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    Vampdude69

    [801]Nov 26, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords master


    Jax has just recieved instructions from the man to find Scorch and Rin in Ba-Sing-Se


    Jax flew his glider to the area outside the Outer Wall. He flew into the city, and decided to return home to his aunt's house. He hid his glider, and waved to his aunt. He said he was tired, so he laid his broadswords on the ground, and climbed into bed. And he had a horrifying dream...

    It was back when he used to live far from Ba-Sing-Se. He lived in his small village, by the Earth Temple. It was truly heaven. Everyone was friendly, and it was safe from the Fire Nation. Until that fateful day.

    Jax was playing outside while his mother and father went shopping. He heard a scream, and fire flew through the air. He saw his parents lying on the ground, and the Fire Nation troops were walking away. The whole village was on fire, but the temple was safe. He touched his parents, and he thought they were playing, but he saw them scorched by fire.
    Jax cried, and he looked up, and saw one of the troops turn around. The face was of that girl from the ship, Rin maybe?

    She laughed and spit fire??at him

    Jax screamed and woke up.
    "That couldn't have been her. She is way to young," he said.
    Jax didn't sleep for the rest of the night.
    "I'm gonna find those firebenders. And teach them a lesson," he said. He reached for his broadswords

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    vegnegun

    [802]Nov 26, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Fang had just took off from the battlefield and Spike and the others had disappeared

    "What was that all about?" asked Rin. The black smoke had just cleared and Fang had left to find Willy Woo and Orinth.

    "I don't know," said Scorch, "but Obsidian's involved. So whatever it is, it's not good."

    "Who's Obsidian?" asked Rin

    "An old friend," said Scorch.

    "Scorch, your arm!" exclaimed Rin.

    "Oh, that," said Scorch, "I'm fine. But it seems your shirt is ripped a little on the bottom."

    "No, we should get that fixed up," said Rin, "let's get you to the hospital." Rin took Scorch to the hospital and got his wound fixed up.

    "But seriously," said Scorch, "you should get some new cloths, those are falling apart." Rin looked at herself and saw that they were, infact, falling apart.

    "What about you?" she asked, "your cloths aren't in the best of shape either." Scorch laughed beause she was right. His clothes were ready to fall off.

    "Alright, Fine," said Scorch, "what do you want to do about it?"

    "SHOPPING!" exclaimed Rin. She was excited becaused she had never shopped for clothes in a place like Ba-Sin-Sa. They went up to the bazaar and saw many merchants selling fine items.

    "Oh, look at that!" exclaimed Rin. There were some traveling closthes EXACTLEY like the ones she had except they were in better condition and was blue instead of red. Rin dragged Scorch??inside the shop. and??went straight for the??traveling cloths. She quickly looked at them in awe.

    "You want these?" asked Scorch.

    "Yeah!" exclaimed Rin, "but, they cost to much..."??Scorch looked at the tag and saw that it cost a large amount of six gold pieces. He was really regretting??about not finishing that tournemant now. Scorch sighed and looked??in his bag and saw that there were seven gold pieces.??Scorch took out the pieces and saw that their masks were still there.

    "Here," said Scorch as he gave Rin the gold pieces, "you take them."

    "Really?" asked Rin, "you mean it?"

    "Yeah, sure," said Scorch. Rin hugged him and took the pieces to the counter,??and paid for the clothes.She took the clothes into the fitting??room and Scorch stood next to it.

    "Don't peak," said Rin. Scorch laughed and didn't look. She walked out with the clothes on; they fit her perfectly. Scorch was staring at her??and didn't notice that she was staring at him back. "What's wrong?" she asked.

    "Oh, nothing," said Scorch, "they look good on you." Scorch??and Rin went out side and the man with the broadswords from the ship was standing their. He grabbed Rin and flew off on a pile of rocks.

    "SCORCH!" exclaimed Rin. He saw the man knock her out and continued to fly away.

    "DOn't worry!" exclaimed Scorch, "I'm coming!" Scorch leaped into the air and chased after the man, seeing that Fang had seen him and was chasing him as well. Scorch caught up to Fang.

    "Who is this guy?" asked Fang, "and what??does he have against us."

    "Not us," said Scorch, "fire benders." They chased after him out of the city, not knowing where they were going.??

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    Vampdude69

    [803]Nov 26, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and broadswords master


    Jax has just defeated Scorch and kidnapped Rin, and flew away on his glider


    Jax flew up higher into the sky with Rin in his arms. He laughed and looked down at the girl.
    "Fire Nation scum," he said. But he looked back down at the face.
    "Its that girl from my dream!" he exclaimed. "But I'm older than her, it couldn't have been her!"

    He decided to forget about it and kept flying. He had to land at a river to get some water. He took his glider and laid her limp body on the ground.
    Suddenly, the firebender and his friend appeared.
    "You!' Jax said.

    "LET HER GO!" the firebender yelled.

    "If you want her, come and claim her!" Jax yelled, and he drew his broadswords.
    The firebender??charged at him with fire at his hands, and Jax jumped over him and nailed him in the leg with a sword.
    He yelled in pain, but turned and shot fire at him. Jax swung his swords, and the fire dissapeared into air. Jax tried to earthbend, but failed.
    "I could earthbend before! WHY NOT NOW??" he yelled. He kicked the firebender in the chest and he fell over.
    When he stood up, Jax had his swords to his friend's neck.
    "NO FANG!" the firebender yelled.
    "Leave, now," Jax said. "Or your friend, well, you know."

    The firebender glared, but he agreed. Jax let him go, and he grabbed the girl, and flew away on his glider.

    Jax had been flying for a few hours, when the girl woke up.
    "So, your awake," Jax said.
    "Let me go!" she said.

    "In your dreams you little firebender," he said.
    She tried to break free, but failed.
    Jax landed in the middle of a forest. There were old, destroyed building everywhere.
    "This used to be my home," he said.
    Then he turned to face her.
    "Then the Fire Nation burned it to the ground! Along with my parents!" he yelled.

    "Some firebenders are good," she said softly.
    "They are all evil!" he yelled.

    He tired to earthbend again, and succeeded. He made a pair of earth-handcuffs around her hands. He grabbed her, and brought her to the temple ahead.
    They sat on the ground, and she began to cry.

    Jax looked at her innocent face, and thought.

    What have I done?

    Then he thought of all the Fire Nation has done to him, and he was angry again.
    Her tears rolled down her face, and landed on the ground.

    -
    The next morning, Jax watched her awaken.
    "Good morning, little firebender," he said.
    "Don't call me that!" she said. "My name is Rin!"
    "All right Rin," he said. He laid some berries for her, and uncuffed her.

    She ate the berries, and looked at him. And he looked back at her. And..Jax smiled at her.
    "What are you doing?" she said.

    He stopped smiling and looked away. He walked down into the village, and recuffed her.

    "She is...beautiful," he said.
    Suddenly, Rin's cuffs came off.

    -
    That night, Jax watched her sleep. He reached out, and rubbed his hand on her cheek. It was so soft, and warm. He felt guilty.
    She suddenly woke up, and looked at him. He was smiling at her again. She looked at his hand on her cheek, and slapped it away. He winced, and walked down the steps out of the temple.
    -

    The next day, they talked for a long time. They were actually becoming very good friends. They talked about everything. Love, the war, Ba-Sing-Se.
    She said she loved a man named Scorch.
    He thought to himself. I wish I could tell you how I feel. But your Fire Nation. I can't love you.

    That night, he woke with a startle, and he could sense in the ground,??that someone??was approaching the outskirts of the village. He stood up, and drew his broadswords.

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    Rin-tori

    [804]Nov 26, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Kidnapped by Jax.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    When Rin woke up, she was being carried through the air, restrained by the man who had kidnapped her when she was with Scorch.

    She sat up. "Let me go!" Rin protested.

    "In your dreams, you little Firebender." He said harshly.

    She struggled to free herself, and tried heating the earthen handcuffs with no success.

    They landed in the middle of a forest where a patch of destroyed buildings stood like gravemarkers in the landscape. It was scary.

    They landed at a temple at the edge of the town.

    "This used to be my home." He said, looking at the temple. He turned around to face her.
    "Then the Fire Nation burnt it to the ground!" He yelled.

    Rin was visibly hurt. "Some firebenders are good..." She said quietly.

    "No! They're all evil!" He retorted. When she got a good look at him, he was only about a year older than she was.
    He reminded Rin of her brother, with his rebellious attitude.

    She looked away and began to cry.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~

    The next morning, he had a different attitude. Rin was suspicious. He started out with the same attitude as the day before, calling her names as she awoke.

    "Good morning, little firebender." He said, coldly.
    "Don't call me that! I have a name, you know. My name is Rin."
    "Fine, Rin.??? He said. He gave her some berries to eat, and she ate them. She was still suspicious of his behavior, but he seemed???different.

    The strangest part was, he smiled at her. Someone who she thought hated her.

    ???What are you doing???? Rin said, annoyed.

    He looked away. Rin thought he was up to something, but kept it to herself. She was a hostage, after all.

    The next day was a drastically different. He was more open about himself, and he didn???t seem like the jerk he was. Maybe he was just mad at the Fire Nation for what the war caused???and Rin didn???t blame him. The war was the reason why her family was dead. And her brother died trying to stop it. He seemed very zealous, a rare quality. One of her brother???s qualities. He seemed to really like her. But Rin knew she would see Scorch again.
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    avatarforte

    [805]Nov 26, 2006
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    Fang-Airbender

    -Just passed out on the floor of an inn-

    "God, someone get the number of that wagon that hit me". Shaking off my wooziness, I looked to see a group of people staring at me, one of which looked extremely pissed. "Uh, wrong house, sorry". I dashed to the window and took off, flying off to find the others. My wounds were didnt hurt as much, but they still hurt. Seeing a hospital, I went down and in. I got my leg and arm bandaged, and took off again. Picking up Rin and Scorch's scent, I went off to find them. Soon enough, I saw Scorch, but I also saw the man who was on Rampage's boat. And he had Rin.

    "Hey Fang, get your butt down here and help me get him". I flew down, knowing that I was in no condition to fight again, but then, I never really seemed to listen to my body lately. We caught him soon enough, but mainly because he stopped. Scorch was on him in an instant but since he was in almost as bad a condition as me, the enemy easilt dodged him and took out his leg. Scorch trying fighting back, but his healthly opponent was too strong for him to beat. Scorch got knocked back, and I finally decided to jump in. For all the good it did me. The man sidestepped my lunge and put his sword to my throat.

    "Crap, this is not how I envisioned this would turn out". The man told Scorch to stop his attack or I would be killed. Well, I didnt want that, but then again, Scorch was gonna kill me for my mistake. Scorch nodded and the man took off with Rin again. "Sorry Scorch, I tried".

    "Don't worry, its not your fault. It's mine. I allowed him to take Rin in the first place. I can't believe it. How can I protect someone I care so much about when I always seem to be so weak. I curse my weakness, I curse my helplessness, I curse everything".

    "Hey, dont blame yourself man. No one could expect us, with our fatigured bodies, to be able to beat a healtly opponent. Now, answer me this. Is it true that you have the spirit of a dragon in you?" He looked at me, raising an eyebrow. "Rin told me, so don't look at me like that".

    "Yeah, I do. Pyro. He gives me unbelievable power, but I have to control over it. He takes complete control, and does as he pleases. Why do you ask"? I smiled, and began to laugh a little. "What?"

    "Well, what If I told you I could teach you that power?" He looked at me, half amazed and half confused. "And when you do, we'll have us one heck of a party".
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    vegnegun

    [806]Nov 26, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Scorch and Fang had just began to rest in a forest after a long night of flying.

    "So, Scorch," said Fang, "do you want me to teach you how to control Pyro?"

    "Yeah, but how would I do it?" asked Scorch. He couldn't believe what he was doing.

    "Actually, it all has to do with your sense of mind," said Fang, "see, when your most venurable, Pyro takes that opportunity and strikes you down."

    "Okay, but how would I stop this from happening?" asked Scorch.

    "You must enduce the state yourself," said Fang. "I suppose I should demonstrait." He braced himself and closed his eyes. His body began to glow white, "you see, this glow signifies that the power is mine.??while I'm in this state I must keep control of my emotions. But, even if this state has nor been enduced, it can still activate when I'm not thinking clearly. If I would say let go of my sanity, the wolf spirit would fully take over."

    "Oh," said Scorch, "how do I do this?"

    "Easy, visualize the beast within you," said Fang, "you must take control of him and??and his power." Fang transformed back into his normal state. Scorch closed his eyes and searched inside himself and found it. "Do you have it? Use the power!"

    Scorch closed his eyes. He saw his hands begin glowing a ruby-like glow and??the glow encase his entire body. He felt??a surge of power move through??his limbs. He bursted out of the shell and his vision changed completely to something different. "What's wrong with my eyes?"

    "Oh, some spirits see life differently, literarly," said Fang, "you'll get used to it." Scorch felt weird because of the fact he wasn't used to that much power. "now, just get used to your new power. Pyro is much different??than Fang. So, i'll let you take it from here..." Scorch, walked around and attempted to??lift??a nearby log with his left arm. And, as surprised as he was, he grabbed it perfectly. He then tried to break it in half??and managed that. He turned his head and looked at the sky and attempted to fly. He leaped into the air and began to??emit a stronge, blue flame from his feet. "HEY, DON'T GO TOO FAR!" exclaimed Fang. Scorch turned around and landed. He closed his eyes and looked for himself again.??He stopped glowing,??"Ugh, so tired." He layed down and waited for morning. Fang fell asleep and they both waited for morning.

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    ThatLostGuy

    [807]Nov 26, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth bender)
    -
    Orinth and I continued to run away from our enemies. We ran and we ran and we ran and we ran some more. We finally came to a stop and we saw an air bender (Fang) fly into the window of an inn. I said, "Thats the guy that you were just fighting Orinth." Orinth replied, "Should we attack him?" I replied, "No. Scorch might be near becuase I think Scorch is partners with the air bender."
    -
    We sat down to rest in an alley and I said, "Orinth. Your hurt. That air bender really beat you up bad." Orinth replied, "yeah, should we go to the hospital and get me checked out?" I replied, "Well we might as well. We can regroup with Hevet and see if Rexsten is alright also."
    -
    We walked towards the hospital and we finally arrived. Soon enough we were greeted by Hevet who said, "Rexsten is OKAY! the nurse said that he will be on his feet in a matter of days!" I looked at Orinth who had a grin on his face and I said, "What. You hate Rexsten all of a suddem?" Orinth replied, "We had a little fight and I ended up throwing him out a window..." I yelled, "WHAT! We are a team! C'mon people!" Orinth said, "In two days when Rexsten is fully recovered he will try to kill me. I can sense it." I grinned and said, "No. No he won't. We're a team and I'll make sure we stick together."
    -
    Dahat (Talho's friend) walked in the room and said, "I brought cabbages. Time to eat up!" We all sat down and ate and I said to a wounded Rexsten, "Rexsten. I'm here for you buddy. You will be okay! And soon enough we will have our team back again!" Dahat said, "Team?" I replied, "Yeah don't ask. I don't think we need another member, especially one who guards Ba-Sing-Se all day. Your just not team material." Dahat replied, "Jeez. Harsh man. I wouldn't want to join some lame team anyway."
    -
    Dahat left the hospital muttering curses at us. I don't think he likes us anymore. Hevet said, "But, where is Red Death?" I replied, "I dunno. I haven't seen him in forever. I hope he is okay though." All of a sudden Rexsten muttered something but I couldn't hear him. I moved myself closer to his mouth and he whispered, "Tell Talho that I'm sorry I killed her father. And tell Orinth that he better watch his back at all times from now on!"
    -
    I stood up and said, "I need some air." Orinth said, "Everything alright Willy?" Orinth looked at Rexsten and Rexsten grinned at him.....
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    avatarforte

    [808]Nov 26, 2006
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    Fang-AirBender

    -Has began teaching Scorch how to control Pyro-

    "Hmmmm, you've got the general idea, but your not controlling the spirit's mind. Your just taking in the power." It was the next morning and although Scorch was slowly getting the hang of the change, he was still coming too close to fully transforming

    "Well, what am I doing wrong then", he snarled at me. I backed off, scared by his harsh tone. "Sorry, its just that the longer we wait here, the farther away that guy gets with Rin".

    "Don't worry, he hasnt gone too far.. About a few hours away, I believe."

    "If he's that close, why havent we gone after him yet"?

    "For several reasons. One, we needed time to heal or it would have just been like last time. Second, if I didnt start showing you how to control this power, you're more likely to end up doing more harm then good". Scorch started to say something, then stopped. Deep down, he knew I was right. "Now, try it again. I need to get more suppiles from town and to see the doctor again. As it is, I'm of no help to anyone in a battle".

    "How bad you banged up"?

    "Ive got a swollen ankle, an arrow wound in my right shoulder and it is like I'm getting kicked in the chest everytime I breathe. So yeah, I'm banged up pretty bad. I'll be back soon, so keep trying. Remember, control the mind first, then the power". With that I took off.

    (A little bit later)

    I returned a while later to a burnt wasteland. "That idiot, what he gone and done now" Taking in a good whiff, I managed to catch his scent....in the direction of where the theif was. "Oh, I hope I make it in time". Unfolding my wings, I took off, hoping to find Scorch before he found them.
    Edited on 11/26/2006 8:36pm
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    vegnegun

    [809]Nov 26, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Fang had just gone into town

    Scorch tried again to go into the Scorch state, but something this time went horrible wrong. He rose into the air, like usually, but his body began to burn severley.

    "Argh, I cannot move," said Scorch.??His body was sparking with blood red lightning. "Forget this, I'm going to save Rin, despite what that fool??said." And with that??Scorch ran??out of the wasteland.??

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    AEtherBlue

    [810]Nov 27, 2006
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    Talho-Earthbender.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    With her father and childhood friend supposidly dead, Talho's mind has rejected the truth and she developed amnesia.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I woke up to see some strangers looking at me, "Who are you guys?" I asked. They just looked at eachother. Then they all came closer and one of them I could have swore I met before.

    "How are you feeling?" he asked. I thought that this was a strange question.

    "Uhh, fine, I guess." I said in return. I tried to stand up but my stung in pain. "Aah," I growned as I gripped my leg. as I moved my arm I felt an agonizing pain in that too. "Damn, what happened?" I asked. They looked at eachother again, then back at me. "And dont look at me like that, I dont need a peanut gallery." I tried to stand up again this time it was a success.

    "Hey, wats your name?" another of them asked me. I groaned.

    "It's Talho, I'm a blacksmith."I said.

    "Perfect." He responded. I looked up at him, he had a smile on his face.

    "What a really strange group of people." I thought,

    "I have a job for you." He said. Just the word job sparked my memory a little.

    "Job! I havent gotten asked that in.." I slowed down in my thoughts, trying to remember something but gave up and looked over to the guy I could vaguely remember now. "Ph!.... Uh... Its you, ummm..." I said. I just had it on the tip of my mind.

    "Fang." He replied.

    "Anyway," The other guy had redirected my attention to him, "have you ever heard of Chakrams?"

    "Chakrams?" I asked, "Yes, there unique throwing weapons, usually just a flat disc." Oddly, I could fully remember the details of this strange weapon. "Did I use these weapons before? How come I never knew about these before this?" I thought to myself.

    "Yeah, except I have some special modifications for you two do,". He said, interupting my thoughts. He told me about this bizzar design and I was sceptical,"Why am I taking orders from this guy? I dont even know his name?? I'll have to ask him" I said to myself. But then I suddenly got an urge to bui;d this masterpiece weapon, I thought of some crazy designs for it. "So let me get this straight," I siad, "you want a pair of Chakrams
    with 1 and a half foot daggers, six of them, attatched on the edges?"

    "Yeah" He responded. I was really getting into it now! I actually wanted to build this for him.

    "I suppose I'll have to ask him for SOME money. Wait.. what was our currency system again? Why am I forgetting all of this stuff!?!?!" I asked myself. I looked around and noticed Fang playing around with a gold coin. Flipping it back and forth and spinning it in the air. "What is that dunce doing?" I asked myself, "He looks like he's having fun!". Looking at the big smile on his face as he played with the coin some more. He flipped it into the air, he positioned his head to have the coin land on his forehead as he leanded back, the coin came bown and smacked him on the head, he slipped and landed on his but. I almost laughed out loud. To make sure I diddent, I mechanically and smoothly waved my head back to the person taking the order. "One gold coin please." I was almost about to burst out laughing. The guy handed the coin to me and I said, "Alright, everything seems to be in order.". Then I thought to myself, "Oh wait, I need his name," I asked for his name.

    "Scorch," He said. The girl went up to his side and wispered something in his ear. Then he looked to the door as a short kid walked in (Orinth) with what I was assuming was his friend (Willy Woo). I was just about to tell the short one that I diddent sell stuff to minors and that he should go look at a novice shop but then his pall spoke up and yelled something at Scorch.

    "Oh, not even customers..." I thought to myself. I wrote down the specifacations of the weapon on a sheet of paper.

    "A fight!" The boy (Orinth) shouted out. I stoped.

    "These people arent gonna fight in THIS shop." I said to myself. I heard a comment about the boys height and saw him give a nasty glare. I instinctively pulled up a large spiked mace and slammed it against the table, "Boys, take it outside." I said. The other guy (Willy Woo) widened his eyes.

    "Right," said the other guy, "well, come on you two." He waved to Scorch and the girl and they began to walk outside.

    "Rin, stay in here," said Scorch to the girl, "this is my fight." She agreed and stood there.

    "Hmm, a worriers honor, as it seems." I thought to myself as he walked out the door. Fang walked up to Rin.

    "What's that all about?" he asked her.

    "I don't know," said Rin, "boys will be boys." I knew what he was talking about. I seemed to know alot about the ways of a worrier and Blacksmithing and stuff but I just couldent figure out where I had learnt all this stuff. Come to think of it, most of the stuff I had been just doing was all by reflex.... as if I was ready to do this...

    Fang said something to Rin and then walked over to the couch and layed down. Rin ran over to him.

    "Is he just gonna lay there on my couch and get his dirty cloths all over it?? Who does he think he is?" I asked myself. I stood up and pulled off the mace from the table. (Spiked ball hooked to a chain.).

    "Wait, aren't you going to help him? He's beat up worse than any of
    us", Rin said, pleading to him, "Please, it's two on one. Please help him out for me Fang". I looked at the man on my couch. I looked over his body, he has bruises and cuts all along his skin and looked like he just escaped from war. He open up his eyes and took a look at the people fighting.

    'Okay. But you're gonna owe me later, I'm pretty beat up from fighting you." He said as he got up. Rin certainly looked pleased.

    "I suppose when it comes down to it, you have your honor as well." I thought to myself, turning around.

    I looked at the guy fighting Scorch as the guy raised an earth wall at him. "Oh, another EarthBender." I thought to myself. "This certainly has gotten boring quickly," I looked over to the two other people fighting. I had just caught Fang pointing his hand at the short guy. "Oh, he bends too?" I said to myself quietly. The short one was launched backward and I stood. "Wait, I diddent see any bending, what's going on?" The little guy fell to the ground and fang went out of sight. I saw the boy rush in ffangs direction, then fang came down and touched the earth with something. The boy got blasted away as soon as he did that. I looked at the object.

    Suddenly all these words started flowing, everything was shaking and I saw words as you would read in a text, flaoting a nd switching around me, I looked over to where the boy was and he was floating in the air, everything looked still, yet it wasent. Everything was shaking. The words changed randomly and everything turned a dark brown. The words where still there. I could recognise them as words ive dealt with every day, but as they switched around, I couldent remember what word was before that, it started looking like the words where surrounding me, attacking me. I couldent move. "Was I in a stroke? Having a heart attack?". the words got closer and closer and more of them came, they where all around me now really close, I still couldent move, more came, they now blocked out the people fighting in the street. Then all went dark.

    I blinked, the boy came to the ground, and there was a crash of debris. I looked over at the sword again. That's a Tai-Chi sword with unique carvings in it for there to be air easily channeled through it, it was more flexible than most Tai-Chi swords and because of that the user had more stability and controll over it whith proper Air Bending, it was sharp and strong enough to cut through the thickest of swords in the middle, block up to a ton of weight closer to the halter, and cut anything with flesh to ribbons with the flexable tip and that I was going to charge him exactally 100 gold peices for it. I knew all this because I made it. "I haddent even remembered making it before! Why am I remembering all these new things as if I did them?" I asked myself. the boy diddent have time to get up before I noticed Fang launch a gust of air at him. "That man, he's an AirBender I met!" I said almost blurting it out, I mumbled it.

    I looked outside and saw the four men still fighting. I left the main shop and went up the stairs, and to the bathroom, "I need a shower, I'll figure this out later," I said to myself. I got undressed and looked at my leg, "Now, what happened here? I guess I cut myself after burning my arm in the fire. Probably wile I was making that Fang guy's sword... That ass pisses me off. I bet he stole it." I said to myself. I had a breif flashback of when he was laying on the couch and had agreed to fight for Scorch. "Maby he just needed it, I guess I shouldent be so hard on him." I blushed a little, then shook my head. I stepped into the shower and washed myself off, I had blood all over my leg and some of it was hard to get off. "How long ago did I do this?" looking at my wound. It had already healed off. I scrubbed the dirt from my body, "I really needed a shower." I thought. I finished up, then went to my room to get a shirt, "Now where did I keep my shirts?" I opened a drawr and found it littered full of undrwear. I looked down at my naked body, "I guess I will need these. Wow I really am out of it." I thought to myself. stretching on a pair of green paties and bra, I looked into the seccond droor, luckilly I found the shirts. They where all green sweaters and smithing shirts. "Green it is then." I pulle dover the shirt and looked for some pants, there where only shirts in the remaining drawers, I looked in the closet and pulled out some smith-ers pants and put then down, next I pulled out some green cargo-pants and decided to try those, they went all the way down to the floor and then some. "I guess I'll be needing some soes too." I put on some large smith-ers boots. "There, well, it's better than socks, especially in these pants. I pulled out an arm glove fith the fingers cut-out, "Hmmm, looks good, I can hide my burn with this" I said to myself. I pinned my hair back and looked at myself in the mirror, looks good, I walked away but I noticed something weird.

    I moved but the reflection in the mirror stayed. I steped back, I looked close to the mirror. My reflection smiled at me, "What the-" I thought. Suddenly eveything began to shake again, but the words come in faster and everything got darker, but this time, I diddent even recognize them, They where symbols and letters I've never even seen before, The image walked towards me, smileing, out of the mirror it walked, it got right up to me, I couldent move. everything had disapeard now and there where only words just like before exept her, she placed her hand on my cheek and rubbed it, I couldent move, she got really close to my face, eyes looking into mine, her hand now on my chin, her eyes turned a think black, still couldent move. Her face got so close to mine it felt like it was touching me, still getting closer, now it felt as if she where going into me, forcing into me. Controlling me.

    I blinked. Everything back to normal. I blinked a few more times to make sure I wasent imagining things again, I looked at myself in the mirror again, yep, it follows me, I shruged it off and took another look at my hair, hmm, "Would that AirBender guy think this lookes nice?" I thought to myself. I shook my head then I took the pins out, "What ever. It doesent matter." I said to myself. I felt the thump of two large men in my house comming from the back door. "Wait, arent those people in front at the shop? Then there is someone in my home, and damn did they come at the wrong time," I was a little pissed at myself for even thinking of a total stranger like that. I rushed down stairs and noticed that the peolpe where fighting someone new! And two of those someones where in my house...

    I went over a grabbed the mace I had set on the floor, It had left a large hole in the wood when I looked at it, "Damnit!" I blurted out. Looking at the ruined floorboard. The two men came into the room.

    "Wow, I diddent expect to find a little girl living here!" One of the men said elbowing the other in the gut, the seccond man diddent seem to particularily like it but he shrugged it off and smiled.

    "Yea, I guess we can have some fun with her till the boss is done with the others." The seccond said.

    The two men stood there the first was just a little taller than myself wile the seccond was massive, I believed he was close to as tall as Scorch. Both men were masculant.

    "Oh, so you guys have a boss, I suppose he's not one of the all-loving EarthBenders you may have met here." I said snickering at them.

    "You could say that." the short man snapped his fingers and fire rose from it.

    "Fire Nation, ooh that makes this even more fun to deal with. I'll take you guys on. But this is'nt verry fair, you have two men and all I have is a flail." I drop the flail to the ground and it makes a big cruntch into the wood. "There now where even." I smircked a seccond time.

    "Cocky are we?" The smaller one said, "You will soon regret that!" He now sounded annoyed.

    "Oh, but it's true, I hardly doubt you'll stand a chance against me with just the two of you." I told him. "Where was I getting this from? This over confidence of myself winning." I asked myself.

    "You dont know who your dealing with!" The little man shouted now totally annoyed by me.

    "Your right, I dont know you, but I still bet I can take you both down. especially if you keep getting mad like that." I told him. He calmed down and stood straight.

    "My name is glide, and my big bro here is Tank. Tank is more than enough to deal with you." He said. Tank nodded.

    "Then bring it on!" I told him, I stood there as tank walked up. Cracking his neck and muscles he came up close, he towered over me.

    "You can stop at anytime, we'll just have our way with you and it'll be all over. I'd hate to have to see you as a bloody mess when we have our fun." Tank gave a really un-comfortable grin. "Now why dont you just be a good little girl and play nicely." He reached down to me, I swooped low to the ground and he almost fell forward, I spun and kicked his leg out and he fell face first into the spiked mace. I stood up. He got up right away clutching his face. He looked at me angrilly and swung a punch, I dodged it and jumped into the air kicking the back of his head he ended up leaning forward. I steped on the ground and kicked out his leg again, and again he fell face first into the mace. This time he diddent get up so quick. He rolled around gripping his face once more. he swiped for my foot but I jumped, he got up and he swung again, this time I caught his punch. He swung with the other arm, I caught that one too. The brute tried to push me down but I easily twarted his strength. His partner said to him something about how disgracefull it is to loose to a little girl and he pushed harder. This time, matching my strength, his muscles flexed as pushed with all his might. We where dead even. He gritted his teeth in frustration. I decided to end our match, so I kicked up into hs stomach, all of his strength quickly left as he let go and reached for his stomach. I grabbed his head and I fell backwards he leaned and I kicked his stomach, I rolled backwards adn then launched him into the wall, then through the wall, and a couple of trees. I rolled back up and on to my feet. I looked at where Glide was supposed to be, but he was gone. I heard a creek and I looked up, I saw Glide comming down on top of me, I quickly dodged and slammed my foot against the floorboard, the end launched up and pegged the guy in the crotch, then launched him into the roof, he fell down back onto the floorboard and canned himself again. He fell to the floor, unconciuose, I walked over to him.

    "Man when you do anything, you guys always do it twice! Thats a bad habbit you know." I told Glide. I picked up the man and I through him out the hole in my wall, I clapped my fist and hand together and bowed, I lifted my hands up and a rock jutted out of the ground and launched the two bodies somewhere to the right of the house. "Cleanup done" I said, then I looked at the hole in the wall, "Well, mostly."

    (To BE CONTINUED)
    Edited on 11/27/2006 12:39pm
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    AEtherBlue

    [811]Nov 27, 2006
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    I will post more in the morning so DONT POST TILL I AM DONE!!! PLEASE.. IT WAS HARD ENOUGH TO CATCH UP let alone fix it so it all worked... all I have left is one more post and I should be ALL caught up. so please, for the love of god, do not post yet...
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    AEtherBlue

    [812]Nov 27, 2006
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    Ps, i forgot to mention, RIN, I can make a charicter pic from the stuff you posted if that is alright with you.
    Edited on 11/27/2006 1:17am
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    AEtherBlue

    [813]Nov 27, 2006
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    Ok well, i've figured out most of it now... it doesent matter if you post.. so. just dont got too far without me (Waaa...)
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    Lord-darkboy

    [814]Nov 27, 2006
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    AEtherBlue wrote:
    Ok well, i've figured out most of it now... it doesent matter if you post.. so. just dont got too far without me (Waaa...)

    you've got it easy they post when i am sleeping so i can't check till 5 pm (gmt+1) and that kinda suck

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    ThatLostGuy

    [815]Nov 27, 2006
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    Spike (archer)
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    I yelled, "WHAT the hell just happened back there! Tank and Glide got whooped by a girl (Talho)! Willy Woo and his team know that we are bad now, and they escaped! I mean, what just happened?" Tank replied, "Well boss. That girl can Earth bend! And she is just as strong as I am!" Bulldozer said, "I didn't get beat up. My protective armor that Kujo have me is indestructable and I can't get hurt from element attacks!" I yelled, "Will you all stop interrupting me! First of all, Bulldozer there is no shaman named Kujo and your armor is simply armor! Its not god made, its just a really strong armor." Bulldozer interrupted, "But Kujo said..." I yelled, "ENOUGH! Kujo is a fake man you made up in your dreams!"
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    I continued, "Tank and Glide. You two should be ashamed of yourselves! You lost a fight to a girl! You haven't done much to help out the Fire Nation and I'm gonna tell Obsidian about you two goons!" Glide interrupted, "But boss!" I yelled, "OH WILL YOU SHUT UP! Third, Mayhem where were you in that fight! I needed you to support me. And you sat back and did squat. If I am gonna become the Lord of the Fire Nation then I need Willy Woo and his friends dead. I NEED SOMEONE DEAD!..."

    Edited on 11/27/2006 1:15pm
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    Lord-darkboy

    [816]Nov 27, 2006
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    darkboy (water, fire, earth, wind)


    just overheard an conversation about an angry man (spike)


    'if you want' someone dead why don't you sacrefice yourself ,i mean as leader of the team you must take responsibility for whatever that happens' i said laughing

    (TLG you may continue or must i delete this ?)

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    vegnegun

    [817]Nov 27, 2006
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    Rampage (Gigantic Axe)


    Rampage and Savage had just made it to the city of Ba-Sin-Sa

    Rampage and Savage were at the main wall and were trying to get in when a guard confronted them.

    "Can I help you two?" asked the gaurd.

    "We are refugees," said Rampage, "we need to get into Ba-Sin-Sa."

    "Oh," said the guard. He looked at Rampage and Savage, examining them closely, "fine, go on it." He stomped his foot on the ground and the wall opened to let Rampage and Savage into Ba-Sin-Sa. Rampage and Savage walked into Ba-Sin-Sa and saw Spike and??five??others chasing Willy Woo and his friends.??Savage looked at Rampage.

    "Should we follow them?" he asked.

    Rampage sighed, "as much as I don't want to... They're fire nation and we must assist them." They then chased after them, not know of the events to take place ahead. (TLG, take it from here!)

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    TheGreatAvatar

    [818]Nov 27, 2006
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    ook..im back=)
    and i have no idea what has happened at all over the 10 pages i missed out on=p

    Red death(master of fire and earth)
    ---------------------------------

    i lost sight of fang

    i just decided to wander ba sing se
    cuz i didnt know what else to do

    i started walking
    then i saw a huge figure in the distance
    "Rampage...again?"
    "WTF"i said
    =)

    then i looked next to rampage and saw another giant dude
    then i said
    "dammit, the atack of the monsters"

    "and how the hell did he get into ba sing se?"

    i started walking the other way
    so i could evade a fight

    then i saw willy woo
    i ran up to him and said
    "wussup"
    =)

    he said hi back,
    then out of nowhere an axe flew at me

    i dodged it just in time

    "the infamous red death" rampage said in a scratchy voice
    "haha"
    "ive got a big reward coming after i capture you"

    me and willy woo started fighting rampage
    willy held rampage to the ground by morphing the earth around rampage's feet

    while i blasted several bolts of lighting at rampage
    rampage flew back,
    breaking the earth

    rampage was stunned
    "hmm...so the red death can bend lighning too?" he said

    "apparently i can" i replied

    rampage let out a war cry and charged at me, i quickly evaded
    and tripped rampage
    rampage fell head first

    he got up and his forehead was bleeding
    "Alright" he said
    "now im pissed"

    he kicked willy woo down to the ground and was about to chop willy woo open

    there was only 1 thing i could do,
    since i knew his new axe absorbed fire and lightning

    i jumped over willy woo as rampage's axe came down on me
    rampage slice my back with his axe
    i just lied there bleeding

    And, uhm, guys, yeah, i killed off red death=*(
    wahhhh
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    ThatLostGuy

    [820]Nov 27, 2006
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    Hahahhaha that was so unsuspected! That is the worst death I have ever seen. You know that you didn't miss out on a lot. You could delete the post and rejoin the RPG rather than kill off a cool character.....Why Red Death...or better yet, Why would Rampage do so a horrible thing. Oh yea, its Rampage nevermind...
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    EXPECT AN AMAZING POST WITHING 30 minutes to one hour and 30 minutes.....it will include a heart wrentching scene....Nobody post about Willy Woo and his team, Rampage and Savage, or Spike and his crew, and "D" and Red Death....leave that to me!
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