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    Vampdude69

    [902]Dec 1, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Jax is in a standoff with Jonah and Scorch. An earth tower fell through the hotel, and a man is lying there.

    ??


    Rock flew through the hotel and knocked Jax over. He lost one of his broadswords. Jonah had been crushed by a huge rock. He wasn't dead, but he was wheezing when he breathed.
    Jax tried to move, but the pain hurt him. Scorch took one of his broadswords, and held it over the man.

    I think after all the people I"ve hurt, I've lost my swords. But now its time to earn them again...

    Jax fought through the pain and grabbed his other sword. He jumped in front of the man and hit his sword against Scorch's sword.
    "Step away! This is an innocent man!" Jax said.
    "It's none of your buisness!" Scorch yelled.
    Jax punched him in the face, and took his sword back. He gave the man his glider and told him to fly to the street below.
    He walked over to Jonah, and looked at him. He thought of him attacking him, and Jax stabbed him.
    His wheezing stopped.

    Why did I do that? Jax thought to himself.

    He walked over to Scorch, and said, "If I ever see you again, your life is mine!"

    He walked towards the balcony, and Rin was standing there!
    He looked at her beautiful face.
    "Rin, I may never get to tell you this, but," he sighed. "I love you, and I always will."

    She looked at him, and said, "I'm glad you can accept me, and I'm glad you understand that not all people from the Fire Nation are evil, but I'm in love with Scorch. I'm sorry." Then she hugged him.
    He hugged her back, then stepped away.

    You need to unleash your anger

    He remembered the old man from the island.

    He jumped down to the streets and took his glider from the man.

    "What is your name?" Jax asked.

    "Willy Woo, you?"
    "Jax."
    "Thanks for saving me, but, I have a question," Willy Woo said.

    "Yeah?"
    "Do you like the Fire Nation?"

    Jax looked up at Rin, she ran to give Scorch a hug.
    "No, I hate them all," Jax said.
    "Well would you like to help me kill Scorch, Rin, and all of the Fire Nation?" Willy asked. He reached his hand out to shake.
    Jax thought for a second.

    He shook Willy Woo's hand.
    I'm in," he said.

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    Lord-darkboy

    [904]Dec 1, 2006
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    darkboy "D" 'fire, water, earth and air)


    orinth was healing at my house when i restarted my search for willy woo


    knowing that the little guy was save with my two gaurds i went back off to find willy woo becouse those heads where becoming discusting. I went for the inner wall to have a good vieuw over the city i was planning to give up until i saw a large dustcloud.

    'I do hope thats not willy woo' i thought

    when i flew off to the dustcloud i heard a conversation between very wellknow voices and some unknown

    'yep thats willy woo ' i said to myself

    i did not want to enter the inn for own reasons so i waited outside on a barrel when i saw willy woo come outside with someone else (jax) i clapped

    'so did you make any new friends ' i said laughing

    'did you do what we ask for' he said more sirious

    'yep' i said while throwing the bag with the heads at him 'and thats my proof'

    i saw he almost puked but he still had a smile on his face

    (willy woo, jax continue pls)

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    feraug

    [905]Dec 1, 2006
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    Hannisa Okari- Waterbender?? laer she'll be known as Sira Kinet I'll let you know when it happens.

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    She escaped from the Fire Nation after her adoptive mother was killed and fod out her real origin.

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    Hannisa tries to get down from the boat without no one noticing so they don't recognize her and start asking questions. She gets down with a red hood(Fire Nation one) and starts walkingfast but not obvious to get as far as she could of where she was. She then is touched by the arm and someons says: '' What are you doing here?'', she knows that voices and decides to turn around and it was Kaira a childhood friend that trained with her in the Fire Nation Academy. Hannisa smiles sweetly to avoid looking nervous and says:

    '' Is that you Kaira? ''

    Kaira says: '' Yes it's me but, What are you doing here? Are you going to fight in the war?''

    Hannisa says: '' No, just scouting and looking for General Zong, the told me he was in Omashu and I need to talk to him.''

    Kaira says: '' Well I can take you, I'm not doing anything so what do you say?''

    Hannisa says: '' Thanks, but I prefer to go alone cause it is personal business.''

    ''Oh ok, but if you need anything just tell me.'' Kaira sya.

    ''Well, which way to Omashu?'' She asks.

    '' Go into the woods and keep walking in a straight line if you know what I mean, when you get out you are going to see Omashu but still you have to walk like a mile.'' Kaira says.

    '' Well thank you very much''.

    After this Hannisa goes into the woods, after walking a while she sees a river and sets camp with the things that Kaira gave her and asks herself if dhe could do waterbending cause she only found out a little while ago she was from the Water Tribe. She starts to move her hands like??the waterbendres she fought, she tries to just move the water not a big move and sees a change in the water and sees water come up and then a splash hits her face getting her upper- body all wet. After that she goes to sleep and tries to relax and plan out this new journey.

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    katrah88

    [906]Dec 1, 2006
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    Yari the Ribbonbender (Air-bender)

    -walking the streets of Ba Sing Sa, after a long journey, searching for a place to crash temporarily. she spots an inn and soon hears a bunch of crashes quickly followed by men fighting-

    "Oh, how convenient and just when I find a somehwere to rest." she said to herself. *glides up into a large tree nearby using the cloth her side* "I guess I'll just have to rest up here for the time being unless this tree suddenly decides to ignite itself"

    Yari continues to watch her surroundings, eventually, spotting two figures fly opposite of the men fighting. Her drowsiness distracts her from watching leading her to take a small nap.

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    vegnegun

    [907]Dec 1, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Jax had just fled and Rin had just hugged Scorch

    Rin had hugged Scorch and he hugged her back, curious why she had done the same to Jax.
    "Rin," said Scorch, "why did you.....?"
    "It was for protection," she replied, "he hates the Fire Nation."

    "I could tell," said Scorch, "I'm just worried about you." Rin backed away.
    "Well, don't be," she said, "just becuase I'm a girl doesn't mean I can't protect myself."

    "Of course," said Scorch. Fang flew onto the balcony and went into the destroyed room. (Fang, take it from here)

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    avatarforte

    [908]Dec 1, 2006
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    Zeth-Lightning Bender

    "Damn, he got away", Zeth cursed. The airbender had proven stronger than he looked, but in the end, he was nothing but an insect. He would soon fall, along with the others that Zeth and his crew had been hired to kill. "All that money for people like that. Its almost too good to be true". The man named Rampage had appeared in their mountaion hideout one week ago. He came with an offer.

    "I have a certain group of people that are causing me a spot of trouble. If you can deal with them, I'll pay you the other half of this". He motioned to the 2 bags of gold he and Savage had brought with them. "So, what do you say?"

    "Its a very intresting purposal, and it seems almost too good to be true. How many are there, what are they good at, and where can I find them?" Zeth asked in one quick breath.

    "There are 3 of them, one is an Airbender and the other 2 are Firebender's. They should still be around Ba-Sing-Se. Their names are Scorch, Rin and Fang. Take heed, they aren't pushovers. Do we have an agreement?" Zeth thought it over then said "Let me talk it over with my team first". Rampage nodded and sat back paiently. Zeth walked over to his team. "So, what do you guys think".

    "3 people to waste for that much money. I say we do it", Lith said. Azul simply nodded while Nero almost was jumping for joy.

    "Take the damn job, I want to kill someone. TAKE THE JOB!!!!" Zeth nodded and turned back to Rampage.

    "We have a deal." That had been one week ago. His team had spent a week preparing and making their way to Ba-Sing-Se. Luckly, they had found one of their targets right away. His plan to tire him by making him fight the earthbender had failed, but it had given him an idea of his skills. But he had underestimated the airbender and it had cost him the kill. Now the enemy would be ready for them. "Time to regroup and rty again." He gathered up the others and they disappeared into the shadows are Ba-Sing-Se.
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    avatarforte

    [909]Dec 1, 2006
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    Fang-Airbender

    "Phew, so much for staying for a few more nights". I looked around what remained of the inn, which wasnt much. I found my sword buried under some rubble, lucky it wasnt damaged. I raided what was left of the room, trying to dig up anything that could be used. After collecting everything I could, I jumped out the window, landing next to Rin and Scorch. "Well, I got some good news and some bad news. The good news is that the weapons, clothes and variuos other things. The bad news is all the money is gone. We're flat broke".

    "So what are we going to do for shelter and food", Rin asked, looking at Scorch for answers. Scorch looked back, lost for words.

    "Sigh, there is one way to make money fast around here". Thet both looked at me, obviously wanting to know. "There's alot of underground fighting rings around here. They offer prizes if the person who is declared the champion of that ring is defeated."

    "It sounds really dangerous", Scorch said "but at this point, it seems like the only choice we have. You guys go find a new place to stay, I'll go to one of those rings". He started to walk away before I stopped him.

    "Sorry man, but you just had a big fight. You're in no condition to fight. I'll go." Scorch looked to say something, then nodded, knowing I was right. "Okay, well, then I'm off". I was just about to take off when Rin stopped me.

    "Wait, let me go with you.I might be able to help". Both me and Scorch started to protest, but one glance from her silenced us both. "Alright, fine. Guess you get house duty Scorch."

    "Okay, I'll meet up with you guys later". Scorch took things we didnt need and went off into town. I indicated to Rin to follow me and we were off.

    (A short while later)
    We had found a location for one of the underground rings, which happened to only be a short while away from where the inn was. A big crowd was surronding a ring near the center, cheering on the fighters. A guy was being carried out by two men, his head busted open, his arm at an incorrect angle.

    "You sure this is a good idea?" Rin asked, shocked at the man's condition. "Unless you got a better one." She knew that she didnt, so she kept quiet. "Yeah, I know. Not gonna be pleasent." Looking around, I spotted a big bald guy sitting at a table. I made my way over to him, and placed what little gold pieces I had on me on the table. "I want to face the champion, for everything". The guy looked at the gold, then looked at me.

    "You're funeral. Hey, tell the champ he's got a challenger". Another guy nodded and went into a room in the back. "Okay, get in the ring. And let me give you one peace of advice. Hope this ends fast". I moved through the crowd and climbed into the ring. There were no guards along the sides, so it was possible to fall down to the rock floor below. The chanting began shortly after I got in the ring.

    "Amp, Amp, Amp, Amp", they went, growing louder and faster. A masked person appeared opposite me, moving towards the ring. He climbed into the ring, dropping his robe, showing his huge clothed body. "Odd, I thought." He's wearing a lot of extra weight with those clothes. I didn't have anymore time to ponder, as he rushed me. He launched a fist at me, aimed for my head. I side-stepped it and kicked out towards his gut. It connected but he seemed unphased by it. Like it didn't even hurt him. He grabbed my leg and threw me to the side. Again, it was weird since I didnt go far, despite his size. Nothing about this seemed to add up.I punched out at his gut, using the air to propel my fist forward with additional force. I hit him dead on, but I noticed something then. He went flying back but stopped on the edge of the ring. "Oh, I get it." I smiled and created the air claw. The guy, not noticing the claw, charged me again. I waited till the last second, then dodged to the side, slashing out with the claw. Niether of us moved for a short while, then he fell to one knee.

    "I finally figured out why no one has beaten you". The warrior froze, kneeling on one knee. "Everyone assumed they were facing a man, when in fact, your not a man at all. Your a woman,aren't you." The warrior was silent, then, quietly at first, started laughing.

    "Heh, your the first person to figure it out", a femine voice said. The warrior removed the extra clothing, revealing a woman about Rin's size. I stepped back, for I hadn't expected her to be that young. Or beautiful. She was like Rin's twin sister, except they didnt look exactly like her. "Not bad, your smarter than you like".

    "Heh, you better concide. There's no way you can beat me now." I flexed my air claw, creating a small wind barrier around myself. "But I gotta ask, what's your real name".

    "Its Ami, not like its gonna make a difference. You'll soon forget it, since you'll be dead". She charged forward, pulling out a small sword. I simply waited for her to strike, blocking the blade with my wind claw. I punched her in the gut with the other. She backed away, winded. "See, I told you". She smiled, then began laughing.

    "So, an airbender huh. Don't see many of them anymore. Well, guess I should pull out all the stops too." I raised an eyebrow, confused at what she had just said. The answer came a second later, as I got nailed from behind, hard. I fell to my knees, turning my head to look at my attacker. But there was no one there. I looked around, but the only people in the ring were me and Ami.

    "Fang, above you!," Rin yelled. I looked up, expecting to see another person. But instead, it was a ball of water. A ball of water that suddenly came straight for me. I barely dodged it, as it slammed into the ground beside me, smashing a hole in the ring. "What in the world". I looked back to Ami. She was moving her hands, making motions that describe the movements of the water. "Great, a waterbender". The water came back to her, and started to circle around her. She started laughing, a deep and victorious laugh. "So, what have I gotten myself into now?" I asked. I didnt have time to think it over, as she sent the water straight for me.
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    ThatLostGuy

    [910]Dec 1, 2006
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    Willy Woo (Earth Bender)
    -
    I asked Jax if he wanted to join me. I put out my hand for a shake and he shook my hand. I said, ""Okay. Now that we are a team there are some things I gotta do. First of all, Hevet is still in that destroyed building.
    -
    We went back up to the building using the stairs (which were a little destroyed). We entered the room and Scorch, Rin, and Fang were all gone. I saw a dead man on the ground (Jonah). I looked at Jax and said, "Thanks again for saving me. You do that?" I pointed to Jonah. Jax replied, Yeah. He deserved it." I heard moaning coming from the corner of the room. I yelled, "Hevet! Hevet is that you! Hevet!"
    -
    I walked over some rocks and then I lifted a small rock and I saw Hevet in a fetal postition under the rock. Jax and I lifted him up and dragged him outside. I said, "Hevet! Buddy. You okay?' There was a little blood on him but he didn't look to hurt. hevet replied, "Well I landed on the bed! So, yeah I'm alright. Only one rock knocked me out and i am just dazer from the rock. I'm fine though. Who's this?!?!" Hevet pointed to Jax. I replied, "He's out new team member."
    -
    All of a sudden D walked over with a smelly bag. We talked and then D showed me the dismantled heads of Tank and Glide. I said, "You did it! Oh my god! I can't beleive you actually killed them! Good job!" D said, "So can I join your team now?" I replied, "Ummmm nah! I've got a new member, Jax." D frowned and he said, "YOU PROMISED ME!" Jax, Hevet, and I began to walk away from D. D yelled, "Willy Woo! I'll get you for this. You either owe me big time or I'll kill you!" As I walked away I cooly said, "Yeah yeah yeah. Whatever. Just add another enemy to my EnemyList."
    -
    All of a sudden a man ran up to me and he yelled, "You destroyed my hotel. I own that hotel. And you ruined it." I stared the man in the eye and said, "Go look over there. There is a man named D. He is the man who destroyed your hotel, not me." The man replied, "Okay thank you. D is a dead man!"
    -
    I reached into my pocket. I said, "Damit. I'm out of money." jax replied, "Me too". I looked at Hevet. Hevet reached into his pocket and he found that he had a hole in his pocket. Hevet cursed and yelled, "What! My wallet fell through the hole in my pocket! Dam!" Jax replied, "Why don't we just test out our skills and go to one of those underground King of the Ring fight?." I replied, "Alright. Lets go."
    -
    We reached an underground??"Defeat the??Champion" (King of??the Ring)??place and all three of us signed up for a fight, despite me being a little injured. I looked into the ring and I saw an Air bender (Fang) fighting??the Water bendering champion??(Ami)....

    Edited on 12/01/2006 9:44pm
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    vegnegun

    [911]Dec 1, 2006
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    General Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)


    Rin and fang had just left Scorch to find an underground tournement

    Scorch had been in an alley for the night and saw smoke coming from the capital and a fire nation flag rise high into the air. Scorch got up and began to rise into the air. He went toward the flag and saw that the palace was almost completely ruined.

    "No," said Scorch, "this is completely impossible!" He flew around the capital and headed back to the alley where he had left??their??things and saw no one had touched them.

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    Rin-tori

    [912]Dec 1, 2006
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    Rin (Firebender)

    Ba Sing Se had just been officially captured by the Fire Nation.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Faintly, Rin could hear an explosion. She knew the smell of smoke well, and what filled the air was precisely that. They had to evacuate, and fast.

    Fang was still fighting the waterbender, and just got knocked to the edge of the ring by a whip of water. "Fang, let's go!" She shouted. He wouldn't leave the ring. She had to get closer...

    She tripped over someone. "Oh, I'm sorr--" She began, but then she saw a familiar face.

    "Oh, it's you, Earthbender Willy." She said, coldly.

    "The one and only." Willy replied. "And now that I have you, a Fire Nation citizen, in my grasp, why don't I stop you from ruining the rest of the world by taking your life?" He said. He hurled a rock in her direction and stepped back.

    Rin took the hit to her chest and stumbled backwards, falling down. She got back up and threw a flurry of fireballs at him, only to be blocked by a wall of earth.

    She had to defend herself.
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    avatarforte

    [913]Dec 1, 2006
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    I gotta go to bed now, plz dont post anything related to Fang/Rin or Willy tioll after I post. Thank you.
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    katrah88

    [914]Dec 1, 2006
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    Yari the Ribbonbender (Air-bender)

    -Fell asleep after spotting people (Willy Woo, Scorch, Jax & others)????fight and flee at a nearby inn-


    *awakens from her nap and looks over at destroyed hotel*
    "Hmm... things seemed to have settled," she thought to herself, stretched out her gliding cloth and jumped down from the tree while putting her hood on.?? She proceeded towards the ruined hotel finding two men (Willy Woo & hotel owner)??in a small arguement.?? It was clear to her that one of the men was the owner of the ruined hotel.

    *flashback*

    "She could've have at least said sorry," she thought?? after having been pushed by some rude girl rushing through the crowd, "Oh, well. I'll just make a quick stop her to get a few things."

    Meanwhile, a huge argument broke out in the store next door.?? Though, everyone in the area could hear it, like most people, she tuned it out.

    "How could you let her just take the money, you fool?" the angry store owner yelled, "Just tell me who it is and I'll take care of her myself.?? I'm and idiot for trusting a bigger one to handle such a task."

    "There she is!" his finger glided towards her

    "What?!" she asked puzzled.

    Without answering they ran after her.?? She dodged the two men and sprinted in an instant!?? As the men chased her, they kept yelling at her causing higher authorities to focus their attention on her.?? To her surprise, one man of power stopped her in her tracks.?? She was surrounded.

    "Thief!" one of the men from the shop insisted.

    "You must be mistaken. I did not steal anything nor would I have reason to," she claimed.

    "Liar! Arrest her now!" the owner replied.

    The men drew their swords while another took out cuffs as they advanced towards her.?? Seeing as these men were not willing to listen to her, she quickly unwrapped the ribbon from around her hips and airbended it around her as a way to cloak her appearance allowing her to disappear into the air and also giving her enough time to escape along with her precious ribbon.

    Sighing she noted to herself, "I really gotta stay away from arguments."

    *flashback end*

    Instantly, Yari dashed into a nearby alley not to be detected.?? But, it was easy for her to overhear everything they said.

    "Dammit. I'm out of money," said the guy who had been arguing with the hotel owner.

    "Me too," replied another man in the group (Jax).

    The last man (Hevet) searched his pocket?? discovering his wallet was also gone due to a hole that formed in that same pocket causing him to cuss and yell all sorts of things.?? Quickly, the other man??made mention of an underground 'King of the Ring' tournament suggesting they all partcipate in which they unanimously agree and leave.?? Upon hearing this she decides to go as well.

    Arriving at the tournament, she became one of the spectators. There was an air-bender fighting a water-bender...

    Edited on 12/02/2006 1:57pm
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    Lord-darkboy

    [915]Dec 2, 2006
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    darkboy "d" (fire, earth, air, water)


    Was betrayed by willy woo


    after willy woo has betrayed me he sended the angry owner of that inn also to me.

    'YOUR GOING TO PAY THAT'he yelled to me

    'THAT YOU CAN FORGET'I yelled back angry

    the man camed at me to punch me right in the face i didn't move an icnh and took the full punch in my face wich only made my angrier

    'THATS IT THATS THE LAST THING YOU'LL EVER DO'I yelled at him nearly with becoming mad

    I took him up threw him against the wall and sended earth spikes to him

    'HAHAHAHAHAHA NOW HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE CHEESE WITH HOLES' i yelled while laughing

    'WILLY WOO IF YOUR NEAR HERE THEN SEE WHAT WILL BECOME OF YOU AND THAT??PITIFULL LIITLE GANG OF YOURS'I yelled in the air

    leaving the man pinned in the wall i took of the find willy again till i saw that th earth kindom palace was tooked over

    'if that doesn't attract them then i don't know it'i said smiling

    when i arrived to the palace i was attack by a dozen of fireballs, I landed and surrenderd i did not want to fight them i could use them

    'in order of the fire nation princess you are under arrest' the captain said

    'WHAT AZULA IS AFTER THIS'i yelled 'let me see her i have to talk to her'

    'well well well who do we have there, D i havn't seen you since i was 5'azula said to me

    'well i wanted to see more of the world your highness'i replied

    'leave the highness behind your a good friend of the famely, now what are your bussines here'she said more siriously

    'well i was betrayed by some people and i know wure this would attract them i just want my sweet revenge'i said

    'hmmm i can help you with that'she said' YOU THERE GET THIS MAN THE PROPER CLOTHES FOR A HEADTACTITIAN'

    'thank you azula'i said

    'no problem i needed a good guard for the door anyway, let none pass without my permission'she said

    'a thousent times thanks'i said with laughing

    'oh yes azula the earth king is not to be harmed' i said

    'he isn't here' she replied

    'what where is he then?'i asked

    'the dai lee saw him took off on the avatars bison' she said

    'fine'i said very quitly

    when my armor was on i headed to the main gate and waited for willy woo and his gang and other people who would try to pass me.

    'nice armor'i said 'it fits well but i found my old one better that reminds me i have to go to tahlo for my armor i wonder if he founded it allready?'

    Edited on 12/02/2006 8:10am
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    TheGreatAvatar

    [916]Dec 2, 2006
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    i just wanted u all to know
    yes i killed of red death
    but i will be back...cuz im grounded...
    so yeah=p
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    ThatLostGuy

    [917]Dec 2, 2006
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    TheGreatAvatar wrote:
    i just wanted u all to know
    yes i killed of red death
    but i will be back...cuz im grounded...
    so yeah=p

    Well just come back as another character...Season 2 just started so, yeah....
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    ThatLostGuy

    [918]Dec 2, 2006
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    Spike (Archer)
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    Bulldozer, Mayhem, and I reached Ba-Sing-Se and we saw a building with smoke all around it. We walked towards the building and noticed that it was a destroyed hotel. On the wall of the destroyed hotel was a man with spikes going into his body. I said, "Wow. Thats a brutal way to die!" Then in the middle of the road was a really smelly bag. I looked in the bag and I saw the heads of Tank and Glide. I said, "Well. It looks like we found Tank and Glide, dismembered and smelly."
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    Mayhem said, "Look. DOwn this road. The capital was taken over by the Fire Nation! Hahaha we did it boys. We have taken Ba-Sing-Se." i replied, "No we haven't. Trust me, their will be an uprising of civilians who will try and take back thier city. Trust me..." We alked over towards the capital and we saw a man guarding the entrance (D).
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    I said, "Hey. We are the Hitmen of the Fire Nation. Let us in. We want to talk to who is in charge here." D replied, "Why should I beleive you three men. You aren't even wearing Fire Nation uniforms." Bulldozer said, "Do you wan tme to hurt you? Punk, huh!" I budded in, "Calm down Bulldozer. So, just let us in man. Trust me...I wouldn't lie to my own Fire Nation brothers."
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    I saw Azula walk into the capital building. I yelled, "Azula! You dumb guard won't let us in!" WHOOSH! Mayhem and I were blsted by and air wave. Bulldozer cannot be moved though. I looked over at Bulldozer and he rammed into the guard and basically sat on top of him. I stood up and said, "Bulldozer! You many be an immovable fat man but I love you!" Bulldozer continued sitting on the guard (D) as Mayhem and I walked into the capital.
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    I walked into a room on the second floor and I saw Azula sitting around a table with other Fire Nation officials. I said, "Hello there. I'm Spike an dthis is Mayhem. We are teh Hitmen of the Fire Nation. What services do you need becuase we will perform them. Anything. Please, anything you want I will do for you!" I bowed down and so did Mayhem. Azula stood up and walked over towards me and said, "OKay. I heard about you. Obsidian hired you and your men. Okay, here is what I want you to do......."

    Edited on 12/02/2006 9:45am
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    Vampdude69

    [919]Dec 2, 2006
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    Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master


    Willy Woo has just started to fight Rin, and she doens't know Jax is there

    Willy Woo blocked her fireblast with an earth wall. Jax looked up at who he was fighting.
    It was...Rin!

    Rin was too busy with the fight to see him. Willy Woo hit her in the arm with a rock. Then the leg. She fell over and clutched her leg.

    You need to unleash your anger

    I'm glad you can accept me, and I'm glad you understand that not all people from the Fire Nation are evil, but I'm in love with Scorch. I'm sorry."

    He grabbed his broadswords.

    I'm in love with Scorch

    I'm in love with Scorch

    He stepped forward and pushed Willy out of the way.
    Jax drew his broadswords and looked at Rin.
    "Jax..." she said. "You saved me!"
    "I don't think so," he said. He ran towards her with his swords ready. He stabbed his swords into the ground, and flung two rocks at her.

    "Jax learned a new trick, uh-oh," Jax said.

    He kept flinging rocks at her and she blocked them with fire. She shot a fireball at him and he made an earth wall to block it.
    "You're not sorry that you can't be with me!" Jax yelled. He swung his swords and missed her by an inch.
    She shot another fireball at him and he swung his swords and it dissapeared.

    Willy Woo jumped in and shot two rocks at he and she fell. Jax grabbed his glider and flew around her, shooting rocks at her with his swords touching the ground.
    Rin did a backflip and got on top of a rock and shot a fireball at Hevet. It missed and he stepped in. She jumped off the rock and shot three fireballs at Jax. He blocked them all. He shot three rocks at her. All missed.

    "Where is your lover Scorch, to defend you?" Jax yelled.

    He jumped down and ran at her.
    "If you would accept me, I would always be there for you," he said.
    He swung his swords and she ducked under them. Willy Woo shot a huge rock at her and she ducked under that as well.

    Jax jumped back on his glider, and he soared above her with a huge rock.
    He looked into her eyes and said, "Ever since your kind took my family away from me, I've lost hope. But when I saw you, it came back, then you took it away again! Like they took my family!!!"

    She shot a huge fireball and it hit him directly in the chest. He screamed and fell off his glider. He landed on the ground with a huge thud.
    "Jax!" Willy yelled.

    Jax had his eyes open, then they slowly closed, as he looked at Rin.

    -

    Willy, Rin, Fang, or Scorch continue

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    Lord-darkboy

    [920]Dec 2, 2006
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    darkboy "D" (fire, earth, air, water)


    bulldozer was sitting on me


    I??tried to get loose but with no succes

    'in la's name how much do you weight no wonder they call you bulldozer'i said

    'humph, punk'he said

    'ever tried to take a diet or to do a sport?'i asked 'maybe you can begin with moving from my body?'

    'shut up' he said

    'you know i once met the earth kings pet bear he also sat on my once and i could tell he was alot lighter then you'i said

    bulldozer answered with putting more weight on my body

    'OKE OKE i get the point i'll be silent your crushing my bones'i said

    i had to get him off with other tricks but everything i tried failed and he ended up with lying on me i could barely breath. I finally saw those man with azula coming out again

    'WHAT IN THE NAME OF KOH IS THIS THING I SMASHED BOULDERS IN HIS FACE *breaths* TRIED TO BLOW HIM AWAY *breaths* AND I HEATED MY ARMOR UP TILL 1000 ??F HE ISN'T NORMAL' i yelled 'GET HIM OFF MY NOW'

    i saw them just lauging till the man (spike) finally said 'oke bulldozer get off him'??

    after breathing sometimes i realized that azula maded i pact with them i wan't told nothing and returned to my post

    'oh yea bulldozer another hint try to eat something less it would help for a great deal'i said laughing

    the only response i got was an arrow flying near my ear and i decided to shut up for a while.

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