Avatar: The Last Airbender: Avatar RPG*: Create your own Bender

Vampdude69
[821]Nov 27, 2006
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Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords master
Jax has just kidnapped Rin and brought her to his old home. Scorch has appeared, and a legendary duel will begin
Jax walked down the first few steps of the temple. He saw that firebender. Scorch was his name? He turned around and Rin was asleep.
He backed up a few steps, and uncuffed her.
"Hes here," he said to himself.
He walked back to the temple stairs.
"Scorch," she said softly. She smiled.
Jax stood on the steps, and took out his broadswords. Scorch just stood there. He made a small fireball, and diminished it.
"Rin!" Scorch yelled. He stepped forward. "Let her go!"
"Oh, so you want more huh?" Jax said. "Well, I'm up for more."
"There is no way you can win, you're a novice earthbender. All you got is those broadswords, I got fire," Scorch said.
"You may be fighting for Rin, but I'm fighting for my family, and for everyone against the Fire Nation!" Jax yelled. "Enough talk," he said.
He did a barrel-roll flip off the stairs and swung his swords at Scorch. Scorch ducked and rolled away from Jax. Jax turned and swung them again, but Scorch ducked, and ran towards the stairs by Rin. He turned around and shot three fireballs at Jax. He swung his swords with strength, so that the fireballs dissapeared into nothing.
Scorch was astonished. He stepped down and unleashed a huge fire wave and it flew the entire width of the village. Jax started to spin his swords in a circle, and the fire went completely around him. He turned around, and fire sparks were all over the grass. He turned around, and his face was filled with darkness.
"Your trying to burn this place to the ground!" he yelled. "THIS IS MY HOME!"
"No, I'm no-" Scorch was interrupted.
"THE FIRE NATION IS PURE EVIL! THEY MUST ALL BE DESTROYED!!!!" Jax yelled. He charged at Scorch and swung his swords and missed, hitting the post above Rin. Rock from the post fell, and Jax grunted, and left his swords stuck in the post. He charged at Scorch, and drop-kicked him. Scorch yelled and fell on the ground. Jax grabbed his swords and??swung them downwards at Scorch. He rolled out of the way, and shot a fire blast at Jax. He missed and Jax glared at him.
"Firebending isn't gonna help you much here," Jax said. "It just gives me my strength to kill you."
Jax swung his swords at Scorch and he missed. Scorch walked backwards blocking with his arms. He was waiting for the perfect moment to strike him with a fireball. Jax could tell that he was waiting, so he stopped. He put his arms to his sides, and said something.
"Come on you firebender. Kill me. Shoot me in the chest with your fire," Jax said. Scorch just stood there. He made a fireball in his hand.
"You're too weak," Jax said. He bended two rocks underneath Scorch's feet and sent him flying. He landed on his back, and Jax walked slowly towards him.
"I would do anything for someone I loved," Jax said. "I guess your not like that". He kicked Scorch in the face.
"Your pathetic," Jax said. "Just typical Fire Nation scum!"
Scorch crawled up the stairs to the top of the temple.
Jax pointed to the village.
"THAT IS WHAT YOUR KIND DID TO MY PEOPLE"! Jax yelled. "The Fire Nation took my parents away from me!" he said.
Rin walked up the stairs and looked at them.
Jax stood there with his swords. Pointed at Scorch.
A tear slid down his face.
"I haven't seen my parents since I was 4. I'm 16!! ITS BEEN 12 YEARS!" he yelled.
Scorch just sat there, then he saw Rin.
"You, and every other Fire Nation deserves this!" Jax said.
Scorch started to glow ruby red. Jax thought it was just some firebending trick. This was the beggining of his new destiny.
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Take it from here Forte!
Edited on 11/27/2006 5:09pm
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avatarforte
[822]Nov 27, 2006
member since: 11/23/06
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Fang-Airbender

-Took off to locate Scorch-

"Yeesh, you try and help a guy and this happens". I had increased my speed, hoping to catch Scorch before he did anything rash. Suddenly, I caught the scent of burning wood and trees. A massive cloud of smoke appeared ahead of me, along with the smell of burnt plants and buildings. "Well, thanks for the signal man". I flew down, moving faster. I landed, just in time too it appeared. Scorch was being to glow, tapping into Pyro's power. I noticed that he was beat up pretty bad. "Oh no, not good," I thought. "No, don't do it Scorch," I shouted to him. "Don't use his power when your weak". I knew it was pointless, he was too far into the transformation but I had to try.

Suddenly, a surge of energy shot out from his body and he slowly began to change into Pyro. The man he was fighting, a teenager not much older than me most likely. He was frozen in shock, unsure of what was happening. "What, what is her?" the boy managed to slip out.

"Get away from him now, if you want to live!" I yelled to him. He looked at me, his expression changing from fear to anger.

"I will not flee from a piece of fire nation scum". He drew his swords again and prepared to attack.

"Idiot", I whispered under my breath. But he would have to wait, there was more pressing matters to attend to. Scorch was almost halfway through the change, his skin turned into scales, a tail sprouting from his rear and his head had just began to grow the horns. "God, can't a guy get a break, just one?" I began pulling out power from within, feeling the wind swirl around me. The ground underneath me was blown apart, as the wind ripped and tore it away. Pyro, who was now in control, turned and faced me. His voice was half his and hlaf Scorch.

"So, you think you could teach him to control me huh? HAH, I am far beyond anyone's control. But your a thorn in my side, so I guess I'll take care of you right now." He unleashed a massive fireball from his mouth, at least double my size.

"Bring it, you overgrown frog. And as for controlling you, Scorch could do it in his sleep. And as for killing me, in your dreams, horse breath". I took in a deep breath and then screamed as loud as I could. The air wave I produced easily blew away his fireball and what power it had left smacked into him. He stumbled backwards, and I charged forward. Focusing the air around my fingers, I created an air claw on both hands. "Sorry about this Scorch, but I don't have a lot of options right now". I slashed out, leaving a deep wound on his shoulder. I landed behind him and turned around, preparing to attack again.

"Heh, not bad little boy. But in the end, your just a brat fighting against a god, and thus, are nothing more than a pest that needs to be squashed." His body started to change faster, the wound I just inflicted on him healing in an instant. "And now, YOU DIE", he yelled, fully changing into his dragon form. He breathed a massive breath of fire towards me, at least 4 times bigger than the fireball he had used before.

"Woah!!!" I shouted, using the air to increase my speed dramatically, narrowly avoiding the wave of fire. The clothes on my left shoulder weren't so lucky, getting burnt clean off. I started running around him, hoping to catch him off guard. As I was doing this, I launched air blast after air blast into him, which seemed to only please him, proving his point the more I did it. "Okay then chopper face, try this on for size". I leap into the air, and started mixing the air together at a high speed. Pyro didn't wait, taking off into the air as well, his mouth wide open. I saw him coming and just managed to evade his teeth from shredding me. I didn't stop mixing the air, which by now, was ready. I released the air ball straight at his backside.

"Pshhh, pathetic attempt, little airbender". With one flick of his tail, my air ball disappatied. The wave from his tail hit me, throwing me around in the air. I managed to land on my feet and stand back up, just to meet his tail head-on. I flew into a nearby temple, crashing through the stone wall. I barely managed to keep from blacking out.

"Ow, I really need to start thinking before I act. This is just gonna get me killed". I tried getting back up, hoping that I could stop Scorch before something bad happened. The last thing I expected was him to burst through the temple wall and charge straight at me.

(Your up Scorch)
Edited on 11/27/2006 6:27pm
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avatarforte
[823]Nov 27, 2006
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Okay, my brother hasn't stopped bugging me about this, so here's a profile for his character.

Name-? Shido
Bending-Has not learned one yet
Age-12
Height-4'5"
Hair-Black
Eyes-Dark Blue
Gender-Male Weight-120

History-Shido cannot remember much about his past. He knows that he has a brother at least 5 years older than him. The last thing he remembers is a terrible disater, which caused him to lose his memory of everything before then. He sets out years later, hoping to discover clues about his past and piece back together his fallen past. He also hopes to learn a bending style, to help in his quest. Although he cannot bend, he is quite adept at using a bow as well as smaller swords. Last anyone heard of him, he was around Ba-Sing-Se, following a tip about someone who matched his brother's description.
Edited on 11/27/2006 7:09pm
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ThatLostGuy
[824]Nov 27, 2006
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Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
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I had just stepped outside the hospital for some fresh air due to the fact that Rexsten and Orinth were slowly becoming enemies. Hevet was trying to calm me down while I was in the hospital but it did no good. Fresh air is what I needed...
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While I was outside I paced back and forth and I soon heard many footsteps approach me. I looked up and it was Spike, Bulldozer, Tank, Glide, and Mayhem. I said, "Oh crap!", and I quickly ran into the hospital to warn my friends. All of a sudden the wall shamshed open and the debris of the hospital wall fell to the ground. Standing there was Rampage and Savage, followed by Spike, Bulldozer, Tank, Glide, and Mayhem. Rampage yelled, "Puny Earth Bender! Prepare to fall to the ground in a pool of your own blood!" Spike laughed and yelled, "Attack!!!"
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Rampage yelled his war cry as he raised his axe above his head. Then out of nowhere, Red Death enetered the hospital and he ran next to me saying, "Whassup Willy? Need some help?" I said, "Well hell yeah". Rampage chucked his axe towards Red Death but Red Death ducked. Rampage said, "Ahhhh the infamous Red Death. I'm getting a big reward after I capture you!" Red Death immediately shot lightning bolts at Rampage as I molded rocks around Rampage's feet, trying to trap him to the ground. Rampage escaped the rocks and evaded the lightning. I launched a rock at his feet and Rampage tripped and his head began to bleed. He stood up and yelled, "Alright. Now I'm pissed!"
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Red Death then looked at me and said, "I cannot Fire bend. his axe absorbs fire." Red Death charged at Rampage and jumped over him and attempted to kick him. Rampage lifted his axe and swung it at Red Death. Rampage's axe sliced into Red Death and Red Death fell to the floor. I looked at Red's motionless body and I said to Rampage, "Rampage! Thats the second person you have killed in front of me! You killed my father and you killed Red Death. Now, you will pay the price and I will get the revenge I deserve!"
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I looked over to my friends. Hevet was fighting Tank and Glide at the same time. He seemed to be matching their power and he was not losing nor winning the fight. I looked towards the bed Rexsten was lying down in. Rexsten hopped out of the bed and he began to fight Savage. Orinth was fighting Mayhem and Spike. I looked around and I saw Dahat. I couldn't beleive Dahat returned! Dahat (Earth bender) was fighting the massive Bulldozer.
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Rampage looked at me and said, "Hahaha! Your puny friend Red is dead! Now Willy, you will join your friend in hell!" Rampage jolted towards me and swung his axe at my head. I ducked and I launched a boulder into his chest. Rampage was psuhed back a little but he raised his axe above his head once more. I formed my hands into "Rock Fists" and I said, "Rampage. You will pay for your horrible deeds that you have committed!" I swung a "Rock fist" at Rampage and he broke the rocks with his own fist. Rampage kicked me into the wall of the hospital and I barely stood up. Rampage swung his axe at me and it slashed my chest open a little. The cut wasn't terrible but blood began to slowly pour out of my body. Rampage walked over ot me as I collapsed on the floor. He raised his axe and....
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Rexsten launched a boulder at Rampage and Rampage fell to the ground. Rexsten ran towards me to see if I was okay and I yelled, "Watch out Rexsten!" Rexsten tunred around as Savage swung his daggers at Rexsten. Rexsten backed away and the daggers missed. Savage then threw one of his daggers at Rexsten and it hit Rexsten in the leg. Rexsten leg gashed open as he fell to the ground close to me. Savage slowly walked towards Rexsten with his daggers raised....
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Savage pulled his arm back as he prepared to slice Rexsten's neck open when out of nowhere Orinth punched Savage in the face and Savage fell to the ground. Orinth said, "No way. Dam Fire Nation trying to kill my buddies." I smiled at Rexsten and said, "Good job man. Now help us up and lets get out of here before Savage and Rampage get up." Orinth looked at me and he said, "I'm sorry. But I have to do this." I said, "Do what?" Orinth didn't respond. He slowly slid out his katana (sword) and he raised it. I yelled, "Orinth. What are you doing! Don't do it. Don't do..." Orinth swung the katana...
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The blood spilled on the floor and it poured over my body. I But, it wasn't my blood. It was Rexsten's. Orinth removed his katana from Rexsten's neck and said, "Now that bastard is finally dead!" I said, "Orinth! What is wrong with you! You killed Rexsten!" Orinth grabbed my arm and he yelled, "hevet. Get over here. Dahat, lets go." Hevet turned from his fight with Tank and Glide and he ran towards us. Orinth carried me and the three of us made a run for it. Dahat on the other hand wasn't so lucky. Dahat was captured by the Fire Nation in the hospital....
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As we ran out of the hospital I heard Spike say, "Rampage! By orders of Lord Obsidian, you and Savage are hereby banished from the Fire Nation due to your incompitence!"
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vegnegun
[825]Nov 27, 2006
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General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)
Scorch had just lost??control and pyro had taken control
While??Fang was taking care of??Pyro on the outside,??Scorch had been dealing some damage on the inside.??Scorch had been fighting Pyro in his mind, which at this point was simply a molten wasteland, trying to stop his madness. Scorch had just confronted Pyro in his full blown, dragon form. Scorch was levitating in the air, despite the fact he had not been trying to fly.
"Ha, so you think you can defeat me?" asked Pyro in a voice similar to that of Scorch's, "well then, better stop thinking!" He rushed toward Scorch and Scorch rushed toward him. As they began to get close to one another, Scorch let out a blast of fire, and so did Pyro, both of the blasts deflecting each other. Scorch smiled as the rushed passed each other.
"Hmm, seems you're not as strong as you claim to be," said Scorch. "I will not give up until I either win..." Scorch created a flamed shield over himself, "OR DIE!" He rushed toward Pyro, letting out a large amount of fire towards Pyro. Pyro laughed and spread his wings out when a lot of little scales that began to spin around him and created a protective shield before the fire collided with him. The fire parted at the shield and Pyro chomped at Scorch as he rushed at him.
"Argh!" exclaimed Pyro, "a duplicate!" The real Scorch had gone behind Pyro and hand begun to pull his head back. Pyro struggled to get free, but was unable to.
"Yield Pyro," said Scorch, "you have no idea what you're doing!"
Pyro laughed, "gods do not yield," he said. "WE CONQUER!" He grabbed Scorch's head by the claw on his tail and threw him off into the distance. Scorch did not stop, though. He rushed toward Pyro before creating five duplicates. They began to spin around Pyro for a few seconds, before Pyro grew bored of this and created a blast of fire around him, forcing the duplicates to disappear in a flash. All of the Scorch's were gone, "Hmph, pathetic mortal." Scorch was actually under him and was waiting for him to let his guard down. He rushed into the air and began to attack Pyro's chest with multiple flame blasts. Pyro bit Scorch's shoulder forcing him to stop attacking and yell in pain. Pyro let go of Scorch before pushing him away. He was about to attack again when his body was encased in red lightning that forced him to fall. A bright light then shined and showed Rin coming to get Scorch.
"Foolish girl!" exclaimed Pyro. He charged at her.
"NO!" exclaimed Scorch as he rushed in between the two, recieving the attack instead of Rin.
"Don't worry Scorch," said Rin, "I'm here."
"How cute," said Pyro, "useless mortal emotions." Scorch whirled around before attempting to strike Pyro with a fire blast.
Meanwhile, in the physical world....
Pyro had slowly made his way into the temple looking for Fang.
"Ha, you can't hide forever," he said. Little did Pyro know, Fang wasn't hidding. Suddenly, Scorch became encased in a red lightning and collapsed to the ground. (Fang, make a mini story)
Back in Scorch's Mind....
Scorch had charged at Pyro, releasing another blast of fire, this time blue. Pyro rushed toward him and saw the blue fire. He growled before charging again and firing a massive fire ball at Scorch. Scorch ducked and fired more blue fire at Pyro. Pyro roared in agony. Rin quickly grabbed Scorch and pulled him back throw the hole.
In the physical world...
Scorch had been encased in red lightning and parts of his body (torso, neck, arms) began to glow and shattered revealing Scorch's body, but the wings, legs,??and tail stayed, along with the horns.
"What!" exclaimed Pyro, "how is this happening?" He was still in control. "Hmph, no matter, I wil still crush you." Fang had been fighting Pyro for a while and took control.
"ARGH!" exclaimed the man that had been fighting Scorch earlier, "die fire nation scum!" He slashed at Pyro's back, forcing Pyro to counter attack. Fang suddenly got an idea. He got up and??yelled toward Rin.
"Rin, help us fight him!" exclaimed Fang. Rin began to back away, "please, this is the only way to get Scorch back!" Rin stopped and nodded and ran toward pyro, hurling a fire ball at Pyro. He fell forward, and was obviously weak. Fang shot a jet of air, forcing Pyro to fall back, Jax attacked his torso with his blades and cut him almost wide open before running away. Pyro leaped up and staggered before getting ready to attack. Rin quickly ran infron of him and hugged him and refused to let go. She then pulled his head down and kissed him. Pyro stopped in mid stance.
"WHY...YOU!" he exclaimed. A red cirlce formed around him and Rin. Fang ran out of the temple and a bright red light began to fill the temple. The temple exploded and the area was covered in smoke and fire. Fang landed in fron of the temple and fell to his knees. But, from the temple, came two figures, one carrying the other. Fang made it out to be Scorch and he walked up to him and put Rin down and looked at Fang.
"I win," said Scorch.
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Rin-tori
[826]Nov 27, 2006
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Rin (Firebender)

Scorch, half possessed by Pyro, appeared to save Rin from Jax.

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Scorch was losing control of himself after the beating he took. Her first instinct to run, and Rin ran as fast as she could away from the temple. She heard sounds of the battle in the distance and knew sooner or later, Pyro would take over Scorch entirely.

???No, I don???t want that to happen!??? She told herself as she ran. Her body was disobeying her thoughts and just kept running.

Finally she stopped and fell to her knees. She knew Jax and Fang would die if she ran any longer. She had to stop Scorch before he could lose himself to Pyro completely.

She ran back as fast as she could.

???Rin! Help us fight him, he???s out of control!??? Fang yelled. Rin saw the enraged expression on the hybrid of Scorch and Pyro. It was terrifying, but she knew that if she didn???t do something quick, he would be gone forever. As if on instinct, she threw a fireball at him with no success. Finally, she realized that Scorch would only come back if he got a sign from outside.

She charged towards him as if to attack, but instead hugged him without letting go. He seemed shocked out of attack by her, and she knew she could get Scorch to come back. Rin reached up and kissed him. He froze, and everything went white. An awful ringing sound filled her ears, and she felt something force her to the ground. She blacked out.
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ThatLostGuy
[827]Nov 27, 2006
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WOW! These last three posts (WillyWoo,Scorch,and Rin) would make an amzing season finale if this RPG was a Tv Show...!
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AEtherBlue
[828]Nov 27, 2006
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"Argh!" exclaimed Pyro, "a duplicate!" The real Scorch had gone behind Pyro and hand begun to pull his head back. Pyro struggled to get free, but was unable to.
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OMG!!! RIDE THE BULL!!!
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avatarforte
[829]Nov 28, 2006
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Fang-Airbender

-Last thing he remembers, he was fighting Pyro-

"What just happened", I thoutght to myself. I looked around, noting I was in some kind fo temple. I tried to move but I found I couldnt. I caught sight of a body nearby. Looking over, I saw that it was the earthbender Scorch had been fighting, lying in a puddle of blood. "He didnt, he wouldn't do that." The next site horrifed me. It was Rin, also lying in a puddle of blood. Despite being unable to move, I managed to back away, only to find the dead body of Scorch. "But if thats Scorch, who did this". My question was quickly answered, as I turned into the scaley faced Pyro.

"They paid the cost for trying to stop me. Now its your turn". I didnt even get a chance to scream before his jaws clamped down upon me. Suddenly, I wasn't there anymore. I was in my old village.

"What's going on. How did I get here. Am I dead". Pinching myself, I felt a shock of pain. "Nope, not dead or dreaming". I paused to take in my surrondings. Home hadn't changed much from the last time I was there, years ago. My happy memories of the village quickly vanished into horror, as the village burst into flames. Villagers ran back and forth, some screaming, some on fire. I stood there, to horrifed to move. Because of all the smoke, I couldn't see clearly, but I could vividly make out the shapes of three men, all which were destroying the village. I tried to attack, only to notice that I wasn't in my body anymore, but the body of my 9 year old self.

"Disgarce, disgrace, disgrace, disgrace". I looked up to see the villagers, even the ones that were half melted or on fire, chanting, surronding me. No matter where I looked, there they were. I feel to my knees, covering my eyes.

"Stop, make it stop. Go away." Tears filled my eyes, as the chants grew louder and faster. New faces were among those chanting. The faces of Scorch, Rin, the earthbender, Rampage, everyone I had come into contact with. "GO AWAY!!!!!!!!". It continued...
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"Scorch, come here quickly, he's burning up. Scorch quickly ran to Rin's side, looking at Fang's now convusling body. He was sweating a lot, his body twitching from time to time. He sounded like he was having a nightmare, an extremly bad one. "Scorch, try and drain some of the heat off him", Scorch did so, absorbing the heat now raditating as if it was a small sun. Rin took of his shirt, as it was now soaked with sweat. She covered her mouth in shock.

??"Oh my, what happened to him". Fang's body was covered in scars, ranging from little cuts to long slashes. The one that stuck out the most was the one on his back, which he revealed when he rolled back and forth. It covered the entire length of his back, from his left shoulder down to waist. Scorch put everything he had into decreasing his body temperature. Finally, Fang began to calm down. He stopped twitching, and seemed to pass into a peaceful sleep.

"We've done what we could. It's up to Fang to get up now. Come on, lets see what we can do about suppiles". Rin nodded, taking Fang's soaked shirt with her. "We'll have to get you 2 some new clothes. Come on, lets go". They left Fang to sleep.

This continues later, but I'll give someone else time to post before then. Have fun shopping again.
Edited on 11/28/2006 9:48am
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ThatLostGuy
[831]Nov 28, 2006
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Everything up to this ost is a part of Book (Season) 1... Book 1 is called, "The Beginning..." I will make a summary of Book 1 "The Beggining" in the website under "Currenlty in the RPG.."! This will help you remember season 1 (800 posts) in as short a summary as possible...
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ThatLostGuy
[833]Nov 28, 2006
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Spike (archer)
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The fight against Willy Woo, Red Death, Orinth, Hevet, Rexsten, and Dahat had just ended. At the end of the fight I said, "Rampage! By orders of Lord Obsidian, you and Savage are hereby banished from the Fire Nation due to your incompitence!" Savage and Rampage looked at me and my pals in disgust. Rampage said, "Spike. You and your little girlfriends (Bulldozer,Mayhem,Tank,Glide) will die! I will rip out your insides and feed them to the birds!" Rampage and Savage stormed out of the now destroyed hospital.
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I looked around the hospital and I saw two dead bodies. Red Death and Rexsten had died during this fight. I said, "We are the new bad guys in town fella's. We have almost accomplished our first mission. 2 out of 5 men have died. Willy Woo, Hevet, and Orinth are next!" Dahat was being held by Bullzoder and I said, "What is your name fool!" Dahat replied, "I am Dahat. I guard the walls of Ba-Sing-Se." I replied, "Now, you guard ntohing. Hahaha you are a worthless man! A puny fool! You fell from my hands during battle and now you shall taste life in prison!" Dahat screamed, "Please sir! I beg of you. Give me another choice!"
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I said, "Alright Dahat. One more option. If you can kill Willy Woo, Orinth, or Hevet and bring me their DEAD body then I will set you free. But, if you don't bring me a dead body with in the next few days then I will kill you myself!" Dahat replied, "Oh thank you Spike! Thank you so much!" Dahat kissed my foot and I yelled, "Get out of here you miserable bastard!"
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Dahat ran out of the hospital and I looked at Tank and Glide. You two men are failures! You lost two fights already and you failed to capture or kill anyone on Willy Woo's team of idiots! You both lost a fight to a girl (Talho) and now an old man (Hevet). Tank and Glide, I am going to bring you two down to meet Lord Obsidian on his Warship! If Obsidian agrees with me you will be put on the gallows and hung to your death! I will personally tie the rope around your necks and watch you die a nice painful way!"
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I continued, "Now lets go to Lord Obisidian's Warship at the edge of Ba-Sing-Se. He is waiting around a hill so he is undetected. But I know where he is hiding! Come we will go find him and I will have you both hung to death!"
Edited on 11/28/2006 2:06pm
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Lord-darkboy
[834]Nov 28, 2006
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darkboy (water,earth,wind,fire)
i was going to pay the hospital a visit to see if i could help with anything, but when i arrived i saw 2 dead bodies lying in there own blood (rexsten and red death)and i saw 5 men leaving i reconized one of them (spike) when i interfeared(sp?) with his little chat when he was angry he ignored me and left after examenating the 2 bodies i knew that one was an earthbender (rexsten) by his eyecolor and his stand of dieng but i shocked at the other body his eyes where white i thought i terminated that race completely on 1 or 2 left
'these bodies deserve a decent grave'I??said to myself
while i was taking the 2 bodies with me to the graveyard all the ppl i met loooked at me with a strange glare i didn't like, when i finally arrived at the graveyard i created 2 graves, but i realised something i didn't knew there names i putted them in there graves and closed them as i ran back to the hospital to ask if anyone knew there name
'yes i saw 5 kids fighting against 5 other man i believe there names were willy woo, rexsten, red death, orinth and hevet, i believe those 2 death men here where rexsten and red death as i heard' someone said
after thanking her and giving 5 copper coins for the information i went back to the graves to put there names on it i gaved them a mix between a fire nation ceremony and an earth kindom one.
'i would find our friends and try to avenge you, even i didn't knew you guys i reconized the style where on of you died off(red death's axe mark in his back)'i said to the graves and went looking.
(someone continue
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ThatLostGuy
[835]Nov 28, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
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Oh so "D" is going to avenge Red Death and Rexsten due to the fact that he saw the axe mark. Oh okay I guess that makes sense...
Edited on 11/28/2006 2:37pm
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Vampdude69
[836]Nov 28, 2006
member since: 09/25/06
level: 6
rank: Small Wonder
posts: 1,173
Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords master
Jax just got defeated by Pyro, and the temple has been destroyed. He is lying in the forest behind the temple, wounded badly.
Jax tried to move, but it felt like knives were stabbing into him from every direction. His broadswords were laying on the ground next to him. Blood was seeping out of his leg, but he didn't feel much pain there. He looked at the temple, and it was destroyed.
"No..." he said. "NO!!!!!!"
His home was gone. All because of that firebender, Scorch. And now, his one true love, Rin, was gone.
"Who was I kidding, she would never fall in love with me," he said. He closed his eyes, and he saw her face, her beautiful, wonderful face. Suddenly, the pain in his body left, and he felt extremely warm. He felt his forehead. He had a terrible fever. He started to move around without knowing it. Jax closed his eyes and screamed. He was having a seizure. The dreams he will have, will shock him, and make him more sure about himself. And about his mysterious past.
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Rin-tori
[837]Nov 28, 2006
member since: 08/26/06
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T3H DRAMA!!!

XD

What have we done?! We start a romance side-plot and suddenly it turns into a friggin' soap opera. XD ehehehe...we never intended for this to happen. *points to vegnegun and avatarforte*

IDIDN'TDOIT. *shifty eyes*
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ThatLostGuy

[838]Nov 28, 2006

member since: 08/23/06
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Rin-tori wrote:

T3H DRAMA!!!

XD

What have we done?! We start a romance side-plot and suddenly it turns into a friggin' soap opera. XD ehehehe...we never intended for this to happen. *points to vegnegun and avatarforte*

IDIDN'TDOIT. *shifty eyes*

Hey don't look at me! Im the one who said Love Triangle!Q TLG stands for ThatLostGuy or ThatLoveGuywithtriangles

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ThatLostGuy
[839]Nov 28, 2006
member since: 08/23/06
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Willy Woo (Earth bender)
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Orinth, Hevet, and I just escaped the clutches of evil. And in the process, Rexsten and Red Death died. And I beleived that Dahat was either captured or killed.
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I said to Orinth, "What the hell man! You killed Rexsten back there!" Hevet interupted, "Orinth killed Rexsten!?!?!?!" I replied, "Yes, and i want to know hwy." Orinth responded, "He would have killed me if he had the chance. So, I just beat him to it and killed him before he killed me. Rexsten was a mean bully! He hated us all! He deserved to die!" I added, "No he didn't! Rexsten was my friend since childhood when I grew up in Ho-Fi-Keep. He did not deserve to die!"
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Hevet said, "Look. Over there" I saw a man ("D") with Rexsten and Red Death's bodies. He entered the grave yard and he began to make graves for them. He then buried them in the ground as I walked over towards the man. I said, "Who are you?" -
He replied, "I am D. Who are you?" I said, I am Willy Woo and this is Orinth and this is Hevet. Those two men you just buried were my good friends. They died in battle with us three last night."
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D replied, "Oh. I see. I also noticed that one of your friends was killed with an axe. I take it that Rampage did that. I saw him in this town earlier." I replied, "Yes. Rampage killed Red Death."
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D replied, "I am against that creep Rampage! Are you?" i thought about asking him to join our team but after Tank and Glide has recently betrayed and tricked us, I did not trust D. I said, "Well if you prove you are worthy of joining our group then you may. You must kill two men named Tank and Glide if you want to join our group. They are two black brothers and they are Fire Benders as well. They are soldiers, or spies, of the Fire Nation. So, if you kill Tank and Glide then youmay join our group...."
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vegnegun
[840]Nov 28, 2006
member since: 12/18/05
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Rampage (Gigantic Axe)
Rampage and Savage had just got the news about being banished from the fire nation
Rampage and??Savage had just left the hospital and were making their way to the local inn.
"Argh," exclaimed Rampage, "that little brat! who does he think he is!"
"I know, his little group will pay," said Savage.
"No, not them," said Rampage, "Obsidian. As if Scorch wasn't bad enough, but the bigger brat is even worse!"
"What do you mean bigger?" asked Savage.
"Nothing, its just that Obsidian is worse than Scorch was," said Rampage, "hmph, what does it matter now? We're finished!" They got to the inn and Rampage decided against staying in town. "Argh, we must leave before matters here worsen."
"What do you mean?" asked Savage.
Rampage sighed, "the city has been infiltrated by the fire lord's daughter and she will force this city to fall."
"What!?" exclaimed Savage, "how do you know?"
"I have a certain sense of things," said Rampage, "now we must leave." Rampage and Savage made their way to the public transit system and were confronted by a strange man.
"FIRE NATION!" he exclaimed, "prepare to burn in the fiery pits of Inferno!" Rampage didn't hesitate to draw his axe and Savage prepared his claws. The man drew a??black, dual bladed, sword??and charged at Rampage and quickly slashed at his gut. Rampage grabbed the man and threw him against a wall. Savage jumped in and slashed at the man, but failed. (the man was wearing a stange, red??crystal armor) Rampage walked slowly toward the man and prepared to slash down at him, when he saw the men from earlier (Willy Woo and his gang) running towards them. The transit pulled up and Rampage quickly ran onto it.
"Savage, come on!" exclaimed Rampage. Savage quickly got onto the transit and the transit began to move.
"What was that about?" asked Savage.
"I don't know," said Rampage, "but we won't last long without some help."
Edited on 11/28/2006 6:40pm
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