Nickelodeon (ended 2008)
Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master
Jax was lying on the ground and Willy Woo helped him up. He tried to stand, but immediatley fell back down. He told Willy Woo and Hevet to leave him and go after Rin, Ami and Fang. He laid there, and thought of all the pain Rin has caused him. A forbidden love, and a brand new scar on his chest. It was getting difficlut to breathe.
Jax fell asleep, and had a terrible dream.
"Hello Jax," a voice said.
"Who's there?" Jax said.
"I am all the anger that has been inside you. You need to use the anger Jax. You are more powerful, than you can imagine! With me, you can kill Scorch, and Rin will be yours!"
"I can't. I won't!" Jax yelled.
The black spirit swirled around him, and went inside him.
"I can help you Jax," he said.
Jax looked at the ground.
"Help me kill Scorch. Help Rin love me," Jax said.
The spirit controlled his mind. His clothes turned different.
His clothes turned black with red stripes up the arm sides. His wound was healed. His swords were engraved with an insignia. His glider was given the same. His hair turned black. Jax's eye color also turned black. He smiled.
Jax woke up. He stood up and put his swords in his sheath. He walked over to a tunnel. Willy Woo and Hevet were gone. He suddenly has a vision.
The black spirit was in front of him.
"Scorch, Rin, Fang and Ami are going to the Eastern Air Temple," he said.
Jax smiled and said, "Good."
Jax earthbended out of the room and to the surface.
"Hmm, by getting rid of my anger, I can earthbend better," he said.
"You haven't gotten rid of it, just embraced it," said the spirit.
Jax smiled, and rode his glider out of Ba-Sing-Se.
He looked down at his clothes, and they were black, with red stripes.
Scorch (Elite Fire Bender)
Scorch was worried about Rin. He wasn't aware that she felt so strongly against using Pyro. No, this needs to be done, thought Scorch, if I can't control Pyro, then there isn't anything to stop his terrible wraith upon this world. He sat there at the table alone, just starring at the map, looking at the long route. Even though the vally wasn't inhabited by man, this left Scorch to worry what??else could possible inhabit it. Scorch got up and went to Rin's room and knocked. He waited for a few seconds, and then she opened it. They both stood there silent, looking into each other's eyes. Scorch then pulled Rin in his chest and hugged her. She began to cry and Scorch just held onto her tighter.
"Don't worry," he said, "I have to do this. Not for me, but for you."??
Jax: Earthbender and Broadswords Master
Jax flew his glider towards the temple. He was very far away from it. Ahead, he could see a small village, and a pass. The pass stretched for thousands of miles.
"They're in that pass," Jax said. He landed in the village.
"Did a group of four pass through here?" Jax asked a man.
"Yes, they just went into the pass," he replied.
Jax smiled and gave the man his glider.
"Watch this, and if anything happens to it, I'll kill you," Jax said.
The man nodded.
He walked to the openeing of the pass.
"I think their little vacation is about to be cut short," he said.
Ami (Waterbender)
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Ami sat with Scorch planning our route through to their destination as Fang went for supplies. Rin walked over and pulled Scorch asside and she figured that this might take a while and didn't want to make any plans behind their backs
She began to whisper sing an old lulluby that her mother had taught her as a child as she wated for them to come back, but she didn't even get to finish her song.
"What were you singing?" Scorch asked
"Just an old lulluby my mother sang to me as a girl" Ami replied halfheartedly
"There is more to that than your willing to express, isn't there?"
"Yes..." praying that he wouldn't start asking questions it was the anniversary of their death was in less than a week and it was the one day that she spoke to no one about... she was one of the few people who knew when that day was, but everyone saw that it effected her badly
"Well, let's get back to planning shal we?"
"Okay"
(note: Ami can be very withdrawn when it comes to discussing her parents and how they died... she witnessed it and still has the nightmares, even though it has been nearly??ten years)
C1991 wrote: |
Name: Pain (somebody translate it to chinese for me) male Bending: Fire Nation: earth Bio: his mother was raped by a fire nation soldier during a raid. When he was found to be a firebender, the village kicked him out. he is a solitary traveler. He will firebend only in an extreme emergency, which usually gets him arrested or kicked out of whatever vllage he's in. more later. gotta run |
More:??
Special Ability: Flaming Teleportation
Age: 15
Easily angered.
Wears red and green, representing his two nations??
I'm not gonna let him meet with??others yet.
Gotta run (again)??
darkboy "D" (fire, earth, water, air)
had sent 4 men down to investigate the sound from the crystal caves and continued his patrol
i just wanted to enter the next room when i heard 'intruders in sector G3'
i went back to the crystal cave on easy and saw that around fifty man where standing for a rock wall
'why aren't you destroying it' I asked
''we gaved them a choice to surrender or die' the captain answered
'choices choices break that wall down NOW or i do it personally'i said angry
'euh yes sir' he replied
'MEN ATTACK THAT WALL'i yelled at them while putting my helmet on
when the all was destroyed i saw willy woo coming out of it with his arms above his head
"My name is Willy Woo. I would like to join the Fire Nation!" he said
i couldn't help myself 'HAHAHAHAHAHA WILLY, WILLY WOO suprising isn't it how quickly the tides can turn'I said laughing to him
'D, i've could have know you where fire nation, you wanted to betray me if i let you join our gang' he said angry at me
'well technically seen your the betrayer, you where just the famous drip that spoiled the bucket, so i decided to go back to the fire nation there the only one who havn't betrayed me yet'i explained 'but for now'
I walked to him and puched him right in the face
'sweet revenge, TAKE HIM TO AZULA IF HE WANT TO JOIN HE CAN PROVE HIMSELF'i yelled at the soldiers
'you 5 there check the room for any other man he can see azula too'i said 'i'll follow willy here and see he doesn't try anything funny'
Ami (waterbender)
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Ami knew by the way Fang spoke that we were in danger. They were close and we had to get there fast.
'Could this get much worse?' Ami wondered then scolded herself as she knew that as she asked that question it would get worse.
"Are you okay back there, Ami?" Fang asked
"Yeah, I'm fine... just not used to going this fast" Ami lied
"Don't worry, we won't be going long" Fang said
Rin noted that Ami was hiding something deeper that she didn't want to say... only a girl would notice that Ami was really having no trouble adjusting to faster travel. Rin said nothing, she would confront Ami about it later.
Everyone stopped.
"We have to fly" Fang said as they came up to a river
"No, they'll only spot us faster... let me" Ami said and got down "single file pls!"
Ami began to bend the water around them (like Katara did while they travled the serpants pass). They got to the other side and continued at the faster pace until they figured it might be safe to rest
Ami isolated herself from the rest of the team and Rin began to wonder exactly what was bothering her.
"Ami, may I speak with you?" Rin asked
"Sure, what about?" Ami replied
"What was really bothering you earlier?"
"Nothing, I'm just not used to going so quickly"
"Ami, you're lying and we both know it"
"Okay... you're right, I've been thinking about my parents a lot lately... the anniversary of their death is comming up in a few days..." Ami's voice trailed off as tears began to prick at her eyes "I still have the nighmares about that day almost ten years later"
Rin was taken aback by??that statement...??Ami's pain went deeper than any of them could understand
"The Fire Navy took out most of my village, one of their benders killed my parents... in front of me!" Ami explained
"I'm afraid I don't understand, firebenders killed your parents but you're confiding in me?"
"You're different from them... I can tell... I??always have??been a good judge of character" Ami grinned "sometimes??I miss the south poll and the people that raised me... but then??I think of why I left... to??help defeat the fire nation, so maybe I can get some closure"
Rin sighed and left Ami to her thoughts Ami knew that??even if the fire lord was defeated she would never get her parents back and??probably never get over her nightmares... she could??only hope that it would ease the pain, but she knew that it wouldn't help, that no matter what she did, until she came to terms with everything she had experienced... she wouldn't truly get closure.??
Here's mine
Name: Ariel Zufalon
Power: Able to bend every element though she's more comfortable bending water and fire.
Appearance: 5ft. "7", brown eyes, long black hair, dark -skinned.
Nation: Fire
History: Ariel was born in the Fire Nation and recieved royal treatment because her family was highly favored by Fire Lord Azulon because of they're special abilities to bend every element.????Ariel was Zuko's closest friend and Azula's most competitive rival. She was always seen batteling Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai around the palace and she usually won beacuse of her advanced ability to learn how to bend fire at the age of two. After the Agni Kai between Zuko and his father, Ariel's mother was in aheated arguement with the Fire lord because the harsh penalty.??The two endend up fighting each other in the throne room, almost destroying the palace because of the magnitude of their powers being unleashed at full force. In the end??Ozai was able to reverse her lighting attack and??kill her with a blast of magma.??After witnessing her mother's??death, Ariel was banished from the Fire Nation because Ozai thought that she would become a spy against his kingdom for revenge.
Her love for water bending came when she saw a master water bender kill dozens of fire benders. She then started an immense training routine where she lived in??the ocean for 5 years, concentrating on nothing but her water bending. After those 5 years she focused on earth bending and after mastering that??and airbending,??she met the gaang and started to travel with them and help teach Aang how to combine his attacks with diffirent elements.
Ariel is a brilliant strategist and has an amazing ability to learn her opponent's moves in battle.??She also has been the first to create red lightning which is 15x's stonger than regular lightning and 20x's faster than regular lighting. Her choices of weapons are her fans which are almost indestructible and ultra razor sharp and her ancient swords that contain ancient and unknown magic properties.
djdfire wrote: |
Here's mine Name: Ariel Zufalon Appearance: 5ft. "7", brown eyes, long black hair, dark -skinned. Nation: Fire History: Ariel was born in the Fire Nation and recieved royal treatment because her family was highly favored by Fire Lord Azulon because of they're special abilities to bend every element.????Ariel was Zuko's closest friend and Azula's most competitive rival. She was always seen batteling Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai around the palace and she usually won beacuse of her advanced ability to learn how to bend fire at the age of two. After the Agni Kai between Zuko and his father, Ariel's mother was in aheated arguement with the Fire lord because the harsh penalty.??The two endend up fighting each other in the throne room, almost destroying the palace because of the magnitude of their powers being unleashed at full force. In the end??Ozai was able to reverse her lighting attack and??kill her with a blast of magma.??After witnessing her mother's??death, Ariel was banished from the Fire Nation because Ozai thought that she would become a spy against his kingdom for revenge. Her love for water bending came when she saw a master water bender kill dozens of fire benders. She then started an immense training routine where she lived in??the ocean for 5 years, concentrating on nothing but her water bending. After those 5 years she focused on earth bending and after mastering that??and airbending,??she met the gaang and started to travel with them and help teach Aang how to combine his attacks with diffirent elements.
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nice story BUT...
1) did you pmed this to thatlostguy ???
2) unfortunaly for you i'm the only one who may control all elements
djdfire wrote: |
Here's mine Name: Ariel Zufalon Appearance: 5ft. "7", brown eyes, long black hair, dark -skinned. Nation: Fire History: Ariel was born in the Fire Nation and recieved royal treatment because her family was highly favored by Fire Lord Azulon because of they're special abilities to bend every element. Ariel was Zuko's closest friend and Azula's most competitive rival. She was always seen batteling Azula, Ty Lee, and Mai around the palace and she usually won beacuse of her advanced ability to learn how to bend fire at the age of two. After the Agni Kai between Zuko and his father, Ariel's mother was in aheated arguement with the Fire lord because the harsh penalty. The two endend up fighting each other in the throne room, almost destroying the palace because of the magnitude of their powers being unleashed at full force. In the end Ozai was able to reverse her lighting attack and kill her with a blast of magma. After witnessing her mother's death, Ariel was banished from the Fire Nation because Ozai thought that she would become a spy against his kingdom for revenge. Her love for water bending came when she saw a master water bender kill dozens of fire benders. She then started an immense training routine where she lived in the ocean for 5 years, concentrating on nothing but her water bending. After those 5 years she focused on earth bending and after mastering that and airbending, she met the gaang and started to travel with them and help teach Aang how to combine his attacks with diffirent elements.
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djdfire wrote: |
oops forgot to do that 2) okay I'll change it so that she can only bend water and fire. |