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    american43

    [8001]Jul 23, 2008
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    Book 1 Chapter 12: Ba Sing Se's SOS! All Warriors Needed at the Front!

    Characters: Ryan Gaia (Orion), Suta-Shutaru, Atlas, K, Zuko, Mae, Iroh, and Sokka

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    -Dawn-
    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I woke up immediately from one of the small hidden rooms in over sized tea shop. I rushed to the door and looked out the door towards the entrance to Ba Sing Se. It was as I thought there were dark clouds coming in our direction although the wind felt like it was being sucked in that direction. "What's wrong Ori- oh crap. I thought we had almost a two weeks of buffer before they made it anywhere near the gates!" Suta stammered. "Apparently not, we need to get everyone together, they'll be here by tonight at the earliest." I replied. "Aaaaaaargh!" and as if I had been shocked greatly there was a great pain on the right side of my chest. I pulled my robe open and noticed that the scar was spreading a little bit. These eternal flames wouldn't stop burning until the possessor was dead or couldn't bend. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    -Midday- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I didn't realize how many elite warriors there were until all of my acquaintances started pouring into Ba Sing Se thanks to the remaining Airbender deliverymen. The Avatar was there, his wife Katara I think, Romulus, K's superior, and then whom I wanted to see most of all: my godfather, my godmother, and my Kyoshi master Sokka. "Master Sokka," I bowed and then made way for Suta, but she never came. "Hold on I'll go get Suta. I'll be right back." Where in the hell could she be? There was about to be a war meeting and she was one of the top Generals. I went into our room and found a rolled up parchment on our bed. I knew this was going to just make my day. The writing was very sloppy and knew it was not Suta's, if not her than who?

    Dear Little Brother,
    We have your little girlfriend and if you want to see her again you will meet my army at the gates with only you, Atlas, Zuko, and K. If anyone else shows up, I will kill Suta in front of everyone.
    Until Then,
    Saosasu

    No. They couldn't have taken her. I walked outside to my godfather and got him inside where no one was. "WHAT SHOULD WE DO?" I screamed, there was no point in calming our voices considering we were about to go to war anyway. "My son, we must get these people together and do what we must." -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    -Night Fall-
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    We decided to do as the letter said and go to the gates alone. I patched on my generic suit of armor provided by Iroh, gathered with the rest, and went to the gates. We got there about 20 minutes later and looked out. Only 400 feet out there was a massive army, 1000's. I looked to my left, then to my right and noticed the four of us. K was wearing his shade and had his katana half drawn already. He was probably itching for a fight to redeem his master's honor as well. Past him was Atlas, who in fact had grown very fond of K. On my right was my Godfather who was in a stance know as the "Sun Dragon Dance." "Ahhahhaaaahaaa! You fools actually showed up? Ha, you don't stand a chance against this legion!" It was Saosasu and to his left was that bastard Argo holding my Suta from the back licking her neck. "Help me, Orion." Their first line of soldiers bunched up and came at us directly with their swords, fire, earth, and water were being shot everywhere, but they were obviously outclassed. They sent two rows the next time, were there no end to these meaningless soldiers? By the fourth wave we were all sweating, I glanced over to the right as K barely avoided an attack from a waterbender while Atlas came from the side and spiked a rock straight through the bender. We got pass the fourth wave. I looked to my right and saw that the only thing singed was their clothes, I gleefully looked to my right and no one was there. Oh no, not my god father too. I looked back. Zuko was lying on the ground about 20 feet back. All three of us just noticed and rushed to his side. Another person I cared about was hurt because of my brother. I wouldn't let anyone else get hurt. I felt my muscles starting to twitch all over. "Take him to a medic stat. All that armor is weighing him down so you both must go. Get out of here get away from the front." I instructed Atlas and K. Atlas looked as though she was about to say something to contradict me and then must've understood my reasoning. As I stood I began to unwrap my arm fully, and even though the sun was no longer in the sky, my arm created a luminous aura that covered an area twenty feet around me. I stood up fully and threw the bandages into the wind, as my singed and burnt arm came into full sight. They began to move and I began to tremble to the pressure of the twitching. I fell to my knees as I let the power take over. "Haahaaahaa! Leaning on your knees for better balance or is it for forgiveness and hoping that I'll accept you into my new dynasty?" "It's neither brother, it's the power you accidentally gave me, flowing through my vains!" I stood up and knew that I was at my mightiest, the ground was beginning to quake and the ground around me was bending towards my direction. I heard someone shout "Units 5 through 9 move, don't let the survivors escape!" I laughed. "HAAAAHAAHAAAHAAAA! WHO'S ESCAPING I'M RIGHT HERE!" I swirled the rock around my feet and lifted myself into the air with my left arm, I was preserving my energy that I had in my right for a finale. I easily finished off their 4 units with one round of my ultimate technique and resurfaced out of the sky back onto the ground. "ARE THERE ANYMORE? HAND SUTA OVER TO ME!!!!" and then I heard the order "All units attack Orion at once, he is only one man!" Bad mistake. They were all coming at me from the same direction, pathetic fools. This was it the finale I was waiting for. I lifted both hands and strained with all my might to lift the battlefield. "He's, he's, lifting the field?? And look! He's doing it all with one hand." It was true I had gotten use to the strain and could raise the battlefield with my right hand only. I then realized that the Earthbenders were escaping jumping off and catching themselves with the rock. I used my free hand to create a dome around the pathetic soldiers who remained on the land. I now had both hands concentrated on the one area and screamed "AND NOW, DEATH TO YOU ALL!" and slapped my hands together causing the dome to shrink instantly and crush everyone inside of it. I let go and walked towards the plain where only a few of them survived. I saw his face, Saosasu was trembling in fear of my strength and Argo had already fled from the situation. The remaining Earthbenders tried to stop me from advancing but I created barrier spikes after barrier spikes and killed every last one of them with increasing ease. I finally got to the top of the plain and took Suta into my arms, hugging her with all of my might, and looking into the eyes of my former brother. He couldn't even move. "H-h-how'd you pull that off??? Your muscles should be torn to hell by now; you shouldn't be able to bend at all with your arms right now after all that strain." While he was performing a dramatic monologue on how I could have obtained my power, I noticed he was frozen at the spot where he stood. I slithered a rock vine up to his head, with the point facing his temple, and I finally spoke. "I don't gain my power from practicing, discipline, having huge numbers from my command. I gain my power from my love. The love that my parents had for us, the love of master Kamome whom I blamed for a while, of all my friends, my godparents, and most important of all my love for Suta. Taking her was the worst thing you could've done for yourself, and ultimately it led to your death." The word "death" must of taken him out of his frozen state of mind and he soon realized that he had no escape. I turned around and starting walking off supported by Suta. "You coward, with all that strength you still don't have the power to kill me." I looked back at him and flexed my hand and the vine went straight through his temple. I twisted my wrist and the vine twisted his head off his neck. "Who's weak now?" I asked coldly and then nothing, I passed out.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [8002]Jul 23, 2008
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    Eman!!! Congrats on #8000 !!! WOOHOO!!!
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    -TheSecondSign-

    [8003]Jul 23, 2008
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    Khuzo checked Tojo's body. It was lifeless. The spear was just a simple wooden pole with a tiny head on it, one he had found amongst the wreckage. Tojo would have clearly been far more formidable if it hadn't been for the suprise attack. Grenades, bombs, and weapons were packed onto his body, and on top of that animal he would've been near undefeatable in straight up combat. Khuzo was glad he had the opportunity to get him so easily.

    Ridge came down the cliff. Ridge wasn't bragging or talking about earned drinks. His face was cold and expressionless.

    "Khuzo, what do you think of me?"

    "Well, I obviously didn't hate you when you said you didn't feel guilty for your crimes, so I fail to see how my opinion of you has changed."

    "Why?"

    "Well for the first part I need you. And the second part is, no matter how much you try to hide it behind a womanizing, fun loving persona, I know you're terrified of what you were. And I know you hate yourself. That means we can work together. But here's the thing: I don't want to know what you've done. I don't ever want to know. I won't ask, you won't tell. You DIED, you got that? You're dead. Ridgeback killed whoever it is that followed him to the Dark Pits. He's dead."

    "Yeah, I understand."

    "Good. Now let's get back to the kids."

    Khuzo dropped the blood covered spear and walked up the ledge. As Ridge looked down at his lifeless friend's corpse, he spat on it.

    Reika had climbed to the top of road and Shungo had managed to follow.

    "What were you guys talking about?"

    "Nothing. Just how we killed one of those Twelve members."

    "Really? That's great!"

    "Yeah it is. Now, sorry about this, Reika, but it's like I said, you can't come."

    "What are you-" she asked, but then Ridge smacked her in the head. Shungo looked up at Ridge who had his arm raised in case there were anymore objections. He looked at Ridge and was hardly holding himself up.

    "Hey man I don't care anymore."

    Ridge smiled.

    "Glad to hear it."

    ----

    Deep within the dark, ancient depths of the catacombs that lurked around the Fire Nation palace, an old man sat at a throne at the very end of the lair. Fire lit up a long path that led to him, and the throne was the only piece of furniture in the whole, expansive dark lair. Behind it sat a massive Fire Nation tabbard. The throne itself seemed as if it was the man's resting place, and had been for a long time. The man hadn't moved from the chair in fifteen years. Suddenly, out of the darkness, ten other figures appeared, in a large circle, in the center of the lair. The path here became a large, expansive circle with a Fire Nation emblem on the ground in the center of the circle.

    They all looked different, but at the same time they all shared a feeling of cruel, twisted, sadistic evil. All but one, a small, timid figure completely concealed in robes akin to that of Death's. Itami, Fury, and Death were amongst their numbers.

    "Hate has been sent to deal with the mercanary and his comrade. Wthout them, the children will-"

    "Hate has died, Death," the old man spoke. His face had a constant scowl, and his eyes were almost completely closed.

    "Master, how do you-"

    "Hate was my student. We shared a bond that does not know space or time. I know already what has become of him."

    "That's impossible!" yelled another and fire came from his mouth in small gusts. His teeth were twisted and mangled, yellow and revolting. "Even I could not defeat Hate! How can a mere mercanary-"

    "This MERE mercanary, Wrath, must I remind you, is a member of a certain tribe that once caused more havoc to this nation than any other resistance in the history of the war."

    "But-"

    "ENOUGH!" yelled the man, and he slammed down the gnarled husk of a staff, and intense blue flames seeped forth. "LEST YOU, WRATH, WISH TO KINDLE WHAT IS TRULY WRATH, MY WRATH, YOU WILL REMAIN SILENT!"

    Energy seemed to invisibly engulf the room, even though nothing had changed. Still, the immense power brought forth by this mere motion left everyone on their edge. Only Itami looked unfazed, with his typical smirk.

    The old man took a deep breath and resumed.

    "Now, the mercanary and his friend must be dealt with. I can see that the combined efforts of Death, War, Fury, and Hate are not enough. Therefore, Sorrow will lead this mission. It will be the first testament to her power. War and Forge will accompany you to MERELY RETRIEVE the children. And Itami, if the girl is broken or too harmed to be of used prior to her arrival, you will face something even you will have to fear."

    Itami's smile was wiped away, but he didn't look frightened in the slightest.

    In unison, the figures spoke: "Yes, End." As the darkness creeped around them, the ancient man called The End resumed his slumber.

    ----

    Khuzo was carrying Reika over his shoulder, and Shungo was being supported by Ridge. He looked up at him, and saw that Ridge's usual playfulness was gone. He had always been Khuzo's counter. Where Khuzo was cruel or painfully serious, Ridge had taken the group to a usually higher spirit. Now, he seemed more aloof and distant.

    "Where are we going?" Shungo asked.

    "To a village not far up the road. There, we'll get to the forest on another ride and get you home."

    "Alright then."

    "You don't seem upset, Shungo," Ridge spoke.

    "You guys need to take these Twelve guys down. If I can't truly be of help, I need to be out of the way."

    "That's a very mature attitude. Maybe we could use you."

    "Forget it. Besides, I know where to find the right kind of help. Shungo is a capable fighter, but these guys are beyond capable," Khuzo said.

    "But maybe I COULD help. Maybe Reika can too."

    "My orders were to send you home, not to involve you in our personal little war."

    "But I want to help."

    Khuzo seemed incapable of answering, so he remained silent. Taking down the Twelve WAS more important than their individual safety. And Shungo could easily take tough opponents, and Reika could be useful because of her healing ability.

    "I'll...I'll have to see what happens next."

    "Alright then."

    Up until now, Khuzo knew he could get help, but he had simply forgotten about how Shungo had kept Death at bay for him twice, and how Reika could heal. Still, Hitan wanted his children back. He would have to see what goes.

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    confucioussayhi

    [8004]Jul 23, 2008
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    Dak(White fire)

    Out of forest, looking for nearby town. Slaves have been picked up by Mao Fuzi.

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    The group, now smaller and free of slaves, was resting at the edge of the forest. A main road lay in front of them and they were deciding where to go next. According to Kar's map, the trader route wound south back through the edge of the forest to a port town in a Fire Nation colony. Yohni had already set off for that town earlier for a Messenger Hawk. The Hawk had arrived, but Yohni hadn't. Bai Mao made the deciscion to move on ahead and try to avoid the slave port.

    Bai Mao was writing a letter to send to Po-kun while Dak was patching up everyone's clothes. At Bai Mao's request, he was making the fireflower clothing more ragged in order to fit in with other trader bands. He had the children smearing bits of tar to stain the clothing while Ariel washed most of the muck off. It left dirty gray patches on them to a good effect. With some intentional bad stitching and fake patchwork, Dak managed to make the previously nice white garments soiled and ragged.

    "Well," Gweh started, "There's another port on this map, but it's way north."

    "It'll have to do. The less we interact with traders, the better." Bai Mao replied as he tied the message to the bird's leg.

    "Ok, but there's another town before we get there. It's, uh, Sofun."

    Dak looked over. "Sofun? That sounds familiar... Let me see that map." He studied it for a moment, and sighed.

    "I know that place, and the port. It's where I got off when I fled the Fire Nation. The port's name it Tao-Lin Bay. But, when I stayed there, I heard about Sofun. It's a pirate town. Not somewhere we should be going, I'm sure."

    "Are you positive? I've never heard of Sofun." Gweh asked.

    "No, he's right. I've heard rumors too. It's a seedy place at best." Bai Mao cut in.

    "Well, we can't afford to go around, and you want to avoid the trader port..."

    Bai Mao ignored the jab. "Dak, what about this Tao-Lin place?"

    "Well, it's a great city. It's a big free port that does trade with the Water Tribe and the Fire Nation. Clean, safe, big walls, perfect place to rest before we set out. Only, this map," Dak pointed at the dot that symbolized the port, "Is wrong. It's much farther north, with a few more towns on the road."

    "How long?" Gweh asked.

    "A week maybe, with no stops." Dak shrugged.

    "Sounds perfect. But, it's a long way. It means we can't go around Sofun. We'll have to keep our heads down and try not to stir up any trouble." Bai Mao replied.

    Gweh agreed. They folded up the map and packed their gear up. Once everyone was prepared and ready, they began their long walk to Sofun.

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    american43

    [8005]Jul 24, 2008
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    Book 2 Chapter 1: Visitations

    Characters: Ryan Gaia (Orion), Suta-Shutaru, K, Atlas, Zuko, Mae, and Uncle Iroh

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    -The Royal Hospital in the Palace of Ba Sing Se-
    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I was dieing, I could feel it. As they pushed me on a cart through the city reading off my status report, I knew I was dead. In order to protect the ones I cared about I had to die. I was pretty sure of that when I started this journey and tried to evade the truth for too long. I ignored the signs and I ended up dieing by my own hand, by my own power. I'm sorry for leaving you when we had just found each other??????Suta. I slowly closed my eyes for the last time, breathed my last breath, felt my last emotion, heard those final words, and a nurse screamed out "We're losing him, he just flat lined, and I need some oxygen and a heart defibrillator! Come on people we don't have much time. Alright full watts, CLEAR, dammit dammit dammit, CLEAR, damn you, don't you die, CLEAR!" But there was no bringing me back, I had only one reason to live and I protected it with my life. Then a voice interrupted that shined a tiny glimpse of hope, it was Suta. "Let me to him. Get out of my way." With my last energy I felt the Earth to see her face through my closed eyes, what a beautiful way to die. "Orion, please, don't leave me now, not when we need you the most, not when I need you the most" and it happened. She kissed me, and I realized how could I be willing to give this all up. I had to try, no I must live! The nurse spoke again "Wait, it's working, we have a pulse!" I lifted my right hand with all my strength and pulled Suta in closer. "How is he doing that???? Every muscle in his arms was just made into mince meat, he shouldn't be able to move, no, what is he doing now???" and I stood up. Off the cart I stood, in front of my family I stood, in front of the ones who lost their freedom I stood, as a hero I stood. I couldn't leave these people, not when they needed me most. "HE SHOULDN'T BE ABLE TO MOVE LET ALONE STAND UP!!!!!" I limped and basically bounced off the buildings and made it to Zuko. "Are you alright father?" "Yes" he replied. Then limped my way back to Suta and used my last amount of energy to tell her how I felt for her "Suta, I-I-I love you, I always-s have, please marry me" and I dropped to one knee, not in weakness but to honor my request as sincere. "Well if you don't get to the hospital soon, there won't be anyone to marry. Go and live, I'll see you soon, my husband and I love you." I collapsed into the cart, those were the few words I needed to hear. The last thing I felt before I passed out was a single drop of rain on my nose; I think that even the heavens wept, not in sorrow, but in happiness for our connection, and for our love.

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    -The Visits- (not in Orion's perspective anymore)
    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nobody but Orion had been hurt that day. Zuko got an ice sickle sliced through his right side but nothing serious. Orion had been out cold since 3 weeks ago. Before he passed out Orion asked Suta to marry him and she wouldn't have it any other way. Suta: The first person to visit him and stay with him was Suta. She wept and mourned, but also prayed that her husband would one day rise once again. Every so often she would catch a sign of him twigging just like he did when he was in his berserker form. She never talked to him though. She would just stare there and watch as Orion would slowly heal and grow stronger. Zuko and Mae: Orion's godfather Zuko realized how much his godson loved him when he called him father; Orion's godmother had always loved him like a son. Zuko swore to Suta and Mae that Orion would be ok and up in no time at all and that there were circulations of Orion being nominated as Earth King. Since the fall of his son and the return of his nation after all Black Rose members retreated after the fall of Saosasu, Zuko and Mae returned to the homeland as Fire Lord Zuko and Fire Queen Mae. He originally dropped the job after rebuilding the world with Aang.
    K and Atlas: K was a man of few words, who however, said those words repeatedly. He and Atlas were always arguing finding a common stream of interests no matter what their view. They were the couple that loved to hate each other. Although they were going to come separately to watch over Orion, they decided to come together, and try to get along.
    Sokka and Sukki: Sukki didn't know Orion that well but Sokka regarded Orion as a son and might as well because he was soon to be. Sokka made constant visit's and talk to Orion about pointless things, such as a festival coming up in two weeks at the Kyoshi islands, or a huge party the he and Sukki attended. Small talk really, although the one time he came alone he told Orion that Suta was right, that Orion couldn't leave the world when it needed him the most.

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    -The Vision- (back into Orion's perspective)
    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mother, Father, Master, Grandfather, I have done it; I have set you free and destroyed Saosasu. "I couldn't be prouder son." his father said. "We love and believe in you so much." his mother said. "Orion! I watched the battle with great enthusiasm. You destroyed your enemy by taking the cheap road out instead of taking them head on! I'm proud of you; you observed the battlefield and saw through the numbers. I thought you'd lose your head and try to take them all on." said Master Kamome and then I searched for the man I wanted to hear from the most, Jijia-su. "Hello grandfather." He smiled at me and the other smiling faces disappeared into the shadows, "where'd they go grandfather?" "They went back into your heart Orion, so their memory shall never be lost." "Grandfather, Saosasu told me you were working for him please tell me this is not true!"
    He sighed and I knew this conversation was going to end badly.
    "Orion, you must understand, he rescued me from rotting in the Northern Water Tribe's prison, and I thought he was a friend. He told me that you were the killer of your parents and that the White Lotus had many conspiracies against the world. I was a fool and believed him, he was family. He convinced me to join his rebellion against the conspiracy and actually had some hard hitting evidence, which I found out later on was nothing more than a hoax and a plot to convince me to stay with him. Only on my last mission was I able to see through his lies. He ordered me to wait for the Dai Li to injure you and move in for the kill, but how could I? You, also, were my flesh and blood. I learned of what was really going on and when I finally got to you I helped you. Now we have come to you battle with you brother, if you noticed during the fight your berserker is activated when in intense combat, when you see someone close to you, emotionally close, get injured, or when your anger reaches its peak. Orion this power is great, but it is also a burden, not only to your conscious memory but to your physical body as well. If you use it again and try to lift a battlefield it is for certain that you will die and I don't mean like just now when you lost your heartbeat for a couple of seconds, I mean for good."
    We stared at each other with worry on our faces and I finally broke the quiet tension.
    "So how do I hold off this power and raw emotion?"
    "You don't have to ask me because you've already done it once before. Do you remember what happened at the volcanoes mouth in Ushamo? You tried to give you life for someone you loved, you let go of all of your fears and wants in order for you to save Suta's life. That's why that measly spear disintegrated; it could not even hope to go against your love for Suta. You need to find a way to control that feeling to suppress the deadly energy of the berserker. It is time you rose now. Use the knowledge that I have just given you to re-awaken. Good bye for now."
    So all I got to do is activate my love. I thought to myself "Suta, Zuko, Mae, K, Atlas?" but nothing happened. I searched deep within myself to find the reason why I would be willing to die for any of the people I just named. I heard someone in a really far distance saying "Get everyone here quickly!" but I didn't recognize the voice. I focused even harder and it finally came to me. I gave my life for love because I was given life through love. My parents loved me and died for me. So did my former Master Kamome and my Grandfather. They all gave me life through there love. So when love pays back life I get the relaxed tranquil mode? I opened my eyes to see all my loved ones four feet below me, had I grown that much since I was last awake. No, I was floating in midair. I looked down at my hands and legs and I was glowing pure white from all of my injuries that were effectively being healed for good. I started to lower again and felt like I had just taken a really long nap. We all looked at each other and no one spoke so it was up to me as usual to break the tension, "Hey guys, I'm hungry let's go get something to eat." Everyone smiled and rounded in for a hug. Even K leaned in and whispered "Good to have you back."
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    eerush

    [8006]Jul 24, 2008
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    Hey it seem like u guys dont know what i type ... ok . Sry for the Un-understanding reply i make ... i just confused that this forum page is talk about wat .... Create your own Bender ??? Avatar RPG ??? can give an example ?? Thanks
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    Lord-darkboy

    [8007]Jul 24, 2008
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    eerush wrote:
    Hey it seem like u guys dont know what i type ... ok . Sry for the Un-understanding reply i make ... i just confused that this forum page is talk about wat .... Create your own Bender ??? Avatar RPG ??? can give an example ?? Thanks

    there are enough examples above this post ...

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    Dafoose

    [8008]Jul 24, 2008
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    Wow, I wasn't anticipating THIS many new people after Avatar was over...

    Ok, well, I'm fed up with procrastinating, so I'm just going to write the rest of the chapter I didn't finish NOW, or else I'm never going to get around to it...

    Oh and for those of you wondering... www.chinesenames.org. Uh DUH.

    Edited on 07/24/2008 10:07am
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    Goofy793

    [8009]Jul 24, 2008
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    Eman5805 wrote:
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    What the hell, man?

    We were 3 pages away, you just got post 8000!
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    Quantumbender

    [8010]Jul 24, 2008
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    An Avatar RPG? Just what I need....

    Name: Hoduku Denshi (Literally "the undoing electron")

    Age: 25

    Gender: Male

    Loyalty: Water Tribe

    Bending Ability: Manipulation of sub-atomic world

    Other information: While not a macro bender (ie: water, fire, earth, or wind), Denshi can transmute anything into anything. He can also manipulate the sub-atomic state of the element, as well as its location. He carries an iron sword, from which much of his attacks come from. He is a fairly competent weaponologist, an expirenced assasin and has extensive knowledge of the elements. He can not transmute highly radioactive elements. Denshi perfers not to directly attack an opponent, rather, he would poisin them with mercury darts or a chunk of ceisum. Overall, Denshi is a minimalist, perfering nonaction and practicing the transmutation of the elements. In addition to the considerable advantages, he has the ability to pass on his bending ability to a person of choice. However, the past expirences of previous benders do not come with it.

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    Eman5805

    [8011]Jul 24, 2008
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    No, no, no, NO. You want to transmute stuff, you're gonna join a FullMetal Alchemist RPG. There's nothing like that in the show. Not to mention, I no one could maniuplate something a subatomic scale without being superhuman. Gonna have to do a massive overhaul if you want in on this RPG, buddy.

    Also, why would someone affiliated with the Water Tribe specialize in manipulating minerals? The poles aren't exactly a haven for mining...
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    r3173mpt10n

    [8012]Jul 24, 2008
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    Maximus: Non-bender, hand-to-hand specialist, and sharpshooter.

    Esther: Waterbender.

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    Maximus anchored the ship not too far off of the shore. Esther was puzzled and asked, "Why are we stopping Maxy?"

    "If someone comes on the boat, then someone will find something I want kept a secret."

    He walked over to the machine and pulled a lever down. The small Water Tribe boat lowered slowly into the water. Maximus jumped in first and then offered his hand to Esther. She grabbed his hand and he helped her get onto the boat. As soon as she was sitting comfortably on the boat, Maximus grabbed a paddle and started to row towards the shore of the island. The bottom of the boat hit the sand and Maximus jumped out. His feet was being drenched in the ocean water as he was pulling the boat onto the middle of the beach by a rope tied to the bow. Esther jumped out and waited for Maximus to finish getting whatever he needed from the boat.

    "Where to Maxy?"

    "There should be a tavern nearby. We'll meet her there. But first, I need some new gear, and I know just the guy to go to."

    Maximus started to walk off the beach and Esther followed suit. He looked towards the northeast direction and saw a fairly large house on top of a small hill.

    "Wow! That's a pretty big house! Whose is it?"

    "It's mine."

    "Really?"

    "Yes. I had it built not too long ago. Now, let's go. I need to pick up some money from there before we go meet that man. Oh...one more thing. No waterbending in public. Okay?"

    "Why?"

    "It's a Fire Nation island, so they won't treat you with hospitality."

    Esther nodded and then looked towards the house with wide eyes.

    "You coming?" asked Maximus as he was walking ahead of her.

    "Hey! Wait up!" yelled Esther as she ran to catch up to him.

    They walked for a few minutes and then ended up in front of a tall metal gate. Maximus took off his shoe and shook it a bit. A key fell out and Maximus picked it up. He lodged it into the keyhole and twisted it to the right. Maximus turned the knob and opened the gate. Esther ran in first and ran all the way to the front door. Maximus slowly made his way up and then turned the key so the teeth faced down. As soon as he got the door open, he walked in with Esther and closed the door behind them.

    "So....does anyone live with you? Relatives? Family? Friends?"

    "You ask a lot of questions..."

    "I'm just curious."

    Maximus walked up a flight of stairs to the second floor and then went into a large bedroom that was filled with many extravagant items, like silk curtains, gold plated objects, and other flashy objects. He walked over to a small desk next to his bed and opened the drawer with the same key he used to open the gates and the door. He pulled out a large sack that made the sound of coins banging against each other. He opened it up and Esther peeked into it. There was a large amount of gold coins inside the sack.

    "Why is there so much?!?!?"

    "Don't worry. I didn't steal it if that's what you're thinking."

    "I wasn't thinking that, but now you got me thinking that."

    He took some coins out and then thought about it. Maximus put the coins back into the sack and then closed the drawers. He tightened the sack and then fastened it onto his belt. He walked out of the room and then descended down the flight of stairs. Esther followed suit and closed the door behind them as soon as they were out. They walked not too far from the house and ended up in front of an average looking supplies shop.

    "We're buying food? Don't we have enough?"

    Maximus ignored her question and walked right in. No one was at the counter and Maximus rang a bell. A bulky man walked out from behind the curtains and looked Maximus in the eyes.

    "Maximus! Long time no see buddy! I thought you joined the army."

    "It's kind of complicated but long story short, I left. How you been doing Rios?"

    "Not that bad actually. This island's rebuilding was completed not too long after you left....Well! Who do we have here?" asked the Rios. Esther hid behind Maximus and looked at Rios with nervous eyes.

    "She's a friend's kid but let's get straight to the point. I need some new 'things'."

    "Oh. Come with me."

    He walked into the back of the shop and Maximus and Esther followed. As soon as they were in, Rios closed the entrance off with metal doors and pulled a lever. The walls flipped open and each wall was lined with weapons, supplies, and armor. Maximus walked down each wall and inspected each object carefully. After a few minutes, he picked out all of his armor and tried it on.

    "How's it fit?"

    "Not bad actually. Why don't you tell me about it."

    "Well....it is the latest military armor for some of the assassins. It is lightly padded, so arrows will most likely do normal or below average damage."

    "Wouldn't want to make it too hard for others now would I."

    "No you wouldn't."

    Maximus picked up some supplies, like ropes, thin string, and knives. He put them into the pockets of his belt pouches.

    "Hey, Rios. Do you have any bows?"

    "Actually....I just got a new shipment of these new bows. It's a prototype, but it works like all of the other bows. It's fully operational and can be used in battle. No one has one yet except for us third party sellers."

    Rios walked over to the wall with all of the weapons hanging on hooks. He pulled a bow that was hanging right in the middle. He handed to Maximus and watched as Maximus was testing the string.

    "It's limb is as sharp as some of the swords I carry here and can be used like a sword. The shield on limb is for hand protection from enemy attacks. The three blades right here are for attacking people who try to face you head on while you're trying to shoot. The string is the best money can buy, and will probably last you a long time."

    Maximus swung it a bit and then asked, "Can all of this come in...black?"

    Rios smiled and then said, "I knew you would ask, so I had another set just for you. It was just in case you decided to come back. Wait outside and I'll bring it out front."

    Maximus nodded and then went out to the front counter. Rios came out a few minutes later and handed him a huge box.

    "It's in there."

    Maximus pulled out half of the gold coins in the sack and then put it onto the table.

    "I think you gave me a little extra."

    "I can't count. You can have the extra."

    "Thanks!"

    "Do you have a changing room?"

    "Yes. In the back."

    Maximus walked into the empty room and started to change. While he was changing, Rios looked at Esther and smiled.

    "What's your name little girl?"

    "Esther...."

    "Nice name...."

    They were both silent and they both started to look around the shop. Maximus walked out and then put the bow onto his back.

    "Fits like a glove."

    "Hey, what do you plan to do with all that stuff?"

    "Just some exploring..."

    "Ahh...."

    Maximus and Esther walked out of the shop and looked right across the brick pathway and saw a tavern.

    "There it is."

    "It was right across the street?"

    "Hey. It's a tiny island. What do you expect?"

    Esther shrugged and then walked towards the entrance.

    "Make sure you try not to cause a commotion or anything. Be subtle."

    He walked in first and then Esther walked in right behind him.

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    h3r01cdud3

    [8013]Jul 25, 2008
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    Amaterasu Okami: Firebending General

    Haruhi Haetei: Waterbending Master

    Hakuro Hakudoshi: Earthbending Master

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    At the Ba Sing Se Dock...........

    Haruhi: Where is the ship headed to?

    Amaterasu: The Black Citadel..........that's where I burned half of my face off.

    Hakuro: Why are we headed there?

    Amaterasu: To settle a score................

    They slowly jumped on a canoe and rowed off to the south.........

    ---------------
    Sunset
    ---------------

    Hakuro: We've been rowing for hours, can't we take a brake.

    Amaterasu: Fine. Let's sleep until nightfall.

    ----------------------------
    3 hours past nightfall
    ----------------------------

    Haruhi yawned and without hesitation woke the guys up.

    Amaterasu: I think we're here.

    They walked 8 miles until they found a gate requiring three elements to open.

    Hakuro: How are we supposed to open the gate.

    Amaterasu: Hakuro, earthbend that boulder into that hole over there and Haruhi, waterbend water into that tube.

    They did those things without hesitation and Amaterasu had to use green fire, the last requirement to open the gate. He concentrated so hard it turned lighter than he expected. The gate opened slowly and a evil laugh came with it.

    ??????: So you came back to get the other half burned off.

    Amaterasu: I've come to settle the score with you, Vicinity.

    Vicinity revealed himself out of the shadows and put a dagger at Haruhi's neck.

    Vicinity: Well, you're so weak you need com.........

    Amaterasu grabbed his neck so hard he dropped the dagger and he used firebending to burn the skin off Vicinity's neck.

    Amaterasu: It seems you got weaker.

    Vicinity threw a fireball at Amaterasu, but he intercepted it and threw it right back at him. They both threw lightning at each other until Vicinity had the advantage, but Amaterasu dodged it and then it struck Hakuro.

    Haruhi: There's no heartbeat.

    to be continued...........

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    Dafoose

    [8014]Jul 25, 2008
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    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    At the Ba Sing Se Dock...........

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    Hakuro: We've been rowing for hours, can't we take a brake.

    Amaterasu: Fine. Let's sleep until nightfall.

    ----------------------------
    3 hours past nightfall
    ----------------------------

    Ok, I wanted to point out somethings about this post. lol!

    1. Where is the water in Ba sing Se? Last I checked, it wasn't a "river coastline" city that has boats.

    And that second line: lame. "Brake" ? Were you trying to be punny? lolz

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    Double09nhalf

    [8015]Jul 26, 2008
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    eerush wrote:
    Hey it seem like u guys can't translate what i wrote/posted ... ok . Sry for the Un-understanding reply i wrote/posted ... i just confused about what this forum is talk about. what .... Create your own Bender ??? Avatar RPG ??? can you/anyone give an example ?? Thanks

    I don't mean to be an @sshole but this isn't instant messanger. I'm not going to knock heads when someone forgets to use a period or not capitalize whatever words they may be using but please at least use spell check(TV.COM took the liberty of helping us out)

    And also please use normal sentence structures like using plural words or past/present/future words as well. Seriously I not an english professor but it kinda hurts to read sometimes

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    confucioussayhi

    [8016]Jul 26, 2008
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    Dafoose wrote:
    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    At the Ba Sing Se Dock...........

    --------------------------------------------------

    Hakuro: We've been rowing for hours, can't we take a brake.

    Amaterasu: Fine. Let's sleep until nightfall.

    ----------------------------
    3 hours past nightfall
    ----------------------------

    Ok, I wanted to point out somethings about this post. lol!

    1. Where is the water in Ba sing Se? Last I checked, it wasn't a "river coastline" city that has boats.

    And that second line: lame. "Brake" ? Were you trying to be punny? lolz

    There was a body of water to the east. Not a river, but plenty of refugees were entering by water.
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    Lord-darkboy

    [8017]Jul 26, 2008
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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    Dafoose wrote:
    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    At the Ba Sing Se Dock...........

    --------------------------------------------------

    Hakuro: We've been rowing for hours, can't we take a brake.

    Amaterasu: Fine. Let's sleep until nightfall.

    ----------------------------
    3 hours past nightfall
    ----------------------------

    Ok, I wanted to point out somethings about this post. lol!

    1. Where is the water in Ba sing Se? Last I checked, it wasn't a "river coastline" city that has boats.

    And that second line: lame. "Brake" ? Were you trying to be punny? lolz

    There was a body of water to the east. Not a river, but plenty of refugees were entering by water.

    lake loagai?

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    r3173mpt10n

    [8018]Jul 26, 2008
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    Lord-darkboy wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    Dafoose wrote:
    h3r01cdud3 wrote:

    At the Ba Sing Se Dock...........

    --------------------------------------------------

    Hakuro: We've been rowing for hours, can't we take a brake.

    Amaterasu: Fine. Let's sleep until nightfall.

    ----------------------------
    3 hours past nightfall
    ----------------------------

    Ok, I wanted to point out somethings about this post. lol!

    1. Where is the water in Ba sing Se? Last I checked, it wasn't a "river coastline" city that has boats.

    And that second line: lame. "Brake" ? Were you trying to be punny? lolz

    There was a body of water to the east. Not a river, but plenty of refugees were entering by water.

    lake loagai?

    Lake Loagai is a lake, so it can't be connected to the sea except by river. If I remember correctly, after sailing across this small gulf (I think it's a gulf.), they end up not too far from Ba Sing Se, and then they need to take a tram thing to actually get to the city itself.
    Edited on 07/26/2008 9:46am
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    confucioussayhi

    [8019]Jul 26, 2008
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    I was close. It's a little way out, but it might be what he was referring to.

    Who cares? Has anyone read the new guy's story? This fake river is nothing to all the weird crap he's doing. Is he on a different timeline and interacting with show characters? Really. TLG, you dissapoint once again.
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    -TheSecondSign-

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    Khuzo and Ridge, mercanaries

    Reika, Shungo

    Khuzo's home forest

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    Khuzo sat on the edge of small river boat, half asleep. They had passed through several villages, and finally returned to the lush, vast part forest, part jungle, part swampland that Khuzo called home. It had several elements from all three environments, and noone knew what to call it. Khuzo loved it. It was filled with snakes and animals that had useful venoms for poison, excellent hides and body parts that could be used for all sorts of things, and the plant life itself seemed to be perfect for forging everything Khuzo actually need, ranging from good food to good bombs.

    "Wow, it's really peaceful out here," Reika said in awe. Fish were moving in large groups in the direction opposite of the boat.

    Khuzo looked at the boat driver.

    "Something is wrong."

    "Yes...yes very wrong," he said in return.

    "What is it, Khuzo?" Shungo asked, and then Ridge got up and pulled out his bow. Suddenly the thick smell of burning wood and flesh covered the air.

    "What...what is that smell?!" Reika asked, and she covered her nose in disgust.

    Khuzo turned and looked at Ridge.

    "Scorchers," he said quietly, and the driver suddenly changed course.

    "I'll let you off at the shore, but I won't go further."

    "Fine, fair enough," Khuzo said, and he jumped out of the boat as it made it's turn. He hit the water but it was only knee deep where they were at by the shore. Everyone else quickly jumped off. Reika suddenly pulled up one of her legs. It was covered in mud, watery plant life, and a leech.

    "Eeew...."

    "Quiet," Khuzo said, and a leech suddenly dropped right on his face. It attached itself to his cheek but he made no means to grab it. He let it stay there, as if nothing about it sucked his blood from his own face bothered him.

    "Doesn't that...doesn't that hurt?!" Shungo asked.

    Ridge spoke for Khuzo as one attached itself to his arm.

    "Believe me, once you crawl around environments like this for long enough, you become one with it. It doesn't bother you."

    Next he pulled out a rag and covered Reika's head for her. Then he handed one to Shungo.

    "Still, they can make newcomers sick until your body builds up an immunity to the toxins they put in your body."

    "What do they do?"

    "Make you pass out, so others can latch on. After enough get on you, they either suck you dry over put too much poison in you."

    "I think I'm gonna be sick," Reika said. Khuzo began to move for shore. His swords were out. They all followed, but suddenly Ridge pushed Reika down along with Shungo.

    "Stay down, and let us take care of this, got it?"

    They both nodded. Ridge got up and left, meeting up with Khuzo. Khuzo gave him some weird handsigns, and then Ridge nodded, and moved out. It was incredible, watching them move so quietly. Not even the plantlife that was brushed aside by their movements made a noise of any kind.

    Khuzo moved along the outskirts of a small village. He could see his hut in the distance. He moved past a tree and up to the wall, where he peered inside. Nothing. He moved in through the window. He stayed quiet, but grabbed a few viles of different poisons, some knives, and some more explosives. He put the dangerous bombs and poisons in places where they wouldn't get damaged. Special pouches, hidden pockets. Then he laid down the bow and special arrows he didn't need, because he had Ridge for that. He equipped the knives to a belt across his chest. Finally, he pulled out both swords and came up to a pair of chains lying on the ground. He knelt down and stuck both swords in the ground. He then attached a long chain around each sword and a small smile came across his face when he remembered that special thing his father had taught him.

    Ridge carefully reentered the water, and grabbed a hollow reed from a nearby patch. Pulling off the top and checking the bottom, he looked through it and saw that it was clear. He quietly slipped down into the water, until only his head was left. Then, that too disappeared underneath the surface.

    Khuzo came out of the jungle forest and up against a small hut. He could hear crying. He looked out carefully into the center of the village and saw a girl there. She couldn't be any older than 17. Possibly 16. She was very attractive, and covered almost completely by a black robe that looked very similar to something he had seen before and that his brain warned him to be aware of. He carefully ran across another building.

    Ridge was moving stealthily underwater, and through the cover of another reed patch, he peered his head out ever so slightly. He saw the girl. He couldn't see Khuzo, but knew that he was there. He saw the girl crying. What was she doing out there. Most of the buildings were burned down, and she was the only thing still breathing out there. Bodies were strewn all across the center of the village.

    Khuzo suddenly jetted out for the girl when the coast was clear. He slid down on the dirt to get to her. He grabbed her, but she resisted. Looking up, there were tears in here eyes.

    "Comon', let's go!" Khuzo whispered fiercely.

    "I'm sorry," she said pathetically. There was clear torment in her voice.

    "Sorry? Sorry for what?"

    "For helping lead you out here," a voice spoke.

    Khuzo suddenly received a kick so powerful, he flew back into one of the few remaining huts at least thirty feet from where he had been standing. Ridge quietly came farther out of the water. He readied his bow.

    Khuzo pulled himself up, but was picked up and thrown back towards the center of the village. He slammed hard against the ground, and looked up to see the face of the girl.

    "I'm sorry," she said again, and suddenly a huge torrent of water surged out of the river and flew into the air, about to land on him. He twirled up and his legs spread out far and he spun 360 degrees, kicking the girl off of her feet with extreme force, and the water torrent blew apart in the air. He regained his footing, and pulled out his swords. The chains were attached to hooks on the bottom of the handles and wound up his arms. He turned to face the other attack. Ridge's left eye closed and the right one focused on it's target.

    The fight was on.

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