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    avatarforte

    [841]Nov 28, 2006
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    Fang-Airbender

    (Flashback)
    7 years ago

    The forest was so beautiful in the summer. The animals were always around, doing their daily business. Fang sat near his new camp, enjoying this amazing life he had. "Pshh, who needs to live in that crummy village anyway. Its so much nicer out here. Being able to do whatever I want". He laid back, letting the early morning sun shine down on his face. He must have fallen asleep, because it was night when he woke up, sturred by loud noises in the distance. "Now what could that be". Taking out his newly made fabric wings, he took off for the noise. Upon his arrival, he saw it was a village.

    "The spirit, she comes!!!" yelled a villager. "Run for your lives!!" yelled another. Fang stopped a nearby villager to ask what was wrong. "The devil of the woods, she comes to kill us all". Fang watched as the villager dashed into a nearby hut, slamming the door behind her. A loud growl attracted his attention to the front of the village. Intriuged by the idea of this spirit, he flew to the gate and prepared himself. The gate burst into light and from it, emerged a wolf. Not a normal wolf, but one at least 3 times its size.

    "You've either got some serious guts to face me or is just too stupid to realize how dangerous I really am". Fang stodd his ground, not showing any sign of fear. " I can see into your soul, little boy. You think you have nothing to lose, that everything you value is already gone. Well, the one thing you have yet to lose is your life. What say you to that".

    "No matter what you do, I will not let this village become like mine. Nothing will ever change my mind about this".

    "Oh, but there is. Me". The wolf flew straight at Fang. He braced himself for the hit but it never came. "And now, you will destroy this village for me". The wolf was inside his head, trying to take his body. He screamed and fell to the ground, trying to fight the hostile take-over. Grabbing his wings, he flew off into the forest. He didnt get far before he crashed into a tree, and fell to the ground. "Stop fighting it, you'll never win. There's no chance.....what is happening".

    "This is my mind, my body and as of now, your no longer welcome". Summoning all the will power he could muster, he pushed the spirit back. It fought, slashing at him with its deadly claws. Even though the battle was taking place inside his mind, it affected his pyshical body, as the same wounds appeared on his skin. The wolf finally gave in, disappearing into the deepest parts of his mind. Everything went dark.

    (Present Day)
    "Do you remember Fang? That was the day we meet, the day you showed how strong you truely are. You can beat this infection of your body. You must. For a grave danger approaches you and your friends, and you, most of all, must be prepared for it". I slowly opened my eyes, looking into the face of the wolf who had for so long, inhabiated my body.

    "What kind of danger? And why must I be prepared more than the others". The wolf looked down, and a small glass ball appeared.

    "I cannot tell you what danger approaches, but you must have known. Out of the three members of your group, you are the weakest of them all. You take too many unnecssary risks, chances that must be avoided. You must either stop taking these risks, or strengthen yourself to make them less of a risk. The firebender, Scorch, is at least 5 times your superior. You must achieve that, if you wish to survive the coming threat. I wish you luck". With that, the wolf disappeared, back into the dark corners of my mind.

    "Yeah, I'll see you later too." The world went dark. I awoke shortly after, inside of what looked to be an inn. Rin and Scorch werent around, but there was a new set of clothes on the table, simliar to what I had been wearing, but colored green. Pulling out a piece of paper from a nearby desk, I wrote a message.

    "Thanks for looking after me and the new clothes. I will be back in a week. Have fun on your honeymoon week. Signed, Fang". I smiled, almost laughing as I imagined what Scorch would say when he read that part. Grabbing the clothes and the blade, which I decided to name Zerodia, or the "wind in the grass", I took off for a nearby forest. It was time to start training.

    This is the end of Season 1-The Beginning. Congrats on its completion everyone. ^^
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    kingdom707

    [842]Nov 28, 2006
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    im not sure if someone made this but...

    Name: Jake

    Element: Air

    Gender: Male

    Age: 15

    Hair: Brown and short

    Height: 5'9

    Special move: Air tornado

    Weight: 140

    ??Jake is a wonderer who goes around from place to place helping people while trying to help defeat the fire nation. He seeks the avatar for his training in air bending and to help him.

    Past: He lost his mother to a fire navy solider and he and his father left there home to a safer place. After the accident his father began to help other people. He tried to defeat a group of fire navy soliders but lost. Jake was only 13 when his father died. After he died he??swore to help other people and to do what he could to help defeat the fire nation.??

    ??

    Edited on 11/28/2006 8:07pm
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    Eman5805

    [843]Nov 28, 2006
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    So endeth the story of Rexsten...I barely knew ye(even though I created ye)
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    avatarforte

    [844]Nov 28, 2006
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    Okay, this is the prologue to Season 2. Season 2 takes place 1 week after the end of season 1. So, here it comes.

    Unknown Location in the Mountains near Ba-Sing-Se

    The group took down the traveling group from Ba-Sing-Se with little trouble. The two earth benders didnt even have a chance to fight back before they disappeared in an avalance of sand.

    "Heh, too easy", said one of the figures.

    "Your telling me, when are we ever gonna get some real competetion", said another.

    "Now now, lets not be picky. At least we managed to get some money out of this".

    "I dont care what we get, I just love killing people with my sand". The figure smiled in the darkness. "Come on, lets go kill some more".

    "Later, lets return back to camp for now". The four made their way back through the mountain passes, returning to a large, dark cave in the the mountain-side. They placed their collections and packs near the cave's entrance and proceeded into the cave. Suddenly, the lead one stopped.

    "We're not alone. WHO GOES THERE?" the figure yelled out.

    "My, my, what a cozy home you got here, isnt it Savage?"

    "Why, yes it is Rampage. But I think they would love to live in some cozy house instead". The tallest figure stepped forward, what little light there was exposing his face. His blond hair glittered in the light.

    "My name is Zeth. Who are you and what do you want". His face showed a serious but calm expression.

    "Us? Heh, it does not matter who we are. And as for what we want, its merely to ask for your services. And off course, we'll pay you for it", Rampage said, exposing t bags of gold coins.

    "Oh brother, look at how much money that is!", said another, as she stepped into the light, her ice blue hair also shining. "Whatever they ask, do it".

    "Quiet Lith, leave this to me. As for you two, I only have 2 questions. Who are they and where can I find them?" Rampage's booming laugh echoed throughout the mountains.
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    Eman5805

    [845]Nov 28, 2006
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    This is going to seem like a weird request...but can the intro of my newest character actually occur in season 2? as she doesn't exactly fit into the whole theme of what's going on in the first season...
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    Eman5805

    [847]Nov 28, 2006
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    here's the repost of the intro of my new character:

    ? (Waterbender)

    A stranger walks the streets of Ba Sing Se.??The criminal element was ever present in the lower rings. Ready to prey on whoever was foolish enough to venture out of the safety of their homes at night. The stranger walked slowly and silently. The midnight blue robe concealing the stranger's face. Quickly, the stranger was not alone. Three men stepped out of an alleyway in the stranger's path. The stranger stopped, head down with face hidden. Only one was armed, two hammers hung at who apparently was the leader's side.

    "Looks like we've got ourselves a newcomer, boys," the gruff voiced leader said. "Welcome to Ba Sing Se, it's awfully dangerous to be walking alone at night. Isn't it??boys?"

    "You bet it is, alone, in this city, many don't make it out alive," one of the leader's stooges answered.

    "Fortunatly,??we're in the business or protecting newcomers like you. All for the low price of 20 gold pieces. How about it stranger? Don't make the mistake of turning down our generous offer if you value your life."

    The stranger said nothing. The leader got impatient. "Hey! Maybe you didn't hear me, but if you know what's good for you you'll accept our offer."

    More silence from the stranger.The??leader growled and??stepped forward. "I've lost my patience, stranger." He reached for his hammers.

    The stranger's head raised slightly revealing his mouth.??"Do you know??of a man named Zhang Yu?" The stranger suddenly asked.

    The leader stopped. "What? Zhang Yu?"

    "You do not know." The stranger spoke as if stating a known truth. "Then, I hold no reservation." The stranger turned around and began to walk away.

    "What does he think he's doing?" the other stooge asked.

    "You dare turn your back on me?!?" The leader said, furious, and charged hammer's drawn-

    As suddenly as the attack began it ended. The stranger had turned around and stopped the leaders attack by placing his hand on the leader's chest. The leader was a still image. As if turned into a stone statue. Stopped in his tracks by the stranger's hand. The leader's eyes were wide with shocked. He couldn't move, save for twitching. The stanger was controlling him.

    The leader's stooges, before cooky and sure were suddenly afraid and cowardly. They both slowly started backing away? "What in the world...what's wrong, Chief?"

    The??stranger's arm??swung from the leader's chest and the??leader spun on his heal, swinging his hammer. He caught stooge #1 flush on the forehead, with a sickening crack. The man was dead before he hit the ground.

    Stooge #2's instincts were on his side. He ran back down the alley he came from-

    The stranger's arm swept in the direction the man ran and the leader flung his hammer at the man. It toppled end over end,??nailing stooge #2 in the back of the head. The handle hit first and sunk into the man's skull. The stooge fell forward and rolled several feet before coming to a rest.

    The leader grunted again as his body straightend to stand upright, at attention. His body trembled more trying to resist the stranger who just made him kill his comrades.

    "I could smell the blood on those hammers. You and your men have killed before,??but I decided to let you go.??You persisted.??But, you're heart is hard and cold.??If that is??how you choose??to live,??then I shall indeed make your heart cold. All debts repaid." The stranger walked away, raised one arm, just high enough so the leader could see, and clenched a fist.

    The leader regained control of his body, but he instantly felt something moving inside his chest. His chest was cold. And getting colder. The leader tried to scream for help but his lungs were shriveling. His body??feeling cold.??

    Darkness slowly enveloped him. He fell to his knees, energy seeping away. His heart beat fading as his heart freezes. The leader, who had terroized people in Earth Kingdom villages for protection money and killed all those who refused, lay freezing from the inside out. His heart beat...thump.......thump............

    The last thing the leader saw was the??fading figure of the person who killed him. The woman in the dark blue robe....

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    Eman5805

    [848]Nov 28, 2006
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    Forigive the double post...here's the coninuation:

    ? (Waterbender)

    The bodies were found early the next mourning. They Dai Li quickly stepped in and removed them before too much panic was caused. The stranger was not worried about being linked to the bodies. Waterbending puppetry left no physical evidence on the body being controlled and frozen heart more than likely had thawed (and burst)overnight. The Dai Li would more than likely conclude that the leader attacked and killed the other two men but then died to some ailment. Possibly writing it off as a heart attack or stroke.

    After a few hours walking around most??areas of the lower ring, the stranger decided that the upper rings would more than likely be where Zhang Yu would be.??After??reading one of the many signs??posted on street corners, the stranger found herself??standing infront of the upper ring??wall. It was no different than all the other walls in Ba Sing Se the stranger had seen, but getting through this one??could take some effort.??

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    ThatLostGuy

    [849]Nov 28, 2006
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    Okay well THIS IS OFFICIALLY SEASON (Book) 2 NOW!!!! I will have a summary of Season 1 up in the website by the end of this week. Also, thanks to AEtherBlue (Talho) we will be having all of the character's pictures on the website soon. Tomorrow I will hoopefully add a new character to the website. Im sorry but work is loading me down...and speaking of work, I have to go...
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    ThatLostGuy

    [850]Nov 28, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth bender)
    -
    I said, "So, D. Are you going to kill Tanka nd Glide for me? If you do then you can join my team of Hevet, Orinth, and I..." D replied, "Sure. I'll do it. I mean, I have a meeting with the Earth king in a week so I have some free time." I replied, "Alright D. We have a deal. I'll find you later...."
    -
    Orinth, Hevet, and I walked away and left D on his own, hoping he would hunt down Tank and Glide. I said, "Guys. We gotta go to the train station now." Hevet replied, "Why?" I answered, "My old friend named Sha-Mo works at the train station I think. I wonder if he still works here. He is an Earth bender and an old pal of mine. He lived in Ho-Fi-Keep, my hometown for a little actually." -
    What I didn't know was the Sha-Mo was Red Death's sand bending friend that gave him a lift (page 21) acrosss the desert to Ba-Sing-Se. I thought Sha-Mo still worked at the train station, but I was wrong.
    -
    We arrived at the train station and a man in red armor was attacking Rampage and Savage. Ramapage looked at me and he and Savage quickly ran on to the train. I said, "Well that was weird." -
    I then proceeded to ask a person who worked at the train station if Sha-Mo worked here. The lady replied, "Sha-Mo! He quit like 15 years ago!" I replied, "Oh okay. Thats what I thought."
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    Lord-darkboy

    [851]Nov 29, 2006
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    darkboy (fire,earth, water,wind)


    was assigned to kill tank and glide for willy woo


    i didn't feel much for it killing 2 people more but i had to fight rampage before he would do more dmg.

    '... wait a second if i killed them where would we meet again this city is gigantic'i realized 'thanks agni that he atleast gave me the disrctiption of the two men and where they would possible be'

    when i reached the outer wall i saw tank and glide together with agry man (spike), and his 2 friends.

    'how am i going to solve this without killing more then i'm expected' I asked myself

    the i gotted it when i saw the waterpit

    'dear la please give me the strenght i need to knock those 3 men out atleast'i said

    just when i wanted to do my attack they locked tank and glide into a metal box and putted them on a transport

    'perfect'i said and followed the trading car out off BSS with my ostich horse (yea i have one how do you think i've gotten into BSS)

    when they far far enough out off side i stiked and robbed the car, i just took the metal cage and told the man to leave then i hessitated, while tank and glide where watching me

    'shall i kill you guys now or should i give willy woo the honor'i asked them with a smile on my face

    'don't be so shy you can talk for now' i said them

    'wh... who are you' 1 of them asked

    'the retired head tactitian of the fire natio,n i'm sure you heard of me'i said laughing 'but now i have told you that i've got to kill you guys now'

    'ARE YOU D? 'the second one yellled' I HEARD OF YOU YOUR THE REASON WHY THIS WAR STARTED'

    'so you do know me , yes i persuaded fire lord sozin the start the war when the comet camed the famely who hold the daggers of fear must be destroyed'i said irritated 'we never founded them until when i was retired i got a clue so i went to the terra team to do my job 8 year ago, now that you know all of this you shall die'

    'but...' the first one said again 'don't you want to have a fair fight '

    'no, i can't take the risk you'll flee right now still you can choose your death

    between : cooking, crushing,freezing, drowning, or exploded lungs choose wisely' i said laughing

    ***15 minutes later***

    'COME ON GUYS I DON'T HAVE ALL DAY' i yelled at them 'SCREW IT I'LL CHOOSE CRUSHING'

    as i pushed 2 boulders out of the ground to smack into the cave they said something

    'whenever you die you will never have a good spot in the spirit world 'one of them said

    becoming angry at this comment i smashed to 2 boulders against each other while crushing the cage in the center

    'never start talking about that you will have to die for a greater quest of mine'i said when it was done

    i started to tore the cage down to see what happend and i chopped of their heads and putted them in a bag then i made my way back to BSS to deliver the heads to willy woo

    'rest in peace young firebenders' i said to there maded graves

    when i maded back into the city i started to look for willy woo again or atleast hoping he would find me

    (i didn't knew if tank or glide where controlled by anyone so i just maded there death quick

    if someone controlled them just pm me and i will edit the messege to a fight)

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    avatarforte

    [852]Nov 29, 2006
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    This is just a suggestion for the name of the Second book,

    The Assasins
    Its only a suggestion. Also, just to cause some suspense, I think the third book should be called, The Tournament. Hope that gets your attention.
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    AEtherBlue

    [853]Nov 29, 2006
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    plz dont post anything yet >.>
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    AEtherBlue

    [854]Nov 29, 2006
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    Talho-EarthBender (Season one Finally post.(Sorry TLG, but you forgot me ;_; ))
    (DO NOT JUST SKIM! There are important storyline baces things in here. Read it all.)
    (For all the people who DO want to skim, a summary is at the bottom. "Bastards")
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Had just defeated Tank and Glide.

    (1 Hour later)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I just finished repairing the gigantic hole in the wall. "Ah, A job well done. I hope the others diddent get into trouble or anything." I moved over to the table in the smithing room, "Oh well, time to get back to work. Let's see here. Six bladed throwing knife. Hmm, I dont think that it'll be properly balanced like this. I better tell him that I had to make it with eight blades. Besides, more is better right?" I thought to myself. I quickly heated up the metal and formed rock around my hands. I pounded out a handle for the blade. Everythig was in good shape so far. After an hour of grafting and pounding, I started to feel a little drowsy, so i took a break. I walked over to my couch adn lay down. I looked up at my arm to see an arm protector. I touched it and felt it. I tried to pull it off when suddenly a sharp pain went through my arm, I was forced to let go. I saw blood poor out of the protector. I rushed over to a hose by the fire and drenched off the blood. I checked around the protector but there was no cuts. "I'm taking this thing off." I said, and serched for a clip to no avail. "Well, since taking it off the hard way seemed to cut me somehow. I guess I'll have to cut it off."

    I looked aroung for my moalding and cutting iron, i picked it up from the side and put it in the fire. A few moments later I took it out. "Sorry I have to do this but it's really irritating me now." I placed the hot iron next to the protector."Here goes nothing." I shoved the cutter to the side of the protector but pulled away. I tried again, this time making contact.

    Everywhere was shaking suddenly and those symbols kept on popping up everywhere again. "What the?" I said to myself as I pulled the rod away. I shook my head. I lunged the rod at it this time and connected again. The letters and words buzzing around my head, I could hear faint wispering but was unable to understand it. I wanted to pull the rod back again but I didd'nt eveything spinning and getting darker, vioces getting louder. I blinked.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Five and a half years ago.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "You want to try it on?" a familiure voice said to me. I turned around and looked at a boy about my age.

    "No no, I couldent Rexsten, it's your gift from the wiseman of this village. I dont even live here. Remember, my dad is just hear on some buisness matters, we'll be gone in the morning." I said.

    "Wow, your really grown up." Rexsten said to me.

    "You sound like my father." I replied to him. Rexsten got up and walked over beside me and lay down looking up.

    "Well, I say that being grown up is'nt fun at all." Rexton said. "I'd much rather stay a kid forever." Looking over to me. "You know, the wiseman said that this is a verry special arm protector. He said that an Air bender tribsman smithed it and it was set into the ultimate armor. It contained an Axe, this protector and two others that where forged by the other nations. Then the Avatar at that time was to bless it with the power to stop all bending. But the avatar failed and died before the blessing was complete. Now each item from the armor now has the power to block bending but only one. The great wiseman told me that this is a verry rare and unique artifact and that this could block airbending." Rexsten gave me a seriouse look, "AAAh ha hah ha! What a funny storry hey? I think that old fart was on something when he told me that one. Get a load of this, he also told me that this was kapable of stopping the powers of spirits! And that each different artifact has another ability to it. What the hell does that mean? People should'nt trust that old bean. I mean, really. If this is some important "Artifact" thingy, then why give it to me? If he knows all these thigs yet can't clue in that I dont really care then fine, better off not even trusting him!" The boy now more than ever, was laughing and gripping his sides at the story the man told him.

    "At least it was a good storry." I said looking ahead.

    "That just means he must have alot of time on his hands there talho." He responded smileing.

    "Well, it would be great to get a gift like that. I wish i were as lucky as you Rexsten," I told him.

    "You want it?" He said to me.

    "What? But thats your presant." I said back to him.

    "Well, I got a presant why shouldent you?" He said shoving the protector over to me.

    "It's way to big to fit me." I told him.

    "Just have it. I'm sure if it has any value, or if it really is something improtant, you'd be better off with it." He said to me.

    "But-" I said.

    "AH! Just take it." He shoved it into my arms and I was nocked down. I was shocked and started crying. My dad came over right away and yelled at Rexsten.

    "Did you just push her? What did she ever do to you shes just a defenceless little girl, you shold know better to shove girls. How bout I shove you around? Huh?"He picked up the boy and I got up.

    "No daddy, he just gave me a presant and I fell, dont hurt him." I yelled at my father tuggin at his leg. My dad looked down at me and looked back uver to Rexsten. He put rexsten down and I looked over to him. He wiped a tear from his eye and ran off. "Rexsten!" I called for him.

    "Sorry about your friend, I thought he pushed you down. Remeber this, if Anyone, tries to hurt you or make you afraid, I'll always be there to help. Your my green eyed angel and I'm your father, I can handle anything." He said to me.

    "It's ok dad, I dont think he'll be too upset. I'l talk to him." I siaid to my father.

    "Wow Talho, your really growing up fast, I hope you can be a nice young lady when you grow up and find a good rich husband and have lots of little Talhos of your own."He said to me, smileing."Now just play outside for a little wile, then we can go out for some supper, and tell you frind I'm sorry. I'm just trying to protect my little girl. Oh, is this the presant he gave you? Wow, i don't think you'll ever use this, but it was a thought full gift. I'll bring it inside." He took the protector with him and walked into a house just out of the field. I decided to wait untill Rexsten got back. I started playing with a couple of freinds I had made other than Rexsten during my visit to Ho-Fi-Keep. Soon it was sundown and my father came back out.

    "So!, Ready for some ramen?" he asked. I nodded in aproval and we set out for supper. When we got back it was already dark and my dad was tired. He decided to fall asleep on the couch so I went over to Rexstens house to see if he was going to be fine. I tapped on the door and his older brother came out to greet me.

    "Who're you?" He asked in a grunting voice. He startled me and I stepped back.

    "I-is Rexsten here?" I asked. He looked at me with half opened eyes.

    "No, he's in the woods, er, something... has'nt come back yet. Want me to tell him you dropped by, er, something?" He asked me.

    "Thats ok, I'll go look for him. Thank you." I said in return.

    "Yea, ok.. whatever.." He turned and scratched his butt just before slamming the door behind him. I went over and grabbed the presant that Rexsten had given me. I walked over past the feild and into the woods next to the village, I looked around, they were dark and jagged against the silouette of the setting sun. I ran in, I called out, "REXSTEN! Rexsten!" I walked deeper into the woods. I kept on calling for him, I haddent traveled through the woods for the whole time I got here so I was soon lost. I found my way to a pool of water I sat down and called out Rexsten again. This time I was afraid. I looked at the protector that rexsten gave me.

    "My, what a pritty object you have there, may I take a gander?" A strange voice said to me from behind. I looked backwards, I saw a tall manly figure standing there.

    "No, this is for my freind Rexsten." I said. The figure got closer, and stared at me, eyes in a blood red.

    "I'd like to see it, it's afully pritty." He said with a grin."Maby if we find your freind he'll let me see it." I looked down at the protector,

    "Maby, but I can find him, I'll come back here."I said to him.

    "That's awfully brave of you to go alone in the woods with dangerouse things this late at night. But I doubt you'll remember to come back. And besides, I found you first, I wouldent want to have to chase my prey a seccond time!" The strange man gave me a death glare and fell over backwards, sprouting four new arms from his sides and beccoming really hairy, I ran for it, I ran a really long time, then I stoped. I looke d around and listened, I couldent hear anything. I looked around a burried the protector, loosely under a stump. The thing came right up behind me and crushed the stump, I backed away and ran to the right. I tripped and the thing caught up, this time looking exactally like a giant spider. I screamed, this time it laced me up with webbing to the ground This time you wont be able to run. Just as I was getting webbed on the face, I saw Rexsten come up with the protector, he took a look at the giant spider and dropped it. He looked at me, and paused. He said something but I couldent hear, He pulled out his sword and charged at the spirit, it just turned around and he jumped on it's back. It flung around trying to get him off of it, it wacked it'self against a tree and he fell off, it lunged a claw at him but he dodged it, he looked back down at me, I was trying to escape the wrappings but to no avail. He looked back at the spider, The spider took another lunge, but Rexzten dodged again, this time, he jumped onto the back again, he stabbed his sword into the head of the spider and a Spray of white light came from the wound, he stabbed again and again,"Noo!" the spider cried and he quickly turned around, he lept into the air and slammed down over top of me, he took one final jab and the spider screammed "NOOOOOoooooo!" it exploded into rays of light and floped on my chest, I couldent breath for a bit. but it got lighter and lighter untill he was gone, Rexsten came over and cut the webbing holding me down. He pulled me to my feet.

    "What're you doing? You could have died!" He said shaking me. "Your no match for that thing."

    "I came out to find you, I wanted to give your presant back for what my father did." I said to him.

    "I told you it's yours!" He said. He reached over and picked it up, we started walking over to me.

    "But what if it's important that YOU have it!" I wanted to say. But I said instead, "Well, it is shinny."

    "What? Now your talking like a real, little girl." He said back to me. He threw me the protector and I grabbed it, suddenly I felt alot lighter and said,"No, thats not what I meant. It's still yours." I put it in his hands and I suddenly felt heavy again. He looked at me funny and we started walking. "Sorry," I wanted to say but it diddent come out. I walked for a little more and I inched closer to him, "I love you." I said without even thinking about it. He stopped abruptly and turned around.

    "What?" he asked. My body lunged towards him without permission, I nocked him down and the protector flung from him to the side. "What're you doing now? Stupid." Blushing now.

    "I want to stay this way forever, just you and me, we can get married and have kids." I blurted out again.

    "What are you talking about, we're not even the age to get married yet. Get off of me." He shoved me but couldent seem to lift me.

    "No, I want you to stay with me."I said again without thought. My hand was slowly going up the backside of him,

    "No Talho, I'm not who you want." He said to me. My arm still going up his back, I grabbed ahold of something and pulled it out.

    "Your EXACTALLY THE ONE I WANT! NOW DIE" I had pulled out his sword! He looked up at me, and I jabbed for his neck. He rolled over, nocking me to the ground. I got up and charged at him, he ducked and tripped me. I fell face first into the ground.

    "Your that spider!" He said."Let go of Talho's body!"

    "Oh, caught on have we?"I said back, getting up."I rather like this, the element of suprize is great when thay think I'm one of them. Especially a defenceless one. I can feed on villages throught the land. And never get caught." I pulled the sword back to the air."But now I'm afraid, I owe you a rather nasty death." I Sprung up at least 15 feet and pointed the blade twoards him. He leaned in his back and put his feet to my chest, rolled and flung me into a tree. I got up quickly and ran straight for him he dodged to the right and landed near the arm protector. He looked at it adn picked it up, I charged at him one last time and he grpiied the blade with his two hands and pulled it from mine, then he gripped one of my arms and he trew the sword away. "Let go of me!" I yelled at him. He grippe dfarther down my arm,

    "Here. A presant."He said. He pulled up the protector and placed it arounf my wrist. It did a sort of opening up, move and shrunk to my wrist. Flashes of light spewed from my mouth and eyes, screaming so loudly that Rexsten had to cover his ears, I lifted off the ground, blood came from my eyes as I fell back and lay on the ground. My father suddenly apeared from the bushes, along with some local villagers, also acompanied by the wiseman. My father looked at me, now looking straight into the sky with my bright red eyes. He rushed to my side and lifed me.

    "Talho, talho what's wrong?" I couldent speak. He looked over to Rexsten, now horrified. "What did you do to her??" he asked.

    "He did nothing." the wisman of the village said, "She's been given the eyes of the forest spirit. You must let her come to the temple with us."

    "I'm not letting you touch her!" he said. He lifted me up and walked away.

    "She must be examined!" He yelled out. My father kept on walking. He looke down to me.

    "Don't worry, we're going back home." He said to me.

    "May Rexsten come to visit?" I asked. He looked up to the path.

    "No, I dont trust him." He said to me.

    "Please father, do me this one thing. I want to see him again." I said.

    "Talho, your growing up faster than I can even conceive, but I just don't," He stopped and looked down at me again."Alright, just once."
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    For all of you skimming people!!!
    1. Rexsten gave Talho the airbender artifact.
    2. The history of the artifacts is that they where built by each of the nations one an axe one an arm protector, the others will have to come into play later.. But when all of the nations where in peace, the Avatar was supposed to enchant them with the power to stop all bending to end the wars. The avatar failed in the enchantment stage (Attacked by Obsidian maby?) and the armor boke apart each of the four peices can stop the banding of one different nation. and where scattered throught the nations.
    3. Each artifact has an alternative ability. Unknowing of this, rampage hasent used it from his axe.
    4. Talho has a Spider spirit. Her eyes used to be green and now are red because of this. The ability of the artifact that she wears stops the power of spirits who come in contact.(So Far. Untill it is used to full ability the people have to be touching it.) So, whenever the artifact is disrupted or Talho is in a weak state of mind, since the spider spirit is trapped in her body, it takes controll of her mind.
    That was the summary for people too lazy to read. (I read all of your posts damnit.)
    Have a good seccond season with the Avatar RPG.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [855]Nov 29, 2006
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    AEtherBlue can you sum your last post up into a few key facts...because I was lost...my eyes kept wondering due to the fact that this post is huge!!
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    Lord-darkboy

    [856]Nov 29, 2006
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    ThatLostGuy wrote:
    AEtherBlue can you sum your last post up into a few key facts...because I was lost...my eyes kept wondering due to the fact that this post is huge!!

    he does have a point i write with big spaces bit this was GIGANTIC oven rampage axe was nothing compared with that

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    ThatLostGuy

    [857]Nov 29, 2006
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    Spike (archer)
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    Bulldozer, Mayhem and I were bringing Tank and Glide to see Lord Obsidian. I wanted Tank and Glide to be hung and I wanted to see them die for their failure!
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    I tied up Tank and Glide as we arrived at a small transport vehicle that is run by some type of horse. I put Tank and Glide into little cages and I locked them inside. I said, "Bulldozer, Mayhem, group talk." We walked around a small hill and made sure that Tank and Glide couldn't see us. I pulled out an arrow. I said, "Screw it. I don't wanna walk all that far just to see Obsidian. I'm gonna kill Tank and Glide myself." I heard a swooping sound of a sword. I ran around the hill and saw the bodies of Tank and Glide on the floor, but their heads were missing! So, obviously Tank and Glide were dead! -
    I said, "Well. It looks like someone beat me to it. Hahahaha what do I care. Someone just killed the same two people that I wanted to kill." Bulldozer laughed and said, "Who's Tank?" I replied, "Bulldozer. You're an idiot! Grow some brains!" Bulldozer laughed....

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    feraug

    [858]Nov 29, 2006
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    This is my character and it has been accepted by ThatLostGuy. She will be now on the second book.

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    Name: Hannisa Okari

    Alias: Sira Zinet

    Bending powers: She is a waterbender and a very fast and skilled fighter in hand-to-hand combat.

    Age: 17

    Hair: Dark Brown

    Heght: 5'4

    Skin: Dark Golden

    Eyes: Honey yellow

    Story: Her mother gave birth to her while in a boat sailing to the Earth Kingdom. After giving birth the boat was attacked by the Fire Nation and her mother swam to the closest land (Fire Nation) and died a couple of days later in a beach.??Hannisa was found by Inia Morat a famous singer in the Fire Nation. Raised with a younger??brother Sei and older brother Lo Shin that protected her with their lives. She trained with them but not firebending since she couldn't but developed great hand-to-hand combat and was known for being very sneaky. While in a battle with the Earth Kingdom and some Waterbenders that were helping them, she finds her father that recognizes her because of her similarity with his wife and her mother. Her father takes her as a refugee and tells her the real story shocking her with this and at first denying it. She is let go by her father letting her think about it.

    When she comes back to the Fire Nation she finds out hey killed her stepmother becomes furious and escapes. While escaping she finds her stepbrothers and tells them the truth and tells them she has to go, she escapes in a ship,??hidden. Her stepmother was killed when a general tried to rape her and she fought back, he burned her body completely.

    She now is trying to find her father and tries to manage her waterbending powers.

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    Vampdude69

    [859]Nov 29, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords master

    WOO! My first Season 2: The Assasins, post


    Jax has just had a seizure, and is about to have some dreams about his past, and possibly his future


    Jax remembered back to when he was a little boy. It was the day his village was invaded by the Fire Nation. He was in his brother's room. He saw his brother's broadswords on the wall. Everyone in his family got a pair of broadswords when they turned 14, it was the family legacy. He walked out of the room, and into the market area, to see his parents.
    "Mommy, where is Xen?" he asked.

    "He left to go training with father," she replied.
    Jax ran towards the forest and saw them training with their broadswords. The ones in his room weren't real, they were just the igsignia of his family. He watched them train, then he walked farther into the forest, and he saw a beautiful girl. She was at least 15, 16. She was talking with a man about her age, then he left. Jax walked to the girl, and he said hello.
    She smiled at him and said hello back. He immediatly fell in love with her.
    She said she had to leave, and Jax said goodbye.
    He ran back to the village, and ran into his room.
    "Mommy, when do I get my swords?" Jax asked.
    "You don't get your swords Jax, you earn your swords," she said.

    He went outside, and saw people running around and panicking.
    His father and brother were standing at the village gates with their broadswords ready. His father ran back to him and talked to him.
    "Jax, my boy. The Fire Nation is invading our village. I want you to hide in the temple. Jax, if we don't make it, always know you have a bigger destiny then here. You are an Earthbender, the only one of our family. I love you Jax," he said. He cried and hugged Jax. Jax was confused, but he ran to the temple, and stood on the roof. He looked down at the village as Fire Nation troops walked into the village, and started to burn the houses to the ground. He saw a women fighting his father and brother. It was that women he loved from the forest!
    He ran down, and grabbed his swords that his father hid away until he was 14. He ran outside, dragging the swords, and swung them with all his strength hitting the women in the back of the legs. She screamed and fell over. She screamed and spit fire in his father and brother's direction. Jax screamed and dived in front of the flames. Some of it hit his stomach, but the rest of it hit his family in the face. Jax screamed from the pain. Blood oozed out of his wound. He turned and looked at the women. He took his swords, and stabbed them into her back, and killed her.
    He turned to his brother and father.

    "Daddy, you're gonna be okay!" he said.

    "No son, this is it. I love you very much Jax."

    "Dad! No! Wait!" he yelled.

    "Jax, you've earned your swords," his dad said. They both died.

    Jax found his mother dead as well. He was the only survivor of the village. He thought of the women who betrayed him.

    "Fire Nation can't be trusted," he said. "I'll kill them all!"
    He fell on the ground and cried. Then he looked into the sky and screamed.

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    FIRE_BENDER

    [860]Nov 29, 2006
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    Name:
    Status: Fire-bender
    Special move: 360 flame kick
    Height: 5'8"
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Weight: 135
    Eyes: green
    Hair: buzzed
    Personality: cocky, determined, hates being 2nd best, loves showing off his skills in front of other fire-benders

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