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    tico1125

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    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    Tico! You're back! Have you made the decision about who's doing what yet?

    Well I've been back.?? I guess you don't read do you??? Lol.?? I will repost what my earlier post from yesterday.
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    Strix_Moonwing

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    tico1125 wrote:
    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    Tico! You're back! Have you made the decision about who's doing what yet?

    Well I've been back.?? I guess you don't read do you??? Lol.?? I will repost what my earlier post from yesterday.


    Sorry, been kinda busy.
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    confucioussayhi

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    tico1125 wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    PhoenixAngel37 wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    Taang_Forever wrote:
    Well, it's just that I wanted to do the earth rumble stuff, seeing as I can't do the birth scene, mostly because I wouldn't know how to write it with all the emotion a scene like that takes, not to mention good vocabulary for how emotional it might get when her parents see their child is born blind... I'm mildly good at action scenes, probably a seven, but it's the stuff I really like to write about.

    But like you said, we'll decide later. I always have that fanfic though.
    Yeah, if I'm a writer, some people are gonna hang me for neglecting my fic.*shifty eyes* I don't care either way, maybe there could be two fight scenes or something, there's always other things though.
    no we wont..we will feed u cookies all day...jk...i read ur script on page 7...it sounds great!!! ...
    Well, cookies do sound better than a hanging... I'll take it!

    BEWARE!!!!
    PA37 is known for using poison.?? LOL
    I know, Iris turned me into a cookie zombie.
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    tico1125

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    tico1125 wrote:
    Well I am off for the night. I will be back on tomorrow morning to check for more stories. If you plan to submit a writing can you do it by tomorrow Friday 12/29/06 at 3:00 EST. That is when I would like to setup the poll thread. Good night all and good luck!

    For all of you who did not read this.?? Please read above.?? It is very imortant.?? Right now the time where I have at is 1:30.?? That means there is an hour and half left before all submissions need to be in.?? The poll will be up approximately by 3:30 which is 2 hours from now.?? The voting will start then.?? I will give it 24 hours from that point and then the poll will close and the winners will be announced.
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    confucioussayhi

    [365]Dec 29, 2006
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    I'm not going to vote for myself, so how do I see the results?
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    Strix_Moonwing

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    confucioussayhi wrote:
    I'm not going to vote for myself, so how do I see the results?


    Wait, do the writers get to vote or do we just wait it out?
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    andreitayehp

    [367]Dec 29, 2006
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    Well, in the poll, future won... anyway, I'll write other think from the past, then you'll be able to choose wich to put.I putted something about Iroh being controlled in the past ones. Well this will star with a little from future, and??will continue with a lot of past, ok? ??

    PRESENT TIME

    Sokka: Well, have you tought about kick Prince Zuzu's ass? (Zuko grunts, while nobody else seems to listen him)

    Aang: I know you both don't have a good realtinship, but this is not just helping him, is help yourself, how do you think you'll end up if Iroh win this war (Toph and Zuko seem devastated)

    Ty Lee: I really think you don't have any reasons to hate him, I mean, there's a lot of girls that would give anything to have an eldest brother as him... (Toph and Mai blush (It's not a new ship, but remember Toph's family sucks and in this, Zuko and Toph are the best friends)

    Azula: Exactly!! YOU ARE THE PERFECT COUSIN; THE PERFECT NEPHEW; THE PERFECT FRIEND; (Sokka says quietly "I thought he didn't have friends")??THE PERFECT SON!!!! WHILE I WAS THERE, NOBODY NOTICED ME!!! MY MOTHER DIDN'T EVEN LOVED ME!!! EVEN IF I'M A FIREMASTER!!! YOU WERE THE ONE WITH BIRTHRIGHT TO RULE! THAT'S UNFAIR! AND NOW YOU TURNED MY OWN FRIEND AGAINST ME!!!

    Zuko: REALLY! How do you think I've felt all this time? I've been banished, remember? Yeah! A lot of people used to love me, but they all have gone, the only thing I had is a father that, let me remind you, Azula, only had eyes for you, I am the one that was lucky to be born, remember???

    Katara: Ok!, I thibk this two need to talk alone, let's go in (opens the door so Ty Lee and Aang enter)????

    Sokka: What? Katara! This is getting good! (Katara grabs his ears and pull him inside) Hey! let me go! (inside) They'll melt all this place!!! I wanna listen!??

    Mai: Actually, I'll wacht them, don't worry, I know them two since allways, Azula could try to escape...

    Zuko: Mai, I can handle this. (she blushes)

    Toph: It doesn't bother you if I stay here, doesn't it, Zuko?????

    Zuko: Don't worry

    Azula: HOW ON HELL DO YOU SAY THAT!!! YOU KNOW FATHER DIDN'T LOVED ME! HE JUST WANTED ME NEAR TO HIM TO HAVE??A DESCENT??HEIR TO THRONE!!! BUT WHILE I WAS NEAR YOU; NOBODY ELSE NOTICED ME!!! IT'S NOTMY FAULT THAT YOU HAVEN'T REALIZE!!! I HATE YOU!!!??

    TEN YEARS AGO...

    We are now at Fire Lord Azulon's war room, he is with a lot of Admirants and Gererals, besides Iroh, Lu Ten and Ozai. (inser dialogue) about the next best possible strike, they arrive to the conclussion that if Ba Si Se falls, they'll win easily this war, but when the moment to choose who will lead the troops, nobody wants to, making Azulon's fury fill the war in flames, until Lu Ten (It's suppose he is about 21) stands up with a reverence saying:

    Lu Tenlease!, Grandfather, allow me to take that place, it would be an honour to me to be usefull in this war, and lead Fire Nation to victory.

    Azulon: (Smiling) I knew you wouldn't disapoint me, my loved grandson, you are the pride of FN, and I trust you you'll gide us to victory.

    Lu Ten: Thanks!

    Iroh: (in reverence)Pease, Father! Allow me to go instead of him, I'll also do a good work! and I have ore experience!

    Azulon:No! (Iroh has a sad face) You both will go! (smiling) Yes, Iroh, you have more experience, it's time to Lu ten to get experience, he'll be, after all a Fire Lord.

    Ozai: Father, I' ll go to!

    Azulon: (angry) It is already too late!

    Later, at the Royal Palace garden, Ozai is near Ursa, they are looking at Azula and Zuko, playing with Mai, Ty Lee and Lu Ten, since he gets along very well with kids, Ozai??is angry and Ursa seems sad for it.

    Ozai: I'm tired, Ursa it doesn't matter how hard I try to be a good som, it seems my father hates me! He only have eyes to his older son and his older nephew, he has left me behind, since I'm the youngest (sees at his kids, Lu Ten is helping Zuko to win Azula in the game)

    Ursa: I know he loves, you, Ozai, it's just that he is too bussy with this war, you know, he doesn't realise of that (Zuko goes near to them, and Ursa smiles him)

    Zuko: Father! You are sad!?? (With a cute and sad face) What's the problem? how can I help you?

    Ozai: That's not of your bussines, Zuko! (angry, Zuko goes toward Lu Ten, and starts playing again, but with a sad face)

    Ursa: (angry) Ozai!

    Ozai: Ursa, I have always been left behind because I'm the youngest sibling,everybody loved the??eldest, I won't allow my daughter pass througt the same.??

    We are now at the Fire Nation Royal Academy for Girls, there are a lot of girls from 4 to 15 years old, but the "camera" focuses on the youngest ones.

    Girl1: Hey! you know what? Prince zuko's sister is here!

    Girl2: Really? I don't believe you! (Azula, followed by her friends passes near them)

    Girl1: That's his sister! i know it! Hey! You

    Azula: (haughtyly) Yes! Why?

    Girl1: see? I told you it was her! and Tell me, how is to live with Prince Zuko?

    Azula: Sorry?

    Girl2: And you are Princess Azu... Azu...

    Azula: (mad) I'M PRINCESS AZULA!!!!

    Again, at the royal garden, ant sunset... There is all Royal Family, but Azulon. Iroh and Lu ten are going to Ba sin Se.

    Lu Ten: (He has Zuko in his arms) I'll miss you buddy...

    Zuko: No way! I'm comming with you!

    Ursa: (With a sad smile) Zuko, dear, there's no need to do that Lu Ten and your Uncle are very strong brave and powerfull warrios, they'll be fin.

    Iroh: Yes, Prince Zuko (smiling) Don't worry, everything will come??back to normality soon.

    Then Iroh and Lu Ten hug Ursa, Zuko,Then iroh hugs his brother??who doesn't seem happy for that, then Iroh smiles to Azula, and they leave. Azula seems annoyed??becaused nobody noticed her.

    Zuko: Azula! Do you wanna play with me?.

    Azula: NO WAY!!! I'm not PLAYING WITH YOU!??

    ??

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    confucioussayhi

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    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    I'm not going to vote for myself, so how do I see the results?


    Wait, do the writers get to vote or do we just wait it out?
    I wasn't going to vote for myself anyway, but I think you can if you want to, I needed someone to post the results every once in awhile. At least the top three.
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    Taang_Forever

    [369]Dec 29, 2006
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    I don't think voting for yourself would be very effective. Only one or two people might win that way by a single vote. And we need three. Everyone should vote for someone else.
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    confucioussayhi

    [370]Dec 29, 2006
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    Taang_Forever wrote:
    I don't think voting for yourself would be very effective. Only one or two people might win that way by a single vote. And we need three. Everyone should vote for someone else.
    If I vote, it'll be for Taang. Cuz' he/she is awesome.
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    Taang_Forever

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    Thanks. And by the way, I'm a he.

    And this is kinda random, but??andreitayehp's "update" a few posts back made me wanna post this picture of Azula that I messed with some time ago.

    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k103/Taang_Forever/Azulatwo.jpg

    Edited on 12/29/2006 11:00am
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    Strix_Moonwing

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    Taang_Forever wrote:
    Thanks. And by the way, I'm a he.


    Hehehe...awkward!XD I'd vote for you too.
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    Taang_Forever

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    Wow, thanks guys. But now I'll feel guilty that I can only vote for one perosn.
    Edited on 12/29/2006 11:01am
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    confucioussayhi

    [374]Dec 29, 2006
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    WE NEED A TITLE SUGGESTION! GO TO THE OLD OB IDEA THREAD TO SUGGEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    obsessedchic1

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    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    Taang_Forever wrote:
    Thanks. And by the way, I'm a he.


    Hehehe...awkward!XD I'd vote for you too.

    I'll vote for the Sukko lover
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    tico1125

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    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    I'm not going to vote for myself, so how do I see the results?


    Wait, do the writers get to vote or do we just wait it out?

    Vote for someone else.?? The next best in your mind.
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    obsessedchic1

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    tico1125 wrote:
    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    I'm not going to vote for myself, so how do I see the results?


    Wait, do the writers get to vote or do we just wait it out?

    Vote for someone else.?? The next best in your mind.

    I'm not going to post my story, It got erased and I don't have enough time to right it again...I've lost my mojo
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    tico1125

    [378]Dec 29, 2006
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    andreitayehp wrote:

    Well, in the poll, future won... anyway, I'll write other think from the past, then you'll be able to choose wich to put.I putted something about Iroh being controlled in the past ones. Well this will star with a little from future, and will continue with a lot of past, ok?

    PRESENT TIME

    Sokka: Well, have you tought about kick Prince Zuzu's ass? (Zuko grunts, while nobody else seems to listen him)

    Aang: I know you both don't have a good realtinship, but this is not just helping him, is help yourself, how do you think you'll end up if Iroh win this war (Toph and Zuko seem devastated)

    Ty Lee: I really think you don't have any reasons to hate him, I mean, there's a lot of girls that would give anything to have an eldest brother as him... (Toph and Mai blush (It's not a new ship, but remember Toph's family sucks and in this, Zuko and Toph are the best friends)

    Azula: Exactly!! YOU ARE THE PERFECT COUSIN; THE PERFECT NEPHEW; THE PERFECT FRIEND; (Sokka says quietly "I thought he didn't have friends") THE PERFECT SON!!!! WHILE I WAS THERE, NOBODY NOTICED ME!!! MY MOTHER DIDN'T EVEN LOVED ME!!! EVEN IF I'M A FIREMASTER!!! YOU WERE THE ONE WITH BIRTHRIGHT TO RULE! THAT'S UNFAIR! AND NOW YOU TURNED MY OWN FRIEND AGAINST ME!!!

    Zuko: REALLY! How do you think I've felt all this time? I've been banished, remember? Yeah! A lot of people used to love me, but they all have gone, the only thing I had is a father that, let me remind you, Azula, only had eyes for you, I am the one that was lucky to be born, remember?

    Katara: Ok!, I thibk this two need to talk alone, let's go in (opens the door so Ty Lee and Aang enter)

    Sokka: What? Katara! This is getting good! (Katara grabs his ears and pull him inside) Hey! let me go! (inside) They'll melt all this place!!! I wanna listen!

    Mai: Actually, I'll wacht them, don't worry, I know them two since allways, Azula could try to escape...

    Zuko: Mai, I can handle this. (she blushes)

    Toph: It doesn't bother you if I stay here, doesn't it, Zuko?

    Zuko: Don't worry

    Azula: HOW ON HELL DO YOU SAY THAT!!! YOU KNOW FATHER DIDN'T LOVED ME! HE JUST WANTED ME NEAR TO HIM TO HAVE A DESCENT HEIR TO THRONE!!! BUT WHILE I WAS NEAR YOU; NOBODY ELSE NOTICED ME!!! IT'S NOTMY FAULT THAT YOU HAVEN'T REALIZE!!! I HATE YOU!!!

    TEN YEARS AGO...

    We are now at Fire Lord Azulon's war room, he is with a lot of Admirants and Gererals, besides Iroh, Lu Ten and Ozai. (inser dialogue) about the next best possible strike, they arrive to the conclussion that if Ba Si Se falls, they'll win easily this war, but when the moment to choose who will lead the troops, nobody wants to, making Azulon's fury fill the war in flames, until Lu Ten (It's suppose he is about 21) stands up with a reverence saying:

    Lu Tenlease!, Grandfather, allow me to take that place, it would be an honour to me to be usefull in this war, and lead Fire Nation to victory.

    Azulon: (Smiling) I knew you wouldn't disapoint me, my loved grandson, you are the pride of FN, and I trust you you'll gide us to victory.

    Lu Ten: Thanks!

    Iroh: (in reverence)Pease, Father! Allow me to go instead of him, I'll also do a good work! and I have ore experience!

    Azulon:No! (Iroh has a sad face) You both will go! (smiling) Yes, Iroh, you have more experience, it's time to Lu ten to get experience, he'll be, after all a Fire Lord.

    Ozai: Father, I' ll go to!

    Azulon: (angry) It is already too late!

    Later, at the Royal Palace garden, Ozai is near Ursa, they are looking at Azula and Zuko, playing with Mai, Ty Lee and Lu Ten, since he gets along very well with kids, Ozai is angry and Ursa seems sad for it.

    Ozai: I'm tired, Ursa it doesn't matter how hard I try to be a good som, it seems my father hates me! He only have eyes to his older son and his older nephew, he has left me behind, since I'm the youngest (sees at his kids, Lu Ten is helping Zuko to win Azula in the game)

    Ursa: I know he loves, you, Ozai, it's just that he is too bussy with this war, you know, he doesn't realise of that (Zuko goes near to them, and Ursa smiles him)

    Zuko: Father! You are sad! (With a cute and sad face) What's the problem? how can I help you?

    Ozai: That's not of your bussines, Zuko! (angry, Zuko goes toward Lu Ten, and starts playing again, but with a sad face)

    Ursa: (angry) Ozai!

    Ozai: Ursa, I have always been left behind because I'm the youngest sibling,everybody loved the eldest, I won't allow my daughter pass througt the same.

    We are now at the Fire Nation Royal Academy for Girls, there are a lot of girls from 4 to 15 years old, but the "camera" focuses on the youngest ones.

    Girl1: Hey! you know what? Prince zuko's sister is here!

    Girl2: Really? I don't believe you! (Azula, followed by her friends passes near them)

    Girl1: That's his sister! i know it! Hey! You

    Azula: (haughtyly) Yes! Why?

    Girl1: see? I told you it was her! and Tell me, how is to live with Prince Zuko?

    Azula: Sorry?

    Girl2: And you are Princess Azu... Azu...

    Azula: (mad) I'M PRINCESS AZULA!!!!

    Again, at the royal garden, ant sunset... There is all Royal Family, but Azulon. Iroh and Lu ten are going to Ba sin Se.

    Lu Ten: (He has Zuko in his arms) I'll miss you buddy...

    Zuko: No way! I'm comming with you!

    Ursa: (With a sad smile) Zuko, dear, there's no need to do that Lu Ten and your Uncle are very strong brave and powerfull warrios, they'll be fin.

    Iroh: Yes, Prince Zuko (smiling) Don't worry, everything will come back to normality soon.

    Then Iroh and Lu Ten hug Ursa, Zuko,Then iroh hugs his brother who doesn't seem happy for that, then Iroh smiles to Azula, and they leave. Azula seems annoyed becaused nobody noticed her.

    Zuko: Azula! Do you wanna play with me?.

    Azula: NO WAY!!! I'm not PLAYING WITH YOU!

    ??

    This was very good.?? I will add it to the other one.?? I will have my word fix spelling and grammar.

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    confucioussayhi

    [379]Dec 29, 2006
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    EVERYONE GO VOTE FOR THE AVATAR MOVIE TITLE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    tico1125

    [380]Dec 29, 2006
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    obsessedchic1 wrote:
    tico1125 wrote:
    Strix_Moonwing wrote:
    confucioussayhi wrote:
    I'm not going to vote for myself, so how do I see the results?


    Wait, do the writers get to vote or do we just wait it out?

    Vote for someone else. The next best in your mind.

    I'm not going to post my story, It got erased and I don't have enough time to right it again...I've lost my mojo

    Sorry to hear that.

    Please note that I am going to be working on what I have now and setting up the new Poll thread.?? I will have it up by 3:30 my time.?? Right now it is 2:40.
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