled, was filthy, and in all Khuzo smelled like a thick combination of blood, sweat, and dirt. Perfect.
"Yeah, I'm fine."
Ridge grunted to show his approval of his current atire, and Khuzo shifted himself up completely.
"So, when are we leaving?" Reika asked in a stuck up manner.
"Soon. Daylight is coming. Don't see any reason to hold up for much longer. All we have to do is get out of here without being noticed and we're good. But since you're both POWs, you're probably wanted, so we'll have to try and sneak out."
"We could wait until nightfall again."
"Not happening. Itami is probably scouring the city for me, and believe me, once he finds me, and he will, even here, if he wants to truly seek me out, it won't be pretty."
"How will he find our location?" Shungo asked.
"Pointless murder, rape, horrific sadism, rape, torture, rape, violent raids, more rape, mass murder, and probably more rape."
"Why did you list rape so many times?"
"Because I'm talking about Itami, here."
"...You come from a very odd family..."
"The funny thing is that he wasn't always like that. I don't have any clue what happened to that insane freak."
"Maybe he was just...always that way..." Shungo said.
"...Maybe. Anyway, The Twelve supposedly consist of twelve people, so we don't want to stay in one location for long. Such a group probably has contacts. Staying in one place for any extended period is a very dumb idea."
"What will you two do?"
"Well, I have contacts, so I'll use them and we'll try and kill all these Twelve guys."
"That sounds kind of...dangerous?"
"Dangerous? Dangerous is taking on Dai Li agents underground. Dangerous is taking on three waterbending masters at one time in the north pole. Dangerous is taking on other mercanaries like me. That's dangerous. This is somwhere about eight levels above dangerous."
"Yeah, no kidding. Wait, did you just say taking on three waterbending masters in the north pole?"
"Yeah, why?"
"How is that even possible?"
"Anything is possible."
"I don't know who I'm safer with anymore," Reika said cooly. "If I stay with you, we're likely to take on every bender alive, if I stay with Itami, he rapes me repeatedly and takes me to have my head cut off. I can't see who I'm safer with."
"Well you don't have to worry about that, now do you? You're both going home."
Reika managed to change her clothes after Ridge removed her restraints but made sure no local water was present. Then he locked her in a small room to get dressed. After an hour of fussing about, Khuzo strapped on his swords once again and put on a heavy cloak he stole from another room. It masked his appearance perfectly. He pulled the hood over and then tipped his hat down onto his back. Ridge snagged another coat of similar proportions and the kids blended in pretty well with typical Earth Kingdom clothes. As they left, Khuzo kept his weapons hidden.
Marching through the city streets, Khuzo could hear an explosion and women screaming, clear signs that Itami was indeed scouring every possible location in existence in Ba Sing Se for Khuzo, and clearly taking time to make sure he wasn't at any place where a single woman was, and very clearly enjoying himself. Gusts of fire were heard and another explosion, followed by screaming. Guards ran through the streets, a mix of Dai Li and Fire Nation, and then some, ran to see what the commotion was. Khuzo went in the opposite direction. Blending in with the people around them was easy enough, and Khuzo kept Reika infront of him with her hands bound.
They passed over a large river and stood above it on a bridge.
"Just keep walking, Reika, unless you want me to carry you out of here. It'd be terrible for this Earth Kingdom heat to "get to your head." How embarrassing it would be, for me to have to pick up the dainty girl and carry her about."
"You pig," she answered, and she did nothing. They finally reached an exit leading to a long country road. After an hour of getting through, they crossed out into the country. Khuzo pulled out his old map that showed where to meet Hitan. He learned that it wasn't far from his his own home, but that didn't matter. Khuzo led the kids to a wagon and rented a ride. He had to get the forests where he had been hired. Ten miles from his home was a location marked very discretely for their meeting.
It was time to end this and get started with killing the man who had destroyed everything Khuzo held dear.
| -TheSecondSign- wrote: |
Khuzo, mercanary Ridge, archer Reika and Shungo Ba Sing Se --
Khuzo was dreaming. Something like dreaming didn't happen to Khuzo very often, but when it did, it was generally about past events, as if his brain couldn't just live it once. It had to relive it, over and over again. He groaned, causing Reika to lift her head up and look in his direction. She had been out for some time. Reika wondered what someone like Khuzo could possibly dream about. In his head, he saw battlefields, he was back in the battle again. Fire Nation stood before himin waves, hundreds, against his tiny, resource starved tribe. It was a typical raid, but the Fire Nation soldiers were far from their usual, ferocious selves. Seeing something far more horrifying than itself could cause even the angriest, biggest animal to shirk in fear. Around him, his friends and family stood, weapons raised. The soldiers ahead of them were hardly pushing forward. There at least 400 strong, against 30 tribesmen. Hardly an even fight. As the drums sounded, his father took the charge. Khuzo led behind him, and the enemy cavalry rushed forward. Ridge walking in awoke Khuzo from his dream and he tipped his hat up. They looked at eachother, and Ridge nodded at him. Khuzo tipped his hat back down, but Shungo almost kicked down the door with his arrival. Khuzo jerked up and looked around. "Oh, sorry Khuzo," he said. He was carrying new, clean clothing. "I got stuff for us, I figured you guys were OK." Khuzo looked down at his clothing. It smelled, was filthy, and in all Khuzo smelled like a thick combination of blood, sweat, and dirt. Perfect. "Yeah, I'm fine." Ridge grunted to show his approval of his current atire, and Khuzo shifted himself up completely. "So, when are we leaving?" Reika asked in a stuck up manner. "Soon. Daylight is coming. Don't see any reason to hold up for much longer. All we have to do is get out of here without being noticed and we're good. But since you're both POWs, you're probably wanted, so we'll have to try and sneak out." "We could wait until nightfall again." "Not happening. Itami is probably scouring the city for me, and believe me, once he finds me, and he will, even here, if he wants to truly seek me out, it won't be pretty." "How will he find our location?" Shungo asked. "Pointless murder, rape, horrific sadism, rape, torture, rape, violent raids, more rape, mass murder, and probably more rape." "Why did you list rape so many times?" "Because I'm talking about Itami, here." "...You come from a very odd family..." "The funny thing is that he wasn't always like that. I don't have any clue what happened to that insane freak." "Maybe he was just...always that way..." Shungo said. "...Maybe. Anyway, The Twelve supposedly consist of twelve people, so we don't want to stay in one location for long. Such a group probably has contacts. Staying in one place for any extended period is a very dumb idea." "What will you two do?" "Well, I have contacts, so I'll use them and we'll try and kill all these Twelve guys." "That sounds kind of...dangerous?" "Dangerous? Dangerous is taking on Dai Li agents underground. Dangerous is taking on three waterbending masters at one time in the north pole. Dangerous is taking on other mercanaries like me. That's dangerous. This is somwhere about eight levels above dangerous." "Yeah, no kidding. Wait, did you just say taking on three waterbending masters in the north pole?" "Yeah, why?" "How is that even possible?" "Anything is possible." "I don't know who I'm safer with anymore," Reika said cooly. "If I stay with you, we're likely to take on every bender alive, if I stay with Itami, he rapes me repeatedly and takes me to have my head cut off. I can't see who I'm safer with." "Well you don't have to worry about that, now do you? You're both going home." Reika managed to change her clothes after Ridge removed her restraints but made sure no local water was present. Then he locked her in a small room to get dressed. After an hour of fussing about, Khuzo strapped on his swords once again and put on a heavy cloak he stole from another room. It masked his appearance perfectly. He pulled the hood over and then tipped his hat down onto his back. Ridge snagged another coat of similar proportions and the kids blended in pretty well with typical Earth Kingdom clothes. As they left, Khuzo kept his weapons hidden. Marching through the city streets, Khuzo could hear an explosion and women screaming, clear signs that Itami was indeed scouring every possible location in existence in Ba Sing Se for Khuzo, and clearly taking time to make sure he wasn't at any place where a single woman was, and very clearly enjoying himself. Gusts of fire were heard and another explosion, followed by screaming. Guards ran through the streets, a mix of Dai Li and Fire Nation, and then some, ran to see what the commotion was. Khuzo went in the opposite direction. Blending in with the people around them was easy enough, and Khuzo kept Reika infront of him with her hands bound. They passed over a large river and stood above it on a bridge. "Just keep walking, Reika, unless you want me to carry you out of here. It'd be terrible for this Earth Kingdom heat to "get to your head." How embarrassing it would be, for me to have to pick up the dainty girl and carry her about." "You pig," she answered, and she did nothing. They finally reached an exit leading to a long country road. After an hour of getting through, they crossed out into the country. Khuzo pulled out his old map that showed where to meet Hitan. He learned that it wasn't far from his his own home, but that didn't matter. Khuzo led the kids to a wagon and rented a ride. He had to get the forests where he had been hired. Ten miles from his home was a location marked very discretely for their meeting. It was time to end this and get started with killing the man who had destroyed everything Khuzo held dear. |
Book 1 Chapter 5: Hospital Days
Characters: Ryan Gaia (Orion) and Suta-Shutaru
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-Hospital Wing on the Island of God Knows Where-
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I slowly opened my eyes and it seemed to take several minutes to get them into focus. Suta-Shutaru was sitting there waiting for me asleep. I wasn't going to wake her even though I knew she would prefer it if I did. I tried moving but I could barely twinge. Then everything that happened came back to me. I looked at my right side and I didn't have a shirt on and my wounds were covered and wrapped tightly. My eyes came into full focus. I heard my heart monitor. It was the saddest, slowest, and most pathetic beat I had ever heard anyone in a hospital produce. I suppose I was barely stable. I pressed the button to call the nurse in. "Welcome back Ryan" she whispered to me. "It's Orion" I replied and she giggled a little bit and then said "What can I help you with?" I stood there I knew what I want but it was impolite to ask a nurse to bring me it but I said it anyway "Bourbon, and a glass please." She stood there looking astounded and a familiar voice echoed out "It's ok nurse, I'm his guardian who brought him here, he can have bourbon." "Suta? Is that you? Thank God your ok, I was beginning to think you'd been hurt as well." I heard my heart monitor beep a little faster and I had suddenly the power to sit up. The nurse looked strangely at me then walked up I looked over and noticed that Suta-Shutaru was blushing incredibly. "Hey there gorgeous. What have I told you about playing with dark, powerful, eternal fire?" she said and I gave a slight laugh all though I coughed a little more than laughed. "You gave me quite a scare. You passed out about two weeks ago and then-" "HOW LONG WAS I OUT? You want to run that by me again?" "Really it was more like 3 weeks ago but your back now and that's what is important. Thank you for saving our lives. He hit the ground right above us as we left Orion. If you hadn't reacted in time we both would be dead right now." The nurse reentered the room with a bottle and a glass. I poured the glass for 6 seconds but then I became weak. The nurse tried pouring the drink into my mouth and most of it got in, but I could feel the cold sticky bourbon sliding down in streams from my cheek to my pillow. I took the glass from her hand, she wasn't pouring fast enough, chugged the rest and threw the glass against the wall. I didn't see it because my eyes were going out of focus again but when the glass hit the wall I felt them exchange looks of worry. I grabbed the whole bottle from the and drank as much as possible not caring where I spilled it and dropped the bottle on the ground. It didn't break, but it was leaking. I fell back to sleep again and that was that. I had plenty of energy after drinking more than half a bottle of bourbon and after everyone in the hospital was asleep I got up. Or at least attempted to get up it took me three sit ups to finally get my legs over the edge of the bed and my body sitting straight up. I stood up unbalanced for sometime walked toward my door grabbed a hospital cloak and the cane that was laid out for me and slowly made my way into the garden. The hospital was made out of metal, which has rock in it, but to feel better I needed to be around real 100% natural Earth. I breathed in and out in and out once more. The ground began to quake then a soft hand touched my shoulder, "Out for a moonlit stroll Orion?" It was Suta-Shutaru. "Yeah I needed to feel some real Earth on my feet, hands, and breath again." I had to say it. It was inevitable. "Listen Suta-Shutaru, after being severely burned by an old guy and you almost dieing I want you to return to Kyoshi. Your not safe with me and some things I need to do alone." She sighed "Famous last words for all great warriors before their downfall, Orion. I'll be surprised if you don't know what I'll respond to, no? When I signed up for this journey I expected my life to be danger. Hunting criminals is no breeze in the summer. I am not leaving your side!" She was very stern so I didn't argue and was kind of glad because I didn't want her to leave my side. "Now let's get you back in side you are in desperate need of rest." Her warm hand guided me back to the room where I obediently went back to bed. I suddenly envisioned my parents and my brother and they turned their backs on me. With a loud yell that woke up the entire hospital I screamed out "I CAN'T SAVE YOU!!!! I CAN'T KILL HIM, HE'S TO STRONG." I couldn't help but let out the sorrow, disappointment, and strain in my voice.
Book 1 Chapter 6: The Valley
Characters: Ryan Gaia (Orion), Suta-Shutaru, and New Person Joins Team
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-Departing the Hospital-
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After my scary appearance at the hospital, the staff finally got used to me and when it was time to leave they gave me a beautiful black and light gray shroud with pieces of diamonds, Earth, and other kinds crystals embedded all in it. "Thank you for your hospitality and kindness while we were here." spoke Suta and then a staff member finally replied "Thank you for cooperating after the month marker" and we all laughed as Suta and I slowly walked away. "Was it me or were those nurses and doctors a little weird?" I asked, "It was definitely the nurses" she replied and we strode towards the valley before the desert.
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-The Valley-
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We walked into the narrow opening that was the valley and it slowly but steadily widened. We walked for days toward the gate that was clear on the other side and far end. When we got about halfway we started to notice men wearing green and black robes with field hats that matched covering their faces. Dhai Li agents. The spoke in unison when we were 250 feet from them "Orion and Suta by decree of the Black Rose Society your life ends here today!" and they launched an incredible amount of spikes at us. I used and created a wall so huge I have never even came close to half the height before I went to the hospital. I used my left hand and went on the attack, but my attack was normal, then I thought "No it can't be!" and lifted my right hand for an attack. It sent out a massive shockwave bringing the valley walls closed and and instantly killed every Dhai Li agent. We both looked at my still bandaged hand and I said aloud "Oh s**t" I tried with my right hand alone and move the valley walls to their original positions. I was stronger than I had ever been it could be possible that all that resting and sleeping I did affected me in someway. I was not worried about that though as I looked closer at Suta for the first time since the battle had ceased I noticed that she had a spike running through her leg.
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-The House Call Doctor-
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I didn't know what to do. My loyal companion all this time was sitting there bleeding and didn't say a word during battle. I was slowly crying down my cheek as she rested sideways in a tent I pitched for her out of rock. "Your wife looks as though she needs some help there sunny!" and an old man approached me. "She's not my wife she's just my friend" for now at least I thought to myself. "Well your friend who's a girl need's help and I think I can help her." "You can?" as I let out to much enthusiasm out of my voice. He simply smiled at me "Yes I can, in fact I think it'll be wise for you to remove that spike in her thigh." I sighed I knew this guy was a phony. "Then I'll bend the water from this bucket to heal her." My eyes lighted up. I removed the spike from her leg and even though it wasn't wide it was still in there pretty good. "I don't think she'll have any problems with her movements after about 14 hours of healing from me." "Thank You so much kind sir." I replied. I suddenly heard a loud stomping outside and the old man spoke "Hurry those Dhai Li agents are probably looking for their friends, I saw them split up into two groups, hold them off, Orion!" I questioned how the old man knew my name because we didn't exchange names upon greeting each other but I forgot about it and went outside. They must've thought we'd be traveling down the right side because there had to be about 15 more than there were before. This might be challenging I thought remembering my new found power. We fought for 3 hours on end 27 Dhai Li agents against me, the ultimate Earthbender, it was dead even. I killed two of them accidently about around hour two because of a forgotten trap and I thought silently to myself "Noobs." I got back to where the doctor was still doing his thing and sealed them inside, it was time. I swirled a sphere around me and created the spikes. The spikes were three times bigger than before and the sphere spinning faster than ever. The Dhai Li agents knew they were dead and the just sat down and prayed. I released the ultimate onslaught of spikes towards them and within second they were all dead with a arrow made of rock through each one of their forehead. I loosened up the sphere and fell to the ground, although this semi-healed arm gave me power it was a burden and it drained me nearly completely of all my energy to use my 360 Degree Earth Sphere Spike Launcher, but they were all dead so no worries, and I staggered back into camp, I had been fighting the Dhai Li for only five hours and the old man must've been putting some overtime in as well because Suta was already completely healed with nothing but a scar on her thigh. "Thank you but one question, how do you know my name?" I asked. "Because your name is my name Orion. I am your grandfather Jijia-su Gaia."
Book 1 Chapter 7: The Sandstorm of Forgiveness
Characters: Ryan Gaia (Orion), Suta-Shutaru, and Jijia-su Gaia
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-The Exit-
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We traveled slowly towards the exit of the valley and when we reached the gates Suta was back on her feet and it was becoming dark again as our 5 day journey across that dangerous valley was at its end. I was still a little exhausted from my battle with the Dhai Li 2 days earlier but was able to manage. Suta was sleeping and me and grandfather were sitting around the fire watching the stars float across the sky. "I'm really sorry Orion what happened to you, I heard while I was in prison in the Northern Water Tribe. I couldn't help and it feels partially my fault that I couldn't stop your BROTHER from killing your family and your master." The world seemed to be crashing down, my brother? But he is as dead as my parents, it was my original Zetsumei Jutsu master was the one to commit this manslaughter. "No your wrong it was my former Zetsumei Jutsu instructor who killed my family, not my brother, NO!" There was silence. The wind was picking up outside and although the sun existed no more the sand and surface of the desert outside the valley walls were clearly visible. "It's true my grandson, believe me. I know the leader of the Black Rose Society and he is not your master Kamome but simply a thief of names who's original name was none other than Sousasu Gaia." For the past two days my grandfather had been completely open, whimsical, and showed me how to control my bending to an even farther degree through music, but he was now serious, and I hit the ground to see the vibration of his emotions. He wasn't lying. "So it was really Kamome who protected me not my brother?" I questioned, "Yes. He got wind of what your brother really was, showed your parents, and they threw him out of the White Lotus Organization. Two days later the tragedy happened and Kamome felt Sousasu's hatred coming nearer so he headed to your house to protect you and your family. He failed. These past three days have been wonderful with you my grandson, but I'm afraid that it is my time." "Grandfather no! It doesn't have to end! You could continue your journey with us, we might need you!" He got up and I followed and stepped in his way. "I will do what I must to make you stay, you're my last blood relative alive that I now do not hate. Please do not go. You can't stop me, you've seen my power old man, you know what I can do." We stood there in the firelight, the shadow of the edges of our faces flickering side to side. "Unfortunately you haven't seen my power." His hand glowed blue and before I could react he touched my chest, it was like he was filling the veins in my arms with pure energy. (theatrical music) "You must continue your journey with her young Orion." I fell to the ground and saw him walking towards the sandstorm. He was in the midst of the scorching hot sand swirling all around him and he looked back with a tear trickling down his left cheek. He held his hand up as if saying goodbye for only a short period of time and then it happened. Cracks appeared all around his face, clothing hair, everything and he burst into nothingness. "NOOOOOOOOO!!" I cried out and Suta ran out of her tent to see me on my knees crying. I had lost my last loved family member. First mom and dad, then Master Kamome, and now grandfather Jijia-su. My brother was going to pay. He was going to die. I failed them once before because I was scared that he was more skilled than me. But now, no fear, I would not fail again. I would train and train and train until I dropped every waking moment that I had. I thought this all to myself as I set there still sobbing and Suta held me closer than ever sobbing with me. The next morning I made him an unofficial grave and wept over my mighty grandfather for the last time.
Dai li is the correct spelling for the Earth Kingdom's secret Police
That's all I have to say.
| Dafoose wrote: |
Dai li is the correct spelling for the Earth Kingdom's secret Police That's all I have to say. |
| Eman5805 wrote: | ||
I'm still here too, like others I've been waiting for TLG to post. I don't feel too comfortable going forward with my next one until I see how he respondes to the lil twist in the resistance blah blah blah. |
| ThatLostGuy wrote: |
| heyo!!! I'm back and ready to post!! |
Oh dang, that sucks...I remember when My lizard died....
| ThatLostGuy wrote: |
Asiscio (Fire Bender and Air Bender)
(This is a "one time post" for Asiscio. By the way, it had to be done.)
Asiscio was last seen in a fight against Darkboy and Willy as the three of them invaded the Resistance Base under Ishtuix's command. Asiscio soon told his two "partners" of his past with the Avatar, and that Avatar Aang killed his brother a long time ago. Asiscio then attacked Willy and Darkboy, stole Willy's necklace, and went after the Avatar in the hopes of avenging his brother. Rather than capturing the Avatar like Azula ordered, Asiscio planned on killing him...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I WILL KILL THE AVATAR AND AVENGE MY BROTHER," Asiscio shouted as he ditched the scene where he had just temporarily defeated Willy and Darkboy. He walked towards the Avatar's tent while clutching Willy's amulet in his fists. He put the amulet around his neck and created a fireball in the palms of his hands.
"Burn, baby burn."
Asiscio shot a fireball at the Avatar's tent. And then another. And another! And another! In a matter of seconds, Aang's tent was gleaming with a terrifying orange glow. Fire swept across the face of the tent and quickly advanced its way inside of it. Asiscio reached into his pocket and pulled out a drawing his brother made some years ago. He held it to his heart as he watched the tent burn to a crisp.
"Looking for someone?"
Asiscio turned to his left. "Who the hell are you and why do you talk with such an accent?"
The man spoke up once again. Asiscio could tell he was some sort of Resistance Guard. "Argh... they call me Dinkins. Real name's Henrick."
Asiscio turned away from the Avatar's tent and focused completely on Dinkins. "And... what the hell do you want from me? I'm not interesting in any cookies."
"Do I look like a bloody boy scout to you?!"
Asiscio grinned and willingly accepted this verbal fight. He spat back, "No you don't look like a boy scout... You look like a friggen putz!"
"Argh mate, you've done it now!"
Dinkins thrust out his sword and sped towards Asiscio at full speed. Asiscio slid his feet into the sand and shot a gust of wind at Dinkins, immediately throwing him from his feet and towards the burning tent. "Are we through here," Asiscio shouted. Dinkins stood up after looking like a complete fool and spat on to the ground. "Bloody putz," he whispered to himself before taking off in a different direction than Asiscio.
Asiscio watched the tent for another five minutes but it was hopeless. The Avatar wasn't home, for if he was then he'd have Air Bended himself out of the tent minutes ago. It had become apparent to Asiscio that if he wanted the whereabouts of the Avatar then he would have to ask the head boss himself. He soon set course for the center of the Resistance Base and within minutes he stood outside Harabi's well guarded tent.
A guard stepped in front of Asiscio as he attempted to enter Harabi's tent. "Halt!"
Asiscio, as usual, wasn't going to take anything from anybody. "Who the hell are you!?"
The guard, who wasn't used to having people talk back, stuttered before speaking. "I- I'm not allowed to let any imposters enter Harabi's tent. He is having a very important meeting with-."
"Okay... Calm down babysitter," Asiscio muttered as he pushed the guard aside and entered Harabi's tent. The guard chased after Asiscio as the flaps of the tent flopped shut. "I tried to stop him," the guard whined. "But he was persistent!"
Inside the tent was a small bloodstained wooden table and six wooden stools. There was a map in the center of the table, and it was being held down by some rocks and a couple of mugs. Papers were randomly scattered about the tent, as well as a weapon or two lying across the sand. (This is the tent that Willy/Darkboy end up in.) Harabi was sitting at the table along with two other men. He instantly stood up from his chair and pointed a finger at Asiscio.
"WHO IS THIS MAN!?"
Asiscio cracked a smirk and rolled Harabi's finger back into a fist. "Put that weapon away," he smiled. Harabi was not amused. He pushed Asiscio away from him and shouted once more. "For the last time. Who are you!?"
"I'm Asiscio, and I am looking for the Avatar. Can you tell me where he is or do I need to buy some cookies first?"
Harabi sighed and proceeded to pick up a dagger which was lying on the tabletop. "Are you a member of the Resistance?"
"Why yes daddy, I am."
Harabi's anger was quickly reaching a limit. "He's currently residing in a Resistance Base some miles away from here. It's a long walk. Have fun."
"And why did you tell me this information without me having to interrogate you?"
Harabi laughed. "I don't know if you are a good soldier or not. But I do know a sarcastic mother f*cker when I see one. And I'd like you to be out of my hair. Now then- get the hell out of my tent!"
Asiscio laughed, "Okay Papa Bear. Thanks for the map to grandma's house."
++++++++ Three days later ++++++++
After three days of wandering the shore of Fire Nation Island, Asiscio finally approached the Resistance Base he was looking for. Along the way he encountered numerous other Resistance Bases, but none of which contained the Avatar. Finally, a kind Resistance Warrior informed Asiscio the exact Base that the Avatar was living in. Once he heard that news, he set track for the site. And now here he was, just minutes away from hopefully avenging his brother.
As Asiscio swaggered into the Base, he was greeted by many Resistance soldiers. Yet he didn't respond to any of them. After walking for a few minutes, Asiscio reached the center of town. He saw a large tent which had numerous guards in front of it. Asiscio thought to himself, "Either that's the Avatar or Harabi has just teleported himself into another tent."
Asiscio grunted and stepped towards the tent. He got down on one knee and kindly greeted the guards. He planned on tricking them. "I am here to deliver some important news to the Avatar." The guards stared down at Asiscio with stone-like eyes. They never had to deal with intruders since no one would be dumb enough to take on the Avatar alone.
Someone shouted from inside the tent. "Oogh! Do I have visitors!?"
Aang leapt out from inside the tent, with his staff in hand. He landed on his feet in front of Asiscio. "Who are you," he questioned.
"My name is Asiscio, and I have been looking for you for the past five years. You killed my brother, Dahmio. And I am here to avenge my brother by taking YOUR LIFE!"
Asiscio swept his feet across the sand and shot a fireball at Aang's chest. Quickly, Aang dodged the fireball causing it to strike his tent. One could hear Sokka's scream from inside the tent. "Ahhh! My jacket!"
Asiscio rapidly shot two more fireballs at Aang, both of which were dodged immediately. Sokka screamed again. Asiscio quickly noticed that he couldn't simply defeat the Avatar with simple Fire Bending. He ran towards Aang and the four guards and shot up into the air using Air Bending (of course). His dark wings helped him stabilize his flight, much like Aang's staff would. Before he launched himself off from the ground he shot off two more fireballs. Each fireball hit a separate guard smack in the face.
Aang followed in Asiscio's footsteps and set sail into the Air. Asiscio was still ready for Aang to do this though, for he shot off three more fireballs at Aang while soaring through the sky. Aang dodged the first and the second, but the third one nicked his staff causing him to lose his balance in the air and come crashing down to the sandy shore. Asiscio flew above the Avatar and quickly detached his wings. He fell through the air and held out his dagger in front of him. He was inches away from falling on top of Aang when one of the remaining two guards pushed Asiscio mid-flight.
Asiscio head slid across the sand much like the Avatar's did moments earlier. Both Aang and Asiscio leapt on to their feet at the same time. "Is that all you got, guard? You going to push me to my death!?"
The guard talked back. "No, I will-." Asiscio shut him up with a fireball to the groin. He proceeded to send another fireball at the remaining guard, quickly knocking the guard off of his feet.
Aang took a few paces forwards and faced Asiscio. "I'm sure I didn't mean to harm your brother!"
Asiscio spat on to the ground. "THAT DOESN'T MATTER TO ME! YOU KILLED HIM! YOU KILLED MY BROTHER!" A tear fell from Asiscio's eye. "And now... I am going to KILL YOU!"
Asiscio raced towards Aang while gripping his dagger sliced down at Aang. The stab was missed, and Aang followed the attack by shooting an Earth pillar up from the ground. The pillar rose straight up into Asiscio's jaw and raised him off from his feet and sent him flying backwards on to his back. Aang slowly approached Asiscio's limp body. "I wasn't here for a fight. And I'm sorry for what I did to your brother." Aang walked away, dignity and all.
++++++++ One hour later ++++++++
Asiscio was up and running for about ten minutes now. He didn't value the fact that the Avatar spared his life. Asiscio was wandering around the Resistance Base, searching for Aang so he could defeat him and avenge his brother. Asiscio planned on searching high and low, for Aang could be behind any corner; hiding and waiting. Asiscio entered a small alleyway as rain shot down from the sky and poured on his head. Thunder struck and lightning could be seen streaming across the heavens. Asiscio turned the corned and entered the darkest part of the alleyway.
A large figure with six coffins surrounding his grotesque body could barely be seen through the dark night sky and poorly lit alleyway. Asiscio reached for one of his blades and approached the monster standing before him.
"Hey Bambi... Who the hell are you!?" |
| vegnegun wrote: |
All right, finally an epic battle. This thing is so huge that when you read it, you'll be guaranteed to have it coming out of both ends (if you don't have that going on already). Also, if anyone wants to keep a kill count for this, feel free to. Thanatos (Memento Mori) -------------------------------------------- After murdering a group of thugs and their victims, a mysterious man confronted him -------------------------------------------- "Hey, Bambi.??? Who the hell are you?" Thanatos' breathing stopped for a moment, and he let out a long hiss. He turned around and saw a man's figure. With a flash of lightning, Thanatos saw the man had two small wings on his back. He growled and made his way toward the man. This bottom feeder would be an excellent desert to his previous meal. Thanatos mimicked the man by placing his hand on the hilt of his katana. He growled and drew his blade, splattering blood onto the ground. "You have no idea who you're messing with, pinhead," said the man. "I'm Asiscio." He drew his blade. Thanatos lunged at him, and both of their blades collided for a moment, before Asiscio leapt into the air. Thanatos jumped as well (remember, Thanatos' earth bending makes the coffins weightless to him), only to have a fireball hit him in the chest. Thanatos fell, breaking through the roof of a house and landing in a bedroom with a loud crash. A man and a woman sat up in the bed, scared by the new figure. Thanatos quickly cut their heads off with his katana and made his way out of the house. He looked into the sky, searching for Asiscio. He heard the sound of fire coming from behind him and built a wall with his coffins to block the blast. He moved the coffins out of the way and Asiscio tackled him to the ground. Thanatos tried to grab him with his bare hands, and both of the rolled through the wall of a second house. A group of old men were playing a game in a dimly lit room, and one of them stood up and shook his cane in the air. "Who the hell!?" Thanatos grabbed Asiscio by the arm and threw him against the wall next to the old men. The man with the cane whacked Asiscio over the head, and Asiscio sliced the cane in half with his sword. "You wanna try that again?" Asiscio got to his feet and flew out of a large window in the roof, causing shards of glass to fall to the ground. Thanatos stepped over toward the window and felt something tap one of his coffins. Without hesitation, Thanatos cut the old men's torsos from their hips. Thanatos jumped through the skylight and landed on the roof. He heard footsteps against the street below him and looked down. Soldiers from the fire nation palace were in the village; probably to quell the sudden dispute. Lightning flashed through the air and thunder cracked the sound barrier. The soldiers saw Thanatos' shadow for a split second, but when the turned around, he had disappeared. As tempting as it was for Thanatos to kill the soldiers there and then, he wanted to find Asiscio even more. Another lightning bolt jumped through the sky, and Thanatos saw a small shadow behind his own. Lightning struck again, and the shadow was larger. Thanatos waited a few seconds and stopped in his tracks, forcing his katana out in front of him. Asiscio's blade met his own, Thanatos putting a lot of strength behind his strike as Asiscio put his entire body weight on his blade. Thanatos brought two of his coffins up and tried to crush Asiscio between them, but he jumped back, throwing a fireball at Thanatos. The coffins came to meet the flames and Asiscio used his air bending to make the fireball explode into a screaming inferno. Thanatos slid back and quickly forced his coffins out in front of him. By chance, he slammed Asiscio into a building. Asiscio coughed and staggered on his feet, spitting on the ground. "Oh, come on. Is that the best you can do, graveyard?" Thanatos roared and lunged at Asiscio. Asiscio smirked and jumped into the air. Thanatos broke through the wall and entered a dimly lit room with the scent of flowers in the air. Two women stared at Thanatos, and another lightning bolt raced across the night sky, where Thanatos saw Asiscio's shadow. Thanatos jumped onto the bed and slashed the women into four pieces, and he heard the skylight above him open. "You idiot! Why'd you have to ruin the fun? It was just getting good, too." Thanatos jumped into the air and tried to hit Asiscio with his katana. However, Asiscio jumped to the streets below and started running away from Thanatos on foot. He followed the fire bending freak through the alleyways, when he heard a shout come from behind him. "Halt!" Thanatos turned around to face the fire nation soldiers he saw only minutes earlier. They sent fire streams at him, but Thanatos blocked them with his coffins and charged the soldiers. They drew their weapons, but it was too late. The beast had already slain the seven warriors, their blood and guts splattered against numerous buildings. He looked to the sky again, in hopes of finding his most annoying of prey so far. "Behind you," said the small voice. A strong force pushed Thanatos forward into the pools of blood from the soldiers. "You'll have to better than that, bone daddy!" Asiscio laughed and threw more fire at Thanatos. Thanatos blocked the flames and pushed himself up with the coffins, running toward the airborne punk. "Memento mori!" Thanatos leapt onto a short building and then made his way to a taller one. Asiscio laughed at the display, especially when Thanatos almost busted through a roof. Thanatos jumped into a spire and lunged into the air toward Asiscio, smacking him several times with his coffins before kicking him down toward the outskirts of town. Thanatos used his earth bending to send his coffins and himself toward the site where Asiscio landed. He saw the indentation of Asiscio's body on the ground, but Asiscio already fled the scene. That's when a dim glow started radiating from a tent, and two shadows were very close to each other. Suddenly, a boy with a staff behind him flew into the air and Asiscio chased after him. "Get back here, cue ball!" The boy looked back at Asiscio. "I refuse to fight you. I'm sorry that I may have been responsible for your loss, but I'm sorry." Asiscio threw a barrage of fireballs at the boy. "An eye for an eye, arrowhead!" Thanatos roared and chased the two benders on foot, when the boy turned around and raced toward Thanatos unknowingly. Thanatos used the night sky to mask his presence, and when the boy got close enough, he raised his katana into the air and sliced through the boy's staff. The boy fell to the ground and Asiscio followed him. Thanatos raced for the young boy and tried to stab him in the head, but a sudden burst of air pushed him away. Asiscio landed between the two and sent explosions of fire from his palms. They both fell back and Asiscio laughed. "This is sad. Didn't mommy tell you two not to play with fire?" Thanatos' breathing accelerated and he charged for Asiscio, attempting to smack him down with his hand. Asiscio stepped to the side and kicked Thanatos' coffin. The coffin pulled back and tried to hit Asiscio, but again, it missed. Asiscio fell to the ground when a large rock hit him in the side. Thanatos saw that the boy had used earth bending to throw the boulder into Asiscio, and he quickly stomped on the ground and kicked another rock at Thanatos. Thanatos held his sword at the ready and shattered the boulder into a hundred pieces. The pieces hovered in mid air and shot into Thanatos. Well, his coffin, at least. Thanatos ran to the downed Asiscio and brought his foot down. Asiscio blocked his foot with a sword and took out his second sword. He stepped back and forced a pair of coffins toward Asiscio. Asiscio rolled out of the way and kicked himself into the air, flying towards the young boy. "Get over here, you avatar-wannabe!" The avatar stomped on the ground and earth shot up at Asiscio. Using his swords, Asiscio shattered the stones and rammed into Aang (at this point, I'm already sick of writing the avatar, although I technically should, since Thanatos doesn't know his name.). Thanatos lunged at the two as they wrestled each other, who were fighting for dominance over the other, and kicked them both in the ribs. The slid across the ground and rolled off each other. Thanatos walked toward the downed benders, when a rock hit him in the torso and forced him back, earning a roar from the monster. "Don't worry, twinkle-toes, we got your back!" shouted Toph. Next to her stood Katara and Sokka. Sokka's jaw dropped. "Heeeeeey ??? that's the bastard that burned my jacket-coat!" he whined. "Shut up, we'll get you another one," groaned Katara. Thanatos roared when he set his sights on his new prey. He stepped toward them and his coffins started to feel heavier the closer he got to them. He saw Toph was in an obscured earth bending stance, and he realized she was applying more pressure to the coffins. He kneeled and slammed his fists on the ground, sending massive vibrations through the earth and blinding Toph ??? as if she wasn't blind enough already. He felt the pressure on his coffins fade and charged for the Gaang. Sokka drew his meteor blade and tried to counter Thanatos' katana, but the strength behind the beast was much greater than that of the young warrior and he toppled Sokka with ease. Katara took some water from her pouch and slashed at Thanatos with it. Thanatos felt the weight on his coffins increasing again and a large earth pillar kicked him into the air. Thanatos looked down and saw Asiscio attacking the gang, Aang close on his tail. He used the handle of his sword and whacked Toph over the head, knocking her out. "That outta take care of the blind b***h," he said. Thanatos used his own abilities to keep himself in the air and positioned himself with his katana. "Memento mori!" He forced himself down to the ground with a tremendous speed and brought his blade down onto Asiscio. Asiscio grunted when he blocked the katana with both his swords. A large earth wall slammed into both Thanatos and Asiscio, forcing them to roll on the ground together. Asiscio quickly got away from the beast and looked at Aang, who had thrown the earth wall at them. Thanatos stood and held his head high, roaring. His muscles were hard and working at full force now, which made him breathe a lot harder and heavier than ever before. Asiscio raced for Aang and Thanatos followed with a slow pace, allowing his energy to build up. Aang took out his staff and spread its wings out again, having used ice to fix the side Thanatos destroyed. He flew into the air and Asiscio pursued him. Thanatos watched them as they did their little dance, exchanging blasts of fire and air. Asiscio used his body and tackled Aang, sending them both into a fire nation fort. Without making a sound, Thanatos raced toward the fort, using the earth beneath his feet to quicken his pace. Sokka stood up and looked at Thanatos as he sped away. "Katara, stop him!" Katara shot a glare at Sokka. "With what? We're in the heart of the fire nation island. I don't have enough water to do anything." "You're useless." "Ohhh, then why don't you do something? Oh, you can't! You know why!? You don't even bend!" Sokka sighed. "Why the heck did we come here when we're both useless?" ============================================== Savage (metal claws) ------------------------------------------------- Just about to reveal Kore's true identity ------------------------------------------------- Savage took a deep breath. "Kore, you don't even remember who you are? Let me remind you. You're real name is???." Just then, Asiscio and Aang fell through the top of the medical tent and crushed a bed. Aang stood and ran, but Asiscio quickly got to his feet. "Get back here, you sonnova!" He lunged at Aang and tackled him to the ground, punching him in the face. Aang fell back, and Asiscio grabbed his collar. "Hey, let me help you up." He punched Aang in the face again. Savage saw Mayhem walk into the tent with Spike, and Spike laughed at the fight. "You two; get a freaking room." Asiscio stood up and pointed his swords toward Spike and Mayhem. "You wanna go, wonder boy?" ================================================ Thanatos (Memento Mori) -------------------------------------------- Thanatos made his way into the fort, where a guard confronted him. He opened his mouth to speak, but Thanatos shoved his katana down the man's throat. Another guard shouted and brought his sword out to slash Thanatos, but Thanatos punched the man in the throat and caused him to suffocate. He grabbed the first man and ripped his head from his shoulders and threw the body into a large tent with a hole in its roof. "Memento mori!" he shouted. He ran into the tent and rammed a pair of archers, knocking them into the middle of the floor. Thanatos saw Savage, Kore, Argus, and Obsidian standing on the opposite side of the tent, Asiscio standing to their right, Aang struggling to stand on their left, and the two archers in the center of the tent. Savage clicked his claws and Kore took the eclipse axe from Argus, who stood at the ready with his arm-mounted shuriken. Obsidian stood and put his better arm forward, gathering fire in his palm. Asiscio grasped both of his swords and stared down Aang and Thanatos. Spike and Mayhem stood and looked all around them. "This friggen sucks," said Spike. ================================= My my my, this is quite the south pole stand-off we have here. Who will win in this struggle for power? Will it be the walking graveyard, Thanatos? The ex-hitmen Spike and Mayhem? The prik with an attitude problem, Asiscio? The avatar? Or will it be Thanatos' escaped prey? All those who enjoy stories, come; gather around. |
| ThatLostGuy wrote: | ||
Me and Vegnegun are continuing this storyline now. The Willy storyline will be continued by Me/Eman/Darkboy too. But here's my one-time Asiscio post that I wrote a long while back. Vegnegun should be posting his old post right after mine so ya'll remember what we were up to. |
| ThatLostGuy wrote: |
| um what??? LOL!! |
