DARK AVATAR: MY VERSION

Leave any comments or character bios if you want to. I won't continue with chapters unless I get comments. So, here goes.

Chapters Finished:
Chapter One: A New Evil

Chapter Two: The??Forest (Aang Chapter)
Chapter Three: The Grand Master (DA Chapter)

Chapter Four: Spirit's Shadow (Aang Chapter)

Chapter Five: The Caves (DA Chapter)
Chapters Working On:

Chapter Six: The Anti City (Aang Chapter)

Avatar: The Last Airbender

Book Four: Shadow

Chapter One: The New Evil

PREVIOUSLY ON AVATAR (I will always put this, it will be quotes from previous episodes or chapters that are important to this chapter)

"You must defeat Fire Lord Ozai, before Sozan's Comet arrives."
"Aang! You defeated the Fire Lord!"
"Aang, you must destroy Sozan's Comet before it reaches Earth's surface"....

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"Aang, whats going on?" Sokka asked. "Why are we out here in the middle of nowhere!"
"I already told you Sokka, I need to destroy the comet!" Aang replied. "I don't know why, but, Avatar Roku told me to."

Aang looked into the sky, and he saw the flaming rock flying towards them, but it was still far away.
"There it is!" Sokka said.

Suddenly, three figures appeared. They looked like Earthbenders, but they had their eyes shut.
"Hello..Avatar", one of them said,

"Hi, what do you guys want?" Aang asked.

"We can't let you touch that comet, our master, won't like it", they said.
Suddenly, Katara and Sokka flew back and were trapped in a box of rock, with a slot opened for breathing.
"What are you doing?" Aang yelled.
"If you want your friends, come and get them!" one of the Earthbenders yelled.

"Let them go!" Aang?? yelled.

The boxes started to slide into the ground.
"STOP!" Aang yelled. "LET THEM GO!!"

"I said, come and get them, if you want them alive", one said.
Aang looked up and he could see the comet getting closer.
Aang looked at Katara and Sokka, and the boxes slid into the ground.
"NOOOO!!!" Aang yelled. Suddenly his tatoos began to glow, and he went into The Avatar State.
Hahahaha", the Earthbenders laughed.

The comet flew closer, and closer...until it was nearing the ground.
"We will succeed!" The Earthbenders yelled. "Our master will be pleased".

Aang started to throw rocks at the Earthbenders but they blocked them.

The comet landed on the ground, and the shockwave made Aang fly backwards into a stone wall. The Earthbenders stuck their feet farther into the ground. The Earthbenders laughed, and Aang stood up, and made a whirlwind of rocks, and hurled them at his enemies. The Earthebenders fell back.
"It doens't matter anymore Avatar!" one said. "We have succeeded!"
Aang continued to throw rocks at them. The comet on the ground in front of him started to hiss.
Sokka and Katara flew out of the ground, gasping for breath.

"Aang!" Katara yelled. "We're okay! Please stop!"

Aang slowly came back to the ground, and his tatoos started glowing.
"Oh no," he said. "The comet reached the ground!"

Aang ran to it, and tried to crush it with a rock, but it didn't work. He hit it with a burst of flame, a huge wave of water, and the biggest gust of wind he could make.
He had used all four elements on the rock.
The comet started to hiss again, then it slowly started to open.

A boy about Aang's age rose out of it, and he looked at them.

"Where is the Grand Master?" he asked them.
"I'm sorry, I don't know what you're talking about," Aang said.

"Then, you are useless," the boy said. He closed his eyes, and the three of them flew backwards and hit Appa.
Aang started to stand up, but Katara pulled him back.
"Who was that?" Aang asked himself.

Avatar: The Last Airbender

Book Four: Shadow

Chapter Two: The Forest

PREVIOUSLY ON AVATAR:
A boy about Aang's age rose out of it, and he looked at them.

"Then, you are useless," the boy said. He closed his eyes, and the three of them flew backwards and hit Appa.
Aang started to stand up, but Katara pulled him back.
"Who was that?" Aang asked himself.

The Earthbenders yelled. "Our master will be pleased".

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The boy had dissapeared and Aang, Katara and Sokka hopped on Appa's back.
"Appa, Yip-Yip," Aang said. Appa took off into the air, and a gust of wind flew back, blowing the trees back and forth.

"Aang, would you have any idea who that boy was?" Katara asked.
"No, he looked familiar though," Aang said. "I don't know why."

"Maybe, he is one of the Air Nomads? He did blow us back with Airbending," Sokka said.
"I don't think so," Aang said. "He didn't have an arrow. But I bet he wanted an arrow!"
"Yes Aang, everyone wants an arrow," Sokka said.
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Aang had fallen asleep an hour ago, and when he woke up, they were over a forest.
"Appa, are you tired buddy?" Aang asked him.
Appa grunted in reply.
"Go ahead and take a rest," Aang said. When Appa landed in the forest below, he rubbed the fuzz on his head.
"You deserve it," Aang said.

Sokka and Katara were still sleeping, so Aang walked into the forest, and he got thirsty.
"There has GOT to be some water around here!" Aang said.

He ran through the vast forest. In the dark, the tree trunks were a darkish-green and the leaves were not their bright yellow, and red and orange they were during the day, but dark, grey, cold. Aang shivered as a cold gust of air hit him in the face.
He saw a river up ahead, and he bended the water into a small bubble-like shape and put it in his mouth.
"AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Aang screamed. He spat out the water and waterbended the small water particles off his tounge.
Steam was rising off his tounge.
"That wasn't water," Aang said to himself. "That was burning, is that acid?" he asked himself.
Aang decided to hurry back to Appa. He started to run, but something seemed different about the trees this time back. They seemed, cold, old, dark, almost, evil-like. Aang stopped and looked at one for a couple seconds.
"You again," a voice said behind him.
Aang spun around, and he saw the boy from the comet.
"Who are you?" Aang asked him.

"Now, thats really none of your buisness now is it? And I'll tell you something you are, in my way. I don't like people that get in my way," the boy said.
He slammed his foot on the ground and a huge rock flew out of the ground, and he sent it flying at Aang. Aang ducked under it and panted.
He is an Airbender, and an Earthbender? But, how is that possible? He seems strong as well, I need to find out who this is!
Aang fell on the ground as a rock nailed his leg. He didn't feel much pain, but wanted to scream at himself for being idiotic.

Okay, maybe I'll just fight him! Aang thought.

Aang made a small ball of air and he jumped on it and began to ride around the perimeter of the boy. He made two more balls of air, and lit them on fire, and flung them at the boy. The??boy took out dual broadswords, and blocked the fireballs with ease.
"That all you got?" the boy said.

He shot up three spikes of earth under Aang and he went flying into the air. Aang grabbed his staff and began to glide. The boy shot rocks at Aang and Aang blocked them with blowing air through his mouth.
Aang landed on a branch in a high enough tree and the boy jumped up.
This kid must be a master Airbender! He can jump easily to the highest branch! Who is this guy?

Aang looked up, and a rock hit him in the stomach, and he flew back and landed on the ground. He was in pain this time, he didn't want to move. The boy jumped and landed on the ground next to him. A gust of air blew dirt in Aang's face.
"Don't let me catch you around me again," the boy said. "Or next time, I won't leave you alive."

He walked away and left Aang there on the hard ground.
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Sokka and Katara ran into the forest and searched for Aang. When they returned at sundown, Aang was sitting by a campfire with Appa.
"Lets go guys," Aang said.

"Are you okay Aang?" Katara asked.
"Yeah, lets just go," Aang said.

That night when Appa was flying through the brisk air, Aang remembered the dual broadswords.
"Why did he have to have broadswords?" Aang asked himself.
They only reminded him of an old friend.
Two old friends...

I STILL NEED COMMENTS!!!
Pretty please?

Okay guys, please leave some comments, or I will not continue.
Unless you don't want me to continue....

I know how you feel when no one gives comments it can be frustrating.

What i would like to know is??what this boy looks like all you have said is that he is a boy aangs age. Also the chapters should probably be a bit longer.

I hava??a comment....I'm sick and tired of habing to look at Dark Avatar threads crowding up this forum! It's a waste of time and space for something that is never going to happen.

I would love nothing more than to see every Dark Avatar thread closed down so we can actually talk about the show and not some pointless fanfic.