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    FIRE_BENDER

    [861]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/29/06
    • level: 4
    • rank: Thighmaster
    • posts: 61

    Name: Jayson
    Status: Fire-bender
    Special move: 360 flame kick
    Height: 5'8"
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 135
    Eyes: green
    Hair: buzzed
    Personality: cocky, determined, hates being 2nd best, loves showing off his skills in front of other fire-benders

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    AEtherBlue

    [862]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 5
    • rank: Caveman Lawyer
    • posts: 294
    FIRE_BENDER wrote:

    Name: Jayson
    Status: Fire-bender
    Special move: 360 flame kick
    Height: 5'8"
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 135
    Eyes: green
    Hair: buzzed
    Personality: cocky, determined, hates being 2nd best, loves showing off his skills in front of other fire-benders


    You double posted here, Delete one of them.
    You also have to talk to ThatLostGuy for RPG acceptance.
    Also look at the site:
    http://www.freewebs.com/avatarRPG/
    For a complete list of rules. Once you've talked to ThatLostGuy and are accepted, you may then post. Happy RPG-ing
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    Eman5805

    [863]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/05/04
    • level: 14
    • rank: Autobot
    • posts: 5,943

    That guy's??360??flame kick??thing??sounds??alot??like one of??Darlo's moves. Da well. I didn't copyright him so even if he did rip me off(not saying he did) not like I should get mad or anything.

    Edited on 11/29/2006 3:40pm
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    the_mental_teen

    [864]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/09/06
    • level: 12
    • rank: Evil Bert
    • posts: 2,682
    Name: Noku
    Stasus: Firebender
    Special Move: Shoots out Fire pellets rapidly(kinda like Freeza and Piccolo)
    Height: 5'4
    Age: 13
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 120
    Eyes: Reddish-Orange
    Hair: Brown
    Personality: Acts opposite of Firebenders. Is an Outcast until he finds the GAng. He teaches Aang Firebending along with Iroh and Zuko. Loves to fight(the only thing he has in Fire Nation blood). Plays Agni Kai for fun, doesn't do finishing move on opponent.

    I know it's boring, but he's actually my character on my fanfic.
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    Rin-tori

    [866]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 08/26/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 377
    There are no canon characters in this RP, guys. ^^;;
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    vegnegun

    [867]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 12/18/05
    • level: 11
    • rank: Red Shirted Lt.
    • posts: 457

    Rampage (Gigantic Axe)


    Rampage and Savage had just reached the outside of the eastern part of the city
    Rampage and Savage had just reached the entrance to the Kingdom mountain range. The range connected the city of Ba-Sing-Sa to the coast of the continent, or so rumors say. This fact has never been proven, but Rampage wasn't interest what laid on the other side of the range, but what lied within it.

    "What makes you think that these people you think exist would be out here?" asked Savage.??

    "I have my suspicions," said Rampage, "I've heard rumors of these four. And, these mountains have dangerous beasts within them, some thought to be extinct. Only certain few have been able to able to pass through them and survive."

    "And what makes you think that these four are strong enough to pass through?" asked Savage.

    "That does," said Rampage as he pointed back to the city. "Those walls were built for a reason. And I think I know why." He walked passed the gate and into the vast, slate gray canyon. Savage quickly followed him. Rampage stopped and threw his axe onto the ground. A large rock slammed down in front of the axe.

    "A trap?" asked Savage.

    "Hmph, this is the one they wanted us to find," said Rampage, "stay sharp." He picked up his axe and they continued through the mountains. They came up to a turn and then heard a large, powerful roar in the distance. Rampage took his axe and Savage took a fighting stance. They began to hear the steps of something, SOMETHING BIG! Which was followed by another roar. They saw a large foot step from around the canyon and a very large head came with it.??It revealed its massive body, head, neck,??two tails, and legs, along with a pair of wings.

    "What is that thing?" asked Savage.

    "A ghost," said Rampage, "at least when I'm through with it!" He began to slowly walk toward the beast, axe in hand, and waited in front of it. The beast roared and opened it's massive maw, slamming its head down toward Rampage, Rampage rolled out of the way and grabbed onto its head and crawled up its neck. The beast slammed its back against the canyon, but just before, Rampage leaped off it and onto the ground. Savage rushed toward the creature and grabbed onto one of its massive tails, stabbing it as he climbed up to his back that had boney spikes on it. He dug his claws into the creature's back and back to rip its flesh. Rampage went around it and struck its tail with his axe, instantly cutting it off. The beast roared before whirling around and breathing a stream of fire at him. Rampage lifted his axe, defensively, and the flame was absorbed into it. Rampage was shocked, but qucikly took this opportunity to rush in and slash at the creatures jaw, forcing it to slack to the side. Savage jumped off and rejoined Rampage. The creature began to fly off and Savage was ready to pursuit it, when Rampage stopped him.

    "Enough, we haven't the time to waste on that thing," said Rampage.

    Savage snarled and said, "you're right, let's go." They walked around the corner of the canyon and saw what seemed like a living space.

    They walked in??and waited when Rampage noticed the sound of footsteps come into the cave??and Rampage said, "My, my, what a cozy home you got here, isnt it Savage?"

    Savage then said, "Why, yes it is Rampage. But I think they would love to live in some cozy house instead."?? The tallest figure stepped forward, his blond hair glistening in the sunlight.

    "My name is Zeth. Who are you and what do you want?" (read post 844 to see the rest)

    Edited on 11/29/2006 4:31pm
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    Eman5805

    [868]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/05/04
    • level: 14
    • rank: Autobot
    • posts: 5,943

    Rin-tori wrote:
    There are no canon characters in this RP, guys. ^^;;

    But I think you can use canon events and places. Like the Fire Nation war....

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    avatarforte

    [869]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 401
    Fang-Airbender

    -Disappeared into the woods-
    (One week Later)

    "That was great Rin. I can't believe how well you handled that situation," Scorch said as they re-entered the inn they had been staying at.

    "Thanks, it wasn't really that much of a problem. So, what do you think we should do now?" Rin smiled, hugging Scorch and giving him a quick kiss.

    "How about welcoming me back", I said, flying in through the window.

    "Fang, your back!" Rin turned and gave Fang a hug.

    "Yeesh, I'm gone a week and you two are going all lovely-dovey on me." I returned the hug though. Scorch looked like he had something to say, but as he came closer, he looked ready to nail me in the head. Instead, he gave me a light(his light) punch on the arm.

    "You had me worried there. I thought you had left for good. And by the way, don't think I'll forgive you for that little comment you left on your note".

    "Heh, guess it had the effect I was hoping for then".

    "Fang, what happened to your clothes", Rin exclaimed, giving me a good look over. I looked down and examined my clothes, which were torn, dirty and worn.

    "Oh, sorry. I must have gotten carried way. I didn't even notice. Sorry Rin, these must have cost alot. Here, 10 gold pieces should cover them right", I said, opening my pack to reveal at least 200+ pieces of gold. I swear, their jaws dropped the instant they saw it.

    "You had that much money!" Rin yelled. I looked at her face, it struggling to avoid showing too much happiness.

    "Well, yeah. I mostly caught and cooked my own food. So I didnt really need to spend the money I had accumulated". Rin's mouth changed into a devil like grin. She started coming closer and closer, her eyes never leaving the gold.

    "Oh please, can I please go shopping?" she almost begged. I looked at her, as she smiled the cutest smile she could. "Sigh, go ahead. It's not like I use it." She almost knocked me off my feet, tackling me into a big hug.

    "Thanks Fang, your the best. Come on Scorch, let's go." She tugged at his arm, pulling him slowly towards the door, her face almost radiating happiness.

    "You go ahead, I'll be down in a minute". She said to hurry and bolted down the stairs. "So, what you've been doing for a week", Scorch asked, giving me a now serious look.

    "Oh, here and there. Been practicing my airbending a bitm you know, a good old day in the woods".

    "Why do I get the feeling your not telling me everything. Well, not that it matters. What you did is your business is your business and what I did is my business. Its up to us to decide if we should tell others".

    "Mhmm, your so right. So if I tell you what I did, will tou tell me what YOU did?" I grinned. He blushed, excused himself, and went to catch up with Rin. "Well now, I think I'll go looking around too. I've got to give myself a test run". I unfolded my wings and took off into the sky.
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    Vampdude69

    [870]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 09/25/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 1,173

    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords master


    Jax just had dreams about his past, and now it is time for a dream of his future


    Jax was on a single stone pathway. There were two doorways ahead. One had a flag on it, a Fire Nation symbol. That was the door to continue his hunt for Scorch and Rin, as his instructor told him. The second doorway, had a face of Rin on it. That was the door to continue to follow them, but try to get Rin to love him, and forget hunting the Fire Nation. He just stood there staring at the doors.

    His vision showed him both doors. It showed him going through both doors, so he would see both sides.

    He went through the first door.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    He had been following Scorch, Rin, and Fang for 4 weeks. He had left behind the feelings he once had for Rin, and remembered his family's honor. He finally caught up with them, and had them all unarmed.
    It was his chance. Then he looked down at his clothes, and he was wearing--FIRE NATION CLOTHES!

    He screamed and left the first door.

    He entered the second

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    He was walking alone in a hallway. There were mirrors all around him. Every time he looked in a mirror, he saw Rin, standing next to him. But she wasn't there. Then he heard an echoing voice through the hallway that wouldn't stop.

    SOMETHING LIKE LOVE CAN'T STAY INSIDE YOU FOREVER

    He never told Rin how he felt.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Jax screamed and woke up. He was drenched with sweat, and his wounds were healed. He stood up, and grabbed his swords.
    "I may not understand those dreams yet," Jax said. "But I know what I have to do."

    He lifted up his shirt and looked at the scar that women left him.
    "I trusted that women," he said. "I loved her."
    He thought about Rin.
    "She loves another. I can't trust in love now."
    "You earned your swords"

    Jax thought about that. He earned his swords by saving ones he loved

    "You earned your swords"

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    ThatLostGuy

    [871]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
    • level: 11
    • rank: Red Shirted Lt.
    • posts: 2,484
    Willy Woo (Earth bender)
    -
    I looked at hevet and Orinth and I said, "So. This is it. Our team of 5 has been reduced to a team of 3. Well, what have I accomplished? HUH! What have I accomplished?!?! I haven't won in a fight yet and I set out on this journey to kill Fire benders and I still haven't killed one!"
    -
    Hevet responded, "Well then what are we waiting for? I'm sure as hell not waiting for D to return, if he even does return that is. I bet he is no where near killing Tank or Glide. So, lets go Fire Bender hunting!"
    ++++++FLASHBACK START++++++
    My town of Ho-Fi-Keep was just destroyed by the Fire nation and I was soon attacked by three men named Spike, Bulldozer, and Mayhem.
    -
    I ran for dear life from my old life. My old life of hapiness with my family. But, now the Fire Nation killed my family and I was being hunted down by evil people. Soon the hapiness of my life came to an end. I was still running away from Spike and his crew and I soon came to a stop at a tree because I was so tired. I heard footsteps and the man with the red mohawk named Wicker approached me.
    -
    I looked up and Wicker said, "Why didn't you kill me back there! All you asked for was the name of the man with the axe who killed your father! Why?" I responded, "What did you do to me? Rampage was the man who killed my father, not you!" Wicker replied, "But I am of the Fire Nation! I deserved to die. And now I am supposed to hunt you down and kill you for you are one of the few people who escaped your villiage when we attacked it." I replied, "Fine then kill me. Do what I couldn't do to you. KILL ME!!!" -
    Wicker replied, "I'm not gonna kill you. You didn't kill me back there in your hometown. So, now we are even. next time I see you though, I WILL kill you!" The man with the mohawk walked away and said, "I'll catch you later kid. I'm going Earth bender hunting."
    ++++++FLASHBACK END++++++
    "What did you say Hevet?", I asked. He responded, "Lets go Fire Bender hunting. Why?" I replied, "Oh nothing. It just reminded me of something."
    -
    I continued, "So, I say we find the Fire Lord and kill him! If we kill him we will cause mass chaos and the Fire Nation won't know what to do." Orinth replied, "That won't be easy!" I yelled back, "Orinth you have no input in our group anymore! Just stop, alright! You killed Rexsten! You betrayed us!" Orinth quickly pulled his katana out of his pocket and yelled, "ONE MORE WORD OUT OF YOU WILLY AND I'LL SLIT YOUR THROAT!" I replied, "Orinth. You have to calm down! What is wrong with you. Orinth raised his katana and yelled, "Willy, that was your last word you will ever speak!"....
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    doctor_lee

    [872]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/30/06
    • level: 3
    • rank: Soup Nazi
    • posts: 168

    Name: Rouga the Silent
    Description:
    Male.
    Earth Bender.
    One eye is blind.
    Eye patch on the left eye.
    Slash mark down his left side of the face (across the left eye).
    Rarely smiles.
    Rarely speaks.
    Long black hair.
    Eye color: Black.
    Height: 5'7"
    Age: 17

    History:
    It is not clear where Rouga has come from. Some predict that he came from some small Earth bender villiage.

    The source of scar on his left eye is also unknown.

    He works alone and is a very powerful Earth bender.
    He is able to conjure a surprisingly sharp sabre with his special Earth bending skill.
    He leaves no mark behind after killing people.

    There is much mystery surrounding Rouga the Silent.
    He is an expert at hiding beneath the earth, patiently waiting to strike any foe that he is wanting to strike.

    Rouga the Silent will do only justice.
    He??helps innocent people from the corrupt soldiers or enemies.
    He is also experienced in guarding people.
    He hides beneath the earth and silently follows the person he is protecting.

    -Edit-

    Yes, I asked ThatLostGuy for a permission and is just waiting.

    Edited on 11/29/2006 7:18pm
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    Rin-tori

    [873]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 08/26/06
    • level: 6
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    • posts: 377
    OMG!! ORINTH IS GONNA KILL WILLY!! DON'T DO IT, NUUUUUU!!!
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    ThatLostGuy

    [874]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
    • level: 11
    • rank: Red Shirted Lt.
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    Lol, well Orinth might kill Willy....I FINALLY POSTED WILLY WOO's character information on the website..woo hoo! Theres a new poll on the website and I updated the polls and added new characters and took others off (such as Rexsten and Red Death)
    Edited on 11/29/2006 7:52pm
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    vegnegun

    [875]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 12/18/05
    • level: 11
    • rank: Red Shirted Lt.
    • posts: 457

    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Rin had just recieved a bag of gold coins from Fang
    Scorch had gone downstairs and saw Rin eagerly awaiting him.

    "Come on, come on!" said Rin excitedly, "let's go!" Rin took Scorch's hand and dragged him out of the hotel. Scorch and Rin were going down to toward the blacksmith and Scorch stopped Rin.

    "Hey, hold on," said Scorch, "I need to get my chakrams real quick." Scorch quickly went inside and saw Talho standing at an anvil pounding at a piece of metal. Scorch slowly approached her and tapped her on the shoulder. She turned around and took off her face mask.

    "Oh, about time," she said, "you chakrams have been ready for a few days now." She went over to a table and reached under it. "Oh, and as a gift, I made you a harness for them." She took out a leather harness and Scorch put it around his waist. He took the chakrams and placed them in the harness.

    "Thank you," said Scorch, "I gotta go!" Scorch ran outside and Rin had already lost her patience.

    "Come on!" Rin quickly grabbed his hand and quickly took him through the bazaar to shop for items and such. It was getting dark and they had been resting in the hotel room for a few minutes, before Scorch got the nerve to ask something that he and Rin hadn't officially done since they arrived in the city.

    "Hey, um Rin?" asked Scorch.

    "Yeah?" asked Rin.

    "Would you, um, like to um," began Scorch.

    "Go out to dinner?"??finished Rin, "yes, I'd love to." Scorch and Rin left the hotel and went to an outside restaurant. They sat across from each other, Scorch couldn't help but to stare at her from time to time. Damn, she was beautiful! Her hair glowed in the light and her eyes glimmered like the moon. Scorch was nervous, because this was the first officialy "date" they had been one since they met. After they finished eating, they went down to a fountain with candles lit and the sat on a bench together, looking at the candles. Scorch looked down at Rin and she looked up at him. She blushed a little, but Scorch could feel his cheeks heating up as well. He slowly moved in closer to Rin and??she moved closer to his face. Scorch opened his mouth a little bit and Rin opened hers before making the final move and pulling him in.??Scorch was really??in love with her. Some might call it love at first sight.??

    Suddenly, they were seperated by a rising rock and both turned in the same direction to see two men with swords and what seemed like bottles in their hands.

    "Well," said one of them, "look what we have here. Two love birds."

    "Yeah, and look at that bag of gold they're carrying," said??the other. The both walked toward them and Scorch stood up and drew his Chakrams.

    "Look, you two," he began, "we don't want any trouble."

    "Well, we do!" exclaimed one of them. Scorch thought they were drunk and was about ready to attack when they pulled away.??They walked off and Scorch thought it was over when he looked behind him and saw that some man with a double bladed sword was creeping up on Rin. Scorch quickly threw a chakram at the man, forcing Rin to duck and turn around, seeing the man. She quickly rolled out of the way and shot fire at him. His clothes completely burned off to show a red crystal-like armor.

    "Scorch!" exclaimed Rin, "help me!" Scorch quickly ran over to Rin and shot a blast of fire at the man, before catching his incoming chakram. Scorch lifed the man up by his colar and threw him aside.

    "Rin, come on," said Scorch, "get in my arms." Rin jumped into Scorch's arms and held on to him tight. Scorch slowly rose into the air and Rin kissed him again. Scorch went back to the hotel and went in through the window. They both sat down on the bed and Rin looked at Scorch.

    "Ya know," said Rin, "we really need to find a place we can be in private." She moved in close again and pulled Scorch in. "Now, where were we?"

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    ThatLostGuy

    [876]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 08/23/06
    • level: 11
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    Spike (archer)
    -
    I said, "Well men. Now that Tank and Glide are dead lets go find Willy Woo, Orinth, and Hevet. After we kill thoses three then Obsidian will be proud of us! And then soon I will be promoted! Lets head back up this hill and into the core of Ba-Sing-Se!!!"

    Edited on 11/29/2006 8:33pm
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    avatarforte

    [877]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
    • level: 6
    • rank: Small Wonder
    • posts: 401
    Fang-Airbender

    -Wandering Ba-Sing-Se-

    I had been flying around Ba-Sing-Se for hours, enjoying the site and occasionaly landing to explore the city on foot. Despite going around about 1/4 of the city, I had still not found someone to test my training on. "Oh well, I thought. Guess I'd better go back soon. Its already dark". Suddenly, my hearing picked up what sounded to be a fight. It was close by, so I started running towards it. "Round this corner, over this house, down this street...." I kept track of where I went, in case I got lost. Soon enough, I came upon a fight alright, but I realized quickly who was fighting. The small kid I had fought a while ago and the guys who were with him.

    "Your gonna die Orinth", the bigger one yelled. Orinth, was that the smaller guys name. Still, it looked to be 2 on 1, which was a little unfair in my opinion. It looked like the fight was about midway through, since the Orinith guy looked injured, as did the one with the big guy.

    "Screw....you.....Willy", Orinth managed to slip out before he passed out. I started to walk out, when the other one suddenly collasped, leaving only the big guy standing. He turned around, and after seeing his friend lying on the ground, possibly dead, he looked to me.

    "What did you do to him!" he screamed, his teeth grinding.

    "Nothin, he just fell......" I managed to get out before he screamed and "No excuses" and launched a boulder at me. "Oh great, an earthbender. Well, I asked for someone to test my skills on". I formed the air claw and cut the boulder into 3 seperate parts. He was already sending more my way, his attacks full of frustration and rage. I slashed wave after wave of air at them, spilting them before they could get to me. "Enough of this, now its just getting boring". I dashed ahead, the wind making my stride quick and easy. I easily dodged his incoming boulders, slashing about the ones that got in my way. He attempted to knock me down by sending a shockwave through the ground, but I jumped into the air.

    "Die, why won't you just die!" he screamed. I formed a ball of air in my hands and launched it at him. He blocked it with an earth shield, but wasn't fast enough to block my second attack, as I blasted him from behind with another air blast.

    "Calm down, I didn't hurt your friend. Someone else did", I tried explaining to him but he wouldn't listen.

    "Liar, everyone I know are liars and traditors. I'll kill you all, I swear it." He dashed over, scooped up his fallen ally and disappeared.

    "Wait, what about him?" I indicated Orinth. But he was already gone. A laugh broke the following silence like a knife. I scanned the area, looking for its source. Turning around, I saw 4 figures standing on a nearby rooftop. "So, who are you guys". The figures mearly smiled before they attacked. I barely had time to dodge, they were faster than I thought. I fired a wind blast at the nearest one, who side-stepped it as easily as if it wasnt there. "Damn, gotta fall-back", I thought. It was then I realized I couldn't move. Looking down, I saw my feet were frozen to the ground.

    "Excellent job Lith, now its my turn", said the biggest figure. I looked at the ground ahead of me and saw a wave of sand headed at me.

    "What in the world?" I thought, as the sand suddenly leaped at me. It was coming in from all sides. I knew that if the sand enclosed me, it would easily crush me, so I created a barrier of wind as fast as I could. The sand closed in all around me, but thanks to my shield of air, it couldn't get to me. I drew in the shield as close as possible then pushed it out with as much force as I could muster. The sand blew off in all directions, the ice too shattered under the force of the wave. I launched myself into the sky, hoping to avoid that siutation again. Movement behind me made me turn around but not fast enough. The figure kicked me in the gut and sent me flying into a nearby roof. I struggled to get up.

    "Not bad little airbender. You're together than you look. But its over now". I tried to move, just to notice I was frozen down again. And this time, my hands were pinned too.

    "Hey, you guys aint too bad either, when its 4 on 1. So, am I gonna get to know who my killers are, or do I get left in the loop?" The tallest one, a man with blond hair, stepped forward.

    "I guess its only fair. Allow me to introduce my team. First, the sand bender-Nero and his lovely partner Azul, the best fist fighter this side of Ba-Sing-Se." He indicated the large man and the smaller figure, which turned out to me a girl. "This lovely lady next to me is my sister Lith, the ice bender. And I, am Zeth, the lightning bender. We have been hired to terminate you and your friends by a very special cilent. But thats enough talking, its time for you to die.". His hands traced a motion, and the air crackled with electricity. I had little time. I breathed in as deep as I could, and blew. The wind managed to free one of my hands, which I quickly used to free the rest of me. "Too late!" Zeth yelled as he unleashed a bolt of lightning. The bolt blew the roof apart, along with me. I flew over to the next roof, using the wind to protect me from the roof debris. I landed on the ground below, knocking the wind outta me. The attackers quickly surrounded me, leaving me with no escape.

    "Heh, thanks for the party, but I think I'll be going now". I put both arms out to either side of me and began to spin. As I did, I started bending the wind, spinining it with me. Soon, I had created a small tornado, which I then blew outward. The blast knocked my attackers back. I didnt give them a chance to realize what had just happened. I took off into the air, grabbing Orinth as I flew off. I grabbed Rin's scent and went as fast as I could towards them.

    (Shortly After)
    I arrived back at the inn and just from the smell alone, I could tell that they had been busy. I put Orinth outside near the door and jumped up to the balconey. Rin crawled out of her bed and yelled "Fang, where have you been". Scorch came out of his room, looking to see what Rin had yelled at, then noticed me.

    "Ever heard of knocking?" he asked. I took a minute to catch my breath then looked at both of them.

    "We have a problem. A very big problem.
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    Eman5805

    [878]Nov 29, 2006
    • member since: 11/05/04
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    The Stranger (Waterbender)

    The stranger decided to wait until the night, her bending would be strongest under the full moon night, should she need it. Finding lodging was no obstacle, her employer gave her enough money to buy whatever she needed. The stranger bought an upstairs room at an inn about 60 yards from the upper ring gate.??The stranger was jarred awake by an??loud crash. The stranger's water was out of it's skin before she was out of her bed, half frozen into an ice blade, par her years of training.

    Screams echoed from downstairs. Female screams. A girl's screams.

    "Please don't!??Don't hurt my grandpapa!"

    The stranger didn't hesitate. She used the water from her skin to slick her hair back and ran soundlessly to the stairwell. She was the only person staying at the inn tonight,??the was run by an elderly man and his young granddaughter.??They were nice people.??Unfortuantly, in??the lower rings of??Ba Sing Se that was liability.

    The stranger threw on her robe and slowly inched down the stairs. There was no one in the front lobby. There was a hallway to the stranger's right that lead to the innkeeper and his dauther's rooms.

    "I said sit down!" A male voice shouted.??Another cry and a soft thud as whoever broke in struck??the innkeeper.

    "Stop! Please, stop! Why? Are you doing this?"

    Someone laughed. "You should be asking the old man. I'm just a tax collector doing my job, I'm just getting the state's due. You refugee scum have been leeching off the state for too long. The war is over, you're choices are clear: Either pay the tax or leave Ba Sing Se. So, what is it going to be old man?"

    So, this is what??all the trouble is about. The refugee tax.??

    The stranger was??standing outside the door. She waterbended a small circle of ice and looked into the room. She couldn't see the innkeeper or his daughter but she had a clear visual of the intruder. He was??holding a??wodden club in one hand. He wore??an Earth Kingdom guard uniform. He was standing directly on the other side of the wall at the stranger's back. The old man was groaning from the hits.

    The old man coughed.??"Give it to him, Tidori. The money that we got today."

    "But, grandpapa..."

    "Do as I say! It's all he wants."

    Footsteps. Tidori was coming out of the room! The stranger jumped and straddled the two sides of the hallway above the doors just as the young girl came out of the room. and walked directly into her room across the hall.

    The money is kept in her room? Risky, yet clever.

    She disappeared for a brief moment and returned holding a small pouch in her hands. Suddenly, she stopped and looked up!

    The girl's eyes went wide and her mouth opened in surpise-

    the stranger was ready to waterbend some ice over her mouth, but??instead of screaming??the girl cocked her head.??And, with her eyes, asked a silent question. The stranger nodded slowly, still balancing herself with little effort with her legs and arms against the two walls.

    The soldier called out, "Having trouble finding the money? Stupid kid..." Footsteps!

    "No, I have it. I just thought I saw a spider." The girl looked up again at the stranger and walked back into the room.

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    katrah88

    [879]Nov 30, 2006
    • member since: 11/19/06
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    I got approval from TheLostGuy

    Chracter EDIT

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    Name: Yari (yar-ree) the Ribbon-bender

    Gender: Female

    Air-bender

    Age/Height/Weight: 17/5'6"/125lbs

    Special Ability: Air Ribbon Whip

    Uses her airbending skills with long decorative ribbons she wears wrapped around her waist as a skirt to whip her opponents.

    Hair: Navy Blue, Mid-back length, puffy & kinky. Usually with front/top braided back (with designs that resemble paths of the wind) into a huge upper back length puff.

    Eyes: Dark Brown (turn gray occasionally)

    Appearance: Wears a fitted forest green plush-like sweater (with an oversized hood to go over her long puffy hair which casts a shadow over her face when worn) over a canary blue shirt & canary blue 3/4 pants with a blue, green, purple, canary blue, & black ribbon/cloth wrapped around her waist multiple times as a skirt with a long cloth on her right side that hangs to her knee like a chain link which is knotted at her hip. Wears a silver & black stone charm (on a thin silver ribbon) which has the silhouette of a cheetah and scales carved throughout (serpent cat??? lol).

    Personality: Not shy but quiet by nature. Both, characteristics which often overshadow her warm, but sarcastic, & slightly wacky personality by first impression. Very eccentric and constantly misunderstood. Not the everyday goody goody but has valued morals. She is a predominately unbiased person all for fairness & equality but there are a few exceptions. Hates to be judged or labeled & those who make assumptions. However, she is too carefree to hold grudges against such a person.

    Info: Gained the name ribbon-bender due making clothing, fabrics, & ribbon for a living along with her use of ribbons with her airbending. Her ribbons are usually used to wrap around opponents to prevent them from attacking/moving (especially non-benders) and can even prevent some from bending. The larger cloth knotted at the hip is used for gliding but cannot be used for flight. Both, the ribbon & cloth are used to mask movements in hand-to-hand combat. Though, she is still a threat without ribbons the absence of them leaves her a bit more vulnerable since she is used to having them with her always but she adapts quickly. She's also a talented dancer which is another occasion when she will use the "ribbon-bending" technique.

    Her eyes color switches from dark brown to gray for various reasons. She has a certain sensitivity towards weather changes which allows her to predict the weather occasionally. Any type of precipitation can trigger her eyes to change color along with becoming upset.

    History: Yari's father (Roe Xa)??is missing because he was a conspirator against a corrupt leader (Chief Haelin)??in a village adjacent to the Southern Air Temple.?? He was one of the few conspirators whose identity wasn't revealed, meanwhile, the rest were killed.?? However, the determined Haelin eventually discovered the identities and whereabouts of?? 5 more conspirators leaving the remaining 9, Roe Xa included, to flee.?? Roe felt it best??Alyah (Yari's mother) split from him, with a??4 yr old??Yari,??and find a home elsewhere fearing that he was ever found & captured by Haelin's men, or a bounty hunter; his family would be at risk as well.?? Resulting in both constantly on the move.

    As the years passed, stress of being??a fugitive separated from her husband took toll on Alyah causing her to often lash out on Yari.?? Her relationship with her mother continued going downhill.?? As a result, Yari decided to part with her mother and life on the small island near the southern water tribe to make a life for herself experiencing the full essence of travelling with her eyes on the look out for her father.

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    AEtherBlue

    [880]Nov 30, 2006
    • member since: 11/23/06
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    katrah88 wrote:

    Name: Yari (yar-ree) Xa nickname Yix (yehx) aka the Ribbon-bender

    Gender: Female

    Air-bender

    Age/Height/Weight: 17/5'6"/125lbs

    Special Ability: Air Ribbon Whip

    Uses her airbending skills with long decorative ribbons she wears wrapped around her waist as a skirt to whip her opponents.

    Hair: Navy Blue, Mid-back length, puffy & kinky. Usually with front/top braided back (with designs that resemble paths of the wind) into a huge upper back length puff.

    Eyes: Dark Brown (turn gray occasionally)

    Appearance: Wears a fitted forest green plush-like sweater (with an oversized hood to go over her long puffy hair which casts a shadow over her face when worn) over a canary blue shirt & canary blue 3/4 pants with a blue, green, purple, canary blue, & black ribbon/cloth wrapped around her waist multiple times as a skirt with a long cloth on her right side that hangs to her knee like a chain link which is knotted at her hip. Wears a silver & black stone charm (on a thin silver ribbon) which has the silhouette of a cheetah and scales carved throughout (serpent cat??? lol).

    Personality: Not shy but quiet by nature. Both, characteristics which often overshadow her warm, but sarcastic, & slightly wacky personality by first impression. Very eccentric and constantly misunderstood. Not the everyday goody goody but has valued morals. She is a predominately unbiased person all for fairness & equality but there are a few exceptions. Hates to be judged or labeled & those who make assumptions. However, she is too carefree to hold grudges against such a person.

    Info: Gained the name ribbon-bender due making clothing, fabrics, & ribbon for a living along with her use of ribbons with her airbending. Her ribbons are usually used to wrap around opponents to prevent them from attacking/moving (especially non-benders) and can even prevent some from bending. The larger cloth knotted at the hip is used for gliding but cannot be used for flight. Both, the ribbon & cloth are used to mask movements in hand-to-hand combat. Though, she is still a threat without ribbons the absence of them leaves her a bit more vulnerable since she is used to having them with her always but she adapts quickly. She's also a talented dancer which is another occasion when she will use the "ribbon-bending" technique.

    Her eyes color switches from dark brown to gray for various reasons. She has a certain sensitivity towards weather changes which allows her to predict the weather occasionally. Any type of precipitation can trigger her eyes to change color along with becoming upset.

    Hopefully you read this, but you need to talk to That Lost Guy throgu e-mail or PM about RPG acceptance, he'll tell you the nessasary steps to being in this RPG.
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